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Rein
And maybe this BG is more fit?
Topic Starter
rrtyui
>Rein0527
Thanks!ヽ(´∀`)ノ⌒♪ NyanNya~

BG no~
giO-
Hello rrtyui~

General

mp3 is 320kbps aka unrankable, here you go 192kbps mp3 http://puu.sh/jNka

QUEEN

00:39:913 (4) - delete 2 repeat and add note on 00:40:288 - http://puu.sh/jNlR

KING

00:31:757 (2) - move this on x:32 y:372 0_0
01:39:538 - make this break start from 01:39:726 - http://puu.sh/jNne

Good luck and map is really nice~ :D
Topic Starter
rrtyui

giO- wrote:

Hello rrtyui~

General

mp3 is 320kbps aka unrankable, here you go 192kbps mp3 http://puu.sh/jNkaThanks!

QUEENAll fix

00:39:913 (4) - delete 2 repeat and add note on 00:40:288 - http://puu.sh/jNlR

KING
00:31:757 (2) - move this on x:32 y:372 0_0flow of the map differ,do not fix,but add combo 00:31:526 & 00:31:900
01:39:538 - make this break start from 01:39:726 - http://puu.sh/jNnefix

Good luck and map is really nice~ :D
Thanks Modding~XD
giO-

rrtyui wrote:

giO- wrote:

Hello rrtyui~

General

mp3 is 320kbps aka unrankable, here you go 192kbps mp3 http://puu.sh/jNkaThanks!

QUEENAll fix

00:39:913 (4) - delete 2 repeat and add note on 00:40:288 - http://puu.sh/jNlR

KING
00:31:757 (2) - move this on x:32 y:372 0_0flow of the map differ,do not fix,but add combo 00:31:526 & 00:31:900
01:39:538 - make this break start from 01:39:726 - http://puu.sh/jNnefix

Good luck and map is really nice~ :D
Thanks Modding~XD
ye sorry, i noticed later it was right :)
and no problem :D
Rein
(゚∀゚)ノファイト
-s u i r e n-
遅れるかも・・かなり・・・ごめんなさい><
galvenize
Oh wow, great map.
kriers
http://youtu.be/rquYEkzzrHI a tribute to such a great beatmap! Good luck out there!
inaba-tan
KogumaX
あじぽおん
Rein
:!:
Lyase
great :)
Topic Starter
rrtyui
go
Rein
go go go!
Scarlet Sisters
初心者modder

General
  1. 気合タイムは全部難易度同じ場所の方がいいと思います。
PAWN
  1. 01:31:900 こういうリズムはどうですか?

KNIGHT
  1. 00:45:775 (1,2,3,4,5) - 左右対象にするときれいに見えると思います

ROOK
  1. 01:33:494 (1,1,1,1) - 2分割にしてみては?スピン4連は少し難しい気がします
BISHOP
  1. AR+1?
QUEEN
  1. 00:50:650 (6) - NC?
  2. 01:31:712 (3) - Spacing
KING
  1. 00:25:712 (2,1) - かなり厳しい配置です
  2. 00:31:806 (2,1) - 端っこで重ねると見づらいかもです
  3. 01:22:900 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ここもちょっと見づらいです
  4. 01:33:275 (1) - RNC、そのかわり
    01:33:400 (2) - こっちをNC、で
    01:33:775 (1) - ここをRNC
あまりmodできなくてごめんなさいorz
とても丁寧な譜面でした
Good luck !
Topic Starter
rrtyui

Scarlet Sisters wrote:

初心者modder

General
  1. 気合タイムは全部難易度同じ場所の方がいいと思います。 別に統一しなくても大丈夫だったかと
PAWN
  1. 01:31:900 こういうリズムはどうですか?そのとおりのリズムにはしなかったけど自分も違和感感じたのでfix

KNIGHT
  1. 00:45:775 (1,2,3,4,5) - 左右対象にするときれいに見えると思います あれ。。なんで対象じゃなったんだろう・・ fix~

ROOK
  1. 01:33:494 (1,1,1,1) - 2分割にしてみては?スピン4連は少し難しい気がします fix
BISHOP
  1. AR+1? fix
KING
  1. 00:25:712 (2,1) - かなり厳しい配置です
  2. 00:31:806 (2,1) - 端っこで重ねると見づらいかもです
  3. 01:22:900 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ここもちょっと見づらいですこれだけ修正!
  4. 01:33:275 (1) - RNC、そのかわり
    01:33:400 (2) - こっちをNC、で
    01:33:775 (1) - ここをRNC
あまりmodできなくてごめんなさいorz
とても丁寧な譜面でした
Good luck !
Thanks Modding :DDD
Rein

Scarlet Sisters wrote:

QUEEN
  1. 00:50:650 (6) - NC?
  2. 01:31:712 (3) - Spacing


No change~
Jupiter
Hi,mod request from my queue.

[KING]
00:53:181 (1) - RNC
00:53:462 (1) - ^
00:53:650 (2) - NC
00:56:181 (1) - RNC
00:56:462 (1) - ^
00:56:650 (2) - NC


[QUEEN]
01:08:650 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - it is hard to see this,remove NC of 01:08:837 (1), 01:09:025 (1), and 01:09:212 (1).

[TAIKO]
BGが入っていないのでいれる

Others fine~
Good Luck!
Topic Starter
rrtyui

Jupiter wrote:

Hi,mod request from my queue.

[KING]All fix 全部修正~
00:53:181 (1) - RNC
00:53:462 (1) - ^
00:53:650 (2) - NC
00:56:181 (1) - RNC
00:56:462 (1) - ^
00:56:650 (2) - NC

[TAIKO]
BGが入っていないのでいれるfix たぶんこれで・・

Others fine~
Good Luck!
Modding Thanks! >w<
Rein
Fix something
http://puu.sh/ARj4
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
from my queue ~


PAWN

  1. fine i think~
KNIGHT

  1. 00:30:400 (1,2) - you can make slider blanket better here..
  2. 01:05:462 (4) - this is not needed... why add 1/2 only in this one
ROOK

  1. 00:04:713 (1) - move to 00:04:526 ? since there is a slider pattern at 00:01:901 (1,2), and 00:04:526 - here no sound sounds weird.
  2. 00:28:151 (2,3,2) - why are sliders 3/4 this part,, it doesn't fit the rhythm well, imo change 00:28:151 (2) - 00:29:651 (3) - 00:31:151 (2) these three to 1/2 + repeat
  3. 01:31:151 (2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/342382 fits music better imo
BISHOP

  1. 00:34:526 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/342356 don't turn back, makes better flow to the music.
  2. 00:34:901 (1) - move left 1grid?
  3. 00:35:651 (2) - move right 1 grid? so slider ends don't get too near in middle
  4. 01:25:994 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - I think as a Hard diff it's not so good to stream at this place, it's not very important stream, too much for Hard diff imo
QUEEN

  1. 00:08:837 (1,2) - move this 1 grid down and right it's stacked in play time ;_;
  2. 00:16:056 (4) - move it a little inside?
  3. 01:17:931 (5) - ^
KING

  1. very nice map!!~
  2. 00:25:337 (1,2,1,2) - really? ;_;
  3. 01:37:900 (1) - reverse arrow may be hidden ;_;
I like this song and great map!! 2 stars and fav! good luck on ranking! :) :)
Topic Starter
rrtyui

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

from my queue ~


PAWN

  1. fine i think~
KNIGHT

  1. 00:30:400 (1,2) - you can make slider blanket better here.. fix
  2. 01:05:462 (4) - this is not needed... why add 1/2 only in this one delete
ROOK

  1. 00:04:713 (1) - move to 00:04:526 ? since there is a slider pattern at 00:01:901 (1,2), and 00:04:526 - here no sound sounds weird. fix
  2. 00:28:151 (2,3,2) - why are sliders 3/4 this part,, it doesn't fit the rhythm well, imo change 00:28:151 (2) - 00:29:651 (3) - 00:31:151 (2) these three to 1/2 + repeat fix
  3. 01:31:151 (2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/342382 fits music better imo fix
BISHOP

  1. 00:34:526 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/342356 don't turn back, makes better flow to the music. I seem to be easy to do a map of the current
  2. 00:34:901 (1) - move left 1grid? fix
  3. 00:35:651 (2) - move right 1 grid? so slider ends don't get too near in middle fix
  4. 01:25:994 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - I think as a Hard diff it's not so good to stream at this place, it's not very important stream, too much for Hard diff imo I want to maintain the status quo
KING

  1. very nice map!!~
  2. 00:25:337 (1,2,1,2) - really? ;_; hehe :P
  3. 01:37:900 (1) - reverse arrow may be hidden ;_; fix
I like this song and great map!! 2 stars and fav! good luck on ranking! :) :)
Very Thanks! :) favorite and star and modding! <3
Mercurial
I have this song in my Cell phone and a Guest Diff in another version of this beatmap.

I'm here to mod it, if you don't know what I'm looking for.

[General]


[Pawn]

  • 00:24:400 (4) NC for new rhythm.

[Knight]



[Queen]

  • 00:39:212 (1,2) Remove new combo and put it up on 00:39:587 (3)

    AIBat wrote:

    00:58:710 (8) - Unsnapped circle.
    01:00:210 (8) - Unsnapped circle
    01:45:400 (T) I could suggest Soft Hitsounds until 01:51:400

[King]

  • AIBat wrote:

    00:27:046 (T) Unsnapped Green Line.
Awesome.
Rein
Topic Starter
rrtyui

iMercurial wrote:

I have this song in my Cell phone and a Guest Diff in another version of this beatmap.

I'm here to mod it, if you don't know what I'm looking for.

[General]


[Pawn]

  • 00:24:400 (4) NC for new rhythm. To maintain. When the next change modder been pointed out the same place

[Knight]


[King]

  • AIBat wrote:

    00:27:046 (T) Unsnapped Green Line. This is intentionally shifted
Awesome.
ohhhhhhhhh
Thanks Modding <333
Niko-nyan
okie~ here my mod rrtyui ( the next Cookiezi? )

General : Tags : you write WP2 2x please erase 1 (not the Wire Puller 2)

Pawn
Kiai time finish at 01:03:400 (4)

Knight
Kiai time finish at 01:03:400 (4) [slider]

Rook
Kiai time finish at 01:03:400 (1) hit circle

Bishop same with the kiai (knight)

just that @.@
Topic Starter
rrtyui

frans_niko wrote:

okie~ here my mod rrtyui ( the next Cookiezi? )

General : Tags : you write WP2 2x please erase 1 (not the Wire Puller 2) delete

Pawn
Kiai time finish at 01:03:400 (4) oops!fix~

Knight
Kiai time finish at 01:03:400 (4) [slider] ^

Rook
Kiai time finish at 01:03:400 (1) hit circle ^

Bishop same with the kiai (knight) ^

just that @.@
Thanks Modding >w<
hibarirailwayz
from modding queues~
There are my opinions, so you need not follow.
[General]

[PAWN]
Beat Snap Divisorは1/2辺りにしたほうがいいかも。線が大量で見にくいです。
00:42:025 (3) - x428,y80辺りの方が滑らかに曲線が描けるので、初心者には優しいかな。
00:51:025 (3) - 上と同じです。
01:30:025 (3) - ^
分かりやすく、良い譜面だと思います^^

[KNIGHT]
00:34:525 (2) - 1番のスライダーの延長線上に無いのが少し気になります

[ROOK]
clear

[BISHOP]
ckear

[Taiko]
コンボカラーは赤、青二色でドンとカにすると、とてもmoddingしやすいです^^
スピナーを挟む場合なども考慮して赤、青、赤、青と4つのニューコンボカラーを用意すると便利ですよ。
01:39:775 - TaikoでのBreak Time推奨されていませんので、消した方がよさそうです。↓参照
http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/73281

[QUEEN]
clear

[KING]
01:33:275 (1,2) - 2番の方にNC移動した方がいいかも。
リズムが難しくてクリアできなかった;;でも良い譜面だと思います

とても内容が良かったので☆~

Good luck!!
Topic Starter
rrtyui

hibarirailwayz wrote:

from modding queues~
There are my opinions, so you need not follow.
[General]

[PAWN]
Beat Snap Divisorは1/2辺りにしたほうがいいかも。線が大量で見にくいです。たぶんfix
00:42:025 (3) - x428,y80辺りの方が滑らかに曲線が描けるので、初心者には優しいかな。fix
00:51:025 (3) - 上と同じです。fix
01:30:025 (3) - ^ fix
分かりやすく、良い譜面だと思います^^

[KNIGHT]
00:34:525 (2) - 1番のスライダーの延長線上に無いのが少し気になります これは保留にします

[ROOK]
clear

[BISHOP]
ckear

[KING]
01:33:275 (1,2) - 2番の方にNC移動した方がいいかも。fix
リズムが難しくてクリアできなかった;;でも良い譜面だと思います

とても内容が良かったので☆~

Good luck!!
Thanks Modding! >w<
星ありがとう! :)
Leorda
Yoo


[General]
* Your diff names makes the players feels confuse about which one is Insane or Hard diff. I suggest you to change into diffculty names (e.g. Easy, Normal)


[PAWN]
* AR +1?

00:22:900 (3) - New combo for your combo pattern?
01:33:587 (1,1) - 2 spinner can be tiring for beginners....


[KNIGHT]
00:39:400 (1) - The tail slider is touch the HP Bar
00:42:775 (4) - New combo for your combo pattern?
00:46:150 (2) - Move further away from previous object? So it doesn't overlapped? (Nazi)
00:48:025 (5) - ^
01:05:650 (4) - I think this slider needs more curve


[ROOK]
00:18:400 (1) - Move further away from previous object? So it doesn't overlapped? (Nazi)


[BISHOP]
00:13:337 (1) - This slider needs more curve, I guess
01:30:400 (1) - Remove 1 repeating slider. So players can click the next note with perfect timed
01:33:587 (1,1,1,1) - 4 spinners? What's the point?


Good luck~
Rein
嫌らしい,この人
Topic Starter
rrtyui

Leorda wrote:

Yoo


[General]
* Your diff names makes the players feels confuse about which one is Insane or Hard diff. I suggest you to change into diffculty names (e.g. Easy, Normal) on the basis of such BGA etc, unified by name this difficulty, do not want too change... :(


[PAWN]
* AR +1? no

00:22:900 (3) - New combo for your combo pattern? fix
01:33:587 (1,1) - 2 spinner can be tiring for beginners.... no


[KNIGHT]
00:39:400 (1) - The tail slider is touch the HP Bar fix
00:42:775 (4) - New combo for your combo pattern? fix
00:46:150 (2) - Move further away from previous object? So it doesn't overlapped? (Nazi) keep. If it other modder pointed out the same place, maybe fix...
00:48:025 (5) - ^ ^
01:05:650 (4) - I think this slider needs more curve fix


[ROOK]
00:18:400 (1) - Move further away from previous object? So it doesn't overlapped? (Nazi) keep. If it other modder pointed out the same place, maybe fix...


[BISHOP]
00:13:337 (1) - This slider needs more curve, I guess no
01:30:400 (1) - Remove 1 repeating slider. So players can click the next note with perfect timed keep
01:33:587 (1,1,1,1) - 4 spinners? What's the point? Has been accordance to the music? keep.


Good luck~
Thanks modding! >w<
DaxMasterix
*Taiko Mod Request 'Taked by me..' at the Taiko Modding Team :)
Random because I love this song..

Information.

*The Information will be Added in all the Mods for Avoid future confusions if the Taiko Mapper don't know the Basic Issues of the Taiko Modding.
  1. d = don (note without hitsound)
  2. k = kat (note with hitsound clap/whistle)
  3. D = Big don (note with hitsound finish)
  4. K = Big kat (note with hitsound finish + clap/whistle)
  5. If the word are in red = Is a Unranked stuff or a Super Recomended Suggestion.. You must be Fix that.
  6. If the word are in blue = Is a Recomended Suggestion
TAIKO:
  1. 00:39:306 (1) - ''k'' for continue your pattern..
  2. 00:40:712 (1) - Move this note to 00:40:618 and put a note (''d'') in 00:40:806
  3. 00:41:462 (1) - Move this note to 00:41:556 for continue the Pattern of 00:39:775 (1,1)
  4. 00:43:712 (1) - k
  5. 00:44:650 (2) - k
  6. 00:48:212 (2) - d
  7. 00:50:650 (3) - d
  8. 00:51:025 (3) - k
  9. 00:53:087 (x) - Add a note ''d''
  10. 00:53:650 (2) - Move this note to 00:53:556
  11. 00:53:931 (4) - Move this note to 00:53:837
  12. 00:54:025 (5) - k
  13. 00:56:556 (x) - Add a note ''d''
  14. 00:59:650 (1,2) - Erase these notes.
  15. 01:00:212 (3) - d
  16. 01:05:650 (5) - This must be a kat
  17. 01:12:118 (2,4) - Delete these notes.
  18. 01:12:775 (x) - Add a note (''d'') here for Continue your Pattern.
  19. 01:13:525 (x) - Add a note (''d'') here for Continue your Pattern.
  20. 01:15:025 (6) - k
  21. 01:16:712 (1,2,1) - Change this to ''kdd''
  22. 01:17:650 (x) - Add a note (''d''). Try not make empty spaces
  23. 01:17:837 (3) - k
  24. 01:18:962 (1,2,1) - Change this to ''kdd''
  25. 01:23:650 (1,2,1,2,1,1,1,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,1) - Change this to ''ddddkkdkkdddkkkdk''
  26. 01:28:900 (1) - d
  27. 01:29:650 (x) - Add a note (''d'').
  28. 01:29:743 (1) - k
  29. 01:33:150 (3) - k
  30. 01:39:400 (11) - 01:45:400 (1) - OHNO.. A taiko Diff can't have a break.. :c try put this:
    Here the code \o/
    256,192,100900,1,0
    256,192,101462,1,0
    256,192,101556,5,8
    256,192,101650,5,0
    256,192,101837,1,0
    256,192,102025,5,8
    256,192,102212,5,0
    256,192,102400,1,0
    256,192,103150,5,8
    256,192,103900,5,0
    256,192,104650,1,0
    256,192,105025,5,8
    I don't know If you wanna put a SV Effect.. If you want... Put a ''SV 0,50x'' in 01:40:900 / a ''SV 0,75x'' in 01:45:025 / and a ''SV 1,0x'' in 01:45:400..
    Im not a fan of the SV Changes so I don't recomment this.. But is your Choise.
  31. 01:50:650 (4) - k
  32. 01:56:650 (x) - Put a note (''d'').
Well.. That is the Mod.. Good Taiko inaba~
And good luck in the Rank of the Map! :)
Topic Starter
rrtyui
waiting inaba~
Holoaz
Thank you for request

[PAWN]
00:22:900 (1) - remove new combo
00:48:400 (1) - ^
00:49:900 (2) - new combo
01:03:400 (4) - ^
01:04:150 (1) - remove new combo
01:27:400 (1) - 最初の部分にFinish?

[KINGHT]
00:30:400 (1) - Slider tickの音をcustomでclapにしてみるといいかも?
他の白線のタイミングでSlider tickがある場合も同様
01:02:650 (4) - 終わりの部分にFinish?
01:24:400 (1) - 折り返しの部分にwhistle?←変更した場合終わりの部分のwhistle削除
01:25:900 (3) - ^
01:25:525 (2) - add soft whistle?
01:48:025 (?) - add note?

[ROCK]
01:48:025 (4) - ここだけspacingが離れているのでNormalとしてはTiming読み辛いかもしれません
*Hardとしてならok?

[BISHOP]
01:24:400 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - このパートだけ他の部分と比べるとかなり難易度が高いので周りに合わせたほうがいいかも?

[QUEEN]
01:33:025 (5,6) - ここのパート線対称なのでこっちの方が綺麗に見えるかも?

[KING]
01:24:400 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 交互にnew comboにした方が見やすいと思います(2色で)
こんな感じとか
こんな感じとかも

good mapset!
FIGHT~ :!:
Topic Starter
rrtyui

Holoaz wrote:

Thank you for request

[PAWN] All fix
00:22:900 (1) - remove new combo
00:48:400 (1) - ^
00:49:900 (2) - new combo
01:03:400 (4) - ^
01:04:150 (1) - remove new combo
01:27:400 (1) - 最初の部分にFinish?

[KINGHT]
00:30:400 (1) - Slider tickの音をcustomでclapにしてみるといいかも? fix
他の白線のタイミングでSlider tickがある場合も同様 fix
01:02:650 (4) - 終わりの部分にFinish? fix
01:24:400 (1) - 折り返しの部分にwhistle?←変更した場合終わりの部分のwhistle削除 fix
01:25:900 (3) - ^ fix
01:25:525 (2) - add soft whistle? fix
01:48:025 (?) - add note? no

[ROCK]
01:48:025 (4) - ここだけspacingが離れているのでNormalとしてはTiming読み辛いかもしれません 保留しますー
*Hardとしてならok?

[BISHOP]
01:24:400 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - このパートだけ他の部分と比べるとかなり難易度が高いので周りに合わせたほうがいいかも? とりあえずsliderだけに

[KING]
01:24:400 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 交互にnew comboにした方が見やすいと思います(2色で)
こんな感じとか
こんな感じとかも
あなたは神か


good mapset!
FIGHT~ :!:
Thanks Modding >w<


To Rein English ver
01:33:025 (5,6) - This part is symmetrical line. found here. maybe may look clean.
Rein
no change ;)
mmm,but I maybe want to change Circle Size to 5 :roll:
Topic Starter
rrtyui
haha normal circle! <3
val0108
chat mod
でもあんまりいいMODしてない
Topic Starter
rrtyui

val0108 wrote:

chat mod
でもあんまりいいMODしてない
MOD
●KING
00:01:150 - Green line delete fix
00:02:462 (2) - 2 grid left fix
00:02:837 (3) - 2 grid right fix
00:38:368 (3) - difficult to timing no
01:24:587 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - delete new combo no

●QUEEN
00:01:525 - Green line delete fix

●BISHOP
00:14:275 (1,2,3,4,5) - change to http://puu.sh/NCcF fix
00:17:275 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ fix
and mapping technique advice very very very Thanks :D
Rein
chang to normal circle :!:
Abe Nana
<(╹ヮ╹)>
Topic Starter
rrtyui
<(╹ヮ╹)>
ZekeyHache
From my modding queue.

Usually I don't take a long time to do a mod, but anyways this map looks fine to me.

STAR! :)
wmfchris
Taiko mod as requested

[Taiko]
00:01:900 - add finish like 00:13:900 -
01:32:556 (2,1,1) - comparing with the finishes stream previously, these three notes aren't corresponding to snare sound in the music, so you either put finish in all 3 notes or don't put in all of them.
01:39:587 - remove the break artificially
01:50:837 - the k beating disappeared? ddk dk kd

sounds good as usual. Good luck!
Topic Starter
rrtyui
inaba-tan wait ;_;

and ezek Thanks Star! <3
Nichiyouki


Hi, rrtyui

My mod from your request

Red = Unrankable
Biue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

  1. Disable Letterbox during breaks, same as TAIKO diff.
  2. Why Kiai time of QUEEN diff is different?

PAWN

  1. 01:06:400 (3) - Move clap in slider end to slider repeat instead.
  2. 01:27:400 (1) - Move last point to x:324 y:40 be better.

KNIGHT

  1. Good diff :oops:

ROOK

  1. 00:05:275 - Add circle?

BISHOP

  1. Good diff as well :oops:

QUEEN

  1. 00:23:275 (12,4,6) - Try stack them by move slider end of (4) to stack with (12,6).
  2. 00:25:900 (1) - Slider end at 00:26:181, then add slider same as (1) in 00:26:275 again be better.
  3. 01:08:650 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Make don't stack
  4. 01:13:150 (3) - Add new combo?
  5. 01:13:525 (5) - ^

KING

  1. 00:25:900 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I suggest that the spacing should be spaced evenly.
  2. 00:27:046 - Move a green line at 00:27:025

That's all that I can find them.

Good luck~
Lemon_old
削除推奨^^b
Topic Starter
rrtyui

nich95 wrote:

Hi, rrtyui

My mod from your request

Red = Unrankable
Biue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

PAWN

  1. 01:06:400 (3) - Move clap in slider end to slider repeat instead. no. I think the current situation matches the rhythm.
  2. 01:27:400 (1) - Move last point to x:324 y:40 be better. Although it is not the same, I was a little fix. :P

ROOK

  1. 00:05:275 - Add circle? oops fix!

KING

  1. 00:25:900 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I suggest that the spacing should be spaced evenly. I think current situation is very playable.
  2. 00:27:046 - Move a green line at 00:27:025 When move hit sound is lost. They are the ones placed intentionally.

That's all that I can find them.

Good luck~
Thanks Modding \:D/
spboxer3

※ Notice

red is unrankable issue.
blue is recommended to fix.
Black is just suggestion.

general


  • Settings
    (For the setting/general issue.)
  1. I think the osu diff kiai time should be universalize. ((QUEEN's diff it's different to other diff.

PAWN


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. unused green line:
    01:27:306
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:28:525 (2,3) - actually you used curve pattern it's more consort flow. maybe rotate (selection center) 00:28:900 (3) - 12∘it's more pretty

  2. 01:31:900 - I didn't hear any corresponding vocal/drum is present for this point. I suggest remove reverse and add note at 01:31:712 -

KNIGHT



  • Overlaps
    (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap each other could space them farther apart. yep. It's just suggest and nazi. you can ignore this par)
  1. 00:45:775 (1,2) -
  2. 00:47:275 (4,5) -
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:48:025 (5,2) - Umm... those shound be stack imo.

  2. 01:45:400 (1,2) - It's looks awkward slider arc because it's not coincidence arc to 01:46:525 (2) - so I make the pattern and code for you.
    photo and code
    your shape↓

    my code↓

    144,148,105400,70,0,B|96:124|88:76,2,89.9999999999999,4|0|8
    180,64,106525,1,0

ROOK


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. unused green line:
    01:30:118
    01:39:353
Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 01:19:900 (1,2) - you can head drum at 01:20:275, it should add clap - but you used clap at 01:20:462 - :/
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:16:712 (3,1) - rotate -4∘let arc conform the 00:16:712 (3) -

  2. 01:47:650 (2) - reverse this selection slider? because you can see 01:45:400 (1,2) - (1.19x spacing) haven't used large spacing. but 01:46:900 (1,2) - it's used large spacing (1.70x spacing).

BISHOP


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. unused green line:
    01:30:118
    01:39:353
Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 01:33:587 (1,1,1) - remove those finish? It's not suit for this part and It's inconsistent the other diff
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  • looks good~


QUEEN


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. duplicated green line:
    00:51:400 -
Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 01:33:493 (1,1,1) - remove those finish? It's not suit for this part and It's inconsistent the other diff
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:24:400 (4,6) - stack issue~ it should be stack.

  2. 00:29:650 (4,2) - ^

  3. 01:08:650 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - too confuse pattern. it's let player can't clear to read. I strongly recommended change this pattern


KING


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. unused green line:
    01:00:447
  2. unsnap green line (please snap those because it will affect your hitsound/SV):
    00:27:046
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 01:33:025 (1,2,3,1) - Umm... because it's suddenly 1/3 rhythm. so I recommended to used slider reverse to make this.

Taiko


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. remove video code for Taiko diff?
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 01:57:025 (1) - add d? you can listen a apparent voice to here. and i think d it's better

OK~ cell me back when you fix my mod~ but please reply my mod post and used 2 color to reply it
Blue: you accept my mod item
Red: you deny my mod item and please reply the reason.
and you can used 中文 or English to reply for me :)
~~~
Rein
sakuzyo - AXION (rrtyui) [QUEEN]

spboxer3 wrote:

QUEEN


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. duplicated green line:
    00:51:400 -
:arrow: fiix

Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 01:33:493 (1,1,1) - remove those finish? It's not suit for this part and It's inconsistent the other diff
:arrow: no change

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:24:400 (4,6) - stack issue~ it should be stack. :arrow: fix

  2. 00:29:650 (4,2) - ^ :arrow: fix

  3. 01:08:650 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - too confuse pattern. it's let player can't clear to read. I strongly recommended change this pattern
:arrow: fiix
Topic Starter
rrtyui

spboxer3 wrote:

※ Notice

red is unrankable issue.
blue is recommended to fix.
Black is just suggestion.

general


  • Settings
    (For the setting/general issue.)
  1. I think the osu diff kiai time should be universalize. ((QUEEN's diff it's different to other diff. I asked rein. It fix~

PAWN


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. unused green line:
    01:27:306
    fix
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:28:525 (2,3) - actually you used curve pattern it's more consort flow. maybe rotate (selection center) 00:28:900 (3) - 12∘it's more pretty fix

  2. 01:31:900 - I didn't hear any corresponding vocal/drum is present for this point. I suggest remove reverse and add note at 01:31:712 - fix

KNIGHT



  • Overlaps
    (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap each other could space them farther apart. yep. It's just suggest and nazi. you can ignore this par)
  1. 00:45:775 (1,2) - fix
  2. 00:47:275 (4,5) - fix
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:48:025 (5,2) - Umm... those shound be stack imo. fix

  2. 01:45:400 (1,2) - It's looks awkward slider arc because it's not coincidence arc to 01:46:525 (2) - so I make the pattern and code for you. fix thanks :D
    photo and code
    your shape↓

    my code↓

    144,148,105400,70,0,B|96:124|88:76,2,89.9999999999999,4|0|8
    180,64,106525,1,0

ROOK


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. unused green line:
    01:30:118 fix
    01:39:353 fix
Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 01:19:900 (1,2) - you can head drum at 01:20:275, it should add clap - but you used clap at 01:20:462 - :/ Hmm. I think the current is great...The timing of the clap is according to the sound. fix. :o
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:16:712 (3,1) - rotate -4∘let arc conform the 00:16:712 (3) - fix

  2. 01:47:650 (2) - reverse this selection slider? because you can see 01:45:400 (1,2) - (1.19x spacing) haven't used large spacing. but 01:46:900 (1,2) - it's used large spacing (1.70x spacing). fix

BISHOP


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. unused green line:
    01:30:118 fix
    01:39:353 fix
Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 01:33:587 (1,1,1) - remove those finish? It's not suit for this part and It's inconsistent the other diff no change. i'll increase the number of spinners from this difficulty :)
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  • looks good~

KING


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. unused green line:
    01:00:447 fix
  2. unsnap green line (please snap those because it will affect your hitsound/SV):
    00:27:046 fix
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 01:33:025 (1,2,3,1) - Umm... because it's suddenly 1/3 rhythm. so I recommended to used slider reverse to make this. I think is the best & fun. I ask a test to friends, however, don't have a bullshit.

OK~ cell me back when you fix my mod~ but please reply my mod post and used 2 color to reply it
Blue: you accept my mod item
Red: you deny my mod item and please reply the reason.
and you can used 中文 or English to reply for me :)
~~~
Thanks Modding <3
but First of all, I asked to check the mod inaba-tan. And then, I asked to recheck spinboxer~ :)
those
A Rook's value is more than a Bishop's value in the game of chess. Swap diff names?
Mercurial
I smell a bubble <3
Rein

those wrote:

A Rook's value is more than a Bishop's value in the game of chess. Swap diff names?

wwwww Yes,King>Queen>Rook>Bishop>Knight>Pawn
Topic Starter
rrtyui

those wrote:

A Rook's value is more than a Bishop's value in the game of chess. Swap diff names?
lolololol
haha your right, fixed :o
inaba-tan
Cygnus
Fix your tags. Magicial should be Magical, right?

go bubble! :D
spboxer3
ok~ looks fine now~
good luck ^^
Topic Starter
rrtyui
Thanks Spinboxer<3
Mercurial
Supporting with my little star before ranking <3
Topic Starter
rrtyui
Thanks Mercurial \:D/

<3
Niva
(:

[General]

-> You don't need lead-in time in PAWN and KNIGHT, really xD (that diffs starts way after)
-> Add "MagicMashMan" also to tags (I know you already have "magic mash man" but sakuzyo's YouTube account is using that name, without spaces)

[PAWN]

  1. 01:06:400 (3) - Move clap from slider's end to slider's repeat
[KNIGHT]

  1. 00:24:400 (2,3,4) - Hmm, if you're aiming for symmetry I suggest something like this though:
  2. 01:48:400 (1) - Move to ~x:168 y:297 regardless of the spacing, it will make this slider perfectly centered while the jump isn't hard to catch :3
[BISHOP]

  1. 01:02:462 (3) - Please move a bit further (~x:185) to avoid overlap, it won't hurt~
  2. 01:21:025 (3) - ...sliderwhistle doesn't really fit here imo, I'd put a sliderwhistle on 01:19:900 (1) instead (:
[ROOK]

  1. 00:10:525 (1,2) - CTRL+R either (1) or (2)? Personally I'd like to see a circular jump here...
  2. 01:32:837 (1,2) - I really think you'll need a manual stacking like this here to maintain the symmetry: (just move (2) a bit lower)
[QUEEN]

  1. 00:25:900 (1) - No whistles here? I'm very much sure a good whistle placement will fit this repeating slider :3
  2. 00:41:368 (10) - The rhythm here really confuses me, I'd put this on 00:41:556 (11) instead to form a quintuple (it'll sound more intuitive with the song)
  3. 01:51:775 (2,3,2,3) - Hmm, I think it's quite obvious that the claps should ONLY be on (3)'s start instead of (2), no need to force clap consistency here - in any way clap on (3)'s start sounds better for me (:
[KING]

-> Make combo color 3 same as other diffs?

  1. 00:13:712 (1) - Move the inherit section to slider's end (00:13:900) and add sliderwhistle to the slider's body, it fits xD
  2. 00:41:557 (3,4,5,6) - The combo color here blends with the video orz... I'm having trouble reading it >_<
  3. 01:08:650 (1,2) - Add some whistles to spice up this part? (there's a synth following though~)
  4. 01:27:025 (4) - Please add new combo here, due to the slider velocity change
  5. 01:38:837 (2) - Personally I'd like to see this is CTRL+R'ed (: (if you do this you might want to CTRL+R (4) also)
I don't see any problems on TAIKO~
Topic Starter
rrtyui

Niva wrote:

(:

[General]

-> You don't need lead-in time in PAWN and KNIGHT, really xD (that diffs starts way after) fix
-> Add "MagicMashMan" also to tags (I know you already have "magic mash man" but sakuzyo's YouTube account is using that name, without spaces) add~

[PAWN]

  1. 01:06:400 (3) - Move clap from slider's end to slider's repeat fix
[KNIGHT]

  1. 00:24:400 (2,3,4) - Hmm, if you're aiming for symmetry I suggest something like this though: fix
  2. 01:48:400 (1) - Move to ~x:168 y:297 regardless of the spacing, it will make this slider perfectly centered while the jump isn't hard to catch :3 fix
[BISHOP]

  1. 01:02:462 (3) - Please move a bit further (~x:185) to avoid overlap, it won't hurt~ fix
  2. 01:21:025 (3) - ...sliderwhistle doesn't really fit here imo, I'd put a sliderwhistle on 01:19:900 (1) instead (: fix
[ROOK]

  1. 00:10:525 (1,2) - CTRL+R either (1) or (2)? Personally I'd like to see a circular jump here... fix
  2. 01:32:837 (1,2) - I really think you'll need a manual stacking like this here to maintain the symmetry: (just move (2) a bit lower) fix
[KING]

-> Make combo color 3 same as other diffs? fix

  1. 00:13:712 (1) - Move the inherit section to slider's end (00:13:900) and add sliderwhistle to the slider's body, it fits xD fix
  2. 00:41:557 (3,4,5,6) - The combo color here blends with the video orz... I'm having trouble reading it >_<
  3. 01:08:650 (1,2) - Add some whistles to spice up this part? (there's a synth following though~) fix. btw, this is no relationship, it was found that 01:09:025 (2) is 1/3 timing. This also fix :D
  4. 01:27:025 (4) - Please add new combo here, due to the slider velocity change fix
  5. 01:38:837 (2) - Personally I'd like to see this is CTRL+R'ed (: (if you do this you might want to CTRL+R (4) also) no
I don't see any problems on TAIKO~
(:

Thanks Niva Modding! >.</
waiting Rein! :D
Rein
http://puu.sh/1451A

Niva wrote:

[QUEEN]
  1. 00:25:900 (1) - No whistles here? I'm very much sure a good whistle placement will fit this repeating slider :3 ->fix
  2. 00:41:368 (10) - The rhythm here really confuses me, I'd put this on 00:41:556 (11) instead to form a quintuple (it'll sound more intuitive with the song)->no change
  3. 01:51:775 (2,3,2,3) - Hmm, I think it's quite obvious that the claps should ONLY be on (3)'s start instead of (2), no need to force clap consistency here - in any way clap on (3)'s start sounds better for me (:->fix
THRete
rrtyui~!

that's so fun!!!!
but so hard!

rank gogogo~! :D
Way to go! :D
Niva
Just one more thing...

[QUEEN]

  1. 00:41:368 (10) - Again, compared with the others this one's rhythm is VERY deceiving due to the basses around, once more I recommend a quintuple here (you can just arrange like this though: )
I still feel somewhat weird about that combocolor in KING though, but it's not that hard to read :3

--------------------------------------------------------------------

EDIT : Rechecking 7 diffs are tiring orz >_< - I hope I didn't miss anything...

Ranked ~
Topic Starter
rrtyui

Niva wrote:

Just one more thing...

[QUEEN]

  1. 00:41:368 (10) - Again, compared with the others this one's rhythm is VERY deceiving due to the basses around, once more I recommend a quintuple here (you can just arrange like this though: )
I still feel somewhat weird about that combocolor in KING though, but it's not that hard to read :3
oops o.o
fix! ;)
Mercurial
Oh c'mon! I'm still waiting D:
Rein
:!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!: :!:
rank :!:
THRete
rank~~! :)
Coro
BMS~
gratz ranked~
KogumaX
:)
WVS
10/10
spboxer3
congratz ^^
Melophobia
omedetou~!
Andrea
Hitsounds are way too quiet, I almost can't hear them :(
ririco
Gratz owo/ moe rrtyui
rui
congratz
Reisen Udongein
more more BMS songs! congratz :3
xsrsbsns
omedetou!
Kawayi Rika
初rank omedeto :3
Topic Starter
rrtyui
yey Thanks Niva and all >w<

Andrea wrote:

Hitsounds are way too quiet, I almost can't hear them :(

I love this sound. I don’t like Hit sound is emphasized too. :)
Nichiyouki
Congrats ;)
Uni
This map *-* i love it Grats on ranked :3
Laurier
good
caren_sk
congrats~
threenash
gz rrtyui! /o/
terametis
おめでとうございます!
Quilt
congratz xD
Ulysses
wow congrats :D
Cygnus
Yey! Congrats rrtyui! :)
Mercurial
dafuQQqwedqwdasdads

<3

I love you so much! <3
Deni
nice map!! ROOK is very nice :)
Metro
omedetou osu kami!
B2IN
Niko-nyan
gratz to rrtyui yaay
fanzhen0019
gratz~
Patchouli
ついにきましたなーおめでとう御座います。
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