Leorda wrote:

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[General]
* Add "Licnect" into tags for Normal and Hard diff. Since she is making a GD for your map


[Normal]
01:07:139 (1) - Stack under slider can confuse beginners, because some beginners didn't notice there is a circle under the slider while gameplay
01:28:210 (3) - ^
01:53:924 (3) - ^
02:18:567 (4) - ^
02:30:889 (2) - 0,5x slider are not recommended for beginners, because it makes confusing for them
03:00:174 (1) - Same issue as 01:07:139 (1)


[Licnect's COLOR]
01:05:889 (5) - 0,5x slider after a stream pattern can confuse players OK i changed use 0.75x slider and 02:28:746 is fixed
01:19:996 (9) - Remove 1 repeating slider, so players are able to click the next note with perfect timed? i think it's ok in Insane. my friend tested he's say it's fine
02:14:281 (4) - New combo for 0,5x slider, it makes confusing for players if you didn't add the new combo fixed


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1. Source: It should be Freezing, not FreeZing. Just in case I checked severall sites about this just to be sure, and they all have Freezing listed.
2. Folder: The hitsound normal-hitwhistle is over 2 seconds long. To make it worse it has an annoying "click" at the end. That's not acceptable I'm afraid, however here is an edited hitsound by me, which is just under 1 second long and doesn't have that click at the end. Use that one instead and full submit please.

1. HPdrain -1. 8 is just too high. Having it at 7 unbugs the star rating too.
2. 01:04:103 (6) - You need to move this somehow because currently it's very difficult to notice it's a slider because of the hitburst from 2.
3. 02:18:389 (5) - Also need to reposition this one a little because it's nearly impossible to notice that it's a slider due to a hitburst covering it's tracks.

1. 00:30:531 (3) - Having this clap at the end of the slider sounds much better. If it's at the start, it interrupts the rhythm used around here (because this section has no beat at 00:31:246 mapped).
2. 01:08:389 - This volume change is too sudden. Can you just use 15% for the whole spinner and let the music do the rest? Else I would suggest a step by step volume decrease which probably won't matter anyway.
3. 01:15:889 (5) - This should be a new combo instead of the next one. Also, can you turn it so it repeats towards the south? It flows better.
4. 01:35:889 (6) - Missing clap.
5. 01:42:139 (1,2,3) - Move 2 grid lv4 down? It looks better because the circles aren't touching each other.
6. 02:21:246 (4) - You will have to reposition this better so it's not behind the stream's hitbursts. This is not an insane diff where you can just stack anything anywhere. Please move it somewhere else
7. 02:25:531 (3,4) - Not sure what to think of the claps here, I prefer to have a clap on 4 for consistency. You sure you want it like this?
8. 03:24:460 (2,3,4,5,6) - Not really a pretty shape, it's misaligned. Reshape it to a proper star?
9. 03:24:817 (3) - Add a soft finish? Sounds nice and follow the music well.

1. Since it's the easiest diff in the mapset, I suggest hpdrain -1 just in case. Use hp3 please.
2. 00:27:674 (3) - Sorry but things like this shouldn't be in the easiest diff, especially when it's a normal. Think of another pattern please. Why not make a long slider ending at 00:28:389 instead of a repeater? That's the key beat and that's all that's necessary in my opinion.
3. 01:04:460 (3,1) - This can generally be confusing in easy/normal diffs because it's close to the previous slider's body. You should probably map a circle+long slider instead of short slider+circle, because the guitar plays and it feels nice to hold it on the slider.
4. 01:06:514 - A general thing when using custom sounds on slider ticks is that they are a little too loud compared to the other samples, like claps or whistles. Lower the volume by 8~12% on this so they are more in line with the rest of the hitsounds. This goes for all of the slider ticks you used like this.
5. 01:14:460 (3) - I think you're missing a finish at the end of the slider.
6. 01:25:889 (4) - Missing a clap?
7. 01:53:924 (3) - I don't agree with this. You didn't map the whole vocals so mapping it here just makes the diff harder than it probably should be. Move this note to 01:54:103 so it has consistent rhythm and fix the spacing please.
8. 02:42:139 (1) - This spinner is too short for a easy/normal and the note after it is coming too soon. Please think of something else here.
9. 02:45:889 (3) - I ask that you simplify this, just having a circle here is enough. This is still the easiest diff in the mapset.
10. 02:50:353 (2) - You didn't use stacks in this way before, why use it now? Please make it more clear, this is the easiest diff in the mapset.
11. 02:53:567 (1) - This spinner isn't too short, but the notes after it are coming too soon for the easiest diff in the mapset. Think of something else please, there are nice drum sounds you can map with hitcircles without making it hard.
12. 02:55:889 (2,3,4,1) - First you don't use a stack, and now you do, all in such a short amount of time. I suggest you stack the first one as well, for consistency.
13. 03:01:603 (4,1) - You should probably invert the logic here, instead of short slider+circle, you should use a circle+long slider. It fits the music better because the vocal holds and is easier to play.
14. 03:04:639 (1) - Same deal here, while the spinner is okay, the notes after it come to soon. Best alternative is to just map the key notes of the drumline with circles in my opinion.
15. 03:08:389 (3,4) - You were stacking 1/2 before, now you stack 1/1. I am sorry but I cannot approve of this for the easiest difficulty. Please use distance snap and form a pattern of some kind.
16. 03:16:067 (3) - Missing a finish at the start I think.

lolcubes wrote:

This should be better.

Rebubbled.

While the normal is above 3 star rating, I don't think it's that hard now. Just saying.

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  Suzully wrote:

  in the not-chorus part it should be plused more.

  Sorry I've got that wrong. After I've done many many testplays, then I saw more than one offset isn't needed.
  
  Anyway, the offset +6(538) seems better to me.

1. 00:56:603 (1) - I think it's better to avoid stacking if you can.(because to read is a bit too difficult for beginner.)
2. 03:13:210 (2) - I feel a custom tick sound doesn't fit here.

1. 00:41:246 (4,5,6) - Uhm...they don't fit the music(vocal) well.
   
2. 00:53:032 (1) - Switch a new combo from this to (2).
3. 00:54:103 (1,2,3) - A stack looks out of under 00:53:210 (2) when playing. Use manual stacking?
4. 02:20:531 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,3,4) - Good jump, I like them. However, they're a bit too difficult as a hard difficulty. As compared with other parts, it's harder to play here.

1. 00:23:389 (7) - Since this note isn't stacked correctly, a stack looks really out of the correct position when playing.
2. 01:43:567 (5,6,7) - Just my feeling. Refer to other quick triples which are on the similar point in a measure(ex:01:34:996 (1,2,3), 01:38:210 (3,4,5), 01:41:067 (3,4,5)), other ones all start on a redline, but this one starts on a white line. So I felt something wrong when playing :/
3. 02:04:817 (5,6,7,8) - Placing them in a row isn't that good idea(also not good gameplay) imo. How about changing them like an example below?
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 02:53:210 (1) - Remove a new combo from this, and add to 02:54:103 (3) as well as 02:42:139 (5,1). It will prevent making player misleading the timing of this stream.
5. 03:04:996 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I really love this pattern<3 (sry not a mod )