Megurine Luka wrote:

00:32:182 (1,2) - 位置摆错了baka

no kd.

1. I think that the volume is a liittle too hgih overall. Try around -20% in all the sections, it makes it sound more delicate, which fits the map perfectly imo.
2. About the hitsounds:
   You hitsounded this in a weird way... I don't know, it just doesn't seem so consistent at some places and I felt you're missing finshes at some parts (and by finish, I mean that clap hitsound, which should TOTALLY be a finish instead of clap).
   So, ask yourself... Did I do a good job hitsounding this? Does it sound inconsistent? Am I missing hitsounds at some parts?
   If your answer is "yes" to those questions, then you have to hitsound this again, boy
3. Everything else seems good here! The skin elements have the right size, timing is fine, mp3 bitrate is fine, all the difficulties have the same tags, preview point, etc. There's just one little detail but I'll leave it for [Normal]

1. 03:02:795 (1) - Respecting the way you have been placing the new combos, I think you should remove this one.
2. Might be a little hard because of the SV but meh.

1. 03:22:850 - The kiai ends here, but in the other two difficulties, it ends at 03:23:333. You should do the same here.
2. 00:32:666 (6) - New combo, please. It will help the players to notice the speed change.
3. 02:24:457 (5) - Can you make the curve with the opposite concavity? It will improve the flow a little. Like this:
   
   SPOILER

   

1. Pretty much overmapped imo. Most of the 1/2 sliders don't follow anything in the music and that can be considered a mistake. You should ask some more people with experience about this.
2. 01:17:769 (3) - How about a new combo to match the kiai start?
3. 01:38:388 (3) - Similar to above even if there is no kiai start. New combo~
4. 03:03:439 (3) - (^)
5. 03:24:058 (3) - (^)

narakucrimson wrote:

Hi

[General]

1. I think that the volume is a liittle too hgih overall. Try around -20% in all the sections, it makes it sound more delicate, which fits the map perfectly imo. fixed
2. About the hitsounds:
   You hitsounded this in a weird way... I don't know, it just doesn't seem so consistent at some places and I felt you're missing finshes at some parts (and by finish, I mean that clap hitsound, which should TOTALLY be a finish instead of clap).
   So, ask yourself... Did I do a good job hitsounding this? Does it sound inconsistent? Am I missing hitsounds at some parts?
   If your answer is "yes" to those questions, then you have to hitsound this again, boy
   reset hitsound, like W+F_O_C_C_W_C_O_C_W+C_O_C_C_W_C_O_C (W=whistle, F=finish, O=None, C=clap)
3. Everything else seems good here! The skin elements have the right size, timing is fine, mp3 bitrate is fine, all the difficulties have the same tags, preview point, etc. There's just one little detail but I'll leave it for [Normal]

[Easy]

1. 03:02:795 (1) - Respecting the way you have been placing the new combos, I think you should remove this one. fixed
2. Might be a little hard because of the SV but meh. It is rankable, is it right?

[Normal]

1. 03:22:850 - The kiai ends here, but in the other two difficulties, it ends at 03:23:333. You should do the same here. fixed
2. 00:32:666 (6) - New combo, please. It will help the players to notice the speed change. This pattern really pretty, so I don't want to change it
3. 02:24:457 (5) - Can you make the curve with the opposite concavity? It will improve the flow a little. Like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
   fixed

[Hard]

1. Pretty much overmapped imo. Most of the 1/2 sliders don't follow anything in the music and that can be considered a mistake. You should ask some more people with experience about this. Remap some parts
2. 01:17:769 (3) - How about a new combo to match the kiai start? fixed
3. 01:38:388 (3) - Similar to above even if there is no kiai start. New combo~ fixed
4. 03:03:439 (3) - (^) fixed
5. 03:24:058 (3) - (^) fixed

Oh well that's all for now. I'm pretty tired *yawn*
Good luck!

wmfchris wrote:

01:05 這幾秒有錯timing的感覺(特別是01:06:815) 建議找人check timing offset+25

[Hard]
-1/2 slider: 這首歌vocal以1/1為主, 一堆1/2 slider還放clap就太吵了 適量拿掉 前面去掉了好多1/2，后面基本没改
-沒必要頭尾都clap 用whistle-clap對反而可以突出高低音 自己改一下吧 重新做了音效……
00:42:331 (4) - remove clap at beginning, or clap at beginning, whistle at ending
00:50:063 (4) - remove clap at the first two ticks
01:02:788 (4) - left 1 grid lv4
01:18:413 (5,6) - 怪節奏 用1/1 slider -> 1/2 slider
01:26:790 (5) - whistle at ending only
03:05:694 (2)- right 1 grid lv4

[Normal]
OD也太低了吧
00:44:908 (2) - clap at ending only
00:46:197 (3)- remove clap at the first ticks
01:06:493 (4,5) - (4)感覺很怪 (5)off vocal
01:11:326 (3) - whistle
02:31:223 (5,6)- whistle at beginning of (5), remove clap on (6)

其實排位沒啥問題，只是sounding可以改一改
- 用一個靜很多的custime softhit 現在soft hit感覺好吵 : / 新加了soft-normal，用默认的-5dB
- slider有不少地方不該clap/whistle 的地方都clap/whistle了 又是有點吵
^ 這樣反而會蓋掉歌曲原本悠閒的感覺 减少了好多whistle和clap，加了一些finish

Shana Aisaka wrote:

嗨〜 >~< 對不起，我遲到了。 從請求我的主題隊列〜
對不起，我的可憐的中國。 ==" I can understand...

紫色 - 地圖似乎好〜
粉紅色 - 建議

[Normal]
01:40:185(x) = 添加 note Since the most part of the this diff is set following 1/1, I would add this note.
02:20:938(1) = 添加 完成 fixed

[Hard]
03:57:910(x) = 添加 note No, this pattern is same to the before one.


對不起。沒有別的。 >~<"
尼斯地圖和歌曲。 給你的明星〜

Shinkuu wrote:

time方面
我测不准，所以这么诡异的BPM还是找专业人士来测吧
自己又改了改，变成了 465/186.23

我就提出一个问题，这歌听起来很慢……
所以这么高BPM，用SV1.6……
就个人来看，非常不适合（这是个人看法）
全面该难度名字……希望insane适合这样的铺面了吧……

谱面还是不错的，但是……
如果要保持这种SV的话，我本人是很难mod出什么

所以，个人初步建议SV调低（个人觉得0.8）
上面的纯个人看法，你可以多问问其他人看看如何

foring wrote:

墨明棋妙！求老妖的歌~

ertyukjh010 wrote:

Ertyukjh010's modding ><"

☆ .OSB檔案可以刪掉 fixed
☆ 如果有來源就填在Source 应该是没有吧……

Hard

00:35:905 ~ 01:14:566 - 這部份NC放得有點亂；
決定是一句一種顏色，還是統一在長白線上NC；個人建議是一句一種顏色比較好，因為您的insane是這樣放
试着改了一下……发现很多slider影响了NC，所以还是采用白线NC
01:17:144 (1,2) - 轉盤後的Circle放在中間不太好，最好搬到別的地方 为了美观，这个不想改……
01:56:450 (6) - NC ? 因為您都在長白線NC~ 而且您的 01:35:830 也是這樣放 fixed
02:34:790 (6) - 改為2個Circle ? 不要破壞長白線NC的節奏www fixed
02:42:200 (x) - 放Note或者Slider如何? 要不要後慮弄這種：http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/197880
02:47:355 (x) - ^
02:52:510 (x) - ^
关于上面三个：其实是把这段做简单是为了突出后面kiai部分，所以想做的空旷一点

Insane

00:29:461 (1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/197886 弄成金字塔型如何？感觉六边形很古典的感觉……
03:39:548 (1) - 住下移動1格（Lv4）fixed

Nice map~ GoodLuck

• 
  
  00:32:683 (6) - This is pretty confusing and hard to read, because of the timing section to slow down. Maybe use 1,0x (0,5 on Insane) for this slider, IMHO it plays much nicer. I know it fits with the song slowing down, but I can't see the ticks, so if I am playing this for the first time, I am going to sliderbreak.

• 
  
  00:35:905 (1) - Same thing as the other slider.
  01:14:566 (7) - Hmmm. Just a suggestion; maybe stack the slider end like this? Looks a bit better.
  02:36:401 (8) - Add a whistle here? Sounds less empty.
  02:42:200 (1,1) - Even though there is a slowdown here, you will have to space it like, when holding the slider, the spacing must show values near this.
  02:53:476 (2,3) - This looks (and plays) pretty badly... I'd do this.
  02:55:732 (4) - Add a new combo here? It seems to start a new 'section' in the vocals.

Lissette wrote:

I have a huge concern with this mapset, I'm sorry to say it but Insane difficulty doesn't seem it belongs to this mapset, is completely divorced from the song. The softness of this song calls for a simple beatmap that follows strictly the rhythm, I don't know what you follow with all those notes, but it doesn't sounds good to me, I suggest you to listen the song and follow the piano, this song is so beautiful and is not good when the beatmap don't let people notice it.

Remember, not every song needs an Insane difficulty, songs like this dosen't need it actually.
I have reduced a lot of 1/4 sliders to make it more relaxing, and now this diff seems like Hard

Hard
Why the biggest circles? T.T
In fact, it is a Normal diff

Blue Dragon wrote:

[Hard / Insane]

• 
  
  00:32:683 (6) - This is pretty confusing and hard to read, because of the timing section to slow down. Maybe use 1,0x (0,5 on Insane) for this slider, IMHO it plays much nicer. I know it fits with the song slowing down, but I can't see the ticks, so if I am playing this for the first time, I am going to sliderbreak.

[Insane]

• 
  
  00:35:905 (1) - Same thing as the other slider.
  01:14:566 (7) - Hmmm. Just a suggestion; maybe stack the slider end like this? Looks a bit better. fixed
  02:36:401 (8) - Add a whistle here? Sounds less empty. fixed
  02:42:200 (1,1) - Even though there is a slowdown here, you will have to space it like, when holding the slider, the spacing must show values near this. fixed
  02:53:476 (2,3) - This looks (and plays) pretty badly... I'd do this. fixed
  02:55:732 (4) - Add a new combo here? It seems to start a new 'section' in the vocals. fixed

Can't really find anything that disturbs me in the other diffs, this is a pretty solid mapset. Fix these and contact me for a recheck.

EDIT: I suck at BBcode

Also I apparently got ninja'd by Lissette since I was modding this map since 4 hours ago or so

Leorda wrote:

Hi there

[General]
* The gray combo color is kinda blending with BG, change the color? removed


[Easy]
* AR +1? fixed, and HP+1


[Normal]
00:32:683 (6) - New combo for slowdown slider? fixed
01:28:098 (1) - The head slider is almost offscreen (just a warning) fixed
02:51:221 (4,1) - Since it has a vocal, how about add an object between this one? fixed


[Hard]
00:36:549 (2) - New combo? fixed


Once you done, PM Me

Sun Rainbow wrote:

http://puu.sh/pdps
如果有妨碍到图的RANK请D了这个SB谢谢……我不想让自己的SB变成挡住别人RANK之路的石头……

1. (Normal) - Move up to avoiding offscreen at 00:42:993 (3)
2. (Normal) - Change into long slider for long vocal at 00:54:591 (4)
3. (Normal) - Add note at 02:47:355 and 02:47:677
4. (Hard) - Snap the repeating slider to red tick at 01:38:730 (2)

Megurine Luka wrote:

Balls =3=

少了一个，手动存一下，懒得解压了=3=

Garven wrote:

[General]
Kiai doesn't fit this song imo The flashing feels out of place.
All fixed

You need the following skinelements:
spinner-clear.png
spinner-spin.png
spinner-osu.png

Kind of wish you skinned the sliderball too. Mine looks really out of place.
All added


[Easy]
This is more of a Normal, really.
01:59:028 - Extend break to here.


All fixed


[Normal]
Tick rate should be 1 for this BPM.
Yeah, rename this to Hard. Could get away with a smaller circle size too
01:59:028 - Extend break to here.
02:47:355 (5,6,1) - Move right and down three grids to adjust for stacking. Might want to adjust the spacing of 2 as well after that.
All fixed

[Hard]
Tick rate should be 1 for this BPM.
May as well rename to Insane at this point.
So much overmapping. ;_; I know it is really overmapping, I just can say it is my style, and this map need a harder diff
01:59:028 - Extend break to here.
All fixed

Megurine Luka wrote:

;_; 为什么不加个哭泣的记号卖个萌

Garven wrote:

Actually, I'd posit that this song doesn't need the Insane as much as it needs an Easy. Anyway:

[General]
The BPM feels a little slow. Check Doomsy's timing as it feels much better.
I'd raise the ODs as well. They're way too low right now (probably due to the timing)

[Hard]
Kiai still here?

[Insane]
So kiai is still on here too?

Suzully wrote:

Good map the skin fits the song.
Ranked.

Breeze wrote:

求水墨风的skin和SB _(:3」∠)_