1. Hard (4.47 stars, 329 notes)
2. Insane (4.92 stars, 429 notes)
3. Normal (3.06 stars, 240 notes)

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

sofa wwwwwwwwww

Byakugan249 wrote:

Yo modding this map because of ur request

Easy:
00:37:821(4) - NC
00:42:975(4) - ^
00:48:130(4) - ^
00:53:929(5) - ^
00:59:728(5) - ^
01:04:882(6) - ^
01:10:037(6) - ^
01:20:346(4) - ^
01:26:145(5) - ^
01:30:656(4) - ^
01:37:743(6) - ^
01:38:388(1) - remove the NC if u follow the suggestion above
01:40:965(5) - NC
01:46:764(5) - ^
01:51:274(4) - ^
02:24:779(7) - ^
02:29:934(6) - ^
02:35:089(6) - ^
02:40:243(6) - ^
03:11:493(6) - ^
03:26:635(5) - ^
03:32:112(6) - ^
03:36:994(5) - ^

Normal:
00:37:921(4) - NC if u ignore this make the previous mote a NC
00:43:942(5) - NC
00:49:096(5) - ^
00:59:406(7) - ^
01:04:882(7) - ^
01:20:346(7) - ^
01:25:501(6) - ^
01:30:656(7) - ^
01:40:965(6) - ^
01:46:120(7) - ^
01:50:630(6) - ^
01:55:140(6) - ^
02:37:666(3) - move the 2nd point to the middle(x:424 y:296)

Hard:
no problems here

this is the best i can do. GL

-Baby Strawberry- wrote:

❤莫名其妙。。。是墨明棋妙啦
❤ 开始modding~！

❤ 总的来说。。。

SPOILER

❤ 鉴于我的还是个新人，我真的找不出什么问题。。
❤ 整体感觉有点QQ姐的图风。比较平淡，但是这不是问题
❤我觉得可以rank
没有跳的确实有点平淡的说……但是我实在是各种跳不能啊

❤ 【Hard】 diff

SPOILER

01:49:663 (6) -http://puu.sh/8Jmy这样会不会好点？ fixed
02:42:176 (1) - 要不要把这个拉条也弄成后面那个速度的？ 不要啊，这样很有感觉啊~（感觉……
03:31:468 (2) - 这个拉条个人不太喜欢，折返太多不好判断，改成三连？ fixed
03:35:011 (5) - 这个跟上面一样 fixed
04:02:718要不要在这里加个note然后把转圈向后一点？ 不要~那样后面那个转盘就会感觉是多余的了，因为后面音乐的声音实在是太小了

❤ 【normal】diff

SPOILER

00:55:862加个note？虽然节奏和歌词上都没有这一拍，但是感觉空空的。。 我为了凑4.25星容易么……
02:40:244 (1) - ~02:43:787 (2) - 之间只有一个note感觉有点空。。后面也有几个地方这样。。^
03:44:032 (1) - 有点尾部上翘？是不是想要水平的呢？ 故意的……

❤ 【easy】 diff

SPOILER

没找出问题来~！
不过感觉有点难。 我也觉得是，不过aimod判定easy，各种指标也是0，关键是终于在3星以下了……

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整体感觉不错，谱面显得很整洁，跟歌曲很搭。
继续加油
新人modder，以上modding仅个人建议。

1. 00:44:264 (1) - 尾巴静音 20% ?
2. 01:15:192 (1) - ^
3. 01:26:145 (2) - 这个可以curve一下 再接下面的(3,4) 看起来比较好~

1. 01:26:468 (3) - clap
2. 01:56:429 (6,1) - change new combo

1. 02:42:176 (1) - 这个slider也 x0.5 ?

DarkRingSystem wrote:

:) 耶 中文歌
[General]
bpm:186.24算是比较准的 只有中文歌才有这么奇葩的bpm orz
似乎整体的 slider速度 给人感觉有点偏快 orz
因为用的BPM*2做的图……

[Easy]
02:21:558 (2) - 不建议在最低难度里面 有叠着的note
03:44:032 (1) - ^
03:59:496 (1) - ^
04:03:008 (X) -加个cercle 后面的spinner也随之改变 我再考虑考虑
其实这个是标着Easy的Normal……

[Normal]
03:02:795 (1,2) - 不建议在简单难度里面 转圈后把点摆在中间 这样新手会看见N+1个会动的同心圆 而感到棘手
这样很美观啊~

[hard]
没什么问题 就个人感觉 节奏太过连续 给人一种在匆匆赶路的 感觉 不太符合歌曲风格 orz
稍微减少了点

good luck star!!!

S h i o n wrote:

:) 你好~ （先谢谢你之前仍我图里的star啦~
其实是我懒得mod了……囧

歌者声音甚受/me 腐女一枚

Easy

1. 00:44:264 (1) - 尾巴静音 20% ?
2. 01:15:192 (1) - ^
   因为本身已经没有加各种hitsound，所以就不改了
3. 01:26:145 (2) - 这个可以curve一下 再接下面的(3,4) 看起来比较好~ fixed

Normal

1. 01:26:468 (3) - clap
2. 01:56:429 (6,1) - change new combo fixed

Hard

1. 02:42:176 (1) - 这个slider也 x0.5 ? 再考虑考虑

No kud for my lazy mod please , sorry ...

cya~

edit : This mod doesn't deserve a kd, since you gave me one,Star ~

pianiac wrote:

哇 华语歌
这个歌手唱歌拖拖的。。搞得timing好像不对酱。。。check了一下却又是对的哦= =

NORMAL(其实spacing太过大了，不如改个名字。。。）
我对起名字没有天赋啊啊啊……头痛中

我不mod new combo但是还是觉得你的很怪
找人重做NC去
00:46:197 (3) - 为何放repeat? 去掉，加note 考虑一下
00:56:506 (1,2) - 为何new combo? fixed
01:17:125 (1,2) - ^ fixed
01:26:790 (4) - 换一个note就的了结尾处是有一个尖锐的音的（尖锐……这是什么词汇……
02:36:377 (4) - 移右一点 fixed
03:44:032 (1) - 这里开始可以试着改slider velocity 慢点，比较好玩 考虑改一下Hard，但normal不会改

hard

虽然说你的图绝对是rankable的，而且如果我是mat也就bubble的 mod和sp都不够嘛~求施舍star……
很干净的图 大家都说很干净?的图，是指很良民的图么
但是感觉好像打得不过瘾。。。节奏重复不过多、不够明显。（或许是选歌的关系？) 估计是啦，这歌没什么激情的说，咳，是基情
加油！华语歌 加油！

1. 03:23:333 (T) - This timing point should move to 03:22:769

1. I seem you don't want to show ☆4.5. But OD is really low. At least OD +1 please.
2. 01:28:078 (1) - Hmm, I think this is extremely offscreen...
3. 02:42:181 (n) - add a circle?
4. 02:47:331 (n) - ^
5. 02:52:486 (n) - ^
   03:22:850 (T) - This timing point should move to 03:22:769

1. OD +1
   00:32:666 (6) - Oh, don't be slow this because this is same length with (1~5), players will be confused.
   03:23:333 (T) - This timing point should move to 03:22:769

Combo1 : 232,241,201
Combo2 : 192,192,192
Combo3 : 159,222,154
SliderBorder : 255,255,255

我是section fail & pass

请把spinner-circle.png换成我

lol

looooooooooooooooooooool

Hatsune Miku wrote:

cmn别找大哥做skin了 找我吧

第一套

这里面的这个只要加上default的hitcircleoverlay就可以了

banvi wrote:

I think correctly this is BPM 93.12 XD Low Bpm is difficult for me to make a map...

[General]
Umm, I think better to map 01:57:718 ~01:59:006 Break time is necessary...and this part is the best choice

[Easy]

1. 03:23:333 (T) - This timing point should move to 03:22:769

I did't make this Kiai off just for spring, so I don't change it

[Normal]

1. I seem you don't want to show ☆4.5. But OD is really low. At least OD +1 please. Yep, I just want to show a 4 star, and I think OD is not too low, though I don't change now, I will consider it.
2. 01:28:078 (1) - Hmm, I think this is extremely offscreen... fixed
3. 02:42:181 (n) - add a circle?
4. 02:47:331 (n) - ^
5. 02:52:486 (n) - ^
   You know I want to make a 4 star map...
   03:22:850 (T) - This timing point should move to 03:22:769

^

[Hard]

1. OD +1 It's fine now, but AR+1
   00:32:666 (6) - Oh, don't be slow this because this is same length with (1~5), players will be confused. It's really beautiful...and I think it's not easy to miss it, maybe just the tail whick won't lead to break
   03:23:333 (T) - This timing point should move to 03:22:769

^

good mapset (;

Megurine Luka wrote:

Hatsune Miku wrote:

cmn别找大哥做skin了 找我吧

你可以滚了
miku大人的腿还在么？

不知道为什么感觉hitcircle怪怪的所以多做了两套。你看着喜欢哪个用吧

第一套

[attachment=2:a2b8e]hitcircle.png[/attachment:a2b8e]

[attachment=1:a2b8e]hitcircleoverlay.png[/attachment:a2b8e]

这里面的这个只要加上default的hitcircleoverlay就可以了

[attachment=0:a2b8e]hitcircle.png[/attachment:a2b8e]

L_P wrote:

HALO

听pianiac说你需要星星，给您送来了

请收下~

um.....
名字建议
Inexplicable - the deserted

pianiac wrote:

嗯 还有 你的 creator comment 应该写 "who modded this map"

Megurine Luka wrote:

deserted一般用指废弃

如果指空山新雨的意思的话

Vacuous会好一点O.o?
有空虚的意思

Vacuous Mountain大概会比较合适O.o

EDIT：

查了下词典验证了一下lol

lol

12BARRY21 wrote:

Request from my queue~

關於名子....我也不太會翻>< Sorry了!! 我觉得大哥的好不错~

[Normal]

01:17:769 (3) - NC fixed
01:37:743 (1) - Remove NC fixed
01:57:718 (2) - 刪掉? 換個轉排在01:59:006 这样很好啦
02:44:754 (3) - 像這樣? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/184111 fixed
02:45:398 (4) - NC 不要啦~这部分按慢节奏摆的
02:47:331 & 02:47:653 - 各加個Note? 不要上4.5星啦
02:52:486 & 02:52:808 - ^ 不要上4.5星啦
02:55:707 (3) - NC 不要啦~这部分按慢节奏摆的
02:57:640 (1) - Remove NC
02:58:929 (2) - NC 这个和上面的好纠结……
03:48:542 - 加個Note? 不要上4.5星啦
03:53:697 - ^ 不要上4.5星啦
03:58:852 - ^ 不要上4.5星啦

[Hard]

00:29:444 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 間距要不要愈來愈開? 打起來比較好玩:D 像這樣? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/184118 (位置你自己在大該調一下><) 多好的想法啊
<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<
01:35:166 (1) - 刪掉 換3連音?
01:35:488 - 加個Note
01:35:649 - ^
01:35:810 - ^ 最后一个kiai是这样的，但为了难度的渐进，这里就没有加了，而且担心被吐槽overmap
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>~這邊改了後面也改改吧
02:42:821 (1) - 間距.... ？？？
02:53:452 (2,3) - 疊到不好看 這樣? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/184125 (3是轉[-45度]) 懒得改了，因为后面的都要动了
03:48:542 - 加個Note?
03:53:697 - ^
03:58:852 - ^
03:59:496 (1) - 排成這樣~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/184128 (節奏看一下)
04:00:785 (2,3) - 這樣? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/184130
上面两个改了，但是我摆成别的样子了……
大該就這樣了~
GOOD Map!!~
Star!!~~~~~~~~~~~~

Megurine Luka wrote:

00:32:182 (1,2) - 位置摆错了baka

no kd.

1. I think that the volume is a liittle too hgih overall. Try around -20% in all the sections, it makes it sound more delicate, which fits the map perfectly imo.
2. About the hitsounds:
   You hitsounded this in a weird way... I don't know, it just doesn't seem so consistent at some places and I felt you're missing finshes at some parts (and by finish, I mean that clap hitsound, which should TOTALLY be a finish instead of clap).
   So, ask yourself... Did I do a good job hitsounding this? Does it sound inconsistent? Am I missing hitsounds at some parts?
   If your answer is "yes" to those questions, then you have to hitsound this again, boy
3. Everything else seems good here! The skin elements have the right size, timing is fine, mp3 bitrate is fine, all the difficulties have the same tags, preview point, etc. There's just one little detail but I'll leave it for [Normal]

1. 03:02:795 (1) - Respecting the way you have been placing the new combos, I think you should remove this one.
2. Might be a little hard because of the SV but meh.

1. 03:22:850 - The kiai ends here, but in the other two difficulties, it ends at 03:23:333. You should do the same here.
2. 00:32:666 (6) - New combo, please. It will help the players to notice the speed change.
3. 02:24:457 (5) - Can you make the curve with the opposite concavity? It will improve the flow a little. Like this:
   
   SPOILER

   

1. Pretty much overmapped imo. Most of the 1/2 sliders don't follow anything in the music and that can be considered a mistake. You should ask some more people with experience about this.
2. 01:17:769 (3) - How about a new combo to match the kiai start?
3. 01:38:388 (3) - Similar to above even if there is no kiai start. New combo~
4. 03:03:439 (3) - (^)
5. 03:24:058 (3) - (^)

narakucrimson wrote:

Hi

[General]

1. I think that the volume is a liittle too hgih overall. Try around -20% in all the sections, it makes it sound more delicate, which fits the map perfectly imo. fixed
2. About the hitsounds:
   You hitsounded this in a weird way... I don't know, it just doesn't seem so consistent at some places and I felt you're missing finshes at some parts (and by finish, I mean that clap hitsound, which should TOTALLY be a finish instead of clap).
   So, ask yourself... Did I do a good job hitsounding this? Does it sound inconsistent? Am I missing hitsounds at some parts?
   If your answer is "yes" to those questions, then you have to hitsound this again, boy
   reset hitsound, like W+F_O_C_C_W_C_O_C_W+C_O_C_C_W_C_O_C (W=whistle, F=finish, O=None, C=clap)
3. Everything else seems good here! The skin elements have the right size, timing is fine, mp3 bitrate is fine, all the difficulties have the same tags, preview point, etc. There's just one little detail but I'll leave it for [Normal]

[Easy]

1. 03:02:795 (1) - Respecting the way you have been placing the new combos, I think you should remove this one. fixed
2. Might be a little hard because of the SV but meh. It is rankable, is it right?

[Normal]

1. 03:22:850 - The kiai ends here, but in the other two difficulties, it ends at 03:23:333. You should do the same here. fixed
2. 00:32:666 (6) - New combo, please. It will help the players to notice the speed change. This pattern really pretty, so I don't want to change it
3. 02:24:457 (5) - Can you make the curve with the opposite concavity? It will improve the flow a little. Like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
   fixed

[Hard]

1. Pretty much overmapped imo. Most of the 1/2 sliders don't follow anything in the music and that can be considered a mistake. You should ask some more people with experience about this. Remap some parts
2. 01:17:769 (3) - How about a new combo to match the kiai start? fixed
3. 01:38:388 (3) - Similar to above even if there is no kiai start. New combo~ fixed
4. 03:03:439 (3) - (^) fixed
5. 03:24:058 (3) - (^) fixed

Oh well that's all for now. I'm pretty tired *yawn*
Good luck!

wmfchris wrote:

01:05 這幾秒有錯timing的感覺(特別是01:06:815) 建議找人check timing offset+25

[Hard]
-1/2 slider: 這首歌vocal以1/1為主, 一堆1/2 slider還放clap就太吵了 適量拿掉 前面去掉了好多1/2，后面基本没改
-沒必要頭尾都clap 用whistle-clap對反而可以突出高低音 自己改一下吧 重新做了音效……
00:42:331 (4) - remove clap at beginning, or clap at beginning, whistle at ending
00:50:063 (4) - remove clap at the first two ticks
01:02:788 (4) - left 1 grid lv4
01:18:413 (5,6) - 怪節奏 用1/1 slider -> 1/2 slider
01:26:790 (5) - whistle at ending only
03:05:694 (2)- right 1 grid lv4

[Normal]
OD也太低了吧
00:44:908 (2) - clap at ending only
00:46:197 (3)- remove clap at the first ticks
01:06:493 (4,5) - (4)感覺很怪 (5)off vocal
01:11:326 (3) - whistle
02:31:223 (5,6)- whistle at beginning of (5), remove clap on (6)

其實排位沒啥問題，只是sounding可以改一改
- 用一個靜很多的custime softhit 現在soft hit感覺好吵 : / 新加了soft-normal，用默认的-5dB
- slider有不少地方不該clap/whistle 的地方都clap/whistle了 又是有點吵
^ 這樣反而會蓋掉歌曲原本悠閒的感覺 减少了好多whistle和clap，加了一些finish

Shana Aisaka wrote:

嗨〜 >~< 對不起，我遲到了。 從請求我的主題隊列〜
對不起，我的可憐的中國。 ==" I can understand...

紫色 - 地圖似乎好〜
粉紅色 - 建議

[Normal]
01:40:185(x) = 添加 note Since the most part of the this diff is set following 1/1, I would add this note.
02:20:938(1) = 添加 完成 fixed

[Hard]
03:57:910(x) = 添加 note No, this pattern is same to the before one.


對不起。沒有別的。 >~<"
尼斯地圖和歌曲。 給你的明星〜

Shinkuu wrote:

time方面
我测不准，所以这么诡异的BPM还是找专业人士来测吧
自己又改了改，变成了 465/186.23

我就提出一个问题，这歌听起来很慢……
所以这么高BPM，用SV1.6……
就个人来看，非常不适合（这是个人看法）
全面该难度名字……希望insane适合这样的铺面了吧……

谱面还是不错的，但是……
如果要保持这种SV的话，我本人是很难mod出什么

所以，个人初步建议SV调低（个人觉得0.8）
上面的纯个人看法，你可以多问问其他人看看如何

foring wrote:

墨明棋妙！求老妖的歌~

ertyukjh010 wrote:

Ertyukjh010's modding ><"

☆ .OSB檔案可以刪掉 fixed
☆ 如果有來源就填在Source 应该是没有吧……

Hard

00:35:905 ~ 01:14:566 - 這部份NC放得有點亂；
決定是一句一種顏色，還是統一在長白線上NC；個人建議是一句一種顏色比較好，因為您的insane是這樣放
试着改了一下……发现很多slider影响了NC，所以还是采用白线NC
01:17:144 (1,2) - 轉盤後的Circle放在中間不太好，最好搬到別的地方 为了美观，这个不想改……
01:56:450 (6) - NC ? 因為您都在長白線NC~ 而且您的 01:35:830 也是這樣放 fixed
02:34:790 (6) - 改為2個Circle ? 不要破壞長白線NC的節奏www fixed
02:42:200 (x) - 放Note或者Slider如何? 要不要後慮弄這種：http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/197880
02:47:355 (x) - ^
02:52:510 (x) - ^
关于上面三个：其实是把这段做简单是为了突出后面kiai部分，所以想做的空旷一点

Insane

00:29:461 (1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/197886 弄成金字塔型如何？感觉六边形很古典的感觉……
03:39:548 (1) - 住下移動1格（Lv4）fixed

Nice map~ GoodLuck

• 
  
  00:32:683 (6) - This is pretty confusing and hard to read, because of the timing section to slow down. Maybe use 1,0x (0,5 on Insane) for this slider, IMHO it plays much nicer. I know it fits with the song slowing down, but I can't see the ticks, so if I am playing this for the first time, I am going to sliderbreak.

• 
  
  00:35:905 (1) - Same thing as the other slider.
  01:14:566 (7) - Hmmm. Just a suggestion; maybe stack the slider end like this? Looks a bit better.
  02:36:401 (8) - Add a whistle here? Sounds less empty.
  02:42:200 (1,1) - Even though there is a slowdown here, you will have to space it like, when holding the slider, the spacing must show values near this.
  02:53:476 (2,3) - This looks (and plays) pretty badly... I'd do this.
  02:55:732 (4) - Add a new combo here? It seems to start a new 'section' in the vocals.

Lissette wrote:

I have a huge concern with this mapset, I'm sorry to say it but Insane difficulty doesn't seem it belongs to this mapset, is completely divorced from the song. The softness of this song calls for a simple beatmap that follows strictly the rhythm, I don't know what you follow with all those notes, but it doesn't sounds good to me, I suggest you to listen the song and follow the piano, this song is so beautiful and is not good when the beatmap don't let people notice it.

Remember, not every song needs an Insane difficulty, songs like this dosen't need it actually.
I have reduced a lot of 1/4 sliders to make it more relaxing, and now this diff seems like Hard

Hard
Why the biggest circles? T.T
In fact, it is a Normal diff

Blue Dragon wrote:

[Hard / Insane]

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  00:32:683 (6) - This is pretty confusing and hard to read, because of the timing section to slow down. Maybe use 1,0x (0,5 on Insane) for this slider, IMHO it plays much nicer. I know it fits with the song slowing down, but I can't see the ticks, so if I am playing this for the first time, I am going to sliderbreak.

[Insane]

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  00:35:905 (1) - Same thing as the other slider.
  01:14:566 (7) - Hmmm. Just a suggestion; maybe stack the slider end like this? Looks a bit better. fixed
  02:36:401 (8) - Add a whistle here? Sounds less empty. fixed
  02:42:200 (1,1) - Even though there is a slowdown here, you will have to space it like, when holding the slider, the spacing must show values near this. fixed
  02:53:476 (2,3) - This looks (and plays) pretty badly... I'd do this. fixed
  02:55:732 (4) - Add a new combo here? It seems to start a new 'section' in the vocals. fixed

Can't really find anything that disturbs me in the other diffs, this is a pretty solid mapset. Fix these and contact me for a recheck.

EDIT: I suck at BBcode

Also I apparently got ninja'd by Lissette since I was modding this map since 4 hours ago or so

Leorda wrote:

Hi there

[General]
* The gray combo color is kinda blending with BG, change the color? removed


[Easy]
* AR +1? fixed, and HP+1


[Normal]
00:32:683 (6) - New combo for slowdown slider? fixed
01:28:098 (1) - The head slider is almost offscreen (just a warning) fixed
02:51:221 (4,1) - Since it has a vocal, how about add an object between this one? fixed


[Hard]
00:36:549 (2) - New combo? fixed


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