ArtBox wrote:

こんばんわー、すこしだけMODしたのでご参考までに（全部提案です）
[Easy]

SPOILER

スライダーの数がサークルの2倍以上あるので
HP+1（これは別に変更しなくてもいいです）
OD+1（OD+1は流石に欲しいかも？） Normalとの差別化とStar difficultが3.00を超えてしまうので保留
→修正しました

00:03:419 (3) - 中途半端なスライダーの作りです、綺麗にしてみては？↓（真ん中の支点がx:440 y:280に来るように）
　　　　　　　　　　　

00:05:058 (2) - HPバーにかかっています（許容範囲？） fixed
00:06:042 (3) - ここは迷いましたが、スライダーの作りが中途半端なので (2)をずらしたのでその分も含めfixed
　　　　　　　　　　　真ん中の支点がx:64 y:120に来るように↓
　　　　　　　　　　　

00:09:156 (1,2) - 許容範囲な気はしますが、逆向きは好きではありません 個人的にはあまり気にならないですが、他の方の意見を待ちます
00:11:779 (3) - 1Grid左？fixed
00:12:599 (1) - 逆向きが連続してくるのは良いとは思えません、これでは駄目ですか？↓ fixed
　　　　　　　　　　　（逆にしただけです）
　　　　　　　　　　　

00:32:927 (1,2) - noteを重ねているのがここだけで違和感があります、ずらすべきです fixed
00:32:927 (1,2) - remove finish add whistle 音量を65％くらいに fixed
　　　　　　　　　　　　（ここでfinishがあってもバックの音（音量ではなく）が強すぎて掻き消されている感じがします）
00:39:320 (2) - 始点の座標（x:344 y:104）は変えずに角度を-5°から　-7°程 fixed
　　　　　　　　　　　（今の状態は左肩上がりな気がします、でも気のせいかも ）
00:40:796 (1) - タイムラインが白線から白線なのにMAPに置いてあるnoteは、
　　　　　　　　　　　離れてたりくっ付いてたりして変な感じです（ここだけではないです）、統一した方が良いのでは？↓　fixed
　　　　　　　　　　　（見た目的に離せない所とかもあるのでスルー程度で）
　　　　　　　　　　　

00:44:566 (2) - 00:46:042 (1) - ここまでの流れは許容範囲な気もしますが、
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　私としてはスライダーが完全に被らないように配置するべきだと思います 作り変えました
00:48:665 (3,4) - 音取りが不自然な気がします、が、代案も思いつかず
01:01:451 (5) - DS1.0xでx:320 y:120（この←↓二つはもしかしたら意図的かもしれないのでスルーして下さい、というか直すと1が打ちずらい気が ）　fixed
01:01:779 (1) - ^ x:240 y:120 　　
01:03:419 (2,3,4) - 2がなんかこう、だらーっと突っ立ってる感じがして見た目が悪いです（私だけでしょうけど） 色々修正
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　2の真ん中の支点がx:176 y:224に来るようにして、
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　角度を40°変更　あとはDS1.0x通りに並べてください（これもスルーしていいです、はい）↓
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　

01:08:009 (2) - 1のスライダーに対して曲げすぎているような印象があります　fixed　
　　　　　　　　　　　真ん中の支点がx:200 y:256に来るようにして下さい
　　　　　　　　　　　（これもスルーしてもらって良いです）
01:12:271 (2) - 指摘するか迷いましたが一応、x:336 y:280（今のままでも、それはそれで味がある気はします、スルーで）以下remapしました
01:12:927 (3) - スライダーの曲がりが見た目的にも中途半端です、
　　　　　　　　　　　私も弄りましたが上手く曲げれず・・・、いっそ真っ直ぐで　fixed
01:14:238 (4) - これは微妙ですが、真ん中の支点がx:336 y:184に来るようにして下さい fixed
01:37:517 (2,3) - これは意図的ですか？　　もしそうでないなら3をx:320 y:80に fixed

[Normal]

SPOILER

初心者にはこういった曲がり方は難しいかもしれません、
00:01:452 (1) -
00:02:435 (2) -
00:04:074 (1) -
00:05:058 (2) -
01:35:878 (1) - （せめて後半のこの←↓二つは修正を検討して下さい、後半でこれはいやらしいです） fixed
01:37:189 (3) -

短いスライダーは少し難しいかも？
00:11:288 (3) -
00:40:304 (6) -
00:44:074 (1) - （←↓この二つは連続ではきついかもしれません） fixed
00:44:894 (3) -
01:21:124 (4) -

きちんとスライダーが曲がっていなかったり、
水平でみて始めと終わりが綺麗に揃っていないものは直してあげると綺麗に見えます
例ですが、
00:28:337 (3) - これは下の支点を右に一個分だけずらしてあげたほうが、変に斜めっていない気がします fixed
00:29:648 (6) - これについては始まりと終わりでGrid Level3で1マス分ずれいています fixed
（もし意図的であれば直さなくても良いと思います）
ただ、これのように綺麗に揃っているのもあるので再度ずれたりしていないか確認して見てください
00:41:451 (2) -

00:03:419 (3) - ここは普通に曲げても良いのでは？ fixed
　　　　　　　　　　　（後半でかくついたスライダーが幾つかありますが、ここだけは違和感を覚えます）
00:10:468 (2) - 下手に曲げるよりは真っ直ぐの方が良いかもしれません fixed
00:47:681 (3) - 00:48:665 (1) - だらっと曲げるよりは綺麗に曲げてあげてください fixed
00:48:665 (1) - remove　NC fixed
00:49:320 (2) - NC
01:12:271 (1) - remove　NC fixed
01:13:255 (2) - NC
01:14:894 (1) - remove　NC fixed
01:17:189 (3) - NC
01:17:517 (1) - remove　NC no fixed
01:43:747 (5) - delete（イージーの音取りと同じにして下さい、不自然です。 fixed
　　　　　　　　　　　　ここはスライダーでも良いですが全難易度で揃えた方が良いと思います） Hard,Insaneはスライダーのままでいきます
01:44:074 (5) - add note

　fixed

[Hard]

SPOILER

00:01:943 (2) - HPバーにかかっています（許容範囲？） fixed
00:02:435 (3) - 作り直してください、線が水平にきちんと引かれていません fixed
01:11:615 (6,7) - 見た目が残念なのでこれはどうでしょうか？↓fixed
　　　　　　　　　　　　

01:43:747 (3) - delete（Easyに同じ） ここは現行のままでいきたいです。（今のところは特に指摘も多くないので…)
01:44:074 (3) - add note

[Insane]

SPOILER

01:02:927 (3) - スコアとプログレスバーにかかっています（許容範囲なんですかね？） fixed
01:23:255 (2) - HPバーにかかっています（許容範囲？） fixed
01:30:304 (9) - HPバーにかかっています（許容範囲？） fixed
01:43:747 (1) - delete（Easyに同じ） no fixed
01:44:074 (5) - add note

Insaneには関係ありませんが、次はnaoさんのsincerelyで譜面とかどうですかね （冗談です） どうでしょうね(0_0)その時はゲスト譜面をお願いしたいと思います:3[/color]

Rankedがんばー

1. You may consider to remove the .osb file and then full submit.

1. Maybe make some unique shapes to the sliders that looks good AND flows with the music nicely? I got this epic "WTF" feeling while I played this diff, believe me.
2. 00:32:271 (3) - Remove the Clap at the end? Don't really think double-clap works here.
3. 00:32:927 (1,2) - I can't really hear the Finish sounds. You might just as well remove them or make them a bit louder.
4. 00:48:665 (3) - NC?
5. 00:50:304 (4) - Eh... Don't know why, but it just feels pretty weird when I played this slider.
6. 00:52:271 (2) - Make this a 1/2 (from the white tick to the red tick on the timeline) kick slider?
7. 00:52:599 (3) - I personally would like to shorten this to a 1/1 slider that repeats twice. You might want to do it too.
8. 01:08:009 (2) - ^ (Except it only repeats once.)
9. 01:18:829 (4) - Lengthen this by 1/2 beat?
10. 01:44:074 (1) - Let's ignore the spacing here and place it at (256,64). Just go and do a leap of faith here. If you don't want though... it's fine, but you should play this spot with the original position AND with my suggested position first before responding to this.

1. Uh... I'm not sure, but things seem to be a bit off (no, not the timing) when I played this diff. Don't know why.
2. 00:06:697 (1,2,3,4) - Use 1.2x DS? No, I'm not crazy, but I just discovered that using a larger spacing when you're going for 'weird timing' (having bunches of 3/4 or 3/2 beat-spaced notes, for example) will go well. It might only work for me though, so you shouldn't strictly follow this.
3. 00:59:156 (1) - ^
4. 01:16:206 (5) - NC?
5. 01:28:009 - You should map this part...
6. 01:33:255 - Add a circle?

1. Overall, this diff still needs a bit more work on... basically everything. You don't have to remap this, just rearrange stuff. I'll point out a few things.
2. 00:06:042 (1,2,1) - This jump doesn't really work well here, IMO.
3. 00:11:288 (1,2) - Don't know why, but this plays... bad.
4. 00:30:304 (1,2) - This slight overlap looks odd.
5. 01:38:501 (1,2) - You may want to make these sliders spaced a bit larger.
6. 01:43:747 (3) - I didn't expect this slider to be slowed...

1. I'm also not really sure about the quality of this diff... Might be just me that suck, though.
2. 00:01:452 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - ...What's with these jumps?
3. 00:04:074 (1,2,1,2) - ^

wingman_dw wrote:

hi/

[Insane]
00:06:533 (4) - 前のスライダーと重なってるので完全に隠れるようにするか反対側に配置した方がいいと思います fixed
00:28:173 (2,3,4,5) - 対称になってないのでgrid snap外して揃える？ fixed
00:36:697 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^ 似たようなところがいくつか fixed
00:40:796 (1,2,3,4) - (2,3)がプレイする時に(1)と被っていてるのであえて右下にずらしてもいいと思います remap
00:59:156 (1,2,3,4) - ^ 恐らくHRとのバランスもあるので難しいですが remap
01:16:206 (1,2,3) - ^ fixed
00:51:288 (1,2,3,4) - もう少し綺麗に囲むかずらすか http://puu.sh/Apb1 fixed
ただここだけ音取りが変わっている？
00:52:927 (1,2,4,5,6,7) - スペーシングが若干気になりました。(4,6)はDS=1.5xで統一して良いと思います fixed
01:04:074 (6) - 1grid下に fixed
01:07:681 (3,4) - スペーシング？ fixed
01:09:484 (10) - 全く影響ないけど手前の(7)にgridsnap外して重ねる re-map
01:35:550 (3) と 01:36:206 (2,3) - やはりAR8だと若干ごちゃごちゃした印象。できたらスライダーの終点とかどこかをしっかり重ねた方がいいかも　fixed
01:41:288 (2) - サークルの方がいいかも？ ここは保留

全体を通して始点と終点が水平に配置してあるスライダーはきっちりさせた方が。gridsnap外して曲げれば上下は簡単に揃えられるので

SPOILER

00:12:107 (1) - before after的なものを


細かいですはい
スライダーが長くなるほど気になるので長いのは修正を

前半曲の良さが譜面に出ていてとても良かったです

Hinsvar wrote:

Yo.

Sorry for being late.

*Note: Gold ones are a must-do. Everything in red are things that look awkward or wrong to me (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler and a bit better.

>General

1. You may consider to remove the .osb file and then full submit.

>Easy

1. Maybe make some unique shapes to the sliders that looks good AND flows with the music nicely? I got this epic "WTF" feeling while I played this diff, believe me.
2. 00:32:271 (3) - Remove the Clap at the end? Don't really think double-clap works here. fixed
3. 00:32:927 (1,2) - I can't really hear the Finish sounds. You might just as well remove them or make them a bit louder. removed
4. 00:48:665 (3) - NC? no?
5. 00:50:304 (4) - Eh... Don't know why, but it just feels pretty weird when I played this slider. fixed
6. 00:52:271 (2) - Make this a 1/2 (from the white tick to the red tick on the timeline) kick slider? no changed.I think it's too short.
7. 00:52:599 (3) - I personally would like to shorten this to a 1/1 slider that repeats twice. You might want to do it too. just remapped
8. 01:08:009 (2) - ^ (Except it only repeats once.) no fixed
9. 01:18:829 (4) - Lengthen this by 1/2 beat? no fixed
10. 01:44:074 (1) - Let's ignore the spacing here and place it at (256,64). Just go and do a leap of faith here. If you don't want though... it's fine, but you should play this spot with the original position AND with my suggested position first before responding to this.

In Easy, I don't want to change DS but other modders mention that, I'll do.

>Normal

1. Uh... I'm not sure, but things seem to be a bit off (no, not the timing) when I played this diff. Don't know why.
2. 00:06:697 (1,2,3,4) - Use 1.2x DS? No, I'm not crazy, but I just discovered that using a larger spacing when you're going for 'weird timing' (having bunches of 3/4 or 3/2 beat-spaced notes, for example) will go well. It might only work for me though, so you shouldn't strictly follow this. I don't have iuntention of changing DS sorry
3. 00:59:156 (1) - ^
4. 01:16:206 (5) - NC? fixed
5. 01:28:009 - You should map this part... fixed
6. 01:33:255 - Add a circle?

fixed

>Hard

1. Overall, this diff still needs a bit more work on... basically everything. You don't have to remap this, just rearrange stuff. I'll point out a few things.
2. 00:06:042 (1,2,1) - This jump doesn't really work well here, IMO. fixed
3. 00:11:288 (1,2) - Don't know why, but this plays... bad. fixed
4. 00:30:304 (1,2) - This slight overlap looks odd. fixed
5. 01:38:501 (1,2) - You may want to make these sliders spaced a bit larger. fixed
6. 01:43:747 (3) - I didn't expect this slider to be slowed...

fixed

>Insane

1. I'm also not really sure about the quality of this diff... Might be just me that suck, though.
2. 00:01:452 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - ...What's with these jumps? I think this needs jumps because the sounds of music is so clearly and loundly.
3. 00:04:074 (1,2,1,2) - ^

IMO, this still needs a bit work, but overall it's already great for someone's first mapset \:D/

Good luck on the way

Fenya wrote:

Hi~

Easy:
00:21:779 (3) - Spacing fixed
01:21:615 (3) - put like this: http://puu.sh/AFiV Sound better, imo o.o fixed
01:37:845 (3) - 1 grid down no fixed
01:42:107 (2) - Press shift to align with the (1) fixed

Normal:
00:42:763 (4,1) - Overlap fixed
00:57:189 (2) - 1 grid left? To fulfill the symmetry with (1) fixed

Hard:
00:01:943 (2) - 1 grid up? fixed
00:02:927 (4) - 1 grid down? fixed
01:20:632 (3) - 1 grid up, to have the same distance. fixed

Insane:
00:56:533 (1) - Move the slidertick to x:12 y:120, to be equal to the slider (3) fixed

That's all, sorry for my poor mod :c
Sorry for my poor English, I hope you serve something.
Good song, good luck~

Laurier wrote:

from user page

Easy
00:06:042 (3) - nazi なんか妙にせまくなっているのでちょっと左にずらしましょう fixed
00:07:681 (2) - ^同じ理由で右へ ^
00:32:927 (1,2) - CS:1のclap追加 fixed
00:45:714 (4) - clap? fixed
01:04:402 (4) - end のホイッスルをfinishに変更。その後の3つの単発にホイッスル追加 fixed
01:08:009 (2) - slider slideの音追加しても面白いかも(Easyってことを考えると初心者混乱するし微妙ですけど\/) ここはそのままで
01:41:124 (1) - 直前のsliderを包む感じに　http://puu.sh/B4Ss　次のsliderもこれをコピーして反転で　fixed

Normal
00:12:763 (2) - 開始を1つ前のred tickから。Normalだし、こういう音取で大丈夫だと思います fixed
00:56:533 (1) - sping後のおすの文字で隠れるので場所を変えましょう。もう少し中心よりがいいと思います fixed
01:01:779 (1) - end at 01:02:599 - ？少しタイミングとりにくいように思います fixed
01:14:894 (4) - りばーすの部分をもう少し左側に移動。変更する場合は次のsliderも平行になるようにちぇんじ fixed
01:27:353 (5) - 今までのstackさせていたものとタイミングが変わるパターンなので、stackさせないで移動しましょう。 fixed
01:40:468 (4) - finishつけるなら真ん中じゃなくて最後へ fixed

Hard

00:11:288 (3) - 音量を少し上げてﾌｨﾆｯｼｭ追加？ fixed
00:27:681 (1) - 音取りの提案　http://puu.sh/B4Xt fixed
00:48:665 (1) - 説明しにくいけど直前のsliderのくぼみに収まる感じに　http://puu.sh/B4Y4 fixed
00:52:599 - add note no fixed
01:20:140 (1) - add finish これの少し前のfinishはホイッスルにする感じでもいいかもしれません fixed
01:43:747 (1) - delete? no fixed

Insane
00:32:927 - clapつけるか音量上げるかしましょう 音量を上げました
00:43:419 (1,2,3) - 　00:43:091 (4) - を左に少し移動して、(1,2,3)を00:42:107 (1) - の頭にstack　fixed
00:55:714 (4) - 連打入れるなら00:55:878 - ここまで入れて1/2 sliderに変更 スライダーに置き換えました
01:06:042 (1) - 白tickにホイッスル追加？あと音量少しあげましょう fixed
01:37:681 (7) - 結構ずれてるのでstackさせるならしっかり fixed
01:38:419 (8) - streamにするならこれはdelete fixed


That's all

popner wrote:

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[General]
mp3 is 127 kb/s? You'd better to find a 128~192 one. changed
End Kiai of Taiko at 01:27:845 to make consistent? fixed

[Easy]
00:31:288 (2) - not fit the vocal. You can use same pattern as 00:28:829 (2). fixed

[Normal]
00:12:435 (2) - move to 00:12:271 and extend by 1/2 tick? Or it is confusing. fixed
00:17:353 - add note here? no fixed.
01:07:681 (3) - change to a note and a 1/2 slider? http://puu.sh/BwGD now no changed, but others mention that, I'll fix.

[Hard]
00:31:779 (4,5,6) - put like this? http://puu.sh/BwD5 fixed
00:54:402 - add a note here? fixed
01:10:960 (4) - there is vocal at 01:11:124 fixed
01:43:747 (1) - same as Insane fixed

[Insane]
00:19:156 (4,5,6) - use rhythm like this? http://puu.sh/Bwjq fixed
00:30:304 (1,2) - move to 264,84? http://puu.sh/Bwxo re-mapped
00:32:681 (10) - move to 00:32:681 is much better imo. ^
00:43:501 (2) - the triplet doesn't make much sense because it doesn't fit the vocal. So delete (2) is a good choice imo. fixed
00:46:533 - add a note here to make consistent? fixed
00:52:271 (3) - not fit the vocal at 00:52:435. remapped.
01:06:779 (6) - delete this note or add a note at 01:06:943 to make a stream? the triplet is just like 00:43:501 (2) deleted one
01:14:730 (8) - stack it under end of 01:14:238 (7)? Vocal change at 01:14:894 (1) so i think it's not a good choice to stack it with previous note. fixed
01:21:288 (1) - big jump following a pause stack is misleading removed 1 stack
01:28:501 (4,5) - remove the stack? It's same as 01:14:730 (8) I think this isn't problem. so no fixed.
01:37:845 - end - this section is much harder than previous section, the patterns here is for AR9. Try to lower the difficulty. changed stack.
01:43:747 (1) - delete? there is nothing to follow here fixed

That's all I can find. GL~

BeatofIke wrote:

General
-> Video quality could be better. If want, I can find a better quallty for you. oh really? if you can I'll try to use
-> Offset is too late. Try 1430. Make sure to resnap all notes AND timing sections afterwards. Also make sure you change it in ALL difficulties. umm... I don't agree with that because no one say about that. but other modders mention that, I'll fix it

Easy
-> Nothing found.

Normal
-> Overall Difficulty (+1)? fixed

Hard
-> HP Drain (-1)? fixed

Insane
-> Nothing found.

1. Add "Nitroplus" to tags?

1. Center all of the setting
2. Kiai time's parttern is boring than no kiai time's parttern , follow the vocal in kiai time isn't a good idea... It may feel very boring!!
3. 00:01:452 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Why don't you use kk dd kk dd to follow the music?
4. 00:03:583 (9) - k may follow the music better
5. 01:07:025 (1) - D is better than K
6. 01:07:353 (2,3) - dk to follow the vocal
7. 01:14:894 (34) - D to follow the music
8. 01:17:517 (42) - Same as above
9. 01:25:714 (76,77,78,79,80,81) - dkkddd to follow the music
10. 01:38:501 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Same as 00:01:452 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
11. 01:40:632 (10) - Same as 00:03:583 (9) -
12. 01:44:074 (23) - D
13. 01:44:156 - Unused green timing section
14. Do not put k d which you just want it be, try to put objects to follow the music

spboxer3 wrote:

Recommendations:

1. Custom combo colours
   Custom combo colours do not really matter to taiko as they will be overwritten in actual gameplay. The case is the same with combo numbering, but you may wish to use the numbering to mark out red/blue notes visually within edit mode (assuming no custom colours have been set), this would make modding for other people easier and could make mapping easier:
   

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Okay , That's all
Good Luck :3

AoiX wrote:

Request from Queue

>>Aoi's Mod

default=suggestion||bold=notice||red+bold=unrankable
General

1. I'm so disappoint with the quality of Video.You'd better have a new one.If you need help,ask me freely~

fixed but I don't know how to improve this quality
Insane

1. 01:15:714 (3,4) - Every slider must have a clear and visible path to follow from start to end.Player will think:which one is slider? 3 or 4?then,he/she missed X_X fixed
2. 01:01:779 - 0.75x slider velocity should be end here or the speed will be strange remapped
3. 00:33:419 (4) - try to add a clap fixed
4. 00:51:288 (1) - finish on first circle

not fixed. it's noisy i think.
Hard

1. 00:33:747 (3,4) - spacing too large as a "Hard" hmm... not fixed now.
2. 01:01:779 - 0.75x slider velocity should be end here or the speed will be strange

fixed
Normal

1. 01:19:484 (3) - clap on second circle

fixed
Easy

1. seems fine

1. [optional] 00:09:484 (1) - make this encircling 00:10:468 (2), also make a flow, like this :
   
   SPOILER

   
2. [optional] 00:45:386 (3) - make this encircling 00:44:566 (2), like this :
   
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1. AR +1?
2. 00:34:238 (1) - too short imo, I guess delete it than put a circle with finish at 00:35:222, just keep the spacing 1.0x
3. 01:44:074 (1) - delete clap, add finish

1. 01:44:074 (1) - delete clap, add finish

nanda2009 wrote:

Hello from my modding queue~

[Normal]

1. [optional] 00:09:484 (1) - make this encircling 00:10:468 (2), also make a flow, like this :　fixed
   
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2. [optional] 00:45:386 (3) - make this encircling 00:44:566 (2), like this : fixed
   
   SPOILER

   

[Hard]

1. AR +1? some says AR6 so no fixed.
2. 00:34:238 (1) - too short imo, I guess delete it than put a circle with finish at 00:35:222, just keep the spacing 1.0x there are few music sounds this section. so I think spiner is better. but your sugestion is right I think.
3. 01:44:074 (1) - delete clap, add finish

fixed

I think there are no pattern errors at [Insane], just make sure you :

1. 01:44:074 (1) - delete clap, add finish

great map~

HelloSCV wrote:

Hi~ From my Queue
Almost Modding is Suggestion so you can ignore this

SPOILER

Easy
00:17:189 (4) - delete note? n fixed
00:20:140 (4) - add note? no fixed

Normal
00:52:599 (3,4) - try this? http://puu.sh/EwxO fixed
01:28:173 (1,2) - ^ http://puu.sh/Ewyz fixed

Hard
00:03:419 (5) - NC fixed
00:04:566 (2) - 1 more repeat no fixed
00:06:042 (5) - ^ no fixed
00:34:238 (1) - finish -> clap fixed
00:45:386 (7) - ^ fixed

Insane
00:04:074 (1,2,1,2) - i guess this timing pattern is better http://puu.sh/EwtC well, I think no fixed better. but some remapping.
00:06:042 (1,2,3,4) - how about this? http://puu.sh/EwtK fixed
01:00:796 (2,3) - try this pattern? http://puu.sh/EwsJ fixed
01:08:337 (5) - NC fixed
01:18:665 (5) - ^ no?

Good luck!!

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
-------------------------------------------------
[General]
Suggest Offset:1458 when one said "1430" (I didn't change it). umm, i don't know accurate offset(0_0;)

Inconsistency in Tags: fixed
- [Easy] : Nitroplus nitro+ 5pb. opening vwxcrossover PSP visual novel
- [Hard] : Nitroplus nitro+ 5pb. opening vwxcrossover psp visual novel
- [Insane] : Nitroplus nitro+ 5pb. opening vwxcrossover psp visual novel
- [kurosu's Taiko] : Nitroplus nitro+ 5pb. opening vwxcrossover psp visual novel
- [Normal] : Nitroplus nitro+ 5pb. opening vwxcrossover psp visual novel

[Easy]
00:15:222 (1) - delete clap fixed
00:15:878 (2) - ^ fixed
00:16:533 (3) - ^ fixed
00:16:861 (4) - add clap here @.@ fixed
00:37:517 (2) - 1 grid left (looks better) fixed
01:38:992 (1) - separate from (2) (being covered with something isn't so good IMO unless it's special) fixed

[Normal]
00:01:452 (1) - finish? crap is better I think.
00:04:074 (1) - little spacing error fixed
00:41:943 (3) - a bit sharp? make it smooth fixed
00:50:960 - remove finish fixed
00:51:288 - finish here nothing is better.
00:58:501 (5,4) - hey :< bug here oh... fixed sorry><


[Hard]
00:15:222 (2) - spacing? fixed
00:46:533 (2) - consider adding a note here? replace slider
01:22:763 (1,2,3,4,5) - try this. fixed?



[Insane]
Excellenet :3
--------------------------------------------------
Wonderful Mapset :3
Good Luck with Rank

espiritur00 wrote:

[easy]

00:08:665 (3) - change this note for a slider that end in 00:08:829 "entire slider with clap". no changed
00:34:730 (1) - i think that you can change it slider for : a slider that end in 00:34:894 "entire slider with whistle" no fixed
& a hitcircle in 00:35:222 with "finish"
00:39:320 (2) - change this slider for a slider that end in 00:39:648 "in the last part of the slider use "whistle"
& a hitcircle in 00:39:976 without sample.
00:57:189 (1) - i think that you can change it slider for : a hitcircle in 00:57:189 with "whistle" & a slider in 00:57:845 fixed
that end in 00:58:501 , with "whistle in the 1st and the second part of the slider
01:01:779 (1) - delete the reverse arrow & add "finish" in the first part of the slider. no fixed

01:02:927 (1) - if you make ^ , add a hitcircle here with "whistle"
01:03:419 (2) - Move this slider to 01:03:255 & add "whistle" in the last part of this slider and in the first I think a bit early?
delete the "whistle"


Not More for this diff :$~

[Normal]

00:34:730 (3) - delete this slider and better make a slider that end in 00:34:894 with whistle in the first part of this slider
and NC. no fixed but NC changed.
00:35:222 (3) - if you make ^ , here make a hitcircle with finish.
00:45:386 (3) - delete a reverse arrow and add "whistle" in 00:45:714 some re-mapped
00:46:370 (1) - delete this note same as
00:46:042 (3) - if you make the two mods of up ^^ , here make a slider that end in 00:46:370 with "finish" in the 1st part of this slider same as
and "whistle" in the second part of the slider.

01:00:140 (2) - move 1 grid up fixed
01:03:419 (3) - delete this note re-mapped
01:03:255 (3) - Make a slider that end in 01:03:583 with "whistle" in the last part of the slider.
01:03:747 (4) - delete a reverse arrow and move this slider to 01:04:074 and add "whistle" in the first part of this slider.


[Hard]

01:19:156 (4) - 2 grids right 1 down. fixed

Only Found this thing U_U

This is all
I dont mod taiko,insane or extra srry u_u

i wait that this func you :3
Good Luck with your map & go for RANKED!!
thx for the mod 4 mod :3

Mixagji wrote:

konnichiwa from #modreqs

[Insane]
00:06:451(4) - 恐らくミスだと思いますが 00:06:533 - へ fixed
00:14:566(1,3) - 始点にfinish fixed
00:15:878(4) - 折り返し部分にfinish fixed
00:16:533(6) - 始点にfinish fixed
00:19:812(1) - 始点と終点にfinish fixed
00:21:124(1) - 始点にfinish fixed
00:21:779(4) - ^ スライダーの終点を 00:21:943 - にして 00:22:107 - にfinish付きのノート追加　(5,6,7)でジャンプにする場合は(5)にNC入れた方が良いかもしれません imo remap
01:04:894(2) - finish fixed
01:07:681(3) - ^ no
01:08:829(4) - whistle fixed
01:09:156(5) - ^
01:10:304(2) - finish no
01:10:796(1) - 始点、折り返し点、終点にfinish no
01:11:779(2) - whistle no
01:12:107(3) - ^ no
01:12:927(2) - finish no
01:18:173(3) - ^ no
01:18:992(6) - ^ no
01:19:812(8) - clap→finish fixed
01:30:632(1) - 始点と終点にfinish fixed
01:31:943(1) - ^ fixed
01:35:878(1,4,6) - ^ fixed

[Hard]
AR+1 今のところはAR6のままで。AR6,7で意見が分かれるので様子見です
もしInsaneの音付けを使ってもらえたらhardでも殆ど合うと思うのでそちらを参考にしてみてくださいorz

good map
fight~

meiikyuu wrote:

feel free to ignore anything you don't like

Easy
00:35:550 (1) - add whistle at beginning of slider? no fixed
00:48:665 (3) - ^ same avobe
00:59:156 (3) - new combo (because new vocal section starts) ixed

Normal
00:17:189 - add note? no fixed but others mention that I'll fix it.
00:27:681 (1,2) - move these notes 2 grids up, and then 2 grids left (to line up with 3) fixed
00:58:501 (5) - add whistle fixed

Hard
00:18:501 (5) - 1 grid to the right (to blanket neatly around 6) fixed
00:37:517 (7) - 1 grid up fixed
01:08:337 - add note? fixed


Insane
00:22:271 (5) - new combo? not sure though fixed
good diff.~

nice map ^^ がんばって xD ~~

shikyu wrote:

Hello, you ever request at my mod queue~ so let's start

[Easy]
00:50:304 (4) - make it simmiliar as 00:48:665 (3) ? next(1) slider is similar. so no fixed

[Normal]
00:14:566 (1) - repeat silder like this pretty hard I guess... fixed
00:32:927 (1) - why don't add clap at first repeat? it sounds better fixed
00:34:730 (1) - add finish at slider's end fixed
00:42:763 (4) - ^ it sounds noisy I think.
01:27:353 (5) - make it similiar as 01:26:042 (3) ? fixed

[Hard]
00:32:927 (1,2) - add clap at slider's end like normal fixed
00:34:238 (1) - remove clap and add finish fixed
01:19:812 (5) - change this to a note at 01:19:812 if you follow this, delete 01:20:140 (1) and make slider from 01:19:976 to 01:20:140 no fixed
01:24:730 (7) - make this more blanket 01:24:402 (6) fixed

[- t e n n y a -'s Taiko]
00:22:927 (4) - move it to 00:23:091
00:23:255 (5) - change to k
00:25:222 (11) - move it to 00:25:058
00:25:878 (14) - change to k
00:27:517 (22) - ^
00:27:681 (X) - add note here
00:30:140 (34) - change to k
00:30:304 (X) - add note here
00:32:927 (1,2,3,4) - pattern: KKDD
00:46:042 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21) - didn't like these pattern, not really fit the music
01:44:074 (23) - change to K
all fixed


I think you can make kiai time part more intresting and there're still some pattern that doesn't fit the music


[Insane]
01:40:468 (6,7) - big jump doesn't fit this part deleted (7)
01:43:091 (1,2,1) - similiar to hard, maybe you can change its placement? sorry no fixed

That's all I could find, good luck~

Quiz-chan wrote:

[General]

Easy

Approach Rate: -1 fixed
Overall Difficulty: -1 fixed
HP Drain Rate: -1

Hard

Approach Rate: -1some mention AR6 is late. so I don't change.

[Easy]
00:50:304 (4) - Make this slider a mirror slider. I think this placement is better.

[Normal]
00:21:779 (3) - One grid up? (-4 y) fixed
01:33:583 (2) - ^ no fixed. it's star placement

[Hard]
START till 00:22:435 is a good part. Nicely mapped.
FLAWLESS!! <3

[Insane]
Some notes are hidden beneath other beats. Try to expose them a bit more.
00:06:533 (4) - Remove this beat. no fixed.
01:06:861 (6) - ^ fixed

Added as favourite.

hibarirailwayz wrote:

mod queue から～
参考までによろしくお願いします。
[General]
特に無いです
[Easy]
00:31:451 (2) - もう少し上にして上げた方がAIMしやすいと思います。１番を下げてやるのもありだと思います。　fixed
01:06:042 (1,2,3) - スリーツーワンなのに１，２，３ってｗちょっと面白かったので指摘ｗ (0_0)
01:38:992 (1,2,3,4) - 突然赤線を踏む、違う音取りになりますので01:41:124 (1,2,3) - の音取りを先に入れたほうが易しいかと。 fixed
01:44:074 (1) - これのせいでFC逃したｗ（moddingとは関係ありません） ;w;

[Normal]
00:20:796 (2) - 少し下の方がAIMしやすいと思います fixed。
00:41:943 (3) - 下に持っていくと前のスライダーからのつながりが綺麗です。 fixed
01:24:730 (1,2,3) - 配置の提案。①始点(192,256)終点(236,344)②(152,164)③そのままsample↓ fixed

SPOILER

01:27:353 (5) - かなり間があるのでNC? fixed
[Hard]
00:47:845 - add circle? no fixed
00:56:533 (1) - もうちょっと下の方がAIMしやすくて親切かも fixed

[Insane]
00:50:304 (5) - ４番のスライダーにあわせた位置に置いた方が見栄えはいいです。 前の(1)と重なりたくないので今のところno fixedです。（見栄えには大して影響しませんが）

楽しい譜面でした～☆
Good luck!!

Byakugan249 wrote:

oh wow looks like you want this map to be as perfect as possible...alright i'll see what i can do. mod requested on my queue.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. I'll give you my opinion, advice, or if i'm curious about something

[General]
CLEAR!
[Easy]
00:02:435 (2) - try this instead? i think beginners might feel uncomfortable with that movement IMO. fixed
00:05:058 (2) - similar as above, but like this. fixed
00:06:042 (3) - i feel that a hitsound is missing here. try that custom clap and tell me what you think. i think it matches with the instrumental in this part of the song. if not then add something. it sounds empty without a hitsound here that matches the instrumental. well, adding a hit sound is better I think. but, this back-music sounds isn't big, so I feel this enough whistle. clap is a bit strong I think.
00:12:599 (1) - maybe like this? i think it'll technically blanket the end of (2) which would make the flow somewhat smoother during gameplay. no fixed
00:16:533 (3) - i think a finish would sound nice as it matches the instrumental in this part of the song IMO. fixed
00:21:779 (3) - ^ fixed
00:34:730 (1) - i think that this should be a 1/1 slider. the rhythm would be easier since it follows the loud part in the "ding". so move this up 1/2 and reduce this slider by 1/2 to make it easier for beginners. it should start that 1/1 rhythm to the next note. like this if you don't understand. I want to fit with vocal so no fixed.
00:39:320 (2) - maybe to make it easier, align this note to the end of the previous slider? the path it's taking might be uncomfortable for beginners since they might not know when to hit the next note. alighn next slider is better I think.
00:40:304 (3) - how about replacing this for a circle at the downbeat(white tick) to make it easier for beginners? I think it's not too difficult.
00:43:091 (4) - that whistle isn't loud enough to match the cymbals, so replace it for a finish. fixed
00:44:566 (2) - maybe a curved slider to blanket (1)? i think it'll flow smoother to the next note during gameplay. fixed
00:50:304 (4) - make this slider look like (3). the flow is already gone by the time this slider is hit during gameplay. fixed
00:52:927 (3) - point this slider vertically instead of horizontally. the flow would continue from (1) during gameplay. no changed
01:00:468 (3) - align this to (2). it'll form this shape which should keep the flow going from the previous notes in this combo. fixed
01:03:419 (2,3,4) - hmm how about like this? the notes would be blanketed either way and the flow would be easier and smoother during gameplay. your sugestion is good. but I like this placement sorry.
01:14:894 (1,2) - add finishes at the repeat arrows. if you listen carefully, you should hear the cymbals in the song. fixed
01:24:074 (2,3) - make the pattern like this. that overlap on (2) bothers me during gameplay. fixed
01:28:337 - i feel that a circle is missing here? how about adding it to start the rhythm with a clap? it's cofusing for newbie I think.

[Normal]
i feel that AR4 is too slow and it doesn't flow to the song that well. increase it by 1 to give off that smooth feeling to the map/song. fixed
00:03:747 (4) - how about a whistle to match that sound in the song? fixed
00:06:370 (4) - same as easy. fixed
00:09:484 (1) - i don't like this repeat slider. it shows no flow to the song and it doesn't follow anything in the song. instead make a 2/2 slider starting at 00:09:648(a slider from the white tick to the red tick). it'll follow the instrumental a lot accurate during gameplay. changed slider's rythem
00:21:779 (3) - i thought i heard the cymbal clash here, so add a finish at the beginning to match it. it's too weak so not adding a finish
00:28:829 (4) - extend this by 1/2 to follow every bit of the instrumental. if you listen carefully, the instrumental changes at the downbeat.fixed
00:31:288 (2) - you forgot to add a clap here. add it to keep the consistency in claps. fixed
00:34:730 (1) - replace this for a circle and a 1/1 slider. it'll follow the change in the instrumental. fixed
00:40:304 (6) - how about a finish at the beginning to match the instrumental in the background music? you did it on the end, so why don't you do it here? no fixed
00:42:763 (4) - same as 00:43:091 on easy. if you ignore this, then a clap should work. fixed
00:45:386 (3) - ^ no fixed?
00:45:386 (3) - maybe a whistle at the end to match the vocals/instrumental? already whistle added?
01:06:042 (3) - i don't get it. easy has 3 circles and normal has a repeat slider...i think that easy should have the repeat slider and normal should have the 3 circles because for me, the repeat sliders are easier than hitting 3 circles. umm, of course your sugestion is right. but I don't change it because this placement is beautiful sorry but others mention that, I'll fix it.
01:24:730 (1) - maybe a curved slider to blanket the end of (3)? fixed
01:28:665 (2) - make this a curved slider. not only it'll start the flowy pattern, but it'll blanket the end of (4). fixed
01:30:632 (1) - same as above, but once that curved slider is hit, the flow is gone because of that straight slider. fixed
01:33:255 (1) - add a finish here. you did it on easy so why don't you do it here? this is my fault sorry. but I don't have a intion of adding finish because it doesn't sound back-music and instrumental.

[Hard]
00:03:747 (2) - same as normal. fixed
00:05:058 (3) - remove this repeat. it doesn't fit with this part at all. I know you mean but this diff is "Hard" so, I think if no back-music
I add some notes.
00:06:370 (6) - same as easy. fixed
00:17:189 (1) - add a finish at the beginning. you did it on easy. fixed
00:34:238 (1) - hmm add a default clap with the finish on the spinner. it should match that sound in the instrumental. fixed
00:42:763 (6) - same as normal. fixed
01:06:861 (3) - remove this note. it's not following anything and it doesn't fit with the slight pause from (2,3). fixed
01:08:501 (5) - add a clap at the repeat arrow. it'll be consistent with the clap pattern from (1).
01:39:484 (3) - same as 00:05:058. no fixed

[Insane]
try AR9? i think it'll flow a lot smoother to the song IMO. with AR8 in effect and with patterns like this, it looks slow and it barely shows any flow. umm, I think AR9 is too high and speedy.
00:12:763 (4) - how about stacking this on the end of (1) to challenge players? it'll make a diamond jump and it should test players on their timing. fixed
00:14:566 (1) - replace this for a 1/2 slider and a circle. i think doing this would look fun for players during gameplay IMO. of course, this long slider is easy for Insane but I don't want to aim too difficult this diff. same below.
00:15:222 (3) - ^
00:19:812 (1) - you can do what i suggested above, or you can come up with something similar to what i said.
00:21:124 (1) - ^
00:21:779 (4) - ^
00:44:730 (3) - maybe a whistle at the repeat arrow to match the vocals?
01:06:861 (6) - space this out and put this between (2,5). it'll make...well...this D:.
01:08:665 (4) - you forgot to add a clap at the beginning. add it to keep the consistency in claps. this is I think no clap better because of un-regular vocal."Chu-Chu" I don't want to add a clap between Chu and Chu
01:16:861 (4) - how about a clap at the end to match the vocals in this part? since (5) has a clap, i think adding it here would give off a nice clap pattern during gameplay. fixed
01:34:566 (5,6) - same as 00:14:566.
01:39:812 (2) - remove this note. it'a not following anything at all. sorry no fixed

I guess that's it. GL

Byakugan249 wrote:

[Hibari's Taiko Oni]
from what i've learned, the CS should be at normal, so increase it by 1.fixed
00:03:583 (1,2,3) - maybe ddk to emphasize that sound in the background music?fixed
00:11:779 (3) - i think a K should be here to represent a new pattern in the song.fixed
00:32:763 (3) - doing ddD is unrankable in taiko diffs because it's near impossible to hit that kind of pattern. replace it for a d, or you can replace it for a K.escape unranked
00:40:796 (1) - add a D to match the cymbals in the song.I don't think so. because of I want raise after.
01:28:665 (5,6,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1) - i dont like this pattern. it looks like the Ds and Ks are placed there for no reason. i feel that a ddkk or a kkdd pattern would flow a lot smoother to the song. if you ignore this, then you can come up with your own pattern, but make it flow to the song. try to do a similar pattern to 01:33:419. that pattern sounds a lot better than this pattern IMO.Changed
01:40:960 (3) - same as 00:32:763.Fixed

I guess that's it. GL

Byakugan249 wrote:

[n y a -'s Taiko Muzukashii]
the AR is way too high for a muzukashii diff. decrease it to the default AR which is 5.
00:24:730 (1,1,2) - i think dkk would sound a lot better as it plays well with the instrumental IMO.
00:29:976 (1,2,1) - ^. you can come up with something else if you don't want the same pattern, but it should flow well with the instrumental.
01:23:419 (2) - how about a k to emphasize the vocals in this. you are following the vocals for this diff after all.
01:36:370 - add a d here? i think it'll be consistent with your previous pattern in the beginning of the song.
01:37:025 - ^
01:37:681 - ^

kajiyatta wrote:

Byakugan249 wrote:

[n y a -'s Taiko Muzukashii]
the AR is way too high for a muzukashii diff. decrease it to the default AR which is 5.
00:24:730 (1,1,2) - i think dkk would sound a lot better as it plays well with the instrumental IMO.
00:29:976 (1,2,1) - ^. you can come up with something else if you don't want the same pattern, but it should flow well with the instrumental.
01:23:419 (2) - how about a k to emphasize the vocals in this. you are following the vocals for this diff after all.
01:36:370 - add a d here? i think it'll be consistent with your previous pattern in the beginning of the song.
01:37:025 - ^
01:37:681 - ^

all fixed
update double taiko diffs

ikari_kyon wrote:

hi, late sorry

[General]

1. Chorus is so moe

yeah :3

[Easy]

1. 00:16:533 (3) - I expected a clap on end of slider, but not that finish, it follows the vocals but Im not so sure about it, I preffer a finish on next 00:17:189 (4) fixed
2. 00:34:730 (1) - I whish you can change that timeline on end of slider to normal soundset with 40%~ volume, it has a nicer effect with the clap of song, considerate it for other diffs :3? ok I'll try that but I like soft-hitsonds so a little added Normal sounds.
3. 00:57:845 (2) - ahm a finish on end? it supports the finish on 00:53:911 (1) - due vocals and also you may like to add some other finishes on 00:59:156 (1), start of 01:00:468 (3) - they are some vocals that fits to finish, plus it has moar concistant between them fixed
4. 01:04:402 (4) - hmm finish on repeat :3? ok
5. 01:33:911 (1) - definitely is not a goo place for the clap, also a rhythm degree on this part is just weird, considerate seriously adding a 1/1 slider on 01:33:583 with a repeat to cover the silence and keep the clap pattern, or dunno maybe you just dont want the clap but Im not sure wich hitsoun fits to this no common white tick another changed

[Normal]

1. 00:12:107 (1,2) - Im not so sure about this connection, red ticks start with vocals but dunno, the vocal is on 1/2 maybe make a longer slider till 00:12:927 or dunno, Im not so inspired right now sorry x.x cant think on a good suggest
2. 00:16:861 (6) - finish as [Easy]? fixed
3. 00:50:632 (6) - finish on repeat, that waaahm or something sounds better with a finish fixed
4. 00:56:533 (1) - partially covered and bad overlaped with previous spinner hitburst, just move a bit to left? ok
5. 01:06:042 (3) - make hit circles instead slider? is weird that the [Easy] has circles on this part it's twice mentioned. so changed.

[Hard]

1. 01:00:796 (3) - move the tail down? the flow with previous and next slider looks weird fixed
2. 01:06:042 (1,2) - again weird that this be just slider and easiest diffs has circles fixed
3. 01:08:501 (5) - missing clap on repeat :3? fixed
4. 01:28:665 (4,5,6) - not perfect stack on end of sliders >< fixed?

[Insane]

1. 00:01:452 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - hard has a more fluid rhythm on this part, again a bit weird that you use less notes on hardest diff I like this placement so not changed.
2. 01:08:665 (4) - clap on start o.o? fixed

aaand Id love if you use the normal soundset sometimes >< but I though you like the soft soundset [color=#408000]just a little added. I'm suck of adding hit sound

star for awesome pro taiko oni /o/

KonataN wrote:

Hi, m4m

[General]

looks fine!
Since I don't have that much expirience (and you got waaaaay more modding as I usually accept) my mod is maybe not helpful.　not negative.
it's helpful because I'm noob mapper :p

[Easy]

00:56:533 (1) - this appears to fast after the spinner. It's places next to the middle, what is hard to hit for beginner. make spinner shortly.

[Normal]

00:50:304 (5,6) - maybe on y:160 like 00:49:648 (3) - ? fixed
01:38:992 (1,2,3,4) - a normal square does not fit your awesome-cute mapping. I'd at least rotate it a bit fixed

[Hard]

00:55:878 (2) - if you put the last sliderpoint on x:44 y:228 the slider is in perfect -45° style fixed
00:56:206 (3) - I'd recommend putting this one one tiny grid to the right, so its not that close to (2) and looks more like the difference between (1) and (2) maybe fixed
01:41:615 (2) - put this ony maybe one tiny grid down?another fixed

[Insane]

00:50:304 (5) - put higher that it comes from the direction of (4)? no fixed


Sorry thats all I can find.
Anyways, have 2 stars~

terametis wrote:

こんばんわ!

[Easy]
01:01:779 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - <333333333333

awesome!!!!! ;3

[Normal]
00:13:911 (4,1,2,3,4) - 00:13:911 (4)から(1)への流れと(1)~(4)への流れがあっていないと思います。　こんなかんじはどうでしょうか!

SPOILER

fixed
00:27:681 (1,2) - (3)のスライダーの動きにあわせてこんなかんじは!!

SPOILER

fixed

[Hard]
00:06:042 (5,6) - (6)から00:06:697 (1)への流れが少し悪く感じるので、こんなかんじにしてみてはどうでしょうか。

SPOILER

fixed
00:06:042 (5) - 00:03:419でNCを付けてるので、ここにもNCをつけてみてはどうでしょうか。 fixed
00:56:533 (1) - 適当に配置にしてこんな音取りはどうでしょうか

SPOILER

迷いましたがfixed
01:15:878 (3,4) - 少し流れが悪いとおもうので、DSを気にしないのであればこんなかんじはどうでしょうか

SPOILER

fixed
[Insane]
awesome map :33

素晴らしいmapだとおもいます!!!!!!!!
Ranked期待してます!!!!!!!!!!

-[NYAN]- wrote:

:arrow: Easy

00:06:042 (3,4) - if your sound effect have like"pa pa" sounds,it will be perfect!
http://puu.sh/18MxL like this sound effect soiunds good, but I like normal-whistle in it. sorry><
00:27:681 (1) - slider's node? adjust it fixed?
00:53:911 (1) - in easy diff,this slider near the previous slider is too close fixed
01:33:583 (1) - i think this slider can Symmetric 01:34:566 (2) - ← this slider oh yes.



Normal

00:01:452 (1) - 00:02:435 (2) - i think this two places use system normal finish is better. fixed?
00:06:042 (3,4) - if your sound effect have like"pa pa" sounds,it will be perfect!
00:20:796 (2) - i think this queue is better another fixed

SPOILER

01:40:468 (4) - this reentry can remove,and add a note instead. no fixed because this rythem fits better.



Hard

00:01:452 (1) - & 00:02:435 (3) - i think this slider's reentry not fit this music umm, if others say it, I'll fix it.
00:06:042 (5,6) - 00:06:042 (3,4) - if your sound effect have like"pa pa" sounds,it will be perfect!

Insane

00:03:419 (1) - slider's reentry? fixed
00:12:927 (5) - NC I usually put NC at Long white line so no fixed.
00:13:255 (1) - remove NC ^

beatmap & music is GOOD!
i love it
kd,GO!!
hope to rank this map quickly!

1. Muzukashii diff is way too difficult, this reachs oni level already. I would suggest rename 'n y a -'s Taiko Muzukashii' to 'n y a -'s Taiko Oni' and 'Hibari's Taiko Oni' to 'Hibari's Taiko Inner Oni'. You don't need to worry about it is unrankable because this map was submitted before the announcement.

1. 00:05:550 (1) - Please change this to big don for consistency since you have put a big note on every (first) accents in this part.
2. 00:08:173 (2) - Change this to big kat? The reason is same as above.
3. 00:22:271 - How about adding a note here? (You could add a kat here after change.)
4. 00:33:255 (1,2) - I would say changing it to big kat would be nice!
5. Well made difficulty!

1. 00:27:435 (1) - I would change this to kat because of high pitch.
2. 00:32:927 (1,2,3,4) - Probably remove the big notes here? Because the consecutive finishs don't sound a cool effect here. This is my personally taste only, feel free to ignore it.
3. 00:45:714 (1,2,3,4,1) - This is too confusing! Due to the SV change, players may can't recognize the kat is 1/2 or 1/4, or player may think that the last note of the stream is a don. Thus, changing it is highly suggested.
   
   Check it here!

   
4. 01:12:271 (3) - kat here?
5. 01:40:468 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1) - I don't think a stream is really needed here because there are no drum sound to support the stream. Only put a triplet at 01:40:632 - is good enough.

wantuole wrote:

:) from my queue
may be it's M4M~
edit bug, I can't see Artist. in txt, I see "nao"， write it "Nao"
[General]
Del BG3, it's not used fixed
[Easy]
00:29:648 (3) - fixed

SPOILER

00:37:845 (3) - x:336 y:324 fixed
[Normal]
fine~
01:44:074 (1) - remove NC or mark it easily find,play FL is hardly find this all diff has NC at this point, so no fixed.
[hard]
clean and hardly mod this
00:11:288 (3) - ctrl+g I put it with small jump.
[insane]
00:01:452 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ? Early high jump is not good for start some say this opinion, but others mention good. and I like this pattern, so no fixed sorry.
00:06:042 (1,2,3,4) - Direction,Clockwise I put it with DS

SPOILER

00:12:435 (2,3) - ctrl+g fixed
00:16:533 (6) - this place this jump doesn't seem good I suppose.

SPOILER

00:37:025 (5,6,7) - ^ you do too straight line nice flow. fixed.

SPOILER

00:52:927 (1) - end cover 3 is butter fixed

SPOILER

01:26:370 (4,5,6) - nice! fixed

SPOILER

01:37:845 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - x:284,y:104,this where play will be near middlefixed,full overlapcircles would offset

that's all good luck and star

kanpakyin wrote:

Taiko mod here:

[General]

1. Muzukashii diff is way too difficult, this reachs oni level already. I would suggest rename 'n y a -'s Taiko Muzukashii' to 'n y a -'s Taiko Oni' and 'Hibari's Taiko Oni' to 'Hibari's Taiko Inner Oni'. You don't need to worry about it is unrankable because this map was submitted before the announcement.

I rename "Hibari's Taiko Tatsujin"

[Hibari's Taiko Oni]

1. 00:27:435 (1) - I would change this to kat because of high pitch.ok
2. 00:32:927 (1,2,3,4) - Probably remove the big notes here? Because the consecutive finishs don't sound a cool effect here. This is my personally taste only, feel free to ignore it.Sorry no fixed
3. 00:45:714 (1,2,3,4,1) - This is too confusing! Due to the SV change, players may can't recognize the kat is 1/2 or 1/4, or player may think that the last note of the stream is a don. Thus, changing it is highly suggested.
   
   Check it here!

   
   Sorry, I couldn't find it.
4. 01:12:271 (3) - kat here?thx
5. 01:40:468 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1) - I don't think a stream is really needed here because there are no drum sound to support the stream. Only put a triplet at 01:40:632 - is good enough.

ok

kanpakyin wrote:

Taiko mod here:

[General]

1. Muzukashii diff is way too difficult, this reachs oni level already. I would suggest rename 'n y a -'s Taiko Muzukashii' to 'n y a -'s Taiko Oni' and 'Hibari's Taiko Oni' to 'Hibari's Taiko Inner Oni'. You don't need to worry about it is unrankable because this map was submitted before the announcement.

[n y a -'s Taiko Muzukashii]

1. 00:05:550 (1) - Please change this to big don for consistency since you have put a big note on every (first) accents in this part. done
2. 00:08:173 (2) - Change this to big kat? The reason is same as above. sorry no, since the pitch got lower D:
3. 00:22:271 - How about adding a note here? (You could add a kat here after change.) oh done~
4. 00:33:255 (1,2) - I would say changing it to big kat would be nice! done ^o^
5. Well made difficulty! thank you /___\

hibarirailwayz wrote:

Thanks for modding me!
Update

mintong89 wrote:

hibarirailwayz wrote:

Thanks for modding me!
Update

umm....modding you?

Taiko mod Request~

d = don
k = kat
D = BIG DON
K = BIG KAT
re = remove

[Moe Nya's Taiko]
tennya is not moe >3<
00:01:464 - maybe change like K K - D D - K K - D D
00:04:086 - ^ same
00:06:709 - ^ same
01:38:513 - ^ same no change sorry, it'll be the same as hibari-san's diff ;w; I want to make differences in here
01:41:136 - D K - D D - D D - D K done
00:41:463 - k done :3

i just can found this...

mintong89 wrote:

hibarirailwayz wrote:

Thanks for modding me!
Update

umm....modding you?

Taiko mod Request~

d = don
k = kat
D = BIG DON
K = BIG KAT
re = remove

[Hibari-san Taiko]
00:32:939 - no mix 1/4 hitcircle with big Don, seriously. maybe remove this: 00:32:857 - This have no problem, I think.
01:38:431 - ^same ok

i just can found this...

Melophobia wrote:

from sp3's queue

[General]
Hibari's Taiko Tatsujin has wrong previewtime
"Inner Oni" is more common for Taiko diffs which harder than Oni, Why not?
Video is too long compared with mp3 file, you'd better to cut down useless part to reduce size of video　all fixed excluding taiko name.

[n y a -'s Taiko Oni]
00:01:464 - change the sampleset to N fixed

[Insane]
00:02:119 (4,6,8) - Since (2) has clap, you need to add it to these notes i guess fixed
00:06:709 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - ^ ^
00:06:054 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe move them downward a bit to avoid overlapping? fixed
ttp://osu.ppy.sh/ss/469889
00:35:562 (1) - Finishfixed
00:43:103 (9) - Consider adding clap or finish(or something else you want) this point should be more emphasized and whistle isnt enough. added finish
01:06:873 (6) - This jump is not confortable to me, because (4,5,6) are placed straightly. i would suggest removing this note hmm... ok.
01:09:168 - As you can see there's an extra percussion here, so clap would sound nice nice!
01:11:791 - ^ ^
01:14:414 - ^ ^
01:19:660 (8) - ^ ^
01:22:283 - ^ ^

[Hard]
00:33:267 (2,3) - Hard to read this anti-jump here because of the previous jump fixed.
spacing between (1) and (2) is big (2.0x) but (2) and (3) is smaller, i thought (2,3) was jump at first play
the solution would be to space (2,3) at 2.0x as well i think
01:06:873 (6,1) - expected a jump here too, why did you stack them? ok, fixed.
01:11:791 - for the same reason as Insane, add clap here fixed
01:19:660 - ^ ^
01:28:677 (4,5,6) - better to make slider shapes neater maybe fixed.
01:44:086 (1) - would suggest spacing this note out because considering this rhythm stacking may be confusing even for hard diffs sorry I don't follow this suggestion because this changeing rythem would be expected if the man plays at first I suppose, non expect harder... just imo.

[Normal]
00:34:742 - Better to use soft sampleset here, because there's not background music here fixed
00:56:545 (1) - The following notes appear too suddenly considering the level of this difficulty. fixed
01:21:136 (4) - The end of this sldier is overlapped by previous note, maybe you can change the angle to avoid it fixed

[Easy]
00:20:480 (1,2,3) - looks too crowded to me. i would suggest placing them like this fixed
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/470300
00:34:742 - Same as Normal fixed
00:56:545 (1) - too soon after a spinner for the easiest diff fixed
指摘はしませんでしたが最低難易度にしては1.5rhythmが多くてやや難しめです　後ろに当たるNoteをSliderに変えるだけでもだいぶ易しくなるので次回は留意しておいて下さい はい

That's all I guess. Dont feel like giving this bubble or something for now because I think this map can be still improved a lot. But I saw some potential here And I would like to give you a chance because you're newbie. Anyway find more mods and call me back for a recheck when both you and mapset itself are ready. I will see if it deserves bubble, or not :3
all you saying supports my mapset. ok, I'll gather some mods and someday, I'll ask you for rechecking. thanks for modding.

intoon wrote:

[Normal]

00:34:742 (1,2) - stack each other? fixed

[Hard]

00:03:431 (1,2) - change one slider? this back instrumental hears strong, so I think notes better.
00:12:283 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - frankly speaking, a bit boring..... even if this diff is hard diff. a bit changed
00:41:300 (2) - delete it? fixed
00:51:300 (1) - another fixed
01:18:677 (4,5) - another fixed
01:21:627 (6,7) - fixed

[Insane]

00:08:677 (7) - remove NC non, this is an regular pattern exists.
00:21:054 (5,8) - hmm.... remove notes? fixed
00:44:742 (7,8) -what i think something during listen this part.... another fixed.
00:49:988 (4,5) - also, no fixed still be good I guess.
01:06:054 (1,2,3,4,5) - if i am you, i use accelerated something here.... yeah, but I don't come up idea what to put.
01:21:300 (4) - use 1/2 slider?

Saten wrote:

chuchu

[General]
Ask a BAT to change the title text appearence to 00:22:447 - (22447) ? when a BAT checks my map, I'll ask of changing title appearence.
Why do you have letterbox removed when the video is 16:9? oops, I forget it because recently I have changed the video.

[Insane]
AR 9 fits better, more fun imo hmm... I like AR8 and no one said this suggetion. so now no fixed but if others like XAT says this, I'll fix.
00:04:086 (1,2,3,4) - This kinda ruins the flow imo hmm... sorry no changed. I don't come up another idea...
00:11:463 (7,8) - clap on (7) instead another fixed.
00:16:545 (6,1) - move (1) higher up so it doesn't touch (6). You'd probably want to increase the average spacing on 00:17:037 (7,8,1) - then fixed
01:14:250 (7) - I'd remove the repeat and att a 2,0x jump instead

SPOILER

fixed.
01:25:398 (1) - finish on head fixed
01:31:463 (2,3,4) - I'd prefer a jumpy pattern here~ (or more spaced notes) yeah, but still no fixed now.

[Hard]
00:35:562 (1) - finish fixed
00:45:398 (5) - clap on end same as Easy
01:04:086 (6,7,1) - NC on (6) instead? looks better imo your suggestion is right, but I consistently put NC per 8 beats. (of course looks a bit bad, so I changed it in Normal for newbie)
01:16:873 (7,1) - kinda evil, don't you think? what? I don't think so lol.
01:22:611 (8,1) - NC on (8) same as above.
01:38:349 (8,1) - ^ ^

[Normal]
AR+1? I find it best for Normal diffs fixed.
00:32:939 (1,2) - somewhat confusing, but I guess it works out hmm, no problem imo but others mention that I'll change.
00:35:562 (1) - finish fixed
00:42:775 (4) - clap on tail same as Easy
00:45:398 (3) - ^ another fixed.
00:48:349 (4,1) - NC on (4) instead ok.
01:11:955 (4,1) - ^ ^
01:14:578 (4,1) - ^ ^
00:42:283 - what does this timing section do? to be silence at the slider tick.

[Easy]
00:35:562 (1) - finish in head fixed
00:43:103 (4) - add clap I suppose only finish hears good.
00:44:578 (2) - whistle on tail ok.
00:45:726 (4) - clap sorry no changed.


nice mapset owo
Good luck

Andrea wrote:

Cute map and song :3

Ranked~