1. Easy (1 stars, 92 notes)
2. Hard (4.16 stars, 210 notes)
3. Insane (4.68 stars, 279 notes)
4. Normal (3.59 stars, 167 notes)

ssssssssssssssss wrote:

不管怎样先枪沙发再说0.0



Edit：
offset应该是892，bpm还Ok fix
overall difficulty调到6？ 最後用7
00:15:051 (12,2) - 感觉像这样时间距离比较大的就不要重叠了…有点迷惑性，一般重叠都是些时间距离较小的 fix
00:18:116 (1) - 间距过小0..0 fix
00:20:051 - 到00:21:180 - 既然你后面也做了很不错的intro音效，这里也可以做做~fix

第一个break往后你用了24clap来做音效，但是我觉得还可以多跟随下乐曲本身的音效，比如说最开始的一段 等等再去聽聽
00:43:761 - 这里下clap,音量调到25左右
00:48:438 - 这里clap fix
00:58:761 - 这里clap fix
你试试听下大概的效果应该就明白了，后面也可以按照这个趋势下。如果你觉得这样不错但是不清楚接着怎么下的话来问我 fix 後面應該都ok了

00:55:374 (5) - 这种折返滑条打起来手感不是太好，拆开后更有节奏感。如果你坚持用的话，我觉得结束点放在00:56:019 - ，正好跟随人声会比较好 fix
01:01:180 (6,1,2,3) - 好音效
01:35:374 (10) - 和前面隔了半拍的话可以拉开点距离嘛，重叠太不善良了0.0 那裏沒地方擺了所以沒改
01:35:535 (11,12,13,14,15) - 好音效
01:55:051 (7,8,9,10,11) - 这一段intro往后放放比较好，大概在01:55:938 -
01:56:019 - 这处应该有个finish fix 感覺那連打變好長

还有一点，nc最好放在长白线上，比如说00:15:373 (1) - 这里应该取消nc，放到00:16:341 (3) - ，00:46:347 (1) - 这里也应该取消，00:47:310 (4) - 这里设置。像00:05:697 (1) - 00:08:277 (1) - 这样的在一句开头的NC不错可以不改，00:52:148 (1,2,3) - 像这样的放在哪大概都不是太影响 fix
另外，像00:06:053 (3) - 这样的滑条最好也拉得对称一点比较好看，这里面这样的滑条好像还挺多……我好像是故意的


给~星~ki~ra~ki~ra~ 謝謝w
（呃…是不是卖萌卖得有点恶…

sunshy wrote:

General
[*]
·song setup→audio→music track +1 or +2 fix
·BPM不变，offset延迟下，16S GJ fix
·OD太高 尽量别比AR高... fix
·preview point 没设定 這啥? (被打
·MP3码率320是不允许的 限定192以下 会压吧 不介意的话我压了个→http://puu.sh/OxXc
·BG尺寸要求是1024x768或800x600哦

·

【如果map的部分不到歌曲的80%则必须用软件切歌。】
不计前奏部分。如果你只做歌曲的一部分，使用完整mp3会浪费空间。使用许多mp3编辑软件可以轻易地切歌，例如这个(http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=56&t=34303)。然而如果你有的合理的原因(比如歌曲结束后的Storyboard)，你就可以忽略此限制。

RANK规定中有一条对map长度有限制，注意下。[/color] 所以是甚麼?



HARD
[*]
·00:03:795 (9) - 这里三折滑条的话后面miku的长音就空下了 這裡我沒動，因為結束的時候感覺很怪
可以拆一下↓（只是举例而已，长音空着不太好，不一定加长滑条，可以先随便画一个试试

·00:06:987 (4) - 修下间距 可以统一一下，和00:03:116 (6,7,8) 相同也行 或者和后面的00:50:408 (11,12) 一样
·00:08:633 (2,3,4) - 这种形状不修一下吗? 以上全fix

·00:18:150 (1,2) - 虽说是押歌词没错...但是蓝线起手 对于第一次听的会反应不过来... 尝试改成↓试试 沒改，就照個圈圈打吧w

·00:18:761 (3,4,5) -修一下形状... fix
·00:54:601 (1,2,3,4) - 这里歌曲很平缓不适合放连打 故~意~的~
·00:55:408 (5) - 拆开 16s 已改
·01:10:408 (4,5) - 修形.. fix
·01:12:504 (10) - 这里不做做配神音效的长连打吗 有啊? O_O
·01:24:762 (6) - 把note6放在note4的位置上会有趣些 fix
·01:36:375 (1) - 间距...和前面连打挨上0.0 不过不改应该也行 fix
·01:36:375 (1) - 插个绿线放烟花xD fix
·01:59:924 (9) - 这个可不可以扭的漂亮些ww fix

后面做的很好www
这种慢歌要的就是打得舒服ww

我再看看

sunshy wrote:

喔

文件夹里有多余的Hatsuni Miku - Crack (tine30sakura).osb，删掉它

我可以吐槽这个错字吗ww

ssssssssssssssss wrote:

sunshy wrote:

喔

文件夹里有多余的Hatsuni Miku - Crack (tine30sakura).osb，删掉它

我可以吐槽这个错字吗ww

这个貌似是SB文件?他做了SB所以这个应该是必须的

ssssssssssssssss wrote:

normal mod

所有难度的preview time应该是相同的，现在你的两个不同0.0 一樣了嗎? 我不知道要怎麼改...
normal里最好别跳？在file 里开aimod,试着检查所有的spacing里的问题 有問題的全改了


00:09:117 - 这里加个圈？因为你在这一句都用了比较紧凑的节奏所以这样做比较连贯 fix
00:52:182 - 这里的圈可以删除，因为这是Miku一句歌词结束换气的时候，通常也是整个乐曲有停滞感的时候，所以给玩家一个休息会比较好 fix 你沒講我都沒發現
00:54:117 - 这边的长长滑条改到00:55:730 - 比较好，前面几拍我还是推荐用比较平稳的节奏 fix
00:57:666 - 像这里就可以加个一拍的长滑条 fix
01:01:859 - 同52秒处 fix
02:03:150 - 这里也考虑用个长滑条？ fix

聊天记录里的我就不贴了…反正你也知道了…=w=

1. 只有一半的话切下mp3

1. 00:09:924 (6) - 有点弧度w http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/393899
2. 01:10:408 (4) - 往右一格
3. 00:57:666 (4) - 这样比较好看 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/393903
4. 01:00:246 (4) - 中间空间大点 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/393904
5. 01:03:150 (4) - 对称w http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/393909
6. 01:11:537 (7) - 这里节奏这样的 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/393890
7. 01:20:730 - add note
8. 01:29:601 (6) - 中间的slider point往里一格
9. 01:36:375 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/393913
10. 01:45:408 (5) - 上面那部分柔和一点
11. 01:57:666 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/393914
12. OD>AR自重._.

1. 看着还行, 不过和hard差别不大啊, 建议再做简单点2diff算了 三连好多我觉得没必要。。。

384059043 wrote:

0v0第五次mod图。。如果不好的话还是无视了吧
上面众人说过的问题就不重复了0v0 恩恩

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[Hard]
02:00:892 (1) - 这个stream容易让人以为是1/8。。间距从0.3x调到0.5x吧 fix

01:00:730 - 这里加一个hitcircle怎么样._. fix

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[Normal]

这个normal有些偏难..

00:09:117 - 00:09:924 这一段对音有点问题._. fix 不過好像還是怪怪?
01:55:085 对normal来说有点难了。。（标一个normal+也好wwwwwwwwwww） fix

另外，这个是normal难度吧。。那么stack最好少一点。。不然会太难的（标一个normal+也好wwwww）
觉得这些重叠有点不适合normal难度，适当挑几个调整一下位置，当然也可以留三四个stack让这个难度好玩一些
00:15:085 (3) 、 00:44:762 (7) 、 00:50:892 (8) 、 01:04:440 (6) 、 01:06:053 (3) 、 01:23:150 (1,2,3,4,5) 、 01:27:988 (8) 、 01:29:601 (3) 、 01:47:021 (1)、 01:53:795 (6) 都改了，除了01:47:021 (1)，因為那我好喜歡 (?)
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ps.我比较喜欢这个地方wwwwww 01:59:279 (6) 謝謝
但是 01:23:150 (1,2,3,4,5) 这个用在hard里是很好的梗，在normal里却有点过头了 fix

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[General]
有hitcircle.png和hitcircleoverlay.png但是缺少approachcircle.png。。

引用http://osu.ppy.sh/?p=faq&l=cn#：“如果您要使用自制的皮肤，请确保您制作了全部的元素。”

如果想使用默认的approachcircle.png的话，直接从默认皮肤里copy过来。。但是hitcircle的三个元件必须成套出现。。不然是unrankable的._.

我把这个文件放在百度网盘上了，单击此处下载该文件

載了，fix 謝謝

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BG好美。。wwwwwwwwwwwwwww

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

hi www


General

1. 只有一半的话切下mp3

已full submission更正

Hard

1. 00:09:924 (6) - 有点弧度w http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/393899 fix
2. 01:10:408 (4) - 往右一格 fix
3. 00:57:666 (4) - 这样比较好看 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/393903 fix
4. 01:00:246 (4) - 中间空间大点 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/393904 fix
5. 01:03:150 (4) - 对称w http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/393909 fix 但是間距大丈夫0.0 ?
6. 01:11:537 (7) - 这里节奏这样的 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/393890 fix 音效不變
7. 01:20:730 - add note fix
8. 01:29:601 (6) - 中间的slider point往里一格 fix 好厲害 0.0
9. 01:36:375 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/393913 fix
10. 01:45:408 (5) - 上面那部分柔和一点 fix
11. 01:57:666 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/393914 fix
12. OD>AR自重._.

已修正ww

Normal

1. 看着还行, 不过和hard差别不大啊, 建议再做简单点2diff算了 三连好多我觉得没必要。。。

因為想把節奏保留

嗯就这样吧, 最近天赋mapper好多233

Good luck~

tine30sakura wrote:

讓新手房玩的結果:

SPOILER

ssssssssssssssss wrote:

tine30sakura wrote:

讓新手房玩的結果:

SPOILER

晒第一可耻XD

1. Resnap some green timing point.
2. 00:08:633 (2) - move 1 grid right because the spacing is close a bit.
3. 00:42:182 (2) - add finish at the beginning?
4. 00:44:762 (8) - new combo
5. 00:49:924 (7) - ^
6. 00:52:504 (3) - add finish at the beginning?
7. 00:54:601 (1) - remove this? This note doesn't fit the music imo.
8. 00:55:730 (6) - touches with HP bar. I suggest to move another place.
9. 00:58:956 (7) - change to the silder like this↓?
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:02:504 (3) - add finish at the end
11. 01:15:730 (6) - looks ugly. You can make cleaner this?
12. 01:20:730 (11) - remove this and start a spinner here.
13. 01:25:408 (2) - move 1 grid up
14. 01:27:666 (1,2,3) - move 2 grid up due to spacing
15. 01:36:375 (1) - move 3 grid up and 1 grid right
16. 02:00:892 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Umm, looks very ugly... try to make another pattern?
17. 02:10:246 - a spinner should be end here

ssssssssssssssss wrote:

这条别给Kd了，一张图换三个KD总觉得太奢侈了…

這個難度直接就normal了，我重做easy...
preview time 和normal hard 不一样
AR-1？
00:03:472 (6) - 最好不要给新手这样的折返次数障碍fix
00:57:666 (6) - 这个滑条的评分遮挡了00:59:279 (1) - ，会对新手造成读图障碍，既然是easy咱就善良点嘛~
同样的地方还有01:02:827 (2,4,1) - fix

01:17:343 (3,5) - 这个地方的回折也不够善良！另外我建议把这两个滑条换成另外形状，类似http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/394477 fix
02:00:892 (2) - 像这样让三个Note的弧线更圆润些？http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/394480 fix

easy真没啥好Mod的，难度越简单出错的概率越少 I got it
good luck

banvi wrote:

Hello. modreq from forum-PM.

Red: You must fix it or it's Unrankable stuff.
Blue: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Black: Just suggestion

[General]
This map needs less than ☆3 diff. Try to make more easily the easy diff.
remove "s" of vocaloids in the tag.
lrc20.png and lrc30.png are unused. Remove them.

all fix Thank you!!

Inconsistency in PreviewTime:
Easy : 84924
Hard : 124762
Normal : 124762

Kiai Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
Easy :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:26:053, ends on 02:07:070

Hard :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:26:053, ends on 01:35:246
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:36:375, ends on 02:07:070

Normal:
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:26:053, ends on 01:35:246
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:36:375, ends on 02:07:070

all check and fix Thank you!!

[Easy]
This is not an easy diff... I think this is a normal diff.
SV is too high. I suggest 0.8~1.0 in easy diff.
Resnap some green timing point.

I will remake a Easy diff, and this will save as Normal diff...

Try to make more easily the easy diff. For example...
Avoid to place on the red tick.
00:05:730 (1) - Avoid to use a slider like this.

ok

[Normal]
Umm, I think this is a hard diff.
SV is too high. I suggest 1.4.
Resnap some green timing point.

Try to make more easily. For example...
Avoid to place on the blue tick.
Avoid to use stream like 01:15:408 (4,5,6)

I save this diff as Normal+


[Hard]

1. Resnap some green timing point. fix
2. 00:08:633 (2) - move 1 grid right because the spacing is close a bit. fix
3. 00:42:182 (2) - add finish at the beginning? fix
4. 00:44:762 (8) - new combo fix
5. 00:49:924 (7) - ^ fix
6. 00:52:504 (3) - add finish at the beginning? I didn't add, the finish sounds too frequent
7. 00:54:601 (1) - remove this? This note doesn't fit the music imo. fix
8. 00:55:730 (6) - touches with HP bar. I suggest to move another place. fix
9. 00:58:956 (7) - change to the silder like this↓? fix
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:02:504 (3) - add finish at the end fix
11. 01:15:730 (6) - looks ugly. You can make cleaner this? fix
12. 01:20:730 (11) - remove this and start a spinner here. fix
13. 01:25:408 (2) - move 1 grid up fix
14. 01:27:666 (1,2,3) - move 2 grid up due to spacing fix
15. 01:36:375 (1) - move 3 grid up and 1 grid right fix (very painstaking )
16. 02:00:892 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Umm, looks very ugly... try to make another pattern? fix xDD
17. 02:10:246 - a spinner should be end here

fix

Umm, this map needs more work. Particularly, you should remake easy and normal diff. :< I think so...
But I can't advice anymore. Sorry... no no , your suggestions are very constructive!!
If you don’t know how to make these, look at the easy and normal diff of the recently ranked map, and you will know and learn (I think...)
And I hope you can try to make things look pretty in every diff. ok xDDDDD

Btw, I like this song <3 Good luck with your mapping.

• 
  "re" 意思是 "remove"
  黑色 只是建議,不喜歡可以略過~OAO
  藍色 是要討論的問題
  紅色 是unrankable

[general]

1. letter box 或許可以取消打勾
2. 咱看不出來bookmark的功用...OTZ
3. 嘛~ 慢歌用1.5x的加速感覺有點違和 ~(個人感覺)

[Easy]

1. 無用的綠線:
   01:05:569 -
   
   
2. 00:57:666 (6) - NC 因為00:47:343 (1) - 這NC了
3. 01:11:859 (4,1) - 間距~
4. 01:27:988 (3,4) - ^

[Normal]

1. 嘛~ 建議統一間距 ~不要一下1.2x , 一下1.3x 或是1.1x ~ , 不過好像因為黏在一起似乎沒差 OAO
   
   
2. 00:10:892 (1) - 間距~
3. 01:15:730 (5,6) - ^
4. 01:27:666 (6) - NC
5. 01:35:408 (5,1) - 交換NC然後01:36:375 (3) - NC

[Normal+]

1. 01:12:827 - 這裡開始 請好好檢查 www
   
   
2. 00:46:375 (10) - NC 因為00:56:698 (1) -
3. 00:57:666 (4,1) - 交換NC
4. 01:02:182 (1,2) - ^
5. 01:07:988 (8,1) - ^
6. 01:26:053 (4) - kiai time的開始咱建議NC

[Hard]

1. 00:14:117 (2) - 結尾加個whistle?
2. 00:55:085 (9) - NC 因為00:44:762 (1) -
3. 01:07:988 (7,1) - 交換NC 然後01:11:698 (8) - NC
4. 01:26:053 (4) - kiai time的開始咱建議NC
5. 01:38:633 (7) - NC

ssssssssssssssss wrote:

别给kudosu了w

00:42:182 (2,3) - 弄得圆滑点 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/396171 fix
01:00:246 (8) - 触到右上角的信息了，最好不要这样http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/396174 fix
01:16:375 (3,4,5,6,7) - 这组做成这样我觉得比较好http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/396175，这图的其他地方也看看能不能用这种圆滑排列？我个人比较倾向于这个 fix
01:23:472 (2) - 原曲这里有很强的鼓点，我建议拆成圈来增强打击感 沒改，雖然鼓點很強但是節奏不好抓。

01:54:440 (3) - 和01:00:246 (8) - 一样，不过这个比较安全，所以不改也没啥…
02:01:537 (6) - 往右移一格？这样456的间距就都一样了 fix
02:10:246 - 如果你是想消掉转盘最后的那个音的话我建议直接把绿线插到02:10:569 - ，现在这样插的话会把转盘最后的嗡嗡音也一起消掉=w= fix

总之排列方面再改进点？滑条前后的note最好接着滑条的弧度摆，或者放到滑条中心比如这样：（只是顺手用你的图举了个例子，不是建议你在这用这个排列w）http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/396188
排列沒多大變動，因為有sb所以排列不想再改太麻煩。


其实我觉得@sunshy排列做得很好，问问他的经验？

l1106188 wrote:

早灣 >w<
Request from Crystal.

• 
  "re" 意思是 "remove"
  黑色 只是建議,不喜歡可以略過~OAO
  藍色 是要討論的問題
  紅色 是unrankable

[general]

1. letter box 或許可以取消打勾 fix (這是做甚麼的= =)
2. 咱看不出來bookmark的功用...OTZ fix??? 不知道在哪按到?
3. 嘛~ 慢歌用1.5x的加速感覺有點違和 ~(個人感覺)

[Easy]

1. 無用的綠線:
   01:05:569 - fix
   
2. 00:57:666 (6) - NC 因為00:47:343 (1) - 這NC了 fix
3. 01:11:859 (4,1) - 間距~ fix
4. 01:27:988 (3,4) - ^

fix

[Normal]

1. 嘛~ 建議統一間距 ~不要一下1.2x , 一下1.3x 或是1.1x ~ , 不過好像因為黏在一起似乎沒差 OAO
   
   
2. 00:10:892 (1) - 間距~ fix
3. 01:15:730 (5,6) - ^ fix
4. 01:27:666 (6) - NC fix
5. 01:35:408 (5,1) - 交換NC然後01:36:375 (3) - NC

fix

[Normal+]

1. 01:12:827 - 這裡開始 請好好檢查 www fix sorry!!!!QAQ
   
   
2. 00:46:375 (10) - NC 因為00:56:698 (1) - fix
3. 00:57:666 (4,1) - 交換NC fix
4. 01:02:182 (1,2) - ^ fix
5. 01:07:988 (8,1) - ^ fix
6. 01:26:053 (4) - kiai time的開始咱建議NC

fix

[Hard]

1. 00:14:117 (2) - 結尾加個whistle? fix
2. 00:55:085 (9) - NC 因為00:44:762 (1) - fix
3. 01:07:988 (7,1) - 交換NC 然後01:11:698 (8) - NC fix
4. 01:26:053 (4) - kiai time的開始咱建議NC fix
5. 01:38:633 (7) - NC

fix

good song & good luck ~
就這些了~
加油~~

TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:

From BakaHuang & TTTTTTTTTTTT's modding queue

Hi~

PreviewTime is inconsistency fix
Tags are inconsistency fix
Skin files lack a reversearrow.png fix

[Easy]

01:18:956 - 这串好长，建议这里加个NC fix
kiai停在02:07:343 fix

[Normal]

00:08:311 - remove 了 sliderwhistle fix
00:24:279 - 这个绿线是没用的 fix
00:59:279 - spacing error fix
01:02:827 - （2）（3）（1）这三个最好用等距，即使是缩短距离的话，这样看起来会更好，而且打起来也更直观 fix
第一kiai停在01:35:085？
kiai停在02:07:343 fix

[Normal+]

00:24:279 - 这个绿线是没用的 fix
第一kiai停在01:35:085？ fix
kiai停在02:07:343 fix

[Hard]

fine

这个的kiai不相同，而且我觉得这里是疏忽造成的。。因为其余都一样的。
kiai停在02:07:343 fix

good luck..

edit:做好的图。。咋传到w.i.p

謝謝...沒注意到

1. Inconsistency in PreviewTime:
   Easy : 84924
   Hard : 124762
   Normal+ : 124762
   Normal : 84924

1. Set letterbox during breaks as with other diffs.
2. Remove whistle at some slider's body.(00:00:892 (2) . 00:11:214 (2)..etc) They sound noisy imo :<
3. 00:23:311 - move this timing point to 00:24:117
4. 01:08:633 (1,2,3,4) - How about changing to this rhythm? It sounds better for me.
   
5. 01:20:892 (2) - replace a slider?
   
6. 01:35:246 - move this timing point to 01:35:085 as with other diffs.
7. 01:36:375 - start kiai time here as with other diffs
8. 01:54:440 (3,4) - How about changing to this? It sounds better for me.
   
9. 02:07:988 - move this timing point to 02:10:569
10. 02:09:924 - Set the volume to 20%?

1. Ummmmm, SV is the same as in the [Easy]. It's not good, so I recommend to change to SV1.2 *_*;
2. 00:23:311 - move this timing point to 00:24:117
3. 00:42:182 (2) - add finish at the beginning
4. 00:50:891 (6) - remove one repeat. because it doesn't follow the music.
5. 00:52:182 (1) - add finish at the end
6. 01:13:795 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The spacing is not good... please fix >_<
7. 01:44:762 - add a note?
8. 02:09:924 - Set the volume to 20%?
9. 02:10:246 - move this timing point to 02:10:569

1. 00:23:311 - move this timing point to 00:24:117
2. 00:59:601 (2) - Hmm, changing to like this? It sounds better imo.
   
3. 01:25:730 (3,1) - The spacing is not good because of speed changing. Change to like this
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:28:311 (6,1) - I think it is better not to stack.
5. 01:37:988 (4) - This arrangement is not good in the normal+ diff...
6. 01:38:956 (6) - Hmm, I don't think this speed down is good... because I think some player will be confused.
7. 02:04:117 (5) - I think the speed should be ×1.00. The reason is same as above.
8. 02:09:924 - Set the volume to 20%?
9. 02:10:246 - move this timing point to 02:10:569

1. 00:23:311 - move this timing point to 00:24:117
2. 01:55:085 (7) - add new combo
3. 01:56:053 (1) - remove new combo
4. 01:57:343 (9) - add new combo
5. 02:06:698 (9,10,11,1) - How about changing to this?
   
6. 02:07:343 (1) - extend to 02:10:892 as with other diffs
7. 02:09:924 - Set the volume to 20%?
8. 02:10:246 - move this timing point to 02:10:569

banvi wrote:

Recheck as your request~
Thank you

Red: You must fix it or it's Unrankable stuff.
Blue: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Black: Just suggestion

[General]

1. Inconsistency in PreviewTime:
   Easy : 84924
   Hard : 124762
   Normal+ : 124762
   Normal : 84924

I don't know how to fix it... I open the "osu. in notepad" to fix it, but it didn't work _(:зゝ∠)_

[Easy]

1. Set letterbox during breaks as with other diffs.
2. Remove whistle at some slider's body.(00:00:892 (2) . 00:11:214 (2)..etc) They sound noisy imo :<
3. 00:23:311 - move this timing point to 00:24:117 fix
4. 01:08:633 (1,2,3,4) - How about changing to this rhythm? It sounds better for me. indeed
   
5. 01:20:892 (2) - replace a slider? fix
   
6. 01:35:246 - move this timing point to 01:35:085 as with other diffs. fix
7. 01:36:375 - start kiai time here as with other diffsfix
8. 01:54:440 (3,4) - How about changing to this? It sounds better for me. fix
   
9. 02:07:988 - move this timing point to 02:10:569fix
10. 02:09:924 - Set the volume to 20%?

fix

[Normal]

1. Ummmmm, SV is the same as in the [Easy]. It's not good, so I recommend to change to SV1.2 *_*;
   indeed... I fix it all
   
2. 00:23:311 - move this timing point to 00:24:117 fix
3. 00:42:182 (2) - add finish at the beginning fix
4. 00:50:891 (6) - remove one repeat. because it doesn't follow the music. yep
5. 00:52:182 (1) - add finish at the end fix
6. 01:13:795 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The spacing is not good... please fix >_< fix wwww
7. 01:44:762 - add a note? fix
8. 02:09:924 - Set the volume to 20%? fix
9. 02:10:246 - move this timing point to 02:10:569

fix

[Normal+]

1. 00:23:311 - move this timing point to 00:24:117 fix
2. 00:59:601 (2) - Hmm, changing to like this? It sounds better imo. fix
   
3. 01:25:730 (3,1) - The spacing is not good because of speed changing. Change to like thisfix
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:28:311 (6,1) - I think it is better not to stack.fix
5. 01:37:988 (4) - This arrangement is not good in the normal+ diff...fix
6. 01:38:956 (6) - Hmm, I don't think this speed down is good... because I think some player will be confused.fix
7. 02:04:117 (5) - I think the speed should be ×1.00. The reason is same as above.fix
8. 02:09:924 - Set the volume to 20%?fix
9. 02:10:246 - move this timing point to 02:10:569

fix

[Hard]

1. 00:23:311 - move this timing point to 00:24:117fix
2. 01:55:085 (7) - add new combo
3. 01:56:053 (1) - remove new combo
4. 01:57:343 (9) - add new combo
   all fix
5. 02:06:698 (9,10,11,1) - How about changing to this?fix
   
6. 02:07:343 (1) - extend to 02:10:892 as with other diffs I can't understand this
7. 02:09:924 - Set the volume to 20%?fix
8. 02:10:246 - move this timing point to 02:10:569

fix

Good Luck!

Licnect wrote:

首先 希望你下次可以先看Queue的"版主最後文章" 任何Queue都要注意 免的被black list
因為本來不是要你M4M我的圖，而且有特殊規則
對不起..._(:зゝ∠)_ 因為可能是因為我習慣跳行 (被打)

Overall:
offset:920 記得Resnap all note fix 全部綠線已改
break time太長 咦咦咦咦????
記得SB的時間軸也要校正

Easy&Normal:
slider上的鼓聲 可以用slidertick聲音+綠線 來達成節奏感 不會的話可以看別人的圖
note的落點 建議可以不要全部在vocal上，可適當的創造節奏感
完全不會。

Hard:
01:11:859 這邊加note比較好聽 看時間軸 就不裁了 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/404780 fix
01:26:053 這邊slider速度有點快 1.2或1.3比較適合 fix
00:59:279 slider尾巴離太遠 fix

第一次做盡量避免SB 熟了在做
很多因素會因為你要修來修去
一點自身經驗
因為很無聊就試著做了

然後我不太喜歡管太多別人怎麼排
因為那是STYLE
建議的地方不多 請見諒
沒事...←已經被罵排列醜n次

基本上都不錯 繼續加油

mint_ong89 wrote:

这。。。太完美了。。

送Star

1. 把所有的书签(蓝线)拿掉o.o
2. 所有结尾的转盘结束点必须一样o.o
3. 因为我是I→H→N→E倒着mod的所以E和N的NC问题就省略了 NCmod真的很无聊……
4. 自己把NC改到长白线或者长白线后一个音就OK 所有diff都是
5. 音效加太少啦 24白线的clap或者whistle都行啊 你加的soft-whistle我用两只手就数得过来啊

1. 00:00:920 (2) - 去掉sliderbody的沙沙的whistle音
2. 00:13:823 (4) - ^
3. 00:16:403 (2) - ^
4. 00:18:984 (4) - ^

1. 00:46:081 - +note
2. 00:51:565 - 和00:51:887 - 加节奏

1. 00:44:790 (7) - +NC
2. 00:46:403 (1) - 去掉NC
3. 00:56:726 (1) - ^
4. 00:59:307 (1) - ^
5. 00:58:661 (2) - 和(3)重叠了 把方向改一下
6. 01:02:210 (1) - 去掉NC
7. 01:02:855 (2) - +NC
8. 01:30:274 (1) - 去掉NC
9. 01:31:242 (7) - +NC
10. 01:32:855 (1) - 去掉NC
11. 01:33:823 (6) - +NC
12. 01:38:984 (6) - 变速slider要加NC
13. 01:46:726 (7) - NC
14. 01:47:049 (1) - 去掉NC
15. 02:01:887 (2) - ^

1. 00:00:920 (3) - 开头加finish
2. 00:04:790 - 这个空格里放点东西进去；至少00:04:790 - 和00:05:436 - 要有拍子在
3. 00:09:307 (4) - 开头加whistle
4. 00:10:274 - 同上，00:10:274 - 和00:10:597 - 要下节奏
5. 00:18:178 (1) - 去掉NC
6. 00:19:629 (7) - 开头加whistle
7. 00:20:113 - 其实这有个1/8小连打o.o
8. 00:41:565 - +note
9. 00:59:468 (1) - 去掉NC
10. 01:00:274 (4) - +NC
11. 01:02:371 (2,3) - 这里的节奏应该正好是slider和note反过来
12. 01:10:597 (8) - NC
13. 01:11:887 (1) - 去掉NC(这里NC乱了
14. 01:13:500 (9) - NC
15. 01:13:823 (1) - 去掉NC；建议节奏
    
    SPOILER

    
16. 01:18:984 (6) - NC
17. 01:25:113 (1) - 去掉NC
18. 01:27:694 (1) - 去掉NC
19. 01:28:661 (8) - NC
20. 01:30:274 (1) - 去掉NC
21. 01:31:242 (6) - NC
22. 01:32:855 (1) - 去掉NC
23. 01:34:145 (8) - NC
24. 01:40:597 (1) - 去掉NC
25. 01:41:565 (7) - +NC
26. 01:45:436 (5) - 调整滑条位置，让他和01:46:403 (6,7,8) - 不要挨太近
27. 01:47:049 - 这后边的NC求自己调到长白线或者长白线后一个短白线
28. 02:07:532 (1) - 为啥要在蓝线结束……

1. SB\Lrc02.png:位置略偏左 考虑往中心移一点
2. SB\Lrc06.png:^
3. SB\Lrc11.png:位置略偏右 考虑往中心移一点
4. SB\Lrc22.png:被人物挡住了o.o 22要改23也要跟着一起挪位置

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
-------------------------------------------------
[General]
打開這張譜的file 你會看到2個.osb，刪掉那個舊的... 刪掉了~

Audio Lead-in 太短 每個diff都去多調一下 都改成3秒

[Inconsistency in PreviewTime:請把每個diff的預覽點都設置成同一個]
- [Easy] : 84762
- [Hard] : 124762
- [Normal+] : 124762
- [Normal] : 84952

fix

[Inconsistency in Kiai Times: 把Easy diff的kiai time設置成和其他diff一樣的]
- [Easy] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:26:081, ends on 02:07:694

- [Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:26:081, ends on 01:35:113
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:36:403, ends on 02:07:694
- [Normal+] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:26:081, ends on 01:35:113
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:36:403, ends on 02:07:694
- [Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:26:081, ends on 01:35:920
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:36:403, ends on 02:07:694

fix


[Easy]
Excellent


[Normal]
Easy diff你的整體設置是HP3 CS3 AR3 OD3 ，Normal diff就自然應該加一點難度 可以把HP+1 AR+2 OD+1
01:23:178 (1) - 直接刪除 作為一個normal難度 spinner後面最好不要馬上跟一個note
01:23:500 (1) - 再注意下這裡按一下newcombo
01:46:081 (3,4) - 建議先把slider放前面 circle單個放後面 交換下位置（時間上）

fix~

[Normal+]
00:15:113 (3,4) - 邊緣被擋住就有些不好看了 建議放在空曠的地方
00:42:210 (2) - 開頭finish
00:49:952 (5) - newcombo

fix~

[Hard]
01:02:855 - 這裡重音 finish
fix~
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w 不错 作为一个还没有rank图的已经非常好了
Great Mapset
Good Luck