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Melophobia
Hi o/

[General]
sliderslide is really noisy imo, consider adding muted one.

[Easy]
* in the easiest diff, claps would be inconsistent due to the lack of note and long sliders,
so you should put claps by another logic (for example, 1st and 3rd white ticks)
00:11:776 (3,1) - maybe switch these newcombos because of a downbeat?
00:28:139 (3) - this emphasis is stronger than others, maybe it would be better to add a note here
00:54:806 (1) - add finish to the repeat of this slider
00:59:654 (1) - too soon after a spinner imo, and this diff is the easiest diff. it'd be the best to remove this note, i think.
01:02:685 (4) - this finish doesnt fit here imo.. consider removing it
01:23:897 (1) - try to copy and paste from 01:21:473 (1) -
http://puu.sh/IZ94

[Normal]
00:30:260 (6) - maybe it's kinda hard to read/hit for Normal-players, consider unstacking
00:49:957 (1) - add finish at the end of this slider because you have it in Easy diff
00:59:654 (1,2) - remove these claps because there's no drum sounds here
01:19:048 (1) - add finish at the end because easy diff has it


[Hard]
00:18:745 - add a note here? feels empty due to the lack of whistle
00:35:109 - ^ same
00:39:654 - add a note for high pitch piano sound?
00:55:412 (2) - add finish at the beginning? sounds nice imo and Normal diff has it too


hope it's useful to you, good luck!
Topic Starter
pimp

Melophobia wrote:

Hi o/ (\o HI)

[General]
sliderslide is really noisy imo, consider adding muted one. (i like the sliderslides but i'll keep that in mind)

[Easy]
* in the easiest diff, claps would be inconsistent due to the lack of note and long sliders,
so you should put claps by another logic (for example, 1st and 3rd white ticks) (i dont like it but i'll try to fix asap)
00:11:776 (3,1) - maybe switch these newcombos because of a downbeat? (fixed)
00:28:139 (3) - this emphasis is stronger than others, maybe it would be better to add a note here (i'll decide asap)
00:54:806 (1) - add finish to the repeat of this slider (fixed)
00:59:654 (1) - too soon after a spinner imo, and this diff is the easiest diff. it'd be the best to remove this note, i think. (i really dont want to remove this note D : i hope its ok)
01:02:685 (4) - this finish doesnt fit here imo.. consider removing it (fixed)
01:23:897 (1) - try to copy and paste from 01:21:473 (1) - (fixed)
http://puu.sh/IZ94

[Normal]
00:30:260 (6) - maybe it's kinda hard to read/hit for Normal-players, consider unstacking (fixed)
00:49:957 (1) - add finish at the end of this slider because you have it in Easy diff (fixed)
00:59:654 (1,2) - remove these claps because there's no drum sounds here (fixed)
01:19:048 (1) - add finish at the end because easy diff has it (fixed)


[Hard]
00:18:745 - add a note here? feels empty due to the lack of whistle (x)
00:35:109 - ^ same (x)
00:39:654 - add a note for high pitch piano sound? (i'll decide asap)
00:55:412 (2) - add finish at the beginning? sounds nice imo and Normal diff has it too (fixed)


hope it's useful to you, good luck! (thanks. it was very helpful, lets mod 4star again 8-) )
the map needs an expert hitsound check....and maybe a pattern change here and there in hard

anyone's sugestions are welcome
riffy
hello!
#modreqs

[General]
some custom combo colours woul be nice


[Easy]
00:59:654 (1) - a bit overlapped with spinner's hitburst
01:09:957 (2) - kiai start. MUST has New Combo

[Normal]
00:15:563 - 1/2 notes are allowed for normal diffs. so, try to put note here. imo it sounds good
00:23:897 (1) - spacing problem
00:30:563 (1) - ^
00:46:624 (4) - add revese arrow here fiys with music better, imo
01:18:139 (4) - ^

[Hard]
00:31:018 (4,5,6,7) - it would be nice if you will foooooollow vocals here (loooong slider + whistle?)
01:03:897 (8) - + finish?

~~~~~~~~~~~~

neat map.
Topic Starter
pimp

-Bakari- wrote:

hello!
#modreqs ( \o/ )

[General]
some custom combo colours woul be nice (okay)


[Easy]
00:59:654 (1) - a bit overlapped with spinner's hitburst
01:09:957 (2) - kiai start. MUST has New Combo (what a stupid rule >.<... fixed)

[Normal]
00:15:563 - 1/2 notes are allowed for normal diffs. so, try to put note here. imo it sounds good (i dont like it)
00:23:897 (1) - spacing problem (x)
00:30:563 (1) - ^ (x)
00:46:624 (4) - add revese arrow here fiys with music better, imo (i dont like it)
01:18:139 (4) - ^ (i dont like it)

[Hard]
00:31:018 (4,5,6,7) - it would be nice if you will foooooollow vocals here (loooong slider + whistle?) (i'll decide asap)
01:03:897 (8) - + finish? ( fixed )

~~~~~~~~~~~~

neat map.(thanks 8-) )
thank you very much for mod
banbar
#modreqs
All suggestion

[Easy]
nice map

[Normal]
01:09:957 (3) - Try the same as the slider 00:40:866 (3)
01:24:503 (2,3) - imo http://puu.sh/LtYL

[Hard]
good

I'm sorry subtle :?
GL
Topic Starter
pimp

banbar wrote:

#modreqs
All suggestion

[Easy]
nice map ( ^^ )

[Normal]
01:09:957 (3) - Try the same as the slider 00:40:866 (3) (fixed)
01:24:503 (2,3) - imo http://puu.sh/LtYL (i gess you are right, i'll try this later)

[Hard]
good ( xD )

I'm sorry subtle :? ( hey. thanks for mod :) )
GL
thank you for mod and ☆ :)
congaan
hi/ from #modreqs
All suggestion

[Easy]
00:40:866 (1) - remove NC same as normal and 2nd kiai time? but either will do.

[Normal]
very good normal
01:24:503 (2) - make unique slider shape? it is too simple as the last slider.

[Hard]
00:29:654 (6) - (5) has 2 return, so replacement (6) like this would be better. easier to read. http://puu.sh/LMMB
00:39:654 - add circle? sounds would be better.
00:48:139 (2) - remove finish? this part has too many finish:/
01:17:230 (2) - ^

sorry for my very short mod..
Nice map
Lami
from #modreq....

[Easy]

00:29:351 ~ add some note?
00:40:866 (2) - remove NC

[Normal]

00:59:654 (1) - x248 y80 ?

[Hard]

00:13:594 (5) - ctrl + R ?
00:20:563 (6) - x112 y224 ?
00:22:382 (5) - ctrl + R and 00:22:988 (6) - ctrl + R
00:47:533 (1) - ctrl + R (?) and 00:48:139 (2) - ctrl + R, too
01:01:776 (7) - unnn..... x176 y192 for regular distance snap :3
01:18:291 (5,1) - x2.94...? too long jump... in hard d iff

good luck~ :)
Topic Starter
pimp

congaan wrote:

hi/ from #modreqs (*0*)
All suggestion

[Easy]
00:40:866 (1) - remove NC same as normal and 2nd kiai time? but either will do. (fixed)

[Normal]
very good normal
01:24:503 (2) - make unique slider shape? it is too simple as the last slider. (i'll decide asap)

[Hard]
00:29:654 (6) - (5) has 2 return, so replacement (6) like this would be better. easier to read. http://puu.sh/LMMB (looks to work too, but i like the spacing of the notes)
00:39:654 - add circle? sounds would be better. (fixed : ( )
00:48:139 (2) - remove finish? this part has too many finish:/ (x)
01:17:230 (2) - ^ (x)

sorry for my very short mod.. ( thank you very much for mod :) )
Nice map(thanks 8-) )

intoon wrote:

from #modreq.... ( kD )

[Easy]

00:29:351 ~ add some note? (x)
00:40:866 (2) - remove NC ( fixed )

[Normal]

00:59:654 (1) - x248 y80 ? (changed to something close)

[Hard]

00:13:594 (5) - ctrl + R ? (no. but the 1st version of this diff was like that)
00:20:563 (6) - x112 y224 ? (x)
00:22:382 (5) - ctrl + R and 00:22:988 (6) - ctrl + R (no. but the 1st version of this diff was like that)
00:47:533 (1) - ctrl + R (?) and 00:48:139 (2) - ctrl + R, too ( looks really good too, but no )
01:01:776 (7) - unnn..... x176 y192 for regular distance snap :3 ( yeah you are right, but i still want to change this pattern, no change for now )
01:18:291 (5,1) - x2.94...? too long jump... in hard diff (i gess its ok, its the hardest diff here, i'm left handed but i never missed this jump.. i gess..)

good luck~ :) (thanks 8-) )
thank you very much for mod :)
Konei
Easy

00:18:442 (2) remove whistle?

00:54:200 (2) I think you should add a finish

01:25:715 (2) ^


Normal

Put Beatsnap Divisor to 1/2 because you are using red ticks



You did this really nice :D

I'm sure you will get this ranked :)
Topic Starter
pimp

Konei wrote:

Easy

00:18:442 (2) remove whistle? (fixed)

00:54:200 (2) I think you should add a finish (fixed)

01:25:715 (2) ^ (fixed)


Normal

Put Beatsnap Divisor to 1/2 because you are using red ticks (okay)



You did this really nice :D (*0*)

I'm sure you will get this ranked :) (thanks, i'm doing my best ^^)

thanks for the recheck 8-)
i'll start looking for mat help soon
Crimmi
Modding, CrimmiStyle!!

I'm sorry for this late reply, I really am.

Nothing to really see here, but i'll try my best to nazi this a bit:

[Easy]

00:22:988 (3) - Align with (1).
00:26:927 (2) - Kinda make it like this? :
01:12:382 (2) - Make it like this:


[Normal]

00:10:563 (1,2) - Make it like this makes it a bit more neater:
00:46:776 (4) - Remove finish?


[Hard]

01:23:897 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe try it like this:

Once again, I apologize for my lateness, here's a star for compensation.
Topic Starter
pimp

Crimmi wrote:

Modding, CrimmiStyle!!

I'm sorry for this late reply, I really am.

Nothing to really see here, but i'll try my best to nazi this a bit:

[Easy]

00:22:988 (3) - Align with (1). (hm, maybe, i'll try this later)
00:26:927 (2) - Kinda make it like this? :

(fixed)
01:12:382 (2) - Make it like this:

(changed a bit)

[Normal]

00:10:563 (1,2) - Make it like this makes it a bit more neater:

(i'll decide asap)
00:46:776 (4) - Remove finish? (x)


[Hard]

01:23:897 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe try it like this:

(hey thats really good too *0*
i gess i'll keep the current shape for now, but thats the 2nd choice
)

Once again, I apologize for my lateness, here's a star for compensation.(no problem about the late man : 3 i'm really busy too, and thanks for ☆★ *0*)

thank you very much, lets mod4mod again 8-)
suzutsukikanade
Chama um MAT logo pra isso U_U"
Topic Starter
pimp
Pois é xD

começei a chamar mat's ontem no modreqs.
vamos ver se vai funcionar : D
DakeDekaane
Hi~ I'm modding this today~ :3

[Easy]

Ok~

[Normal]

There's a little mess in spacing @_@, although I didn't fail on the 1st play, I bet some newbie players will fail, but well, this is only on the start. This is only a suggestion

00:10:563 (1,2) - Move it closer to 00:12:079 (1) -

[Hard]

Fun to play~ :3

Star and good luck x3
Topic Starter
pimp

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi~ I'm modding this today~ :3

[Easy]

Ok~ ( :) )

[Normal]

There's a little mess in spacing @_@, although I didn't fail on the 1st play, I bet some newbie players will fail, but well, this is only on the start. This is only a suggestion

00:10:563 (1,2) - Move it closer to 00:12:079 (1) - (changed a bit)

[Hard]

Fun to play~ :3 ( 8-) )

Star and good luck x3(thanks for mod and star :D)
Decipher
Still eps. 4, just started today ~ :)
Well, I'm bored so I come to mod~If I was not late. And I'm still new to modding thing,

[Hard]

(Slider suggestions, because everything else is good enough already, atleast for me :lol: Feel free to ignore ~)

00:13:594 (5) - 1st grid on X:272 Y:104
00:33:594 (5) - 2nd grid on X:144 Y:328.
00:38:442 (5) - 3rd grid on X:280 Y:264, 4th grid on X: 320 Y:220

———————————————

Good map, waiting it to be ranked :)
Topic Starter
pimp

Light Usagi wrote:

Still eps. 4, just started today ~ :) (i stopped in episode 16, work in this map takes all my free time ;_; )
Well, I'm bored so I come to mod~If I was not late. And I'm still new to modding thing, ( same here :) )

[Hard]

(Slider suggestions, because everything else is good enough already, atleast for me :lol: Feel free to ignore ~)

00:13:594 (5) - 1st grid on X:272 Y:104 (changed a bit)
00:33:594 (5) - 2nd grid on X:144 Y:328. (i'll think about it)
00:38:442 (5) - 3rd grid on X:280 Y:264, 4th grid on X: 320 Y:220 (fixed)

———————————————

Good map, waiting it to be ranked :)(thanks for random mod, i will surely make it ranked) :)
there is already a new ending for this anime, but it still pending :roll:

random mods, stars, and mat mods are allways wellcome
haha5957
Offset : 881. even though I might not be that accurate, current one is too fast for sure.
overall pretty decent mapset

[Hard]
01:24:503 (5,6) - looks little weird. maybe like this? : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/393287

other things look fine :O

[Normal]

00:10:563 (1,2) - ah.. see who those slider endpoint-and startpoint overlaps? it doesnt look good in my opinion.
maybe try this? : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/393298 (also, decreased the spacing because it's normal)
01:23:897 (1,2) - looks little weird, try this : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/393303

[Easy]
everything seems fine :D


anyways good mapset, star :)
Topic Starter
pimp

haha5957 wrote:

Offset : 881. even though I might not be that accurate, current one is too fast for sure. (this offset is fine too, but i'll keep my current offset)
overall pretty decent mapset ( :) )

[Hard]
01:24:503 (5,6) - looks little weird. maybe like this? : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/393287 (looks to work too, maybe i'll use it)

other things look fine :O ( :D )

[Normal]

00:10:563 (1,2) - ah.. see who those slider endpoint-and startpoint overlaps? it doesnt look good in my opinion.
maybe try this? : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/393298 (also, decreased the spacing because it's normal) (i like the current shape/spacing ;_;)
01:23:897 (1,2) - looks little weird, try this : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/393303 (fixed)

[Easy]
everything seems fine :D (*w*)


anyways good mapset, star :) (thanks for mod and star 8-) )
Kanari
Halloww ~


[General]
- You can remove the bookmarks ~


[Easy]
00:43:291 (2) - Move up a bit, it should circle around the pervious note ~
01:07:533 (4) - Try x:404 y:376 ?


[Hard]
- Approach Rate -1


Well mapped ~
PimpG so pro ~
Sorry to my poor mod. ;w;
Good luck and star!
Topic Starter
pimp

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Halloww ~


[General]
- You can remove the bookmarks ~ (i like the bookmarks : D)


[Easy]
00:43:291 (2) - Move up a bit, it should circle around the pervious note ~ (i gess you are right i'll try to fix it asap)
01:07:533 (4) - Try x:404 y:376 ? (i'm using something like that in the previous part, but yeah, maybe)


[Hard]
- Approach Rate -1 (x)


Well mapped ~
PimpG so pro ~ (*w*)
Sorry to my poor mod. ;w;
Good luck and star!

thanks for mod and star :)
Cygnus
Here's the Pro Mod you're looking for (: ~
General
  1. Using black slider border looks ugly. Use white instead.
Easy
  1. 00:43:291 (2) - This slider doesn't match well with the previous circle. I highly suggest you turn this one into a beat blanket instead. It has a good potential of becoming one.

  2. 00:49:957 (1) - This is not in the center. Therefore, move 2nd and 3rd point a grid left. Then move the whole slider a grid right.

  3. 00:57:230 (1) - I really think this spinner must be replaced with a circle instead. If you follow this, make your spinner start on 00:57:836.

  4. 01:12:382 (2) - This slider also has a good potential in becoming a beat blanket. Make it look like one.

  5. 01:19:048 (1) - Copy paste, Ctrl+J; 00:49:957 (1).

  6. 01:26:321 (1) - Just like what I suggested on the last kiai. There should be a circle here so you basically have to move your spinner.
Normal
  1. 00:11:776 - I know that you are trying to following the vocals. But you should add a note here to start off with your diff. Without a circle feels like emptiness somewhere. If you added a note here, make sure it's a new combo so basically, you will have to remove the new combo on the next note after this one.

  2. 01:26:321 (1) - Just like what I said in Easy. Replace this one with a circle and such ~

  3. Bump your HP Drain -1. Feels like the Normal is a bit painful for some Normal players imo.
Hard
  1. This diff is more like an Insane because of HP and AR. Bump them -1 each.

  2. 00:16:927 (1) - Try to make the spacing between this circle consistent. I suggest using x1 for this one so people can hit it easily.

  3. 00:29:654 (5) - Too far from the previous slider. Move it closer please.

  4. 00:31:927 (7) - Ctrl+R for better gameplay.

  5. 00:55:412 (2) - This slider still needs improvement. Try to make the curve balance for better gameplay.

  6. 01:07:533 (5) - Ctrl+R, Click selection center then type 31 in the field then click okay. In this way, the slider will blend through the curve flow of the previous circles.

  7. 01:22:533 (6) - The sudden increase in the spacing here 'til end looks bad. Don't try to break the flow of the map, I highly suggest you use consistent spacing.
Topic Starter
pimp

Philippines wrote:

Here's the Pro Mod you're looking for (: ~ ( :) )
General
  1. Using black slider border looks ugly. Use white instead.(i forgot to tell you, i was about to upload a skin, now this border surelly works)
Easy
  1. 00:43:291 (2) - This slider doesn't match well with the previous circle. I highly suggest you turn this one into a beat blanket instead. It has a good potential of becoming one. (fixed)

  2. 00:49:957 (1) - This is not in the center. Therefore, move 2nd and 3rd point a grid left. Then move the whole slider a grid right. (fixed)

  3. 00:57:230 (1) - I really think this spinner must be replaced with a circle instead. If you follow this, make your spinner start on 00:57:836. (maybe : D i would need to change the previous notes to match this new circle)

  4. 01:12:382 (2) - This slider also has a good potential in becoming a beat blanket. Make it look like one. (fixed)

  5. 01:19:048 (1) - Copy paste, Ctrl+J; 00:49:957 (1). (fixed)

  6. 01:26:321 (1) - Just like what I suggested on the last kiai. There should be a circle here so you basically have to move your spinner. (maybe)
Normal
  1. 00:11:776 - I know that you are trying to following the vocals. But you should add a note here to start off with your diff. Without a circle feels like emptiness somewhere. If you added a note here, make sure it's a new combo so basically, you will have to remove the new combo on the next note after this one. (fixed ;_;)

  2. 01:26:321 (1) - Just like what I said in Easy. Replace this one with a circle and such ~ (maybe)

  3. Bump your HP Drain -1. Feels like the Normal is a bit painful for some Normal players imo. (fixed)
Hard
  1. This diff is more like an Insane because of HP and AR. Bump them -1 each. (hp-1. i gess the ar is ok)

  2. 00:16:927 (1) - Try to make the spacing between this circle consistent. I suggest using x1 for this one so people can hit it easily. (changed to 1.2x)

  3. 00:29:654 (5) - Too far from the previous slider. Move it closer please. (2 grids down)

  4. 00:31:927 (7) - Ctrl+R for better gameplay. (i dont like it but maybe i'll change this notes to another style )

  5. 00:55:412 (2) - This slider still needs improvement. Try to make the curve balance for better gameplay. (fixed???)

  6. 01:07:533 (5) - Ctrl+R, Click selection center then type 31 in the field then click okay. In this way, the slider will blend through the curve flow of the previous circles. (okay, using 26)

  7. 01:22:533 (6) - The sudden increase in the spacing here 'til end looks bad. Don't try to break the flow of the map, I highly suggest you use consistent spacing.(fixed)
thanks for pro mod, i hope we can mod4mod again 8-)
Tur00
irc mod.
The savelog :$

SPOILER
EASY

15:23 espiritur00: : IRC mod
15:23 espiritur00: : >:<
15:24 espiritur00: : Easy ~
15:24 pimpG: : you want to ircx mod my map now?
15:24 espiritur00: : yes if you can
15:24 espiritur00: : :P
15:24 pimpG: : i can
15:25 espiritur00: : okei
15:25 espiritur00: : i already look
15:25 espiritur00: : 3 things
15:25 espiritur00: : :P
15:26 pimpG: : tell me
15:26 espiritur00: : say me when i start
15:26 espiritur00: : oh ok
15:26 espiritur00: : xD
15:26 espiritur00: : EASY
15:26 espiritur00: : :P
15:27 pimpG: : yes
15:27 espiritur00: : 00:24:200 (1) -
15:27 espiritur00: : i only advice you
15:27 espiritur00: : why the last point of this slider
15:27 espiritur00: : are very Far
15:27 espiritur00: : of the circle?
15:28 espiritur00: : try move the last point to the mid of the circle
15:28 pimpG: : fixed
15:28 espiritur00: : 00:28:139 (3) -
15:28 espiritur00: : delete the whistle of the slider
15:28 espiritur00: : Of the body of the slider
15:29 espiritur00: : sound better
15:29 pimpG: : there is no whistle in the body
15:29 pimpG: : old version?
15:29 espiritur00: : O.O
15:29 espiritur00: : Dont
15:29 espiritur00: : ._.
15:29 espiritur00: : i have
15:29 espiritur00: : Latest version but no approved
15:30 espiritur00: : oh now yes
15:30 espiritur00: : :P
15:30 espiritur00: : srry >.<
15:30 pimpG: : okay : D
15:31 espiritur00: : 00:31:170 (2,4,2,4) -
15:31 pimpG: : ?
15:31 espiritur00: : i think
15:31 espiritur00: : 2 advices
15:32 espiritur00: : you choice if one of this func you
15:32 espiritur00: : 1)Delete the whistle of the body of this sliders.
15:32 espiritur00: : 2)put green line timing to down the volume of the whistles
15:32 pimpG: : i see
15:32 pimpG: : i'll think about it
15:33 espiritur00: : yes
15:33 espiritur00: : wait
15:33 espiritur00: : telephone >:<
15:33 pimpG: : its a orange thing of my responses to mods
15:33 pimpG: : okay
15:33 espiritur00: : okei :C
15:36 espiritur00: : ok
15:36 espiritur00: : i return
15:36 espiritur00: : >.<
15:36 pimpG: : ^^
15:36 espiritur00: : you choice about it >.<
15:37 pimpG: : its an orange i'll decide asap
15:37 espiritur00: : 00:40:866 (2,2) -
15:37 espiritur00: : i think
15:37 espiritur00: : that is better if you
15:37 espiritur00: : put a green line and down a little the volume
15:37 espiritur00: : of the custom slider tick
15:38 espiritur00: : it sound a little weird with it volume
15:38 pimpG: : i see
15:39 pimpG: : slightly agree
15:39 espiritur00: : okei ;3
15:39 pimpG: : but i dont want this kind of hitsounding
15:39 pimpG: : another orange decide asap
15:40 espiritur00: : no problem
15:40 espiritur00: : 01:09:957 (2,2) -
15:40 espiritur00: : the same
15:40 espiritur00: : :P
15:40 pimpG: : same : D
15:44 espiritur00: : 01:26:321 (1) -
15:44 espiritur00: : why you add
15:44 espiritur00: : whistle?
15:44 pimpG: : tea sugest me to add
15:44 espiritur00: : the finish dont allow hear it
15:44 pimpG: : it looks good
15:45 pimpG: : i'll ask more people about it
15:45 espiritur00: : you choice
15:45 pimpG: : thanks
15:45 espiritur00: : but i retry it
15:45 espiritur00: : 15 times
15:45 pimpG: : what?
15:45 espiritur00: : & i dont hear the whistle in one
15:45 espiritur00: : nothing time*
15:46 pimpG: : i can hear it
15:46 espiritur00: : okei..
15:46 espiritur00: : it is all
15:46 espiritur00: : continue later then
15:46 espiritur00: : ..
15:46 pimpG: : good ^^

NORMAL

20:32 espiritur00: : continue with the mod
20:32 espiritur00: : go to normal diff
20:33 espiritur00: : okei ;3
20:35 espiritur00: : 00:15:108 (3) -
20:35 espiritur00: : delete the whistle of the last point of the slider
20:35 pimpG: : good idea
20:35 pimpG: : changed
20:36 espiritur00: : why you dont use claps?
20:37 espiritur00: : in the first part before of the kiai time
20:37 pimpG: : claps are "kiai's special skill"
20:37 espiritur00: : ah ok
20:37 espiritur00: : good reason
20:37 espiritur00: : i make the same xD
20:37 pimpG: : : 3
20:37 espiritur00: : 00:19:351 (2) -
20:38 espiritur00: : delete the whistle of the last part
20:38 espiritur00: : i dont like put whistle with finish at the same time
20:38 espiritur00: : sound little weird :$
20:38 pimpG: : i gess this is too loud for remove whistle
20:38 pimpG: : thats not true
20:38 espiritur00: : as
20:38 espiritur00: : 00:19:047 (1) -
20:39 pimpG: : ?
20:39 espiritur00: : look
20:39 espiritur00: : you can see that it
20:39 espiritur00: : only have finish
20:39 pimpG: : yes
20:39 espiritur00: : and sound very good
20:39 pimpG: : but there is no voice there
20:40 pimpG: : thats why it dont have whistle
20:40 pimpG: : dont
20:40 espiritur00: : ok..
20:40 espiritur00: : but i advice you
20:40 pimpG: : okay ^^
20:40 espiritur00: : That you cant
20:40 espiritur00: : make mods
20:40 espiritur00: : when you already get bubble
20:40 espiritur00: : it break the bubble
20:40 pimpG: : its not bubbled yet
20:40 pimpG: : its ok
20:41 pimpG: : i know
20:41 espiritur00: : ah ok
20:41 espiritur00: : it mod is because
20:41 espiritur00: : in the first part i only hear whistles
20:41 espiritur00: : whistle and whistle and whistle...
20:41 pimpG: : agree
20:41 espiritur00: : but if you dont want change it
20:42 espiritur00: : its okay
20:42 pimpG: : your sugestions makes sense too
20:42 pimpG: : next?
20:42 espiritur00: : 00:20:563 (4) -
20:43 espiritur00: : too
20:43 espiritur00: : in the last part
20:43 espiritur00: : because this is a finish of words
20:43 pimpG: : i'll keep the whistle
20:43 espiritur00: : better put only finish
20:43 espiritur00: : ok..
20:44 espiritur00: : 00:24:199 (2) -
20:44 espiritur00: : delete the last whistle and better put it in 00:25:411 (4) -
20:45 pimpG: : i can consider removing the whistle but not using it in (4)
20:45 espiritur00: : yeah
20:45 espiritur00: : i see it
20:45 espiritur00: : Later >.<
20:45 espiritur00: : Srry for dont look it good :C
20:45 pimpG: : : 3
20:45 pimpG: : its fine
20:46 pimpG: : makes sense but i dont like it
20:46 espiritur00: : 00:40:866 (3,3) -
20:46 espiritur00: : you remember the mod of easy?
20:46 espiritur00: : about the volume of the sliderticks
20:46 espiritur00: : same :$
20:46 pimpG: : same response too : D
20:46 espiritur00: : ok
20:46 espiritur00: : xD
20:47 espiritur00: : 00:49:047 (4) -
20:47 espiritur00: : last part
20:47 espiritur00: : delete the whistle or finish
20:47 espiritur00: : put only 1 of the 2
20:48 pimpG: : both are nesessary
20:48 pimpG: : for consistency
20:48 pimpG: : and sounds good imo
20:48 espiritur00: : ok..
20:49 espiritur00: : 00:56:623 (3) -
20:49 espiritur00: : i dont likke as sound the finish in the start
20:49 espiritur00: : better put it
20:49 espiritur00: : in
20:50 pimpG: : let me see how it is in the other diffs
20:50 espiritur00: : last part of 00:55:411 (2) -
20:52 pimpG: : last part is clap
20:52 pimpG: : cant remove for consistency
20:52 espiritur00: : ok..
20:52 espiritur00: : 00:59:654 (1,1) -
20:52 espiritur00: : why the
20:52 espiritur00: : the green 1 have whistle
20:53 espiritur00: : and the orange 1 dont?
20:53 espiritur00: : in the orange too have voice
20:53 espiritur00: : and it need consistency..
20:53 pimpG: : its not consistent but it follow the voice better imo
20:54 espiritur00: : 01:04:502 (1) - same..
20:54 pimpG: : you can consider "1 2 1 2" consistency
20:54 espiritur00: : not more
20:54 pimpG: : how can i explain it
20:55 espiritur00: : no problem
20:55 espiritur00: : only say
20:55 espiritur00: : dont change and right
20:55 pimpG: : 01:02:078 - is consistent to 01:06:926 -
20:55 pimpG: : 01:04:502 - is consistent to -
20:55 espiritur00: : yes .
20:55 espiritur00: : but why
20:56 espiritur00: : you put the others 1 without whistle?
20:56 espiritur00: : i dont understand it O.o
20:56 pimpG: : 2 combos with whistle
20:56 pimpG: : and 2 without whistle
20:56 espiritur00: : and you think that it is good?
20:56 espiritur00: : ok..
20:56 pimpG: : they are "crossed"
20:57 espiritur00: : yes i know
20:57 pimpG: : i think they sounds fine ^^
20:57 espiritur00: : but i dont like it cross
20:57 espiritur00: : but the map is your.
20:57 pimpG: : relax

HARD

20:58 espiritur00: : Hard.
20:58 espiritur00: : 00:21:472 (1) - finish ?
20:58 pimpG: : maybe
20:58 pimpG: : there is a finish in the previous note
20:58 pimpG: : i'll keep that in mind
20:59 espiritur00: : 01:03:290 (7) -
20:59 espiritur00: : delete the first clap
21:00 espiritur00: : no more :P
21:00 pimpG: : this part is difficult to hitsound
21:00 pimpG: : ;_;
21:01 espiritur00: : ok..
21:01 espiritur00: : i dont like it sound
21:01 espiritur00: : but ok..
21:01 pimpG: : i cant remove the clap but i dont like tha clap anyways
21:02 pimpG: : i hope the mat/bat gimme a good way to fix it
21:02 pimpG: : next?
21:03 espiritur00: : no more
21:03 espiritur00: : :P
21:03 espiritur00: : now insane xD
21:03 pimpG: : okay : D
21:03 espiritur00: : oh really you dont have insane :P
21:03 pimpG: : there is no insane ;_;
21:04 espiritur00: : no problem
21:04 espiritur00: : :P
21:04 espiritur00: : i post the savelog
21:04 pimpG: : let me edit first
21:04 pimpG: : please
21:04 espiritur00: : okei ;3

Good Luck with the rank-
Topic Starter
pimp

espiritur00 wrote:

irc mod.
The savelog :$

SPOILER
EASY

15:23 espiritur00: : IRC mod
15:23 espiritur00: : >:<
15:24 espiritur00: : Easy ~
15:24 pimpG: : you want to ircx mod my map now?
15:24 espiritur00: : yes if you can
15:24 espiritur00: : :P
15:24 pimpG: : i can
15:25 espiritur00: : okei
15:25 espiritur00: : i already look
15:25 espiritur00: : 3 things
15:25 espiritur00: : :P
15:26 pimpG: : tell me
15:26 espiritur00: : say me when i start
15:26 espiritur00: : oh ok
15:26 espiritur00: : xD
15:26 espiritur00: : EASY
15:26 espiritur00: : :P
15:27 pimpG: : yes
15:27 espiritur00: : 00:24:200 (1) -
15:27 espiritur00: : i only advice you
15:27 espiritur00: : why the last point of this slider
15:27 espiritur00: : are very Far
15:27 espiritur00: : of the circle?
15:28 espiritur00: : try move the last point to the mid of the circle
15:28 pimpG: : fixed
15:28 espiritur00: : 00:28:139 (3) -
15:28 espiritur00: : delete the whistle of the slider
15:28 espiritur00: : Of the body of the slider
15:29 espiritur00: : sound better
15:29 pimpG: : there is no whistle in the body
15:29 pimpG: : old version?
15:29 espiritur00: : O.O
15:29 espiritur00: : Dont
15:29 espiritur00: : ._.
15:29 espiritur00: : i have
15:29 espiritur00: : Latest version but no approved
15:30 espiritur00: : oh now yes
15:30 espiritur00: : :P
15:30 espiritur00: : srry >.<
15:30 pimpG: : okay : D
15:31 espiritur00: : 00:31:170 (2,4,2,4) -
15:31 pimpG: : ?
15:31 espiritur00: : i think
15:31 espiritur00: : 2 advices
15:32 espiritur00: : you choice if one of this func you
15:32 espiritur00: : 1)Delete the whistle of the body of this sliders.
15:32 espiritur00: : 2)put green line timing to down the volume of the whistles
15:32 pimpG: : i see
15:32 pimpG: : i'll think about it
15:33 espiritur00: : yes
15:33 espiritur00: : wait
15:33 espiritur00: : telephone >:<
15:33 pimpG: : its a orange thing of my responses to mods
15:33 pimpG: : okay
15:33 espiritur00: : okei :C
15:36 espiritur00: : ok
15:36 espiritur00: : i return
15:36 espiritur00: : >.<
15:36 pimpG: : ^^
15:36 espiritur00: : you choice about it >.<
15:37 pimpG: : its an orange i'll decide asap
15:37 espiritur00: : 00:40:866 (2,2) -
15:37 espiritur00: : i think
15:37 espiritur00: : that is better if you
15:37 espiritur00: : put a green line and down a little the volume
15:37 espiritur00: : of the custom slider tick
15:38 espiritur00: : it sound a little weird with it volume
15:38 pimpG: : i see
15:39 pimpG: : slightly agree
15:39 espiritur00: : okei ;3
15:39 pimpG: : but i dont want this kind of hitsounding
15:39 pimpG: : another orange decide asap
15:40 espiritur00: : no problem
15:40 espiritur00: : 01:09:957 (2,2) -
15:40 espiritur00: : the same
15:40 espiritur00: : :P
15:40 pimpG: : same : D
15:44 espiritur00: : 01:26:321 (1) -
15:44 espiritur00: : why you add
15:44 espiritur00: : whistle?
15:44 pimpG: : tea sugest me to add
15:44 espiritur00: : the finish dont allow hear it
15:44 pimpG: : it looks good
15:45 pimpG: : i'll ask more people about it
15:45 espiritur00: : you choice
15:45 pimpG: : thanks
15:45 espiritur00: : but i retry it
15:45 espiritur00: : 15 times
15:45 pimpG: : what?
15:45 espiritur00: : & i dont hear the whistle in one
15:45 espiritur00: : nothing time*
15:46 pimpG: : i can hear it
15:46 espiritur00: : okei..
15:46 espiritur00: : it is all
15:46 espiritur00: : continue later then
15:46 espiritur00: : ..
15:46 pimpG: : good ^^

NORMAL

20:32 espiritur00: : continue with the mod
20:32 espiritur00: : go to normal diff
20:33 espiritur00: : okei ;3
20:35 espiritur00: : 00:15:108 (3) -
20:35 espiritur00: : delete the whistle of the last point of the slider
20:35 pimpG: : good idea
20:35 pimpG: : changed
20:36 espiritur00: : why you dont use claps?
20:37 espiritur00: : in the first part before of the kiai time
20:37 pimpG: : claps are "kiai's special skill"
20:37 espiritur00: : ah ok
20:37 espiritur00: : good reason
20:37 espiritur00: : i make the same xD
20:37 pimpG: : : 3
20:37 espiritur00: : 00:19:351 (2) -
20:38 espiritur00: : delete the whistle of the last part
20:38 espiritur00: : i dont like put whistle with finish at the same time
20:38 espiritur00: : sound little weird :$
20:38 pimpG: : i gess this is too loud for remove whistle
20:38 pimpG: : thats not true
20:38 espiritur00: : as
20:38 espiritur00: : 00:19:047 (1) -
20:39 pimpG: : ?
20:39 espiritur00: : look
20:39 espiritur00: : you can see that it
20:39 espiritur00: : only have finish
20:39 pimpG: : yes
20:39 espiritur00: : and sound very good
20:39 pimpG: : but there is no voice there
20:40 pimpG: : thats why it dont have whistle
20:40 pimpG: : dont
20:40 espiritur00: : ok..
20:40 espiritur00: : but i advice you
20:40 pimpG: : okay ^^
20:40 espiritur00: : That you cant
20:40 espiritur00: : make mods
20:40 espiritur00: : when you already get bubble
20:40 espiritur00: : it break the bubble
20:40 pimpG: : its not bubbled yet
20:40 pimpG: : its ok
20:41 pimpG: : i know
20:41 espiritur00: : ah ok
20:41 espiritur00: : it mod is because
20:41 espiritur00: : in the first part i only hear whistles
20:41 espiritur00: : whistle and whistle and whistle...
20:41 pimpG: : agree
20:41 espiritur00: : but if you dont want change it
20:42 espiritur00: : its okay
20:42 pimpG: : your sugestions makes sense too
20:42 pimpG: : next?
20:42 espiritur00: : 00:20:563 (4) -
20:43 espiritur00: : too
20:43 espiritur00: : in the last part
20:43 espiritur00: : because this is a finish of words
20:43 pimpG: : i'll keep the whistle
20:43 espiritur00: : better put only finish
20:43 espiritur00: : ok..
20:44 espiritur00: : 00:24:199 (2) -
20:44 espiritur00: : delete the last whistle and better put it in 00:25:411 (4) -
20:45 pimpG: : i can consider removing the whistle but not using it in (4)
20:45 espiritur00: : yeah
20:45 espiritur00: : i see it
20:45 espiritur00: : Later >.<
20:45 espiritur00: : Srry for dont look it good :C
20:45 pimpG: : : 3
20:45 pimpG: : its fine
20:46 pimpG: : makes sense but i dont like it
20:46 espiritur00: : 00:40:866 (3,3) -
20:46 espiritur00: : you remember the mod of easy?
20:46 espiritur00: : about the volume of the sliderticks
20:46 espiritur00: : same :$
20:46 pimpG: : same response too : D
20:46 espiritur00: : ok
20:46 espiritur00: : xD
20:47 espiritur00: : 00:49:047 (4) -
20:47 espiritur00: : last part
20:47 espiritur00: : delete the whistle or finish
20:47 espiritur00: : put only 1 of the 2
20:48 pimpG: : both are nesessary
20:48 pimpG: : for consistency
20:48 pimpG: : and sounds good imo
20:48 espiritur00: : ok..
20:49 espiritur00: : 00:56:623 (3) -
20:49 espiritur00: : i dont likke as sound the finish in the start
20:49 espiritur00: : better put it
20:49 espiritur00: : in
20:50 pimpG: : let me see how it is in the other diffs
20:50 espiritur00: : last part of 00:55:411 (2) -
20:52 pimpG: : last part is clap
20:52 pimpG: : cant remove for consistency
20:52 espiritur00: : ok..
20:52 espiritur00: : 00:59:654 (1,1) -
20:52 espiritur00: : why the
20:52 espiritur00: : the green 1 have whistle
20:53 espiritur00: : and the orange 1 dont?
20:53 espiritur00: : in the orange too have voice
20:53 espiritur00: : and it need consistency..
20:53 pimpG: : its not consistent but it follow the voice better imo
20:54 espiritur00: : 01:04:502 (1) - same..
20:54 pimpG: : you can consider "1 2 1 2" consistency
20:54 espiritur00: : not more
20:54 pimpG: : how can i explain it
20:55 espiritur00: : no problem
20:55 espiritur00: : only say
20:55 espiritur00: : dont change and right
20:55 pimpG: : 01:02:078 - is consistent to 01:06:926 -
20:55 pimpG: : 01:04:502 - is consistent to -
20:55 espiritur00: : yes .
20:55 espiritur00: : but why
20:56 espiritur00: : you put the others 1 without whistle?
20:56 espiritur00: : i dont understand it O.o
20:56 pimpG: : 2 combos with whistle
20:56 pimpG: : and 2 without whistle
20:56 espiritur00: : and you think that it is good?
20:56 espiritur00: : ok..
20:56 pimpG: : they are "crossed"
20:57 espiritur00: : yes i know
20:57 pimpG: : i think they sounds fine ^^
20:57 espiritur00: : but i dont like it cross
20:57 espiritur00: : but the map is your.
20:57 pimpG: : relax

HARD

20:58 espiritur00: : Hard.
20:58 espiritur00: : 00:21:472 (1) - finish ?
20:58 pimpG: : maybe
20:58 pimpG: : there is a finish in the previous note
20:58 pimpG: : i'll keep that in mind
20:59 espiritur00: : 01:03:290 (7) -
20:59 espiritur00: : delete the first clap
21:00 espiritur00: : no more :P
21:00 pimpG: : this part is difficult to hitsound
21:00 pimpG: : ;_;
21:01 espiritur00: : ok..
21:01 espiritur00: : i dont like it sound
21:01 espiritur00: : but ok..
21:01 pimpG: : i cant remove the clap but i dont like tha clap anyways
21:02 pimpG: : i hope the mat/bat gimme a good way to fix it
21:02 pimpG: : next?
21:03 espiritur00: : no more
21:03 espiritur00: : :P
21:03 espiritur00: : now insane xD
21:03 pimpG: : okay : D
21:03 espiritur00: : oh really you dont have insane :P
21:03 pimpG: : there is no insane ;_;
21:04 espiritur00: : no problem
21:04 espiritur00: : :P
21:04 espiritur00: : i post the savelog
21:04 pimpG: : let me edit first
21:04 pimpG: : please
21:04 espiritur00: : okei ;3

Good Luck with the rank-( thx 8-) )
wmfchris
- Notice that you have an unused soft custom hitsound in the song file, delete and full submit the song.
- From the pace of the song I feel like the song is BPM99 instead of double of it...

[Hard]
00:19:654 (3) - instead of making a suddedn change at (5,6) you can simply align (1,3,5) into a straight line.
00:26:624 (4) - again move (4) a bit so that (1,2,3,4,5) looks spiral outwards in overal? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/399915
01:05:867 (7,8) - I would say this jump is unexpected, and (7,8,9) has really misleading spacing

- some of the clapping custom rhythm make sense, but they might be too loud.
- You might want to put the notes with a stricter spacing logic, use the same spacing strictly whenever a significant jump is not necessary. After that you can consider how would you put the notes in a good way.

[Easy]
00:54:200 (2) - I don't feel like this is an accent so remove the finish (like wt you've done in normal and hard)

hard may need a bit more work but the rest sounds ready. good luck!
Topic Starter
pimp

wmfchris wrote:

- Notice that you have an unused soft custom hitsound in the song file, delete and full submit the song. (oops,i'll fix it tomorrow i'll try to fix it this week ;_;)
- From the pace of the song I feel like the song is BPM99 instead of double of it... (i was using 99 when i first submit it, but cdfa sugest me double it, it looked the correct bpm, but both work, i'll keep 198 for now. fine, easy sliders are all streams in taiko mode at 198 bpm and i dont like it at all, using 99 again : D)

[Hard]
00:19:654 (3) - instead of making a suddedn change at (5,6) you can simply align (1,3,5) into a straight line. (fixed)
00:26:624 (4) - again move (4) a bit so that (1,2,3,4,5) looks spiral outwards in overal? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/399915 (i wanted to mirror (4) with the previous (123) but it looks to work too, maybe i'll use it)
01:05:867 (7,8) - I would say this jump is unexpected, and (7,8,9) has really misleading spacing (for now, only fixed the spacing. i'll try to change this)

- some of the clapping custom rhythm make sense, but they might be too loud.
- You might want to put the notes with a stricter spacing logic, use the same spacing strictly whenever a significant jump is not necessary. After that you can consider how would you put the notes in a good way. (i see, this will be a bit difficult to fix ;_;)

[Easy]
00:54:200 (2) - I don't feel like this is an accent so remove the finish (like wt you've done in normal and hard) (fixed)

hard may need a bit more work but the rest sounds ready(agree ;_;). good luck!(thanks for mod and star icon *w*)
i'm trying to fix the other things : D
Flask
Hey :3 Request from In-Game PM

[General]
  1. Clear
[Easy]
  1. Fine
[Normal]
  1. 00:11:170 (2) - Spacing
  2. 00:23:897 (1) - ^
[Hard]
  1. 00:45:109 (1) - Make a blanket with (5)? (nazi)
  2. 01:15:715 (4,5) - I can't understand why you use another spacing, not like 01:12:988 (5,6,7) - using 1.0x .
  3. 01:18:139 (4,5) - ^
  4. 01:24:503 (5) - Try this? http://puu.sh/UTQf I'd like to use this because what you're using, is not that blanket with (6) imo.
    312,96,84503,2,2,B|376:136|384:208|328:216|296:272|344:344|400:344,1,288,6|8
That's all i can find, GL~
Give you star owo
Topic Starter
pimp

Flask wrote:

Hey :3 Request from In-Game PM

[General]
  1. Clear
[Easy]
  1. Fine
[Normal]
  1. 00:11:170 (2) - Spacing (special case : D. i would fix it if i really need but no change for now)
  2. 00:23:897 (1) - ^ (i gess i can do that for symmetry)
[Hard]
  1. 00:45:109 (1) - Make a blanket with (5)? (nazi) (good idea i never tryed this before, but if i do that i'll be forced to move the next notes some grids right, and it would look bad... so maybe)
  2. 01:15:715 (4,5) - I can't understand why you use another spacing, not like 01:12:988 (5,6,7) - using 1.0x . (the 2nd kiai uses more variable spacing. i think it looks better as it is : D)
  3. 01:18:139 (4,5) - ^ (^)
  4. 01:24:503 (5) - Try this? http://puu.sh/UTQf I'd like to use this because what you're using, is not that blanket with (6) imo. (fixed *0*)
    312,96,84503,2,2,B|376:136|384:208|328:216|296:272|344:344|400:344,1,288,6|8
That's all i can find, GL~
Give you star owo
Thank you very much for mod and star. :)
GreyWarrior
Hi, from #modreqs

[Easy]

It's good

[Normal]

Recheck the map with DS1.1x

00:16:926 (1) - Move to 00:16:623
00:17:532 - Add a note
00:28:138 (4) - End this on 00:28:744 . Sounds better
00:29:351 - NC
00:30:563 - Remove NC
01:15:714 - Flip vertically, it looks better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/406199

[Hard]

00:24:805 - Add a reverse and delete the other note, sounds good http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/406204
00:28:593 - Add a note?
01:25:714 - Remove and add a single note here with finish



That's all and good luck with ranking 8-)
Topic Starter
pimp

kratozjc wrote:

Hi, from #modreqs

[Easy]

It's good (thx : D)

[Normal]

Recheck the map with DS1.1x (maybe, i'll decide asap)

00:16:926 (1) - Move to 00:16:623 (x)
00:17:532 - Add a note (x)
00:28:138 (4) - End this on 00:28:744 . Sounds better (x)
00:29:351 - NC (i know what you mean but i dont like how it looks)
00:30:563 - Remove NC (i know what you mean but i dont like how it looks)
01:15:714 - Flip vertically, it looks better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/406199 (maybe, i'll decide asap)

[Hard]

00:24:805 - Add a reverse and delete the other note, sounds good http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/406204 (x)
00:28:593 - Add a note? (x)
01:25:714 - Remove and add a single note here with finish (maybe, i'll decide asap)



That's all and good luck with ranking 8-)( thanks 8-) )
thank you verry much for mod :)
Armin
bubbled.
am I wrong or the soft-sliderslide.wav isn't used in the map? :V
fix this little issue and i'll bubble the map
Tur00

Armin wrote:

bubbled.
Thank you *w*
Congratulations Friend :D
Tur00

espiritur00 wrote:

Armin wrote:

bubbled.
Thank you *w*
Congratulations Friend :D

Armin wrote:

am I wrong or the soft-sliderslide.wav isn't used in the map? :V
fix this little issue and i'll bubble the map.
Oh..
Then Fixed it and go for bubble again :<
Topic Starter
pimp

espiritur00 wrote:

Armin wrote:

bubbled.
Thank you *w*
Congratulations Friend :D

Armin wrote:

am I wrong or the soft-sliderslide.wav isn't used in the map? :V
fix this little issue and i'll bubble the map.
Oh..
Then Fixed it and go for bubble again :<



oh god *0*

i can't full submit im my pc's internet : (

i'll fix it as sooner as possible ;_;


Edit


fixed the hitsound but...
i get a slot in leorda's queue

we will wait until he mods it to bubble : D
Konei
Leorda won't bubble this :/

He only bubbles maps which are 6 months or older~
Topic Starter
pimp

Konei wrote:

Leorda won't bubble this :/

He only bubbles maps which are 6 months or older~
i mean, me and armin will wait until leorda mods this map, after i aply his mod armin will buble it *w*
Konei
Yeah, we already discussed :3
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