1. Easy (1,46 stars, 70 notes)
2. Hard (4,81 stars, 215 notes)
3. Normal (3,44 stars, 107 notes)

CDFA wrote:

LET'S MOD THIS SHIPT (CDFA~ *0*)

Timing:
BPM: 198.000 (fixed)
Offset: 867 (^)

Overall:
Change title to "SECRET - Twinkle Twinkle (TV Size)" then FULL SUBMIT. :> (i really forgot to use tv size, but i cant do a full submit in my current internet conection, ill fix it ASAP )
CLAPS ON 2 and 4!~. After changing the BPM and offset :3 (So put claps on the beatmap like this http://puu.sh/Bfe3 , since the drums do that and stuff ). You do it really well on the kiai in hard but everywhere else its like "hi guys whats oging on in this thread" (i'll keep improving it, thanks for the honest comment : 3)

NOTE: I modded this with the 99 BPM, so if I say "extend to white tick" then extend it to where it is in the current time, not the updated time I gave. (i got it)
Hard:
Tick Rate 2? (kay)
Circle Size -1? I think just for the art style of the video, -1 looks better :3 (i used -1 when mapping but i increased by 1, i thought people would say its too easy, but i like -1, fixed)
00:28:292 (2) - Make this spacing even with (1) and (3) (fixed)
00:35:261 (1) - Remove this note (removed)
00:56:625 (3) - Shorten this to the previous large white tick?~ (i think it fits the sound)
01:03:140 (6) - Make the spacing even between (5) and (7)? (fixed, for now)
01:25:716 (6) - Same as last time this occured~ (i think it fits the sound)

Normal:
Hitsounds are too loud on this diff~ (i forgot to reduce the volume: 3, using the same as hard now)
00:38:140 (6) - Make the spacing even with (5) and (7) (fixed)
00:40:867 (3) - Sounds weird. Extend this to the next red tick or the previous white tick (fixed)
00:44:049 (8) - Remove this and extend (7) to the next white tick (fixed)
01:09:958 (3) - extend this to white tick (fixed)
01:13:140 (8) - Same as last 00:40 (okay, but now i need to find a good pattern)
01:18:292 (8) - People might complain that a stack like this is too hard for a normal (fixed ^^)

Easy:
Hitsounds are too loud (now using the same as hard)
00:48:140 (6,7) - Try to not have these overlap (i really like this pattern)
00:52:383 (1) - Make this into 2 sliders or something (now its a reverse arrow slider, and a circle)
01:17:231 (6,7) - Try to not have these overlap (i really like this pattern)
01:21:474 (1) - Make this into 2 sliders or something (reverse arrow slider, and circle)

Considering the amount of beatmap experience you have, this is actually really good (ESPECIALLY the kiai parts on hard).THANK YOU !!!
Whee.

Barney Stinson wrote:

Like here, u have potential (thanks : >)
General: Why in hard u use a custom hitclap on kiai time and not on other diffs? °° (the other diffs does not have enough upbeats filled, so the awesome claps may not work : (, i'll try to do something about it )
Easy: Good job, try to make better sliders, though (i like the sliders the way they are, is just a simple mapping style : 3)


Normal:
00:39:503 (8) - Don't follow such fast rhythms on Normals, or at least don stack this note, it's too hidden (unstack)
00:49:200 (8) - ^ (changed)
01:08:594 (8) - ^ (i'll fix asap)
01:25:715 (3) - Don't overlap (fixed)

Hard:
00:21:776 (1,2,3) - Avoid placing (3) on other notes. It's confusing and ugly move it somewhere else (moved)
01:24:503 (5) - Is tooooo close to (1-2-3-4) Remove spacing, u can do it on hard diffs (i'll fix asap)


Keep mapping, u can do great things, be careful con slider placing, if u want some help feel free to call me! (thanks : 3, i'll do that)
Good luck!

GiNa wrote:

[General]
-Turn off "Enable countdown" it doesn't fit the song (song setup -> Storyboarding) (okay)
-I think it would be better if you use smaller grid levels (3 would be the best for you imo) (agree)
I will edit this post tomorrow again

EDIT:
[General]
-Since you have video, remove "Letterbox during breaks" (song setup -> Storyboarding) (fixed)
-As I said before, try to use smaller grid level if you can (okay)
-End first kiai exactly at 00:59:048 (okay)
-End second kiai exactly at 01:28:139 (okay)
-I think you need to find someone who’s really good at hitsounding (i'll work in my hitsound a bit more before that)

[Easy]
-HP, OD -1, and AR +1 (okay)
-Use Distance Snap (DS) (i was using it before )
-Some of the whistle on the slider slides (slider body) sound bad and don’t fit. For example, 00:40:867 (3,6) (i disagree about 3 and 6)
00:22:988 (3,4) – oops, don’t stack note in the easiest diff, some beginners may get confused (i'll decide asap, if i find a good pattern for it)
00:25:412 (3,4) – ^ (i'll decide asap)
00:47:533 (5) – NC here (you are right ^^)
01:16:624 (5) – NC ( fixed ^^)
01:17:836 (7) – remove clap at the end (fixed)
01:19:048 (1) – same as 00:22:988 (3,4) (i'll decide asap)

[Normal]
-HP, OD -1, and AR +1 (okay)
-Use DS all the time (okay)
01:25:715 (3) – stack this perfectly (fixed)
Basically this is all 1/1 rhythm, so everything looks good ( ): 3 )

[Hard]
-AR +1 or you can ignore this (no, its fine too : ), fixed)
00:16:170 (5,6,7,8) – this is confusing, since other ones in this combo do not have any anti-jump, I suggest 00:16:170 (5) – NC (i'll decide asap)
00:55:412 (2) – a little fat slider, but … well lol (following the choreography : 3 i gess it looks better tha applying a inherit for reduce the slider speed)
01:14:200 (1,2,3,4,5) – too many finishes here, sounds bad (fixed ?)
I think your hitsound in this diff is the best, but too many finishes. Also, try to let Easy and Normal have the same hitsound pattern as this diff. (okay i'll try it)

Here’s a star in return, good luck

EROchimaru wrote:

general

remove esses claps fantasmas q voce colocou nas 3 diff, ficaram legais em standard mas ta muito estranho em taiko(nossa eu nem tinha testado em taiko ainda, nao sabia q os claps iriam aparecer la tambem : ( ) (me ensina a fazer isso oO (sim ^^ mas me da outra star = 3 )

offset - 2~5 (nao tenho certeza, vo deixar como esta por em quanto)

easy

01:09:349 (1,2,3) - isso nao ta bunito muda a forma xD ( eu preciso de ideias pra isso : ( , bom vo ver oq posso fazer)

01:23:895 (3) - muda pra outra direçao esse slider, pra cima ta estranho (estou imitando a coreografia, baixou sem video?)

normal

01:09:957 (3) - esse slider é horrivel (vo ver oq posso fazer)

01:12:382 (7) - ^ lol ( --' )

hard

00:19:048 (1,3,6) - finish (legal : ) )

00:36:473 (6,7,8,9) - precisa mudar esse combo, ta meio humilde e soa estranho ( vo ver oque posso fazer)

00:37:230 (8) - whistle (esqueci : ) )



essa verção ficou otima ^^ (valew )

GL

espiritur00 wrote:

~*Easy*~


00:26:927 - change the long of it note to finish in (00:27:533) (looks good, i'll do that if i find a good pattern for it)
00:27:836 - delete this note (looks good, i'll do that if i find a good pattern for it)
00:28:139 - Add a hitcircle with "Clap" (looks good, i'll do that if i find a good pattern for it)

I think that only it need change =(
Really your easy diff are very good :3 (sankyuu )


~*Normal*~


01:25:715 - Re-distance snap it note...why previuously you use it distance to notes
in 2/4 "Snap Red" but here you use the 4/4... for it better re-distance :$ (i like the stack,but i was about to think in a different pattern for this part, thanks)


And Too!! this diff too are very good ( )
Only found this thing that i think that will be better :3


i can't mod the hard lvl :$ Srry u_u (no prob, lets mod4 mod again^^)

its little i only try help :c (THANK YOU )

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

Mod4Mod from my Queue c:

Easy

00:16:927 (1,2,3,4) - Make them like the pic, shape looks better in my opinion
http://i50.tinypic.com/2qbw1kx.jpg (agree, but i can't just kill the spacing in easy )
http://i46.tinypic.com/6i7muw.jpg (^)

00:29:654 - Add 1 time repeating slider and remove the circle right after.
http://i46.tinypic.com/4kwjv5.jpg (i'll decide asap)

00:31:170 (1) - NC (^)

Normal

00:17:836 (2) - Move the circled mini square 1 grid left to fix the shape ^.^
http://i50.tinypic.com/iz28lz.jpg (fixed )

00:25:109 (3,4,5) - Fix the placing c:
http://i47.tinypic.com/mb719w.jpg (fixed)

00:38:442 (7,8) - Stack more precisely. (i'll dicide asap)

Hard

Perfect made XD ( *0* )

thanks, and lets mod4mod again

dragonxcz wrote:

M4M

[Easy]

00:16:927 (1,2,3,4) - Move 2 or 3 grids down, it can pass through life meter. (fixed)
00:22:988 (3,4) - Stacking is confusing for new players. (i think up beat to down beat is ok)
00:25:412 (3,4) - ^ (i think up beat to down beat is ok)
00:38:442 (4) - CTRL+R (the distance to the next notes will be more than 2x if i do that)
00:42:685 (4) - NC (fixed)
00:47:533 (1,2,3) - Confusing (i like it, its not confusing imo)
01:11:776 (4) - NC (fixed)
01:16:624 (1,2,3) - Confusing (i like it, its not confusing imo)
01:11:776 (4) - NC (fixed)
00:18:442 (2) - Clap (i dont like it, sounds strange)
00:26:927 (1) - Clap at start (fixed)
00:42:685 (1) - Whistle or Clap (whistle)
00:45:109 (1) - ^ (whistle)
01:11:776 (4) - ^ (whistle)

[Normal]

00:22:079 (2,4) - Any sense why everything may be linear? (naruto is going right and team guy is going left no , but are good patterns dont you think?)
00:39:654 (8) - Move at White line and btw. that spacing is bad in normal diff. (i hate it but i gess you are right : ( )
00:42:685 (5) - NC - Important, player can be confused if it is in one color. (fixed)
00:47:533 (5) - NC (fixed)
00:47:533 (5) - ^
01:13:594 (8) - Don't stack it please. (still stack, but now its in the next white divisor)
01:13:594 (8) - NC (x)
01:25:715 (3) - Stack.. (fixed)

[Hard]

00:16:170 (5,6,7,8) - 0,5snap. (i like it, i hope its not a problem)
00:23:594 (6) - NC (fixed)
00:23:897 (1) - Remove NC (fixed)
00:24:200 (2) - NC (x)
00:26:018 (6) - ^ (fixed)
00:54:048 - Note here. (x)
00:55:412 (2) - Weird. (its following the choreography)
00:56:624 (3) - End at 00:57:230 (i think it fits the sound)
01:24:503 (5) - Weird. (its following the choreography)
01:25:715 (6) - End at 01:26:321 (i think it fits the sound)

THANKS, lets mod4mod again

1. Remove "Naruto" from tags because that's already written at the Source.
   
2. lol@tags: "Super Deformed ending". Oh btw, Maito Gai looks kinda creepy.

1. 00:22:988 (3,4) - I don't recommend you to stack notes in Easy diffs. You can do this in a Normal diff, but not in a Easy, because easy diffs are like an "introduction" to the game. Beginners play this diff level to understand how the game works, so try to make friendly patterns for them. Also, there's a spacing problem. Check it out and fix it with distance snap.
2. 00:25:412 (3,4) - ^ Same thing about stacking.
3. 00:26:927 (1,2,3) - Hmmm this rhythm sounds kinda weird to me. I suggest you to try this rhythm out. I think it follows better the music:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:40:563 (2) - I think you should delete this note. Leave those kind of rhythms to Normal diffs. Try to make this diff as simple as possible.
5. 00:42:988 (2) - ^
6. 00:45:412 (2) - ^
7. 00:47:533 (1,2) - ^ (same reason as above) so I suggest you to try this rhythm. Follows good the music too, and it is more simple imo:
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:52:382 (1) - Since you added whistles before, but not here, I feel this slider kinda empty. I suggest you to add a whistle at the repeat. Sounds good to me.
9. 00:52:382 (1) - This combo is very short if you followed the pattern that I suggested before (00:47:533 (1,2)). If you did, I suggest you to remove nc here and add nc to 00:54:806 (1) to keep following the voice.
10. 00:55:412 (1) - This spinner starts way too early after clicking that slider for an easy diff. Beginners are slow to read spinners that start early. Also, this spinner is way too long. It looks made with the purpose of unnecessarily skipping part of the song imo (lazyness maybe?). The singer is still singing so this spinner doesn't fit here so you should consider mapping this part instead of placing a spinner like this.
11. 00:59:654 (1) - ^ Also, this note is kinda far away from the spinner's centre. It's better and more friendly for beginners to place notes more closer to there.
12. 01:09:654 (2) - Again, I suggest you to remove this note. Same reasons as I mentioned already in the mod.
13. 01:12:079 (2) - ^
14. 01:14:503 (2) - ^
15. 01:15:412 (4) - This slider is almost off screen so I recommend you to move it a tad up.
16. 01:16:624 (1,2) - Same rhythm and reasons that I suggested you already (00:47:533 (1,2))
17. 01:23:897 (3,1) - Saaaame thing about that spinner. (it's just all the same about the previous kiai since you copy pasted everything).
    
    That copy paste in the 2nd kiai dissapointed me. .-. Oh, also, you should add whistles like you did in your [Normal] difficulty for consistency. (you added whistles before the 1st kiai in your Normal diff but not in this difficulty).

1. 00:14:503 (1,2,3,4) - Those whistles don't seem to follow the voice at all to me. I think that they should be like this to follow better the voice:
   
   SPOILER

   1. 00:14:503 (1) - Whistle here
   2. 00:14:806 (2) - No whistle here
   3. 00:15:109 (3) - Whisle at the end and start of this slider
   4. 00:15:715 (4) - Whistle at the end and start of this slider
2. 00:17:836 (2) - That whistle sound at this sliderbody sounds pretty noisy to me. I highly recommend you to remove it, because it doesn't fit with the music.
3. 00:19:048 (1,2,3,4) - There's a clear lack of whistles. I think that you should add whistles like this to follow better the voice:
   
   SPOILER

   1. 00:19:351 (2) - Whistle at the start and end of this slider
   2. 00:19:957 (3) - Whistle at the start of this slider
   3. 00:20:563 (4) - Whistle at the start and end of this slider
4. 00:22:988 (4) - To keep using whistles to follow the voice, I suggest you to add a whistle at the end of this slider.
5. 00:24:200 (2) - Again, noisy whistle at the sliderbody. It sounds bad at this part of the song so you should remove it. Also, to keep following the voice, I suggest you to add a whistle at the end of this slider. If you do this, try adding a whistle to 00:25:109 (3) too. Sounds nice imo.
6. 00:26:624 (1,2,3,4,5) - Here's a lack of whistles again. For consistency, you should add a whistle to 00:26:624 (1), whistle at the start of 00:27:230 (3) and at the end too, but remove whistle at the repeat, because it ruins your whistle's pattern, and to finish, 00:28:139 (4) whistle at the end and start of this slider sounds cool with the vocals imo. Try it out.~
7. 00:31:170 (3) - Hmmm the end of this slider sounds empty since you added whistle at the sliderbody. I think that a whistle at the end of this slider sounds and follows better the music. Perhaps add it?
8. 00:39:654 (8) - Place this note with distance snap. That anti-jump all of a sudden doesn't make sense at all, since you didn't do this before. Also, this isn't a good idea for a Normal difficulty.
9. 00:40:260 (1) - A whistle here follows better the voice don't you think?
10. 00:42:685 (1) - ^
11. 00:45:109 (1,2,3,4) - Here's a lack of whistles again. To avoid this and keep following your whistles pattern, try adding whistle at the end and start of 00:45:109 (1), to 00:46:321 (3), and at the end of 00:46:624 (4).
12. 00:48:745 (3) - Here's a missing whistle. For consistency, you should add it.
13. 00:52:382 (1) - Another missing whistle here~
14. 01:00:260 (3) - Whistle at the end of this slider sounds better than leaving this slider without sound sample.
15. 01:02:079 (1) - Another missing whistle!
16. 01:04:503 (1) - ^
17. 01:07:230 (2) - For consistency with your whistles pattern, you should remove this whistle.
18. 01:09:351 (1) - Missing whistle again
19. 01:11:776 (1) - ^
20. 01:14:200 (1,2,3,4) - And, lack of whistles again. For consistency and to avoid this, add whistle to the start of 01:14:200 (1), and to 01:15:412 (3).
21. 01:21:473 (1) - Another missing whistle. For consistency (as always) I recommend you to add it.
    
    This difficulty is better hitsounded than [Easy]. Take a look at your Easy and add samples like you did here. They sound very good.

1. 00:17:836 (4) - This slider lacks whistles. A whistle at the repeat should solve this little problem.
2. 00:19:048 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ Lack of whistles again! This part sounds.. perfect for whistles so you should add some here too like I suggested you already in your other diffs.
3. 00:21:776 (1) - Try adding a whistle here. Sounds better and follows more the voice in my opinion.
4. 00:24:806 (5) - For consistency, add a whistle at the end of this slider since you did that before.
5. 00:26:624 (4) - ^ At the end of this slider.
6. 00:28:139 (1) - This stream sounds kinda empty, without hitsounds. Try adding a whistle here. Sounds good to me.
7. 00:34:806 (6) - Why do you added a whistle randomly like this? It is very inconsistent with your previous whistles and also with your other diffs whistles. In this part, your Normal is better hitsounded than this diff. You should add whistles like you did there in your other diff.
8. 00:35:412 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
9. 00:40:866 (4) - ^ Same thing applies to this kiai time.
10. 00:56:624 (3) - This slider end sounds off. Try ending this slider at 00:56:927. Sounds much better in my opinion.
11. 01:24:503 (5) - I dislike a lot how this slider gets overlapped with the previous stream. Try placing this slider in some other way. Maybe rotated like this? You don't have to make your patterns so boxy.
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 01:25:715 (6) - Again, this slider end sounds awful imo. Try ending it at 01:26:018.
    
    Cool and catchy rhythm you got here. I like it. I don't like very much some big jumps in some parts but I guess it's ok since you don't have an Insane in your mapset.

cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:

Hi~

[Hard]
00:40:866 (4) - NC because of Kiai starts here (x)
00:57:230 (1) - dont like this spinner, i think its better to do this http://puu.sh/EfL0 (i'll fix it asap)
01:09:957 (4) - same NC, kiai+new rhytm (x)
01:26:321 (1) - again, previous slider that ends on red tick sounds bad... same suggestion as before http://puu.sh/EfL0 (i'll fix it asap)

[Normal]
00:39:654 (8) - this thing not good for normal diff, its very confusing for beginers, either overlap it with slider end or place it somewhere else ==! (i'll fix it asap)
00:40:866 (3) - NC kiai (x)
01:09:957 (3) - ^^ (x)

[Easy]
00:40:260 (5) - remove NC and add on next slider (kiai) (x)
00:54:806 (1) - also unnecessary NC imo... (i'm gonna short the spinner and add 1 or 2 notes here, as requested in the previous mod)
01:09:351 (1,2) - same NC suggestion (x)

TAT sry poor mod, anyway good luck~ thank you very much for the random mod

pimpG wrote:

^ the biggest mod i see in these 2 years of osu

and finally a mod from #modreqs thx

kei, that mod is really huge and detailled, and just for 1 kudosu, i dont know how can i apologise , i fixed / i'm fixing everything you sugest in easy

pimpG wrote:

Kei wrote:

Hi. Mod request taken from # modreqs. (*0*)


[General]

1. Remove "Naruto" from tags because that's already written at the Source. (kay)
   
2. lol@tags: "Super Deformed ending". Oh btw, Maito Gai looks kinda creepy. (lol~)

[Easy]

1. 00:22:988 (3,4) - I don't recommend you to stack notes in Easy diffs. You can do this in a Normal diff, but not in a Easy, because easy diffs are like an "introduction" to the game. Beginners play this diff level to understand how the game works, so try to make friendly patterns for them(i got it). Also, there's a spacing problem. Check it out and fix it with distance snap. (fixed)
2. 00:25:412 (3,4) - ^ Same thing about stacking. (fixed)
3. 00:26:927 (1,2,3) - Hmmm this rhythm sounds kinda weird to me. I suggest you to try this rhythm out. I think it follows better the music:
   
   SPOILER

   
   (fixed)
4. 00:40:563 (2) - I think you should delete this note. Leave those kind of rhythms to Normal diffs. Try to make this diff as simple as possible. (fixed)
5. 00:42:988 (2) - ^ (fixed)
6. 00:45:412 (2) - ^ (fixed)
7. 00:47:533 (1,2) - ^ (same reason as above) so I suggest you to try this rhythm. Follows good the music too, and it is more simple imo:
   
   SPOILER

   
   (fixed)
8. 00:52:382 (1) - Since you added whistles before, but not here, I feel this slider kinda empty. I suggest you to add a whistle at the repeat. Sounds good to me. (fixed)
9. 00:52:382 (1) - This combo is very short if you followed the pattern that I suggested before (00:47:533 (1,2)). If you did, I suggest you to remove nc here and add nc to 00:54:806 (1) to keep following the voice. (fixed)
10. 00:55:412 (1) - This spinner starts way too early after clicking that slider for an easy diff. Beginners are slow to read spinners that start early (i'll fix asap). Also, this spinner is way too long. It looks made with the purpose of unnecessarily skipping part of the song imo (lazyness maybe?) (no ^^ .. that was the 1st diff i mapped, and a long spinner is easyer than a normal one, right? ^^). The singer is still singing so this spinner doesn't fit here so you should consider mapping this part instead of placing a spinner like this. (i'll fix asap)
11. 00:59:654 (1) - ^ Also, this note is kinda far away from the spinner's centre. It's better and more friendly for beginners to place notes more closer to there. (fixed)
12. 01:09:654 (2) - Again, I suggest you to remove this note. Same reasons as I mentioned already in the mod. (fixed)
13. 01:12:079 (2) - ^ (fixed)
14. 01:14:503 (2) - ^ (fixed)
15. 01:15:412 (4) - This slider is almost off screen so I recommend you to move it a tad up. (fixed)
16. 01:16:624 (1,2) - Same rhythm and reasons that I suggested you already (00:47:533 (1,2)) (fixed)
17. 01:23:897 (3,1) - Saaaame thing about that spinner. (it's just all the same about the previous kiai since you copy pasted everything). (i'll fix asap)
    
    That copy paste in the 2nd kiai dissapointed me. .-. Oh, also, you should add whistles like you did in your [Normal] difficulty for consistency. (you added whistles before the 1st kiai in your Normal diff but not in this difficulty).

[Normal]

1. 00:14:503 (1,2,3,4) - Those whistles don't seem to follow the voice at all to me. I think that they should be like this to follow better the voice:
   
   SPOILER

   1. 00:14:503 (1) - Whistle here (fixed)
   2. 00:14:806 (2) - No whistle here (fixed)
   3. 00:15:109 (3) - Whisle at the end and start of this slider (fixed)
   4. 00:15:715 (4) - Whistle at the end and start of this slider(fixed)
2. 00:17:836 (2) - That whistle sound at this sliderbody sounds pretty noisy to me. I highly recommend you to remove it, because it doesn't fit with the music. (fixed)
3. 00:19:048 (1,2,3,4) - There's a clear lack of whistles. I think that you should add whistles like this to follow better the voice:
   
   SPOILER

   1. 00:19:351 (2) - Whistle at the start and end of this slider (fixed)
   2. 00:19:957 (3) - Whistle at the start of this slider (fixed)
   3. 00:20:563 (4) - Whistle at the start and end of this slider(fixed)
4. 00:22:988 (4) - To keep using whistles to follow the voice, I suggest you to add a whistle at the end of this slider. (fixed)
5. 00:24:200 (2) - Again, noisy whistle at the sliderbody. It sounds bad at this part of the song so you should remove it(fixed). Also, to keep following the voice, I suggest you to add a whistle at the end of this slider(fixed). If you do this, try adding a whistle to 00:25:109 (3) too. Sounds nice imo. (fixed)
6. 00:26:624 (1,2,3,4,5) - Here's a lack of whistles again. For consistency, you should add a whistle to 00:26:624 (1), whistle at the start of 00:27:230 (3) and at the end too, but remove whistle at the repeat, because it ruins your whistle's pattern, and to finish, 00:28:139 (4) whistle at the end and start of this slider sounds cool with the vocals imo. Try it out.~ (fixed)
7. 00:31:170 (3) - Hmmm the end of this slider sounds empty since you added whistle at the sliderbody. I think that a whistle at the end of this slider sounds and follows better the music. Perhaps add it? (yes)
8. 00:39:654 (8) - Place this note with distance snap. That anti-jump all of a sudden doesn't make sense at all, since you didn't do this before. Also, this isn't a good idea for a Normal difficulty. (fixed)
9. 00:40:260 (1) - A whistle here follows better the voice don't you think? (fixed)
10. 00:42:685 (1) - ^ (fixed)
11. 00:45:109 (1,2,3,4) - Here's a lack of whistles again. To avoid this and keep following your whistles pattern, try adding whistle at the end and start of 00:45:109 (1), to 00:46:321 (3), and at the end of 00:46:624 (4). (fixed)
12. 00:48:745 (3) - Here's a missing whistle. For consistency, you should add it. (fixed)
13. 00:52:382 (1) - Another missing whistle here~ (fixed)
14. 01:00:260 (3) - Whistle at the end of this slider sounds better than leaving this slider without sound sample. (fixed)
15. 01:02:079 (1) - Another missing whistle! (fixed)
16. 01:04:503 (1) - ^ (fixed)
17. 01:07:230 (2) - For consistency with your whistles pattern, you should remove this whistle. (fixed)
18. 01:09:351 (1) - Missing whistle again (fixed)
19. 01:11:776 (1) - ^ (fixed)
20. 01:14:200 (1,2,3,4) - And, lack of whistles again. For consistency and to avoid this, add whistle to the start of 01:14:200 (1), and to 01:15:412 (3). (fixed)
21. 01:21:473 (1) - Another missing whistle. For consistency (as always) I recommend you to add it. (fixed)
    
    This difficulty is better hitsounded than [Easy]. Take a look at your Easy and add samples like you did here. They sound very good(thanks ^^).

[Hard]

1. 00:17:836 (4) - This slider lacks whistles. A whistle at the repeat should solve this little problem. (fixed)
2. 00:19:048 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ Lack of whistles again! This part sounds.. perfect for whistles so you should add some here too like I suggested you already in your other diffs. (fixed)
3. 00:21:776 (1) - Try adding a whistle here. Sounds better and follows more the voice in my opinion. (fixed)
4. 00:24:806 (5) - For consistency, add a whistle at the end of this slider since you did that before. (fixed)
5. 00:26:624 (4) - ^ At the end of this slider. (fixed)
6. 00:28:139 (1) - This stream sounds kinda empty, without hitsounds. Try adding a whistle here. Sounds good to me. (fixed)
7. 00:34:806 (6) - Why do you added a whistle randomly like this? It is very inconsistent with your previous whistles and also with your other diffs whistles. In this part, your Normal is better hitsounded than this diff. You should add whistles like you did there in your other diff. (because the notes are a lot diferent in normal and hard, the normal sliders are better to do it, fixed)
8. 00:35:412 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ (fixed)
9. 00:40:866 (4) - ^ Same thing applies to this kiai time. (fixed)
10. 00:56:624 (3) - This slider end sounds off. Try ending this slider at 00:56:927. Sounds much better in my opinion. (i wont follow this for now, i'm not good at making long sliders, now the slider ends in the previous white divisor)
11. 01:24:503 (5) - I dislike a lot how this slider gets overlapped with the previous stream. Try placing this slider in some other way. Maybe rotated like this? You don't have to make your patterns so boxy.
    
    SPOILER

    the image is not loading here, my internet is too slow ^^, i'll fix asap
12. 01:25:715 (6) - Again, this slider end sounds awful imo. Try ending it at 01:26:018.
    
    Cool and catchy rhythm you got here. I like it. I don't like very much some big jumps in some parts (me too, but >>) but I guess it's ok since you don't have an Insane in your mapset. (<<< you got it ^^, i wont map insanes for now, i cant play them because i'm left handed, i'm still a average player, btw is a bit strange trying to map something i cant play, i'm still a newbie mapper too )

That's all. Good luck!!

check my ★☆ in your maps

pimpG wrote:

check my ★☆ in your maps

1. 00:23:897 (1) This note is the only one which follow a "weird" rhythm in the song, I suggest to delete it, beginners needs easy-to-read patterns.
2. 00:59:654 (1) This note is very close to the spin, you need at least two big ticks after the spin, I suggest to delete it, also, if you do it, don't forget to add a new combo in the next slider.

1. 01:17:836 (3) Move this note to avoid the overlap with (2).
2. 01:25:715 (3) In my opinion you must unstack this note.

1. 00:15:715 (4,5,6,7,8) I'm not sure if it is a mistake, but it plays terrible, strongly suggest to change it.
2. 00:34:806 (6) This note is well placed, but feels a little close to the previous slider, do you can increase the space a little?
3. 00:54:048 - I think you need a note here.
4. 00:56:624 (3) The end of the slider don't follow the rhythm, in my opinion the end must be here 00:56:927.
5. 01:23:139 - You need a note here too.
6. 01:25:715 (6) Same about the slider.

eldnl wrote:

[Easy]

1. 00:23:897 (1) This note is the only one which follow a "weird" rhythm in the song, I suggest to delete it, beginners needs easy-to-read patterns. (i'll try to fix asap)
2. 00:59:654 (1) This note is very close to the spin, you need at least two big ticks after the spin, I suggest to delete it, also, if you do it, don't forget to add a new combo in the next slider.(looks easy enough imo)

[Normal]

1. 01:17:836 (3) Move this note to avoid the overlap with (2). (fixed)
2. 01:25:715 (3) In my opinion you must unstack this note.(i'll try to fix asap)

[Hard]

1. 00:15:715 (4,5,6,7,8) I'm not sure if it is a mistake, but it plays terrible, strongly suggest to change it. ( i'll try to create something new )
2. 00:34:806 (6) This note is well placed, but feels a little close to the previous slider, do you can increase the space a little? (3 grids up)
3. 00:54:048 - I think you need a note here. (i dont like it)
4. 00:56:624 (3) The end of the slider don't follow the rhythm, in my opinion the end must be here 00:56:927. (i'll try to create something, but i'm not good at making long sliders : ( )
5. 01:23:139 - You need a note here too. (i dont like it)
6. 01:25:715 (6) Same about the slider (i'll try to create something, but i'm not good at making long sliders : ( ) .

~

thanks, lets mod4mod again

• 00:31:624 (6) - Add clap
  00:32:079 - ^ (only in the repeat)
  00:36:473 (6) - ^
  00:36:927 - ^
  01:03:139 (6) - ^
  01:03:291 (7) - Remove clap on first and add clap on the repeat
  01:05:563 (6) - Add clap
  01:06:018 - ^ (only the repeat)

RoxasGrylls94 wrote:

Mod o/

HARD

• 00:31:624 (6) - Add clap
  00:32:079 - ^ (only in the repeat)
  00:36:473 (6) - ^
  00:36:927 - ^
  01:03:139 (6) - ^
  01:03:291 (7) - Remove clap on first and add clap on the repeat
  01:05:563 (6) - Add clap
  01:06:018 - ^ (only the repeat)

pimpG wrote:

Had a chat with him over the IRC... he said that only hard diff was downloaded

please click in the other diffs in the download page and click Grab latest .osu file and paste in my map's folder

try to mod them too, please

RoxasGrylls94 wrote:

pimpG wrote:

Had a chat with him over the IRC... he said that only hard diff was downloaded

please click in the other diffs in the download page and click Grab latest .osu file and paste in my map's folder

try to mod them too, please

He's right.

New mod o/

EASY

Haven't found errors (*0*)

Normal
00:59:654 (1,2,3) - Put them like the screen http://puu.sh/EMrB (looks good, but kills the spacing a bit more, i'll decide asap)
01:02:079 (1,2,3) - ^ http://puu.sh/EMtF (looks good, but kills the spacing a bit more, i'll decide asap)
01:04:503 (1,2,3,4) - I grid down and 1 grid right (fixed spacing and simmetry)

HARD
Like the old mod (should i give kudos to the old mod too? )

thanks, lets mod 4 mod again

pimpG wrote:

should i give kudos to the old mod too? )

pimpG wrote:

thanks, lets mod 4 mod again

LesTrucsRose wrote:

Normal

SPOILER

00:12:079 (1) - Anti-jump. Too close to the slider before it. (only 0,10 ~ 0,15 is ok imo)

Hard

SPOILER

no problems found (... ...)

[Te][Amo] wrote:

Hi pimpG (HI o/ )

General

1. 60 ~ 50 in audio sounds better to me, normal-hitnormal sounds too loud IMO (agree, now its 50 in normal parts, 60 in kiai)

Easy

1. 00:11:776 (3) - Add a note whit finish, it will fill the empty in this part and flows whit the instrumental (fixed)
2. 00:45:715 (2) - Hold shift and move it a little up, add next notes spacing (fixed)
3. 00:49:957 (1) - A finish at the end sounds good, it adds some rhythm to the song (fixed)
4. 00:52:382 (3) - Hold shift and move it a little up, same whit the next note 00:54:200 (4) (fixed)
5. 01:19:048 (1) - A finish at the end sounds good, it adds some rhythm to the song (fixed)
6. 01:26:321 (1) - Adding a whistle sounds good here, it mixes whit the piano in the instrumental (okay)

Normal

1. 00:11:170 (2) - I think this slider its too far from 00:10:563 (1), maybe move it 2 or 3 grids up (2 grids up)
2. 00:25:715 (5) - 1 grid up to line it whit 00:25:109 (3) (fixed)
3. 00:31:170 (3) - Next time don't add unnescesary slider points http://puu.sh/FBDr (HAI o\)
4. 00:38:139 (6) - Replace the whistle for a clap, to keep the consistency at claps (fixed)
5. 01:20:260 (2) - Flip it like this http://puu.sh/FBFV it really looks better (totally agree)
6. 01:26:321 (1) - Adding a whistle sounds good here, it mixes whit the piano in the instrumental (okay)

Hard

1. 00:11:776 (1) - Add Finish, it fits whit the instrumental (fixed)
2. 00:32:382 (8) - To far from the end of 00:31:927 (7) IMO (fixed?)
3. 00:37:230 (8) - ^ (this one completes the simmetry, i'll try to create something )
4. 00:40:866 (1) - Add NC, it low down the combos in 00:42:079 (8,9) . (i dislike it a bit but i gess you are right)
5. 00:50:260 (3) - A finish at the end sounds good, it adds some rhythm to the song (fixed)
6. 01:09:957 (1) - Add NC, Follow the Instrumental finish (i dislike it a bit but i gess you are right)
7. 01:19:351 (3) - A finish at the end sounds good, it adds some rhythm to the song (fixed)
8. 01:26:321 (1) - Adding a whistle sounds good here, it mixes whit the piano in the instrumental (okay)

Good map , Hope it was helpful my mod (it was really helpful )

Good Luck ! And Star ! (THANK YOU *0*)

-Baby Strawberry- wrote:

Hi~！
here's my mod~!

Hard

SPOILER

didn't find anything.

Normal

SPOILER

looks good~! (thx )

Easy

SPOILER

01:02:685 (4) - right by 3 grids?(looks good, fixed )

here's my star, good luck~! ( thanks *0* )

mrkyee wrote:

Nice map. (sankyuu )

Haven't found anything bad in all diffs, your improvements are astonishing (i hope i can make it ranked as sooner as possible, and good luck with your map too, its a lot better then mine imo )

256,101,13594,2,0,B|264:172|228:232|160:252,1,192,2|0

Strawberry wrote:

sry I'm late. (but now you are here, no prob : 3)

Nice map already, some small point could be noticed. :3

[General]
`Combo colour 3 is similar as 4. You should delete one of them I think.. (its the original combo colors of the editor)

[Hard]
00:11:776 (7) - from some of suggestions.you have a big jump in (3,4),and I think it is really better if you move (7) to x:200 y:88,then remove nc here. (i tryed to follow the video in this jump, and imo (7) does not call for a jump like the previous notes)
00:12:079 (1) - of course. Add nc there. (i don't like it, i hope its ok)
00:13:594 (4) - the shape is a bit strange imo..however it's better but if make it more rounded (looks good, but i'll keep the original)

256,101,13594,2,0,B|264:172|228:232|160:252,1,192,2|0

00:18:745 - um..maybe there should be added a note? I think put a 1/1slider is suitable and remove 00:19:048 (1) - (looks good, but i like this short pause)
00:35:109 - ^ (looks good, but i like this short pause)
00:56:624 (3) - changed to 1/1 slider looks better. (fixed)
01:25:715 (6) - ^ (fixed)

nice.

[Normal]
all looks ok.

[Easy]
00:16:927 (1,2) - touch the hp bar..move them down. (one tiny grid down)
00:48:745 (2) - add finish at tail (fixed, "tail" looks cool, maybe i'll start using this word too : 3)
00:54:200 (4) - add finish? (yes *0*)
01:02:685 (4) - it is also touch the hp bar i think..so.. (the slider itself is not touching it, i hope its ok)
01:15:412 (3) - the middle point at x:504 y:336 (fixed)

really good map. I can't find something more .good luck for rank!

• 
  "re" is means "remove"
  Black is just suggestion ~OAO , if you don't like , you can skip it
  Blue is recommended to fix
  red is unrankable issue

[Easy]

1. 00:14:503 (3) - NC
2. 00:19:351 (3) - ^
3. 00:26:321 (4,1) - (4) NC and (1) re NC
4. 00:52:382 (3) - NC
5. 01:21:473 (3) - ^

[Normal]

1. 00:32:988 (4) - NC (because I see 01:02:079 (1) - there have NC)
2. 00:37:836 (5) - ^

[Hard]

1. 00:39:957 (1,2) - (1) re NC and (2) NC ?

l1106188 wrote:

Request from myself (what...?!) (hehe)

• 
  "re" is means "remove"
  Black is just suggestion ~OAO , if you don't like , you can skip it
  Blue is recommended to fix
  red is unrankable issue

[Easy]

1. 00:14:503 (3) - NC (fixed)
2. 00:19:351 (3) - ^ (fixed)
3. 00:26:321 (4,1) - (4) NC and (1) re NC (fixed)
4. 00:52:382 (3) - NC (fixed)
5. 01:21:473 (3) - ^(fixed)

[Normal]

1. 00:32:988 (4) - NC (because I see 01:02:079 (1) - there have NC) (fixed)
2. 00:37:836 (5) - ^(fixed)

[Hard]

1. 00:39:957 (1,2) - (1) re NC and (2) NC ?(looks strange, i hope its ok)

good song ~ star for 1st map & good luck~
and sorry to my poor English (your english is fine : 3)

- t e n n y a - wrote:

nyanyanya M4M from n y a -'s queue
Black means suggestion ~

[General]
nothing ( )

[Easy]
nothing, seems fine ( )

[Normal]
- 00:18:442 : remove whistle? (okay)

[Hard]
- 00:29:351 : change it to another style? 3x reverse seems weird o v o (i'll try to fix asap)
- 00:29:957 : finish? (x)
- 01:09:048 :remove nc? (okay)
- 01:09:351 : nc? since the vocal start at there o v o (fixed)

thats all I can found, rank good luck X3

• • Title: Twinkle Twinkle (TV Size)
  • Source: "Naruto SD: Rock Lee no Seishun Full-Power Ninden "
  • Tags: add "spin-off" and remove "Anime".
  • Preview Point: 00:40:200
  • Video Offset: 200ms

• • 00:33:594 (5) - Delete this slider. Start a slider here and end it at 00:33:897 (white tick). Start another slider at 00:34:048 (red tick) and end it at 00:34:351 (red tick). Add a circle at 00:34:503 (white tick), one at 00:34:654 (red tick) and another one at 00:35:109 (white tick).
  • 00:38:442 (5) - Delete this slider. Start a slider here and end it at 00:38:745 (white tick). Start another slider at 00:38:897 (red tick) and end it at 00:39:200 (red tick). Add a circle at 00:39:351 (white tick) and another one at 00:39:654 (white tick).
  00:54:200 (8) - Delete this circle. Start a slider at 00:54:048 (red tick) and end it at 00:54:351 (red tick).
  • 01:00:260 (5) - Do the same thing as before.
  • 01:07:533 (5) - ^

xxheroxx wrote:

Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
• You must fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

[General]

• • Title: Twinkle Twinkle (TV Size) (fixed)
  • Source: "Naruto SD: Rock Lee no Seishun Full-Power Ninden " (fixed)
  • Tags: add "spin-off" and remove "Anime". (fixed, but its ok if i keep anime, right?... anime will be the genre )
  • Preview Point: 00:40:200 - (fixed)
  • Video Offset: 200ms (fixed)

[Hard]

• • 00:33:594 (5) - Delete this slider. Start a slider here and end it at 00:33:897 (white tick). Start another slider at 00:34:048 (red tick) and end it at 00:34:351 (red tick). Add a circle at 00:34:503 (white tick), one at 00:34:654 (red tick) and another one at 00:35:109 (white tick). (looks good but i'll keep my current slider; i hope its ok)
  • 00:38:442 (5) - Delete this slider. Start a slider here and end it at 00:38:745 (white tick). Start another slider at 00:38:897 (red tick) and end it at 00:39:200 (red tick). Add a circle at 00:39:351 (white tick) and another one at 00:39:654 (white tick). (looks good but i'll keep my current slider; i hope its ok)
  00:54:200 (8) - Delete this circle. Start a slider at 00:54:048 (red tick) and end it at 00:54:351 (red tick). (fixed)
  • 01:00:260 (5) - Do the same thing as before. (looks good but i'll keep my current slider; i hope its ok)
  • 01:07:533 (5) - ^ (looks good but i'll keep my current slider; i hope its ok)

Nice beatmap~(*0*)

• 
  00:16:927 (1,2,1) - strange pattern. how about this?
  
  
  00:24:200 (1,2,3) -
  
  if you do this, place whistle on (2) and delete whistle on (3)
  00:26:927 (2,3) -
  
  00:54:200 (2) - finish on this beat looks bad

• 
  00:16:927 (1,2) -
  
  00:19:351 (2,4) - finish+clap+whistle?this need more work, how I think
  00:23:897 (5) - words begins on 00:24:200
  00:30:867 (2) - place whistle, delete clap?
  00:33:291 (2) - ^
  00:36:018 (3) - end of this slider so... loud
  00:40:563 (2,3) -
  

• 
  00:31:624 (6) - this beat looks strange
  00:36:473 (6) - ^
  01:00:109 (4) - delete clap?