This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012년 7월 22일 일요일 at 오후 12:40:00

Artist: Junichi Masuda
Title: Dreamyard
Source: Pokemon: Black/White
Tags: HeatKai heatwave88
BPM: 134
Filesize: 3282kb
Play Time: 02:19
Difficulties Available:

1. Hard (4.61 stars, 235 notes)
2. HeatKai's Normal (3.11 stars, 153 notes)

Download: Junichi Masuda - Dreamyard
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Normal - 100% by HeatKai
Hard - 100%

Hitsound by Reisen Udongein

Offset 3262 (+-5)

http://puu.sh/x1Er Hitsounding done

PLEASE UPDATE MY DIFF, sorry ;w;

below \/

http://puu.sh/yush
here I fix something,sorry!
btw you didn't add preview time !

Hi,mod request from my queue.

[Hard]
00:57:832 - timing point volume 5% -> 10%
00:59:623 - ^
01:23:635 (6) - NC
01:24:082 (1) - RNC
01:30:799 (7) - NC
01:31:247 (1) - RNC
02:09:474 - timing point volume 5% -> 10%
02:11:265 - ^

[HeatKai's Normal]
fine~

so good map.
Good luck~

Here is my mod~

[HeatKai's Normal]
AR + 2
00:03:261 (1,2) - Make them more symmetrical
00:05:053 (3) - Make it more symmetrical
00:33:485 (3) - I don't like the shape of this slider. Maybe you can make it vertically symmetric first, then rotate it to get a better shape. (If you think this slider has no problem than just ignore me lol)
00:34:829 (5) - Delete this?
00:37:067 (3) - same as 00:33:485 (3)
00:46:247 (1,2) - I can guess what you shape you want... but it doesn't look good
01:00:575 (1,1) - I don't think it is a good way to make this 4 bars into two spinners, it is boring.
01:07:739 (1) - Too near to the ending of a spinner.
01:14:903 (1,2) - Make this 2 sliders same shape?
01:20:053 (3) - not stacking?
01:26:097 (1,2) - Make this 2 sliders same shape?
01:31:023 (3) - Move its start to x:284 y:68
01:39:978 - Mapping the break to keep consistency with hard? (Recommended it guideline)
02:12:217 (1,1) - I don't think it is a good way to make this 4 bars into two spinners, it is boring.


[Hard]
AR - 1
HP - 1
OD - 1
00:57:888 (3,4,5,6,1) - Make the star prettier with this
00:59:232 (2,3,4,5,6) - Rotate 00:58:112 (4,5,6,1) to get this.
01:00:575 (1,1) - I don't think it is a good way to make this 4 bars into two spinners, it is boring.
02:09:530 (3,4,5,6,1) - Same as 00:57:888 (3,4,5,6,1)
02:12:217 (1,1) - Same as 01:00:575 (1,1)

Star~ Good luck with your map =]

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[General]
You should set a preview point

[HeatKai's Normal]
00:11:321 (2) - like 00:07:291 (3,4)? fit the music better imo.
00:25:873 (3) - why there is a finish at end?
00:31:470 - add note here
00:39:978 (2) - make the rhythm consistent with 00:36:396 (2)?
01:37:963 (4) - remove finish?

[Hard]
00:10:650 (1) - unexpected jump. You can exchange the position of (1) and (3)
00:28:336 (1) - ctrl+r?
00:34:605 (3) - the finish is load. decreased by 10%? (do same to all finishs at similar position)
00:38:187 (3) - ctrl+r?
00:42:217 (4) - there should be a note or something else at 00:42:441 to follow the music
00:44:232 (4) - remove finish from end
01:46:918 (1) - better not to stack it on (2,3), because music changes at (2). 01:54:082 (3) - maybe change like this

That's all I can find. GL~

A-tan's mod.....

[General]
♪~

[HeatKai's Normal]
00:27:664 (6) - i think u can move a bit...complete overlap is harder to this diff~
00:45:799 (5) - ^~
01:20:053 (3) - ~hmmmm

[Hard]
00:19:829 (1,2,3) - distance not uniform~
01:43:896 (4,5) - ^

sor....im cant find more problem.....orz

nice mapset~
Star~☆♪~
Good Luck~

thanks for modding

http://puu.sh/zjcz here the update btw put preview time if you don't know what is preview time ask me :p

Hi~ from my queue

[General]
Cannot hear hitsounds, I know that's because it's a soft song, but players may miss without hearing clear hitsounds. It's better to make them clear.

[Hard]
00:12:441 (1) - If you bend 2,3, maybe you should bend this too
00:21:844 (2,3) - here? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/337270
00:43:112 (x) - I heard a sound here, maybe you should add a note
01:22:291 (3,4,5) - this way http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/337276
01:27:664 (2) - second point x152 y340
01:49:381 (2,3) - exchange these two, I mean put a circle here, then slider. I heard a beat here
02:09:530 (3,4,5,6,1) - ..... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/337280 It's easy to make them like this

[Normal]
Use a silenced normal-sliderslide.wav might be better
00:20:948 (2,3) - Can't see them clearly, try to change 00:19:157 (3) into a circle?
00:27:664 (6) - maybe misread, don't stack, that will make newbie players confused
01:14:903 (1,2) - I think they can be in the same shape
01:20:053 (3) - same, don't stack this
01:59:679 (4) - Cannot see it, move it to the right side?

That's all, good luck~!

http://puu.sh/zH8v

fixed thank you

Annyeonghaseyo

[HeatKai's Normal]
00:19:829 (1) - This slider is almost offscreen
01:00:575 (1,1) - 2 spinner can be tiring for beginners....
01:07:739 (1) - Overlapped by hitbursts from spinner. Sometimes, beginners are slowly to read this, so this possibly hidden for them
01:34:381 (3) - These crumping slider are not allowed for easier diff
02:12:217 (1,1) - Same issue as 01:00:575 (1,1)
02:19:381 (1) - Same issue as 01:07:739 (1)


[Hard]
00:52:963 (4) - Remove clap at head slider. Finish+Clap is not good, IMO


That's all I got, sorry

http://puu.sh/ARqY

Leo the diff is still normal :p so about the two spinner and the circle after the spinner is a no sorry.
and other is fix thanks for the mod !

Hi there
Can I make Insane?

If this gets ranked, I love you, mapper.

Hi from my mod Q ^.^

Hard

00:40:202 - remove clap
00:44:008(3,4) - stack better
01:20:500 - i think better replace this slider on 2 short http://puu.sh/C0yf
01:26:545 - maybe add note here
02:19:381 - add finish

Normal

00:08:411 - remove finish
00:08:635 - add note with finish
00:51:396 - up it, http://puu.sh/C0Cn beginners can get confused
00:53:411(1,2,3) - ^
00:56:769 - remove this note
01:07:739 - add finish and remove whistle
01:37:291(3) - this slider very comfused >.< better replace it/
02:19:381 - add finish and remove whistle

Sorry i'm soooo lazy~~ good luck with map ^.^

http://puu.sh/C3nd

thank you katty

From ♪~♫≈♫ Fluffy Modding Queue :3

I am falling asleep while listening to it :>
General
Convert your BG picture to .jpg format here

"Kiai" sections suggestion (not forcing to do it, just my idea)
from 00:31:918 to 01:00:127
from 01:43:560 to 02:11:993

Normal
00:27:664 (6) this note is out of zone
01:25:202 (4) ^

Hard
almost insane :O
00:07:963 green lines better on ticks http://s16.postimage.org/aft3in91f/image.png
Check the whole beatmap
01:30:575 add note
________________________
I suggest to make Easy diff

Very nice song :3

Good luck

Hi there :3
Sorry for late

[HeatKai]
00:24:754 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/350184 :3

[Spec]
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/350186
00:42:888 (1) - x276 y36 Let's make it Anti-Jump.
01:44:008 (5) - Delete Clap and Add Whistle

맵이 너무 완벽해서 모딩할게 없당께 D:
그래서 死개만 한당께?
필요없는 말 77% 더 해서 죄송합니다

yo. These all are just my opinion, don't change if you don't want to.

[HeatKai's Normal]
00:35:053 (6) - finish sounds better than clap. if change, lower the volume
00:38:635 (6) - ^
00:46:247 (1) - remove finish at sliderhead.
00:51:396 (3) - finish at slidertail
00:52:515 (4) - whistle at sliderhead.
01:07:739 (1) - clap?
01:27:664 (3) - clap at sliderhead
01:44:679 (3) - clap?
01:48:262 (3) - ^
02:19:981 (1) - remove whistle.

[Hard]
00:13:112 (2) - 1 grid up?
00:17:590 (1) - remove finish?
00:20:276 (2) - x=80 y=284?
00:23:589 (3) - make the end of the slider 1 grid up
00:32:366 (5) - better whistle rather than clap, it's too loud. or just decrease the volume a bit for clap. if you change to whistle, please raise the volume instead. if you change this, also change the next note. (only.)
00:43:112 - add note here, with either whistle or clap.
00:44:232 (4) - finish rather than clap?
00:45:351 (2) - remove finish?
01:30:575 - add note here?
01:44:008 (5) - same as 00:32:366
01:56:993 (3) - remove finish at slidertail.
02:09:530 (3) - 1 grid down.

nice mapset.
bye. /runs

[HeatKai's Normal]
00:03:261 (1,2) - 1 grid right for symmetry
00:05:053 (3) - Nazi, move the 2nd waypoint 1 grid right to improve this shape
00:07:515 (4) - The sound of this finish is loud for this kind of song. Remove it
01:07:739 (1) - Too soon from the spinner for the easiest diff. I suggest you to remove this circle
02:19:381 (1) - ^ you could to extend the previous spinner till here, it's good ;3

[Hard]
00:07:291 (3) - It touches hp bar, move it
00:11:993 (4) - Oh well, you could to overlap this circle with 00:11:097 (3), it's much better.
00:14:008 (1) - Why don't you create a blanket here with 00:14:679 (2)? Something like this: http://puu.sh/Dch0

192,112,14008,6,0,B|124:48|32:84,1,160,2|8

00:57:888 (3,4,5,6) - Too low volume. Consider to increate it a bit please, it could be confusing.
00:59:679 (3,4,5,6) - ^
01:07:739 (1) - whistle
01:15:799 (3) - Remove a waypoint from the tail to fix the repeat arrow
01:23:635 (1) - Remove NC and use it here instead: 01:24:082 (2)
01:26:097 (4) - I suggest you to move this slider further from 01:24:754 (3). You gave it the same spacing of a 1/2 and this can be confusing
01:30:575 Add circle
01:30:799 (1) - Remove NC and use it on 01:31:247 (2)
02:07:291 (2) - Move to x:276 y:236

Nice beatmaps, I just think you should to improve the style of the Hard.
Good luck ;3

- hmmm tag nintendo?
- Just a potential problem that you're not the one paying the greatest contribution to the map...?

[Hard]
OD 8 and HP 8 is too high for a hard. It's also bad since the difficulty setting is too far from the normal.
01:40:873 (3) - whistle at the end like 00:29:232 (3) -
01:49:381 (2) - finish at the end
01:56:993 (3) - remove clap in the middle tick because the accent at the last is stronger than the middle ones.
pretty awesome hitsound, just make sure you're doing in same thing in the first half and the second half of the song in the sense that that're pretty similar. Another thought is that consecutive claps are sometimes a bit too loud even they are 1/1 separated like 02:03:709 (2,3) - , and one of the possible solution is to remove hitsound and let highlight the beat from the music, or you may want to make claps even softer.

[Normal]
Similarly the difficulty setting here is too low.
00:07:515 (4) - There's no accent at the end so remove the finish.
00:25:873 (3) - you may need a clap (the whistle sound) in the beginning as indicated by the music.
00:44:903 - feel empty here especially you placed (2,3) like with a 1/2 separation only.
00:59:679 (4) - since you used a quite strong clapping in this section better extend one more tick and fit the music better. Remember to delay the spinner as well.
01:14:903 (1) - ...just make it symmetrical to (2)?
01:37:291 (3) - Potentially a problem making slider. I just can't determine whether they cross over or is a V shaped one (even the error circle is large enough), and it'll be confusing for newbies, so better change it.

nice diff, and good luck :3

Hello there~
Here's your requested Mod from King's Lair.

[Heatkai's Normal]

Interesting Slidershapes you're using here o.0


[Hard]

Okay nice hitsounding on this one~

Perfect Elevator-Music lol.
All in all good map, but lacks a Taiko
Good luck~

Hi
from Fang Team's Queue
Let's go

[General]

Can you remove .osb file and full submission? cuz you don't use StoryBoard

[HeatKai's Normal]


[Hard]


yo~ good map and good song!

Have a good time

From BakaHuang & TTTTTTTTTTTT's modding queue

[HeatKai's Normal]

Reduce star rating to 3.00?

00:31:470 - move to x:124 y:296
00:31:918 - then move this slider to x:36 y:340
thus make it looks better
00:31:918 - Reduce this finish's volume by 10%.
00:56:933 - Add a finish here
01:43:560 - It would be better to reduce the volume by 10% here

[Hard]

raise HP rate to 6 or 7

00:12:441 - curve this slider like (2) (3)
00:35:053 - Turn up those finsh which have 10% volume to 30%,It sounds better than use a quiet finish hitsound
01:00:407 - useless green timing
01:23:187 - add a circle here

Well done!Good luck!

Mod from my queue~

[General]
I would remove Reisen Udongein from the Tags, since he "only" provided Hitsoundsamples.
Maybe add a blank .wav file and name it "normal-sliderslide.wav" since I think the sliderslide on normal sample is way too loud and disturbing.

[HeatKai's Normal]
Reduce Vol. in all normal-sample sections by 5% (the normal sample is alot louder than the soft one so you should use a lower vol. The normal sample is still louder but not that disturbingly loud then)
00:08:859 (5) - looks better if you delete 3rd and 8th waypoint IMO
00:25:873 (3) - add clap on sliderstart?
00:44:903 - I would add a note with clap here, it would fit the rhythm very well
00:52:515 (4) - better would be half that long and with reverse and clap on sliderend.
01:20:500 (4,5) - hmm, I think finish on 4's start and endpoint as well as on 5's start would fit fine. clap on 5th's ending 2
02:09:082 (1) - as mentioned earlier

[Hard]
Some of your parts (10% vol.) are not hearable during gameplay. Use at least 20% please
Your settings are more Insane-ish then Hard
HP-2
AR-1
OD-3
00:12:441 (1) - go for the same shape as 2 and 3?
00:27:888 (4) - clap on start?
00:32:030 (2,3) - whistle on these?
00:52:963 (4) - clap on sliderstart (would remove finish 2)
00:56:545 (4) - remove finish
00:57:441 (2) - ^
00:58:112 (4,5) - add whistle
01:07:739 (1) - ^
01:15:799 (3) - uh, you messed something up here. The last waypoint should be removed so that the reversearrow shows the right direction
01:22:739 (5) - use normal distancesnap here? It feels awkward with the reduction
01:39:530 (4) - add clap on sliderstart
01:39:978 (1) - clap on sliderend
01:40:873 (3) - clap on reverse
01:43:672 (2,3) - whistle?
01:46:247 (3) - remove clap from sliderending
01:50:276 (4) - remove clap
01:53:411 (2) - remove clap from sliderending
(..and so on. Please don't use finish+clap on the notes in the following part, it's a calm song and with doublehitsounds, you ruin it )
01:59:679 (1) - finish or clap on ending?
02:04:605 (4) - feels better with only clap :/
02:07:739 (3,4) - both only clap
02:09:082 (2) - remove finish?
02:09:754 (4,5) - whistle?
02:10:873 (2,3,4,5,6) - oh, that's nasty, but it's a hard so please NC at 3 so one can realize the change
02:11:545 (4,5) - whistle?

That's it, good luck

fixed,thanks all!!!!!

안녕하세요~ 모딩큐에서 왔어요 xD
거의 모든것은 제안으로써 무시하셔도 좋습니다



노래가 잔잔하고 좋네요! 행운을 빌어요~

Hi Spectator~
HeatKai asked me to mod this long ago... Sorry for the lateness, I got unmotivated to mod for a few days :3

[General]

-> I agree that adding Reisen Udongein in tags isn't required, for example this map's hitsound got a big help from theowest but there's no theowest in tags... I'd rather add heatwave95 (HeatKai's previous name) in tags instead :3

[HeatKai's Normal]

1. 00:03:261 (1) - Uhm, I prefer a finish on slider's start here as you used in the kiai time's start :3
2. 00:06:844 (2) - (optional) On this, how about moving (2) a bit downward so (1,2,3) will form an arc? Looks fancier this way imo (you might want to move (1) a bit to the upper-right as well)
3. 00:07:515 (4) - I don't think discontinuing the clap here sounds good... Maybe put claps on slider's start and end as well? xD
4. 00:14:679 (2) - Here also, add clap on slider's start also? The music's pitch goes high here :3
5. 00:17:590 (1) - (optional) Move to ~x:368 y:244? imo (1,2) will flow better if you don't force (1) to be placed vertically with (4) >_<
6. 00:21:172 (3,4) - Here as well, imo they will flow better if these two was rotated a bit - therefore, pretty much they'll be like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:27:664 (6) - Add clap here? There's a similar sound here as on (5)'s start >_<
8. 00:31:470 (6) - Uhm, for the similar reason with above, move the clap to (5)'s end? xD
9. 00:31:918 (1,2) - (optional) Perhaps do something like this here? imo it can help to reduce cluster with your (6) :3
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 00:35:500 (1,2) - Same as above (as they're copypasted) xD
11. 00:41:769 (4,5,1) - Uhm, is this 90° degree between (5,1) is necessary? imo it will flow much better if they're continuously moving ((4) in ~x:199 y:37, (5) in ~x:223 y:195, (1) in ~x:246 y:236)
12. 00:44:232 (3) - This also, actually to create a better-flowing angle you can push it to the extreme left (x:0) - this slider won't be offscreen ^_^
13. 00:52:515 (4) - (optional) Try a slight slider wave here for a fancy flow with your next (1)? xD
14. 00:56:993 (1,2) - Maybe try these? I liked how these two will form a circle between each other if shaped like this:
    
    SPOILER

    
15. 01:00:575 (1,1) - Not a must, but I think it would be better if you make the second spinner quieter (~35% or so) to create a more peaceful effect :3
16. 01:07:739 (1) - It is highly recommended not to put a post-spinner circle in the center for the easiest difficulty as the hitburst will cover it up - moving this to x:280 would be enough (:
17. 01:21:620 (5) - (optional) Change to elbow slider? imo it flows better compared to the fully linear slider~
18. 01:28:784 (4) - Perhaps move to ~x:104 y:274? This way, (1) will deliver the flow from this circle xD
19. 01:32:814 (1) - Hmm, idk, it feels quite weird for me to have the kiai part ends like this... Maybe add a finish on slider's start to tell players that the kiai overs here? >_<
20. 01:36:396 (1,2,3,4) - Personally I disliked the linearity you used here... Maybe try this to create a more flowing pattern? You can place (5,6) after in the center as well[u]!
    
    SPOILER

    
21. 01:39:306 (6) - Add clap here - [u]The sound is similar with the sound present on (5)'s start
22. 01:43:560 (1) - (optional) Why straight slider here? imo it will be a lot better if you create a "?"-shaped slider here (add a new bezier waypoint on ~x:3 y:303, and a new linear waypoint on ~x:25 y:258)
23. 01:51:620 (2) - Also here, I suggest to place the first waypoint on ~x:406 y:310 - As your previous (1) is curved downward already, it will be a lot better if (2)'s first half is curved upward instead for variation~
24. 01:54:306 (1,2) - Again, is the linear placement here intentional? Moving (1) a bit to the left and (2) a bit to the right to create something more flowy isn't hard, though :3
25. 02:02:814 (2,3,4,5) - (optional)Uhm, maybe create a tilted slider wave on (2) and arrange your following (3,4,5) like this? (don't forget to adjust your next (1) in the same y-axis with (4) :3)
    
    SPOILER

    
26. 02:15:799 (1,1) - Same suggestion as before (quieter second spinner, don't put the post-spinner circle in the middle)~

[Hard]

1. 00:05:948 (3) - Move more to the bottom-left (~x:121 y:351) to create a more powerful jump?
2. 00:07:515 (4) - Add clap on slider's end here as well? The pitch goes high here :3
3. 00:11:097 (3,4) - Perhaps try this to follow the music more? ((4) is in 00:11:769)
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:15:351 (3) - (optional) Stack this to 00:17:142 (3)'s start instead? It might sound crazy but it looks fancy in play mode (really >_<) - another option is to manual-stack (2,3,1) here (:
5. 00:19:829 (1,2,3) - Add a slight curve on these three? I think it can increase the flow with your next (1) :3
6. 00:26:321 (1) - Please make this slider more symmetrical (move the midpoint more to the left) - currently it's clear enough that this slider isn't symmetrical in play mode >_<
7. 00:30:015 (1) - The music continues here - therefore, it's strongly recommended to start the spinner 1/4 after and create something like this here (with clap on (4)'s end) :
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:31:918 (1,2,3,4,5) - Uhm, on these five, I prefer something like this to make the flow continuous actually:
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 00:33:709 (1) - Personally I disliked the linearity between (6)'s end, (1), and (2) here... Maybe move (1) more to the lower-right? xD
10. 00:43:112 (2) - Missing clap here? o.o
11. 00:44:008 (4,5) - (optional) imo the jump will be a lot fancier here if you CTRL+R (5) and stack (4) to x:345 y:336 :3
12. 00:56:993 (1,2) - I personally feel it will be much better if you add more distance to this jump (for example, put (1) in ~x:34 y:279 and adjust (2) by copy-pasting - it won't be hard to do, though~)
13. 00:57:888 (1,2,3,4,5) - Because your next pattern is a square jump, it's highly recommended to create a star-shaped jump here to let players adapt with the jump - just play around with CTRL+R to get a star shape (:
14. 01:07:739 (1) - Add whistle here, to create a dramatic effect after the spinner?
15. 01:15:799 (3) - The repeat arrow is facing to the wrong direction (re-creating this slider will fix this issue~)
16. 01:17:142 (2,3) - (optional) Just wondering here... imo it will be a lot better if (2) is faced to the lower-left instead, like this ^_^
    
    SPOILER

    
17. 01:33:485 (2,3) - Perhaps move these two to ~x:134 y:317 so (1,2,1) will form an isosceles triangle?
18. 01:39:978 (1) - Clap on slider's end? Feels weird having the clap discontinued here o.o
19. 01:41:545 (1) - The music also continues here - refer to my previous suggestion in 00:30:015 (:
20. 01:45:351 (1,2) - imo the flow here is quite poor because (6,1,3) is placed too close to each other - perhaps try a jump like this? (you can optionally encircle (2) as well :3)
    
    SPOILER

    
21. 01:50:724 (1,2) - Select both and move them to ~x:79 y:284, so (3,4,5,1) will form a solid jump pattern? xD
22. 01:56:993 (3) - Move the finish from slider's end to slider's repeat to follow the song's cymbals (:
23. 01:59:232 (3,1) - Here, I thought it would be much more fancier if you CTRL+R (1) and stack (3) to ~x:436 y:238 (just look how it will be in Autoplay :3)
24. 02:09:530 (3,4,5,6,1) - Same suggestion as before about the star-shaped jump~

Lovely map~ The mapping style fits the song's atmosphere very much imo (:
Good luck Spectator ^^

super mod by Niva :3
thank you :>
btw why so late XD hahaha

Kokatsu wrote:

Mod from my queue~

[General]I would remove Reisen Udongein from the Tags, since he "only" provided Hitsoundsamples.

i didn't 'only' provide Samples, i set the WHOLE hitsounds in hard diff. just correcting your misunderstand.

Hello from E.E's modding queue!
[Hard]
00:03:485 (2) - try something like this
00:04:829 (1) - ?
01:15:127 (2) - ?
01:16:470 (1) -
01:24:754 (3) -

All @suggestion@
Good luck!

Mod time \:D/

MODDING COLOURS:

Blue = hitsounds
Green = patterns
Orange = New Combo
Purple = rhythm changes
Black = general

General

After a quick search, it seems like this BGm is played not just in Dreamyard, but also in "Pinwheel Forest" and in "Moor of Icirrus, maybe you should add those two to the tags :3

[Heatkai's Normal]

00:15:799 (3,4) - what about this shape?

00:19:829 (1) - remove NC
00:21:172 (3) - add NC
00:27:664 (6) - move this to 00:27:888 and consecutively fix the spacing
00:33:485 (3) - How about make this "elbow" a wave? (if you changed this^) 00:34:605 (4,5,6) - lower the 00:34:605 (4) - and the other two so on (example:having the end of the slider at x:240 y:196, the (4) is at x:320 y:252)
00:37:067 (3,4,5,6) - ^same thing as before, just if you've changed that
00:59:679 (4) and this 02:11:545 (4) - Red tick or white tick?
01:17:590 (4) - same as 00:15:799 (3,4)
01:23:411 (2) - move this to 01:23:187
01:24:306 (3) - move this to 01:24:082
01:24:754 (4) - add this beat
01:26:993 (2) - move this to 01:26:769

01:37:963 (4,5,6) - make this part with the same rhythm as the previous 01:34:381 (3,4,5,6) - (also same hitsounds)
01:39:978 (8) - add a finish note here


[Hard]

Whole Song- Try removing some NC, it's still a [Hard], i guess you can also reach x7 combos

I love how this song is as the same time so simple and so enjoyable....i think that it doesn't need anything else

Mod Request!

[HeatKiai's Normal]
Nothing to mod, it's nice made.

[Hard]
00:57:888 (1) - useless circle, doesnt fit to any beat o: Maybe delete it? D:

[Comments]
The map is nice, nothing wrong to mod If you wanna rank it you need a Difficulty less than 3 Stars, Normal is 3,11 otherwise you can only approve it.

Good luck!

I never know my name turns to HeatKIAI T_______________T you baka kiyoshi
and its fine it's easy to play tho ;p

good map

sorry db post :/
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