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Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[General]
Kiai不一致,统一一下

[Easy]
00:05:497 (4) - 为什么这里空一下,要空拍的话00:05:875比较好吧?
00:12:306 (1,3) - 稍微overlap到一点
00:22:332 (2) - 我觉得Easy还是最好不要用红线note
00:30:465 (1,2) - 不好看,修改一下?http://puu.sh/wHlh

[Normal]
00:15:333 (1,3) - 对称?
00:28:952 (4) - 折返?可以避免红线note,简单一些
00:34:248 (5) - 开grid3/4调一下spacing...

[Hard]
00:32:546 (1,2,3) - 貌似不可读?可能会读成圈-短滑条-短滑条
01:08:296 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Hard放长串大丈夫?

其他难度太鬼畜了= =感觉Ex比Insane好一点

That's all I can find. GL~
Colin Hou
bilibili douga是什么... 难道不是bilibili.tv么

以及这鬼畜是acfun.tv的呜哇啊做的/
Topic Starter
a32
Fixed some,thanks!(I'm too lazy to write reply this time orz

Colin Hou wrote:

bilibili douga是什么... 难道不是bilibili.tv么

以及这鬼畜是acfun.tv的呜哇啊做的/
我这是参照Nico Nico Douga写的...其实没有先例也不好借鉴囧
还有呜哇啊在Bili上也投了这作 况且我是从B站拖的video 所以...
eikkaleyd
Hell....lol

[Insane]
00:13:820 (1,2,1) - 这样的间距看上去很坑爹,以为是一样的00:20:629 (3) - CTRL+R
00:22:332 (10) - 和9间距太小

不行笑趴了……

[Ex]
00:27:061 (3) - 加翻转一次
00:29:897 (8,9,10,11,12) - 绝对看不见……

[Hard]
00:49:381 (1,2,3,4) - 全都往上一格
某些地方和EX IN没多大区别……

听不下去了,目测NM和EZ没什么……【坑爹mod对不起…… :o
wmfchris
~

- Try audio lead-in 2000 since it starts at 0.2 seconds after mp3 starts and 1700ms preparing time might not be sufficient.
- Tag cantonese.

[Insane]
00:17:414 (5) - NC this because the spacing can't be determined by previous (2,3,4).
00:19:873 - NC should be put every 2 beats refer to music, so they should be put at 00:19:873 - and 00:20:629 - . It makes spacing change clearer too.
00:30:654 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I feel like you should make these two streams parallel...
00:44:274 (4) - I'll suggest moving this downward a bit so that (5)'s ending is clearly visible despite (4)'s hitbrust.
01:11:323 - if you are streamming in the finish I'll suggest adding one here to stay consistent with the music because the beginning of spinner has no sound.
創意不錯 只是感覺不錯細節的地方可以改善一下 而且spacing有點混亂 ._.

[EX]
00:08:712 (2) - NC this because no one knows it's a slow slider
00:10:604 - add a note here like 00:09:847 -
00:18:738 (2,3,4) - use spacing like 00:19:494 (5,6,7) - to make the separation clear and consistent?
00:26:493 (2) - there should be 3 ticks only
00:35:383 - useless timeline?!?
00:44:841 (3) - this slow slider is misleading and unrankable
00:56:190 (1,2,3,4,5) - a star shape provides equal spacings
01:09:431 - I guess the "what is your shit" shouts last to here
01:11:417 (1) - this is too short, even rankable, and try to make it 1/4 eariler
A bit messy because the 1/2 and 1/4 spacing always change (in particular, small-spacing against holding)

[Hard]
00:38:032 (6) - try curving it upwards to blanket (8)?
00:55:434 (5) - you can change the curvature so that it's symmetrical with (6) like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/342255

[Normal]
00:08:523 (4,1) - [Nazi] 如果是打橫/打直的移動 對齊一下會好看點 例如 00:08:145 - slider在y:45的地方完 00:08:523 (4) - 這個可以在y:45開始
00:25:547 (2) - [Nazi] left 1 grid lv4 for exact spacing

hitsound的擺放正正常常沒問題 可是美感不妨下點功夫 比如[Easy]00:18:359 (1) - 明明可以放個對稱slider 就不用弄歪了 或都把有必要對齊的notes對齊一下~
Topic Starter
a32

eikkaleyd wrote:

Hell....lol

[Insane]
00:13:820 (1,2,1) - 这样的间距看上去很坑爹,以为是一样的 感觉还好吧...
00:20:629 (3) - CTRL+R嗯...变得略难打了
00:22:332 (10) - 和9间距太小 fixed

不行笑趴了……

[Ex]
00:27:061 (3) - 加翻转一次 fixed!
00:29:897 (8,9,10,11,12) - 绝对看不见…… 感觉还好~

[Hard]
00:49:381 (1,2,3,4) - 全都往上一格
某些地方和EX IN没多大区别……

听不下去了,目测NM和EZ没什么……【坑爹mod对不起…… :o
Thanks for modding~

wmfchris wrote:

~

- Try audio lead-in 2000 since it starts at 0.2 seconds after mp3 starts and 1700ms preparing time might not be sufficient. fixed~
- Tag cantonese. 这tag感觉没法写...

[Insane]
00:17:414 (5) - NC this because the spacing can't be determined by previous (2,3,4). fixed
00:19:873 - NC should be put every 2 beats refer to music, so they should be put at 00:19:873 - and 00:20:629 - . It makes spacing change clearer too.fixed
00:30:654 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I feel like you should make these two streams parallel... I think it's fine...
00:44:274 (4) - I'll suggest moving this downward a bit so that (5)'s ending is clearly visible despite (4)'s hitbrust.fixed
01:11:323 - if you are streamming in the finish I'll suggest adding one here to stay consistent with the music because the beginning of spinner has no sound.fixed
創意不錯 只是感覺不錯細節的地方可以改善一下 而且spacing有點混亂 ._.

[EX]
00:08:712 (2) - NC this because no one knows it's a slow slider
00:10:604 - add a note here like 00:09:847 -
00:18:738 (2,3,4) - use spacing like 00:19:494 (5,6,7) - to make the separation clear and consistent?
00:26:493 (2) - there should be 3 ticks only
00:35:383 - useless timeline?!?
00:44:841 (3) - this slow slider is misleading and unrankable
00:56:190 (1,2,3,4,5) - a star shape provides equal spacings
01:09:431 - I guess the "what is your shit" shouts last to here
01:11:417 (1) - this is too short, even rankable, and try to make it 1/4 eariler
A bit messy because the 1/2 and 1/4 spacing always change (in particular, small-spacing against holding)

[Hard]
00:38:032 (6) - try curving it upwards to blanket (8)?sorry...I think it's fine
00:55:434 (5) - you can change the curvature so that it's symmetrical with (6) like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/342255 I didn't change the slider,but I made it as you said~

[Normal]
00:08:523 (4,1) - [Nazi] 如果是打橫/打直的移動 對齊一下會好看點 例如 00:08:145 - slider在y:45的地方完 00:08:523 (4) - 這個可以在y:45開始
00:25:547 (2) - [Nazi] left 1 grid lv4 for exact spacing

hitsound的擺放正正常常沒問題 可是美感不妨下點功夫 比如[Easy]00:18:359 (1) - 明明可以放個對稱slider 就不用弄歪了 或都把有必要對齊的notes對齊一下~
Thanks for modding~(I also changed the world's part since he is too lazy
Leorda
Bilibili? Never heard them.....

[General]
* I am not sure if this video is safe, because the video part at 00:18:359 and 00:36:140. You should ask MAT about that (I want to ask, but I don't have time >.<)


[Normal]
00:24:034 (4) - Spacing?
00:34:248 (5,6,1) - These distance spacing is 0,90x? Any reason?
01:03:757 (1) - Spacing?


[Insane]
00:11:550 (5) - It's confusing if there is a jump in previous pattern and this is a 0,5x slider. I suggest you to new combo here


[ExStage]
00:05:308 (2,3) - Not stack correctly with tail slider in gameplay... (look at test mode if you want to see the proof)
00:48:246 (3,4) - ^
01:12:458 (1) - While default spinner is red-orange-yellow, this possibly hidden for them. Do the colorhax by doing this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/348569


Once you already ask MAT about video, forum PM me
spboxer3
I think you should add 15+ in your creator's words~



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Topic Starter
a32

Leorda wrote:

Bilibili? Never heard them.....It's an ACG video site like niconico~

[General]
* I am not sure if this video is safe, because the video part at 00:18:359 and 00:36:140. You should ask MAT about that (I want to ask, but I don't have time >.<)As sp3boxer pointed out,I'd add warning in the creator's words~


[Normal]
00:24:034 (4) - Spacing?
00:34:248 (5,6,1) - These distance spacing is 0,90x? Any reason?
01:03:757 (1) - Spacing?


[Insane]
00:11:550 (5) - It's confusing if there is a jump in previous pattern and this is a 0,5x slider. I suggest you to new combo here


[ExStage]
00:05:308 (2,3) - Not stack correctly with tail slider in gameplay... (look at test mode if you want to see the proof)
00:48:246 (3,4) - ^
01:12:458 (1) - While default spinner is red-orange-yellow, this possibly hidden for them. Do the colorhax by doing this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/348569
Yeah~All fixed in all diffs!

Once you already ask MAT about video, forum PM me
Thanks a lot for modding~
DarknessAngel
好喜感
快rank xD
Topic Starter
a32

DarknessAngel wrote:

好喜感
快rank xD
谢谢支持lol
Leorda
Oh, sorry for delay, because I'm busy for modding ;_;

Bubbled
Topic Starter
a32

Leorda wrote:

Oh, sorry for delay, because I'm busy for modding ;_;

Bubbled
Thanks a lot Leo~
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
好球!
SapphireGhost
Good to see you again!

[General]
- The background quality is very poor, you should find or make a better one.
- What's Bilibili Douga?

[Insane]
00:06:253 (7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - It'd make more sense to add a new combo to (7) and take a new combo off of (1). Also, the spacing here is very high, not really fun to play. A somewhat lower spacing would be better.
00:07:767 (1,2,3,1) - Really wasn't expecting 2.0x slider velocity here. Try 1.5x or something like that.
00:14:387 (1,2,3) - Shouldn't this combo be yellow?
00:17:603 (2,3,4,5) - The stacking here was confusing to read, see here. Try something like this instead?
00:20:629 (1,2) - 4.40x spacing doesn't seem like a good idea here.
00:56:947 (5,6,7,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - It'd look nicer to space these out more so there is no overlap between the (1)s and (4).

[ExStage]
00:08:712 (1) - Not necessary to have such a big slowdown here, try 1.0x or 0.75x?
00:12:306 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Spacing between the stacks should be higher, it makes it more readable.
00:29:897 (8,9,10,11,12) - Stuff like this is confusing to read, just try to keep it in a straight line?

The easier difficulties seem fine. The Insanes are very odd, though, so I'll probably just rebubble afterwards. Hope this is useful.
Topic Starter
a32

SapphireGhost wrote:

Good to see you again!

[General]
- The background quality is very poor, you should find or make a better one. Well...It's really hard to find a suitable BG for this song...I'm not going to change it now but I may find a better BG later> <
- What's Bilibili Douga?

[Insane]
00:06:253 (7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - It'd make more sense to add a new combo to (7) and take a new combo off of (1). Also, the spacing here is very high, not really fun to play. A somewhat lower spacing would be better.Yeah I made the changes on NC,but I won't change the huge spacing since they are not too hard to play~
00:07:767 (1,2,3,1) - Really wasn't expecting 2.0x slider velocity here. Try 1.5x or something like that.Sorry but I think they are clear enough...
00:14:387 (1,2,3) - Shouldn't this combo be yellow? :D Oh yeah,fixed.
00:17:603 (2,3,4,5) - The stacking here was confusing to read, see here. Try something like this instead?Nice~Changed
00:20:629 (1,2) - 4.40x spacing doesn't seem like a good idea here. Made some change here~
00:56:947 (5,6,7,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - It'd look nicer to space these out more so there is no overlap between the (1)s and (4). I can't understand exactly but I tried to make some changes~

[ExStage]
00:08:712 (1) - Not necessary to have such a big slowdown here, try 1.0x or 0.75x?
00:12:306 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Spacing between the stacks should be higher, it makes it more readable.
00:29:897 (8,9,10,11,12) - Stuff like this is confusing to read, just try to keep it in a straight line?
Fixed all in this diff~
The easier difficulties seem fine. The Insanes are very odd, though, so I'll probably just rebubble afterwards. Hope this is useful.
Thanks a lot for giving such a useful modding,Sapphire~
SapphireGhost
Alright, it seems better now. More MAT/BAT opinions would be good, so here's your rebubble for now.
Rebubbled!
Topic Starter
a32

SapphireGhost wrote:

Alright, it seems better now. More MAT/BAT opinions would be good, so here's your rebubble for now.
Rebubbled!
Yeah~Thanks a lot Sapphire!
Breeze
[Insane]

  1. 00:15:522 (2,3,4) and 00:16:279 (2,3,4) - These notes are hard to tell they are 1/4 beat space, reduce spacing would be better, like 00:17:035 (2,3,4)
Only this, send me a forum PM when you have reply
Topic Starter
a32

Breeze wrote:

[Insane]

  1. 00:15:522 (2,3,4) and 00:16:279 (2,3,4) - These notes are hard to tell they are 1/4 beat space, reduce spacing would be better, like 00:17:035 (2,3,4)
Only this, send me a forum PM when you have reply
Fixed~多谢微风了~
Breeze
Fine
HourglassO
哎哟我操居然rank了
前排抢榜
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
好!
Smilex3_old
Great Map :D
Topic Starter
a32
Thanks a lot Breeze~
(你们好快lol
HourglassO
ExStage SS #1
Topic Starter
a32

HourglassO wrote:

ExStage SS #1
哇 FVD好触www
eikkaleyd
(´・ω・`) 吓坏了
Cygnus
seriously?!?!
Scorpiour
哈哈哈哈淡定不能great rank!
Topic Starter
a32

eikkaleyd wrote:

(´・ω・`) 吓坏了
葛叔很萌的不要黑他> <
x847606653
恭喜RANK一发,葛叔我的爱>__>
spboxer3
惡俗
Strawberry
:) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
L_P
哈哈哈哈
DarknessAngel
nice ranked xDDDD
Yume_old_old

DarknessAngel wrote:

nice ranked xDDDD
Sure
00:20:629 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Damn I can't read these :(
IkkiMinami
:D
HourglassO
oh 目害
EXTRA开HD打了100PC未果
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