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lkx_shore wrote:

只求把insane最后一个note去掉
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Cygnus
  • General
  1. Inconsistent Kiai Times. [Insane] and [ExStage] Diff's 1st Kiai should end on 00:36:518 like the other diffs.

  2. Not sure about this but maybe add Nico Nico Douga in Tags.

  3. You have one of the weirdest BG, try to look for something that is clearer.

  4. 1,500 as Audio Lead-In I believe would be enough for this one.

  • Easy
  1. 00:02:849 (4) - Move one grid down and left to maintain spacing.

  2. 00:05:875 (4) - Please try to avoid this note from overlapping the next note.

  3. 00:11:928 (4) - One grid up to maintain spacing.

  4. 00:13:441 (3) - One grid down and right to avoid the overlap and maintain spacing.

  5. 00:17:603 (5,6,1) - use grid snap .8 and fix the spacing of these notes.

  6. 00:19:494 (2) - One grid right.

  7. Well I'm off for this diff, there's just too many inconsistent spacing, did you even used distance snap for this one? :O Try to look for those inconsistent spacings, call me back if you think all of them are fixed then i'll do a short recheck.

  8. Overall Difficulty +1

  • Normal
  1. 00:58:649 (3) - There's no beat happening here so I guess you should delete this circle. Also, fix the spacing surrounding this note.

  • Hard
  1. 00:02:849 (5,6) - Please move this away from the previous note for better gameplay.

  2. 00:16:468 (2,3) - Move one grid right to maintain spacing.

  3. 00:28:857 (10) - Delete this note to reduce the stream. Keep in mind, this is a hard diff.

  4. 00:32:546 (1,2) - These notes are so hard to read especially cause they overlap with the next slider. I suggest you move these two notes a grid down, depends how much you want so that players can read it better. Also, try to stack (1) with the end of slider (3).

  5. Oh it's still wip. orz. :o

  • Insane
  1. Idk about this. D:

  2. 00:08:523 (1) - Remove new combo.

  3. 00:09:091 (1) - Remove new combo. Then add new combo on the next note after this.

  4. 00:14:955 (3) - Move this away from the previous notes. Players will be confused because it's so near.

  5. I can't mod this. :?

  • ExStage
  1. 00:51:272 (1) - A new combo here is not really necessary. Remove it.

  2. 01:03:000 (1) - A weird slider. I suggest make the circle part of this slider bigger.
lkx_Shore
纯play后感想

Easy
00:05:308 - 求添加note,有音乐但不能按感觉很不爽 .
00:16:846 (4) - 建议换成滑条拉到(5)处,不然同不爽.

Normal
感觉挺好的

ExStage
00:15:995 (8) - 求接到滑条上
00:16:846 (1) - 换成滑条到(2)处?
00:30:182 (11) - 转折巨不爽;_;
01:00:352 (4) - Stack Leniency的原因叠着不爽
01:12:458 (1) - 建议音效换成finish

Insane
00:54:961 (4) - 不知为何只觉得这里间距真的不爽

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I'm so not happy D:
popner
Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[General]
Kiai不一致,统一一下

[Easy]
00:05:497 (4) - 为什么这里空一下,要空拍的话00:05:875比较好吧?
00:12:306 (1,3) - 稍微overlap到一点
00:22:332 (2) - 我觉得Easy还是最好不要用红线note
00:30:465 (1,2) - 不好看,修改一下?http://puu.sh/wHlh

[Normal]
00:15:333 (1,3) - 对称?
00:28:952 (4) - 折返?可以避免红线note,简单一些
00:34:248 (5) - 开grid3/4调一下spacing...

[Hard]
00:32:546 (1,2,3) - 貌似不可读?可能会读成圈-短滑条-短滑条
01:08:296 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Hard放长串大丈夫?

其他难度太鬼畜了= =感觉Ex比Insane好一点

That's all I can find. GL~
Colin Hou
bilibili douga是什么... 难道不是bilibili.tv么

以及这鬼畜是acfun.tv的呜哇啊做的/
Topic Starter
a32
Fixed some,thanks!(I'm too lazy to write reply this time orz

Colin Hou wrote:

bilibili douga是什么... 难道不是bilibili.tv么

以及这鬼畜是acfun.tv的呜哇啊做的/
我这是参照Nico Nico Douga写的...其实没有先例也不好借鉴囧
还有呜哇啊在Bili上也投了这作 况且我是从B站拖的video 所以...
eikkaleyd
Hell....lol

[Insane]
00:13:820 (1,2,1) - 这样的间距看上去很坑爹,以为是一样的00:20:629 (3) - CTRL+R
00:22:332 (10) - 和9间距太小

不行笑趴了……

[Ex]
00:27:061 (3) - 加翻转一次
00:29:897 (8,9,10,11,12) - 绝对看不见……

[Hard]
00:49:381 (1,2,3,4) - 全都往上一格
某些地方和EX IN没多大区别……

听不下去了,目测NM和EZ没什么……【坑爹mod对不起…… :o
wmfchris
~

- Try audio lead-in 2000 since it starts at 0.2 seconds after mp3 starts and 1700ms preparing time might not be sufficient.
- Tag cantonese.

[Insane]
00:17:414 (5) - NC this because the spacing can't be determined by previous (2,3,4).
00:19:873 - NC should be put every 2 beats refer to music, so they should be put at 00:19:873 - and 00:20:629 - . It makes spacing change clearer too.
00:30:654 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I feel like you should make these two streams parallel...
00:44:274 (4) - I'll suggest moving this downward a bit so that (5)'s ending is clearly visible despite (4)'s hitbrust.
01:11:323 - if you are streamming in the finish I'll suggest adding one here to stay consistent with the music because the beginning of spinner has no sound.
創意不錯 只是感覺不錯細節的地方可以改善一下 而且spacing有點混亂 ._.

[EX]
00:08:712 (2) - NC this because no one knows it's a slow slider
00:10:604 - add a note here like 00:09:847 -
00:18:738 (2,3,4) - use spacing like 00:19:494 (5,6,7) - to make the separation clear and consistent?
00:26:493 (2) - there should be 3 ticks only
00:35:383 - useless timeline?!?
00:44:841 (3) - this slow slider is misleading and unrankable
00:56:190 (1,2,3,4,5) - a star shape provides equal spacings
01:09:431 - I guess the "what is your shit" shouts last to here
01:11:417 (1) - this is too short, even rankable, and try to make it 1/4 eariler
A bit messy because the 1/2 and 1/4 spacing always change (in particular, small-spacing against holding)

[Hard]
00:38:032 (6) - try curving it upwards to blanket (8)?
00:55:434 (5) - you can change the curvature so that it's symmetrical with (6) like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/342255

[Normal]
00:08:523 (4,1) - [Nazi] 如果是打橫/打直的移動 對齊一下會好看點 例如 00:08:145 - slider在y:45的地方完 00:08:523 (4) - 這個可以在y:45開始
00:25:547 (2) - [Nazi] left 1 grid lv4 for exact spacing

hitsound的擺放正正常常沒問題 可是美感不妨下點功夫 比如[Easy]00:18:359 (1) - 明明可以放個對稱slider 就不用弄歪了 或都把有必要對齊的notes對齊一下~
Topic Starter
a32

eikkaleyd wrote:

Hell....lol

[Insane]
00:13:820 (1,2,1) - 这样的间距看上去很坑爹,以为是一样的 感觉还好吧...
00:20:629 (3) - CTRL+R嗯...变得略难打了
00:22:332 (10) - 和9间距太小 fixed

不行笑趴了……

[Ex]
00:27:061 (3) - 加翻转一次 fixed!
00:29:897 (8,9,10,11,12) - 绝对看不见…… 感觉还好~

[Hard]
00:49:381 (1,2,3,4) - 全都往上一格
某些地方和EX IN没多大区别……

听不下去了,目测NM和EZ没什么……【坑爹mod对不起…… :o
Thanks for modding~

wmfchris wrote:

~

- Try audio lead-in 2000 since it starts at 0.2 seconds after mp3 starts and 1700ms preparing time might not be sufficient. fixed~
- Tag cantonese. 这tag感觉没法写...

[Insane]
00:17:414 (5) - NC this because the spacing can't be determined by previous (2,3,4). fixed
00:19:873 - NC should be put every 2 beats refer to music, so they should be put at 00:19:873 - and 00:20:629 - . It makes spacing change clearer too.fixed
00:30:654 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I feel like you should make these two streams parallel... I think it's fine...
00:44:274 (4) - I'll suggest moving this downward a bit so that (5)'s ending is clearly visible despite (4)'s hitbrust.fixed
01:11:323 - if you are streamming in the finish I'll suggest adding one here to stay consistent with the music because the beginning of spinner has no sound.fixed
創意不錯 只是感覺不錯細節的地方可以改善一下 而且spacing有點混亂 ._.

[EX]
00:08:712 (2) - NC this because no one knows it's a slow slider
00:10:604 - add a note here like 00:09:847 -
00:18:738 (2,3,4) - use spacing like 00:19:494 (5,6,7) - to make the separation clear and consistent?
00:26:493 (2) - there should be 3 ticks only
00:35:383 - useless timeline?!?
00:44:841 (3) - this slow slider is misleading and unrankable
00:56:190 (1,2,3,4,5) - a star shape provides equal spacings
01:09:431 - I guess the "what is your shit" shouts last to here
01:11:417 (1) - this is too short, even rankable, and try to make it 1/4 eariler
A bit messy because the 1/2 and 1/4 spacing always change (in particular, small-spacing against holding)

[Hard]
00:38:032 (6) - try curving it upwards to blanket (8)?sorry...I think it's fine
00:55:434 (5) - you can change the curvature so that it's symmetrical with (6) like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/342255 I didn't change the slider,but I made it as you said~

[Normal]
00:08:523 (4,1) - [Nazi] 如果是打橫/打直的移動 對齊一下會好看點 例如 00:08:145 - slider在y:45的地方完 00:08:523 (4) - 這個可以在y:45開始
00:25:547 (2) - [Nazi] left 1 grid lv4 for exact spacing

hitsound的擺放正正常常沒問題 可是美感不妨下點功夫 比如[Easy]00:18:359 (1) - 明明可以放個對稱slider 就不用弄歪了 或都把有必要對齊的notes對齊一下~
Thanks for modding~(I also changed the world's part since he is too lazy
Leorda
Bilibili? Never heard them.....

[General]
* I am not sure if this video is safe, because the video part at 00:18:359 and 00:36:140. You should ask MAT about that (I want to ask, but I don't have time >.<)


[Normal]
00:24:034 (4) - Spacing?
00:34:248 (5,6,1) - These distance spacing is 0,90x? Any reason?
01:03:757 (1) - Spacing?


[Insane]
00:11:550 (5) - It's confusing if there is a jump in previous pattern and this is a 0,5x slider. I suggest you to new combo here


[ExStage]
00:05:308 (2,3) - Not stack correctly with tail slider in gameplay... (look at test mode if you want to see the proof)
00:48:246 (3,4) - ^
01:12:458 (1) - While default spinner is red-orange-yellow, this possibly hidden for them. Do the colorhax by doing this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/348569


Once you already ask MAT about video, forum PM me
spboxer3
I think you should add 15+ in your creator's words~



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Topic Starter
a32

Leorda wrote:

Bilibili? Never heard them.....It's an ACG video site like niconico~

[General]
* I am not sure if this video is safe, because the video part at 00:18:359 and 00:36:140. You should ask MAT about that (I want to ask, but I don't have time >.<)As sp3boxer pointed out,I'd add warning in the creator's words~


[Normal]
00:24:034 (4) - Spacing?
00:34:248 (5,6,1) - These distance spacing is 0,90x? Any reason?
01:03:757 (1) - Spacing?


[Insane]
00:11:550 (5) - It's confusing if there is a jump in previous pattern and this is a 0,5x slider. I suggest you to new combo here


[ExStage]
00:05:308 (2,3) - Not stack correctly with tail slider in gameplay... (look at test mode if you want to see the proof)
00:48:246 (3,4) - ^
01:12:458 (1) - While default spinner is red-orange-yellow, this possibly hidden for them. Do the colorhax by doing this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/348569
Yeah~All fixed in all diffs!

Once you already ask MAT about video, forum PM me
Thanks a lot for modding~
DarknessAngel
好喜感
快rank xD
Topic Starter
a32

DarknessAngel wrote:

好喜感
快rank xD
谢谢支持lol
Leorda
Oh, sorry for delay, because I'm busy for modding ;_;

Bubbled
Topic Starter
a32

Leorda wrote:

Oh, sorry for delay, because I'm busy for modding ;_;

Bubbled
Thanks a lot Leo~
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
好球!
SapphireGhost
Good to see you again!

[General]
- The background quality is very poor, you should find or make a better one.
- What's Bilibili Douga?

[Insane]
00:06:253 (7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - It'd make more sense to add a new combo to (7) and take a new combo off of (1). Also, the spacing here is very high, not really fun to play. A somewhat lower spacing would be better.
00:07:767 (1,2,3,1) - Really wasn't expecting 2.0x slider velocity here. Try 1.5x or something like that.
00:14:387 (1,2,3) - Shouldn't this combo be yellow?
00:17:603 (2,3,4,5) - The stacking here was confusing to read, see here. Try something like this instead?
00:20:629 (1,2) - 4.40x spacing doesn't seem like a good idea here.
00:56:947 (5,6,7,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - It'd look nicer to space these out more so there is no overlap between the (1)s and (4).

[ExStage]
00:08:712 (1) - Not necessary to have such a big slowdown here, try 1.0x or 0.75x?
00:12:306 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Spacing between the stacks should be higher, it makes it more readable.
00:29:897 (8,9,10,11,12) - Stuff like this is confusing to read, just try to keep it in a straight line?

The easier difficulties seem fine. The Insanes are very odd, though, so I'll probably just rebubble afterwards. Hope this is useful.
Topic Starter
a32

SapphireGhost wrote:

Good to see you again!

[General]
- The background quality is very poor, you should find or make a better one. Well...It's really hard to find a suitable BG for this song...I'm not going to change it now but I may find a better BG later> <
- What's Bilibili Douga?

[Insane]
00:06:253 (7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - It'd make more sense to add a new combo to (7) and take a new combo off of (1). Also, the spacing here is very high, not really fun to play. A somewhat lower spacing would be better.Yeah I made the changes on NC,but I won't change the huge spacing since they are not too hard to play~
00:07:767 (1,2,3,1) - Really wasn't expecting 2.0x slider velocity here. Try 1.5x or something like that.Sorry but I think they are clear enough...
00:14:387 (1,2,3) - Shouldn't this combo be yellow? :D Oh yeah,fixed.
00:17:603 (2,3,4,5) - The stacking here was confusing to read, see here. Try something like this instead?Nice~Changed
00:20:629 (1,2) - 4.40x spacing doesn't seem like a good idea here. Made some change here~
00:56:947 (5,6,7,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - It'd look nicer to space these out more so there is no overlap between the (1)s and (4). I can't understand exactly but I tried to make some changes~

[ExStage]
00:08:712 (1) - Not necessary to have such a big slowdown here, try 1.0x or 0.75x?
00:12:306 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Spacing between the stacks should be higher, it makes it more readable.
00:29:897 (8,9,10,11,12) - Stuff like this is confusing to read, just try to keep it in a straight line?
Fixed all in this diff~
The easier difficulties seem fine. The Insanes are very odd, though, so I'll probably just rebubble afterwards. Hope this is useful.
Thanks a lot for giving such a useful modding,Sapphire~
SapphireGhost
Alright, it seems better now. More MAT/BAT opinions would be good, so here's your rebubble for now.
Rebubbled!
Topic Starter
a32

SapphireGhost wrote:

Alright, it seems better now. More MAT/BAT opinions would be good, so here's your rebubble for now.
Rebubbled!
Yeah~Thanks a lot Sapphire!
Breeze
[Insane]

  1. 00:15:522 (2,3,4) and 00:16:279 (2,3,4) - These notes are hard to tell they are 1/4 beat space, reduce spacing would be better, like 00:17:035 (2,3,4)
Only this, send me a forum PM when you have reply
Topic Starter
a32

Breeze wrote:

[Insane]

  1. 00:15:522 (2,3,4) and 00:16:279 (2,3,4) - These notes are hard to tell they are 1/4 beat space, reduce spacing would be better, like 00:17:035 (2,3,4)
Only this, send me a forum PM when you have reply
Fixed~多谢微风了~
Breeze
Fine
HourglassO
哎哟我操居然rank了
前排抢榜
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
好!
Smilex3_old
Great Map :D
Topic Starter
a32
Thanks a lot Breeze~
(你们好快lol
HourglassO
ExStage SS #1
Topic Starter
a32

HourglassO wrote:

ExStage SS #1
哇 FVD好触www
eikkaleyd
(´・ω・`) 吓坏了
Cygnus
seriously?!?!
Scorpiour
哈哈哈哈淡定不能great rank!
Topic Starter
a32

eikkaleyd wrote:

(´・ω・`) 吓坏了
葛叔很萌的不要黑他> <
x847606653
恭喜RANK一发,葛叔我的爱>__>
spboxer3
惡俗
Strawberry
:) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
L_P
哈哈哈哈
DarknessAngel
nice ranked xDDDD
Yume_old_old

DarknessAngel wrote:

nice ranked xDDDD
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