i think this is quite good
just modding hard, but
i think there're something going wrong in this, i just have fix suggestions for the beats
00:27:77 (6) - replace with a slider, end at 00:28:164
00:30:85 (7) - ^
00:33:16 (4,5,6,1) - i think this part needs rearranging, i suggest make (5) a single circle, remove (6) and (1), add a slider start at 00:33:741 and end at 00:34:318
00:40:08 (6) - same to 00:27:77 (6)
00:43:16 (5) - ^
00:48:16 (2,3) - make it a slider
choruspart
01:02:20 (2) - move to 01:02:267 (1/3 tick)
01:04:31 (1) - remove that, add 2 sliders (01:04:318-01:04:703) and (01:04:895-01:05:280)
01:08:35 (3) - same to 01:02:20 (2)
01:09:51 (7) - ^
01:10:66 (2,3) - remove them, add note on 01:10:856 and slider (01:11:049-01:11:433)
01:11:81 (5) - remove
01:14:51 (1,2,3,4) - the original rhythm in the song is 01:14:51 (1) - 01:14:63 (2) - 01:14:89 (3) (1/6 ticks)
01:15:27 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - ^
01:18:54 (2) - should be 01:18:48 (2) (1/3tick)
01:20:47 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 01:20:66 (2) should be 01:20:72 (2) (1/3tick), and so is (4,6,8), i suggest make 4 sliders like (01:20:47-01:20:72)
01:23:54 (1) - end at 01:25:792 and add notes on 01:25:856 and 01:26:626
rest
same as above
i think it's very important to catch the original beats in the music precisely. the beats you create must have something to do with the music and don't go against it
if your answer is something like ' I'M A FREE MAPPER! ' then just go ahead.