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GbL

Lizbeth wrote:

GbL thanks for checking and for the diff... :D but just one thing... if u could make different the parts on your diff that are similar to Hard... cause is feeling like the same map in some parts. it ll be cool if your diff is way different. what do u think?
if u dont have time, ill understand..
btw... background is pretty cool... :)

cya! ;)
I do understand and i did some modd. :)

Download: Avril Lavigne - Complicated (Lizbeth) [GbL's Difficulty].osu
itachi666
te recomiendo ke renombres y elimines... mira la cancion que esta en normal esta super facil cualkier noob la hace... la deberias de pasar a easy... y la de HARD a normal.. la cancion esta super padre y lleva el ritmo.. asaber porke no te la apruebamn.
Topic Starter
Lizbeth
gracias por tu comentario itachi666 :) pero lo dejare asi... el normal tiene 3.86 de star difficulty, creo que esta bien para un normal. y la verdad que esta cancion es tan calmada que no quiero hacer otro hard mas dificil que el que ya tengo.
ademas por tu rank, puede que te lo encuentres muy facil... pero no creo que un noob pase muy facilmente ese normal.
:) igual gracias por chekear el mapa
bye!
Lissette
u welcome Liz, the skin looks great ^_^
and i like the new diff :)

Star!! n.n
Ruduen
Easy:
00:58:933: I feel like the spinner could go on for another half note.

Normal:
00:36:818: Probably shorten this one so it ends on the beat, instead of going slightly over the tick.
00:48:645: ^
00:58:933: Opposite of easy for some reason, feel like this could be shortened half a note.
01:53:741: Again, shorten it a half note so it's on the tick.

Can't really find anything huge with the other difficulties, though. Good job with the map.

Starred.
Topic Starter
Lizbeth
thanks for modding Ruduen
fixed everything :D
GbL
Nice skin Lissette, i looked now. :D And nice work Lizbeth. :)
mosluv
You can ignore my spinner comments since there are no rules in the guidelines against it, but I've seen BAT's tell people to make it so auto gets 2000.

GbL:
00:37:78 (1) - I'm pretty sure this is not rankable. Auto should be able to get 2000 bonus on it.
00:40:85 (1) - ^
01:21:24 (5) - Align with 3.
01:55:85 (x) - Add a note here?
01:56:43 (x) - ^
02:05:27 (1) - Extend to the white tick.
02:21:62 (2,3,4) - Align with 1.
02:29:60 (1) - I'm pretty sure this is not rankable. Auto should be able to get 2000 bonus on it.
02:30:28 (1) - ^
03:33:54 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Remove these? They sound bad and would be better if the spinner was the last thing.

Good job on the map and skin! Have a star :)!
GbL

Nexy wrote:

You can ignore my spinner comments since there are no rules in the guidelines against it, but I've seen BAT's tell people to make it so auto gets 2000.

GbL:
00:37:78 (1) - I'm pretty sure this is not rankable. Auto should be able to get 2000 bonus on it.
00:40:85 (1) - ^
01:21:24 (5) - Align with 3.
01:55:85 (x) - Add a note here?
01:56:43 (x) - ^
02:05:27 (1) - Extend to the white tick.
02:21:62 (2,3,4) - Align with 1.
02:29:60 (1) - I'm pretty sure this is not rankable. Auto should be able to get 2000 bonus on it.
02:30:28 (1) - ^
03:33:54 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Remove these? They sound bad and would be better if the spinner was the last thing.

Good job on the map and skin! Have a star :)!
I make all your suggestions, thank you.
Here is Lizbeth:

Download: Avril Lavigne - Complicated (Lizbeth) [GbL's Difficulty].osu
GabrielRKF
great song
great skin
great gameplay!
i saw anything wrong, it's just perfect now
*STAR*
Topic Starter
Lizbeth
thnx for checking roxkyuubiforever :)

GbL wrote:

Nexy wrote:

You can ignore my spinner comments since there are no rules in the guidelines against it, but I've seen BAT's tell people to make it so auto gets 2000.

GbL:
00:37:78 (1) - I'm pretty sure this is not rankable. Auto should be able to get 2000 bonus on it.
00:40:85 (1) - ^
01:21:24 (5) - Align with 3.
01:55:85 (x) - Add a note here?
01:56:43 (x) - ^
02:05:27 (1) - Extend to the white tick.
02:21:62 (2,3,4) - Align with 1.
02:29:60 (1) - I'm pretty sure this is not rankable. Auto should be able to get 2000 bonus on it.
02:30:28 (1) - ^
03:33:54 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Remove these? They sound bad and would be better if the spinner was the last thing.

Good job on the map and skin! Have a star :)!
I make all your suggestions, thank you.
Here is Lizbeth:

thnx for modding Nexy. :)
GbL i havent upload yet.. cuz im no in my pc right know... but tonight ill update, with the fixes.:)


thnx all for helping... and for taking your time checking :)



EDIT: Uploaded
Linox_old
Lizbeth, sou amigo do GBL, prazer ^^

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Mapa muito bom, parabens ^^
Yuukari-Banteki
[Easy]
very metronomic...all of the beats are in the exact same rhythm, every other white tick...so boring
02:03:54 (3) - OMG VARIETY! ITS A MIRACLE
really though your map feels like it has no soul :/


[Normal]
00:58:93 (1) - finish
01:08:93 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - too much whistle
01:23:54 (1) - finish
02:00:47 (5) - new combo
03:05:85 (7) - finish
map still feels kinda boring


[Hard]
01:23:54 (1) - finish
imo all your diffs could use finishes at the end of the musical phrases
03:05:85 (7) - finish



[Gbl]
00:25:85 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - uhhh...spacing?
00:38:93 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:42:01 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
you cant DO that it has to be proportional to the time. if you want jumps, make a new combo :<
GbL

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Gbl]
00:25:85 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - uhhh...spacing? fix
00:38:93 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ fix
00:42:01 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ fix
Download: Avril Lavigne - Complicated (Lizbeth) [GbL's Difficulty].osu
Topic Starter
Lizbeth
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
tsuka
oh nice map and my favotite song!

as I see, the GBL's diffi is similar to hard diffi

it's mix diffi?

anyway star!
Topic Starter
Lizbeth

tsukamaete wrote:

oh nice map and my favotite song!

as I see, the GBL's diffi is similar to hard diffi

it's mix diffi?

anyway star!
one of my favorite songs too °¬°

and yeah GBL's diff is based on my Hard n_n

thanks for starrin' :)
Sleep Powder
[Easy]
Lower hitsound volume a bit
00:48:93 (2) - I expected a finish at the end
00:51:24 (4) - ^ finish at beginning and end
Its optional though
01:10:47 (4) - Clap at the end instead?
01:32:01 (4) - Align with 2 maybe? symmetry?
02:06:62 (1) - Finish?
02:22:01 (5) - Align with 3 maybe? symmetry? align 2 with 4
02:49:70 (7) - Align with 5

I like how easy it is~

[GBL]
00:12:78 (1) - Hitsound the end of the sliders maybe?
00:18:16 (x) - Note here?
00:48:74 (4) - Spacing is too far
00:53:74 (2) - This jumps doesn't feel right
01:02:01 (1,2,3,4) - This stack sounds off timed...
01:02:39 (x) - Maybe add a note here?
01:03:93 (x) - ^
01:25:08 (1) - Nice slider...but it needs to end earlier on the white tick
02:13:16 (x) - Add note here
02:14:31 (x) - Add note here
02:16:62 (x) - ^ then adjust spinner timing and length
02:29:60 (1) - Whistle here?
02:58:83 (8) - Move to red tick to the left?

[Hard]
00:39:51 (4) - add a whistle on 4 and 6
02:48:74 (5) - whistle on 5 and 7

[Normal]
01:03:54 (7,8) - symmetry with 5 and 6?

Honestly I thought some parts didn't seem mapped right...but I would consider thinking of changing your hitsound patterns at least.
I still starr'd it of course
:)
Topic Starter
Lizbeth
thanks for helping Animask n_n
all fixed
also added some claps in all diff

thanks n_n
kds
GbL
[quote="animask"][GBL]
00:12:78 (1) - Hitsound the end of the sliders maybe?
00:18:16 (x) - Note here?
00:48:74 (4) - Spacing is too far
00:53:74 (2) - This jumps doesn't feel right
01:02:01 (1,2,3,4) - This stack sounds off timed...
01:02:39 (x) - Maybe add a note here?
01:03:93 (x) - ^
01:25:08 (1) - Nice slider...but it needs to end earlier on the white tick
02:13:16 (x) - Add note here
02:14:31 (x) - Add note here
02:16:62 (x) - ^ then adjust spinner timing and length
02:29:60 (1) - Whistle here?
02:58:83 (8) - Move to red tick to the left?[/quote]

Thanks.

Download: Avril Lavigne - Complicated (Lizbeth) [GbL's Difficulty].osu
Topic Starter
Lizbeth
submitted with GbL's fixes, thanks n_n
alvisto
My turn to return a favour to ya ! =D

Hard

00:45:856 (4.5) - Make a slider to connect these 2 notes, since it matches Avril singing "me" ?
1:53:164 (3) - It's not in a straight horizontal line with 1. Align them better.
3:05:856 (7) - clap ?
3:24:703 (2) - Why not let the slider ends at 3 there ?
3:28:933 (slider) - The last hit of slider (end part), I think it sounds better with finish

Normal

0:50:472 - clap ?
00:52:010 - clap ?
00:53:549 - clap ?
00:55:087 - clap ?
00:56:626 - clap ?
00:58:164 - clap & finish ?

Easy

01:15:087 - Align 3 so that it is a straight line with 2
02:18:164 - clap
03:12:010 - clap
03:13:549 - clap

I like easy difficulty, simple and sweet.

A very good map ! Star !
Topic Starter
Lizbeth

alvisto wrote:

My turn to return a favour to ya ! =D thanx! :)

Hard

00:45:856 (4.5) - Make a slider to connect these 2 notes, since it matches Avril singing "me" ? fixed
1:53:164 (3) - It's not in a straight horizontal line with 1. Align them better. fixed
3:05:856 (7) - clap ? lol totally missed that, fixed
3:24:703 (2) - Why not let the slider ends at 3 there ? good idea n_n
3:28:933 (slider) - The last hit of slider (end part), I think it sounds better with finish agree :)

Normal

0:50:472 - clap ?
00:52:010 - clap ?
00:53:549 - clap ?
00:55:087 - clap ?
00:56:626 - clap ?
00:58:164 - clap & finish ?

all fixed, except for the finish n_nU

Easy

01:15:087 - Align 3 so that it is a straight line with 2
02:18:164 - clap
03:12:010 - clap
03:13:549 - clap
All fixed

I like easy difficulty, simple and sweet. thanks n_n

A very good map ! Star !
thanks a lot for your time alvisto... n_n glad u like my map
if u need help with another map just send me a pm :)

cya !
kds!
Andrea
[Timing]

Seems fine.

[Easy]

01:20:47 (4) - Finish here?
03:08:16 (1,2,3,4,5) - This part is too hard for easy map and compare out from others beats...

[Normal]

01:02:01 (2) - New combo.
01:38:93 (1,2,3) - Hard to read for a normal.

[Hard]

00:37:39 (4) - Finish here.
02:19:12 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I don't like the sounds of these notes... etc <-

[GbL's Difficulty]

01:02:10 (1,2,3,4) - 1/4 back.
01:20:47 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - These jumps comes out from NOWHERE.
02:09:31 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
Topic Starter
Lizbeth

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Timing]

Seems fine.

[Easy]

01:20:47 (4) - Finish here? done
03:08:16 (1,2,3,4,5) - This part is too hard for easy map and compare out from others beats... u r right, fixed

[Normal]

01:02:01 (2) - New combo.
01:38:93 (1,2,3) - Hard to read for a normal.
Fixed

[Hard]

00:37:39 (4) - Finish here. Fixed
02:19:12 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I don't like the sounds of these notes... etc <- i do T_T
thanks for modding n_n
kds
GbL

osuplayer111 wrote:

[GbL's Difficulty]

01:02:10 (1,2,3,4) - 1/4 back.
01:20:47 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - These jumps comes out from NOWHERE.
02:09:31 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
fixed and sry Lizbeth for delay. =]
ty osuplayer111.

Download: Avril Lavigne - Complicated (Lizbeth) [GbL's Difficulty].osu
Topic Starter
Lizbeth
ok all fixed

thanks GbL :)
tieff
Wow...

[Easy]
01:22:01 (2) - Finish on end of slider.
01:24:31 (3) - Remove note.
02:12:77 (6) - Finish, new combo.

[Normal]
00:29:70 (4) - Whistle.
00:42:58 (3) - ^
02:48:74 (5) - ^
02:49:12 (6) - ^

[Hard]
00:45:66 (3,4) - Spacing?
03:26:62 (3) - New combo?

[GbL's Diff]
01:16:04 (1,2) - Spacing.
01:16:81 (5,6) - ^
01:52:97 (3,4) - ^
02:07:97 (8,9) - ^
02:09:70 (3,4) - ^
02:26:04 (6) - New combo.

Star!
Topic Starter
Lizbeth

tieff wrote:

Wow...

[Easy]
01:22:01 (2) - Finish on end of slider.
01:24:31 (3) - Remove note.
02:12:77 (6) - Finish, new combo.
fixed

[Normal]
00:29:70 (4) - Whistle.
00:42:58 (3) - ^
02:48:74 (5) - ^
02:49:12 (6) - ^
Fixed

[Hard]
00:45:66 (3,4) - Spacing?
03:26:62 (3) - New combo?
Fixed

Star!
thanks for modding and starrin' =)
kds!
GbL

tieff wrote:

[GbL's Diff]
01:16:04 (1,2) - Spacing.
01:16:81 (5,6) - ^
01:52:97 (3,4) - ^
02:07:97 (8,9) - ^
02:09:70 (3,4) - ^
02:26:04 (6) - New combo.
tysm, tieff =]
fixed

Download: Avril Lavigne - Complicated (Lizbeth) [GbL's Difficulty].osu
Mafiamaster
Easy~
01:06:62 (1) - Add a finish at the end of this slider
01:12:77 (2) - ^

Normal~

01:08:16 (2) - Suggestion: Add a finish
01:23:54 (1) - Redo break after spinner

Hard~

Redo first break
03:14:31 (3) - Add a finish
Topic Starter
Lizbeth
thanks for modding Mafiamaster, all fixed
also added GbL's fixes
thanks
DaRRi
i think this is quite good

just modding hard, but
i think there're something going wrong in this, i just have fix suggestions for the beats

00:27:77 (6) - replace with a slider, end at 00:28:164
00:30:85 (7) - ^
00:33:16 (4,5,6,1) - i think this part needs rearranging, i suggest make (5) a single circle, remove (6) and (1), add a slider start at 00:33:741 and end at 00:34:318
00:40:08 (6) - same to 00:27:77 (6)
00:43:16 (5) - ^
00:48:16 (2,3) - make it a slider

choruspart
01:02:20 (2) - move to 01:02:267 (1/3 tick)
01:04:31 (1) - remove that, add 2 sliders (01:04:318-01:04:703) and (01:04:895-01:05:280)
01:08:35 (3) - same to 01:02:20 (2)
01:09:51 (7) - ^
01:10:66 (2,3) - remove them, add note on 01:10:856 and slider (01:11:049-01:11:433)
01:11:81 (5) - remove
01:14:51 (1,2,3,4) - the original rhythm in the song is 01:14:51 (1) - 01:14:63 (2) - 01:14:89 (3) (1/6 ticks)
01:15:27 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - ^
01:18:54 (2) - should be 01:18:48 (2) (1/3tick)
01:20:47 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 01:20:66 (2) should be 01:20:72 (2) (1/3tick), and so is (4,6,8), i suggest make 4 sliders like (01:20:47-01:20:72)
01:23:54 (1) - end at 01:25:792 and add notes on 01:25:856 and 01:26:626

rest
same as above

i think it's very important to catch the original beats in the music precisely. the beats you create must have something to do with the music and don't go against it

if your answer is something like ' I'M A FREE MAPPER! ' then just go ahead.
minyeob
Argh This map is still in pending :?
Wait a few days, I'll shoot a kudosu star for you
Topic Starter
Lizbeth

DaRRi MIx wrote:

i think this is quite good

just modding hard, but
i think there're something going wrong in this, i just have fix suggestions for the beats

00:27:77 (6) - replace with a slider, end at 00:28:164
00:30:85 (7) - ^
00:33:16 (4,5,6,1) - i think this part needs rearranging, i suggest make (5) a single circle, remove (6) and (1), add a slider start at 00:33:741 and end at 00:34:318
00:40:08 (6) - same to 00:27:77 (6)
00:43:16 (5) - ^
00:48:16 (2,3) - make it a slider

choruspart
01:02:20 (2) - move to 01:02:267 (1/3 tick)
01:04:31 (1) - remove that, add 2 sliders (01:04:318-01:04:703) and (01:04:895-01:05:280)
01:08:35 (3) - same to 01:02:20 (2)
01:09:51 (7) - ^
01:10:66 (2,3) - remove them, add note on 01:10:856 and slider (01:11:049-01:11:433)
01:11:81 (5) - remove
01:14:51 (1,2,3,4) - the original rhythm in the song is 01:14:51 (1) - 01:14:63 (2) - 01:14:89 (3) (1/6 ticks)
01:15:27 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - ^
01:18:54 (2) - should be 01:18:48 (2) (1/3tick) did you mean 1/6 here?
01:20:47 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 01:20:66 (2) should be 01:20:72 (2) (1/3tick), and so is (4,6,8), i suggest make 4 sliders like (01:20:47-01:20:72) and here?
01:23:54 (1) - end at 01:25:792 and add notes on 01:25:856 and 01:26:626

rest
same as above

i think it's very important to catch the original beats in the music precisely. the beats you create must have something to do with the music and don't go against it

if your answer is something like ' I'M A FREE MAPPER! ' then just go ahead.
Thanks Darri...
The map is WAY better after this changes. i uploaded, but i still need to fix some hitsounds.
And gonna check normal and easy to see if i can improve it too.
Again thanks, you've been veru helpful

Also thanks Minyeob n_nU
Edit: Hard and Normal, completed, with hitsounds. Still need to check Easy
DaRRi
it's no problem at all^^
just my personal opinions, take what you agree with
i have a few suggestions for the latest version of HARD

00:39:70 (5) - move 1/2 forward
00:42:78 (4) - remove
00:46:62 (5) - 1/4 shorter, and add a circle on 00:47:39
01:25:85 (1) - too hard to...-_-
01:56:241 - add circle
01:59:51 (5) - to 01:59:574 (1/3)
02:00:47 (1,2,3) - make a slider from (1) to (3), remove 2
02:01:113 - add a circle or not
02:03:54 (1) - end on 02:06:049
02:15:85 (3) - remove and add a slider (02:15:728 - 02:16:113)
02:19:12 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - move 1/6 forward
02:55:47 (1) - remove finish
03:20:66 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - 1/6 forward
03:24:89 (3,4,5) - remove, add repeat (03:24:89 - 03:25:280 - 03:25:664)
03:26:24 (4) - remove
03:30:85 (1) - i suggest a normal finish for the spinner, if you feel it too loud just lower the volume

feel free to ask me for help in rhythm of other avril lavigne songs!^^
gdeath
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
Lizbeth

DaRRi MIx wrote:

it's no problem at all^^
just my personal opinions, take what you agree with
i have a few suggestions for the latest version of HARD

00:39:70 (5) - move 1/2 forward
00:42:78 (4) - remove
00:46:62 (5) - 1/4 shorter, and add a circle on 00:47:39
01:25:85 (1) - too hard to...-_-
01:56:241 - add circle
01:59:51 (5) - to 01:59:574 (1/3)
02:00:47 (1,2,3) - make a slider from (1) to (3), remove 2
02:01:113 - add a circle or not
02:03:54 (1) - end on 02:06:049
02:15:85 (3) - remove and add a slider (02:15:728 - 02:16:113)
02:19:12 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - move 1/6 forward
02:55:47 (1) - remove finish
03:20:66 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - 1/6 forward
03:24:89 (3,4,5) - remove, add repeat (03:24:89 - 03:25:280 - 03:25:664)
03:26:24 (4) - remove
03:30:85 (1) - i suggest a normal finish for the spinner, if you feel it too loud just lower the volume

feel free to ask me for help in rhythm of other avril lavigne songs!^^
all fixed thanks for your help again n_n
like i said before, the map is way much better with your help.. so thnx thnx and thnx! :)

also thanks gdeath for the star

All diffinculties are complete now
cya!
minyeob
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Symbolic
[Easy]

00:58:93 (6) - Wtf, this note is in a spinner :p, anyways, that's not allowed. Let the spinner start later or delete the note.


[Normal]

Overall Volume in the Chorus is too loud, put it back 3 ticks.

02:26:62 (8) - New combo.
02:27:01 (1) - Remove new combo.


[Hard]

Overall Volume in the Chorus is too loud, put it back 3 ticks.


[GbL's Difficulty]

Couldn't found anything but too overmapped, the 1/4s sound bad =(


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