Offset: 12.795

This really is a very nice map, good job on this one!
Inherrit timing sections!

[Hard]
00:45:098 - Change this to a 1/2 slider (?)
00:45:675 - Extra note here (?)
02:46:035 - If this note is ment on the music, keep it as it is, if you are trying to reach vocals make it 1/4 earliër.
02:53:341 - Weird ending, make it just end on the white tick.

[Normal]
00:45:098 - Same as at hard.
01:09:324 - Stack these 3 notes (?)
02:13:926 - ^
02:46:035 - Same as at hard.

[Easy]
Fine I think.

Hi..
cool u liked
thanks for the help
i ve fixed what u listed...i think is better know thanks..
cya around

try offset 12790

hard:
[nazi]
almost all notes aren't snapped to the grid, fix that.
01:12:01 (6) - move up 1 grid so it's align with the 4.
02:49:30 (7) - move 1 grid up and 1 grid right.
[/nazi]

Overall: fun map . Fix the cosmetic errors and I think this map will be ranked pretty soon.


I haven't checked normal and easy yet, i'll do that later.

hi
thanks for checking mrtn.
i fixed those lil' things, also changed offset, is better now, thanks
cya

Didn't go all nitpicky (yet) but here are my major points:

EASY

00:58:93 (1) - End this one on the white tick before the white tick before this one
02:03:53 (2) - Make this one a slider (?)
03:30:82 (1) - Start 1 beat later

There's a lot of combo inconsistency. Can you make it like this that there are 4 notes/slider starts and ends in 1 combo:

1 - 2 - 3 - 4
or
1 - 2 - 3===3
or
1===x===1 - 2

et cetera

NORMAL

00:45:66 (3,4,5) - doesn't fit lyrics.
01:38:15 (3,4) - move 1/2 earlier
02:16:61 (1) - Needless spinner

HARD

00:27:40 (5) - Doesn't feel right... Place these as in 01:31:23
01:00:85 (1) - End 1/2 earlier
02:05:46 (1) - Same

thanks for the corrections Wojjan
is fixed and updated.. check it out
bye

i checked hard out and i found the distances a bit big...

i used distance snap on them

and here is the result..see if u find it ok

Download: Avril Lavigne - Complicated.osz

x3ns0r thanks a lot for checkin.
but i couldn't open the file...

BPM: 156.000
The offset is fine to within a couple ms or so.

Linear sliders don't look very good IMO. Also, this smells like it should be mapped in a 1/3 snap.

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Offset- 12,775 (imo... try for yourself?)

Easy-
01:24:71 - the break's off
01:43:57 -from here to end, you didn't resnap (guessing after you changed BPM)
02:29:32 - the break's off
03:09:71 - I know it's Easy diff, but it just doesn't sound good without note here. (cuz you sped up while matching vocal)
03:10:48 - ^
03:11:25 - ^ might have to use 1/2 if your ganna match the vocal here.
03:31:25 - Is easy's spinner supposed to be shorter than Normal and Hards?

Just remember to Resnap All Notes when changing the BPM (and offset), and redo the breaks.

Normal-
01:38:17 (3,4) - move 1/4 back (or 1/2 and make (2) shorter by 1/2)
01:51:63 (5) - back 1/2
02:07:78 (4,5,6) - align this to make it straight
03:29:32 (4) - place on fading (2)

Aside from grid snapping at all, its fairly well placed. I don't like the whistle+clap mixes during the first chorus though, and slight sections just seem to sudden have no hitsounds at all.

Hard-
00:30:28 (5) - align with 4
00:37:40 (4) - place right under fading 2
00:50:86 (2) - places like this (where you place own beats) should have a hitsound imo
00:53:94 (2) - ^
01:03:17 (5,6,7) - make it to "perfect" square?
01:38:55 (4) - under fading 2
02:00:48 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - hitsounds please.
02:07:98 (8) - move lower (so 4-7-8 looks like line)
02:08:17 (9) - ^ (so 2-3-9 looks like line)
02:14:32 (11) - line it up
02:14:08 (10) - isn't snapped
02:15:91 (3,4) - aren't snapped
02:26:44 (11,12) - a bit higher and to left? (have 6 and 12 align?)

Same as Normal in terms of grid snap, and hitsounds (mainly the chorus whistle+clap mix in all three choruses).

Since you didn't use grid snap and most patterns seem to try to be straight lines, I think your maps would be easy to nazi (if the modder goes all out).
Most hitsounds are straight forward, and I don't mind the linear sliders... as long as you make beats seem linear (in pattern), too.

Overall, deserving of a star.

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Lizbeth wrote:

Shinxyn wrote:

Easy-
01:24:71 - the break's off
02:29:32 - the break's off

i don't know what u mean here.

Oh, I just meant the note ends a while before the break starts.
Like for the first one -> 01:24:31 (3) is the note before break, 01:24:89 is when break starts, there a gap there, nothing BIG, but... yea, you should still fix it (remove and re-place break).

now i get it
is fixed...
thnx Shinxyn

[Easy]
3:30:860(1)-> Finish(Suggestion)

[Normal]
2:12:395(3)-> Stack with (4) nicely. (Yeah, it's so minor)
3:30:860(1)-> Finish(Suggestion)

[Hard]
2:05:280(1)-> Extend 1/4 beat.
3:24:073(2)-> Sound doesn't go with the music. 1/2 beat backward.
3:30:860(1)-> Finish(Suggestion)

starred~


STAR EDIT.

thnx for the help minyeob
all fixed.
nice star thnks

would like to see it ranked. ;D

I wanna see it ranked

Stared!

thnx a lot for the stars u guys!
cool u like it.
any suggentions r welcome

great song, imo. but it would be better withouth these linear sliders... I don't like them so much, but anyway, it's just me.

Suggestion: Change to bézier or catmull-rom sliders. Not needed, but, imo, it would look better.

+Star~

I like the Linear sliders ;o!

thnx for checking,
about the linear sliders, i ll leave it that way, i decide that style for this beatmap, if i change it to curve, it will be a totally diferent map, and i dont want that. anyway thanks for the suggestions

also thnx for the stars

Hi, i make a new diff based in your hard diff.

And only a suggestion for bg with and without my diff. What do you think about?

Download: Avril Lavigne - Complicated (Lizbeth) [GbL's Difficulty].osu

GbL thanks for checking and for the diff... but just one thing... if u could make different the parts on your diff that are similar to Hard... cause is feeling like the same map in some parts. it ll be cool if your diff is way different. what do u think?
if u dont have time, ill understand..
btw... background is pretty cool...

cya!

Lizbeth wrote:

GbL thanks for checking and for the diff... but just one thing... if u could make different the parts on your diff that are similar to Hard... cause is feeling like the same map in some parts. it ll be cool if your diff is way different. what do u think?
if u dont have time, ill understand..
btw... background is pretty cool...

cya!

I do understand and i did some modd.

Download: Avril Lavigne - Complicated (Lizbeth) [GbL's Difficulty].osu

te recomiendo ke renombres y elimines... mira la cancion que esta en normal esta super facil cualkier noob la hace... la deberias de pasar a easy... y la de HARD a normal.. la cancion esta super padre y lleva el ritmo.. asaber porke no te la apruebamn.

gracias por tu comentario itachi666 pero lo dejare asi... el normal tiene 3.86 de star difficulty, creo que esta bien para un normal. y la verdad que esta cancion es tan calmada que no quiero hacer otro hard mas dificil que el que ya tengo.
ademas por tu rank, puede que te lo encuentres muy facil... pero no creo que un noob pase muy facilmente ese normal.
igual gracias por chekear el mapa
bye!

u welcome Liz, the skin looks great ^_^
and i like the new diff

Star!! n.n

Easy:
00:58:933: I feel like the spinner could go on for another half note.

Normal:
00:36:818: Probably shorten this one so it ends on the beat, instead of going slightly over the tick.
00:48:645: ^
00:58:933: Opposite of easy for some reason, feel like this could be shortened half a note.
01:53:741: Again, shorten it a half note so it's on the tick.

Can't really find anything huge with the other difficulties, though. Good job with the map.

Starred.

thanks for modding Ruduen
fixed everything

Nice skin Lissette, i looked now. And nice work Lizbeth.

You can ignore my spinner comments since there are no rules in the guidelines against it, but I've seen BAT's tell people to make it so auto gets 2000.

GbL:
00:37:78 (1) - I'm pretty sure this is not rankable. Auto should be able to get 2000 bonus on it.
00:40:85 (1) - ^
01:21:24 (5) - Align with 3.
01:55:85 (x) - Add a note here?
01:56:43 (x) - ^
02:05:27 (1) - Extend to the white tick.
02:21:62 (2,3,4) - Align with 1.
02:29:60 (1) - I'm pretty sure this is not rankable. Auto should be able to get 2000 bonus on it.
02:30:28 (1) - ^
03:33:54 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Remove these? They sound bad and would be better if the spinner was the last thing.

Good job on the map and skin! Have a star !

Nexy wrote:

You can ignore my spinner comments since there are no rules in the guidelines against it, but I've seen BAT's tell people to make it so auto gets 2000.

GbL:
00:37:78 (1) - I'm pretty sure this is not rankable. Auto should be able to get 2000 bonus on it.
00:40:85 (1) - ^
01:21:24 (5) - Align with 3.
01:55:85 (x) - Add a note here?
01:56:43 (x) - ^
02:05:27 (1) - Extend to the white tick.
02:21:62 (2,3,4) - Align with 1.
02:29:60 (1) - I'm pretty sure this is not rankable. Auto should be able to get 2000 bonus on it.
02:30:28 (1) - ^
03:33:54 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Remove these? They sound bad and would be better if the spinner was the last thing.

Good job on the map and skin! Have a star !

I make all your suggestions, thank you.
Here is Lizbeth:

Download: Avril Lavigne - Complicated (Lizbeth) [GbL's Difficulty].osu

great song
great skin
great gameplay!
i saw anything wrong, it's just perfect now
*STAR*

thnx for checking roxkyuubiforever

GbL wrote:

Nexy wrote:

You can ignore my spinner comments since there are no rules in the guidelines against it, but I've seen BAT's tell people to make it so auto gets 2000.

GbL:
00:37:78 (1) - I'm pretty sure this is not rankable. Auto should be able to get 2000 bonus on it.
00:40:85 (1) - ^
01:21:24 (5) - Align with 3.
01:55:85 (x) - Add a note here?
01:56:43 (x) - ^
02:05:27 (1) - Extend to the white tick.
02:21:62 (2,3,4) - Align with 1.
02:29:60 (1) - I'm pretty sure this is not rankable. Auto should be able to get 2000 bonus on it.
02:30:28 (1) - ^
03:33:54 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Remove these? They sound bad and would be better if the spinner was the last thing.

Good job on the map and skin! Have a star !

I make all your suggestions, thank you.
Here is Lizbeth:

thnx for modding Nexy.
GbL i havent upload yet.. cuz im no in my pc right know... but tonight ill update, with the fixes.


thnx all for helping... and for taking your time checking



EDIT: Uploaded

Lizbeth, sou amigo do GBL, prazer ^^

-

Mapa muito bom, parabens ^^

[Easy]
very metronomic...all of the beats are in the exact same rhythm, every other white tick...so boring
02:03:54 (3) - OMG VARIETY! ITS A MIRACLE
really though your map feels like it has no soul :/


[Normal]
00:58:93 (1) - finish
01:08:93 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - too much whistle
01:23:54 (1) - finish
02:00:47 (5) - new combo
03:05:85 (7) - finish
map still feels kinda boring


[Hard]
01:23:54 (1) - finish
imo all your diffs could use finishes at the end of the musical phrases
03:05:85 (7) - finish



[Gbl]
00:25:85 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - uhhh...spacing?
00:38:93 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:42:01 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
you cant DO that it has to be proportional to the time. if you want jumps, make a new combo :<

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Gbl]
00:25:85 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - uhhh...spacing? fix
00:38:93 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ fix
00:42:01 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ fix

Download: Avril Lavigne - Complicated (Lizbeth) [GbL's Difficulty].osu

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

oh nice map and my favotite song!

as I see, the GBL's diffi is similar to hard diffi

it's mix diffi?

anyway star!

tsukamaete wrote:

oh nice map and my favotite song!

as I see, the GBL's diffi is similar to hard diffi

it's mix diffi?

anyway star!

one of my favorite songs too °¬°

and yeah GBL's diff is based on my Hard n_n

thanks for starrin'

[Easy]
Lower hitsound volume a bit
00:48:93 (2) - I expected a finish at the end
00:51:24 (4) - ^ finish at beginning and end
Its optional though
01:10:47 (4) - Clap at the end instead?
01:32:01 (4) - Align with 2 maybe? symmetry?
02:06:62 (1) - Finish?
02:22:01 (5) - Align with 3 maybe? symmetry? align 2 with 4
02:49:70 (7) - Align with 5

I like how easy it is~

[GBL]
00:12:78 (1) - Hitsound the end of the sliders maybe?
00:18:16 (x) - Note here?
00:48:74 (4) - Spacing is too far
00:53:74 (2) - This jumps doesn't feel right
01:02:01 (1,2,3,4) - This stack sounds off timed...
01:02:39 (x) - Maybe add a note here?
01:03:93 (x) - ^
01:25:08 (1) - Nice slider...but it needs to end earlier on the white tick
02:13:16 (x) - Add note here
02:14:31 (x) - Add note here
02:16:62 (x) - ^ then adjust spinner timing and length
02:29:60 (1) - Whistle here?
02:58:83 (8) - Move to red tick to the left?

[Hard]
00:39:51 (4) - add a whistle on 4 and 6
02:48:74 (5) - whistle on 5 and 7

[Normal]
01:03:54 (7,8) - symmetry with 5 and 6?

Honestly I thought some parts didn't seem mapped right...but I would consider thinking of changing your hitsound patterns at least.
I still starr'd it of course

thanks for helping Animask n_n
all fixed
also added some claps in all diff

thanks n_n
kds

[quote="animask"][GBL]
00:12:78 (1) - Hitsound the end of the sliders maybe?
00:18:16 (x) - Note here?
00:48:74 (4) - Spacing is too far
00:53:74 (2) - This jumps doesn't feel right
01:02:01 (1,2,3,4) - This stack sounds off timed...
01:02:39 (x) - Maybe add a note here?
01:03:93 (x) - ^
01:25:08 (1) - Nice slider...but it needs to end earlier on the white tick
02:13:16 (x) - Add note here
02:14:31 (x) - Add note here
02:16:62 (x) - ^ then adjust spinner timing and length
02:29:60 (1) - Whistle here?
02:58:83 (8) - Move to red tick to the left?[/quote]

Thanks.

Download: Avril Lavigne - Complicated (Lizbeth) [GbL's Difficulty].osu

submitted with GbL's fixes, thanks n_n

My turn to return a favour to ya ! =D

Hard

00:45:856 (4.5) - Make a slider to connect these 2 notes, since it matches Avril singing "me" ?
1:53:164 (3) - It's not in a straight horizontal line with 1. Align them better.
3:05:856 (7) - clap ?
3:24:703 (2) - Why not let the slider ends at 3 there ?
3:28:933 (slider) - The last hit of slider (end part), I think it sounds better with finish

Normal

0:50:472 - clap ?
00:52:010 - clap ?
00:53:549 - clap ?
00:55:087 - clap ?
00:56:626 - clap ?
00:58:164 - clap & finish ?

Easy

01:15:087 - Align 3 so that it is a straight line with 2
02:18:164 - clap
03:12:010 - clap
03:13:549 - clap

I like easy difficulty, simple and sweet.

A very good map ! Star !

alvisto wrote:

My turn to return a favour to ya ! =D thanx!

Hard

00:45:856 (4.5) - Make a slider to connect these 2 notes, since it matches Avril singing "me" ? fixed
1:53:164 (3) - It's not in a straight horizontal line with 1. Align them better. fixed
3:05:856 (7) - clap ? lol totally missed that, fixed
3:24:703 (2) - Why not let the slider ends at 3 there ? good idea n_n
3:28:933 (slider) - The last hit of slider (end part), I think it sounds better with finish agree

Normal

0:50:472 - clap ?
00:52:010 - clap ?
00:53:549 - clap ?
00:55:087 - clap ?
00:56:626 - clap ?
00:58:164 - clap & finish ?

all fixed, except for the finish n_nU

Easy

01:15:087 - Align 3 so that it is a straight line with 2
02:18:164 - clap
03:12:010 - clap
03:13:549 - clap
All fixed

I like easy difficulty, simple and sweet. thanks n_n

A very good map ! Star !

thanks a lot for your time alvisto... n_n glad u like my map
if u need help with another map just send me a pm

cya !
kds!

[Timing]

Seems fine.

[Easy]

01:20:47 (4) - Finish here?
03:08:16 (1,2,3,4,5) - This part is too hard for easy map and compare out from others beats...

[Normal]

01:02:01 (2) - New combo.
01:38:93 (1,2,3) - Hard to read for a normal.

[Hard]

00:37:39 (4) - Finish here.
02:19:12 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I don't like the sounds of these notes... etc <-

[GbL's Difficulty]

01:02:10 (1,2,3,4) - 1/4 back.
01:20:47 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - These jumps comes out from NOWHERE.
02:09:31 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Timing]

Seems fine.

[Easy]

01:20:47 (4) - Finish here? done
03:08:16 (1,2,3,4,5) - This part is too hard for easy map and compare out from others beats... u r right, fixed

[Normal]

01:02:01 (2) - New combo.
01:38:93 (1,2,3) - Hard to read for a normal.
Fixed

[Hard]

00:37:39 (4) - Finish here. Fixed
02:19:12 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I don't like the sounds of these notes... etc <- i do T_T

thanks for modding n_n
kds

osuplayer111 wrote:

[GbL's Difficulty]

01:02:10 (1,2,3,4) - 1/4 back.
01:20:47 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - These jumps comes out from NOWHERE.
02:09:31 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

fixed and sry Lizbeth for delay. =]
ty osuplayer111.

Download: Avril Lavigne - Complicated (Lizbeth) [GbL's Difficulty].osu

ok all fixed

thanks GbL

Wow...

[Easy]
01:22:01 (2) - Finish on end of slider.
01:24:31 (3) - Remove note.
02:12:77 (6) - Finish, new combo.

[Normal]
00:29:70 (4) - Whistle.
00:42:58 (3) - ^
02:48:74 (5) - ^
02:49:12 (6) - ^

[Hard]
00:45:66 (3,4) - Spacing?
03:26:62 (3) - New combo?

[GbL's Diff]
01:16:04 (1,2) - Spacing.
01:16:81 (5,6) - ^
01:52:97 (3,4) - ^
02:07:97 (8,9) - ^
02:09:70 (3,4) - ^
02:26:04 (6) - New combo.

Star!

tieff wrote:

Wow...

[Easy]
01:22:01 (2) - Finish on end of slider.
01:24:31 (3) - Remove note.
02:12:77 (6) - Finish, new combo.
fixed

[Normal]
00:29:70 (4) - Whistle.
00:42:58 (3) - ^
02:48:74 (5) - ^
02:49:12 (6) - ^
Fixed

[Hard]
00:45:66 (3,4) - Spacing?
03:26:62 (3) - New combo?
Fixed

Star!

thanks for modding and starrin' =)
kds!

tieff wrote:

[GbL's Diff]
01:16:04 (1,2) - Spacing.
01:16:81 (5,6) - ^
01:52:97 (3,4) - ^
02:07:97 (8,9) - ^
02:09:70 (3,4) - ^
02:26:04 (6) - New combo.

tysm, tieff =]
fixed

Download: Avril Lavigne - Complicated (Lizbeth) [GbL's Difficulty].osu

Easy~
01:06:62 (1) - Add a finish at the end of this slider
01:12:77 (2) - ^

Normal~
01:08:16 (2) - Suggestion: Add a finish
01:23:54 (1) - Redo break after spinner

Hard~
Redo first break
03:14:31 (3) - Add a finish

thanks for modding Mafiamaster, all fixed
also added GbL's fixes
thanks

i think this is quite good

just modding hard, but
i think there're something going wrong in this, i just have fix suggestions for the beats

00:27:77 (6) - replace with a slider, end at 00:28:164
00:30:85 (7) - ^
00:33:16 (4,5,6,1) - i think this part needs rearranging, i suggest make (5) a single circle, remove (6) and (1), add a slider start at 00:33:741 and end at 00:34:318
00:40:08 (6) - same to 00:27:77 (6)
00:43:16 (5) - ^
00:48:16 (2,3) - make it a slider

choruspart
01:02:20 (2) - move to 01:02:267 (1/3 tick)
01:04:31 (1) - remove that, add 2 sliders (01:04:318-01:04:703) and (01:04:895-01:05:280)
01:08:35 (3) - same to 01:02:20 (2)
01:09:51 (7) - ^
01:10:66 (2,3) - remove them, add note on 01:10:856 and slider (01:11:049-01:11:433)
01:11:81 (5) - remove
01:14:51 (1,2,3,4) - the original rhythm in the song is 01:14:51 (1) - 01:14:63 (2) - 01:14:89 (3) (1/6 ticks)
01:15:27 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - ^
01:18:54 (2) - should be 01:18:48 (2) (1/3tick)
01:20:47 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 01:20:66 (2) should be 01:20:72 (2) (1/3tick), and so is (4,6,8), i suggest make 4 sliders like (01:20:47-01:20:72)
01:23:54 (1) - end at 01:25:792 and add notes on 01:25:856 and 01:26:626

rest
same as above

i think it's very important to catch the original beats in the music precisely. the beats you create must have something to do with the music and don't go against it

if your answer is something like ' I'M A FREE MAPPER! ' then just go ahead.

Argh This map is still in pending
Wait a few days, I'll shoot a kudosu star for you

DaRRi MIx wrote:

i think this is quite good

just modding hard, but
i think there're something going wrong in this, i just have fix suggestions for the beats

00:27:77 (6) - replace with a slider, end at 00:28:164
00:30:85 (7) - ^
00:33:16 (4,5,6,1) - i think this part needs rearranging, i suggest make (5) a single circle, remove (6) and (1), add a slider start at 00:33:741 and end at 00:34:318
00:40:08 (6) - same to 00:27:77 (6)
00:43:16 (5) - ^
00:48:16 (2,3) - make it a slider

choruspart
01:02:20 (2) - move to 01:02:267 (1/3 tick)
01:04:31 (1) - remove that, add 2 sliders (01:04:318-01:04:703) and (01:04:895-01:05:280)
01:08:35 (3) - same to 01:02:20 (2)
01:09:51 (7) - ^
01:10:66 (2,3) - remove them, add note on 01:10:856 and slider (01:11:049-01:11:433)
01:11:81 (5) - remove
01:14:51 (1,2,3,4) - the original rhythm in the song is 01:14:51 (1) - 01:14:63 (2) - 01:14:89 (3) (1/6 ticks)
01:15:27 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - ^
01:18:54 (2) - should be 01:18:48 (2) (1/3tick) did you mean 1/6 here?
01:20:47 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 01:20:66 (2) should be 01:20:72 (2) (1/3tick), and so is (4,6,8), i suggest make 4 sliders like (01:20:47-01:20:72) and here?
01:23:54 (1) - end at 01:25:792 and add notes on 01:25:856 and 01:26:626

rest
same as above

i think it's very important to catch the original beats in the music precisely. the beats you create must have something to do with the music and don't go against it

if your answer is something like ' I'M A FREE MAPPER! ' then just go ahead.

Thanks Darri...
The map is WAY better after this changes. i uploaded, but i still need to fix some hitsounds.
And gonna check normal and easy to see if i can improve it too.
Again thanks, you've been veru helpful

Also thanks Minyeob n_nU
Edit: Hard and Normal, completed, with hitsounds. Still need to check Easy

it's no problem at all^^
just my personal opinions, take what you agree with
i have a few suggestions for the latest version of HARD

00:39:70 (5) - move 1/2 forward
00:42:78 (4) - remove
00:46:62 (5) - 1/4 shorter, and add a circle on 00:47:39
01:25:85 (1) - too hard to...-_-
01:56:241 - add circle
01:59:51 (5) - to 01:59:574 (1/3)
02:00:47 (1,2,3) - make a slider from (1) to (3), remove 2
02:01:113 - add a circle or not
02:03:54 (1) - end on 02:06:049
02:15:85 (3) - remove and add a slider (02:15:728 - 02:16:113)
02:19:12 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - move 1/6 forward
02:55:47 (1) - remove finish
03:20:66 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - 1/6 forward
03:24:89 (3,4,5) - remove, add repeat (03:24:89 - 03:25:280 - 03:25:664)
03:26:24 (4) - remove
03:30:85 (1) - i suggest a normal finish for the spinner, if you feel it too loud just lower the volume

feel free to ask me for help in rhythm of other avril lavigne songs!^^

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DaRRi MIx wrote:

it's no problem at all^^
just my personal opinions, take what you agree with
i have a few suggestions for the latest version of HARD

00:39:70 (5) - move 1/2 forward
00:42:78 (4) - remove
00:46:62 (5) - 1/4 shorter, and add a circle on 00:47:39
01:25:85 (1) - too hard to...-_-
01:56:241 - add circle
01:59:51 (5) - to 01:59:574 (1/3)
02:00:47 (1,2,3) - make a slider from (1) to (3), remove 2
02:01:113 - add a circle or not
02:03:54 (1) - end on 02:06:049
02:15:85 (3) - remove and add a slider (02:15:728 - 02:16:113)
02:19:12 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - move 1/6 forward
02:55:47 (1) - remove finish
03:20:66 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - 1/6 forward
03:24:89 (3,4,5) - remove, add repeat (03:24:89 - 03:25:280 - 03:25:664)
03:26:24 (4) - remove
03:30:85 (1) - i suggest a normal finish for the spinner, if you feel it too loud just lower the volume

feel free to ask me for help in rhythm of other avril lavigne songs!^^

all fixed thanks for your help again n_n
like i said before, the map is way much better with your help.. so thnx thnx and thnx!

also thanks gdeath for the star

All diffinculties are complete now
cya!

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[Easy]

00:58:93 (6) - Wtf, this note is in a spinner :p, anyways, that's not allowed. Let the spinner start later or delete the note.


[Normal]

Overall Volume in the Chorus is too loud, put it back 3 ticks.

02:26:62 (8) - New combo.
02:27:01 (1) - Remove new combo.


[Hard]

Overall Volume in the Chorus is too loud, put it back 3 ticks.


[GbL's Difficulty]

Couldn't found anything but too overmapped, the 1/4s sound bad =(


Starred *

minyeob wrote:

[GbL]
00:49:12 (5) - 1 grid down?
01:02:01 (1,2,3,4) - Sounds strange. Need a 5th beat.
01:03:54 (7,8,9,10) - Same as above
02:29:60 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make 1/4 beat later

all done, ty.

My finish modd, just i'll modd again if be a BAT.

Download: Avril Lavigne - Complicated (Lizbeth) [GbL's Difficulty].osu

Thanks Minyeob and Symbolic for modding all fixed
Thansk for the kds stars minyeob n_n

GbL wrote:

minyeob wrote:

[GbL]
00:49:12 (5) - 1 grid down?
01:02:01 (1,2,3,4) - Sounds strange. Need a 5th beat.
01:03:54 (7,8,9,10) - Same as above
02:29:60 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make 1/4 beat later

all done, ty.

My finish modd, just i'll modd again if be a BAT.

ok n_n
thanks
updated

Actually, this looks solid to me.

Did anyone not see this post on the first page?

MetalMario201 wrote:

Also, this smells like it should be mapped in a 1/3 snap.

Yeah. This map reeks of incorrect snap. I'm sorry, but this is most definitely not a 1/2 / 1/4 divisor map. The thing is, this is a 1/3 map.

Recheck ALL of your syncing stuff, everyone, fix everything, then drop me a line and I'll look at this again. It'll pop once you update, anyways, so I'm popping the bubble. Heck, sorry, but due to the sync, I wouldn't star normally.

Snapping to the incorrect snap to make things 'simpler' doesn't mean squat if it makes it much harder. This is a rhythm game, so follow the correct rhythms. :P

Done.

Download: Avril Lavigne - Complicated (Lizbeth) [GbL's Difficulty].osu

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~Star.

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Might be because it needs a reupload, but these difficulties are still snapped to 1/2.

CheeseWarlock wrote:

Might be because it needs a reupload, but these difficulties are still snapped to 1/2.

thnx for checking mtmcl and CheeseWarlock
fullsubmittion is done. the map is snapped to 1/6

thx

hard

02:25:72 (6) - no clap at end of slidersss? ._.
02:26:49 (8) -

easy

00:57:39 (5) - nazi! maybe align with 3 and 4?


normal

01:40:27 (3,4) - spacing a little confusing

that's all n_n star~

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Some small errors of rhythm that I think are a bit weird:

Bb's dificulty

01:14 I think it should be three and not four.

02:12/2:19 Same as before.

03:20 Better now.

Easy

Everything is always in the rhythm of the meter. Any circle that do not follow the rhythm of the meter but if the beat is grateful.

Sorry for my bad english

Good map~

Star~☆

thanks for checking Tanmak and alexcp999

n_n

I don't want to rebubble this because CheeseWarlock popped the bubble and I feel that he should be the one to rebubble it if he feels his suggestions were fixed. Just posting this to... pile the pressure on to CheeseWarlock... and to note that I haven't ignored this map.

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oh.

I think the main problem I had with this map was the fact that Avril is singing in 1/2 snap over the rest of the song which is in 1/3 snap, but as long as the mapping snap is consistent it should be fine. /add-to-queue

It really just sounds like 1/3 snap to me now. I don't hear anything on 1/2 snap. I pointed it out before (and so did MetalMario and Mogsworth); this map is snapped to 1/6, which means it uses both 1/2 and 1/3 snaps. The maps are going to need to be redone only in 1/3 snap. I'm sorry to make you do this much work, but unless I hear a good reason I can't bubble a map that uses incorrect rhythm.

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I really wanted to get this map ranked.. but after trying to fix the map, i notice that requires a lot of time that i don't have, and the college is first than osu. Also this map is pretty old and i have a lot of better ideas for it. but like i said i don't have the time to do it right now =( I'm totally grateful to all who had modded and wasted the time in this map... is not that ill abandon for new maps... cuz the maps im planning to submit are all complete. is just that i dont have the time to remap an entire map.
Sorry if i make you waste your time guys, but im letting this to graveyard until i can remap it.

Thanks..

cool

so it's complicated...

Hi, is it still possible to get the skin for this beatmap then? Cause, sure, I would love to get the actual beatmap, but since that has been deleted, where can I find the skin? Cause I'm doing a skin just for me to use at home and, judging from the comments, this skin would be perfect.