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Pokie

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Pokie 2012-05-09T07:03:09+00:00

液

[Normal]

打著稍覺得有隨機節奏, 估計是我Easy太固定了 orz

02:29:082 (5,6,7) - 因為疊的關係導致(5)飛高高了, 求移動
Editor: http://puu.sh/tKkb
Test: http://puu.sh/tKkv

[Hard]

連打稍多

00:24:866 (4) - 求怒resnap所有綠線, 你看減速都消失了

01:02:271 (11,1,2) - combo稍奇怪, 不從(11)或者(2)開始nc嗎?
02:15:880 (7,8,9) - 太擠了, 求將02:14:880 (2,3,4,5,6) - 重排一下讓(7,8,9)有空間些
02:19:081 (7,8,9,10) - 其實我覺得這種三角很難看的...移成這樣? http://puu.sh/tKtt

還有個問題想提一下, 節奏方面的
02:20:881 (1,2,3,4,5) -
02:24:482 (2,3,4,5) -
前面的三連可以說是跟鼓, 但後面的三連就有點沒意義了..其實你開25%, 02:24:982 - 這一個位置反而有一下較輕的鼓, 而你原本放三連的位置是完全沒有的
加上音效並不特別明顯下, 像後面的三連這種方式打著就比較無力
像00:52:269 (6,7,8,9,10) - 也是一樣

不過似乎基本都是這麼下的, 改不改都行, 那就這麼

03:09:988 (1) - 覺得可以加長一拍

[Insane]
00:52:469 (5,1,2) - 這裡效果稍弱, 放的太跳了...我想說建議把間距縮小些, 但是基本都被前面的串給擋住位置
01:18:673 (1,1,1,1) - 其實你要相信, 這些真的很難
01:37:275 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - 不錯!
01:57:678 (1) - 強烈建議換成1.0x, 這邊就算跟vocal也不該切成kiai用的1.2x
02:18:681 (1,2,3) - 有問題, (2)應該縮短1/4結束, (3)在紅線開始
這邊是因為你的(2)是從伝えたい的た開始, 但也在い結束
在Edit聽著問題不大, 但Test的時候明顯感覺(3)慢了, 倒不如也一起弄成03:25:890 (1,2,3,4) - 這樣的-w-

03:32:891 (6,1,1,1) - 雖說有個chrome梗, 但是不得不說...整個kiai都是大spacing+高sv跳的時候插一個這麼小間距的很違和
間接加大一些吧

另外在kiai裡的折返slider很破壞flow T_T

其他沒什麼問題了

~~其實400萬跳到1500萬真的大丈夫嗎, 盡管難度倒是挺平均的…~~

Colin Hou

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Colin Hou 2012-05-12T17:33:06+00:00

thanks those, lyrics should be SBed, idk why not applied to your copy, and most fixed.

还有多谢po的帮助很多地方都是脑子短路时候加的东西有替代方案的话会尽快补上 ;w;

Pokie

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Pokie 2012-05-14T01:30:30+00:00

\液/ 誰做圖不是腦子一熱就照面扔的呢 (濃霧

求這張rank喔喔喔

evanescense

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evanescense 2012-06-04T15:34:01+00:00

Please add the video of the song full, is so beautiful.

Here is the video on youtube of the song

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PqJNc9KVIZE&feature=related

Thank you very much, I'm playing the "Hard" version of this map and is great.

Colin Hou

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Colin Hou 2012-06-06T04:48:08+00:00

yeah I know there is a video, but it's not really suitable for playing.

might add an alternate link with full video in creator's words

lebron2_old

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lebron2_old 2012-06-06T23:54:38+00:00

Star

This song is a famous miku's song I like.
And this beatmap is good

I have a few skill of modding.
So it may confuse you.

SPOILER

Normal

00:41:268 (5) - transfer this slider to 00:41:068
00:41:668 - add circle

01:55:278 (7) - transfer this circle to 01:55:078

02:09:680 (5) - remove this circle
02:10:080 (6) - remove this slider
then
02:09:680 - add slider to 02:10:080
02:10:480 add circle
02:10:880 add circle

03:11:688 - I think It's better spin's finish time

thanks!

Colin Hou

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Colin Hou 2012-06-14T07:17:55+00:00

changed the spinner ending time in normal, thanks

NatsumeRin

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NatsumeRin 2012-07-02T02:36:49+00:00

[Pokie's Easy]
00:19:465 (5,1) - switch new combo?
00:53:870 (1,2,3) - (nazi)弄个等边三角？
01:19:473 (1) - split into 2 spinners? (another start at 01:22:673 - )
03:15:088 (2,1) - yeah i know it's easy to reconize but still not sure... http://puu.sh/Fb3d ?
03:18:289 (1) - similar thing won't mention again...
03:31:491 (2) - change to the up-side so the track is in a circle?
03:38:692 (1) - split into 2 spinners?

[Normal]
AR-1 OD-1?
00:13:064 (4) - farther a bit? the blanket looks not that good when they still stack a bit..
01:18:073 (2) - remove?
01:36:875 (3,4) - not perfect stacked.
02:30:882 (4) - remove?
03:51:293 (5) - same suggestion.. i think in the end of the kiais your notes seems to be too much...

[Hard]
00:24:866 (4) - new combo for the slowdown?
00:39:068 (3) - could be left/down a bit so it plays more fluently imo.
02:28:282 (7) - extand by 1/4?
02:42:884 (8,9) - personally i think this should be in a stack...
03:29:490 (7,8) - http://puu.sh/FbiF or some better shape?

[Insane]
00:14:464 (4,7,10) - i prefer to new combo all these notes so it's made more clear to the players (also the feeling)
00:40:268 (2) - new combo to keep consistency with the following notes like 00:43:468 (1,2) - ?
01:18:673 (1) - wow
01:21:873 (1) - is it a bit much for the jump (1/2 after spinner and then jump? though i know the BPM is not high), just keep a jump between 2&3 is not enough?
01:42:876 (1) - circle-slider-circle-slider would fit better (1 - current4 - 2 stack on 4's beginning - 3 ?)
03:07:287 (6) - keep a similar shape with 5? (since no more sliders after this for a while)

Colin Hou

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Colin Hou 2012-07-02T14:33:53+00:00

NatsumeRin wrote:
[Normal]
AR-1 OD-1? done
00:13:064 (4) - farther a bit? the blanket looks not that good when they still stack a bit.. done
01:18:073 (2) - remove? done
01:36:875 (3,4) - not perfect stacked. done
02:30:882 (4) - remove? removed same place with the former pattern
03:51:293 (5) - same suggestion.. i think in the end of the kiais your notes seems to be too much... done

[Hard]
00:24:866 (4) - new combo for the slowdown? done
00:39:068 (3) - could be left/down a bit so it plays more fluently imo. done
02:28:282 (7) - extand by 1/4? done
02:42:884 (8,9) - personally i think this should be in a stack... replaced the slider with 2 notes
03:29:490 (7,8) - http://puu.sh/FbiF or some better shape? puush is down for me...

[Insane]
00:14:464 (4,7,10) - i prefer to new combo all these notes so it's made more clear to the players (also the feeling) done
00:40:268 (2) - new combo to keep consistency with the following notes like 00:43:468 (1,2) - ? not changed
01:18:673 (1) - wow
01:21:873 (1) - is it a bit much for the jump (1/2 after spinner and then jump? though i know the BPM is not high), just keep a jump between 2&3 is not enough? did some changes
01:42:876 (1) - circle-slider-circle-slider would fit better (1 - current4 - 2 stack on 4's beginning - 3 ?) changed the order but no stacks
03:07:287 (6) - keep a similar shape with 5? (since no more sliders after this for a while) not changed

thx a lot, waiting for pokie's response

edit: pokie's diff updated

NatsumeRin

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NatsumeRin 2012-07-03T05:05:55+00:00

gogogo

Garven

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Garven 2012-07-08T11:34:37+00:00

Yo

[General]
Tick rate 2 fits this best~
01:25:874 - Move rekiai to here to go with the ride cymbal
03:56:294 - I'm still used to hearing the radio announcer at this point. q:

[Pokie]
Did some QQ modding. Mostly concerning the overuse of 1/2 rhythms.

[Normal]
03:09:988 (1) - This spinner feels better ending at 03:11:838 -
03:45:092 (1) - Too soon after a spinner

[Hard]
00:24:866 (1,1) - Although I had no difficulty playing them, I am wary of having two sliders the same size but varying speed with no real visual indicator.
00:52:269 (6,7,8,9,10) - I'd keep streams longer than 3 out of a Hard difficulty. There are quite a few in the chorus sections.
03:09:988 (1) - This spinner feels better ending at 03:11:838 -

[Insane]
03:09:988 (1) - This spinner feels better ending at 03:11:838 -

Colin Hou

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Colin Hou 2012-07-08T12:21:35+00:00

Garven wrote:
Yooooooooooooooooo

[General]
Tick rate 2 fits this best~ but a bit noisy in someplace, as we can't silence both slider and tick v_v
01:25:874 - Move rekiai to here to go with the ride cymbal it sounds like at 01:25:624 or around
03:56:294 - I'm still used to hearing the radio announcer at this point. q: haha

[Pokie]
Did some QQ modding. Mostly concerning the overuse of 1/2 rhythms.

[Normal]
03:09:988 (1) - This spinner feels better ending at 03:11:838 - done
03:45:092 (1) - Too soon after a spinner moved a bit closer to the center

[Hard]
00:24:866 (1,1) - Although I had no difficulty playing them, I am wary of having two sliders the same size but varying speed with no real visual indicator. twisted the former one
00:52:269 (6,7,8,9,10) - I'd keep streams longer than 3 out of a Hard difficulty. There are quite a few in the chorus sections. aaa it plays well for me
03:09:988 (1) - This spinner feels better ending at 03:11:838 - done and added notes

[Insane]
03:09:988 (1) - This spinner feels better ending at 03:11:838 - done

thx for the 5sp~ waiting for po's response

edit: po's updated

Colin Hou

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Colin Hou 2012-07-08T12:42:38+00:00

btw I was planning to add another download link for osz pack with full PV, but seems useless as we're going to force update the files in maps orz

Garven

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Garven 2012-07-11T19:45:14+00:00

A pity, really. Ah well.

Rebubbled!

Colin Hou

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Colin Hou 2012-07-11T22:19:06+00:00

thanks a lot!

mintong89

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mintong89 2012-07-12T07:50:14+00:00

May i do taiko maps???

(当然。。。不是我的谱。。太鼓达人版

）（明明知道不能了

）

Colin Hou

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Colin Hou 2012-07-12T11:05:20+00:00

sorry but I don't need taiko diff

Kurai

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Kurai 2012-07-20T17:40:48+00:00

Hi ~

[General]

03:10:288 (1) - Why does this slider end on a 1/8 tick, in Normal, Hard and Insane and on a red tick in Easy. Actually it should end at 03:11:888 in the four difficulties in my opinion. (I don't get why 1/8, it sounds early to me).

Colin Hou

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Colin Hou 2012-07-20T22:39:24+00:00

ok fixed. 1/8 is cuz the ending sound is kind of a part of the lasting one, but seems not accurate much.

Kurai

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Kurai 2012-07-21T13:38:45+00:00