livetune feat. Hatsune Miku - Tell Your World · forum

LunarSakuya

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LunarSakuya 2012-05-06T16:06:48+00:00

hi ^^

General
- Are the lyrics cropped? (idk I see blank space on the left for all of them)

Pokie's Easy
00:39:468 (2) - Angle this way so notes don't overlap http://puu.sh/tg7d
01:03:271 (2) - Maybe delete, too hard for Easy?
01:11:472 (1) - Curve the other way
01:49:877 (1) - Delete NC
01:53:077 (2) - Whistle
01:56:278 (2) - ^, and in similar spots, seems too quiet xD
02:06:079 (2) - Delete
02:18:881 (2) - ^, also vocals don't support it?
03:03:487 (1) - Delete NC
03:13:288 (2) - Delete
03:50:693 (1) - Whistle maybe

Normal
00:12:464 (3,4) - Don't make them touch
00:30:066 (6) - NC
01:05:871 (7) - NC? probably not

01:34:075 (4) - Use a single note instead
02:05:879 (2) - NC
02:29:882 (7) - Don't stack, move to the left
02:58:686 (6) - Ctrl + R
03:02:687 (2) - Don't stack this? looks a little funny
03:51:493 (6) - Add whistle? end seems very quiet

Hard
AR -1

00:52:269 (6) - NC maybe
01:00:270 (6) - NC
02:04:279 (6) - ^
02:17:881 (1) - Delete NC and put NC on 02:18:681 (5)
02:09:480 (6) - Bring this note out
02:59:886 (7) - Ctrl + R
03:02:487 (1,2,3) - Put it like this so you use the (4) slider's shape http://puu.sh/tgjg
03:13:088 (2) - NC

Insane
Short combos in the beginning feel odd?

00:43:468 (1) - Bad spacing
01:33:475 (5) - Let this blanket (4)
02:04:079 (9) - NC
02:29:182 (7,8,9) - Some streams like these feel like they're missing whistles
02:42:584 (5,6) - Make a stack instead of a stream, up to you
03:32:891 (6) - Put it here maybe because it's in the same combo http://puu.sh/tgor

Nice!

M4M map : http://osu.ppy.sh/s/45069

Last edited by LunarSakuya 2012-05-06T16:12:56+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Mixagji

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Mixagji 2012-05-06T16:10:40+00:00

[Insane]
00:39:468(1) - remove nc and 00:46:268 - add nc. I think players were confused
02:04:079(9) - nc

[Hard]
HD6 OD6?
01:40:876 - add note?
01:53:077 - ^ and 01:53:277 - remove this note
02:04:279 - nc

[Normal]
02:26:482(6) - stack parfectly

[Easy]
cant find anything

I'm too late...
good luck~

murasamenosigure

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murasamenosigure 2012-05-06T16:19:06+00:00

[Insane]
01:34:075 (1) - spacing 1.81→1.59
01:37:275 (1) - ^ 2.16→1.74
01:38:676 (1) - end 01:37:775 (3) -
01:41:676 (6) - x 480 y 136
01:47:477 (4) - NC
01:48:277 (1) - remove
01:49:077 (2) - NC
02:36:083 (5) - NC

[hard]
00:11:864 (2) - spacing 0.96→0.6
00:12:664 (3) - ^
00:40:868 (6) - NC
00:46:669 (9) - NC
00:47:469 (1) - Remove NC
01:55:278 (7) - NC
01:55:678 (1) - Remove NC

]Normal]
00:16:265 (5) - NC
00:19:465 (5) - NC
00:22:665 (5) - NC
00:34:067 (4) - NC
00:34:667 (1) - Remove NC
00:42:668 (1) - ^
00:43:468 (2) - NC
01:05:871 (7) - change note
01:40:876 (6,7) - change place maybe x112 y328
01:46:077 (4) - change note
01:58:278 (4) - ^
02:17:881 (7) - ^
03:02:687 (2) - change place
03:04:087 (5) - NC

[easy]
none

This song is very good
I like it
good map
hit sound is very well
I respect you ya
fight

Pokie

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Pokie 2012-05-07T07:40:10+00:00

\update DNA's mod/
\qiuxiazai oo/

Download: livetune feat. Hatsune Miku - Tell Your World (Colin Hou) [Pokie's Easy].osu

Last edited by Pokie 2012-05-07T16:19:14+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

DarknessAngel

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DarknessAngel 2012-05-07T14:26:57+00:00

m4m ~

(看起來我的post有包含在裡面<3)

這是我的圖，先謝謝了><

我用中文mod，因為這樣能表達比較清楚

Red words = Unrankable thing
Blue words = It is the best way that you fix it
Black words = If I were you,I would do that
Green words = some of my comment,or something I want you to notice

Insane

00:40:268 (2,3) - 經過00:38:467 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 急遽的大跳後，這突然的停頓我覺得挺confused，我認為最好放遠點
如果是00:43:468 (1,2) - 我就覺得還好，因為滑條放慢了，且間距改變不大
00:55:670 (4) - 這note放到(x:177,y:154)好像比較順
01:19:473 (1) - 別這樣，咱嚇到了OAQ，1.5x其實就滿快了
01:21:873 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 恩...怎麼不放中間點呢 ? 像這樣 (嘛，感覺的問題吧:3)
03:33:091 (1,1,1) - 總覺得好像沒什麼必要的NC.. :O，你能解釋其意義嗎 ? <3
03:51:293 (5,6) - ctrl + R ? 經過逆時針轉圈後再用notes做順時針轉圈意外的好玩喔<3 (咱的小發現)

Hard

OD-1或2，我覺得7算是Ins才比較會用的，對Hard來說我還是覺得6以下比較合適
這HP...不知道要不要提高一點 ? 作為補足OD被減去的分數
01:55:678 (1) - 說真的，就這個note，有必要放遠一些以做分辨，後面才開始能做間距同步的動作，不然這種急停真的很容易打快甚至miss
最近的Hard風格有越來越趨同的情勢，讓我備感無聊，但你這diff有變化多了，Hard果然還是要像這樣最好

Normal

02:46:085 (1) - 因為是Normal，還是不要做這種時間不同的重疊，對一些還不能玩4.5星或5星的玩家難了點
這作為Normal難了點，但娛樂性比較高，話說，我摸不透你下NC是怎麼下的耶lol，跟我以往mod到的圖不同

Easy

波奇姊></
(話說，這diff還沒被上傳，被挑到相同的東西怎麼辦OAQ)

00:10:714 - 在這裡加個音量極低的綠線嗎 ? 我感覺slidertick略吵
00:58:270 (3,1) - 這之間的距離好像大了些，關掉grid試試(還是說其實是00:57:870 (2,3)錯了 ??)
01:06:271 (3) - 不行啊這間距，太近了
(後來我懂了改變這間距的意義，但這在前面2個1/2拍的notes後面，為了方便區別還是把間距調大點好些)
02:17:081 (3,1) - 唔唔，對於Easy難度來說這折返slider過難，我覺得弄成這樣就簡單多了
後面好難！我覺得這diff當作normal沒問題

總覺得這圖有N、H、H、I的頃向..
但是是好圖<3
歌很好聽 ~ 期待ranked !
good luck ~

Colin Hou

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Colin Hou 2012-05-08T08:09:06+00:00

wcx19911123 wrote:
m4m

[General]
resnap all notes and sections in all diffs except Easy 嚎
为啥tags里有浏览器。。 Chrome的CM曲

[Normal]
HD+1，这太低了 done
02:29:082 - 这附近考虑改变下NC，这一串combo太长了 done
03:11:788 - spinner停在这里感觉更好点 nope

[Hard]
HD至少6 5
01:55:278 (7,1) - 这anti-jump略无意义而且难读 not a problem
02:18:181 - add note？done
02:41:984 - 这里建议消音 done
03:11:788 - 同Normal nope

[Insane]
HD+1 AR+1 nope
01:18:673 (1,1,1,1,1) - 这里的1/8sliders真心很吓死人，至少最后那个用1.5x速。。 这个真心不难
02:31:183 - ^
^同理后略
03:11:788 - 同Normal nope
03:32:891 (6,1) - 这个anti-jump也有点吓人为了Chrome图标 233

整体不错，就感觉hitsound声音小了点0.0
good luck

thx for modding

@Yosora-chan fixed some new combos and thx for pointing out the break.
@Kawayi Rika nothing changed, thx for your time.
@Kitsuneko added that whistle, C2 might be good.
@LunarSakuya changed a new combo on Normal, thx for looking through all the things.
@Mixagji fixed that stacking, thanks.
@murasamenosigure nothing chaned, thx for your efforts!
@DarknessAngel 没做改动,Insane里的NC是为了做个Chrome图标的样子 233

those

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those 2012-05-08T14:10:36+00:00

From .:Let those mod those maps:.

[General]
AIBat's biting about Pokie's Easy having inconsistent Kiai Time. I think it's the last one.
Not storyboarding the lyrics? :c

[Pokie's Easy]
-

[Normal]
HP3 to increase from Easy.
00:24:666 (3,4) - Hits HP bar. Solved by rotating entire combo counterclockwise a bit.
01:05:871 (7) - I think you should remove the last two kickbacks, making the slider end at 01:06:071 - .
02:17:881 (7) - This too; end at 02:18:081 -

[Hard]
00:24:866 (4) - Soft sample whistle at head?
00:33:067 (5) - Bring closer to (4) to completely cover the end of (3)? It'll just be more aesthetically pleasing this way.
02:16:281 (9) - Hits score bar. Solved by bring the combo starting from (8) down to the left a tiny bit, and/or a rotation of 02:17:081 (1,2,3,4) - .
02:36:083 (7) - Hits HP bar. You can just drop this a little.

[Insane]
-

Good luck :3

Pokie

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Pokie 2012-05-09T07:03:09+00:00

液

[Normal]

打著稍覺得有隨機節奏, 估計是我Easy太固定了 orz

02:29:082 (5,6,7) - 因為疊的關係導致(5)飛高高了, 求移動
Editor: http://puu.sh/tKkb
Test: http://puu.sh/tKkv

[Hard]

連打稍多

00:24:866 (4) - 求怒resnap所有綠線, 你看減速都消失了

01:02:271 (11,1,2) - combo稍奇怪, 不從(11)或者(2)開始nc嗎?
02:15:880 (7,8,9) - 太擠了, 求將02:14:880 (2,3,4,5,6) - 重排一下讓(7,8,9)有空間些
02:19:081 (7,8,9,10) - 其實我覺得這種三角很難看的...移成這樣? http://puu.sh/tKtt

還有個問題想提一下, 節奏方面的
02:20:881 (1,2,3,4,5) -
02:24:482 (2,3,4,5) -
前面的三連可以說是跟鼓, 但後面的三連就有點沒意義了..其實你開25%, 02:24:982 - 這一個位置反而有一下較輕的鼓, 而你原本放三連的位置是完全沒有的
加上音效並不特別明顯下, 像後面的三連這種方式打著就比較無力
像00:52:269 (6,7,8,9,10) - 也是一樣

不過似乎基本都是這麼下的, 改不改都行, 那就這麼

03:09:988 (1) - 覺得可以加長一拍

[Insane]
00:52:469 (5,1,2) - 這裡效果稍弱, 放的太跳了...我想說建議把間距縮小些, 但是基本都被前面的串給擋住位置
01:18:673 (1,1,1,1) - 其實你要相信, 這些真的很難
01:37:275 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - 不錯!
01:57:678 (1) - 強烈建議換成1.0x, 這邊就算跟vocal也不該切成kiai用的1.2x
02:18:681 (1,2,3) - 有問題, (2)應該縮短1/4結束, (3)在紅線開始
這邊是因為你的(2)是從伝えたい的た開始, 但也在い結束
在Edit聽著問題不大, 但Test的時候明顯感覺(3)慢了, 倒不如也一起弄成03:25:890 (1,2,3,4) - 這樣的-w-

03:32:891 (6,1,1,1) - 雖說有個chrome梗, 但是不得不說...整個kiai都是大spacing+高sv跳的時候插一個這麼小間距的很違和
間接加大一些吧

另外在kiai裡的折返slider很破壞flow T_T

其他沒什麼問題了

~~其實400萬跳到1500萬真的大丈夫嗎, 盡管難度倒是挺平均的…~~

Colin Hou

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Colin Hou 2012-05-12T17:33:06+00:00

thanks those, lyrics should be SBed, idk why not applied to your copy, and most fixed.

还有多谢po的帮助很多地方都是脑子短路时候加的东西有替代方案的话会尽快补上 ;w;

Pokie

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Pokie 2012-05-14T01:30:30+00:00

\液/ 誰做圖不是腦子一熱就照面扔的呢 (濃霧

求這張rank喔喔喔

evanescense

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evanescense 2012-06-04T15:34:01+00:00

Please add the video of the song full, is so beautiful.

Here is the video on youtube of the song

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PqJNc9KVIZE&feature=related

Thank you very much, I'm playing the "Hard" version of this map and is great.

Colin Hou

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Colin Hou 2012-06-06T04:48:08+00:00

yeah I know there is a video, but it's not really suitable for playing.

might add an alternate link with full video in creator's words

lebron2_old

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lebron2_old 2012-06-06T23:54:38+00:00

Star

This song is a famous miku's song I like.
And this beatmap is good

I have a few skill of modding.
So it may confuse you.

SPOILER

Normal

00:41:268 (5) - transfer this slider to 00:41:068
00:41:668 - add circle

01:55:278 (7) - transfer this circle to 01:55:078

02:09:680 (5) - remove this circle
02:10:080 (6) - remove this slider
then
02:09:680 - add slider to 02:10:080
02:10:480 add circle
02:10:880 add circle

03:11:688 - I think It's better spin's finish time

thanks!

Colin Hou

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Colin Hou 2012-06-14T07:17:55+00:00

changed the spinner ending time in normal, thanks

NatsumeRin

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NatsumeRin 2012-07-02T02:36:49+00:00

[Pokie's Easy]
00:19:465 (5,1) - switch new combo?
00:53:870 (1,2,3) - (nazi)弄个等边三角？
01:19:473 (1) - split into 2 spinners? (another start at 01:22:673 - )
03:15:088 (2,1) - yeah i know it's easy to reconize but still not sure... http://puu.sh/Fb3d ?
03:18:289 (1) - similar thing won't mention again...
03:31:491 (2) - change to the up-side so the track is in a circle?
03:38:692 (1) - split into 2 spinners?

[Normal]
AR-1 OD-1?
00:13:064 (4) - farther a bit? the blanket looks not that good when they still stack a bit..
01:18:073 (2) - remove?
01:36:875 (3,4) - not perfect stacked.
02:30:882 (4) - remove?
03:51:293 (5) - same suggestion.. i think in the end of the kiais your notes seems to be too much...

[Hard]
00:24:866 (4) - new combo for the slowdown?
00:39:068 (3) - could be left/down a bit so it plays more fluently imo.
02:28:282 (7) - extand by 1/4?
02:42:884 (8,9) - personally i think this should be in a stack...
03:29:490 (7,8) - http://puu.sh/FbiF or some better shape?

[Insane]
00:14:464 (4,7,10) - i prefer to new combo all these notes so it's made more clear to the players (also the feeling)
00:40:268 (2) - new combo to keep consistency with the following notes like 00:43:468 (1,2) - ?
01:18:673 (1) - wow
01:21:873 (1) - is it a bit much for the jump (1/2 after spinner and then jump? though i know the BPM is not high), just keep a jump between 2&3 is not enough?
01:42:876 (1) - circle-slider-circle-slider would fit better (1 - current4 - 2 stack on 4's beginning - 3 ?)
03:07:287 (6) - keep a similar shape with 5? (since no more sliders after this for a while)

Colin Hou

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Colin Hou 2012-07-02T14:33:53+00:00

NatsumeRin wrote:
[Normal]
AR-1 OD-1? done
00:13:064 (4) - farther a bit? the blanket looks not that good when they still stack a bit.. done
01:18:073 (2) - remove? done
01:36:875 (3,4) - not perfect stacked. done
02:30:882 (4) - remove? removed same place with the former pattern
03:51:293 (5) - same suggestion.. i think in the end of the kiais your notes seems to be too much... done

[Hard]
00:24:866 (4) - new combo for the slowdown? done
00:39:068 (3) - could be left/down a bit so it plays more fluently imo. done
02:28:282 (7) - extand by 1/4? done
02:42:884 (8,9) - personally i think this should be in a stack... replaced the slider with 2 notes
03:29:490 (7,8) - http://puu.sh/FbiF or some better shape? puush is down for me...

[Insane]
00:14:464 (4,7,10) - i prefer to new combo all these notes so it's made more clear to the players (also the feeling) done
00:40:268 (2) - new combo to keep consistency with the following notes like 00:43:468 (1,2) - ? not changed
01:18:673 (1) - wow
01:21:873 (1) - is it a bit much for the jump (1/2 after spinner and then jump? though i know the BPM is not high), just keep a jump between 2&3 is not enough? did some changes
01:42:876 (1) - circle-slider-circle-slider would fit better (1 - current4 - 2 stack on 4's beginning - 3 ?) changed the order but no stacks
03:07:287 (6) - keep a similar shape with 5? (since no more sliders after this for a while) not changed

thx a lot, waiting for pokie's response

edit: pokie's diff updated

NatsumeRin

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NatsumeRin 2012-07-03T05:05:55+00:00

gogogo

Garven

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Garven 2012-07-08T11:34:37+00:00

Yo

[General]
Tick rate 2 fits this best~
01:25:874 - Move rekiai to here to go with the ride cymbal
03:56:294 - I'm still used to hearing the radio announcer at this point. q:

[Pokie]
Did some QQ modding. Mostly concerning the overuse of 1/2 rhythms.

[Normal]
03:09:988 (1) - This spinner feels better ending at 03:11:838 -
03:45:092 (1) - Too soon after a spinner

[Hard]
00:24:866 (1,1) - Although I had no difficulty playing them, I am wary of having two sliders the same size but varying speed with no real visual indicator.
00:52:269 (6,7,8,9,10) - I'd keep streams longer than 3 out of a Hard difficulty. There are quite a few in the chorus sections.
03:09:988 (1) - This spinner feels better ending at 03:11:838 -

[Insane]
03:09:988 (1) - This spinner feels better ending at 03:11:838 -

Colin Hou

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Colin Hou 2012-07-08T12:21:35+00:00

Garven wrote:
Yooooooooooooooooo

[General]
Tick rate 2 fits this best~ but a bit noisy in someplace, as we can't silence both slider and tick v_v
01:25:874 - Move rekiai to here to go with the ride cymbal it sounds like at 01:25:624 or around
03:56:294 - I'm still used to hearing the radio announcer at this point. q: haha

[Pokie]
Did some QQ modding. Mostly concerning the overuse of 1/2 rhythms.

[Normal]
03:09:988 (1) - This spinner feels better ending at 03:11:838 - done
03:45:092 (1) - Too soon after a spinner moved a bit closer to the center

[Hard]
00:24:866 (1,1) - Although I had no difficulty playing them, I am wary of having two sliders the same size but varying speed with no real visual indicator. twisted the former one
00:52:269 (6,7,8,9,10) - I'd keep streams longer than 3 out of a Hard difficulty. There are quite a few in the chorus sections. aaa it plays well for me
03:09:988 (1) - This spinner feels better ending at 03:11:838 - done and added notes

[Insane]
03:09:988 (1) - This spinner feels better ending at 03:11:838 - done

thx for the 5sp~ waiting for po's response

edit: po's updated

Colin Hou

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Colin Hou 2012-07-08T12:42:38+00:00

btw I was planning to add another download link for osz pack with full PV, but seems useless as we're going to force update the files in maps orz

Garven

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Garven 2012-07-11T19:45:14+00:00

A pity, really. Ah well.

Rebubbled!

Colin Hou

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Colin Hou 2012-07-11T22:19:06+00:00

thanks a lot!

mintong89

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mintong89 2012-07-12T07:50:14+00:00

May i do taiko maps???

(当然。。。不是我的谱。。太鼓达人版

）（明明知道不能了

）

Colin Hou

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Colin Hou 2012-07-12T11:05:20+00:00

sorry but I don't need taiko diff

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Kurai 2012-07-20T17:40:48+00:00

Hi ~

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03:10:288 (1) - Why does this slider end on a 1/8 tick, in Normal, Hard and Insane and on a red tick in Easy. Actually it should end at 03:11:888 in the four difficulties in my opinion. (I don't get why 1/8, it sounds early to me).

Colin Hou

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Colin Hou 2012-07-20T22:39:24+00:00

ok fixed. 1/8 is cuz the ending sound is kind of a part of the lasting one, but seems not accurate much.

Kurai

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Kurai 2012-07-21T13:38:45+00:00