1. remove letter box, i think this is unnecessary
2. BG size are not good, use this http://puu.sh/HkZS
3. you should add soft-sliderslide in silence and soft-sliderslide2 in silence
4. delete "Kalafina - Hikari no Senritsu (TV Size) (Zejky).osb", this is unnecessary

1. AR+1 i think this is better
2. 00:00:680 (2,3,4) - i think you should unify this distance
3. 00:12:868 (5,6,7,8,1) - ^
4. 00:20:993 (5) - move to x:158 y:64
5. 00:23:805 (1,2,3) - i think you should unify this distance
6. 00:28:805 (1,2,3) - ^
7. 00:37:555 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - ^
8. 00:45:680 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
9. 01:04:743 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
10. 01:25:367 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
11. 01:27:243 - use volume 5%, this is unrankable. you should raise up volume (10%~)

1. rename "Hard"
   Easy/Normal/Insane/Insane are not ranked. you should fix it or create new difficulty
   but i think this diff is not insane. if you fix this diff, can be use as "Hard"
2. OD-1 i think this is better
3. 00:00:368 (1) - reverse to using the CTRL+R key
4. 00:02:868 (2,3,4,5,6) - i think you should unify this distance
5. 00:09:118 (3) - you should change distance (i think 1.2~1.6 is better)
6. 00:09:118 (3,4) - this part, i think it will be much better if you do this http://puu.sh/Htw2
7. 00:10:993 (1,2) - ^ http://puu.sh/Htzf
8. 00:12:868 (5,6) - you should change distance (i think 1.4~1.8 is better)
9. 00:17:555 (3,4) - ^ (1.2~1.6)
10. 00:22:868 (7) - ^ (1.4~1.8)
11. 00:24:430 (4) - ^ (1.2~1.6)
12. 00:25:680 (3,4) - ^ (1.2~1.6)
13. 00:27:243 (1,1) - ^ (1.4~1.8) and remove NC, i think this NC is unnecessary
14. 00:28:805 (1,2,3) - i think you should unify this distance
15. 00:29:430 (4,5) - you should change distance (i think 1.2~1.6 is better)
16. 00:30:680 (3) - ^ (1.2~1.6)
17. 00:31:618 (2,3,4) - (1.4~1.8)
18. 00:45:680 (1,2,3) - i think you should unify this distance
19. 00:46:304 (4,5,1) - ^
20. 00:52:868 (2,3,4,5,6) - you should change distance (i think 1.2~1.6 is better)
21. 00:55:055 (9,10) - remove note and add reverse arrow on slider
22. 01:03:805 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - you should change distance (i think 1.2~1.6 is better)
23. 01:08:493 (4) - ^ (1.2~1.6)
24. 01:15:055 (1,2,3) - i think you should unify this distance
25. 01:20:368 (6) - you should change distance (i think 1.2~1.6 is better)
26. 01:21:618 (2,3,4,5) - ^ (1.2~1.6)
27. 01:25:367 (2,3,4,5,6) - i think you should unify this distance

1. DR+1
2. you should unify all distance (0.6 or 0.7 or 0.8 or 0.9 or 1.0)
3. 00:18:805 (4,5) - change slider
4. 00:19:743 (6,1) - ^
5. 00:23:805 (1,2) - remove note and add reverse arrow on slider
6. 00:25:055 (1,2) - ^
7. 00:28:805 (1,2) - ^
8. 00:30:055 (1,2) - ^
9. 00:40:680 (4,5) - ^
10. 00:52:555 (1,2,3,4) - change slider
11. 00:55:993 (1,2) - ^
12. 00:58:492 (1,2) - ^
13. 01:00:055 (4,5) - ^
14. 01:00:993 (1,2) - ^
15. 01:03:493 (2,3) - ^
16. 01:10:993 (1,2) - ^
17. 01:12:868 (2,3) - ^
18. 01:15:992 (1,2) - ^
19. 01:18:493 (1,2) - ^

1. DR+2
2. you should unify all distance (0.6 or 0.7 or 0.8)
3. 00:06:618 (1) - remove NC. i think this NC is unnecessary
4. 00:09:118 (2) - NC
5. 00:16:618 (1) - remove NC

1. i love it. great

1. OD-1. OD 7 is very high
2. 01:16:305 (2) - move to x:192 y:264
3. 01:16:618 (3) - move to x:88 y:248
   
   good job

1. you not fix distance?

1. ^

Zejky wrote:

update !!!

Wreath wrote:

hi, Zejky


Blue : you should fix it, its not so good
Red : its unrankable. you should fix it


I do not know what red. you can talk clear


P/S: sorry for the language I use it from google.

Easy

Normal

00:14:118 (1) - Spacing
00:16:618 (1) - Spacing
00:19:743 (2) - Spacing
00:26:305 (1) - Spacing
00:30:055 (3) - Spacing
00:32:555 (3) - Move like 00:31:305 (1) this note (Fix spacing when you change it)
00:33:493 - Add note, sounds empty >.<
00:40:836 (4) - I'm not sure about this one...
00:46:618 - Spacing change again, i prefer to delete 1,2x and fix spacing, because on 00:56:618 - it's normal again, very confusing (Especially for beginners)
01:06:618 - Change again >.<

Hard

00:28:805 (1) - Delete NC
00:40:368 (5) - Make this slider like this Fix spacing
00:55:368 (5) - This is confusing, better change it
00:56:618 - Spacing changes to normal, at 01:06:618 it's 1,2x again, delete 1,2x or do 1,2x at 00:56:618 too
01:16:618 (3,4) - Stack the ends like this then move 01:17:868 (5,1) - 1 grid down

Insane

00:24:430 (1) - Remove NC
00:55:368 (8) - Move 1 grid down, should stack with 00:53:805 (5)
00:56:618 - Same like Hard
01:10:368 (4) - Ctrl + R
01:25:055 (1) - Remove NC and add NC to the following note

1. 00:06:618 (2) - hm...why not put this slider here, right under 1? http://puu.sh/IOpu might look neater
2. 00:46:618 (1) - add finish at beginning of slider? (edit: maybe you don't need to do this b/c there's not other finish sounds lol)
3. 00:59:118 (5) - NC
4. 01:00:993 (1) - remove NC
5. 01:01:618 (2) - then NC here
   so that the combos follow each line of vocal
6. 01:10:993 (4) - NC?
7. 01:21:618 (5) - NC please(new section of vocals)

1. 00:34:743 (2) - add whistle at beginning of this slider , and then remove the whistle at the reverse..
2. 00:38:805 (1) - remove NC here and NC on the next note

1. 00:10:993 (1) - remove NC here and NC on next note
2. 01:16:618 (3,4) - stack the ends of these 2 sliders more neatly

1. 00:50:680 - add note to keep the flow going~
2. 00:56:305 (2) - stack with 00:55:368 (8) - ? xD
3. 01:17:868 (5) - ctrl+ r might play better

1. 00:26:305 (5) - NC
2. 00:31:305 (5) - ^
3. 00:52:555 (5) - NC
4. 00:58:493 (4) - ^
5. 01:08:493 (4) - ^

1. 00:08:493 (3) - NC
2. 00:18:493 (4) - ^
3. 00:39:118 (5) - NC
4. 00:41:618 (1) - remove NC
5. 00:50:993 (4) - NC
6. 00:55:993 (9) - ^
7. 00:56:618 (1) - remove NC
8. 01:10:993 (4) - NC
9. 01:15:993 (8) - ^
10. 01:16:618 (1) - remove NC
11. 01:21:618 (3) - NC
12. 01:24:118 (1) - remove NC

[Hard]
drain -1 ?
00:03:336 (5,6) - move right 1 grid :3