eveless wrote:
NTR鸭梨好大
喂歌名和artist还没改啊 等RIN大搞完了hitsound我再修整下SB在调些东西一起fullsubmit
NatsumeRin wrote:
压力。红空那套行不行。。。 其实我试过但是normal各种不合适咦
Normal音我还在想。几个clap试下来都不合适而我讨厌逼逼逼。
只有前面的一小段soft.好吧NTR你是无敌的RIN大人辛苦了嗯
eveless wrote:
NTR鸭梨好大
喂歌名和artist还没改啊 等RIN大搞完了hitsound我再修整下SB在调些东西一起fullsubmit
NatsumeRin wrote:
压力。红空那套行不行。。。 其实我试过但是normal各种不合适咦
Normal音我还在想。几个clap试下来都不合适而我讨厌逼逼逼。
只有前面的一小段soft.好吧NTR你是无敌的RIN大人辛苦了嗯
144,96,10944,2,2,B|331:95,1,180,2|0
368,120,11744,6,0,B|423:159|493:131,1,120
408,216,12544,2,2,B|379:276|422:330,1,120,2|0
312,328,13344,2,0,B|192:328,1,120
144,304,13944,1,0
120,256,14144,2,2,B|86:210|132:190|97:136,1,120,2|0
144,40,14944,6,0,B|176:76|253:93|323:80|380:29,1,240,4|8
424,136,16144,1,0
168,160,63744,2,0,B|127:107|172:48,1,120,2|0
264,0,64544,1,10
336,80,64944,1,10
336,80,65344,2,0,B|393:123,1,60,10|0
Athena Tennos wrote:
A-tan's mod.....M4M~
EDIT:~非常感谢上次的建议!~。。。
[General]
♪~
hmm~没有kiaitime可以么。。?~0.0~ 可以的OTL
[Insane]
00:04:344 (4,5,6,7,8) - 向←移一格?~ 好像現在剛好對稱?
00:38:544 (3,4) - 改成一个slider?!~。。。。每次都在这里卡一下~xD....手指按不过来。。。orz~ OTL 所以是難點啊 看後面再有人說的話就改
。。。。。。真心。。。找不出什么太大的问题。。。初心者~。。QAQ~
BG已经PM了~我拿不定主意。。如果没有中意的就ignore掉吧~ 噗 我會說好多AT2么 依然很謝謝啊~
Star!~☆♪~
Good Luck~
话说考完试了么0.0.~~~final exam~xD~ 考完了XD
ts8zs wrote:
irc骗kd18:26 <ts8zs> : 最后这个转盘不合适= =?
18:27 <ts8zs> : 话说不是有另外一张么=w=
18:30 <ts8zs> : 最后那个转盘直接掐掉好了= =
18:33 <Mystica> : 怒吃飯晚上給你mod
18:34 <ts8zs> : 首先有个问题- -
18:35 <ts8zs> : 滑条倍数只能有3个
18:35 <ts8zs> : 01:05:744 (1) - 这个unrankable
18:37 <ts8zs> : 00:10:944 (4) - 这个滑条摆成半圆然后下一个放中间?
18:40 <ts8zs> : 01:18:144 (1) - 尾巴加上什么音效之类的?clap?
18:42 <ts8zs> : 02:28:801 (1) - 这个真的没问题么?我不确定……
18:43 <ts8zs> : hard↑
18:47 <ts8zs> : insane↓
18:47 <ts8zs> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/343326
18:48 <ts8zs> : 00:40:344 (9) - 这个回摆有点突兀
18:49 <ts8zs> : 00:59:744 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1) - 这是上古图的摆法了= =
18:49 <ts8zs> : 话说好早之前的图啊= =
18:57 <ts8zs> : 01:36:194 - 这里加个note
18:59 <ts8zs> : 01:42:944 (7) - 这里变成0.5滑条然后变成向下的怎么样= =
18:59 <ts8zs> : 01:45:381 (7,8,9,1,2,3) - rank图这种不常见
19:05 <ts8zs> : 00:26:944 (10) - 上下颠倒下?
19:06 <ts8zs> : 01:19:881 (4,5) - 换成三往返
19:08 <ts8zs> : 01:20:444 - 01:32:444 - 把没有人声的Finish去掉
19:10 <ts8zs> : Easy↓
19:10 <ts8zs> : 01:32:444 -
19:10 <ts8zs> : 往返
19:14 <ts8zs> : 00:25:944 - 去掉
19:18 <ts8zs> : 就这样吧懒得动了QAQ
some mod fix yeh.easy leave to xu.Thanks for your guysKRZY wrote:
[Insane]
00:43:144 (5,6,7) - Use 1/6 instead of 1/4 here to better fit the music.
00:49:544 (6) - Try and put a repeating 1/6 slider here instead of a none-repeating 1/4 slider. The rhythm is 1/6, so it fits the music better. A suggestion would be:
02:28:801 (1,2) - Try this to better fit the music:
02:35:872 (2,3,4) - Use 1/6 instead of 1/4 here to better fit the music.
a little uncertain with 1/6 beat.let me think.
I see great potential in this mapset, with the right creativity this could turn into a masterpiece. Good luck with this!
TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:
[Insane]
01:00:344 - 这里起的一些4分1 note..有些突然吧,每个应该往里收两格,不过这样就破坏了排列了,不过这里的排列样式也太方方正正了吧..和图的其他部分感觉不够统一协调
其余没什么了.. 這段不知道如何改看看下面情況
good luck!
God like modder cRyo[iceeicee]cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:
Hey ^^
[Insane]SPOILER
- 00:07:144 (1,2,3,4) - wow im sure at 100% that jump pattern should starts a bit earlier o.o! http://puu.sh/EXoW actually not know how to do it well...leave for suggestion
- 00:11:544 (6,1,2,3) - hmm, same here, i prefer to see jump on white tick, i think it fits music very good here so mb (extend 00:10:944 (5) - a bit and add jump note at 00:11:744 ? http://puu.sh/EXqK 00:11:544 (6,1) - this place is normal distance.I just make jump at 00:12:344 (4,5) - this
- 00:26:144 (7) - NC here i guess, its a bit long compare to others + some BGmusic changes here yeh added
- 00:38:744 (5,6,7) - what i wanted to see here o.o http://puu.sh/EXui yeh change to another part
- 00:53:244 (8,1) - some unexpected jump here, i think u can easy remove 00:53:244 (8) - cause there is no sound at BG music here oh my careless
- 00:56:344 (1,2,3) - all previous triplets placed correctly in the middle so mb do sam for this o.o? http://puu.sh/EXvi yeh.I haven't noticed that
- 01:04:344 (1,1,1,1) - hmm, some unnecessary NC spam here....mb u can figure it out o.o? k.some change
- 01:36:194 - it was rly strange when i heard this note but didnt saw it www (+note) where my lost note!
- 01:38:444 (9) - NC here some change
- 01:57:944 (1,1,2,3) - combine them in 1 combo color ? yeh
- 01:59:658 - 02:13:372 this part a bit strange ussage of NC some change
01:59:658 (4) - first NC should starts here cause changing in music then add NC on every big white tick (its rly fit here o.o!)- 01:59:658 (4) - i think u should add smth on the head of slider
- 02:06:515 (4) - same here
- 02:08:229 (7) - whistle i guess ? like u did here 02:01:372 (1) -
- 02:16:801 (5) - NC here like u did 02:23:658 (1) -
- 02:25:372 (4) - NC
- 02:40:372 - prefer to add note here and start spinner from 02:40:801 - cause music changes and start fade here o.o!
all fixed except last.cause I think that more fit..
[offtop]SPOILERMystica prooooo \o.o/
#A bit strange to see such high diff set in easiest diff, if impossiblexu dont want to change it i think u will need another 1.5-2 star diff It's hard to find someone to do the easy >_>
#Same with Beren's diff, its not hard.....its insane, and AR-8 OD-7 obviously to high in [Hard] diff for 160 bpm song..... haha.beren is humankind
#Audio lead in 3000 is way too much, 1500 is enough, also make sure to keep this in every diff, cause right now impossiblexu's diff dont have any o.o 3000 makes people have more time to prepare I think..may wait other suggestion.
Good luck
沒吧 我記得我直接copy的ost裏面的名稱[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:
话说标题的斜线后面是不是有个点 EXEC_HYMN_BATTLESPHERE/. 这样
圖裂了 >_>ts8zs wrote:
突然发现点东西……莫非是新加进去的……?我记得有这条啊……
我的意思是这个rank图有这么多滑条速度=w=b……我是不是mod错了什么的Mystica wrote:
圖裂了 >_>ts8zs wrote:
突然发现点东西……莫非是新加进去的……?我记得有这条啊……
edit:你發錯圖了吧lol
3slider速度只是guide line 如果運用的好而且十分出彩的話可以無視的ts8zs wrote:
我的意思是这个rank图有这么多滑条速度=w=b……我是不是mod错了什么的Mystica wrote:
圖裂了 >_>
edit:你發錯圖了吧lol
wow,thxDusty wrote:
oh boy, Ar tonelico!
[Tz8zs's Easy]
01:21:944 (4) - combobroke because I couldn't see the repeat please change it, that's really not OK in an Easy
if you change that one thing this is one of my favorite Easy diffs ever!
yeah, this definitely deserves a star
后面整个都要动啊 靠!= =b[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:
来mod神曲顺便给个星
Ts8zs祝rank ^^
- 太2 ……你是来找茬的么
- 不过那几个3/4梗挺有趣的呢wwwwwwwww你是真心来找茬的么
- 01:21:944 (4) - 你这是自寻死路 好吧^这个后面好难改^
- 然后你看看人家Beren diff几条绿线, 你的diff几条绿线, 音效认真点做>_>提供的音效搞不懂……反正现在这样也不错?
謝了>_>[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:
来mod神曲顺便给个星
Insane同上
- 00:40:344 (9) - (9)在这个位置很难看清, 加上(7)那地方哈的一声很容易打下50, 我觉得把(8)去掉然后jump过去是不是打着舒服点 因為是一個整體啊>_> 嘛 看看下面反應如何
- 00:40:844 - 上面改了的话这里三连换到这里吧0.0 图 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/373685
- 00:43:144 (5,6,7) - 这地方是1/6 0.0 事實上聽的的確有1/6的成份但是鑒於前方後方都是1/4在這突然變的話真心略坑....看看其他人怎麼說
- 00:45:844 (3,4) - o.o这不对啊 同上
- 00:57:544 (9,10) - 没摆好等间距 修正了些位置
- 这jump段好!
- 01:42:944 (7) - 尝试下1.5倍速这个滑条然后用这种形状 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/373690 好主意
- 01:54:944 (1) - 碰血条了(好像不好改o.o) 目測問題不大
- 02:35:872 (2,3) - 这也是1/6... 可以给成note+1/6 slider+长slider什么的。。。
祝rank ^^
別 我自己最近又忙又偷懶還是交給你了(拍ts8zs wrote:
http://puu.sh/PGYg 求下音效……
thanks for your modScorpiour wrote:
Hi there~~mod for request~~
please reply this post to tell me where you fixed or not, thanks :>
[General][Easy]
- 根据其他的diff设定,Easy和Normal的Audio Lead-in应该放在1000比较合适 都3000吧避免各种事情233
- 另外我觉得这张BG不适合开Letterbox——正好把额头挡住一条…… 修正
最后一段的直线Slider用的有些过了,建议考虑加一些小的弧线来柔化一下。
- 00:53:344 (1) - 有些莫名的节奏,应该是1/2或者1/1的折返而不是3/4 他是压后面的声音倒也不是不可 只不过音效配的有点.
- 00:54:644 (2) - 这个从蓝线开始的折返也完全没有道理,这里的节奏正常来说不应该是这样么…… ^
- 00:59:744 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
- 01:18:944 (1) - 直角拐的不好看,感觉弯成和前面类似45度或者60度的都会好一些 鉴于他后面大量使用这种类型就还是不修改了
- 01:44:819 (2,1) - 这种直来直去的地方也不是很舒服…… 已修
- 01:57:944 (1) - ^,建议如图
- 02:03:086 (2,3) - 依然是直角拐弯的问题……不觉得这么放很僵硬么…………后面也一样,不重复说了
[Normal]
- 00:10:944 (4) - 感觉上这里可以带一点弧度,不会显得太生硬 感觉略是老许的风格到还看得过去
- 00:40:544 (1,2) - 这两个也是感觉可以带一点点弧度或者形状,不用这么直来直去的……不是很好看 ^
- 00:50:944 (3) - (nazi)形状歪了 fixed
- 01:05:744 - 我觉得这段结束在这里刚刚好,Break可以延迟到01:06:144 - 开始但是多了个Slider的话就感觉有一点拖沓了不够干净 我感觉是提前一点好所以修正了下
[img]puu.sh/19zMk[/img]- 01:12:544 (1,3) - 依然是不太好看的大直线………… ^
- 01:37:694 (6,1,2,3) - ^
- 01:44:444 (2) - ^,其实我觉得,这种直线和3号圈的搭配效果真的很一般……除非特别合适,哪怕加一个折线也能让视觉效果好很多~这一点上Easy的直线比你用的要好一点
后面那些长长的连续的直线我也是类似的建议,就不跟你来回说了
[Insane]That's all~~~star & good luck with the rank =v=
- Slider Tick Rate 2? SV这么高的话STR1有一点空的样子 2的话音效有点..而且1的话看起来问题也不大
- 00:40:344 (9) - 顺着方向下来的话感觉这个应该在144:240附近 最后打一个绕圈隐藏中间
- 00:59:744 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I want you 即视感…………这么放有点…………2 啊哈哈哈我蠢B不解释
- 01:36:006 (7,8) - 交换下位置的话打起来更舒服一点~ 好
- 01:39:569 (4) - ctrl+r for better flow? 应该是跟下面那个ctrl+r的
- 01:45:381 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - wa...wat happened here... 折返连打233
- 02:23:658 (1) - 这种的……我能吐槽你slider没认真拉形状么……其实有很多这种的不过这个算是很明显的一个…… 不我只是为了一点点的弧度有弯曲感啊
- 02:33:729 - 感觉上这里可以加个note~ 感觉是顿下比较好...看看下面怎么说