1. Easy (2,74 stars, 54 notes)
2. Hard (4,83 stars, 86 notes)
3. Insane (4,99 stars, 106 notes)
4. Normal (3,44 stars, 62 notes)

JappyBabes wrote:

what

[Luanny PhNyx] wrote:

JappyBabes wrote:

what

Shut up woman, get on my horse.

[Luanny PhNyx] wrote:

NO U.

Rikers wrote:

[Luanny PhNyx] wrote:

NO U.

Get out of my house.

1. 00:03:685 (1) - Probably just use a repeat instead of a circle? Looks much more symmetric.
2. 00:13:885 (4) - Move this ~2 grids down. This will provide better flow with (1,2,3) and some place for (5).
3. 00:14:485 (5) - Since we have that place now, I suggest to move it at least to 48;8. You can lower everything even more (for example, pick all notes until this note and move them ~3 grids down) to make this flow perfect.
4. 00:19:685 (1,2,3,4) - These 4 could been replaced by two mirrored sliders, I think that fits the vocal a bit more :v
   http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/391830 like this could be good, dunno
5. 00:22:085 (4,5,1) - Hm, the triangle could be better. 00:22:885 (1) - place this on 84;96, will work.
6. 00:23:485 (2) - If you apply prev. one, just move this circle 1 grid right.
7. 00:37:285 (6,7,8) - I think you can place here two 1/2 sliders and that will fit better. I mean, emphasizing "takeyou" and "roundthe" with the sliders will look good. Think how can you do that.
8. 00:40:285 (5) - Place this on 40;384. It will make a straight line with (4)'s end and (1)'s start. And still in the borders of the test window.
9. 00:45:885 (6,1) - IMO, the better position for these two is 160;268 for circle (to flow the prev. slider) and 104;328 for the slider (to match distance spacing)

1. 00:03:685 (1) - Probably too curvy for me. Something like this looks better.
2. 00:08:485 (5) - Hm, I don't think that so close spacing is good here, but you can do nothing (due to straight lines and shit :c). Anyway, suggesting the same as above.
3. 00:10:085 (1) - Suggestion as before, AND also move the next slider one grid up and try to encircle it with this one.
4. 00:11:285 (3) - I guess, if you move the prev. slider 1 grid up, this must be moved too?
5. 00:11:285 (3,4,5) - Okay, that shit I'm suggestion ruins everything, so two choices: or you don't fix anything, or you work hard on moving everything 1 grid up. But well, you could try to pick these all 00:10:685 (2,3,4,5) and move them together.
6. 00:18:085 (1) - Move the slider endpoint to 484;228 and replace the next one with it's mirrored copy
7. 00:26:485 (1) - First jump in the map? Hm.
8. 00:28:285 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/391843 Make this? Don't want to explain what is here, you'll understand
9. 00:40:285 - Ok I think you need a note here, so my suggestion how to make it:
   00:40:085 (3) at 284;104, at the 00:38:685 (8)'s body;
   new note at 00:40:285 on 180;168 (not on grid I suppose)
10. 00:42:285 (1) - This plays weird, please choose: or delete this note, or add another one on 00:42:685. This all is for consistancy.

1. 00:04:485 (2) - You'd better curve this down a bit so it will not barely touch the next note. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/391847
2. 00:08:085 (2) - This must be placed on 00:07:885. Also my way to fix that: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/391848
3. 00:13:685 (4,5,6) - Can be pretty confusing for new players. Try to make a slider with (5) and (6) or something else, I dunno, just increase readability of this pattern.
4. 00:23:685 (2,3,4) - Replace with the slider with repeat, will be better for a Normal diff.
5. 00:27:685 (4) - I think the rhythm here doesn't fit, you'd better make something like that, usual 1/2: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/391852
6. 00:42:885 (2,3,4) - Oh nono, stacking under the slider is so confusing in easier diffs imo.. Do something else please.
7. 00:48:485 (4) - Move it to 00:48:285 and stack under (3)

1. The only thing I can find is that I want to press a button when he says "lick" on 00:07:485. Not sure how to do that.

grumd wrote:

Hi :3

Insane

— Overall
This mapset is insanely well made, stuff is polished and neat, so just some suggestions.

— Mapping

1. 00:03:685 (1) - Probably just use a repeat instead of a circle? Looks much more symmetric. not really aiming for symmetry here
2. 00:13:885 (4) - Move this ~2 grids down. This will provide better flow with (1,2,3) and some place for (5). okay
3. 00:14:485 (5) - Since we have that place now, I suggest to move it at least to 48;8. You can lower everything even more (for example, pick all notes until this note and move them ~3 grids down) to make this flow perfect. okay
4. 00:19:685 (1,2,3,4) - These 4 could been replaced by two mirrored sliders, I think that fits the vocal a bit more :v
   http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/391830 like this could be good, dunno nice, changed
5. 00:22:085 (4,5,1) - Hm, the triangle could be better. 00:22:885 (1) - place this on 84;96, will work. too close to previous note :~
6. 00:23:485 (2) - If you apply prev. one, just move this circle 1 grid right. ^
7. 00:37:285 (6,7,8) - I think you can place here two 1/2 sliders and that will fit better. I mean, emphasizing "takeyou" and "roundthe" with the sliders will look good. Think how can you do that. I really don't have a place to do so where it doesn't break the flow, either that or I'll have to rearrange the entire map later..
8. 00:40:285 (5) - Place this on 40;384. It will make a straight line with (4)'s end and (1)'s start. And still in the borders of the test window. done
9. 00:45:885 (6,1) - IMO, the better position for these two is 160;268 for circle (to flow the prev. slider) and 104;328 for the slider (to match distance spacing) the jump is waaaaaaaaay too harsh ;x

Hard

— Mapping

1. 00:03:685 (1) - Probably too curvy for me. Something like this looks better. nah, I like it this way :v
2. 00:08:485 (5) - Hm, I don't think that so close spacing is good here, but you can do nothing (due to straight lines and shit :c). Anyway, suggesting the same as above. i like curvy short sliders >:
3. 00:10:085 (1) - Suggestion as before, AND also move the next slider one grid up and try to encircle it with this one. ^
4. 00:11:285 (3) - I guess, if you move the prev. slider 1 grid up, this must be moved too? ^
5. 00:11:285 (3,4,5) - Okay, that shit I'm suggestion ruins everything, so two choices: or you don't fix anything, or you work hard on moving everything 1 grid up. But well, you could try to pick these all 00:10:685 (2,3,4,5) and move them together. i like that pattern as it is ):
6. 00:18:085 (1) - Move the slider endpoint to 484;228 and replace the next one with it's mirrored copy done
7. 00:26:485 (1) - First jump in the map? Hm. I find it fitting with the flow >:
8. 00:28:285 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/391843 Make this? Don't want to explain what is here, you'll understand nice, done
9. 00:40:285 - Ok I think you need a note here, so my suggestion how to make it:
   00:40:085 (3) at 284;104, at the 00:38:685 (8)'s body;
   new note at 00:40:285 on 180;168 (not on grid I suppose) eh... I don't think I have understood this right, but I changed it a bit.
10. 00:42:285 (1) - This plays weird, please choose: or delete this note, or add another one on 00:42:685. This all is for consistancy. spacing, and also follows the "i" in "i think"

Normal

— Mapping

1. 00:04:485 (2) - You'd better curve this down a bit so it will not barely touch the next note. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/391847 nah.. somehow I like the straight thing I have now :v
2. 00:08:085 (2) - This must be placed on 00:07:885. Also my way to fix that: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/391848 it's unexpected for a newbie to play an 1/2 note right at the start D:
3. 00:13:685 (4,5,6) - Can be pretty confusing for new players. Try to make a slider with (5) and (6) or something else, I dunno, just increase readability of this pattern. fixed
4. 00:23:685 (2,3,4) - Replace with the slider with repeat, will be better for a Normal diff. I don't think it's that hard. D:
5. 00:27:685 (4) - I think the rhythm here doesn't fit, you'd better make something like that, usual 1/2: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/391852 creating some variation in the song besides the 1/1 madness, but without trying to be hard to follow for newbies here
6. 00:42:885 (2,3,4) - Oh nono, stacking under the slider is so confusing in easier diffs imo.. Do something else please. ewww ok
7. 00:48:485 (4) - Move it to 00:48:285 and stack under (3) done

Easy

— Mapping

1. The only thing I can find is that I want to press a button when he says "lick" on 00:07:485. Not sure how to do that. me neither

The most clean Easy ever :C

00:22:085 (4,5,1) - Hm, the triangle could be better. 00:22:885 (1) - place this on 84;96, will work. too close to previous note :~

• General
  ● Nice mapset, so just suggestion
  p.s. maybe need to delete .osb file o.o

• Easy
  
  >Settings
  
  ● Good
  
  >Mapping
  
  ● 00:39:285 (1) - prev distance 0.89 looks a little strange...thats all o.o
  
  >Hitsounds
  
  ● Good
  ___________________
  Good Easy diff's

• Normal
  
  >Settings
  
  ● Good
  
  >Mapping
  
  ● 00:05:285 (3) - looks a little strange again, maybe move on x:256 y:168?
  
  SPOILER

  
  ● 00:08:085 (2) - move on x:222 y:343 - distance 0.8
  
  
  >Hitsounds
  
  ● 00:45:685 (8) - remove clap
  ● 00:46:485 (8) - ad clap on finish
  ___________________
  Great

• Hard
  
  >Settings
  
  ● Good
  
  >Mapping
  
  ● 00:39:685 (2,3,4,5) - maybe change this forms, looks that:
  
  SPOILER

  

  191,20,39685,1,2
  270,140,40085,1,0
  201,155,40285,1,0
  132,169,40485,2,0,B|112:330,1,160,2|0

  ● 00:43:285 (4,6) - please a little move down this notes :3 (hp-bar is overlap)
  
  >Hitsounds
  
  ● 00:46:485 (5) - ad clap
  ___________________
  good good

• Insane
  
  >Settings
  
  ● Good
  
  >Mapping
  
  ● 00:14:485 (5) - please a little move down this notes :3 (hp-bar is overlap)
  ● 00:37:085 (5) - ^
  ● 00:37:885 (8) - ^
  
  >Hitsounds
  
  ● 00:46:485 (5) - ad clap
  ___________________
  Yep...nice diff's too

256,220,46885,5,4
196,272,47285,1,0
216,348,47685,1,2
296,348,48085,1,0
316,272,48485,1,0

272,200,10085,6,0,B|306:148|308:72|236:40,2,180,2|2|2
208,128,11685,2,0,B|160:184|176:260|248:288,2,180,2|2|2