Here I am! Really old bubble, hope to rank it.
[General]
- 02:32:334 to 02:35:645 - This? Or try what Muya suggested, I can't read what it says.
- You should consider ending the last kiai at 04:15:842, the rest is a decrescendo.
- It could be interesting to add some more combo colours.
[Hard]
02:30:679 (1,2,3,4) - The overlap here doesn't look good. Try to space the notes just a bit differently so they don't touch.
03:14:215 (3,1) - This sort of pattern always confuses me (especially with Hidden), because the slider repeats at 1/4 but the next note is 1/2 away. If you put (1) where (2) is, it'd be more readable.
03:58:131 (9,1,2) - This part doesn't follow the vocals like I'd expect, a slider from 03:58:312 to 03:59:034 that repeats at 03:58:673 would be more fitting.
[Normal]
02:07:221 (4,5) - This could be somewhat confusing to read, try removing the overlap between (4) and (5) so it's more clear the distance between them is 1/1.
Insane and Easy look alright for the most part, nicely done. 02:32:334 to 02:35:645 - is the only real problem, try to get more opinions from people.
[General]
- 02:32:334 to 02:35:645 - This? Or try what Muya suggested, I can't read what it says.
- You should consider ending the last kiai at 04:15:842, the rest is a decrescendo.
- It could be interesting to add some more combo colours.
[Hard]
02:30:679 (1,2,3,4) - The overlap here doesn't look good. Try to space the notes just a bit differently so they don't touch.
03:14:215 (3,1) - This sort of pattern always confuses me (especially with Hidden), because the slider repeats at 1/4 but the next note is 1/2 away. If you put (1) where (2) is, it'd be more readable.
03:58:131 (9,1,2) - This part doesn't follow the vocals like I'd expect, a slider from 03:58:312 to 03:59:034 that repeats at 03:58:673 would be more fitting.
[Normal]
02:07:221 (4,5) - This could be somewhat confusing to read, try removing the overlap between (4) and (5) so it's more clear the distance between them is 1/1.
Insane and Easy look alright for the most part, nicely done. 02:32:334 to 02:35:645 - is the only real problem, try to get more opinions from people.
. i was wondering when this mapset will get ranked.