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remi5
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climbb65588

spboxer3 wrote:

Taiko



  • mapping
    (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:50:233 (315,316) - sound like D D/ K K is better. (about pitch)
  2. 02:32:645 (893,894,895,896,897,898,899,900,901,902,903,904) - strange rhythm. maybe you used 1/4 to resnap this part. but it's sound like 1/3 rhythm
  3. 03:16:565 - [suggestion] add d at this way.
  4. 03:28:854 (1188,1189) - sound like D D/ K K is better. (about pitch)
  5. 03:40:420 (1255,1256,1257,1258,1259) - try to use ddddk?
  6. 04:03:553 (1411,1412,1413,1414,1415) - ^
  7. 04:17:287 (1500,1507) - d? follow the background about high/low pitch?
  8. 04:19:456 (1509,1510,1511,1512,1513) - k d k d d follow the background about high/low pitch?
  9. 04:20:902 (1515,1516,1517,1518,1519) - k d k d D same reason.

call me back when you fix it~
Almost fixed all expect the suggestion.

Download: yanaginagi - Killer Song (Ryafuka) [Climbb & Kana's Taiko Oni].osu
Topic Starter
Ryafuka
okay,update~
spboxer3
ok~
looks better~
Joy your bubble~
Snowy Dream
> < congrats for your yanaginagi's song
Star-ed!
and hope you support this map also yanaginagi - Owari no Sekai kara :3
Topic Starter
Ryafuka
yay!
thanks~!
Topic Starter
Ryafuka
BATs: Before rank this map,please look at this part. (02:32:334 - ~ 02:35:645 - )
Is this part is 1/4 snap is right..? or 1/6 snap..? I'm not sure that..
Please look at it carefully. T-T

EDIT:
I saw this post,and worry about this issue.

Muya wrote:

[Love]
02:32:143 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - 1/4でsnapされていますが、ここは全て1/6が正しいです (1,2,3)は1/12となってしまうので、offset: 144075のBPMを2倍の145にして配置してください
SapphireGhost
Here I am! Really old bubble, hope to rank it.

[General]
- 02:32:334 to 02:35:645 - This? Or try what Muya suggested, I can't read what it says.
- You should consider ending the last kiai at 04:15:842, the rest is a decrescendo.
- It could be interesting to add some more combo colours.

[Hard]
02:30:679 (1,2,3,4) - The overlap here doesn't look good. Try to space the notes just a bit differently so they don't touch.
03:14:215 (3,1) - This sort of pattern always confuses me (especially with Hidden), because the slider repeats at 1/4 but the next note is 1/2 away. If you put (1) where (2) is, it'd be more readable.
03:58:131 (9,1,2) - This part doesn't follow the vocals like I'd expect, a slider from 03:58:312 to 03:59:034 that repeats at 03:58:673 would be more fitting.

[Normal]
02:07:221 (4,5) - This could be somewhat confusing to read, try removing the overlap between (4) and (5) so it's more clear the distance between them is 1/1.

Insane and Easy look alright for the most part, nicely done. 02:32:334 to 02:35:645 - is the only real problem, try to get more opinions from people.
Topic Starter
Ryafuka

SapphireGhost wrote:

Here I am! Really old bubble, hope to rank it.

[General]
- 02:32:334 to 02:35:645 - This? Or try what Muya suggested, I can't read what it says. I was changed to 1/6 from 1/4 snap,this part. I hope that it will match
- You should consider ending the last kiai at 04:15:842, the rest is a decrescendo. ya.change it~
- It could be interesting to add some more combo colours. add white(a little blackish) combo colour.

[Hard]
02:30:679 (1,2,3,4) - The overlap here doesn't look good. Try to space the notes just a bit differently so they don't touch.
03:14:215 (3,1) - This sort of pattern always confuses me (especially with Hidden), because the slider repeats at 1/4 but the next note is 1/2 away. If you put (1) where (2) is, it'd be more readable.
03:58:131 (9,1,2) - This part doesn't follow the vocals like I'd expect, a slider from 03:58:312 to 03:59:034 that repeats at 03:58:673 would be more fitting.

[Normal]
02:07:221 (4,5) - This could be somewhat confusing to read, try removing the overlap between (4) and (5) so it's more clear the distance between them is 1/1.

Insane and Easy look alright for the most part, nicely done. 02:32:334 to 02:35:645 - is the only real problem, try to get more opinions from people.
then,all fixed.
thanks modding!
SapphireGhost
In that case, I have no problems with the mapset. Nice difficulty spread and mapping!
Topic Starter
Ryafuka
yay thanks Sapphire~ ></
Verdisphena
Grats, this song is <3333333
Kanari
Yanaginagi <3
Congrats ~ >w<
Thite
omedeto~ :)
xsrsbsns
finally~ grats
S o r d a
おめっと
spboxer3
congratz :P
YTYuyu
Hurray congratz on the rank Rya-chan ;). i was wondering when this mapset will get ranked.
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
Congrats~

killer song <3
vizzy
Congratulations!
cRyo[iceeicee]
Yay ! :)
alacat
おめでとー :oops:
[Yue]
Congratulations n.n
DarknessAngel
yoshi
Topic Starter
Ryafuka
thanks everyone :)
I hope you enjoy it :3
Lundlerol
[Climbb & Kana's Taiko Oni]

in Official Ranking Submission Rules and Guidelines
http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=32&t=73281
Kiai Time
Only use the kiai time in the chorus of a song. Do not use short kiai "flashes".
サビのみkiai timeを使ってください。flash演出のために短いkiaiを使ってはいけません。

The following are them.

02:24:059 -
02:37:300 -
02:51:806 -

BAT has overlooked these.
Topic Starter
Ryafuka
IRC with SapphireGhost
18:07 Ryafuka: : hi~
18:08 SapphireGhost: : Hi hi
18:08 SapphireGhost: : Did I do something wrong
18:08 Ryafuka: : I received a post like this..
18:08 Ryafuka: : p/1665223
18:08 Ryafuka: : should be unranked this map..?
18:09 SapphireGhost: : Well, the connection isn't very good at the moment, what does the post say?
18:10 Ryafuka: : "Only use the kiai time in the chorus of a song. Do not use short kiai "flashes"."
18:11 Ryafuka: : he has been translated into japanese this sentence
18:11 SapphireGhost: : Oh... that's for the taiko?
18:11 Ryafuka: : yes~
18:11 Ryafuka: : 02:24:059 - ,02:37:300 - ,02:51:806 -
18:12 SapphireGhost: : Well, I guess that's true, but I wouldn't unrank over it. You could ask some other BATs too, also climbb
18:12 SapphireGhost: : and Kana.
18:15 Ryafuka: : I see,and can I post this IRC?
18:16 SapphireGhost: : Sure, if you want to
18:16 SapphireGhost: : Sorry for not noticing that earlier
18:17 Ryafuka: : no problem! thanks~
I will ask some other BATs and wait for their response.

EDIT:
IRC with Odaril
18:33 Ryafuka: : hi Odaril~ may I ask you..?
18:34 Ryafuka: : p/1665223
18:35 Ryafuka: : I received post like this
18:35 Ryafuka: : should be unranked this? or not?
18:35 Odaril: : link
18:35 : *Ryafuka is editing (yanaginagi - Killer Song)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/46765]
18:37 Ryafuka: : in the next post,put IRC with SapphireGhost.
18:37 Odaril: : It's not worth unranking
18:38 Ryafuka: : I see,can I post this IRC?
18:38 Odaril: : sure
18:39 Ryafuka: : okay thanks~!

Do I need to ask yet another BAT?
Suzully
That doesn't worth unranking.

遅れたおめっとーう
Colin Hou
nagi :-DDDDD
Kitsuneko
おめりゃふかー
Amyrina_old
good
KanaRin
hmm.....
so is it a VERY important thing?
anyway .. I don't think it will affect players to play the map ...
As I remember, some authentic maps used kiai flashes too .
I won't fix it if no BAT said that it's a unrankable issue.

Finally, I don't think it's a reason to unrank this map ..
miss_master_old

Amyrina wrote:

good
:)
rekusan
LOVED IT
sospk0011
저는 이 맵에서 1100만 점을 달성하였습니다.^^
하지만 제 한계는 1200만 점이라는 거!!
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