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[Gezo's Taiko Oni]
- Generally good. Just some suggestions.
- Chorus part has kiai effect and kiai effect can make that part special, but next time, try making more difference between chorus parts and non-chorus or inter-chorus parts. For example, in 00:07:690 (1,2,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,2), you could give some 'points' to 00:08:599 (30) and 00:09:054 (1) cause vocal is stressed out.
00:10:418 (1,2,1) - Currently 'k k d', but 'd d k' might be better cause pitch of vocal is going up. Not so necessary though, cause we express these kind of things reversed, too.
00:12:918 (1) - don? Cause 00:13:145 (2) needs to be 'bold' but this note is interfering it by being kat.
00:14:054 (3) - I prefer kat here. Vocal pitch thing, I guess. Adjust nearby notes if you think it is needed.
00:16:554 / 00:18:372 - Personally I prefer leaving 00:18:372 empty and filling here cause you did that in 4 measures ago.
00:19:281 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - 'kkd d kkd' might be better. I prefer kkd in this measure since pitch of vocal is going down
00:25:872 (1,2,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Maybe you can repeat rhythm you used in 00:22:236 ~ 00:25:645 (2)?
00:27:690 (1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3) - Similar with above, but I also put slight change on rhythm in 4th measure usually, so whatever.
00:33:145 (1,2,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2) - You used 'o o o oo oo' kind of rhythm in 2 measures ago, so might be better to apply that in here too?
00:58:599 (1), 00:59:281 (2), 01:00:190 (1), 01:01:099 (2), 01:02:008 (1) - I guess you can make these big notes if you want? Corresponding Vocal and backgroud music, I mean. Well if you want to spare those big notes you can leave this as normal, but making these big notes also makes this part stands out since it is the end of inter-chorus part.
01:08:600 (1,2,1) - Same with 00:10:418 (1,2,1).
01:11:100 (1) - Same with 00:12:918 (1).
01:12:236 (3) - Same with 00:14:054 (3).
01:14:736 / 01:16:554 - Same with 00:16:554 / 00:18:372
01:17:463 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - Same with 00:19:281 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1).
01:20:418 (1) - Shorten this by 1/2 can give a 'point' to emptiness of 01:21:327.
01:22:236 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - Hmm, I think it might be better to give some changes instead of mere 'd d k k d d k k' kind of pattern. (So currently it is d 'ddk k d ddk k', so how about 'd ddk d k ddk d' or something like that? whatever.)
01:32:690 (2) - I prefer kat here.
I said this is suggestions so applying these is up to you. Contact me if you have anything to ask.
- Generally good. Just some suggestions.
- Chorus part has kiai effect and kiai effect can make that part special, but next time, try making more difference between chorus parts and non-chorus or inter-chorus parts. For example, in 00:07:690 (1,2,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,2), you could give some 'points' to 00:08:599 (30) and 00:09:054 (1) cause vocal is stressed out.
00:10:418 (1,2,1) - Currently 'k k d', but 'd d k' might be better cause pitch of vocal is going up. Not so necessary though, cause we express these kind of things reversed, too.
00:12:918 (1) - don? Cause 00:13:145 (2) needs to be 'bold' but this note is interfering it by being kat.
00:14:054 (3) - I prefer kat here. Vocal pitch thing, I guess. Adjust nearby notes if you think it is needed.
00:16:554 / 00:18:372 - Personally I prefer leaving 00:18:372 empty and filling here cause you did that in 4 measures ago.
00:19:281 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - 'kkd d kkd' might be better. I prefer kkd in this measure since pitch of vocal is going down
00:25:872 (1,2,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Maybe you can repeat rhythm you used in 00:22:236 ~ 00:25:645 (2)?
00:27:690 (1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3) - Similar with above, but I also put slight change on rhythm in 4th measure usually, so whatever.
00:33:145 (1,2,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2) - You used 'o o o oo oo' kind of rhythm in 2 measures ago, so might be better to apply that in here too?
00:58:599 (1), 00:59:281 (2), 01:00:190 (1), 01:01:099 (2), 01:02:008 (1) - I guess you can make these big notes if you want? Corresponding Vocal and backgroud music, I mean. Well if you want to spare those big notes you can leave this as normal, but making these big notes also makes this part stands out since it is the end of inter-chorus part.
01:08:600 (1,2,1) - Same with 00:10:418 (1,2,1).
01:11:100 (1) - Same with 00:12:918 (1).
01:12:236 (3) - Same with 00:14:054 (3).
01:14:736 / 01:16:554 - Same with 00:16:554 / 00:18:372
01:17:463 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - Same with 00:19:281 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1).
01:20:418 (1) - Shorten this by 1/2 can give a 'point' to emptiness of 01:21:327.
01:22:236 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - Hmm, I think it might be better to give some changes instead of mere 'd d k k d d k k' kind of pattern. (So currently it is d 'ddk k d ddk k', so how about 'd ddk d k ddk d' or something like that? whatever.)
01:32:690 (2) - I prefer kat here.
I said this is suggestions so applying these is up to you. Contact me if you have anything to ask.
Topic Starter
Thank lepido for Taiko check :3
As I said before, let's wait for Gezo's answer ^^
As I said before, let's wait for Gezo's answer ^^
A complete mod I see right there !
http://puu.sh/GAbd
(Also Andrea I subscribed to this topic, no need to worry it will always be fixed in the 3 hours following my wake-up :v)
lepidopodus wrote:
[Gezo's Taiko Oni]
- Generally good. Just some suggestions.
- Chorus part has kiai effect and kiai effect can make that part special, but next time, try making more difference between chorus parts and non-chorus or inter-chorus parts. For example, in 00:07:690 (1,2,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,2), you could give some 'points' to 00:08:599 (30) and 00:09:054 (1) cause vocal is stressed out.
00:10:418 (1,2,1) - Currently 'k k d', but 'd d k' might be better cause pitch of vocal is going up. Not so necessary though, cause we express these kind of things reversed, too.
00:12:918 (1) - don? Cause 00:13:145 (2) needs to be 'bold' but this note is interfering it by being kat.
00:14:054 (3) - I prefer kat here. Vocal pitch thing, I guess. Adjust nearby notes if you think it is needed.
00:16:554 / 00:18:372 - Personally I prefer leaving 00:18:372 empty and filling here cause you did that in 4 measures ago. /baka, fixed
00:19:281 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - 'kkd d kkd' might be better. I prefer kkd in this measure since pitch of vocal is going down Why not !
00:25:872 (1,2,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Maybe you can repeat rhythm you used in 00:22:236 ~ 00:25:645 (2)? I prefer using that rythm (and that o o x ooo o x xxo o x oxoxo x, lol)
00:27:690 (1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3) - Similar with above, but I also put slight change on rhythm in 4th measure usually, so whatever.
00:33:145 (1,2,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2) - You used 'o o o oo oo' kind of rhythm in 2 measures ago, so might be better to apply that in here too? Yes !00:53:372 (2,3,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Remember we use some kind of streams likehttp://puu.sh/GAaN
00:58:599 (1), 00:59:281 (2), 01:00:190 (1), 01:01:099 (2), 01:02:008 (1) - I guess you can make these big notes if you want? Corresponding Vocal and backgroud music, I mean. Well if you want to spare those big notes you can leave this as normal, but making these big notes also makes this part stands out since it is the end of inter-chorus part. Now I remember why I cut these streams XD
01:08:600 (1,2,1) - Same with 00:10:418 (1,2,1).
01:11:100 (1) - Same with 00:12:918 (1). fixedddkd
01:12:236 (3) - Same with 00:14:054 (3). ^
01:14:736 / 01:16:554 - Same with 00:16:554 / 00:18:372 ^
01:17:463 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1) - Same with 00:19:281 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1). ^
01:20:418 (1) - Shorten this by 1/2 can give a 'point' to emptiness of 01:21:327. ^
01:22:236 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - Hmm, I think it might be better to give some changes instead of mere 'd d k k d d k k' kind of pattern. (So currently it is d 'ddk k d ddk k', so how about 'd ddk d k ddk d' or something like that? whatever.) ^
01:32:690 (2) - I prefer kat here. fixed in wmf's mod
I said this is suggestions so applying these is up to you. Contact me if you have anything to ask.
http://puu.sh/GAbd
(Also Andrea I subscribed to this topic, no need to worry it will always be fixed in the 3 hours following my wake-up :v)
Topic Starter
Updated :3
Rechecking...
ok, map is clear.
Bubbled~
ok, map is clear.
Bubbled~
\:D/ nice bubbled~
inb4 fast rank after bubble
inb4 fast rank after bubble
go andrè \:D/
Andrea's maps all go ranked so fast 
Thats something like unbeliveable
Anyway go go for ranked
Thats something like unbeliveable
Anyway go go for ranked
awesome mapset,I see nothing wrong!
ranked
ranked
so fast ranked w !
<3 nyan
Grats with your first ranked Andrea !
Congrats for the first ranked map Andrea ;D
cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:
Grats with your first ranked Andrea !
WHAT, FIVE PAGES?!
Oh god, so slow, Andrea :c
Oh god, so slow, Andrea :c
cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:
Grats with your first ranked Andrea !
even i can't see the preview BGcRyo[iceeicee] wrote:
Grats with your first ranked Andrea !
wow!cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:
Grats with your first ranked Andrea !
And stop breaking balls with "FAST RANK NOOO". You are so boring.
Congratz andrea ^^
Congratz andrea ^^
Topic Starter
Thanks everyone
And yeah this is my first ranked map~
And yeah this is my first ranked map~
grats Andrea ♥
congratz~
Congrats for the first ranked map Andrea >3<
wwwDarknessAngel wrote:
Congrats for the first ranked map Andrea >3<
typoooooIchiGUN wrote:
Adnrea - pro O O
Congrats
Also this is my 9th GD ranked
Gratz Andrea :3
Bleh, gratz >.>
D: ?Darksonic wrote:
Bleh, gratz >.>
I hate fast ranks, that's it.Mythol wrote:
D: ?
Congratz,