Athena Tennos wrote:

A-tan's mod.....

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[General]
♪~♪~♪~~~

[Beginner]
已重制……搞基的图【雾

[Hyper]
00:30:666 (1,2,3,4,5) - 太挤了。。。散开点~距离拉大点~ fixed，不过这里略搞……不得不设了一个跳
01:27:970 (1,2,3,4) - 与前面保持一致~距离~ fixed
01:29:992 - 结束kiai time~~~~unrankable~ fixed

[Another]
00:44:149 - nc~选红色or蓝色？~
01:07:745 - nc
01:10:104 - remove nc
01:11:453 - ^
01:12:632 - ^
01:13:981 - ^
01:23:588 - ^
01:29:992 - 结束kiai time~~~~unrankable~
all fixed

[Obliviater]
01:29:992 - 结束kiai time~~~~unrankable~
感觉没什么其他的问题了~
all fixed

Nice Mapset~and~
很不错的音乐！~
Star~☆♪~Good Luck~
EDIT：话说全部都是你做的？！！？。。。。。我蹲墙角去。。。orz！
除了taiko都是我做的……谢谢star > <

1. delete OSBfile

1. tips: when u want change bpm offset, try change inherited points too, ctrl + A inherited points and move +10offset
   
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   look neat?

1. OD = 7, too much short spinner and hard to get 1000 bonus point. it kinda unrankable then
2. 00:16:846 (3,4) - (3)tooclose from lifebar and (4) tooclose from bottom, better rotate that slider (ctrl+shift+R) by -15% use selection centre
3. 00:19:543 (1,2,3,4) - ^same
4. 00:34:206 (1) - unrankable spinner (autoonlyget300 and nobonuspoint),just start spinner at 00:34:121 (1) -
5. 00:36:734 (1,2) -
6. 00:52:576 (3,4) - (3)ctrl +H, then stack it to (4), then ctrl+H again
7. 00:53:250 (7) - move 1 grid to left, not straight with (5)
8. 00:55:273 (5,6,7) - inconsistent pattern, try copy 00:54:936 (2,3,4) - then paste it there
9. 01:00:161 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this jump D:<
10. 01:02:352 (3) - kinda overlap, yeah this overlap and unrankable thing for now, but it lookplayable
11. 01:07:071 - i dont know, this unherited point for..
12. 01:09:093 (3,4,5) - cool, i like this
13. 01:10:441 (1,2) - try
    
14. 01:17:857 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - i prefer stream here > 01:17:857 (1,2) - pattern not good, better follow 01:14:486 (1,2)'s
15. 01:22:576 (1,2) -
    
16. 01:26:790 (1) - this spinner better have same lenght as 01:25:273 (1) - , try change 01:26:453 (2) into a circle then
17. 01:27:970 (3,4,1,2) - what a hitsound here,try fix clap and whistle here

1. O D = 6 so moe,nice
2. 00:12:295 (1,1,1) - triple one
3. 00:22:408 - remove breaktime
4. 01:27:295 (1,2,3,4) - yeah i like this hitsound, this what i mean for oblivigator's hitsound before

1. more OD !!
2. 00:12:295 (1,2,1) - no triple one,haha
3. 00:29:655 (3,4) - yeah, inconsistent space, use distance snap
4. 00:32:857 (6) - move 1 grip up, because not straight with (7)
5. 00:34:711 (1,2,3) - kinda short yellow combo
6. 00:36:734 (5,6) - ctrl + H then stack to (2)
7. 01:02:014 (3) - move 1grip up
8. 01:09:093 (1) - when u used this slider lenght, slider tick is problem later

1. OD = ....
2. 00:12:295 (1,1,2) - double one!

1. 00:28:307 (3) - not snapped? look buggy
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CDFA wrote:

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mod4mod >3<~

EI(I)(I)II ok.

Overall:
Resnap your timing sections. I know it's annoying, but if I don't tell you this, someone else will.

THE OBLIVIATOR:
00:21:565 (3,4) - Switch these so it plays better and fits with the previous patterns~
00:22:913 (1) - Unrankable! The spinner needs to get at least a 2000 bonus with auto to be rankable!~
00:46:677 (1) - Remove NC
00:47:014 (2) - Add NC
00:52:071 (1) - Remove NC
00:52:408 (2) - Add NC
01:01:677 (1) - Add finish on beginning of slider
01:03:026 (1) - ^
01:04:374 (1) - ^
01:25:273 (1) - Unrankable for previous reason stated above
01:26:790 (1) - ^
All fixed~

ANUDDA
00:12:632 (1) - Remove Nc fixed~
00:22:239 (3) - Add finish I don't consider it as a stress... no change~
00:34:711 (1) - Add finish on beginning of slider Fixed~

Taiko
NOTE: My taiko modding is pretty much a check of AIMod to make sure nothing unrankable exists, so I didn't actually play this.
01:13:138 (3) - Two notes at the same time! Delete one of them Fixed (I am baka lolololol)

HYPA:
00:28:138 (6) - Not moe! Probably have the curve start later :> fixed - maybe?

BABY:
Claps on 2 and 4! made some claps not sure if legit~
00:37:408 (1) - Seems really random to have a spinner here [reason:same as 01:05:722 (1) - ]
00:40:020 - Seems random to have a break here I think the break to be basic... personally. keep~
01:04:374 (1) - Add finish on beginning of slider fixed~
01:14:486 (1,1) - Random spinners ;~; fixed with new notes

kawaii.

1. 23937再加一根红线，bpm不变。不然后面的重音位置都不对
2. 各难度中epilepsy warning全部关掉
3. Taiko的LeadIn去掉？
4. Kiai必须有结束点，两个Taiko都没有。（另外你自己做的难度Kiai需要一致）
5. 把String_Ensemble加进Tags里
6. Kiai需要在线上开始结束。目测前面动过offset又没移绿线，建议统一移一下。方法：进Timing-摁住Shift选中所有绿线，左边会出现移动所选绿线(应该是移+10)

LKs wrote:

不错 继续努力:3

popner wrote:

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

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[General]

1. 23937再加一根红线，bpm不变。不然后面的重音位置都不对fixed
2. 各难度中epilepsy warning全部关掉fixed
3. Taiko的LeadIn去掉？ fixed
4. Kiai必须有结束点，两个Taiko都没有。（另外你自己做的难度Kiai需要一致）fixed
5. 把String_Ensemble加进Tags里fixed
6. Kiai需要在线上开始结束。目测前面动过offset又没移绿线，建议统一移一下。方法：进Timing-摁住Shift选中所有绿线，左边会出现移动所选绿线(应该是移+10)

fixed

[Easy]
00:52:588 (3,1) - 最好不要overlapfixed
00:56:970 (1,2,3) - 对新手来说难以判断间隔fixed

[Normal]
00:24:779 (4) - 距离最好拉到1.1xfixed，换了个角度
00:46:689 (1) - 01:00:173 (1) - NC的位置不对，向前一个或向后一个fixed

[Another]
Fine.

[SE's Taiko]
00:28:319 (3) - unsnapped end.fixed (貌似裂空骑士已经把图扔给我了)

[Obliviater]
00:27:982 (1) - 00:34:218 (1) - 这两个转盘前一个auto能转出1000分，后一个auto只能完成而已，建议加长。尤其后一个是unrankable的。fixed
00:54:948 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 可以关grid snap摆齐一些fixed

LKs wrote:

不错 继续努力:3

That's all I can find. GL~

Thank you for your modding~

Athena Tennos wrote:

[Normal]
00:02:027 (1) - 加个finish？~不过10%加不加都一样~xD
00:29:667 (2) - 距离~prev和next都改成1.01x把~x:220 y:24
00:32:701 (2,3) - ^ x:20 y:132~虽然可有可无~~~不过看起来会整洁很多把~xD
fixed 0 0

[Another]
01:14:498 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 这个梗表示很不错~但是。。。好吧。。。MAT说没事。。。无视掉吧~
额。。。。我找不出问题了。。。很不错！！！做的。。。orz。。。
00:31:858 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这样？~

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172,148,31858,2,0,B|172:208,2,45,2|0|2
240,220,32195,2,0,B|282:262,2,45,2|0|2
340,224,32532,2,0,B|399:224,2,45,2|0|2
412,156,32869,2,0,B|454:113,2,45,2|0|2
412,56,33206,1,0
316,28,33375,5,2
316,28,33544,1,0
256,108,33712,1,2
256,108,33881,1,0
196,28,34049,1,2
196,28,34218,1,0
136,108,34386,1,2
168,204,34555,1,0
256,252,34723,1,4

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Star！~囧！！！~没KDs了。。。orz~~~给我我在射把orz。。。。囧~
Good Luck。。。·-·。。。我发现我是混kd的。。。orz

L_P wrote:

mod 4 mod here

general: hyper 跟 standard之间的难度似乎跨了很大步
而且现今ranking criteria 要求 最低难度3星以下（你的standard事3.04星。。orz) ，这会被吐槽，会被黑
而且现在的starndard难度设定挺高的（尤其是AR)，不如弄难些再加多一个easy如何
我试试看0 0

another
整体上都不错 不过感觉排版太过规矩了 例如01:17:195 (1,2,1,2,1) - 这种地方
当然这不是问题，只是偶尔叛逆一些会更有feel
00:22:251 (4) - 这里突然没有finish,打图得人会觉得囧了起来，如果想要小声的效果，试试看从1,2,3,4慢慢小声下来
00:34:218 (6,7) - 建议把间距弄成跟 4,5之间一样的
00:43:824 (4) - 2头finish
00:49:554 (1) - 这slider向左移一点会更突出高音 - 如果这个apply了 后面自己调整一下
all fixed

hyper
00:31:689 (1) - 这里因为之前的combo在跳，AR低的情况下不容易看出停了一拍
这里建议是在00:31:521 - 加多一个 重叠 note
00:49:386 (1) - 转圈放在这里感觉不到钢琴部分的灵魂。。建议删了map一些东西

- t e n n y a - wrote:

ello! M4M from n y a -'s queue
Black means suggestion

[General]
lin2.jpg not used 【will wait until last GD is done】


[Standard]
- 00:34:742 : new combo? if you do so remove new combo at 00:35:397 【Does not follow the music I think, kept】
- 00:23:937 : 2 inherit timing which one is red and one is green, consider remove the red one 【Taken but removed the green line, as red line is for stress】
- 01:04:368 : add finish? also clap at 01:04:732 and remove clap at 01:05:060 【Taken】

[Hyper]
- 00:12:813 : distance o v o 【kept for the 'jump' is necessary in the level】
- 00:31:015 : consider removing whistle and change into clap to fitting previous rhythm 【Taken】
- 00:31:184 : consider removing clap 【Taken】
- 00:31:689 : consider removing whistle and add clap to fitting previous rhythm 【Taken】
- 00:41:465 : add finish into the slider head 【Taken】
- 01:00:678 : make the slider straight 【Taken】

[Taiko & SE's Taiko]
- 00:23:937 : consider removing the red inherit section with green 【^】
- Maybe make a different BG? *super suggestion ok orz* 【c'mon...】

[Another]
- 00:22:251 : consider using whistle than finish o v o 【kept. Think it to be weird..】
- 00:23:937 : consider change the red to green inherit section 【^】
- 01:19:217 : consider change the whistle into finish o m o 【Taken】

thats all I can found! good luck <3 cx

1. 00:12:813 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这一段滑条尾的声音很违和, 加绿线降音量如何
2. 00:32:606 - 这里还有个音
3. 00:32:943 - ^
4. 00:37:410 (1,2,3) - 这样我觉得比较符合这里的意境 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/362914 (2)没摆好, 看这意思就行0.0
5. 00:47:859 (5) - 叠到(3)下面如何0.0 (我承认只是蛋疼0.0)
6. 00:53:252 (5) - ^
7. 01:04:039 (5) - ^
8. 01:01:342 (4) - 滑条尾remove whistle
9. 01:16:511 (3) - 滑条尾remove whistle
10. 01:24:601 (3,4) - 这两个对称比较好0.0

1. 00:27:297 (2) - head whistle
2. 00:44:151 (5) - 放远点0.0
3. 00:45:500 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - hitsounds呢
4. 01:00:331 (1,2,3,4) - 滑条头加whistle, clap全去掉
5. 01:27:297 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - http://tieba.baidu.com/p/1682211370

1. 00:45:500 (1,2,3,4,5) - hitsounds呢._. 小点声也好啊
2. 01:04:376 (1) - zenmehuishi

eikkaleyd wrote:

[Another]
00:29:657 (6,8) - 这两个位置换一下如何？跟着钢琴音高排位置什么的(fixed)
00:34:544 (8) - 下意识感觉这个也应该叠在7后面，9的位置不用动，这样也挺不错的吧(fixed)
00:49:544 (1) - 这四个slider没拉好（其实是1个），2特别明显(fixed)
00:56:286 (1,3) - 在这里3和后面黄色的1有重叠梗，于是蓝色的1和3再重叠总觉得略不舒服，推荐把1再往2的方向靠拢点，不要和3重叠（1的头部对准3的中间啥的）(原来还有这中事情……fixed)
偏简单，不过很干净w 考虑到SCO还有个ex，那这就算是不错的I难度

[Hyper]
00:43:814 (4) - 1和2是背靠背形状，34却不是——话虽如此，这里推荐把4个slider改成同样的形状翻转3次90度，变成一圈 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/374315 类似这样 (我改的形状大风车……图没看抱歉)
00:49:376 (4,5,6,7) - 看节奏和你之前放的方法，应该互换45和67，先slider再circle而不是反过来(fixed)
00:56:623 (3) - 略空，考虑到h难度不好加circle，推荐这个换成1/2 slider(fixed)
01:05:387 (4) - 因为这里有两个音……我觉得最后留个circle不好（后面红线听起来空），换成一个和123差不多的slider()
01:28:477 (4) - 这个可以删(fixed)

[Taiko]
Settings 默认所有参数都是中间那格，大圈AR4AR6啥的都不行的(fixed)

[SE's Taiko]
Settings 和taiko一样(fixed)
01:08:168 (2,3) - 这里为什么没有note，音缺了一块的感觉。
太鼓都没仔细看……/_\没啥特别的 感觉还不错

(嘛大概准备remap或者撤掉了 觉得两个都有点问题)

[Standard]
不用大圈吗[/color](因为是normal)
00:28:983 (1,2) - 我感觉这俩应该换一下，先circle[/color](按那个1/4拍的连打 滑条比较有连贯性 keep)
很好奇KIAI段clap音效怎么下的，前两句长白线，后面一会24一会2的，听上去有点乱，finish还好没啥问题，clap再检查下如何
(重做了)

没了~加油，可以泡了其实

sherrie__fay wrote:

[Standard]

00:26:623 (1) - 我觉得这个形状还可以抢救一下
00:27:971 (3) - +reverse 并在结尾+clap
00:33:365 (4) - 结尾clap
00:36:735 (3) - ^
01:23:926 (1) - 缩短到白线吧。
(fixed)
[Hyper]

00:18:206 (1,2,3) - 我觉得这三个的位置还可以再好看一点 比如2和3往右一点什么的(把距离加大了)
00:25:612 (2,3) - 我觉得2用折返3用单向比较合适(这里无力……我搞成了两个折返 大概超蠢吧)
00:26:455 - +note
00:31:511 - ^
00:49:544 (5,6,7,8) - 其实我觉得两个单点露出来比较好。但是你也没地方可以安排了……考虑下把(5)单拿出来试试吧o.o
01:05:387 (4) - 拿出来
01:05:556 - +note
01:28:477 (4) - delete
(fixed)
[Another]

00:27:971 (5) - 挪出来(fixed)
00:28:646 (7) - 串子从这里开始，NC也从这里开始(fixed)
00:43:814 (4) - 折返去掉改单向滑条+note(fixed)
01:14:488 (1,2,1,2,1) - 各种对不齐……虽然是nazi但是打起来让人略不爽(无力……虽然试着对齐了但是别的地方又不齐了)
01:17:185 (1,2,1,2,1) - ^
01:16:511 (3) - NC
01:19:207 (3) - ^(fixed)

看到GD是蝎子的我顿时心安了不少:33

Siesta- wrote:

Hi iroseka >"<

Long time no see ... 0.0(me too > <)

Another

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  1. 00:34:713 (9) - I think that To use slider is better. end to 00:35:219(weak at making long sliders... so keep)
  2. 00:43:814 (4) ~ 00:45:500 (1) - I recommend to input some note 0.0(as a section end, adding note will make it weird... so I just leave it blank)

Hard

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  1. 00:44:151 (5) ~ 00:45:500 (1) - I recommend to input some note 0.0(^)
  2. 01:03:702 (5) - move to (x:220, y:296)(both slider moved so can't remember where it was...)

Standard

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  1. Good !

forevehappy wrote:

hi~隨機 Taiko mod

Taiko Hard

00:25:285 (26,27,28,29,30,31,32) - dkdkddk? no...? 这里我觉得跟随高低音比较好 kdkkddk
00:40:790 (95,102) - k?这里其实是达人三弦的梗……所以不改
00:47:026 (118) - k这里我觉得跟随高低音比较好
00:58:993 (163) - Dbgm音量很低 用D好怪……
01:15:172 (30) - k?同上。01:14:751 (27) - 改成了k

Taiko Oni

00:45:510 (171) - d就可以了,像[01:01:689]這段開始用D才更好明明这里有大镲D:

嗯嗯,果然觸到我了

good luck

Steph De Chine wrote:

From Steph's Queue
看了下,其实整体还不错 其实要有那么多星星的都不错

Standard
00:02:027 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) & 00:18:206 (1,2,3,4) - 这个直线不是很好看？改成稍微带点旋转的菱形？改成方形了
01:14:488 (1) - 可以分成两段，一段到01:14:825，另一段从01:15:162开始 改成了折返滑条 听起来舒服些
01:17:185 (1,2) - 这段还是听起来有些奇怪呢~ ^

Hyper暂时没找到啥问题

话说……有必要把几乎全部的Slider都搞成直角弯的吗？就不能搞点弧出来吗？D:

看起来好像我也没Mod出来啥~~

Katty Pie wrote:

Hi mod from #modreqs

Another

00:33:365(1,2) - I think better if you a little stack it~ With circle size 5 it will be very difficult for play~ what does that mean... the distance is okay for Another
00:44:320 - add slider 1/4 with NC http://puu.sh/12RM2 and put normal sound with volume:

00:44:320 - 20%
00:44:657 - 25%
00:44:994 - 30%
00:45:331 - 35%

It sounds better~
nope. other mappers points out this problem and I explained, that this section has a blank atmosphere which is not suitable for more notes.

00:49:376 - remove note here~ make rhythm same on 00:48:028 bcz rhytm in music not change Kept. There is a piano hit here, unlike the former one.
01:14:488(1,2,2) - stack better~
01:17:859(1,2) (1,2) - ^ Fixed, trying my best orz
01:27:297 - add NC here for final pattern fixed

Hyper

00:44:320 - same on Another Kept
00:49:376 - remove this note Same reason as in Another
01:28:477 - make so http://puu.sh/12RUi It will be better follow the music~ Nope. The pattern is like Another.

Standard

00:27:971(2,1) - very big spasing for normal diff~ correct it Fixed
01:04:376 - remove all repeats and add slider 1/1 on white ticks Partly taken. I reduced one repeat and add a note after it.

Good luck~

jogfi2002 wrote:

Standard

00:22:251 (4) - 这里为啥没有上finish音呢…… fixed
00:45:500 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - 个人感觉这一段可以加入clap来增强一下打击感，例如在2那里开始以固定间隔放。这里和Another是一样的，加clap比较奇怪
01:11:792 (1,2) - 前面都有clap这两个slider却没有呢= = fixed

Hyper

00:52:578 (2) - 个人感觉这个slider可以考虑跟前一个slider互成角度，能更加切合这一段前后的那种排列风格=> 如图 好主意 fixed


貌似就看出这些来了……也许是不怎么有用的东西，咱刚刚开始接触mapping嗯……
不过Standard的音效还真不错啊，学习了！

1. 不得不说最低难度不用CS3好奇葩...(当然现在这个也可以
2. 01:22:578 (5) - add NC 然后 remove NC at 01:23:926 (1)?

• 没什么

1. 00:28:140 (10) - 这个slider感觉往下移一些会更好看
2. 00:29:320 (9) - NC
3. 00:49:207 (5,6,1) - spacing
4. 00:52:915 (3,4,5) - ^,不好看

a3272509123 wrote:

Hi~Mod from PM request~



[General]
没啥好吐得0.0




[Standard]

1. 不得不说最低难度不用CS3好奇葩...(当然现在这个也可以
2. 01:22:578 (5) - add NC 然后 remove NC at 01:23:926 (1)?

你想干什么醒哥？




[Hyper]

• 没什么

[Another]

1. 00:28:140 (10) - 这个slider感觉往下移一些会更好看 fixed
2. 00:29:320 (9) - NC ^
3. 00:49:207 (5,6,1) - spacing ^
4. 00:52:915 (3,4,5) - ^,不好看 ^

好吧挑不出什么了orz 感觉这图已经不错了...找个MAT来看吧

[General]
nothing
[Standard]
00:28:983 (1) - 前面弯曲后面直的.像3一样 直着的那端对这2
01:01:005 (3,4) - 1，2相同音 同样的间距

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[Hyper]
好评，最好开头和Standard难度区分开来
[Another]
吐槽，这开头最简单 比Standard还简单
而且小note不适合这种空洞的摆设

1. Remove countdown from both diffs, they start on the same point as the osu! standard diffs xD
2. If you want to use Japanese diff names, rename the Taiko Hard to Taiko Muzukashii orz... If you want to use English diff names, rename Taiko Oni to Taiko Insane :3
3. Also, personally I think you shouldn't disable the video here, the video is beautiful >_<

Combo1 : 152,254,243
Combo2 : 245,159,255
Combo3 : 172,132,255

1. 00:06:071 (4,1) - Although already new combo'ed, this spacing is still tricky for beginners though (especially it's your easiest diff)... I think (1,2,3,4)'s square should start from the bottom-right (current (2)'s position) and moving counterclockwise (:
2. 00:15:510 (1) - Uhm, just simply move the bezier midpoint to ~x:105 y:304 to make this slider tidier orz, it won't hurt xD
3. 00:27:971 (2) - Move to ~x:273 y:163? It'll flow better if it's placed in the bottom-left of (1)'s end imo...
4. 00:38:758 (3) - (optional) Try to put the red waypoint lower, around ~x:96 y:152 perhaps? It'll create a better angle with your previous (2) :
   
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5. 00:40:106 (1) - Whistle + finish on slider's start? (I can hear a cymbal there)
6. 00:39:432 (4,1,2,3,4) - Uhm, these five's placement looks quite random for me orz... Actually you can just try to create slider fan by using the rotate function, or you can even create a symmetry actually xD
   
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7. 00:42:803 (1) - Whistle on spinner's end? It really fits~
8. 00:45:500 (1) - Err, to be honest, on easiest diff I suggest to avoid placing post-spinner notes in the center, the spinner's comboburst will cover it orz >_< - It's not unrankable though, but you can just simply move this to ~x:320 y:7 (:
9. 00:50:893 (1) - (optional) Uhm, personally I think this slider shape follows your flow better~
   
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10. 00:54:264 (2) - Change into two circles? Plays more natural before the spinner imo...
11. 00:59:657 (3) - (optional) I'd personally remove whistle here to emphasize the next whistle in (4), up to you though :3
12. 01:04:376 (1) - Uhm, try to use less bezier waypoints here orz >_<
    

    329,245,64376,6,0,B|358:267|391:262|391:262|368:291,2,100,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

13. 01:14:488 (1) - Whistle on slider's end, to emphasize the high note?
14. 01:19:207 (2) - (optional) To build a better angle with (1), regardless of the spacing put this circle in ~x:175 y:122? (it won't be hard to catch, don't worry xD)
15. 01:26:623 (4) - Here, I really recommend to remove the repeat and add circle on 01:27:297 - it's the downbeat, plus circle will play much better before last spinner compared to slider's end, really~
16. 01:27:634 (1) - Start spinner 1/2 after last note, instead of 1/1 after, to blend with the music more?

1. 00:12:307 (1) - (optional) I'd create an arc here by placing this on ~y:160, looks more elegant imo (:
2. 00:12:813 (1) - Finish on slider's start, to accompany the cymbal sound?
3. 00:18:206 (1,2,3) - Here, you can try to play with slider speed manipulation (something like 1.0x -> 1.1x -> 1.2x) to create a sequence of sliders which gets gradually longer~
4. 00:27:297 (2) - ...maybe stack to previous 00:24:769 (4)?
5. 00:30:668 (1) - (optional) Put in ~x:224 y:227, to continue the previous jump's momentum?
6. 00:36:398 (4) - Uhm, I think the distance spacing is somewhat too forced here... I'd create a power jump here by using higher spacing, personally xD
   
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7. 00:47:016 (1,2) - Here also, the pattern will be more interesting to play if arranged diagonally like this:
   
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8. 00:50:050 (2) - Move to ~y:52, to make (2,4,2)'s spacing more equal?
9. 00:59:320 (2) - I highly recommend to CTRL+G this slider (Reverse Selection / previously CTRL+R), to make a circular movement~
10. 01:00:331 (1,2,3,4) - Don't stop the clap sequence here orz... Feels quite weird having the clap stopped and then continued again in the next pattern >_<
11. 01:04:376 (1,2,3,4) - (optional) Personally I feel a pseudo-star shape like this plays better before the spinner rather than slider fan, but up to you though (:
    
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12. 01:19:207 (4) - Finish on slider's start? The cymbals are strong enough imo...
13. 01:27:297 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Just an advice actually, for patterns like this you can just easily put a circle in the center, arrange the seven circles by using the approachcircle's guide, and then delete the center circle - more or less it's like this in edit mode:
    
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    ...after editing, delete the middle (4) :3 - the result will be like this:
    

    164,120,87297,1,6,0:0:0
    88,132,87466,1,0,0:0:0
    47,195,87634,1,8,0:0:0
    57,269,87803,1,0,0:0:0
    112,319,87971,5,2,0:0:0
    187,314,88140,1,0,0:0:0
    236,257,88309,1,8,0:0:0

14. 01:28:477 (1) - Start spinner 1/2 after? (the melody starts in 01:28:646 actually >_<

1. 00:12:813 (1) - Don't be afraid to use whistle + finish on slider's start, they really fit (:
2. 00:18:206 (1,2,3) - I think it'll be MUCH better if you arrange (1,2,3) in a triangle like this:
   

   257,93,18206,5,4,0:0:0
   341,242,19555,1,4,0:0:0
   170,242,20903,1,4,0:0:0

3. 00:22:251 (4) - ...and then change this note into spinner, ending in 00:23:600 - the map will be more dramatic this way, really >_<
4. 00:26:960 (2) - Minor stuff, just put this in ~x:417 y:141 to make it parallel with your next triples orz :3
5. 00:28:140 (10) - Whistle on slider's start? (same piano melody as (9))
6. 00:34:039 (3,4,5,6) - Uhm, for me it flows much better (also follows the piano melody better) if arranged in an arc instead of back-and-forth:
   
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7. 00:42:803 (1,2,3,4,5) - (optional) Perhaps accelerate the spacing to intensify the jump?
   
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8. 00:44:320 (x) - Again, it's actually a good place to put spinner which ends in 00:45:162~
9. 00:45:837 (2) - ...missing whistle on slider's start here? o.o
10. 00:57:466 (1) - Minor stuff, try this code for better slider blanket:
    

    437,238,57466,6,0,B|409:179|336:164|288:216,1,180,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

11. 01:02:859 (1) - Err, why don't you just stack this on previous 01:01:342 (4)'s start to make it tidier orz... It won't hurt :3
12. 01:02:859 (1) - Also with this slider, actually the big beat is in 01:03:028 - it's much better to remove the repeat and arrange a circular movement like this though, to get the music's feel more xD
    
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13. 01:07:073 (1) - Again, whistle + finish on slider's start here?
14. 01:09:769 (5) - Uhm, it won't hurt if you just perfectly stack this below 01:08:337 (15), really (the overlap won't be visible in play mode though~)
15. 01:13:140 (1) - Missing whistle on slider's start? >_<
16. 01:22:241 (4) - (optional) Move this to ~x:155 y:295 instead? Personally I think (2,4) looks better with this arrangement...