Philippines wrote:

• General

1. Remove all your tags? None of them are important imo. Don't see a reason to remove them
   
   
2. Cut your mp3 to save some memory. Cut it from the beginning til 00:08:057.

<--- Think that wouldn't be fiting in the song :/

• Easy

1. 00:44:914 (1) - Spacing. Also, try to avoid this overlap for better gameplay.
   
   
2. 01:39:342 - Why is there a break in here? Please map it.
   
   
3. 01:52:200 (1) - This one is a bad start. I suggest replace this one with a circle then make this slider start on 01:52:628.
   
   
4. Approach Rate -2.
   
   
5. Too many spacing errors, I suggest you fix them all by using Distance Snap on each note you have. Will require hardwork, but remapping this one could be worse (but maybe better).

• The rest difficulties ~

1. Follow my advice that I wrote in Easy. After you fix it, gather up some mods then you can call me up again for a recheck.

[Ryuu] wrote:

hi ~
from our bg queue.
bgs for this game is very small. except bl-bg ._.
so..i hope i can help you.

SPOILER

• Offset is really wrong. Try 29179. Don't forget to resnap all elements and green lines.

1. 00:47:606 (5) - Remove clap from repeat and add it on the end
2. 01:03:464Add circle
3. 01:03:464Map this break <.<
4. 01:18:035 (1) - Remove NC
5. 01:20:607 Add a slider that ends to 01:21:250 removing the next slider.
6. 01:21:464 Remove this break
7. 01:23:606 (1) - Add finish on repeat
8. 01:34:320 (5) - New combo
9. 01:41:178 (6) - ^
10. 02:08:607 (5) - ^

1. 00:33:893 (3) - Extend this slider to the next white tick and remove a repeat.
2. 01:02:179 (8) - Remove clap
3. 01:08:607 (5) - New combo
4. 01:09:893 (1) - Remove new combo
5. 01:10:750 (2) - New combo
6. 01:15:464 (1) - Clap at the end

1. 00:48:679 (4) - Extend to the next white tick
2. 00:49:750 (6) - New combo
3. 00:50:821 (9) - Remove clap
4. 01:03:464 (5) - New combo
5. 01:05:179 (9) - ^
6. 01:05:929 (1) - move to the previous red tick and extend it to 01:06:464, remove new combo
7. 01:06:893 (3) - new combo

1. 00:36:036 (10,1) - Exchange new combo
2. 00:37:750 (6) - New combo
3. 00:58:107 (1) - Remove new combo
4. 01:10:321 (7) - New combo
5. 01:10:750 (1) - Remove new combo
6. 01:29:607 (1) - Spacing
7. 01:58:214 (7) - ^
8. 02:05:714 (7) - ^

YuZuKi_Kenny wrote:

I am really a newbie mapper :< So I can't mod very well.
Just some suggestions. If you don't like it, just ignore me :<
I don't know what is unrankable and rankable.
:3

Easy

00:32:179 (3,4,5) - spacing

Normal

Uh good ,IDK :<

Hard

00:33:679 (4,5) - Spacing
01:25:321 (5,6,7) - ^
02:20:607 (4,5) - ^
02:23:393 (4) - Had better to end at 02:23:929

Insane

Uh good ,IDK :<

1. It's pretty playable now, but you should really avoid making too much stylized sliders here, as many of them... looked not good. Also, seems like notes are placed randomly, although the spacing is consistent now (I hope).
2. The Claps seem to not have any pattern. Sounds so random, y'know.
3. 00:36:893 (1) - Not too sure about this slider. There's nothing to follow on the repeat, but there's one 1/2 beat later. If you don't understand what I'm talking about, though, just try to make it like this on the timeline.
4. 00:52:321 (1) - ^. Also, for this, I can't really determine the best position for things, so it's up to you now.
5. 01:37:750 (1) - The Finish here sounds too loud, IMO.
6. 01:50:607 (1) - Replace Clap with Finish at the end.
7. 02:06:464 (4) - Reduce the length of this slider to 1/2 beat (from the white tick to the next red one).
8. 02:24:464 (3) - Make this one beat earlier (to the previous white tick, the tall one). (Note: It would've been far more accurate if you used 1/4 beat snap divisor and place this @ 02:23:929 (blue tick), but then again, this is an Easy diff, so...)
9. 02:24:893 (1) - Remove the circle above and start this spinner from 02:24:036 (the tall white tick I told you about) and end it on 02:27:464. Or even better, start it 1/4 beat earlier. Since this is a spinner, it shouldn't confuse Easy players, and anyway, it currently feels so wrong.

1. Again, about stylized sliders and random Claps. You should try to avoid them unless they actually fit and flow well, which is not really the case here. Also, notes seem to be placed randomly here, too. At least try to make some obvious patterns.
2. 00:36:464 (3) - Add Clap at the beginning of this slider?
3. 00:46:107 - Add a circle?
4. 00:48:464 (1) - I'm not sure about this slider. Something feels wrong with it. Just doesn't fit with the song...
5. 00:54:679 (4) - End this on the tall white tick (let's just call it downbeat from now on).
6. 00:57:464 (1,2) - End (1) @ 00:58:107 (the red tick before the downbeat) and make (2) a 1/2 slider (from the current position to 00:58:750).
7. 00:59:179 (3,4) - Remove (4) and make (3) a 1/1 slider (from the current starting position to 00:59:607), and then repeat that slider once.
8. 01:00:893 (5) - Shorten the end to 01:01:536.
9. 01:02:607 (1,2) - Eh... You know, by making two sliders as long as these, you missed so many spots where you can generate/make/place new notes. Would be better if you're making a few more notes here rather than some long sliders.
10. 01:07:750 (5) - ^. And anyway, make this a 2/1 slider (from the current starting time to 01:08:607). Don't remove the repeat. If you're done with that, you should make a circle @ 01:09:893.
11. 01:10:321 (6) - NC and then remove NC from 01:10:750 (1)? Also, inconsistent spacing here.
12. 01:45:464 (5,6) - You might as well make (5) 1/2 beat longer (to (6)'s current position on the timeline) and place (6) @ 01:46:750.
13. 02:03:036 (3) - Make this 1/2 beat earlier (start @ 02:02:821; end on current position)?
14. 02:09:036 (1) - Clap for the repeat should do.
15. 02:24:036 (4,1) - Same thing with Easy.

1. Usual problems. You know what I mean. There's no (bad) stylized sliders though, just some simple ones that are not shaped nicely, so I guess it's fine here.
2. 00:29:607 (2) - Make this 1/4 beat shorter (move the end to 00:30:036)? 5/4 doesn't sound well...
3. 01:08:607 (1,2) - Eh? These sliders sound really off and don't match the song...
4. 02:01:964 (3,4) - ^
5. 02:03:464 (5) - Place this 1/2 beat earlier.
6. 02:06:464 (7) - This also sounds off too. Making it 1/2 beat earlier (the start AND the end) should do.
7. 02:21:679 (6,7) - Make them 1/4 beat late. Also, no, I'm not drunk; using blue ticks should do better here.
8. 02:24:036 (5,1) - You know what am I talking about. Also, you should use that blue tick here. Should be fine on a Hard diff.

1. Pretty fun, but it seems there's still a lot of badly shaped sliders, and the notes are still placed randomly without any visible pattern...
2. 00:40:750 - Add a circle? Whatever are you going to do here, map this spot, as it sounds empty.
3. 00:45:679 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Not really sure about the circles going back and forth here...
4. 00:59:179 (7) - Unstack?
5. 00:59:393 (1,2,3,4,5) - Eh? I think a short stream doesn't fit with the current spot.
6. 01:10:107 (5,6) - No. Don't do an anti-jump here. Space them well.
7. 01:17:179 (7) - Eh? I think you should end the diamond (or square or whatever) pattern you're doing here, NC this, remove NC from 01:17:821 (1), and start a new pattern at this point.
8. 01:20:607 (7) - NC to signify the SV change here.
9. 01:31:107 (4) - I don't think this slider goes well with the song...
10. 01:32:821 (4) - ^
11. 01:34:107 (6) - Remove Finish.
12. 01:41:393 (6) - Same as 01:31:107 (4).
13. 01:42:036 (7,8) - Maybe remove (8) and make (7) a 1/2 slider that repeats once (begin at (7)'s current spot, end at (8)'s spot, repeat at 01:42:250)? Also, if you do this, add a note or just map 01:42:679.
14. 01:44:393 (4) - Same as 01:31:107 (4). Also, remove the Finish here.
15. 01:45:250 (6) - Add Finish to emphasize the cymbal (uh... CMIIW)'s sound?
16. 01:46:321 (9) - Same as 01:31:107 (4).
17. 01:48:464 (3) - ^. Maybe you should make this 1/2 beat shorter (at this point you should've understand about the 1/1-1/2-1/4-etc. stuff I'm talking about).
18. 01:50:179 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - I don't know what to say here. It just feels so awkward...
19. 02:03:036 (2,3,4,5) - Back-and-forth pattern doesn't really do well here, IMO.
20. 02:06:464 (5) - Same as 01:31:107 (4). Looks like you have a lot of sliders that sound off here...
21. 02:14:821 (3,4) - Might as well make them similar to 02:13:964 (1,2).
22. 02:18:250 (5) - Same as 01:31:107 (4).
23. 02:19:321 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I'm sure enough this stream doesn't fit with the song. They sound too loud anyway.
24. 02:20:392 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
25. 02:24:036 (6,1) - You know what am I going to say here, right?

Hinsvar wrote:

Here again. You should have known what the colors indicate by this point. Also, NO KUDOSU; two should be enough.

Also, once again, change the source to Omerta ~Chinmoku no Okite~ (reference from vndb).

>Easy

1. It's pretty playable now, but you should really avoid making too much stylized sliders here, as many of them... looked not good. Also, seems like notes are placed randomly, although the spacing is consistent now (I hope).
2. The Claps seem to not have any pattern. Sounds so random, y'know.
3. 00:36:893 (1) - Not too sure about this slider. There's nothing to follow on the repeat, but there's one 1/2 beat later. If you don't understand what I'm talking about, though, just try to make it like this on the timeline.
4. 00:52:321 (1) - ^. Also, for this, I can't really determine the best position for things, so it's up to you now.
5. 01:37:750 (1) - The Finish here sounds too loud, IMO.
6. 01:50:607 (1) - Replace Clap with Finish at the end.
7. 02:06:464 (4) - Reduce the length of this slider to 1/2 beat (from the white tick to the next red one).
8. 02:24:464 (3) - Make this one beat earlier (to the previous white tick, the tall one). (Note: It would've been far more accurate if you used 1/4 beat snap divisor and place this @ 02:23:929 (blue tick), but then again, this is an Easy diff, so...)
9. 02:24:893 (1) - Remove the circle above and start this spinner from 02:24:036 (the tall white tick I told you about) and end it on 02:27:464. Or even better, start it 1/4 beat earlier. Since this is a spinner, it shouldn't confuse Easy players, and anyway, it currently feels so wrong.

>Normal

1. Again, about stylized sliders and random Claps. You should try to avoid them unless they actually fit and flow well, which is not really the case here. Also, notes seem to be placed randomly here, too. At least try to make some obvious patterns.
2. 00:36:464 (3) - Add Clap at the beginning of this slider?
3. 00:46:107 - Add a circle?
4. 00:48:464 (1) - I'm not sure about this slider. Something feels wrong with it. Just doesn't fit with the song...
5. 00:54:679 (4) - End this on the tall white tick (let's just call it downbeat from now on).
6. 00:57:464 (1,2) - End (1) @ 00:58:107 (the red tick before the downbeat) and make (2) a 1/2 slider (from the current position to 00:58:750).
7. 00:59:179 (3,4) - Remove (4) and make (3) a 1/1 slider (from the current starting position to 00:59:607), and then repeat that slider once.
8. 01:00:893 (5) - Shorten the end to 01:01:536.
9. 01:02:607 (1,2) - Eh... You know, by making two sliders as long as these, you missed so many spots where you can generate/make/place new notes. Would be better if you're making a few more notes here rather than some long sliders.
10. 01:07:750 (5) - ^. And anyway, make this a 2/1 slider (from the current starting time to 01:08:607). Don't remove the repeat. If you're done with that, you should make a circle @ 01:09:893.
11. 01:10:321 (6) - NC and then remove NC from 01:10:750 (1)? Also, inconsistent spacing here.
12. 01:45:464 (5,6) - You might as well make (5) 1/2 beat longer (to (6)'s current position on the timeline) and place (6) @ 01:46:750.
13. 02:03:036 (3) - Make this 1/2 beat earlier (start @ 02:02:821; end on current position)?
14. 02:09:036 (1) - Clap for the repeat should do.
15. 02:24:036 (4,1) - Same thing with Easy.

>Hard

1. Usual problems. You know what I mean. There's no (bad) stylized sliders though, just some simple ones that are not shaped nicely, so I guess it's fine here.
2. 00:29:607 (2) - Make this 1/4 beat shorter (move the end to 00:30:036)? 5/4 doesn't sound well...
3. 01:08:607 (1,2) - Eh? These sliders sound really off and don't match the song...
4. 02:01:964 (3,4) - ^
5. 02:03:464 (5) - Place this 1/2 beat earlier.
6. 02:06:464 (7) - This also sounds off too. Making it 1/2 beat earlier (the start AND the end) should do.
7. 02:21:679 (6,7) - Make them 1/4 beat late. Also, no, I'm not drunk; using blue ticks should do better here.
8. 02:24:036 (5,1) - You know what am I talking about. Also, you should use that blue tick here. Should be fine on a Hard diff.

>Insane

1. Pretty fun, but it seems there's still a lot of badly shaped sliders, and the notes are still placed randomly without any visible pattern...
2. 00:40:750 - Add a circle? Whatever are you going to do here, map this spot, as it sounds empty.
3. 00:45:679 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Not really sure about the circles going back and forth here...
4. 00:59:179 (7) - Unstack?
5. 00:59:393 (1,2,3,4,5) - Eh? I think a short stream doesn't fit with the current spot.
6. 01:10:107 (5,6) - No. Don't do an anti-jump here. Space them well.
7. 01:17:179 (7) - Eh? I think you should end the diamond (or square or whatever) pattern you're doing here, NC this, remove NC from 01:17:821 (1), and start a new pattern at this point.
8. 01:20:607 (7) - NC to signify the SV change here.
9. 01:31:107 (4) - I don't think this slider goes well with the song...
10. 01:32:821 (4) - ^
11. 01:34:107 (6) - Remove Finish.
12. 01:41:393 (6) - Same as 01:31:107 (4).
13. 01:42:036 (7,8) - Maybe remove (8) and make (7) a 1/2 slider that repeats once (begin at (7)'s current spot, end at (8)'s spot, repeat at 01:42:250)? Also, if you do this, add a note or just map 01:42:679.
14. 01:44:393 (4) - Same as 01:31:107 (4). Also, remove the Finish here.
15. 01:45:250 (6) - Add Finish to emphasize the cymbal (uh... CMIIW)'s sound?
16. 01:46:321 (9) - Same as 01:31:107 (4).
17. 01:48:464 (3) - ^. Maybe you should make this 1/2 beat shorter (at this point you should've understand about the 1/1-1/2-1/4-etc. stuff I'm talking about).
18. 01:50:179 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - I don't know what to say here. It just feels so awkward...
19. 02:03:036 (2,3,4,5) - Back-and-forth pattern doesn't really do well here, IMO.
20. 02:06:464 (5) - Same as 01:31:107 (4). Looks like you have a lot of sliders that sound off here...
21. 02:14:821 (3,4) - Might as well make them similar to 02:13:964 (1,2).
22. 02:18:250 (5) - Same as 01:31:107 (4).
23. 02:19:321 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I'm sure enough this stream doesn't fit with the song. They sound too loud anyway.
24. 02:20:392 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
25. 02:24:036 (6,1) - You know what am I going to say here, right?

Okay... everything is pretty much playable, but you REALLY need to improve lots of things. I never wrote lots of red text like this...

Don't worry though. You just need to make things look more neater and work around things, and then I'm sure enough we'll see a heart icon on the first post one day \:D/

Feel free to contact me if you've done some major things again with this

/me subscribe the topic.

Konei wrote:

I'm totally thank you for everything >.<~~

I will fix everything if I get the time /:)

Also I will stalk you as friend

• 00:30:036 (3) - 1/2-beats fit better here, shorten the slider down and add a circle (also, 4 is not properly stacked on the end)
  00:31:750 (3) - ^
  00:32:607 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - since this shape is somewhat meant to be a circle (from what I think), rearrange it and try around until you got a good angle between the circles (you might also just rotate 60 6 times, by 60° each)
  00:33:464 (5,6) - 1/4-beats fit better here
  00:34:750 (2,3,4) - ^ (also, straight slidershapes are... ugly, and repeating ones too)
  00:36:250 (1) - expected this to be 1/2 shorter and start 1/2 later to fit the music better, also move the sliderpoint to balance the bow a little more
  00:37:107 (2,3,4,5) - this straight line of circles feels awkward to play, please create somewhat of a bow that goes down from 2-4
  00:39:250 (2) - a) starts on a red tick (sliders on red ticks feel bad to play), b) too long, c) unbalanced curve, fix all these please
  00:39:250 (2,4) - ugly overlap
  00:40:107 (4,5,6,7) - 1/4-beats fit better
  00:39:893 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - this whole zig-zack-ing feels weird
  00:41:821 (4,5) - just use a reversed version of 2 and 3 there to make it an equal square
  00:42:250 (6) - doesn't fit the music :/
  00:43:964 (4) - that angle feels awkward
  00:45:036 (1) - ^
  00:46:964 (8) - ^
  00:48:679 (4) - ^
  00:49:750 (1,2) - ^
  00:52:107 (1) - ^ (also, just needs 1 sliderpoint there, really)
  00:54:250 (9) - why even put sliderpoints if you want a line that's this straight? o.o
  00:57:464 (1) - this curve is uneven
  00:58:107 (2) - too close to 1, feels awkward
  00:58:321 (3) - ugly overlap with 1
  00:57:464 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - don't see what you were aiming for with this
  00:59:393 (1,2) - again unbalanced curves
  01:01:107 (5) - do not put this here. just don't

ikari_kyon wrote:

looks like you like it but you have a lot of work incoming

1. 00:30:036 (2) - Remove the anchor point @ (352,256), and then move the one @ (384,256) to (384,304), AND then move that one at (224,288) to (256,304). Not sure if it looks perfect, but at least it seems to be far better now.
2. 00:33:036 (5) - Remove the (160,144) point, then move the one at (176,208) to (144,208). Also, NC this. It should look like this.
3. 00:36:464 - 00:37:107 - You know, you should map this part...
4. 00:37:321 (1) - ...Feels awkward to have a slider placed here.
5. 00:38:607 (2) - Place this at (208,80)?
6. 00:39:893 (5) - ^ (448,208).
7. 00:40:321 - 00:40:750 - Map this part.
8. 00:41:179 (1,2,3,4,5) - Eh, this one looks randomly patterned. Go for File > Open .osu in Notepad, and then replace the exact same part with this one. Remember, find the one with 41179 on it, and then replace that line and the next four (and that makes five lines) with the code I provided below. Looks better right?
   

   160,288,41179,5,0
   80,240,41607,1,8
   160,176,42036,1,0
   80,128,42464,1,8
   112,32,42893,2,0,B|208:32|208:32,1,110

9. 00:46:321 (4) - Just make the second line straighter.
10. 00:48:036 - You should really add a note here.
11. 00:48:464 (1) - I don't understand why would you make a slider like this. A simple curved slider should do.
12. 00:50:179 (3) - ^
13. 00:52:321 (1) - ^
14. 00:54:464 - Add a note here.
15. 00:57:464 (1) - Remove the (384,224) anchor point and move the red one to (384,208) then move the first point to (384,112) and the last one to (320,336). Should look like this.
16. 00:59:179 (3) - Not sure about this slider's shape. Also, shorten this to 01:00:036 and add a new circle at 01:00:464?
17. 01:02:607 (6) - Remove the Clap?
18. 01:03:464 (1,2,3) - Not sure about the rhythm here. You should remove (2) and (3), and make a 1/2 slider that repeats once (begin from (2)'s place), then another slider like the previous one beginning at 01:05:607, then make a 1/1 slider that begins at 01:06:464. If you can't understand, see this timeline (that double white line is at 01:04:750).
19. 01:10:321 (7) - NC? Also, the Finish sounds too loud here. Either use a Clap or reduce the volume.
20. 01:12:036 (3) - Move this slider to (192,272) and move the last anchor point to (288,112)?
21. 01:13:321 - Add a note?
22. 01:13:750 (1) - Not really sure about this slider's shape...
23. 01:15:464 (3) - ^
24. 01:17:179 (1) - Replace the Finish at the beginning with Clap?
25. 01:24:036 (1) - ^
26. 01:26:607 (1) - Shorten to 01:27:464 and add a circle at 01:27:893?
27. 01:30:464 (1) - ...Eh, this one's pretty bad. You should really reform this slider.
28. 01:44:607 (2) - Remove the Finish here.
29. 01:49:536 (5) - Suddenly having a 1/2 note here? Eh, pretty weird, IMO...
30. 01:50:607 (1) - Not sure about this slider...
31. 01:50:607 (1) - Remove the (272,48) point and move the one at (336,48) to (336,32)?
32. 01:57:464 (1) - Shape looks odd. Also, you should shorten this to 01:58:321 and add a note at 01:58:750.
33. 02:02:607 - Add a note?
34. 02:04:321 - ^
35. 02:09:036 (1,2) - Weird shapes, IMO...
36. 02:15:893 (1,2) - ^. For this, remove one of the two anchor points in the middle of the slider and move the remaining one to (256,272), remove and then replace (1) with the mirrored (Ctrl+H-and-Ctrl+J'd) (2) slider. Also, place that mirrored slider to (192,224).
37. 02:24:036 (1) - End this spinner at 02:27:250?

Athena Tennos wrote:

A-tan's mod.....

[General]
♪~


[Easy]
00:45:893 (1,2,3) - distance not uniform~
01:13:750 (1,2,3) - ^~~~u can use tiny grid do this...
01:19:321 (5,1) - ^~
01:33:036 (1,2) - maybe u can make like this~

SPOILER

hmm.........may be u can change to small grid or tiny grid fix distance....~

[Normal]
.....i cant find problem.....but...like easy.....maybe u need pay attention to distance~xD

[Hard]
i think slider a little random....maybe u can put in more beautiful~
00:37:750 - nc?~
00:46:536 - ^~
00:47:393 - remove nc?~
00:49:750 - nc?~
00:50:393 - remove nc?~
00:53:393 - nc?~
01:06:893 - ^
01:07:107 - remove nc?~
01:16:321 - ^?~
01:16:964 - nc?~

[Insane]
01:10:214 - delete this note?~ then move 01:10:536 (1) - to this time point~?.....just suggestion~
01:41:179 - nc?~
.......i think slider also have a little random...maybe u need to make more beautiful...

Good Luck~

I saw that the video is 640*360. Haven't they got the same size limits as background pictures ? (800*600; 1024*780)

00:43:321 You should time the Slider's start with the voice (1/2 after the green line), it sounds better
01:31:536 You should put the note like that:http://puu.sh/zLOR it's more readable with the timing

0:43:321 The same as in Normal, this Slider http://puu.sh/zLTs could be better here: http://puu.sh/zLUc
01:04:750 I think this note http://puu.sh/zLQZ will be better here: http://puu.sh/zLRk

JudgeTheDude wrote:

Overall:
I saw that the video is 640*360. Haven't they got the same size limits as background pictures ? (800*600; 1024*780)

haha5957 wrote:

JudgeTheDude wrote:

Overall:
I saw that the video is 640*360. Haven't they got the same size limits as background pictures ? (800*600; 1024*780)

No, videos must be smaller then 800*600 resolution to keep size reasonable

hichman wrote:

Requested mod :3

Let's see~

[General]

Work with your sliders, they are wry :C

[Easy]

00:36:893 and 00:37:321 put circles instead of the slider
00:37:750 add slider instead of the circle
00:40:750 move this slider to 00:40:321
00:41:607 add slider
00:45:893 circle is standing wry, move it to x:320 y:256
00:55:750 end this spinner at 00:57:036
00:57:464 add circle
00:57:893 ^
01:03:036 ^ at x:64 y:192
01:24:464 ^ at x:160 y:256
01:27:893 ^ at x:432 y:214
02:18:893 move circle to x:320 y:224

[Normal]

00:47:393 add circle

like this

00:48:679 add circle to the beginning of the slider
00:51:250 ^
00:52:321 add circle to x:320 y:256
00:58:321 ^ to x:400 y:192
01:00:464 ^ to x:320 y:240
01:01:750 ^ to the end of the slider
01:34:750 ^ to x:288 y:192
02:24:036 end this spinner at 02:27:250

[Hard]

00:30:250 add circle and make pattern

like this

00:31:964 feels empty, add circle
00:42:464 and 00:42:679 ^ and make pattern

like this

00:55:321 end this spinner at 00:56:607
00:57:036 and 00:57:250 add circles to the beginning of the slider
01:01:536 add circle to x:176 y:176
01:13:964 ^ to x:192 y:24
01:14:714 ^ to x:320 y:256
01:37:536 add circle
01:49:857 add reverse slider, it must end at 01:50:071

like this

01:52:107 add circle
01:59:071 ^
02:03:679 ^

[Insane]

00:36:250 add circle
01:10:321 ^
02:22:964 ^
02:23:929 ^
Only one stream D: Would be nice if you add some more.

Nice map, good luck with it :3

HelloSCV wrote:

Hi~ from my queue

Every thing is suggestion with out I write 'Should'

SPOILER

General
00:29:179 -> 00:01:750 Move timing point Nope
01:10:321 - how about add Kiai time? Nope
02:08:821 -> 02:08:607 Move Kiai time Nope

Easy
01:27:893 (2) - this location is not good you should change other location
because in defalut skin, 300 score is hiding repeat arrow http://puu.sh/AqWI Done~


Normal
00:46:321 (6) - 1 grid up Done~
01:27:893 (4) - 1 grid left Done~


Hard
00:30:893 (6) - red point isn't look for good I'm not going to change
01:00:464 (3) - ^ Not sure what you mean here
01:02:821 (4) - ^ ^
01:14:821 (1) - distance. move 1 grid left Done~
01:28:321 (5,9) - same as 00:30:893 (6) Same as 00:30:893
01:46:107 (4,6) - stack end of no.4 slider and start of no.6 slider Yup


Insane
I think Insane is little bit easy how about add stream pattern?
00:45:036 (1) - I think red point isn't look for good
01:10:321 (7) - are you purpose to make this pattern straight? then fix it
02:06:464 (5) - reduce 1 repeat time I think this is better
02:11:607 (1) - Move other location
02:16:964 (3) - I think this slider doesn't match with music
02:24:036 (1) - Finish -> Whistle

Good luck

BakaHuang wrote:

HI ^^ sorry for my bad English

Insane

I think Insane is too easy , you can put some strams in map :/

and on hitsound , you can put some normal-whis

00:29:179(1)-add finish
00:30:036(3)-add whis
00:30:893(1)-add finish
00:31:750(3)-^
00:31:964(3)-remove clap
00:32:393(5)-add whis
00:32:607(1)-add finish
00:33:464(5)~00:33:893(6)-change slider to stream
00:36:036(4)-add finish
00:37:321(3)-add whis or clap
00:37:750(5)-add new combo and change clap to finish
00:38:179(6,7)-add clap ; (7)-change clap to whis
00:39:036(1)-change slider to notes ; you can put (7,8,9,10 11) like a star ; then (9)-add clap (10)-add whis (1)-add finish
00:39:893(3)-add clap
00:40:107(4)-change slider to notes ; 00:40:321~00:40:750-put stream
00:41:821~00:42:893-^ ; add new combo
00:45:893(3,5)-add clap
01:15:250(6)-don't put behind slider
01:19:964(1,2)-don't need new combo ;(3)-add nc
01:51:143(11)-remove note

need more improvement XD

16:39 <Gabe> : Woot, dced.
16:39 <Konei> : I am 
16:40 <Gabe> : 00:36:250 - This slider should start @00:36:464
16:40 <Gabe> : and also start with a Clap.
16:42 <Konei> : k
16:43 <Gabe> : Good?
16:43 <Konei> : yup
16:43 <Gabe> : Okay, next :
16:43 <Konei> : sounds well
16:43 <Gabe> : 00:36:464 - Delete this Circle.
16:43 <Gabe> : It sounds better with the song.
16:43 <Gabe> : I guess.
16:44 <Konei> : there is no circle
16:44 <Gabe> : ...really?
16:44 <Konei> : a slider at 36 464
16:44 <Gabe> : Oh wait...
16:45 <Gabe> : 00:46:536 *
16:45 <Gabe> : 00:46:536 - 
16:45 <Gabe> : *
16:45 <Konei> : deledted
16:45 <Konei> : *deleted
16:46 <Gabe> : For the Hitsounds I will write it on your Thread when I will sent the Log.
16:46 <Konei> : k
16:46 <Gabe> : 01:45:036 (1) - Maybe you could add a Nc here.
16:47 <Konei> : It's allright 
16:48 <Gabe> : This is a suggestion; 02:14:821 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/zcGC you could move these two objects to make a pattern 
16:48 <Gabe> : like this
16:51 <Konei> : yuo
16:51 <Konei> : yup
16:52 <Gabe> : Easy now.
16:52 <Konei> : k
16:53 <Gabe> : 00:54:464 (4,1,1) - These could be moved like this : http://puu.sh/zcKm It sounds better. 
16:55 <Konei> : ok
16:57 <Gabe> : Also, there's some unsnapped points ; http://puu.sh/zcOF
16:57 <Gabe> : okay wait, I have to redownload.
17:00 <Gabe> : and inconsistency on Easy ; http://puu.sh/zcRl
17:00 <Gabe> : Normal ; http://puu.sh/zcRM
17:00 <Gabe> : I guess I will save this or now.
17:01 <Gabe> : I will write a Full-mod instead.

[Easy]

[Normal]

[Hard]

[Insane]

[Normal]

[Hard]

[Insane]

Illumined wrote:

Thank you for requesting via Illumined's Modding Queue (･∀･)

General

1. Mp3's quality is O_O... I cutted a better one for you: http://puu.sh/DHoQ (source)
2. New offset: 408, but please notice that I'm still modding with your old files. thanks

Easy
00:35:607 (1) -Jumps in Easy ? No kidding! failed :/
00:44:179 - Remove clap yep
00:45:464 (3) - ^
00:45:893 (1) - Clap
00:46:321 (2) - Remove clap

Normal
00:35:607 (1) - Square pattern? Fix the spacing, too done

SPOILER

00:46:107 (5) - Spacing error
01:27:679 (3) - ^
01:45:250 (4) - Delete, move this 01:45:464 (5) - 1/2 backward. Fix the spacing too.

done

Hard

1. If I tried to ignore all spacing problem...This diff is actually fine.

Insane

1. Rearranged all hitsound for you, please use this as a sample to fix hitsounds for other diffs too: http://puu.sh/DK04
2. 00:55:321 (1) - , 02:06:464 (5) - Both shorten by me

Actually Hard and Insane need a remap, but anyway. Make sure you've checked my hitsound diff+changed to a new mp3 file.
Give me a PM when you need a help on hitsoundings. Good luck.

Aldwych wrote:

Hello Konei! ¦ 3

[General]

Why not when the bell rings, use a whistle?
01:51:838 Why not disable and enable kiaï time here just for fountain?
02:27:408 TS should be at 02:27:238.

[Easy]

00:32:979 NC? (And remove the next of course)/
00:34:639 ^
00:36:836 ^
00:41:550 ^
00:53:639 Be carefull, it's shorter than in normal diff.
00:55:908 I think that a TS in a spinner is not good. But you can do it at the begining or at the end of course.
00:57:193 TS must be at 00:57:408
01:21:193 TS must be at 01:21:408
02:02:122 Add finish

[Normal]

00:43:693 Why a TS here and not at 00:43:265, it sounds good too.
00:45:193 You can add a circle
00:46:050 NC?
00:48:408 YOu can add a circle
00:51:193 I'm sorry but there's no need to add a circle here, no sound. :S
00:59:122 Why the slider is different at the reverse?
01:03:408 Why the TS is not at 01:803:836?
01:53:336 You can add a circle

Hope it could help you!
(And sorry if it's nazi mod! x3)

RikiH_ wrote:

Hi from mi queue o/
Sorry for late ;w;

Easy

01:03:408 (2) - End this slider 2 grids up
01:04:693 (3) - End this slider 2 grids right
01:34:265 (2) - Overlaps with the previous slider :C Move it 1 grid down
01:54:836 (4)/ 01:55:693 (2) - Please avoid to stack objects in easy diffs, it's very hard for a newbie player
02:13:265 (2) - Can you make something like this? http://i45.tinypic.com/r7rx2r.png

Normal

01:45:408 (5) - I don't like this slider, can you change it?
01:47:122 (1) - 1 grid up

Hard

Overall Difficutly +1
01:55:479 (3) - 1 grid left
02:05:550 (6) - CTRL + R
02:05:979 (x) - Add a note here
02:11:550 (7) - CTRL + R
02:13:265 (3) - Make this symmetric with 02:12:408 (1)

Insane

00:34:050 (10) - Stack with the start of the slider at 00:34:265 (1)
00:58:908 (6) - Stack with 00:58:479 (4)
01:26:979 (4) - Overlaps with 01:27:408 (5) ...


I hope I'm helpful, good luck with your map
Check out my map if you want t/87094&start=0

Byee o/

1. 00:31:265 (1) - Little spacing error,move this 1 grid down to fix it
2. 00:46:693 (2) - Imho,it would be better to make this slider 1/2 longer to follow the drums,and if you do this I suggest you to add a clap at the end of the slider
3. 00:55:908 - Unused inherited timing section,delete this
4. 01:04:693 (2,3) - Is this "jump" intended? If not,i suggest you to fix this spacing
5. 01:08:550 (1) - Here I would follow the singer's voice by moving the new combo on 01:08:979 (2) -,since as now the new combo doesen't fit very good here.
6. 01:45:407 (3) - Another little spacing error,fix it by moving it 1 grid up

1. 00:32:550 (1) - Move the new combo on 00:32:979 (2) - ,since it follows better the drums in that part
2. 00:34:265 (3,4,5,1,2) - As now this pattern feels a bit random for me,since the square-triangle formations here aren't really good. You could do something like this to make this pattern better! And then,I suggest you again to move the new combo from 00:35:550 (1) - to 00:36:408 (3) -
3. 00:39:408 (1) - Remove new combo here,since in the previous patterns you didn't use this new combo
4. 01:00:408 (2) - Move this 3 grids left to make the blanket with 00:59:122 (1) - better,and by doing this 00:59:122 (1,2,3) - would become a totally straight line,so it's even better!
5. 01:10:265 (3) - 2 grids right,for the same reason
6. 01:14:979 (3) - Well,I'd say this 1/2 slider feels really strange in this zone,you could just add a note at 01:15:408 - to make this entire pattern end on a white tick.
7. 01:50:550 (1) - Move the new combo on 01:51:836 (3) - ?
8. 01:56:979 (1) - Again,move this New combo on 01:58:693 (3) - ?

1. 00:34:265 (2,3,4) - Rearrange this pattern to do like in this image? (00:34:693 (3) - is just the copy of 00:34:265 (2) - ,but flipped horizontally)
2. 00:47:979 (1,2) - Since there is an overlap because of the repeat of 00:47:979 (1) - that is covering the start of 00:48:408 (2) - ,i suggest you to move its waypoint here
3. 00:53:979 (2) - 2 grids right and 1 up to make the blanket with 00:53:336 (1) - better?
4. 01:25:693 (6) - Move this just a bit up to make it alligned with 01:25:265 (5,7) -
5. 01:51:836 (5) - Again,this isn't alligned with 01:51:622 (4) - . Move it 1 grid down to fix that
6. 02:07:265 (1) - Move this 1/2 backward on the timeline and make it longer by 1/2 to follow the singer's voice in a better way

1. 00:32:979 (3,5,6,7,8,9) - This stream could seriously be done better. Check this screen and,by using the distance snap,try to make the stream like in that screen
2. 00:34:051 (10,1) - This antijump really breaks the flow,please stack the note 10 with the slider 1 to make that better
3. 00:53:336 (2,3,4) - Move 00:52:908 (6,4) - a bit down to make it snapped with the grid and move 00:53:122 (1,3) - again a bit up and 1 grid left,so that this triangle pattern is all equidistant.
4. 01:02:550 (3) - Make this alligned with 01:02:336 (2) - by moving it 2 grids right
5. 01:09:622 (1,6,7) - Move these notes 1 grid down to make 01:09:622 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - perfectly spaced.
6. 01:51:193 - Add a note here at the stream
7. 01:59:979 (4) - Move this at x:296 y:320 to make this again equidistant to 01:59:122 (2,3) -

-kevincela- wrote:

Hi~

[Easy]

1. 00:31:265 (1) - Little spacing error,move this 1 grid down to fix it
2. 00:46:693 (2) - Imho,it would be better to make this slider 1/2 longer to follow the drums,and if you do this I suggest you to add a clap at the end of the slider
3. 00:55:908 - Unused inherited timing section,delete this
4. 01:04:693 (2,3) - Is this "jump" intended? If not,i suggest you to fix this spacing
5. 01:08:550 (1) - Here I would follow the singer's voice by moving the new combo on 01:08:979 (2) -,since as now the new combo doesen't fit very good here.
6. 01:45:407 (3) - Another little spacing error,fix it by moving it 1 grid up

[Normal]

1. 00:32:550 (1) - Move the new combo on 00:32:979 (2) - ,since it follows better the drums in that part
2. 00:34:265 (3,4,5,1,2) - As now this pattern feels a bit random for me,since the square-triangle formations here aren't really good. You could do something like this to make this pattern better! And then,I suggest you again to move the new combo from 00:35:550 (1) - to 00:36:408 (3) -
3. 00:39:408 (1) - Remove new combo here,since in the previous patterns you didn't use this new combo
4. 01:00:408 (2) - Move this 3 grids left to make the blanket with 00:59:122 (1) - better,and by doing this 00:59:122 (1,2,3) - would become a totally straight line,so it's even better!
5. 01:10:265 (3) - 2 grids right,for the same reason
6. 01:14:979 (3) - Well,I'd say this 1/2 slider feels really strange in this zone,you could just add a note at 01:15:408 - to make this entire pattern end on a white tick.
7. 01:50:550 (1) - Move the new combo on 01:51:836 (3) - ?
8. 01:56:979 (1) - Again,move this New combo on 01:58:693 (3) - ?

[Hard]

1. 00:34:265 (2,3,4) - Rearrange this pattern to do like in this image? (00:34:693 (3) - is just the copy of 00:34:265 (2) - ,but flipped horizontally)
2. 00:47:979 (1,2) - Since there is an overlap because of the repeat of 00:47:979 (1) - that is covering the start of 00:48:408 (2) - ,i suggest you to move its waypoint here
3. 00:53:979 (2) - 2 grids right and 1 up to make the blanket with 00:53:336 (1) - better?
4. 01:25:693 (6) - Move this just a bit up to make it alligned with 01:25:265 (5,7) -
5. 01:51:836 (5) - Again,this isn't alligned with 01:51:622 (4) - . Move it 1 grid down to fix that
6. 02:07:265 (1) - Move this 1/2 backward on the timeline and make it longer by 1/2 to follow the singer's voice in a better way

[Insane]

1. 00:32:979 (3,5,6,7,8,9) - This stream could seriously be done better. Check this screen and,by using the distance snap,try to make the stream like in that screen
2. 00:34:051 (10,1) - This antijump really breaks the flow,please stack the note 10 with the slider 1 to make that better
3. 00:53:336 (2,3,4) - Move 00:52:908 (6,4) - a bit down to make it snapped with the grid and move 00:53:122 (1,3) - again a bit up and 1 grid left,so that this triangle pattern is all equidistant.
4. 01:02:550 (3) - Make this alligned with 01:02:336 (2) - by moving it 2 grids right
5. 01:09:622 (1,6,7) - Move these notes 1 grid down to make 01:09:622 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - perfectly spaced.
6. 01:51:193 - Add a note here at the stream
7. 01:59:979 (4) - Move this at x:296 y:320 to make this again equidistant to 01:59:122 (2,3) -

Not bad for your first map. However,you need a bit more tweaking with the patterns,but for your first map this is pretty good. Good luck!

-kevincela- wrote:

Uh,forgot one thing.

AFAIK (Short Ver.) or (Cut Ver.) are not allowed anymore if aren't included into the original title,so you sould delete the (Short Ver.) from the title.

(no kds)

Fight69 wrote:

-kevincela- wrote:

Uh,forgot one thing.

AFAIK (Short Ver.) or (Cut Ver.) are not allowed anymore if aren't included into the original title,so you sould delete the (Short Ver.) from the title.

(no kds)

Konei, you forgot to fix that D:
Change the title and do a Full Submit, it should be okay

Megurine Luka wrote:

Huge sorry for delay.. I was too busy these days...

And here is your skins~ o3o I hope you like the spinner

Note that there are 2 hitcircles. Use the one you like and rename it as hitcircle.png.

Don't forget to del the other one that you don't want to use.

http://puu.sh/FHy8

LunarSakuya wrote:

well i think i got one
Sorry if the edges look half-assed but I hope it's not lol
There was lettering covering the scarf and I had to slice off bits of hair


As long as nobody zooms up, we should be okay


I'm trying to get Azusa now

Loli Cjj wrote:

=Easy=
1. 00:29:550 (1) - Make it neater, use ctrl+h to check the symmetric.
2. 00:31:265 (1) - Make this neater http://puu.sh/Gx3y
3. 00:58:265 (2) - Again, make this neater http://puu.sh/Gx55

Nice pattern even for easy diff

=Normal=
Clean
Just fix some slider art to make it neater.

=Hard=
1. 00:54:193 (3) - Move to make a triangle shape. http://puu.sh/Gx7F
2. 01:54:836 (2) - Instead, you can create the route to right then up. http://puu.sh/Gx8H
3. 01:54:836 (2,3,4,5,6) - Create a star pattern, looks better. http://puu.sh/Gx9x

=Insane=
1. 01:20:979 (1) - Ugly, so delete You can make symmetric slider around the map with 01:21:836 (1) -

Most of the pattern are quite messy, make sure you use distance snap and grid snap to fix this.
Good luck.

pimpG wrote:

hi o/

easy

00:29:550 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - select them all and move 1 (small) grid right..
..that fixes the spacing/and looks better in 00:33:408 (2,3)

normal

01:10:693 (1) - this clap pattern makes the song have 2 upbeats, remove clap iat slider start, move to end
01:11:550 (2) - ^
01:12:408 (3) - remove clap
01:12:836 (1) - clap at start/end
01:14:122 - keep up

hard

00:32:122 (2) - move the curve point 1 (small) grid left
01:25:265 - same thing about claps as normal
02:12:408 (1) - move the curve point 2 (small) grids down
02:13:265 (3) - move the curve point 1 (small) grid up

insane

00:49:693 (1,2) - strange slider (imo)
00:59:122 (7) - move it 1 (small) grid left and 2 down
01:11:122 - same thing about claps as normal
01:49:050 (4,5,6) - use the same distance spacing?
02:15:193 (4) - move it 1 (tiny) grid down

thats all

nice map

i have no kudosu! atm but i'll give you a ★ after you aplly my mod

good luck

nich95 wrote:

Hi, Konei

My mod from your request in nich95's modding / mod4mod Queue

Red = Unrankable
Biue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

1. Fine

Easy

1. HP +2 (2)
   OD +1 (1)
2. 00:37:693 (3) - Remove finish in slider end
3. 00:39:836 (1) - Add finish
4. 02:17:550 (1) - Remove finish in slider begin
5. 02:19:265 (1) - Add finish in slider begin

Normal

1. 00:30:836 (2) - Move to x:168 y:96
2. 00:31:265 (3) - Remove finish in slider begin
3. 00:32:979 (1) - Add finish in slider begin
4. 00:36:408 (1) - Move 2nd point to left 3 grids, and make same as 00:32:979 (1)
5. 00:39:836 (1) - Same as 00:32:979 (1)
6. 00:41:550 (3) - Move slider begin at 00:41:336, because I hear the rhythm sound here.
7. 00:51:408 (3) - I hear the rhythm sound when the slider is already running. You should change its slider repeat.
8. 01:02:054 (4) - Slider repeat 1 time
9. 01:14:979 (3) - Add clap in slider begin
10. 01:33:836 (5) - I don't suggest using slider 3/4 rhythm in this diff.
11. 01:40:265 (1,3) - Try don't silders are overlap.

Hard

1. 00:35:240 (4,5) - They don't match the rhythm. Make to http://puu.sh/GDkM be better.
2. 00:41:336 (5,6) - Ctrl+R, it's suitable for the rhythm.
3. 02:15:622 - Add a note?

Insane

1. I don't find the problem.

That's all, that I can find them.

Good luck~

1. You are missing a reverse arrow, if you don't plan to skin it use the default one.
2. You dark purple combo colour blends in with the BG and the video, make it lighter please.
3. The rhythm of these maps need a lot of work, please try to follow the song more closely. Suggestions below.

1. The rhythm is okay for a normal I guess. I still feels the vocal could be follow more closely here and the placement also seems random so try to work on that.
2. Some of the square sliders you use look really ugly like 01:50:550 (7) - and especially 02:18:407 (4) - I think the map would look better if you kept it as curved sliders.

1. This is practically the same as Insane with a slower slider velocity so I don't really have much to suggest here except the same thing as I said on Insane. For Hard try to make the rhythm simpler while keeping a close eye on the rhythm, use less 1/4 than Insane but don't just spam 1/2.
2. You could probably work on the patterns and sliders some more too, see the suggestion on Insane.

1. I feel this diff has too much 1/2 and doesn't follow the song closely enough. From 00:29:550 to 00:43:050 you should follow the guitar and instruments more closely and use 1/4. From 00:43:908 to 02:06:622 you could probably follow the vocal more since it carries the song. Alternatively you could follow the instruments more closely but right now you seem to be placing 1/2 notes / sliders everywhere without much consideration for the rhythm. While this is passable the rhythm could be much better! ^_^ Some example suggestions below:
2. You could also work on your patterns some more, the placement of circles often feels random. Why not check out the mapping techniques forum here for some ideas?

Shulin wrote:

From #modreqs ~

[General]

1. You are missing a reverse arrow, if you don't plan to skin it use the default one.
2. You dark purple combo colour blends in with the BG and the video, make it lighter please.
3. The rhythm of these maps need a lot of work, please try to follow the song more closely. Suggestions below.

[Easy]

00:47:979 (3) - Make this end at 1/1 at 00:48:408 - the short 1/2 slider will be confusing for beginners.
00:55:693 - Remove this break, keep on mapping.
02:14:122 (1,2) - I think it's better to keep it 1/1 here.
02:20:979 (1) - ^
02:23:122 - Note

The 1/1 rhythm is good for an Easy, I feel you could tidy this up a bit by aligning notes and improving sliders.

[Normal]

1. The rhythm is okay for a normal I guess. I still feels the vocal could be follow more closely here and the placement also seems random so try to work on that.
2. Some of the square sliders you use look really ugly like 01:50:550 (7) - and especially 02:18:407 (4) - I think the map would look better if you kept it as curved sliders.

00:36:408 (1) - Try to make this overlap less with 00:35:550 (5) -
00:41:550 (3) - Move this to 1/1 at 00:41:550 - ?
00:52:693 (1) - The start of this doesn't follow anything in the song maybe start at 00:52:479 -
00:54:408 (3,4) - Again the start isn't following the song, move this back to 00:54:193 -
01:14:979 (3) - Align this with 01:14:122 (2) - or place somewhere else? It looks random / bad at the moment.
01:08:550 (1) - End at 01:08:979 follows the song.
01:20:550 (3) - Placement looks random, try to make a pattern with 01:20:550 (3,4,1) -
01:30:407 (1,2,3,4) - What is this following? Delete the 1/2 notes they sound odd.
01:50:122 (6) - Try and move this away from 01:48:836 (5) - placement plays badly.
01:56:765 - Note? why not keep following the vocal here.

Again concentrate on the rhythm. Try to keep it simple whilst following the song.

[Hard]

1. This is practically the same as Insane with a slower slider velocity so I don't really have much to suggest here except the same thing as I said on Insane. For Hard try to make the rhythm simpler while keeping a close eye on the rhythm, use less 1/4 than Insane but don't just spam 1/2.
2. You could probably work on the patterns and sliders some more too, see the suggestion on Insane.

00:34:693 (3) - Space this out so it doesn't overlap with 00:34:265 (2) -

[Insane]

1. I feel this diff has too much 1/2 and doesn't follow the song closely enough. From 00:29:550 to 00:43:050 you should follow the guitar and instruments more closely and use 1/4. From 00:43:908 to 02:06:622 you could probably follow the vocal more since it carries the song. Alternatively you could follow the instruments more closely but right now you seem to be placing 1/2 notes / sliders everywhere without much consideration for the rhythm. While this is passable the rhythm could be much better! ^_^ Some example suggestions below:
2. You could also work on your patterns some more, the placement of circles often feels random. Why not check out the mapping techniques forum here for some ideas?

00:30:408 (4) - Move this to 1/4 at 00:30:300 to follow the guitar. You could create a slider that ends at 00:30:515 to follow the end of the guitar.
00:30:515 - This needs a note to follow the rhythm. You could stack a note on top of 00:30:622 (6) - if you decide not to create a slider.
00:30:836 (1) - This should be a 1/2 slider to follow the rhythm. The long slider doesn't really follow anything.
00:31:693 (3,4,5) - Same 1/4 suggestions as above.
00:33:408 (5,6,7,8,9) - This stream is kind of random on it's own. If you want to keep it you should extend it to 00:34:479 since this is where the stream sound ends.
00:35:122 (3,4) - Use 1/4 here again to follow guitar and piano.
00:36:408 (1) - Again better as a 1/2 slider.
00:36:836 - Note here if you do ^ and then add notes at 00:36:943 - and 00:37:051 - and 00:37:158 - to follow the guitar
00:37:372 - Note here if you do ^ to follow the guitar
00:38:551 (1,2,3,4) - Same rhythm here.
00:40:265 (1,2,3,4,5) - Like 00:33:408 (5,6,7,8,9) - the stream is random on it's own, if you're going to start it then you should finish imo. If you don't want to follow the stream a spinner might be a good idea.
00:44:122 (3,4,1) - Here you could have a 1/1 slider to follow the vocal.
00:44:979 (1) - This one should start at 00:44:765 - to follow the vocal better.
00:46:479 - Needs a note.
00:46:908 (2) - This one should start at 00:46:693 (1) - to follow the vocal better.
00:49:693 (1,2) - Similar thing here, you should use the 1/1 sliders where they fit and not just randomly.
00:51:622 (2) - A 1/1 slider would fit here
00:53:550 (4) - and here
01:03:836 (3) - and here etc. Hopefully you get the idea, just try to follow the rhythm of the song more for this part. ^_^
01:09:622 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Random stream that doesn't follow the song, remove please.
01:20:979 (1) - Don't change SV speed mid slider! Also slow down is random so I'd suggest removing it.
01:47:122 (1,2,3) - Don't leave a massive gap in the rhythm here. There's vocal and instruments playing away, it's best if you map this bit.
01:49:908 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - This stream for the most part doesn't follow anything so I'd remove it. It also sounds weird because at 01:50:550 to 01:50:765 - is a 1/6 drum roll.
02:08:979 to 02:20:979 - Same suggestion as 00:29:550 to 00:43:050 since this is a repeat of that part.

Overall, I think you should remap keeping a close eye on the rhythm and try some patterns because that's the most important thing here. I hope I've given enough examples of where to improve it but if you have any questions feel free to ask me.

Good luck!

Hinsvar wrote:

You're remapping Normal and Hard AND Sakuya is working on Insane?

I guess me somehow forgetting to mod this in two weeks actually worked.

Call me back if Sakuya's got her diff in.

For now, stars.

1. ...Not really sure, but I think there are some object patterns that are unfitting with the music on the kiai time.
2. 01:03:408 (1,2,3,4) - ...What? I would convert these sliders to two 3/1 sliders, a 2/1 one and a circle, like this.
3. 01:59:550 (4) - Make this a 1/1 slider and a circle?

1. 00:41:979 - Add a 1/1 slider and move 00:42:408 (5) 1/2 beat later (00:42:622)?
2. 00:46:693 (1) - Try adding an anchor point at (200,72). The arc slider should be better... somewhat.
3. 00:47:979 (3) - Make this a 1/2 slider that repeats twice? It follows the song better.

1. Uh... Maybe it's me that sucks at doing 1/2 streams, but I seriously think this is a Hard+ diff. It just lack jumps to be a true Insane diff. No, don't rename this diff "Hard+". Also, there's still some weirdly shaped arc sliders, so you might want to repair them...
2. 00:29:550 - Maybe you can remove the bookmark here now, especially considering you didn't use it in Easy and Normal.

1. 00:50:122 (2) - Replace this with 00:49:479 (1), remove the repeat, rotate it 180 degrees (using CW or CCW won't change anything, so feel free to use any one you like), Ctrl+R, and place it at (188,272). Now this is better for me, since the current pattern looks weird and (2)'s shape is strange, too, anyway. It should look like this.

1. Add Sakuya and LunarSakuya to the TAGs.
2. The combo colors are different in Sakuya's difficulty. Please make the combo colors the same in all difficulties.

hibarirailwayz wrote:

from modding queues
There is my opinions, so you need not follow.

[General]
You may cut your mp3 because of you're using less than 80% of the song. No, I don't want players to be thrown just in

[Easy]
00:55:693 (1,1) - too short for easy? I think it's fine
02:23:979 (1) - I suggest fade out like Insane. Ok

[Normal]
01:01:265 (2) - Slider's endpoint move 2 grid left and, 5 grid up, because of visual. done
01:22:265 (1) - remove NC done
01:22:693 (2) - add NC ^

[Hard]
00:31:050 (1,2) - remove and add NC
00:34:479 (1,2) - ^
00:37:908 (1,2) - ^
00:38:765 (1) - remove NC
00:40:908 (1) - ^
00:41:550 (3,1) - add and remove NC
00:54:193 (5) - I suggest you use two midpoint of slider using long curve slider,for visual.
01:23:550 - too loud. Please volume down.
01:46:479 (5,1) - add and remove NC

all done


Good luck!!

tutuhaha wrote:

Easy
00:47:979 (3) - move this to x:288 y:32 is more easy to read.
00:55:693 (1,1) - too far in easy diff, I think you just need one note in 00:57:836 (X) -
01:08:550 (4) - add whistle
01:23:550 (1,3) - too close
01:47:550 (3,1) - too close

Normal
00:41:979 (4,5) - this part is litter bit hard in this normal
00:46:693 (1) - ...ugly than 2 Orz
00:48:408 (3) - add finish
00:55:479 (1,1) - litter bit far in normal diff
01:55:265 (4) - ...ugly Orz
02:20:550 (2,3) - TOO CLOSE

Hard
00:59:765 (3,4) - TOO FAR

Insane
02:22:479 (15,1) - you can make more far between those two note

Jebok wrote:

[Sakuya's Insane]
01:41:122 (8) - Place this on the fading end of slider (3)? Fixed

tutuhaha wrote:

Insane
02:22:479 (15,1) - you can make more far between those two note Fixed

1. That purple combo colour is still too dark, increase the lum to 100.
2. I wonder if people will really search gay... oh well I guess it's nice to have a tag.
3. Too improve the presentation of sliders in hard you might want to give this a read.

1. New combo's on this diff are not in a consistent pattern, new combos in places like 00:49:265 (1) - and 01:10:265 (1,1,2) - don't really make much sense. Use Insane as a reference to improve them.

Shulin wrote:

That's all I can suggest right now. Hard needs a bit more work on the rhythm but it's getting better. Maybe ask for some more mods or another MAT to look at this too ^_^

LunarSakuya wrote:

Gabe you're so godly

Gabe wrote:

Here's my mod for Hard.
First, I am very proud of this beatmap. You made a good job, I can see the effort on it.
Also, write everything you haven't fixed. Please.

Hard

New combos
00:51:622 (5) - Delete the new combo.
00:52:479 (1) - Add a new combo
00:52:908 - Delete the new combo
01:10:265 - Delete the new combo
01:10:479 (1) - Add a new combo
01:10:693 (3) - Delete the new combo
01:12:408 (1) - Add a new combo
01:19:265 - Add a new combo
01:22:265 (1) - Add a new combo
01:26:122 (1) - Add a new combo
01:29:765 - add a new combo
01:30:836 - Delete the new combo
01:31:265 (1) - New combo.
01:40:265 - New combo
01:46:479 - New combo
01:56:979 - New combo
02:00:193 (1) - New combo

Circle emplacement
00:31:265 (1) - Move this slider one tick up to be perfectly aligned with the two previous circles.
00:34:693 (1,2) - These sliders looks not good to me. If I was you, I would change it for something like this:

Screenshot+Code

376,272,34693,6,0,B|392:320|440:344,2,85,0|0|2
376,176,35336,2,0,B|392:128|440:104,2,85,0|0|0

00:37:265 (4) - Move this slider at x:312 y:56
00:38:122 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make it symmetrical like this:

Screenshot

00:41:122 (5) - Align this slider with (4)
00:43:265 (7) - Align this with (5) (x:344 y:280)
00:44:979 (5) - Make this slider like this:

Screenshot

00:47:336 (1) - This slider isn't symmetrical. Move the last dot two grid up.
00:48:408 (4) - Delete this slider and copy past the previous slider (00:47:336 (1) - ).
00:54:193 (4) - Copy/Paste this slider ( 00:53:122 (2) - ) to make it symmetrical.
01:01:050 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Can you try to reproduce this? :/

Screenshot

01:18:408 (3) - this slider looks weird, Try to reproduce this;

Screenshot

01:19:693 (7) -

01:25:050 (3) - One grid to the right, please.
01:26:979 (8,10) - These objects are almost overlapped.can you move (10) at x:304 y:128
01:29:765 (6,7) - Move both objects one grid to the left to be perfectly centered.
02:11:122 (3) - Move the second dot two grid up. Same as 02:12:836 (1) -

Hitsounds
I will start with the hitsounds. I also asked Shulin some advices. If you want to read it, just scroll down.
also, the beggining of the song is pretty good.

For the setting, don't put the volume at like 53%, 57%, etc.. Just add like 50%, 55%, 60%. Because, having a 3% diffirence, we don't really hear the difference.

!Warning, biggest hitsounds mod I've ever made!

00:34:908 - Actually, I don't know why but, I always heard a Whistle here. Maybe you could add a whistle here? You could also add one here 00:35:765 -
00:43:265 - Delete this finish. The custom hitsound doesn't sound good. Also, at this point, the song is more calm, so it's better to delete the finish.
00:44:979 - Delete the whistle, but keep the clap.
00:45:836 (7) - Delete the whistle.
00:48:408 - Delete the whistle.
00:49:050 - Add a whistle
00:50:765 - Add a whistle
00:50:979 (2) - Delete the whistle
00:52:479 (5) - Add a whistle
00:52:693 (6) - Delete the whistle
00:54:193 - Add a whistle.
00:55:265 - Add a clap instead of a whistle.
00:57:622 - Add a whistle
00:57:836 - Delete the whistle
00:59:336 (7) - Add a whistle
00:59:550 (8) - Delete the whistle
01:00:408 - Add a clap.
01:01:050 (4) - Add a whistle
01:02:765 (4) - Add a whistle
01:02:979 (5) - Delete the whistle
01:03:836 - Eh, no. Keep that consistency ^ Delete the finish and replace it by a clap
01:04:479 - Add a whistle
01:04:693 - Delete the whistle
01:05:550 - Add a whistle oh wait no, a clap.
01:06:193 - Add a whistle
01:06:408 (3) - Delete the whistle
01:07:265 - Add a clap
01:07:908 (3) - Add a whistle
01:08:122 (4) - Delete the whistle
01:09:836 - Replace the clap by a whistle
i am a bit tired. BUT I WON'T GIVE UP!!
01:11:122 - Add a clap
01:11:550 - Delete the clap
01:11:979 - Add a clap
01:12:408 - Delete the clap
01:12:836 - Add clap.
01:13:265 - Delete clap
01:13:693 (10) - Add clap
01:14:122 - Delete clap
01:14:550 (3) - Add clap
01:14:979 (5) - Delete clap
01:14:979 (5) - Add clap
01:15:836 (1) - Delete clap
01:16:265 - Add clap
01:16:693 - Delete clap
01:17:122 (5) - Add clap
01:17:550 - Delete clap but keep the finish
01:17:979 - Add clap
01:18:408 - Delete clap
01:18:836 - Add clap
01:19:265 (5) - Delete clap
01:19:693 - Add a clap
01:20:122 - Delete clap
01:20:550 - Add clap
01:20:979 - Delete clap
01:21:408 - Add clap
01:21:836 (4) - Delete clap
01:22:265 - Add a clap
01:22:693 - Delete clap
01:23:122 - Add clap
01:23:550 - Delete clap
01:23:979 - Add clap
01:24:408 - Delete the clap but keep the finish.
01:24:836 (2) - Add clap
01:25:265 - Delete clap
01:25:693 - Add clap
01:26:122 - Delete clap
01:26:550 - Add clap
01:26:979 - Delete clap
01:27:408 (9) - Add clap
01:27:836 - delete clap
01:28:265 - Add clap
01:28:693 (3) - Delete whistle.
01:29:122 (4) - Add clap
01:30:193 - Delete whistle
01:32:550 (1) - Add clap
02:09:408 - Add a clap
02:14:550 - Add a clap
02:15:408 (7) - Add a clap
02:16:265 - Add a clap
02:16:693 - Delete the clap
02:17:122 (2) - Add a clap
02:17:550 - Delete the clap
02:17:979 - Add a clap
02:18:408 - Delete clap
02:18:836 (4) - Add a clap
02:19:265 - Delete the clap
02:19:693 - Add a clap
02:20:122 - Delete the clap
02:20:550 (2) - Add a clap
02:20:979 - Delete the clap
02:21:408 - Add a clap
02:21:836 - Delete the clap
02:22:265 - Add a clap
02:22:693 - Delete the clap

Savelog

17:32 Gabe: : I need your advice.
17:32 Shulin: : Sure what is it?
17:32 Gabe: : 00:44:550 - I'm suggesting to add a clap here; 
17:32 Gabe: : 00:44:979 - to remove the clap;
17:32 Gabe: : 00:45:622 - To add a whistle
17:32 Gabe: : and
17:33 Shulin: : which diff?
17:33 Gabe: : 00:45:836 (2) - Delete the whistle
17:33 Gabe: : Hard.
17:33 Gabe: : Modding the whole Hard, lawl.
17:34 Shulin: : Hmm I don't think clap fits at 00:44:550 (3) - 
17:34 Shulin: : I'd just have put it on the heavy beats
17:34 Shulin: : but the mapper seems to be following the base line
17:34 Shulin: : whistle fits at 00:45:622 (1) -  though fits with the piano sound
17:35 Gabe: : Okay so, I could say that ;
17:35 Gabe: : 00:44:979 - To remove the whistle,
17:36 Gabe: : 00:45:622 (1) - Add a whistle,
17:36 Shulin: : yep that works
17:36 Gabe: : 00:45:836 (2) - and delete?
17:36 Gabe: : kgood.
17:36 Gabe: : Do you think the finish is good at
17:36 Gabe: : 00:43:693 ?
17:36 Gabe: : In my opinion, it is not.
17:37 Shulin: : I think regular whistle would probably fit but it'd work empty too
17:37 Shulin: : the custom finish does linger for a bit too long
17:37 Gabe: : This one? 00:43:265
17:38 Shulin: : yep 00:43:265 (6) - 
17:38 Shulin: : new combo should probably go there too, but a new combo on this diff would be way too long
17:38 Shulin: : it's better for the mapper just to look at insane
17:38 Gabe: : and also replace the finish by a clap?
17:38 Gabe: : oh this too.
17:39 Shulin: : yeah clap would work too, anything will work there really :)
17:39 Gabe: : [strike]notthefinish.[/strike]
17:40 Shulin: : lol

*fixed a link.

1. The new combo issue from before is still here, you ignored all of Gabe's combo mod...? ._. Insane is still a good reference for this.