http://puu.sh/vnBG
няяя те сбшчку ^^


00:21:987 - вот тут может нотку добавить, а то как-то дырка и стрим сразу не красиво(
00:28:510 - и сюда тут прям под музыку ложиться
00:38:684 - ^ там прям такой тик в муззыке и дырка(
00:40:511(2) - сделай его хотя бы таким http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/319367
01:15:470 - и тут нотку


вот вроде всё и сделай громкость звука на всех сложностях 70% и 3 звёздочки от меня ♥ good luck~~

hello ryu sry im really late

Easy

same as hard. i suggest 00:10:508 (1) ~ add clap with whistle
00:10:508 (1) - remove clap
01:48:604 (4) - move to 01:48:343
01:50:691 (2) - add finish(normal hitsound)
03:13:133 (4) - move to 03:12:872

Normal

same as hard. i suggest 00:10:508 (1) ~ add clap with whistle
00:18:596 (1,2) - if you wanna stack those notes,stack with 00:18:335. so that it will become read easyO:
01:48:604 (6) - stack with 01:48:343 (5)
03:29:308 (3) - try this?


Hard

i suggest 00:10:508 (1) ~ add clap with whistle
its sound good for me
00:10:247 (x) - add note here~
00:13:117 (6) - missed whistle
00:18:335 (3) - delete here and add note 00:18:596
00:36:336 (2) - try this~?
01:02:165 (4) - how about this?
01:12:861 (x) - add note here
01:14:688 (8) - how about this?
01:17:036 (T) - use for only kiai time
01:17:296 (T) - from here use soft hitsound(if you use 00:10:508 (1) ~ add clap with whistle, here too)
01:21:993 (4) - add whistle
01:19:905 (9) - use slider instead of note(make it until 01:20:166)
01:25:384 (x) - add note here
01:37:907 (x) - ^
01:39:994 (3) - try this
03:30:612 (3) - i like this but your pattern is ok! just i like this

sry for bad english and noob mod~
good luck!

y u c a wrote:

hello ryu sry im really late

Easy

same as hard. i suggest 00:10:508 (1) ~ add clap with whistle
00:10:508 (1) - remove clap
01:48:604 (4) - move to 01:48:343
01:50:691 (2) - add finish(normal hitsound)
03:13:133 (4) - move to 03:12:872

Normal

same as hard. i suggest 00:10:508 (1) ~ add clap with whistle
00:18:596 (1,2) - if you wanna stack those notes,stack with 00:18:335. so that it will become read easyO:
01:48:604 (6) - stack with 01:48:343 (5)
03:29:308 (3) - try this?

SPOILER

Hard

i suggest 00:10:508 (1) ~ add clap with whistle
its sound good for me
00:10:247 (x) - add note here~
00:13:117 (6) - missed whistle
00:18:335 (3) - delete here and add note 00:18:596
00:36:336 (2) - try this~?

SPOILER

01:02:165 (4) - how about this?

SPOILER

or

01:12:861 (x) - add note here
01:14:688 (8) - how about this?

SPOILER

01:17:036 (T) - use for only kiai time
01:17:296 (T) - from here use soft hitsound(if you use 00:10:508 (1) ~ add clap with whistle, here too)
01:21:993 (4) - add whistle
01:19:905 (9) - use slider instead of note(make it until 01:20:166)
01:25:384 (x) - add note here
01:37:907 (x) - ^
01:39:994 (3) - try this

SPOILER

03:30:612 (3) - i like this but your pattern is ok! just i like this

SPOILER

sry for bad english and noob mod~
good luck!

y u c a is the moest thing ever ;wwwww;
ARIGATOU GOZAIMASU ! ~
sorry for bad japanese ~

-Hard-
01:40:777 (x) - добавить круг
02:24:868 (3) - убрать круг
02:25:650 (5) - http://puu.sh/vP2p по моему так лучше
02:27:476 (2) - добавить круг
02:27:216 (1) - http://puu.sh/vP3v ^
02:29:564 (2) - круг
02:29:303 (1) - аналогично 02:27:216 (1)
02:36:086 (2) - выровнять по центру
02:36:608 (3) - симметрично 1 сделай
02:44:174 (2) - круг
02:52:261 (3,4,5) - все это дело по центру бы
02:57:479 (2,3,4) - по центру и симметрично
03:12:089 (7) - нк

Rank this freaking map *-*
Good job, Ryu.

Quiz-chan wrote:

SOMEONE HELP RYU FIXING THIS ERROR:

FIXED =w=b

short IRC
Ryu, поработай над слайдерами. а то я тут одними нази-модами заспамлю все o/


и для очистки совести

помодить не дают ~_~

-Bakari- wrote:

помодить не дают ~_~

ahaahah господяяяя ну смех один

I hope this will be the last mod before ranking.

[Easy]

00:41:293 (3) - Slider: x248 to x264?
00:53:816 (2) - New combo?
01:00:599 (3) - ^
01:08:948 (2) - ^
01:41:299 - Missing beat.
01:48:604 - Why not placing circles around here?
02:46:000 (5) - x288, y288 to x280, y280?
03:31:917 - Place beat here.

[Normal]

Approach Rate -1?

00:52:251 (3) - New combo?
01:01:643 (3) - Why placed so high?
01:17:296 (2) - New combo here instead of previous note (1)?
03:15:220 (4) - New combo?
03:23:568 (3) - ^

[Hard]

01:27:732 (3) - New combo?
What's going on here? Combos are all stupidly placed!
03:05:828 (1) - Fatal combo error. New combo here instead of following note (1)!
03:12:089 (1) - Remove new combo!
03:23:568 (2) - New combo here instead of following note (1)!

That's it.

Quiz-chan wrote:

I hope this will be the last mod before ranking.

[Easy]

00:41:293 (3) - Slider: x248 to x264?
00:53:816 (2) - New combo?
01:00:599 (3) - ^
01:08:948 (2) - ^
01:41:299 - Missing beat.
01:48:604 - Why not placing circles around here?
02:46:000 (5) - x288, y288 to x280, y280?
03:31:917 - Place beat here.

[Normal]

Approach Rate -1?

00:52:251 (3) - New combo?
01:01:643 (3) - Why placed so high?
01:17:296 (2) - New combo here instead of previous note (1)?
03:15:220 (4) - New combo?
03:23:568 (3) - ^

[Hard]

01:27:732 (3) - New combo?
What's going on here? Combos are all stupidly placed!
03:05:828 (1) - Fatal combo error. New combo here instead of following note (1)!
03:12:089 (1) - Remove new combo!
03:23:568 (2) - New combo here instead of following note (1)!

That's it.

LOL I dont think so
Map is shit.
Anyways Ty for moddin >v<

Yo !

General

- Fine

[Easy]

*00:16:248 (4) - Start a new combo here as all the non-KIAI combos in 1st part are max. 3&4 combos as well?
*00:46:511 (5) - Previous note is 0,9x snapped, fix it. Even if you put it there intentional for w/e reason, still looks weird and confusing especially for beginners
*00:49:120 (1) - ^
*00:53:816 (2) - There's a jump here, fix?
*01:12:079 (1) - New combo here. The previous 2/1-reverse slider is only one combo, weird.
*01:13:122 (4) - Add a new combo if you followed the suggestion above, for the vocal raising her voice and also because the combo itself is pretty long already
*01:50:169 (1) - Put it exactly in the middle ?
*02:24:085 (2) - How about starting the New Combo here already, as the both the previous slider will have 1-combo + the guitar kicks in here
*02:41:826 (2) - Pretty big jump here...but I guess for the heart it's ok OTL
*03:18:350 (1) - Form it another way? Looks dull to me
*03:31:395 (4) - Form this into a 1/2 slider and shift the KIAI to the sliderend. It differs with [Normal] & [Hard] and must be the same.

[Normal]

*01:06:861 (6) - Unstack this? Doesn't look cool considering the shortness of 1/2 slider
*01:07:904 (2) - I'd start the New Combo here. Follows vocal better
*01:16:775 - End KIAI here like in [Easy] (Or extend the KIAI by 1/2 on [Easy]

Many little shifts in the spacing. Not sure if intentional or not, doesn't do an big impact as well. Just pointing out & wondering why

[Hard]

*Would consider -1 AR. The song itself is so slow already and SV is strangely fast. Any over-doing would be a pain for the map
*01:16:775 - Same with [Normal]
*01:39:994 (3) - Place the slider here as it gets better blanket'd(wtf? does this word exist? ) Make sure to fix the spacing afterwards*02:07:910 (2) - Hmmm nice!
*02:31:390 (1) - Do the slider like this? Looks weird the way it is right now *03:07:393 (1) - Remove the New Combo here
*Wtf with these sliders. They look awesome




I'm not sure if it's intentional but every 3 diffs have slight changes in the spacing every now and then which looks weird. You might want to check the diffs again to fix them.
The SB is very neat and the BG fits perfectly.
The biggest thing that impressed me were the sliders in [Hard] lol. You might want to work on the flow and beat-placement. They seem really random at times, try forming them into patterns or jumps, which I haven't seen any of in this diff.
Also, practice on doing the sliders smoother, they look cramped and weird in this map.

That's it, good luck on the rank!
I enjoyed the song. Tuk tuk tuk~

Magicphoenix wrote:

Yo !

General

- Fine

[Easy]

*00:16:248 (4) - Start a new combo here as all the non-KIAI combos in 1st part are max. 3&4 combos as well?
*00:46:511 (5) - Previous note is 0,9x snapped, fix it. Even if you put it there intentional for w/e reason, still looks weird and confusing especially for beginners
*00:49:120 (1) - ^
*00:53:816 (2) - There's a jump here, fix?
*01:12:079 (1) - New combo here. The previous 2/1-reverse slider is only one combo, weird.
*01:13:122 (4) - Add a new combo if you followed the suggestion above, for the vocal raising her voice and also because the combo itself is pretty long already
*01:50:169 (1) - Put it exactly in the middle ?
*02:24:085 (2) - How about starting the New Combo here already, as the both the previous slider will have 1-combo + the guitar kicks in here
*02:41:826 (2) - Pretty big jump here...but I guess for the heart it's ok OTL
*03:18:350 (1) - Form it another way? Looks dull to me
*03:31:395 (4) - Form this into a 1/2 slider and shift the KIAI to the sliderend. It differs with [Normal] & [Hard] and must be the same.

[Normal]

*01:06:861 (6) - Unstack this? Doesn't look cool considering the shortness of 1/2 slider
*01:07:904 (2) - I'd start the New Combo here. Follows vocal better
*01:16:775 - End KIAI here like in [Easy] (Or extend the KIAI by 1/2 on [Easy]

Many little shifts in the spacing. Not sure if intentional or not, doesn't do an big impact as well. Just pointing out & wondering why

[Hard]

*Would consider -1 AR. The song itself is so slow already and SV is strangely fast. Any over-doing would be a pain for the map
*01:16:775 - Same with [Normal]
*01:39:994 (3) - Place the slider here as it gets better blanket'd(wtf? does this word exist? ) Make sure to fix the spacing afterwards

SPOILER

*02:07:910 (2) - Hmmm nice!
*02:31:390 (1) - Do the slider like this? Looks weird the way it is right now

SPOILER

*03:07:393 (1) - Remove the New Combo here
*Wtf with these sliders. They look awesome




I'm not sure if it's intentional but every 3 diffs have slight changes in the spacing every now and then which looks weird. You might want to check the diffs again to fix them.
The SB is very neat and the BG fits perfectly.
The biggest thing that impressed me were the sliders in [Hard] lol. You might want to work on the flow and beat-placement. They seem really random at times, try forming them into patterns or jumps, which I haven't seen any of in this diff.
Also, practice on doing the sliders smoother, they look cramped and weird in this map.

That's it, good luck on the rank!
I enjoyed the song. Tuk tuk tuk~

U cant imagine How I M HAPPY TO SEE UR MOD <3
I thought my map is wastin time.
DANKEE, ICH LIEBE DICH >ww</

Easy

00:56:947- you missed clap
01:17:818 (1,2)- put whistle at the end of slider
01:47:038- clap
02:21:998- 1 grid up
02:49:131 (3,3)- whistle
02:57:479 (3,4,5)- whistle ?
03:06:871- finish
03:18:350- this slider touch hp bar so down it

Normal

01:05:295- 1 grid down ?
02:57:479 (4,5,6)- whistle ?
03:15:742- clap
03:29:308- clap

Hard

00:58:512- clap
01:02:426- remove clap, put clap is here 01:02:165-
01:04:252- clap
01:06:339- ^
01:07:122- clap <3
01:09:470- + clap
01:14:948- remove clap, put clap is here 01:14:427 (7,8)-
01:37:124- maybe clap ?
01:40:777- clap 01:41:299- and here
01:50:169- ^
03:21:742- clap
03:30:091- claps

I like this song and diffs
Good luck

HellDawn wrote:

Easy

00:56:947- you missed clap
01:17:818 (1,2)- put whistle at the end of slider
01:47:038- clap
02:21:998- 1 grid up
02:49:131 (3,3)- whistle
02:57:479 (3,4,5)- whistle ?
03:06:871- finish
03:18:350- this slider touch hp bar so down it

Normal

01:05:295- 1 grid down ?
02:57:479 (4,5,6)- whistle ?
03:15:742- clap
03:29:308- clap

Hard

00:58:512- clap
01:02:426- remove clap, put clap is here 01:02:165-
01:04:252- clap
01:06:339- ^
01:07:122- clap <3
01:09:470- + clap
01:14:948- remove clap, put clap is here 01:14:427 (7,8)-
01:37:124- maybe clap ?
01:40:777- clap 01:41:299- and here
01:50:169- ^
03:21:742- clap
03:30:091- claps

I like this song and diffs
Good luck

SENI SEVIYORUM ;-;
THANKS MUCH <3

Няян ;3

tuktuktukyapparituktuktuktukyapparituktuktuk

=General=
1. Make 300.png, 300k.png, and 300g.png since you need to complete the hitxxx set
2. Delete sliderb1-sliderb15, one is enough
3. resize black.png to 640*480, and all the rest of the picture that has resolution more than this. Remember if you do this you need to tweak a lot at .osb, so remember to ask Katty Pie! (If you don't want to, please change all the smallest scale to 0.8)
3. Keep your eye on SB Load, it's get 5x at some point. I'll fix this right away, just make sure disable tweening for unused part. Oh, and I did some flash at the beginning. http://puu.sh/zxXy
4. This is only suggestions, but maybe play with the colour code for the bg at kiai time will make the beatmap more colorful.

It's my first time modding skin so forgive me if I'm wrong >n<

=Easy=
1. 00:25:118 (3,4) - Perhaps copypasta from 00:23:031 (1,2), then ctrl+h, don't worry about 1.07x spacing, they won't know it!
2. 00:30:336 (4) - One grid tiny to the right, neater than expected.
3. 00:33:467 (3) - Move the first point to (116,104), second point to (216,88), and the last point to (276,164), allowing the slider to make a curve to 00:32:423 (2)
4. 00:48:859 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make a curve patter, neat pattern is neat. Don't forget to use spacing! http://puu.sh/zy3P
5. 00:52:251 (1) - Make this curve to the end of 00:51:207 (5) hitcircle. Use the follow circle to help you. http://puu.sh/zy4C
6. 01:37:124 (1) - Another curve to the next note. This time, use the approach circle! http://puu.sh/zy5V
7. 01:47:560 (3,4) - Block and move these notes to (244,192), creating a pattern along with 01:45:473 (1,2)
8. 02:46:000 (5) - (284,280), neat star pattern!
9. 02:46:522 (1) - Make this curve to the previous note. http://puu.sh/zy9V
10. 02:52:261 (1) - Move the end point to (128,244), neat curve to 02:53:305 (2)
11. 02:54:348 (3) - Move the first point to (368,256), second point to (392,220), and the last point to (388,168),another neat curve to the previous slider!
12. 03:12:089 (3) - Move the end point one grid small to the left to make it curve to 03:11:045 (2) last hitcircle
13. 03:26:699 (1) - Perhaps make something like this? I'm pretty sure that spacing doesn't looks so huge. http://puu.sh/zyfF

=Normal=
1. 00:11:030 (2) - Fix with approach circle http://puu.sh/zyhw
2. 00:12:595 (4) - Another slider that perhaps can be fix? http://puu.sh/zyi8
3. 00:14:421 (3) - Perfectly neat! \:D/ http://puu.sh/zykw Start at (80,152), and do the rest (I know you can do it >u</)
4. 01:12:861 (3,4,5,6) - Nothing better than neat pattern. http://puu.sh/zyow
5. 01:18:862 (4) - Move the last point a grid small down, neat curve to 01:18:340 (3)
6. 01:31:385 (5) - Move the last point to (172,108)
7. 02:34:521 (3) - Curve! http://puu.sh/zyqN
8. 03:15:220 (4) - Move the last point one grid tiny to the right. then curve <3
9. 03:31:656 (0) - Move the inherited timing to 03:31:917, make it same like easy diff.

=Hard=
1. 00:24:596 (1) - Move the last point a grid tiny up.
2. 00:26:683 (1,3) - Fix these sliders > http://puu.sh/zysx look, it's neat, isn't it?
3. 00:28:771 (5) - Go fix this slide, make curve to 00:28:510 (4)
4. 00:31:901 (4) - Move the last point to (296,304)
5. 00:36:597 (3) - Neater slider is neater. http://puu.sh/zyu8
6. 02:48:087 (1) - Not symmetric = not moe. Here, I fix it for you!

104,168,168087,6,0,B|88:64|152:-16|352:56|352:160|256:240|160:160|160:56|360:-16|424:64|408:168,1,570,0|2

7. 03:01:132 (2) - Fix this please D:
8. 03:31:656 (0) - Put kiai please, or else the kiai time for each diff isn't consistent

That's all for now, sorry for my bad english DX
Star & tuktukyapparituktuk

Привет Ryu

• General
  ● Good, but combo colors - looks strange

===========================

• Easy
  
  >Settings
  
  ● Good
  
  >Mapping
  
  ● 00:25:118 (3) - дистанс 1.16...move to x:176 y:240
  ● 00:47:033 (1,2) - снова странный дистанс...сдвинь (1) на x:272 y:144 и (2) на x:224 y:220
  ● 00:48:077 (3) - немножко измени форму слайдера, более кругло сделай :3 http://puu.sh/AcsW
  ● 01:08:948 (2,3,4) - двойка ниже конца слайдера, может поднять 1 на x:160 y:144, а 3 опустить на x:336 y:192 http://puu.sh/Acxi
  ● 01:20:949 (1) - снова дистанс, в изе не должно быть даже намека на джамп :3 сдвинь на x:256 y:112
  ● 02:39:738 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/AcBG что случилось со слайдерами? ОО можно ведь красивее с меньшим количеством линий сделать
  ● 03:06:871 (3) - некст дистанс 1.16
  
  >Hitsounds
  
  ● Good
  ___________________
  Очень даже нормально

===========================

• Normal
  
  >Settings
  
  ● Good
  
  >Mapping
  
  ● 00:12:595 (4) - также как в изе, дистанс ) подвинь на x:240 y: 272
  ● 01:44:951 (3) - дистанс снап и грид снап выключаем и двигаем на x:464 y:126
  ● 03:25:916 (2,3) - рестакни ^
  
  
  >Hitsounds
  
  ● Good
  ___________________
  Также хорошо )

===========================

• Hard
  
  >Settings
  
  ● Good
  
  >Mapping
  
  ● 02:28:781 (3) - рестак как в нормале )
  ● 02:30:868 (3) - ^
  ● 02:34:781 (2) - ^
  ● 03:01:653 (3) - ^
  
  >Hitsounds
  
  ● Good
  ___________________
  Дифка понравилась

Вот такой "мод" получился...удачи с ранком

I will extend the life of your map by four weeks.
I think this map is fine now. Ready for bubble.

Quiz-chan wrote:

I will extend the life of your map by four weeks.
I think this map is fine now. Ready for bubble.

who bubble my map? nobody. map sucks orz

NO THIS IS THE MOE(ST) MAP EVER \oAo\

Request from Modding Queue

[Easy]

[Layout]

1. 01:39:211 (2) - Why use a different distance here?
2. 02:39:738 (1,2) - may be break the pattern, but you shouldn't stack them. It's look like 1/1 beat. It is difficult to judge is 1/1 or 1/2 for new player.

[rhythm]

1. 00:36:075 (2) - I don't suggest to use the reverse 2 times or more, because the new players do not adapt, it is easy to overlook and miss a second reverse. Only suggest to use reverse 1 time of sliders.
2. 01:03:730 (1) - ^
3. 01:37:124 (1) - ^
4. 01:31:385 (2) - I think delete reverse better. There are not voice at 01:32:428

[Normal]

[Layout]

1. 03:26:699 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Don't stack them. because new player don't know it had four notes or five notes.

[rhythm]

1. 01:03:730 (1) - some hard for this combo. Reduce 1 times reverse?

[Hard]

[Layout]

1. 00:43:902 (1,2,3) - It's a short slider. I don't suggest to make a heart-shaped, looks up a lot of confusion, do not look good
2. 02:50:174 (2) - Hard to distinguish the direction.

that all

MAT's, y u no bubble this map?
BAT's, y u no rank this map?

Ayu wrote:

MAT's, y u no bubble this map?
BAT's, y u no rank this map?

You R damn right.

Ayu wrote:

MAT's, y u no bubble this map?
BAT's, y u no rank this map?

because MATs and BATs only rank maps which are made by their (girl)friend(s). Simple logic, live with it.

yo Ryu

on balance, the map isn't better than the 90% of the others so..here are suggestions:

[General]

1. PreviewTime: - [Easy] : 43831 - [Hard] : 43902 - [Normal] : 43831. unify them plz
2. LetterboxInBreaks: - [Easy] : 1 - [Hard] : 0 - [Normal] : 1
3. - [Easy] : Combo1 : 128,255,255 Combo2 : 167,79,255 Combo3 : 0,84,168 Combo4 : 118,253,72 Combo5 : 255,255,117
   - [Hard] : Combo1 : 255,255,0 Combo2 : 255,0,255 Combo3 : 0,128,255 Combo4 : 0,255,255 Combo5 : 128,255,128
   - [Normal] : Combo1 : 255,255,0 Combo2 : 255,0,255 Combo3 : 0,128,255 Combo4 : 0,255,255 Combo5 : 128,255,128

[Skin]

1. Missing Skin Files approachcircle.png
2. hit300 and the likes are not allowed to use transparent .png pics. You'd replace them with sightable pics
3. reverse arrow and hit series are too small imo. I can understand your thought though, it's still not recommended to do that. Players' custom skin will do it for you actually.

[SB]

1. During the kiai-times, the white pic appears too early. As you can see in the pic, it has been almost 100% fade in before the vocal&drum sound. Moving all of them backward may helps.

[Hard]

This is not very decent or well-designed overall imo. Although it's peaceful

00:22:770 (4) - spacing like this is not recommened and should be checked out and fixed manually
00:51:207 (1) - hmm, twisted strangely
00:45:468 (3,1) - these kinds of sliders. You could have tried more times to get them more symmetrical

Accumulate more experience, Ryu. You can map better

\o\
Hard:
00:35:032 (5) - может после нее нотку?
00:41:815 (1) - что-то вроде этого? Да если сделаешь не забудь 00:43:902 (1) - убрать нк
02:31:390 (1) - ?
02:35:564 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - и
Вроде все что увидел.
P.S.Удачи с картой , все получится!

Nice map.:3
I don't understand a word, but the song's nice too with DT.:p
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where are Ryu?

I wish this was finished and ranked. RIP Ryu
прям на уровне плохой девочки карта, лел

Классная карта

ТУК ТУК ТУК

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