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Sonic X - The Reason Called 'Me'

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KIA
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Joined February 2009
KIA
Попридираюсь :D
Тайминг
по мне дак надо ещё +2, т.е. 5277. Но кто это заметит, хз. Может у меня самого галлюцинации.
[tieff's normal]
00:24:97 (1) - Всё, что после этой ноты смещено маленько, поставь ноты на свои места)
01:06:64 (5) - может её куда двинуть?
Больше ничего не заметил, кроме того, что размер кружнок в самой сложной [Hard] больше, чем [ztrot's Reason] о_О чудеса... Никогда такого не видел :lol:
Ну а так звезда 100% :!: starrrr :!:
Пора ранкать)
It's time to be RANKED :!:
anonymous_old
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anonymous_old
tieff's Normal
Decrease Overall Difficulty one tick. This is so 00:06:18 (2) is completely opaque at the start of 00:05:27 (1). Remember to replace breaks after doing so.

00:14:06 (2) - New combo?
00:15:57 (5,4,4) - I would put new combos here.
00:39:51 (1,2,3,4) - Change this by making (1,3) low and (2,4) high.
00:40:88 (x) - Notes? =[
00:45:27 (3,1) - Turn into slider?
00:54:67 (1) - This threw ME off. =[ Delete and replace with a break.
02:01:65 (4,5,6) - Replace with spinner.

I would unstack these so they're more readable:
01:05:88 (4,5)
01:15:88 (2,3)

ztrot's Reason
I remember and old background and I think that fits this difficulty better. (Current background is fine for other difficulties.)
Feels like more hit sounds could be used in some places.

01:14:66 (1,2,3,4) - Hit sounds?
01:44:97 (1,2,3,4) - Hit sounds?
01:46:18 (1) - Looks weird not vertical to the previous note.
01:46:18 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Onoez a smiley.
02:04:06 (9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Accent with Finishes?
03:35:88 (3) - Finish?
03:39:82 (8) - Under (6).
03:40:72 (3) - Finish?
03:45:57 (3) - Finish?

Hard
00:54:06 (1) - End with Clap?
01:24:97 (1) - Move so end covers end start of 01:26:48 (5).
02:15:57 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Due to stacking it seems as if it's not a perfect circle. To fix this decrease Stack Leniency one tick.
kingcobra52
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974 posts
Joined May 2008
kingcobra52
Offset: 5,260'ish? (the current one is definitely late though)

Normal

Needs at least 1 spinner for some score variety.

Otherwise, very nice map. Here's a spinner for it if you want (yeah, I was bored :P )

Download: spinner.zip
Agka
680 posts
Joined January 2009
Agka
Star <3
K2J
872 posts
Here since the beginning
K2J
[tieff's Normal]
Good!

[ztrot's Reason]
Radical!

[Hard]
Extreme!



Sorry if I missed anything. Star. (Also, the BG comments in chat was a personal thing, don't let it influence your proceeding on this map).
kingcobra52
osu! Alumni
974 posts
Joined May 2008
kingcobra52
OP went with Alace's offset which is fine with me. Bubbled.
Yuukari-Banteki
1,534 posts
Joined June 2008
Yuukari-Banteki
[tieff]
00:16:79 (2) - clap
00:19:21 (2) - ^
00:34:97 (2) - ^
00:47:09 (3) - clap the end
01:10:13 (2) - clap
01:13:45 (1) - hitsound
your notes are not snapped. please resnap all
01:30:73 (2) - clap
01:35:58 (2) - ^ etc.


[ztrot]
00:34:36 (1) - finish
00:36:79 (7) - ^ etc.
00:51:33 (7,8,9,10) - either all or 7 and 9 finishes
01:13:15 (8,9) - hitsounds
01:42:24 (6) - like 00:51:33
02:01:63 (5,6,7,8,9) - ^
02:19:06 (6) - clap the end
02:21:03 (7) - remove clap
02:52:54 (5) - finish
03:02:24 (5) - ^
03:07:09 (6) - like 00:51:33
03:22:54 (7) - stacking


[Hard]
00:29:51 (1) - clap the end
00:39:51 (1) - clap the middle
00:54:06 (1) - finish the start
00:56:18 (1,2,4,5) - try a different hitsound, whistle sounds bad
01:03:75 (3,4,5,6) - ^
01:10:72 (5,2) - end with a clap
01:24:97 (1,2,3,4) - whistles sound bad
01:27:69 (2,1,2,3) - ^
01:30:72 (2) - clap
01:43:45 (1) - finish
02:03:91 (1) - ^
02:16:18 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - constant rhythm is getting repetitive and boring
02:21:33 (1) - finish
02:55:57 (2) - clap
03:06:48 (1) - ^
03:06:79 (2,3) - remove clap
03:16:79 (4) - hitsound
03:26:48 (3) - ^
03:39:21 (3) - hitsound like the preceding pattern
03:50:12 (3) - add another note one full beat later with a finish


aside from [Hard] i would say this is almost rankable. Hard needs a bit of work and creativity on the mappers part but is doing fairly well for a beginner's map.
tieff
Featured Artist
2,254 posts
Joined March 2009
tieff
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Jinxy
2,777 posts
Joined February 2009
Jinxy

tieff wrote:

If sameone unbubbled it... Write here the reason, please.
You have the wrong idea. peppy made a new rule that when maps are reuploaded, they will lose their bubbles, in order to prevent ranking maps that were suddenly changed into crap.
RaisTF
208 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
RaisTF
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RemmyX25
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RemmyX25
I feel bad because of the priority with no icon, so ill look at it again.


One of my biggest concerns (and I don't know if I addressed it before) is the combo burst. It feels too mood killing and bright, and doesnt go well with the background. In my personal opinion, find another Amy Rose pose or something instead. If I have time, I'll look around and see what i can come up with.
Zodiark1020
160 posts
Joined September 2008
Zodiark1020
So...this is a good beatmap for being your first one, I have to say...

<tieff's normal>
Don't find anything which could be modified here, as I expected from the nice tieff :P

<ztrot's Reason>
00:11:94 (4) - check this with grid 3

Maybe it's too long, i think you can stop it at 03:20:42 and transform the "8" into a finish

<Hard>
02:03:911 (1) - I'd move this 2/4 forward
03:09:527 (1) - I'd move this 2/4 earlier...and if you want add a note 1/4 earlier of where it is now

Can't find anything else...!
See you, and star~
Yuukari-Banteki
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Joined June 2008
Yuukari-Banteki
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RaisTF
208 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
RaisTF
Yay, thanks ^^
Now I cant fix comboburst... well...
0_o
2,155 posts
Joined December 2008
0_o
tieff's Normal
01:18:29 (4) - Either put a new combo here, or take out the new combo here 01:23:14 (1) (for constency)

ztrot
02:13:15 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern is unintuitive to play

That's all I noticed

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Torran
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Joined November 2008
Torran
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RaisTF
208 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
RaisTF
thnx ^^
vytalibus
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870 posts
Joined May 2008
vytalibus
The Reason Called 'Ranked'.
Ryuukun
476 posts
Joined December 2008
Ryuukun
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Pipinlover
12 posts
Joined March 2009
Pipinlover

ztrot wrote:

ok here we go sonic jumbo and some more skin stuff btw i think you should usr red pink yellow and blue for you hit circle colors
:)
hard:
not much to say but try curved sliders instead of jagged ones :) love this map

WOW, Where did you get that? And for A first Map, This is AMAZING!
Ekaru
3,617 posts
Joined July 2008
Ekaru
Huston, we have a problem.

tieff's normal. It isn't snapped to the timeline. Seriously. <_<; Really obvious when playing Taiko. Is it possible to fix it? The beginning in particular is off by quite a bit. ><;

EDIT: So it needs Resnap + Recalculate slider lengths. It gets more and more "on" the timeline as the song gets on. Also super obvious when playing it on Taiko.
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