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Sonic X - The Reason Called 'Me'

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ztrot
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ztrot
ok this time it's done for real i made the hit circles smaller and reduced the overall diff still 8mil tho

Download: Aya Hiroshige - Reason (That's My Reason) (RaisTF) [ztrot's Reason].osu
RemmyX25
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Easy:
01:46:15 (1,2,3,4,5) - This part feels very awkward and not in sync with the music

Hard:
00:10:09 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Add one more to both of these combos
02:21:30 (1) / 02:30:70 (1) - That is one two unnecessarily long spinners. Cut the first one, and start the break early. Not sure what to do about the second one, since just removing it would make the break unnecessarily long. Your best bet would be to map it.

ztrot's Reason:
waahhh tiny hitcircles are tiny. I don't think they need to be that small.

Overall, not bad for a first map.
Rapidlslayer
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Rapidlslayer
^^ Nice Map.

Anyway, heres that skin i promised u :D
If u dont like it, dont use it.

Download: Amy Skin.rar

Star :)
Card N'FoRcE
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About the skin:
Circles are ok, but nombers are black and hard to see: try adding a white border.
Spinner is not good: amy is cut and the border is not smoothed

All spacing suggestion are meant to be for grid level 3

- Easy:
00:16:76 (3) - move 2 squares to the right
00:24:03 (8) - same
01:06:76 (2) - move 1 to the right
Maybe you could use some more hitsounds, it feels a bit linear

- Hard:
00:11:30 (1) - uhm, i know it's a new combo and such, but don't you think that's too close to 00:10:39 (2,3,4)?
00:21:00 (1) - same, but here is less noticeable
00:39:49 (5) - new combo
00:51:61 (5,6) - move 2 squares to the right
00:52:22 (1,2,3,4,5) - same
01:09:79 (1) - same thing as 00:11:30 (1)
01:40:10 (4) - new combo
01:53:13 (6) - add a clap at the end of the slider
01:54:64 (2) - same
I think in this section you can use more claps following song claps like 01:56:16 (2) and 01:58:58 (2). It's up to you anyway.
03:09:49 (1) - this one is fine, but i think it would be better if moved down (a lot, actually)

- ztrot's:
Here's what i meant before about the claps: he used claps following the song's claps and sounds cool ^^
01:37:36 (5) - why so far? D:
02:14:03 (6) - new combo
02:35:55 (6) - maybe here too?
03:39:03 (5,6) - move 1 square to the left

Fix the skin, check this suggestions and i'll star ^^

EDIT: skin fixed and suggestion followed, so i guess it's fine for me now
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RaisTF
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Card N'FoRcE wrote:

About the skin:
Circles are ok, but nombers are black and hard to see: try adding a white border.
Spinner is not good: amy is cut and the border is not smoothed

All spacing suggestion are meant to be for grid level 3

- Easy:
00:16:76 (3) - move 2 squares to the right fixed
00:24:03 (8) - same fixed
01:06:76 (2) - move 1 to the right fixed
Maybe you could use some more hitsounds, it feels a bit linear Im so bad at this x(

- Hard:
00:11:30 (1) - uhm, i know it's a new combo and such, but don't you think that's too close to 00:10:39 (2,3,4)? I think its not a problem o.o
00:21:00 (1) - same, but here is less noticeable same here
00:39:49 (5) - new combo k~
00:51:61 (5,6) - move 2 squares to the right fixed
00:52:22 (1,2,3,4,5) - same fixed
01:09:79 (1) - same thing as 00:11:30 (1) same thing lol
01:40:10 (4) - new combok~
01:53:13 (6) - add a clap at the end of the slideryeap
01:54:64 (2) - same k~
I think in this section you can use more claps following song claps like 01:56:16 (2) and 01:58:58 (2). It's up to you anyway. k~
03:09:49 (1) - this one is fine, but i think it would be better if moved down (a lot, actually) I moved up, k?
Mashley
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Mashley
-2ms on offset maybe?

Easy
00:20:39 (2) - Clap
00:21:60 (4) - ^
00:24:03 (8) - ^
00:24:63 (1,2,3) - Weird spacing
00:28:88 (5) - Clap
00:31:90 (3) - Clap on end
00:33:72 (5) - Clap and finish
00:38:57 (1) - Clap
00:42:20 (2) - ^
00:43:42 (4) - ^
00:51:29 (2) - Finish
01:23:41 (2) - Clap
01:24:62 (4) - Have a break instead of some of the notes after this
01:26:45 (4) - Finish
01:28:26 (6) - ^
01:31:89 (2) - Clap
01:34:32 (5) - ^
01:35:53 (1) - ^
01:39:16 (2) - ^
01:43:42 (3) - Finish on end
01:47:36 (5) - 1/4 later?
01:51:30 (1,2) - Whistles
01:53:73 (3) - Clap
01:54:33 (4) - Finish
01:56:15 (1) - Clap
02:05:85 (1) - ^
02:07:06 (3) - ^
02:11:91 (1) - ^
02:13:12 (3) - ^
02:14:33 (5) - ^
02:16:76 (8) - ^
02:17:97 (1) - ^
02:19:18 (3) - ^
02:20:39 (5) - ^

ztrot's reason
Bigger circles please
00:35:55 (5) - Whistle
00:57:67 (1,2) - Whistle and maybe turn these into 1 slider
01:13:58 (9) - Finish
02:04:03 (9) - ^

Hard
00:11:30 (1) - Bad Spacing

Blah I can't be bothered to look any more this is boring me.
ztrot
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ztrot
i fixed the stuff that was asked made the hit circles and imo the offset is fine i can SS it

Download: Aya Hiroshige - Reason (That's My Reason) (RaisTF) [ztrot's Reason].osu
whymeman
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tieff
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tieff
Take that! New version.

Download: Aya Hiroshige - Reason (That's My Reason) (RaisTF) [tieff's easy].osu
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Rapidlslayer
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Rapidlslayer
Guess i can fix the skin a little...
But when i make the font white its style changes to non-sega...

anyway, ill check wats best...
RaisTF
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RaisTF
Can you do smth that will fitto BG? Its perfect and I dont wanna chnge it.
blissfulyoshi
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blissfulyoshi
Why does ztrot have BPM as 98.00 and everyone else uses 98.98

Easy (This is pretty far from easy):
The spacing in the beginning is a little large but could be considered easy, but sets of quarter notes at that spacing are not what I consider easy.
Slider speed is also a little high for easy
00:14:03 (2) - align with 1
00:52:53 (4) - move 1 notch(3) right
01:03:44 (6) - align with 5
01:05:25 (2) - too far

Are the beginning and end supposed to have different spacing?

Hard:
00:40:40 (2,3,4,1) - too close
00:51:01 (2) - too far, or is 00:33:43 (7) too close
00:51:62 (5) - " "
00:52:83 (4) - " "
01:13:59 (3) - end directly under the center of 2
02:06:17 (2) - make a horizontal reflection of 1
02:35:57 (2,3,2) - too close

ztrot:
00:18:27 (4) - too far
00:36:46 (6) - new combo?
00:56:15 (2,3,4,5) - too close
01:03:42 (8) - make a horizontal reflection of 7
01:05:55 (4) - make a reflection of 11?
01:06:76 (8) - restack under the end of 7
01:08:73 (5) - align with 4
01:09:18 (6) - restack under 6
01:27:97 (6,7) - too far
01:32:36 (5,6) - " "
02:14:03 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - the sides of this square have larger spacing than normal
02:27:06 (5) - too far
02:36:15 (2,3) - make parallel to the 1,4 side

A little sleepy, so I might have missed some other obvious mistakes. Sorry.
Ultimate
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Ultimate
RaisTF, i'm only suggesting these modifications. If you do not wish to use them, then dont.

Modding map: Hard
BPM: 98,990<-- I see (hear) you're having a minor problem at the end. (resnap if you attend to make this change)

01:13:13 (2) - Put on end of 3 (exactly) (same combo)
01:36:17 (3) - Align vertically with end of 2 (align the rest of the combo if you change this)
01:52:23 (3) - Align horizontally with end of 2 (align the rest of the combo if you change this)
03:14:37 (2) - Align vertically with end of 1 (align the rest of the combo if you change this)

Wtf thats all i could find man, had fun playing the map ^^ star~!
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Andrea
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Andrea
[tieff's easy]

00:06:76 (3) - Clap at slider end.
00:09:19 (3) - ^
00:30:70 (2) - ^
00:32:22 (1) - ^

[ztrot's Reason]

00:28:89 (9) - 1 square down for match spacing.
02:05:87 (6) - New combo.
02:15:57 (6) - ^
02:36:18 (2) - Clap here.

[Hard]

00:24:64 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:24:95 (2) - New combo.
01:13:13 (2) - Align perfectly with (3).
03:50:13 (1) - Remove new combo.

Good job, take my star.
ztrot
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ztrot
very good work so far it almost better than sonic drive if not better o.o i wish i learned to map this good so fast
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Gens
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Gens
[Overall]
- You can set a Preview point by going to the menu Timing -> Set current point as preview.
- Little problem: The thread title is bugging me. :P

[Timing]
  1. BPM: 99.00
  2. Offset: 5,285
Be sure to resnap, recheck and recalculate everything.

[tieff's easy] (Capitalize the "e"?)
- Some Inhereted sections are useless, it seems. These are 00:22:52, 01:04:19, and 01:05:18. You should remove them even if they're useless.
- Lack of finishes?

00:29:79 (1) - Is it just me, or the reverse arrow is pointing the wrong way?

[ztrot's Reason]
- Why are combo colors different from the [Easy] difficulty?
- There are some places were the spacing is abit... Irregular. Hopefully you'll indentify them yourself, because I'm not going to nazi. (I wonder if this was because distance snap...)
- Lack of finishes?

03:22:10 (6,7) - Not properly stacked.*
03:41:49 (6,7) - ^
03:43:92 (5,6) - ^

[Hard]
- So yes, there may be some mayor spacing irregularities, but it seems fine once you played the map 2 times already.
- 3:51 minutes... I guess it's fine for a [Hard].

00:07:67 (1,2,3,4,5) - You maybe forgot to flip horizontally. :P
02:03:90 - Kiai here? Seriously? I'd recommend using Kiai at places like 00:56:16... You know, the chorus. And maybe as well as add it on the other difficulties.

* You can stack a note at the endpoint of a slider using Distance snap with a 0.0x multiplier, and turning Grid snap off.
~ ~ ~

Sorry, but I can't star this until you fix the Timing.
Takuma
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Takuma
- Easy:
Mind capitalizing the "e" in Easy? Amazingly short in length. You barely even mapped half the song. );

- ztrot's Reason:
Please redo the break.

- Hard:
Please redo the first break.

Yup, that's all~.
Ultimate
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Gens
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Gens
Easy renamed to Normal? :<
It's fine though.
Timing's fixed, here's your star~

EDIT: Heyheyhey, just a little fix:
Mind moving the "Game Over" phrase in the "fail-background.png" image up abit?
Doesn't looks good.
Sleep Powder
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Sleep Powder
[Normal]
Use more hitsounds and less finishes

[Hard]
01:01:91 (1) - [Just to make it look nice] Move it away from the slider a bit
03:16:15 (2) - Stack on fading 3? (completely optional)


[ztrots Reason]
00:25:55 (4) - Spacing
00:28:12 (6) - Spacing
00:30:39 (5,6) - Spacing
00:51:30 (7) - Spacing
02:15:55 (11) - New Combo?
02:36:15 (7) - Add a Clap here
02:57:36 (6) - Clap doesn't fit at the beginning of this slider
The sliders in here make it the best difficulty lol

May I make an Insane difficulty for this? lol
Alace
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Alace
Offset:5275
Resnap all notes

ztrot's Reason
overall diff-1 plz
Dartmir
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Dartmir
звёздочка =)
RaisTF
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RaisTF
Омг, спасибки х)
naruti
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naruti
you got mine support some1 rank this map already
ToRMeNToR_84
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ToRMeNToR_84
This map rocks, and the skin too!!!! Great work!
Real1
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v2b
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v2b
:)
vytalibus
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Doomsday
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Doomsday
Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these

Timing seems fine

[TIEFF'S NORMAL]

nothing. good job :)

[HARD]

its all good

[ZTROT'S REASON]

01:36:18 (4) - jumps between this and (5) seems kinda random. maybe bend the slider round to get rid of the jump?
01:41:03 (4) - spacing. too close to (3)

thats it, not a bad map. at nearly 4 mins, its quite long though, but still rankable.

star'd
KIA
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KIA
Попридираюсь :D
Тайминг
по мне дак надо ещё +2, т.е. 5277. Но кто это заметит, хз. Может у меня самого галлюцинации.
[tieff's normal]
00:24:97 (1) - Всё, что после этой ноты смещено маленько, поставь ноты на свои места)
01:06:64 (5) - может её куда двинуть?
Больше ничего не заметил, кроме того, что размер кружнок в самой сложной [Hard] больше, чем [ztrot's Reason] о_О чудеса... Никогда такого не видел :lol:
Ну а так звезда 100% :!: starrrr :!:
Пора ранкать)
It's time to be RANKED :!:
anonymous_old
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tieff's Normal
Decrease Overall Difficulty one tick. This is so 00:06:18 (2) is completely opaque at the start of 00:05:27 (1). Remember to replace breaks after doing so.

00:14:06 (2) - New combo?
00:15:57 (5,4,4) - I would put new combos here.
00:39:51 (1,2,3,4) - Change this by making (1,3) low and (2,4) high.
00:40:88 (x) - Notes? =[
00:45:27 (3,1) - Turn into slider?
00:54:67 (1) - This threw ME off. =[ Delete and replace with a break.
02:01:65 (4,5,6) - Replace with spinner.

I would unstack these so they're more readable:
01:05:88 (4,5)
01:15:88 (2,3)

ztrot's Reason
I remember and old background and I think that fits this difficulty better. (Current background is fine for other difficulties.)
Feels like more hit sounds could be used in some places.

01:14:66 (1,2,3,4) - Hit sounds?
01:44:97 (1,2,3,4) - Hit sounds?
01:46:18 (1) - Looks weird not vertical to the previous note.
01:46:18 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Onoez a smiley.
02:04:06 (9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Accent with Finishes?
03:35:88 (3) - Finish?
03:39:82 (8) - Under (6).
03:40:72 (3) - Finish?
03:45:57 (3) - Finish?

Hard
00:54:06 (1) - End with Clap?
01:24:97 (1) - Move so end covers end start of 01:26:48 (5).
02:15:57 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Due to stacking it seems as if it's not a perfect circle. To fix this decrease Stack Leniency one tick.
kingcobra52
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kingcobra52
Offset: 5,260'ish? (the current one is definitely late though)

Normal

Needs at least 1 spinner for some score variety.

Otherwise, very nice map. Here's a spinner for it if you want (yeah, I was bored :P )

Download: spinner.zip
Agka
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Agka
Star <3
K2J
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[tieff's Normal]
Good!

[ztrot's Reason]
Radical!

[Hard]
Extreme!



Sorry if I missed anything. Star. (Also, the BG comments in chat was a personal thing, don't let it influence your proceeding on this map).
kingcobra52
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OP went with Alace's offset which is fine with me. Bubbled.
Yuukari-Banteki
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Yuukari-Banteki
[tieff]
00:16:79 (2) - clap
00:19:21 (2) - ^
00:34:97 (2) - ^
00:47:09 (3) - clap the end
01:10:13 (2) - clap
01:13:45 (1) - hitsound
your notes are not snapped. please resnap all
01:30:73 (2) - clap
01:35:58 (2) - ^ etc.


[ztrot]
00:34:36 (1) - finish
00:36:79 (7) - ^ etc.
00:51:33 (7,8,9,10) - either all or 7 and 9 finishes
01:13:15 (8,9) - hitsounds
01:42:24 (6) - like 00:51:33
02:01:63 (5,6,7,8,9) - ^
02:19:06 (6) - clap the end
02:21:03 (7) - remove clap
02:52:54 (5) - finish
03:02:24 (5) - ^
03:07:09 (6) - like 00:51:33
03:22:54 (7) - stacking


[Hard]
00:29:51 (1) - clap the end
00:39:51 (1) - clap the middle
00:54:06 (1) - finish the start
00:56:18 (1,2,4,5) - try a different hitsound, whistle sounds bad
01:03:75 (3,4,5,6) - ^
01:10:72 (5,2) - end with a clap
01:24:97 (1,2,3,4) - whistles sound bad
01:27:69 (2,1,2,3) - ^
01:30:72 (2) - clap
01:43:45 (1) - finish
02:03:91 (1) - ^
02:16:18 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - constant rhythm is getting repetitive and boring
02:21:33 (1) - finish
02:55:57 (2) - clap
03:06:48 (1) - ^
03:06:79 (2,3) - remove clap
03:16:79 (4) - hitsound
03:26:48 (3) - ^
03:39:21 (3) - hitsound like the preceding pattern
03:50:12 (3) - add another note one full beat later with a finish


aside from [Hard] i would say this is almost rankable. Hard needs a bit of work and creativity on the mappers part but is doing fairly well for a beginner's map.
tieff
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Jinxy
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tieff wrote:

If sameone unbubbled it... Write here the reason, please.
You have the wrong idea. peppy made a new rule that when maps are reuploaded, they will lose their bubbles, in order to prevent ranking maps that were suddenly changed into crap.
RaisTF
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RemmyX25
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I feel bad because of the priority with no icon, so ill look at it again.


One of my biggest concerns (and I don't know if I addressed it before) is the combo burst. It feels too mood killing and bright, and doesnt go well with the background. In my personal opinion, find another Amy Rose pose or something instead. If I have time, I'll look around and see what i can come up with.
Zodiark1020
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So...this is a good beatmap for being your first one, I have to say...

<tieff's normal>
Don't find anything which could be modified here, as I expected from the nice tieff :P

<ztrot's Reason>
00:11:94 (4) - check this with grid 3

Maybe it's too long, i think you can stop it at 03:20:42 and transform the "8" into a finish

<Hard>
02:03:911 (1) - I'd move this 2/4 forward
03:09:527 (1) - I'd move this 2/4 earlier...and if you want add a note 1/4 earlier of where it is now

Can't find anything else...!
See you, and star~
Yuukari-Banteki
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RaisTF
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Yay, thanks ^^
Now I cant fix comboburst... well...
0_o
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0_o
tieff's Normal
01:18:29 (4) - Either put a new combo here, or take out the new combo here 01:23:14 (1) (for constency)

ztrot
02:13:15 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern is unintuitive to play

That's all I noticed

*
Torran
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Torran
Starred
RaisTF
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RaisTF
thnx ^^
vytalibus
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The Reason Called 'Ranked'.
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Pipinlover
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ztrot wrote:

ok here we go sonic jumbo and some more skin stuff btw i think you should usr red pink yellow and blue for you hit circle colors
:)
hard:
not much to say but try curved sliders instead of jagged ones :) love this map

WOW, Where did you get that? And for A first Map, This is AMAZING!
Ekaru
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Ekaru
Huston, we have a problem.

tieff's normal. It isn't snapped to the timeline. Seriously. <_<; Really obvious when playing Taiko. Is it possible to fix it? The beginning in particular is off by quite a bit. ><;

EDIT: So it needs Resnap + Recalculate slider lengths. It gets more and more "on" the timeline as the song gets on. Also super obvious when playing it on Taiko.
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