NewRulerNA wrote:

hai

[Easy]
プレイに支障はありませんがSliderMultiplierが0.999999999999999なので1に修正で

[Cilvery's Normal]

00:08:611 (3,4,5,6) - いろいろとごちゃごちゃした配置なように思えます
00:09:634 (5)を上手く上側に持っていく感じにしたほうが見た目的にも良くなると思います

00:10:316 (7) - 細かいですがこのスライダーが00:09:975 (6)のアプローチサークルと並べてみると微妙に歪んでいます　Fixed

00:18:839 (1) - 00:17:475 (5,7)と被り見た目が悪いです　Fixed

00:19:520 (2) - 00:18:157 (6,7)のヒットバーストが被り見にくいです

00:22:930 (1,2) - 1がターンしていて、進行方向とは逆に2が来ているのが不自然で汚いです　Fixed

00:30:430 (2) - HPバーに触れています

00:33:498 (3) - 00:32:134 (1,2)が触れていないことを考えると、(1,3)で触れないように位置調節で

00:35:543 (7) - 00:37:248 (2) わざとかぶせていますが、もしかしたら他の人がUnrank扱いで指摘してくるかも　Fixed

00:53:270 (4) - 歪んでいるスライダー　Fixed


[Ryafuka's Hard]

00:17:816 (5,1) - Hardであることを考えると、スライダーの始点が隠されているこの配置は分かりにくいように感じました
00:29:407 (1,3) - ^


[Insane]

00:07:589 (3) - このスライダーが歪んでいます
以下これのコピペスライダー

00:08:952 (3) -
00:11:679 (3) -
00:15:089 (1) -
00:16:452 (1) -
00:16:452 (1) -
00:17:816 (1) -
00:19:520 (2) -
00:24:634 (1) -
00:27:361 (1) -
00:40:998 (1) -
00:42:361 (1) -
00:53:270 (1) -
00:53:952 (3) -
01:01:452 (7) -
01:05:543 (1) -
01:10:998 (1) -
01:12:361 (1) -
01:13:043 (2) -
01:17:134 (3) -

00:09:805 (1) - 00:08:782 (2)とスタックさせるか被らない位置へ
全体見る限りでは前者のほうがいいように思えます

大きな問題もなく細かな指摘のみです

good luck!

NewRulerNA wrote:

[Ryafuka's Hard]

00:17:816 (5,1) - Hardであることを考えると、スライダーの始点が隠されているこの配置は分かりにくいように感じました
00:29:407 (1,3) - ^
別の譜面で同じ指摘うけたことあるので変えました；；

Leorda wrote:

Konnichiwa Konnichiwa\:D/

[Easy]
* AR +1? no


[Sp3's Taiko]
01:17:303 (1) - Unsnapped circle fixed


That's all I got orz

Leorda wrote:

Konnichiwa

[Easy]
* AR +1?


[Clivert's Normal]
00:15:430 (1) - Overlapped by hitbursts from spinner. Sometimes, beginners are slowly to read object, so this possibly hidden for them Fixed
00:30:430 (2) - This slider is touch the HP Bar Fixed
00:57:361 (5) - New combo? Fixed
01:02:816 (7) - ^ Fixed
01:29:236 (1,2) - Same issue as 00:15:430 (1) Fixed


[Sp3's Taiko]
01:17:303 (1) - Unsnapped circle


That's all I got orz

DJPop wrote:

~General~
- Add tag "Communication With Sonico" added
- Remove tag "Cute Kawaii", too common removed
- Why you use stack leniency 4? I think it's a bit too low raised to 6


~Easy~
01:29:236 (1) - too sudden for easy diff, this slider should be removed and end spinner at 01:29:577 (no hitsounds)

~Cilvery's Normal~
- Slider tick rate should be 1, but it's up to you to change or not
- Lack of hitsounds in some parts
00:17:475 (5) - add clap at start
00:22:930 (1) - ^
00:30:430 (2) - ^
00:31:111 (3) - ^
00:31:793 (4) - add clap
00:58:384 (2) - ^
01:06:566 (5) - add finish
01:07:930 (1) - add clap
01:08:270 (2) - add finish at start
01:09:293 (3) - add clap
01:09:975 (5) - ^
01:10:316 (6) - add clap at the end
01:10:998 (7) - add finish
01:11:339 (8) - add clap
01:12:020 (2) - ^
01:12:361 (3) - add finish at start
01:19:180 (4) - ^
01:23:611 (1) - add finish
01:29:577 (2) - remove clap

~Ryafuka's Hard~
- OD is too low, should be 6

~Insane~
00:51:055 (1,2) - use soft hitsounds

DJPop wrote:

~Cilvery's Normal~
01:12:361 (3) - remove whistle at start

no kds

DJPop wrote:

Bubble :3

spboxer3 wrote:

geatz!!

Gabi wrote:

Very nice map phonic ^^

good luck with ranked!

eldnl wrote:

weep

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Cilvery's Normal]

00:15:430 (1) - Too soon after spinner for a Normal difficulty.　Fixed
00:34:691 (5) - New combo.　Fixed
01:21:907 (8) - ^　Fixed
01:23:611 (1) - Remove new combo.　Fixed

[Insane]

01:28:725 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - I don't like this pattern, I'm sure you can make something better than this.

That's all.

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Cilvery's Normal]

00:15:770 (1) - This is missing a new combo.

Also, you should get your map to +12 of priority if you want me to rank it :3

Byakugan249 wrote:

orz +12? wow the rules really have changed. let me help you out :3

osuplayer111 wrote:

Let's go!

Ranked~