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thanks melochanMelophobia wrote:
[Ryafuka's Hard]
00:10:657 (4,1) - 4のfinishの音量落として1の始点にfinish
あと00:10:827 - 00:10:912 - にclap
00:21:907 (3,4,5) - 5にちゃんと乗せた方が綺麗 http://puu.sh/smje
00:27:020 (1,2) - 後続がCircleだとHardにしては難しいと思うので
sliderに変える or 2を消してrepeatを1回増やす りぴーとふやしましたー
00:51:055 (1,2) - softにしませう
00:57:361 (3) - 始点finish
00:58:384 - add note
01:06:225 (4) - 終点finish
01:09:123 (4,5) - もう少し広く
01:12:361 (1) - 始点finish
01:18:839 (6,1) - 00:10:657 (4,1) - に同じ
all ok
Download: Daiichi Uchuu Sokudo - SUPERORBITAL (phonic) [Ryafuka's Hard].osu
Alright let's see what I can find. Found this on #modreqs.
Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. just putting this for fun
[General]
Use a light grey combo color instead of a white combo color. it'd be hard for players to know weather the slider repeats or not depending on the skin.
[Easy]
with a BPM this high, increase the AR by 1. it flows a lot smoother during gameplay and it fiits with the song IMO.
00:10:998 (1) - the clap should be at the end, adding it at the repeat arrow ruins the consistency in claps.
01:02:134 - maybe add a 1/1 slider to follow vocals?
not bad but there's a couple things that bothered me: there's too many straight sliders. no offense but beginners might not find this diff not very exciting to play, so i suggest curving some of the straight sliders to flow properly and to make it fun for beginners, and at some parts, there's too many 1/1 gaps. don't be afraid to add more notes if necessary. it'd be fun and challenging for beginners if you do this.
[Cilvery's Normal]
i think AR4 is perfect for a normal diff. it goes at the right speed to the point that players can keep up.
00:05:884 (5) - make this a NC because the guitar riff changes.
00:08:611 (3,4,5,6) - personally i find this pattern confusing, especially for experienced players who play this on their 1st try. re-arrange this pattern because it looks messy IMO.
00:17:134 (4,5,6,7,1,2) - ^
00:21:907 (7) - a NC here because of new lyrics.
00:22:930 (1) - remove the NC if you follow the suggestion above. the lyrics are still going for this.
00:24:293 (7) - this should be a NC because the end is there the lyrics change.
00:25:998 (1) - same as 00:22:930 but the guitar is still going.
00:27:361 (8) - same as 00:21:907.
00:30:430 (2) - this is touching the Hp bar. i don't mind if it's slightly touching it but this is a problem. this might get players nervous as the bar goes down slowly.
00:33:498 (3) - why is this s 4 point slider when the 1st 2 sliders are 3 point sliders. the combo doesn't flow properly as 1 of the sliders look uneven, so make this a 3 point slider like the 1st 2 sliders on this combo. it flows a lot better if you do this IMO.
00:49:265 - add a spinner here and end it till 00:51:225. it'd make a nice start before the kiai.
00:57:361 (5) - same as 00:21:907.
01:02:816 (7) - ^
01:19:180 (4) - same as 00:05:884.
01:21:566 (4) - ^
01:23:952 - add a 1/1 slider to continue the flow of the guitar.
this map has potential, but the problem is that it's clumped up and messy. use a DS of either 0.8 or 1.0 so that it's be cleaner and easier for players to read.
[Rya-chanRyafuka's Hard]
try OD6. i think OD5 is a bit too easy for players at the hard level.
00:38:611 - maybe this to follow the guitar?
01:08:100 - add a circle here to follow vocals.
i felt a bit uncomfortable when i saw this, but overall this is a nice diff.
[Insane]
00:04:182 (1,2,3,4) - i suggest doing this because it looks fun due to the jump and it puts a nice challenge for players.
00:14:748 (6) - Try Ctrl+R? i think it flows a lot smoother to the next note.
00:30:429 (1) - why is this stacked? i was expecting this note to be here because it forms a star. it doesn't feel right if the star is incomplete IMO
this diff could be better but overall i like it.
I guess that's it. GL
Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. just putting this for fun
[General]
Use a light grey combo color instead of a white combo color. it'd be hard for players to know weather the slider repeats or not depending on the skin.
[Easy]
with a BPM this high, increase the AR by 1. it flows a lot smoother during gameplay and it fiits with the song IMO.
00:10:998 (1) - the clap should be at the end, adding it at the repeat arrow ruins the consistency in claps.
01:02:134 - maybe add a 1/1 slider to follow vocals?
not bad but there's a couple things that bothered me: there's too many straight sliders. no offense but beginners might not find this diff not very exciting to play, so i suggest curving some of the straight sliders to flow properly and to make it fun for beginners, and at some parts, there's too many 1/1 gaps. don't be afraid to add more notes if necessary. it'd be fun and challenging for beginners if you do this.
[Cilvery's Normal]
i think AR4 is perfect for a normal diff. it goes at the right speed to the point that players can keep up.
00:05:884 (5) - make this a NC because the guitar riff changes.
00:08:611 (3,4,5,6) - personally i find this pattern confusing, especially for experienced players who play this on their 1st try. re-arrange this pattern because it looks messy IMO.
00:17:134 (4,5,6,7,1,2) - ^
00:21:907 (7) - a NC here because of new lyrics.
00:22:930 (1) - remove the NC if you follow the suggestion above. the lyrics are still going for this.
00:24:293 (7) - this should be a NC because the end is there the lyrics change.
00:25:998 (1) - same as 00:22:930 but the guitar is still going.
00:27:361 (8) - same as 00:21:907.
00:30:430 (2) - this is touching the Hp bar. i don't mind if it's slightly touching it but this is a problem. this might get players nervous as the bar goes down slowly.
00:33:498 (3) - why is this s 4 point slider when the 1st 2 sliders are 3 point sliders. the combo doesn't flow properly as 1 of the sliders look uneven, so make this a 3 point slider like the 1st 2 sliders on this combo. it flows a lot better if you do this IMO.
00:49:265 - add a spinner here and end it till 00:51:225. it'd make a nice start before the kiai.
00:57:361 (5) - same as 00:21:907.
01:02:816 (7) - ^
01:19:180 (4) - same as 00:05:884.
01:21:566 (4) - ^
01:23:952 - add a 1/1 slider to continue the flow of the guitar.
this map has potential, but the problem is that it's clumped up and messy. use a DS of either 0.8 or 1.0 so that it's be cleaner and easier for players to read.
[
try OD6. i think OD5 is a bit too easy for players at the hard level.
00:38:611 - maybe this to follow the guitar?
01:08:100 - add a circle here to follow vocals.
i felt a bit uncomfortable when i saw this, but overall this is a nice diff.
[Insane]
00:04:182 (1,2,3,4) - i suggest doing this because it looks fun due to the jump and it puts a nice challenge for players.
00:14:748 (6) - Try Ctrl+R? i think it flows a lot smoother to the next note.
00:30:429 (1) - why is this stacked? i was expecting this note to be here because it forms a star. it doesn't feel right if the star is incomplete IMO
this diff could be better but overall i like it.
I guess that's it. GL
thanks modding 249! :3Byakugan249 wrote:
[Rya-chanRyafuka's Hard]
try OD6. i think OD5 is a bit too easy for players at the hard level.
00:38:611 - maybe this to follow the guitar?
01:08:100 - add a circle here to follow vocals.
i felt a bit uncomfortable when i saw this, but overall this is a nice diff.
all okay
Download: Daiichi Uchuu Sokudo - SUPERORBITAL (phonic) [Ryafuka's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
thanks mod ~Byakugan249 wrote:
Alright let's see what I can find. Found this on #modreqs.
Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. just putting this for fun
[General]
Use a light grey combo color instead of a white combo color. it'd be hard for players to know weather the slider repeats or not depending on the skin.
[Easy]
with a BPM this high, increase the AR by 1. it flows a lot smoother during gameplay and it fiits with the song IMO. fixed
00:10:998 (1) - the clap should be at the end, adding it at the repeat arrow ruins the consistency in claps. fixed
01:02:134 - maybe add a 1/1 slider to follow vocals? fixed
not bad but there's a couple things that bothered me: there's too many straight sliders. no offense but beginners might not find this diff not very exciting to play, so i suggest curving some of the straight sliders to flow properly and to make it fun for beginners, and at some parts, there's too many 1/1 gaps. don't be afraid to add more notes if necessary. it'd be fun and challenging for beginners if you do this.
[Insane]
00:04:182 (1,2,3,4) - i suggest doing this because it looks fun due to the jump and it puts a nice challenge for players.
00:14:748 (6) - Try Ctrl+R? i think it flows a lot smoother to the next note. fixed
00:30:429 (1) - why is this stacked? i was expecting this note to be here because it forms a star. it doesn't feel right if the star is incomplete IMO
this diff could be better but overall i like it.
I guess that's it. GL
hai
[Easy]
プレイに支障はありませんがSliderMultiplierが0.999999999999999なので1に修正で
[Cilvery's Normal]
00:08:611 (3,4,5,6) - いろいろとごちゃごちゃした配置なように思えます
00:09:634 (5)を上手く上側に持っていく感じにしたほうが見た目的にも良くなると思います
00:10:316 (7) - 細かいですがこのスライダーが00:09:975 (6)のアプローチサークルと並べてみると微妙に歪んでいます
00:18:839 (1) - 00:17:475 (5,7)と被り見た目が悪いです
00:19:520 (2) - 00:18:157 (6,7)のヒットバーストが被り見にくいです
00:22:930 (1,2) - 1がターンしていて、進行方向とは逆に2が来ているのが不自然で汚いです
00:30:430 (2) - HPバーに触れています
00:33:498 (3) - 00:32:134 (1,2)が触れていないことを考えると、(1,3)で触れないように位置調節で
00:35:543 (7) - 00:37:248 (2) わざとかぶせていますが、もしかしたら他の人がUnrank扱いで指摘してくるかも
00:53:270 (4) - 歪んでいるスライダー
[Ryafuka's Hard]
00:17:816 (5,1) - Hardであることを考えると、スライダーの始点が隠されているこの配置は分かりにくいように感じました
00:29:407 (1,3) - ^
[Insane]
00:07:589 (3) - このスライダーが歪んでいます
以下これのコピペスライダー
00:09:805 (1) - 00:08:782 (2)とスタックさせるか被らない位置へ
全体見る限りでは前者のほうがいいように思えます
大きな問題もなく細かな指摘のみです
good luck!
[Easy]
プレイに支障はありませんがSliderMultiplierが0.999999999999999なので1に修正で
[Cilvery's Normal]
00:08:611 (3,4,5,6) - いろいろとごちゃごちゃした配置なように思えます
00:09:634 (5)を上手く上側に持っていく感じにしたほうが見た目的にも良くなると思います
00:10:316 (7) - 細かいですがこのスライダーが00:09:975 (6)のアプローチサークルと並べてみると微妙に歪んでいます
00:18:839 (1) - 00:17:475 (5,7)と被り見た目が悪いです
00:19:520 (2) - 00:18:157 (6,7)のヒットバーストが被り見にくいです
00:22:930 (1,2) - 1がターンしていて、進行方向とは逆に2が来ているのが不自然で汚いです
00:30:430 (2) - HPバーに触れています
00:33:498 (3) - 00:32:134 (1,2)が触れていないことを考えると、(1,3)で触れないように位置調節で
00:35:543 (7) - 00:37:248 (2) わざとかぶせていますが、もしかしたら他の人がUnrank扱いで指摘してくるかも
00:53:270 (4) - 歪んでいるスライダー
[Ryafuka's Hard]
00:17:816 (5,1) - Hardであることを考えると、スライダーの始点が隠されているこの配置は分かりにくいように感じました
00:29:407 (1,3) - ^
[Insane]
00:07:589 (3) - このスライダーが歪んでいます
以下これのコピペスライダー
00:08:952 (3) -
00:11:679 (3) -
00:15:089 (1) -
00:16:452 (1) -
00:16:452 (1) -
00:17:816 (1) -
00:19:520 (2) -
00:24:634 (1) -
00:27:361 (1) -
00:40:998 (1) -
00:42:361 (1) -
00:53:270 (1) -
00:53:952 (3) -
01:01:452 (7) -
01:05:543 (1) -
01:10:998 (1) -
01:12:361 (1) -
01:13:043 (2) -
01:17:134 (3) -
00:11:679 (3) -
00:15:089 (1) -
00:16:452 (1) -
00:16:452 (1) -
00:17:816 (1) -
00:19:520 (2) -
00:24:634 (1) -
00:27:361 (1) -
00:40:998 (1) -
00:42:361 (1) -
00:53:270 (1) -
00:53:952 (3) -
01:01:452 (7) -
01:05:543 (1) -
01:10:998 (1) -
01:12:361 (1) -
01:13:043 (2) -
01:17:134 (3) -
00:09:805 (1) - 00:08:782 (2)とスタックさせるか被らない位置へ
全体見る限りでは前者のほうがいいように思えます
大きな問題もなく細かな指摘のみです
good luck!
Cilvery' Normal
00:19:520 (2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/vmVS こっちの音取りのほうがいいかも？
00:30:430 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/vmWM こっちもこんな感じに？
Insane
00:30:259 (7) - add note? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/319243 音はいってないけど流れて的にこんな感じにしてみては・・？
ごめんなさい！！！ 他は見つかりませんでした・・・orz
00:19:520 (2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/vmVS こっちの音取りのほうがいいかも？
00:30:430 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/vmWM こっちもこんな感じに？
Insane
00:30:259 (7) - add note? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/319243 音はいってないけど流れて的にこんな感じにしてみては・・？
ごめんなさい！！！ 他は見つかりませんでした・・・orz
Topic Starter
NewRulerNA wrote:
hai
[Easy]
プレイに支障はありませんがSliderMultiplierが0.999999999999999なので1に修正で fixed
[Insane]
00:07:589 (3) - このスライダーが歪んでいます fixed
以下これのコピペスライダー00:08:952 (3) -
00:11:679 (3) -
00:15:089 (1) -
00:16:452 (1) -
00:16:452 (1) -
00:17:816 (1) -
00:19:520 (2) -
00:24:634 (1) -
00:27:361 (1) -
00:40:998 (1) -
00:42:361 (1) -
00:53:270 (1) -
00:53:952 (3) -
01:01:452 (7) -
01:05:543 (1) -
01:10:998 (1) -
01:12:361 (1) -
01:13:043 (2) -
01:17:134 (3) -
00:09:805 (1) - 00:08:782 (2)とスタックさせるか被らない位置へ fixed
全体見る限りでは前者のほうがいいように思えます
大きな問題もなく細かな指摘のみです
good luck!
thx!!Quilt wrote:
Insane
00:30:259 (7) - add note? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/319243 音はいってないけど流れて的にこんな感じにしてみては・・？ no change
ごめんなさい！！！ 他は見つかりませんでした・・・orz
ありがとう！Quilt wrote:
Cilvery' Normal
00:19:520 (2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/vmVS こっちの音取りのほうがいいかも？
00:30:430 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/vmWM こっちもこんな感じに？ Fixed･･･この通りに変えたか分からないけど一応変えましたｗ
Insane
00:30:259 (7) - add note? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/319243 音はいってないけど流れて的にこんな感じにしてみては・・？
ごめんなさい！！！ 他は見つかりませんでした・・・orz
Download: Daiichi Uchuu Sokudo - SUPERORBITAL (phonic) [Cilvery's Normal].osu
ありがとう～NewRulerNA wrote:
hai
[Easy]
プレイに支障はありませんがSliderMultiplierが0.999999999999999なので1に修正で
[Cilvery's Normal]
00:08:611 (3,4,5,6) - いろいろとごちゃごちゃした配置なように思えます
00:09:634 (5)を上手く上側に持っていく感じにしたほうが見た目的にも良くなると思います
00:10:316 (7) - 細かいですがこのスライダーが00:09:975 (6)のアプローチサークルと並べてみると微妙に歪んでいます Fixed
00:18:839 (1) - 00:17:475 (5,7)と被り見た目が悪いです Fixed
00:19:520 (2) - 00:18:157 (6,7)のヒットバーストが被り見にくいです
00:22:930 (1,2) - 1がターンしていて、進行方向とは逆に2が来ているのが不自然で汚いです Fixed
00:30:430 (2) - HPバーに触れています
00:33:498 (3) - 00:32:134 (1,2)が触れていないことを考えると、(1,3)で触れないように位置調節で
00:35:543 (7) - 00:37:248 (2) わざとかぶせていますが、もしかしたら他の人がUnrank扱いで指摘してくるかも Fixed
00:53:270 (4) - 歪んでいるスライダー Fixed
[Ryafuka's Hard]
00:17:816 (5,1) - Hardであることを考えると、スライダーの始点が隠されているこの配置は分かりにくいように感じました
00:29:407 (1,3) - ^
[Insane]
00:07:589 (3) - このスライダーが歪んでいます
以下これのコピペスライダー00:08:952 (3) -
00:11:679 (3) -
00:15:089 (1) -
00:16:452 (1) -
00:16:452 (1) -
00:17:816 (1) -
00:19:520 (2) -
00:24:634 (1) -
00:27:361 (1) -
00:40:998 (1) -
00:42:361 (1) -
00:53:270 (1) -
00:53:952 (3) -
01:01:452 (7) -
01:05:543 (1) -
01:10:998 (1) -
01:12:361 (1) -
01:13:043 (2) -
01:17:134 (3) -
00:09:805 (1) - 00:08:782 (2)とスタックさせるか被らない位置へ
全体見る限りでは前者のほうがいいように思えます
大きな問題もなく細かな指摘のみです
good luck!
Download: Daiichi Uchuu Sokudo - SUPERORBITAL (phonic) [Cilvery's Normal].osu
thanks modding~NewRulerNA wrote:
[Ryafuka's Hard]
00:17:816 (5,1) - Hardであることを考えると、スライダーの始点が隠されているこの配置は分かりにくいように感じました
00:29:407 (1,3) - ^
別の譜面で同じ指摘うけたことあるので変えました；；
Download: Daiichi Uchuu Sokudo - SUPERORBITAL (phonic) [Ryafuka's Hard].osu
Konnichiwa
[Easy]
* AR +1?
[Clivert's Normal]
00:15:430 (1) - Overlapped by hitbursts from spinner. Sometimes, beginners are slowly to read object, so this possibly hidden for them
00:30:430 (2) - This slider is touch the HP Bar
00:57:361 (5) - New combo?
01:02:816 (7) - ^
01:29:236 (1,2) - Same issue as 00:15:430 (1)
[Sp3's Taiko]
01:17:303 (1) - Unsnapped circle
That's all I got orz
[Easy]
* AR +1?
[Clivert's Normal]
00:15:430 (1) - Overlapped by hitbursts from spinner. Sometimes, beginners are slowly to read object, so this possibly hidden for them
00:30:430 (2) - This slider is touch the HP Bar
00:57:361 (5) - New combo?
01:02:816 (7) - ^
01:29:236 (1,2) - Same issue as 00:15:430 (1)
[Sp3's Taiko]
01:17:303 (1) - Unsnapped circle
That's all I got orz
Topic Starter
thanks ><!Leorda wrote:
Konnichiwa Konnichiwa\:D/
[Easy]
* AR +1? no
[Sp3's Taiko]
01:17:303 (1) - Unsnapped circle fixed
That's all I got orz
thank you mod <3Leorda wrote:
Konnichiwa
[Easy]
* AR +1?
[Clivert's Normal]
00:15:430 (1) - Overlapped by hitbursts from spinner. Sometimes, beginners are slowly to read object, so this possibly hidden for them Fixed
00:30:430 (2) - This slider is touch the HP Bar Fixed
00:57:361 (5) - New combo? Fixed
01:02:816 (7) - ^ Fixed
01:29:236 (1,2) - Same issue as 00:15:430 (1) Fixed
[Sp3's Taiko]
01:17:303 (1) - Unsnapped circle
That's all I got orz
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~General~
- Add tag "Communication With Sonico"
- Remove tag "Cute Kawaii", too common
- Why you use stack leniency 4? I think it's a bit too low
~Easy~
01:29:236 (1) - too sudden for easy diff, this slider should be removed and end spinner at 01:29:577 (no hitsounds)
~Cilvery's Normal~
- Slider tick rate should be 1, but it's up to you to change or not
- Lack of hitsounds in some parts
00:17:475 (5) - add clap at start
00:22:930 (1) - ^
00:30:430 (2) - ^
00:31:111 (3) - ^
00:31:793 (4) - add clap
00:58:384 (2) - ^
01:06:566 (5) - add finish
01:07:930 (1) - add clap
01:08:270 (2) - add finish at start
01:09:293 (3) - add clap
01:09:975 (5) - ^
01:10:316 (6) - add clap at the end
01:10:998 (7) - add finish
01:11:339 (8) - add clap
01:12:020 (2) - ^
01:12:361 (3) - add finish at start
01:19:180 (4) - ^
01:23:611 (1) - add finish
01:29:577 (2) - remove clap
~Ryafuka's Hard~
- OD is too low, should be 6
~Insane~
00:51:055 (1,2) - use soft hitsounds
~Sp3's Taiko~
01:06:395 (1) - d
01:06:481 (2) - remove
01:06:566 (3) - D or K
01:06:736 (4) - remove
- Add tag "Communication With Sonico"
- Remove tag "Cute Kawaii", too common
- Why you use stack leniency 4? I think it's a bit too low
~Easy~
01:29:236 (1) - too sudden for easy diff, this slider should be removed and end spinner at 01:29:577 (no hitsounds)
~Cilvery's Normal~
- Slider tick rate should be 1, but it's up to you to change or not
- Lack of hitsounds in some parts
00:17:475 (5) - add clap at start
00:22:930 (1) - ^
00:30:430 (2) - ^
00:31:111 (3) - ^
00:31:793 (4) - add clap
00:58:384 (2) - ^
01:06:566 (5) - add finish
01:07:930 (1) - add clap
01:08:270 (2) - add finish at start
01:09:293 (3) - add clap
01:09:975 (5) - ^
01:10:316 (6) - add clap at the end
01:10:998 (7) - add finish
01:11:339 (8) - add clap
01:12:020 (2) - ^
01:12:361 (3) - add finish at start
01:19:180 (4) - ^
01:23:611 (1) - add finish
01:29:577 (2) - remove clap
~Ryafuka's Hard~
- OD is too low, should be 6
~Insane~
00:51:055 (1,2) - use soft hitsounds
~Sp3's Taiko~
01:06:395 (1) - d
01:06:481 (2) - remove
01:06:566 (3) - D or K
01:06:736 (4) - remove
Topic Starter
All fixedDJPop wrote:
~General~
- Add tag "Communication With Sonico" added
- Remove tag "Cute Kawaii", too common
- Why you use stack leniency 4? I think it's a bit too low raised to 6
~Easy~
01:29:236 (1) - too sudden for easy diff, this slider should be removed and end spinner at 01:29:577 (no hitsounds)
~Cilvery's Normal~
- Slider tick rate should be 1, but it's up to you to change or not
- Lack of hitsounds in some parts
00:17:475 (5) - add clap at start
00:22:930 (1) - ^
00:30:430 (2) - ^
00:31:111 (3) - ^
00:31:793 (4) - add clap
00:58:384 (2) - ^
01:06:566 (5) - add finish
01:07:930 (1) - add clap
01:08:270 (2) - add finish at start
01:09:293 (3) - add clap
01:09:975 (5) - ^
01:10:316 (6) - add clap at the end
01:10:998 (7) - add finish
01:11:339 (8) - add clap
01:12:020 (2) - ^
01:12:361 (3) - add finish at start
01:19:180 (4) - ^
01:23:611 (1) - add finish
01:29:577 (2) - remove clap
~Ryafuka's Hard~
- OD is too low, should be 6
~Insane~
00:51:055 (1,2) - use soft hitsounds
thanks for mod ><!
~Cilvery's Normal~
01:12:361 (3) - remove whistle at start
no kds
01:12:361 (3) - remove whistle at start
no kds
Topic Starter
Fixed :3DJPop wrote:
~Cilvery's Normal~
01:12:361 (3) - remove whistle at start
no kds
Bubble :3
geatz!!
Topic Starter
DJPop wrote:
Bubble :3
thank you!! \:D/spboxer3 wrote:
geatz!!
Very nice map phonic ^^
good luck with ranked!
good luck with ranked!
Topic Starter
thank you Gabi ><!Gabi wrote:
Very nice map phonic ^^
good luck with ranked!
weep
Topic Starter
eldnl wrote:
weep
why? lol
[Cilvery's Normal]
00:15:430 (1) - Too soon after spinner for a Normal difficulty.
00:34:691 (5) - New combo.
01:21:907 (8) - ^
01:23:611 (1) - Remove new combo.
[Insane]
01:28:725 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - I don't like this pattern, I'm sure you can make something better than this.
That's all.
00:15:430 (1) - Too soon after spinner for a Normal difficulty.
00:34:691 (5) - New combo.
01:21:907 (8) - ^
01:23:611 (1) - Remove new combo.
[Insane]
01:28:725 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - I don't like this pattern, I'm sure you can make something better than this.
That's all.
arigato Andrea ~ !osuplayer111 wrote:
[Cilvery's Normal]
00:15:430 (1) - Too soon after spinner for a Normal difficulty. Fixed
00:34:691 (5) - New combo. Fixed
01:21:907 (8) - ^ Fixed
01:23:611 (1) - Remove new combo. Fixed
[Insane]
01:28:725 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - I don't like this pattern, I'm sure you can make something better than this.
That's all.
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download!!
[Cilvery's Normal]
00:15:770 (1) - This is missing a new combo.
Also, you should get your map to +12 of priority if you want me to rank it :3
00:15:770 (1) - This is missing a new combo.
Also, you should get your map to +12 of priority if you want me to rank it :3
orz +12? wow the rules really have changed. let me help you out :3
Topic Starter
fixedosuplayer111 wrote:
[Cilvery's Normal]
00:15:770 (1) - This is missing a new combo.
Also, you should get your map to +12 of priority if you want me to rank it :3
looooolByakugan249 wrote:
orz +12? wow the rules really have changed. let me help you out :3
Thank you very much ><!!
Let's go!
Ranked~
Ranked~
Topic Starter
thank you Andrea and Byakugan ><!osuplayer111 wrote:
Let's go!
Ranked~
Also congratz to Cilvery for her 1st ranked diff 
Omedeto phonic chan :3
phonic become MAT and bubble my map
Congratz phonic ^^
やったね♪───Ｏ（≧∇≦）Ｏ────♪
congratz >////<
.☆.+:^ヽ(∇￣*)o♪Congratulations♪ｏ(*￣∇)ﾉ^;+.☆.
Congratz!!