[General]
-- The tags/difficulty name should probably be changed because xcherry and markar8000 have changed their names since then
[Full Revolution]
00:21:414 (6) - Add a note here to keep the beat going. Not sure why you stopped -- it's kind of awkward, really.
00:28:505 (10,1) - Switch these notes around. The slider should be starting on the red tick to follow the guitar. Definitely change this.
00:35:050 (8,1) - ^
01:04:505 (4) - This combo doesn't make any sense. Remove it, add a new one at 01:05:596, and remove the one at 01:06:005 (1).
01:23:187 (4) - Add a whistle at the start of this slider like you did with the other ones.
01:33:959 (x) - You need to add a timing section here to reset the metronome.
01:34:914 (4) - The beat placement here is kind of off. It'd represent the music better if you did something like
this. That way stresses the beats correctly and at the same time, following the vocals clearly.
01:36:005 (7,1) - This part is pretty iffy too. A slider should be starting on that red-tick, not ending on it. Arrange the beats something like
this. Oh, and remove the silly combo-spam. It's killing your drain.
01:38:323 (4) - Add a new combo here because of that heavy beat and ~*consistency~*
01:42:687 (3) - This slider should be a 1/2-beat to stress that red-tick for the sake of the vocals.
01:58:096 (1) - Add a timing section here to again, reset the metronome.
02:06:687 (1) - ^
02:11:050 (9) - Add a combo here to be consistent
02:12:141 (1) - Remove this combo to be consistent (wwww)
02:13:368 (11) - Add a combo here to be consistent (wwwwwwww)
02:14:323 (1) - REMOVE THIS COMBO TO BE CONSISTENT (wwwwwwwwwwwwww)
02:15:550 (1) - Add another timing section here to reset the metronome.
02:32:868 (1) - ^
02:37:096 (1,2) - The new combo should be on (2) because it makes sense and ~*consistency*~
02:57:005 (9,1) - The combo should be on (9) because it makes sense and ~*consistency*~
03:10:093 (4) - Add another timing section to reset the metronome.
03:16:777 (1) - ^
03:19:777 (1) - Remove this combo because it hurts the drain aaaaaaaa
03:20:595 (1) - ^ It doesn't make sense anyways
03:21:141 (8) - HERE is where you should have added the new combo.
03:23:187 (8) - Add another timing section here to reset the metronome.
03:37:914 (3) - Add a new combo here for *~consistency~*
03:40:505 (1) - Add another timing section here to reset the metronome.
03:41:596 (4) - This is hard as hell to see. I missed it on both test plays. You should definitely move it.
03:44:868 (9) - The combo should be starting here, not 03:45:277.
03:56:868 (4,1) - This is some weird ass placement you have going on. It'd be easier to understand if you removed 03:57:005 (1). It doesn't really follow anything and it's messed me up both plays. After that, make (4) into a 1-beat slider leading directly into that stream.
04:15:141 (1,2) - Oh god, don't start mapping here. Just remove it. Starting at 04:15:687 (3) should suffice.
04:30:819 (1) - Add a new timing section here. Make it 3/4. Speaking of this part, it's pretty damn unreadable. You really need to change it. It's cool to watch but not cool to play.
Oh, and resnap notes on the taiko