update~thx for moddingTwice wrote:
[Easy]
00:52:966-(6) nc
00:53:957-(1) 取消nc
00:56:932-(6) nc
00:57:924-(1) 取消nc
01:53:450-(6) 我觉得在easy里是多余的o.o
[Normal]
00:29:665-(6) normal里这个遮挡可以吗o.o?
01:00:898-(7) nc
01:01:890-(1) 取消nc
01:02:881-(2) nc
01:21:720-(5) nc?
01:32:627-(6) nc
01:51:466-(6) nc
总感觉这个normal有些地方有点难O.o
[Hard]
0.o 没看到啥大问题
[On-And-On]
我感觉当连打间距太大之后我都不知道那是连打了/.\
00:59:783-(5) 报告长官!尤其是这个,特别坑爹!
除了那些万恶的像普通单点的连打很奇葩以外我觉得其他都很好/.\ 阿C我偶像!
C姥爷fight! 虽然和Aoi撞图了/.\
168,56,12320,2,0,B|80:64|40:160|80:240,1,240,2|0
340,112,18271,6,0,B|368:144|372:192|348:232|304:244,1,160,6|0
332,288,79732,2,0,B|324:372|240:384|160:368|160:272,1,240,2|2
thx!~ updated-Bakari- wrote:
hey!
[General]
some unsnapped green points at Hard and Insane
[On-And-On]
rename to Insane ><
01:20:227 - remove break here this pause won't kill everybody
00:02:403 (5) -remove new combo ~_~
00:05:626 (3,2) - overlap >,< maybe fix it?
00:28:684 (4,5,6) - make symmetrical just for better looking :3
00:32:899 (2) - instead of crossing use stack :3
00:49:139 (2) - new combo :3
01:16:260 (2,5,3) - don't like this small overlap
[Hard]
AR +1?
00:00:420 (1,1,1,1) - no need to use new combo here
00:24:221 (7) - x112 y200
00:49:139 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - make small stream or something. not looks good now
01:35:599 (1) - avoid crossing? ><
01:51:963 (3,8) - stack better
[Normal]
00:12:320 (3) - i don't like this shapecode00:21:246 (6) - use 2 notes instead168,56,12320,2,0,B|80:64|40:160|80:240,1,240,2|0
00:34:139 (1,3) - stack them?
00:56:922 (5,1) - in this way
01:04:856 (1,2,3,4,5) - too hard for normal
01:20:723 (1,2,3,4,5) - unstack them
01:51:467 (6) - once in whole diff put NC here to avoid +10 on circle
[Easy]
AR -1?
00:03:395 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/wP0I lol
00:18:271 (1) - maybe this shape?code00:22:238 (1) - sstack with 00:20:254 (3) or somrthing.340,112,18271,6,0,B|368:144|372:192|348:232|304:244,1,160,6|0
00:25:213 (4,5) - can conguse beginners
00:26:205 (1,3) - ^
00:35:130 (3,4) - ^
00:42:568 (2,4) - shapes aren't perfect! please make them cover circles better ><
01:19:732 (4) - mhm.. maybe this?code01:36:591 (4,1) - overlap332,288,79732,2,0,B|324:372|240:384|160:368|160:272,1,240,2|2
~~~~~~~~~~~
:3 i like this map
thx~ fixedTTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:
[*]General
Source 写上 This is the one 吧
两个灰色是一样的,最后用这个调整NC的颜色,而不用去做出4个COMBO色,不过这次也不用改了,改起来麻烦,以后做新图时留意下吧
[attachment=0:7d3e8]1.jpg[/attachment:7d3e8]
[*]Easy
00:28:188 (3) - 应当把这个slider开始处移动到至少不是完全遮挡的地方,这样是会造成难以理解 对于easy.
00:49:015 (1) - 去掉NC,然后在后面(3)上加,这么做 和你之后加的NC是一致的
01:51:095 (T) - 从这里起 有3条没有用到的绿线
[*]Normal
00:49:510 (5) - 这里放clap 显得有些突兀,不如加whislte (前面4的结尾也加)或者不加音效好些
01:21:715 (3) - 考虑加一个NC?
01:32:376 (5) - 放置的太高,接触hp bar了
01:47:500 (6) - NC?
[*]Hardl
00:49:634 - 这么做的slider,末尾是unsnap的,所以换一种方式吧,在这个地方,同时导致末尾的finish 听起来有延迟
[*]Insanel
00:00:420~00:02:403 - 有些坑?主要是不太好理解(放在开始的话),突然放这么远的间距话,不过打起来难度倒不是很大.如果还有人提出的话,考虑修改修改吧.
00:49:139 - 前仨circle不重叠,感觉更好~
01:20:227 - 这个break 去掉
01:29:401,01:29:649 - 有些突然,不过打起来还是能理解,看看别的的意见吧再.
Good luck+star支持下
FIXED. thxGabe wrote:
Hi, here's my mod from Gabe's Modding Queue.[General]
- Delete the .osb in your beatmap folder if you don't have any Storyboard.
- There lot's of unsnapped point on [Hard] and [On-And-On]
Hard :
On-And-On :
Be shure to fix this before I mod your Beatmap.
Shulin wrote:
"I'm living out my life until the day I die..." that made me lol. Anyway I have some suggestions for you ~
General:Easy:
- Move "This is the one" from source and put it in tags. Album should never be the source =P Fixed~
- Slider velocity changes on [Hard] and [On-And-On] seem random at times, but I guess it's playable.
00:00:415 (1) - Seems too loud, try 25-35% volume, or gradual volume increase. Also add finish? Fixed~
00:06:861 - Add note with clap?
00:10:828 - ^
00:49:975 (1) - to 01:02:867 (3) - whistle tick is too loud. 50-60% seems like a good volume for these. Fixed~
01:21:710 (1) - to 01:41:545 (1) - ^ Fixed~
01:37:578 (1) - Move this left a bit? It makes 01:39:561 (2) - looks better. Fixed~
01:53:446 (6) - Delete? Fixed~
Normal:
00:00:415 (1) - Too loud, try 25-35% volume or maybe gradually increase the volume? Also add finish? Fixed~
00:51:710 (3) - Lower the volume to around 50-60% on that whistle tick? It sounds strange right now. Fixed~
00:55:677 (3) - ^ Fixed~
00:59:644 (5) - ^ Fixed~
00:59:644 (5) - ^ Fixed~
01:27:413 (3) - ^ Fixed~
01:30:388 (3) - ^ Fixed~
01:31:379 (4) - Add whistle to the start? And same thing about tick volume. Fixed~
01:34:355 (3) - Same about tick volume. Fixed~
01:47:495 (1) - Remove clap from the return?
01:52:950 (5) - Remove the return? Also move it down a little, looks ugly so close to the hp bar. Fixed~
Hard:Fixed~
- + 1 HP Drain and Overall difficulty?
00:23:472 (5,6,7,1) - Looks clustered. Increase the spacing? i think this maybe a bit strange?
00:32:646 (1) - Clap the start. Fixed~
00:49:629 (3,4,5,1) - Maybe use another returning slider here, it feels too similar to [On-And-On] right now. Fixed~
01:53:446 (9) - Delete? Also right now the stacking looks strange. Fixed~
Nice.
On And On:
00:00:415 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I think this is a pretty bad way to start a map. The jumps aren't really intuitive and are unexpected. I suppose it's technically fine but I think it'd be better if you came up with a new pattern. I'm thinking the better pattern. thx~
00:24:092 (6) - Stack under 00:23:720 (5) - ? I think it looks and plays better. Fixed~
00:49:134 (1,2,3) - Why not make this part of a stream instead of stacking? changed to a returning slider
01:04:975 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Why's the 1/4 spacing bigger than 00:49:134 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - and 01:20:718 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the music is exactly the same! Fixed~
01:28:156 (1,2) - These sliders ruin the flow of the stream, imo it would be better as all circles. Fixed~
01:29:148 (1,2) - This jump makes no sense to me. Fixed~
01:53:446 (8) - Delete? Fixed~
I like this difficulty but at parts it seems you've decided "it's not hard enough, time to make it harder!" And these things ruin the flow for me.
That's all from me, good luck with this. ^_^
288,120,16282,2,0,B|232:88|152:128,1,120,2|8形狀可以再條一下 >_<
104,224,17274,2,0,B|160:248|248:216,1,120,0|8
228,264,102536,6,0,B|92:196|44:368,1,204.000004863739,0|001:51:462 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 有點亂亂的
KersiTyan wrote:
Hi~ Mod from our q~
I love this map! >A<
[On-And-On]
00:25:208 (1) - remove clap They're intentional.It sounds better I think..sry..
00:25:952 (6) - ^
00:30:167 - remove whistle and add finish nope...I will consistent with other diff.
[Hard]
Fine ~ Thx~
[Normal]
00:32:646 (4) - add clap Fixed~
00:52:454 - ^ Fixed~
00:53:446 - ^ Fixed~
[Easy]
00:02:398 - remove whistle and add finish Fixed~
01:02:371 (2) - add clap Fixed~
Star~ and good luck~ add as favorite >w<
Fixed many points from your mods>w< Thx for modding&star~iroseka wrote:
iroseka's mod from tha queue总体来说……不错吧【pia
[Easy]
01:33:611 (1) - DS Fixed~
[Normal]
这个难度好多不按DS的spacing……不过可以打吧。
间架结构上来说感觉歪歪斜斜的,建议重新排列note,声音还不错
[Hard]
00:17:274 (3,4,5,6,7) - 这个Stream对Hard来说不推荐有 可以改成repeat5次的1/4条 nope...
00:49:134 (1,2) - 起在这里比较奇怪 往后移一格 Fixed~
01:11:049 (4) - 连续三个在这比较难看 Fixed~
01:20:718 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 把Stream换掉 理由同上 nope.. sry...
[Insane]
00:00:415 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 跳的略猎奇……不推荐这种1/4跳当然你喜欢的话也没有问题
00:22:729 (2) - Ctrl+R? Fixed~
00:49:134 (1,2,3,4,5) - 后移一格,理由同hard Fixed~
ALLLLLfixed~ thx~Leorda wrote:
Hiii
[General]
* Combo colour no.1 and no.3 are very similar. Find something different
[Easy]
01:05:842 (1) - Make a slider like this to make a blanket combo http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/346450
[Normal]
00:02:894 (1) - Overlapped by hitbursts from spinner. Sometimes, beginners are slowly to read object, so this possibly hidden for them
[Hard]
00:49:505 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end)
That's all I got, good luck
56,176,21241,2,0,B|144:176,1,80,0|801:05:842 (1) - ^ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/353698
56,116,65842,6,0,B|56:40|140:20|216:40|216:124,1,240,6|801:19:727 (4) - without distance snap move the 1st waypoint to x:332 y:296
pimpG wrote:
hi there
general
offset 400 bpm 121...and offset 49966 (<<<IMO.. its following the same mainbeat as the previous timeline) bpm 121 ummm..I think the offset is change since 00:48:018 - ~00:48:983 - , so I'd like add the bpm line here00:48:983 -
..........................................
or use only offset 400 bpm 121,015
Easy
00:12:315 (4) - make this slider curve a bit more ? Done~
01:39:561 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - 1 grid up 1 grid left? (that makes 01:39:561 (2) a bit more close from the previous slider, just like you was using in the same patterns before) ok~
Normal
00:48:018 (4) - slider end is right after the new timeline, make the slider end at the previous red divisor and a circle at 00:48:983 ? Follow your idea~.
00:55:677 (3,4,5) - move (5) away from (3) umm...not necessary imo
01:23:445 (3,4,5) - (3) is overlaping (4) ^
01:27:412 (3,4,5) - ^
Hard
00:17:770 (7,1) - this overlap is a bit strange (IMO) maybe?x3
00:19:505 (4,5,6) - strange (IMO), try to use the same as 00:23:472 (5,6,7)
00:36:117 (1,2) - overlap sry no change~
00:40:084 (1,2) - ^
Insane
00:16:282 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - i think it should be reverse sliders or streams (but its just IMO) no change~
00:38:100 (1) - consider moving it away from the previous (3) ><
Thx to mod and star~
BeatofIke wrote:
Request from modding queue.
General
-> Disable Countdown. It's not needed. Fixed~
-> You could disable letterbox during breaks since it has a video, but it's not necessary since the video itself is already letterbox'ed. Fixed~
-> Is this a AMV (Anime Music Video) or an anime opening/ending? If it is an anime opening/ending add "Bakemonogatari" in source (not in tags). In addition, you could also add "opening" or ending in tags depending whether if it's an opening or an ending. It's AMV. so I won'y add the anime's name in source.
Easy
-> Nothing found.
Normal
-> HP Drain +1? umm..nope
-> Overall Difficulty +1? nope
Hard
-> Nothing found.
On-and-On
-> Nothing found.
Good Map.
Thank you for mod~
Chewin wrote:
[General]
Add "Bakemonogatari" in the source and remove from tags. the song has no relation with Bakemonogatari, the video is a AMV,,so..
Inconsistency in Kiai Times. You should to set Kiai #1: Starts on 00:49:974, ends on 01:05:842 in the "Easy" and "Normal" oh yes.I forget it! fixed~!
Remove Letterbox during breaks since the video already has got it done
I suggest you to add the epilepsy warning cuz this video starts with some flashes um..
[Easy]
00:22:233 (1) - Improve the blanket: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/353679 done~56,176,21241,2,0,B|144:176,1,80,0|801:05:842 (1) - ^ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/353698 done~56,116,65842,6,0,B|56:40|140:20|216:40|216:124,1,240,6|801:19:727 (4) - without distance snap move the 1st waypoint to x:332 y:296 fixed in another way~
[Normal]
00:48:018 (4) - Unsnapped slider's end fixed!
01:31:379 (4,5) - These elements touch hp bar. Just move it done~
01:37:578 (1,2,3,4,5) - Since this is a Normal I'd delete these circles and would fix in this way: done~
It fits better imo
[Hard]
00:49:974 (3) - I'd use NC here and remove it from 00:50:222 (1) yes~ fixed
01:01:379 (5) - You could do this more curved, I think it flows better with 01:00:883 (4) in this way: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/353704 ok~ fixed
01:53:197 (8) - Nazi, improve the overlap with 01:51:958 (3) XD
Nice thx~
[Insane]
00:46:034 (1) - You could overlap the slider's tail with 00:45:538 (7) done~
01:20:719 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Some players will hate you for these streams o: Including me. <3 uh. I added a NC here01:21:215 (1) - and there01:05:347 (1) - . Then I think it must be more easy to read.
Nice mapset, I think you should to call a MAT.
Good luck with this ;3
Thanks alot!
Thanks~ NTR~NatsumeRin wrote:
[General]
00:49:974 - add a red line here to keep the downbeat right. k fixed~
Easy's first kiai starts 1ms later, don't know why but plz fix. fixed~
[Easy]
Don't want to be nazi, except for some 1/1 stacks i don't really like... nice diff. THANKS~~
[Normal]
01:03:115 (3) - would it be better if the beat is at 01:03:611 - ? um..yes. I'd change 01:02:866 (2) - and 01:03:858 (4) - to sliders then add a circle at 01:03:610 (3) - .
01:27:412 (3) - the drums are kinda hurry here... it's a bit waste to just map a long slider imo. Umm...since it's normal there, I think now is ok..so no change.
[Hard]
01:27:660 (1) - same thing with Normal, is this pattern too simple? 因为前面这种地方有很多连打或者1/4repeat了,所以想换种方式:P
[Insane]
00:00:415 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - i tried..i think it's still too far and meaningless to me... maybe you have a reason? I fixed. Changed all (3,4) to a 1/4 slider, then it will be easy to read and beat imo...
00:25:208 (1,6) - remove clap? ok~
01:31:876 (2,3,4) - a bit too... straight here? not so fun. Also though you follows distance snap, but in a Insane 2-3-4 looks more strange = = umm..fixed
thanks for modding~XD fixed mostly. updateHelloSCV wrote:
Hi~ From my Queue
Almost Modding is Suggestion so you can ignore thisSPOILEREasy
00:34:134 (1,2,3,4) - try other pattern ( beginners can confuse this part i guess )
01:31:627 (3,4,5) - ^
Normal
01:00:635 (6,8) - delete note ( becuase this pattern looks hard for Normal diff )
Hard
00:07:109 (2,3,4) - how about this? http://puu.sh/EiFw
00:17:274 (3,4,5,6) - changing like 00:16:778 (2) - this slider fixed~
00:50:222 (2,3) - how about delete these notes and add 1/2 slider here? fixed~
00:52:949 (3,4,5,6) - i think square pattern is not good on this part try http://puu.sh/EiIC this patter fixed~
or change other pattern?
00:57:660 (6) - 1.2 distance is your purpose? fixed~
01:22:949 (5,6) - replace to 1/2 slider? um..nope
01:29:644 (1) - add finish fixed~
Insane
01:17:496 (6) - how about reduce distance same as 01:16:752 (3,4,5) - this notes ( becuase this these notes have simliar song sound )
01:52:455 (4,5,6) - I think this square pattern have so long distance how about reduce a little? fixed~
lol beautiful song! xD good luck for rank!
kyuten wrote:
Hi~Request from my queue
[General]
fine~
[Easy]
-Beatmap-
00:42:563 (2) - 这样的和之前的1对齐好好摆嘛...一样的nazi就不说啦(ノ´∀`*)
01:02:867 (3) - 稍微有一点挡住之前的01:00:884 (3),摆在两个中间的位置吧w fixed
[Normal]
fine~ :D
[Hard]
有用了四个slider speed...不知道会不会过关... :3没关系吧?
-Difficulty-
OD-1吧w done
-Beatmap-
00:05:125 (2) - 这样的节奏也蛮好...可以参考一下ww no.
01:11:792 (1) - 这个0.5好像有点不自然...0 0 有吗:P
[Insane]
同样是四个slider speed...
好像需要resnap一下..? why resnap?
-Beatmap-
00:00:415 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - 打起来手感好像稍微有点不好... 没梗._.
00:27:191 (5,6,7,1) - 这个好像没有之前方形的好看...或者是nazi... 其实主要是因为下面的silider拉不下去了。所以只能考上扁一点的
[Overall]
战场原荡漾ヾ(*´∀`*)ノ゛和音乐配合好好ww
给颗星~☆加油thanks~!
thanks!~~[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:
from my queue
Easy
- ._.看不出什么问题 不会mod简单难度...
NormalHard
- 00:24:216 (6) - this is confusing for beginners._. 怎么?
- 01:32:619 (6,7,8,1) - 这里不好看啊._. 要不要考虑用reverse slider 然后blanket一下 done.
Insane
- 00:50:718 (3) - 拆成slider+repeat+note好点 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/357471 changed,但有点变化
- 01:07:701 (5) - ._.hard难度别这么放 k.stack
- 01:54:188 (8) - 同ins what?
that's all
- 00:22:233 (1,2) - 形状做一样的._. ._.感觉没影响
- 00:25:208 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 下stack stream干嘛._. 其他的都没叠这里不是很奇怪 会吗:P
- 00:45:043 (5,6,7,8) - 不对准? ._. ?
- 01:53:198 (7) - 好像多了一个._.
- 其实没什么好mod的就是感觉太量产._. ......
Good luck~