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Four Season - Minamikaze Dramatic (TV Size) [Taiko|Osu]

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EmPao
723 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
EmPao
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年2月15日 at 上午 01:59:47

Artist: Four Season
Title: Minamikaze Dramatic (TV Size)
Source: Natsuiro Kiseki
Tags: ending ed sphere Kotobuki Minako Takagaki Ayahi Tomatsu Haruka Toyosaki Aki ms0543724 gina bossandy boss
BPM: 127
Filesize: 17649kb
Play Time: 01:41
Difficulties Available:
  1. Boss Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 347 notes)
  2. Easy (1.62 stars, 75 notes)
  3. GiNa's Normal (3.98 stars, 121 notes)
  4. Hard (4.75 stars, 201 notes)
Download: Four Season - Minamikaze Dramatic (TV Size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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**#4 Map!
夏色キセキ / 夏色奇蹟(Natsuiro Kiseki) ED2
Another ED map(click me)
SPECIAL THANKS!
GiNa & bossandy (GUEST DIFF)
spboxer3 (BUBBLED)
minyeob (RANKED)
DarknessAngel's request: forum/p/2090596
and all modder :D
mapset
Easy - By Me - 100%
GiNa's Normal - By GiNa - 100%
Hard- By Me - 100%
Boss Taiko Oni - By bossandy - 100%
Last edited by EmPao , edited 113 times in total.
jossieP
1,875 posts
Joined May 2010
jossieP
hello, from timing help

offset just a bit late, my test play got 0ms late on offset: 17925 (-23 on current)
that is all, re-snap all notes, green timelines, preview time
Vicho
887 posts
Joined May 2009
Vicho
I love this song <3 it's possible for me to make an Insane diff for this ww?

minami no kaze wa mirai mu-ki~
EmPao
723 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
EmPao

Vicho-kun wrote:

I love this song <3 it's possible for me to make an Insane diff for this ww?

minami no kaze wa mirai mu-ki~
Of course, you can :3
GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
GiNa
[General]
-拿掉"Letterbox during breaks" (song setup -> Storyboarding)

[Hard]
00:45:326 (3) - x:296 y:56
00:45:562 (4) - x:232 y:104
01:41:074 - kiai在這結束應該比較好

然後我想做Normal，不過我最近沒梗;w;
可以的話請讓我拖久一點吧 :cry: （我要去補完這個動畫）
EmPao
723 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
EmPao

GiNa wrote:

[General]
-拿掉"Letterbox during breaks" (song setup -> Storyboarding) Fixed

[Hard]
00:45:326 (3) - x:296 y:56 Fixed
00:45:562 (4) - x:232 y:104Fixed
01:41:074 - kiai在這結束應該比較好Ok~Fixed

然後我想做Normal，不過我最近沒梗;w; 好哇~
可以的話請讓我拖久一點吧 :cry: （我要去補完這個動畫） OK的~XD
感謝Mod :)
KuronumaSawako
471 posts
Joined March 2011
KuronumaSawako
Hi! I can make a Extra Hard or Normal Guest diff?
EmPao
723 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
EmPao

KuronumaSawako wrote:

Hi! I can make a Extra Hard or Normal Guest diff?
Sorry>_< , there are 5 diffs now (4osu +1taiko)

I think 5 diffs are enough for a TV Size map.
bossandy
osu! Alumni
1,665 posts
Joined May 2010
bossandy
Yo 先mod下xDD
　
  1. 紅 : 是我覺得一並要改的
  2. 藍 : 建議 但個人認為要改的
  3. 黑 : 就單純建議
　
[ General]
　
  1. 其實BG可以找到更好的 現在這樣的果斷是動畫截圖
　
[ Easy]
　
  1. 00:25:484 (1) - 結尾用finish感覺有點太突兀了 改成clap吧
  2. 00:31:862 (3) - 這裡有一點小高音 建議加個whistle在頭跟尾 結尾的finish拿掉 它應該是加在 00:33:043 (1) 才對
  3. 00:46:271 (1) - 這finish明顯是在00:48:161 蛋市改了後面的object會跟spinner太接近 所以建議你改成這樣 :
  4. 00:59:499 (1) - 在01:01:389結束吧 然後再01:02:334 , 01:02:806 , 01:03:279 各加個東西 ( 管他slider還note )
  5. 01:07:058 (1) - 開頭finish
  6. 01:10:838 (1) - ^
  7. 01:13:673 - 加個note 跟著vocal
  8. 01:14:617 (1) - 開頭finish
  9. 01:16:507 (3) - 結尾finish刪除改成clap 然後01:18:397 (1) - 加finish
  10. 01:21:232 - Same as 01:13:673
  11. 01:22:176 (1) - 開頭finish
  12. 01:24:066 (3,1) - Same as 01:16:507
  13. 01:29:736 (1) - finish
  14. 01:37:295 (1) - 開頭finish
  15. 很不錯的Easy xDD
　
[ Hard]
　
  1. 這難度的hitsounds mod跟Easy差不多 我就不多說了
  2. 00:27:373 (1) - 這NC對你的NC style來說是多餘的 因為00:42:491 (4) - 沒有NC
  3. 00:46:153 (1) - 加個whistle?
  4. 00:55:484 (1,2) - 加個clap感覺蠻有fu的
　
　　--------------------------------------------------------
哇 做的很不錯呢!!!
對了 Taiko diff 完成了~
Here is the Taiko BG ( 記得這個BG要改名成Taiko BG喔 )
Good Luck :3
EmPao
723 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
EmPao

bossandy wrote:

SPOILER
Yo 先mod下xDD
　
  1. 紅 : 是我覺得一並要改的
  2. 藍 : 建議 但個人認為要改的
  3. 黑 : 就單純建議
　
[ General]
　
  1. 其實BG可以找到更好的 現在這樣的果斷是動畫截圖 Ok,換張了
　
[ Easy]
　
  1. 00:25:484 (1) - 結尾用finish感覺有點太突兀了 改成clap吧
  2. 00:31:862 (3) - 這裡有一點小高音 建議加個whistle在頭跟尾 結尾的finish拿掉 它應該是加在 00:33:043 (1) 才對
  3. 00:46:271 (1) - 這finish明顯是在00:48:161 蛋市改了後面的object會跟spinner太接近 所以建議你改成這樣 :
  4. 00:59:499 (1) - 在01:01:389結束吧 然後再01:02:334 , 01:02:806 , 01:03:279 各加個東西 ( 管他slider還note )
  5. 01:07:058 (1) - 開頭finish
  6. 01:10:838 (1) - ^
  7. 01:13:673 - 加個note 跟著vocal
  8. 01:14:617 (1) - 開頭finish
  9. 01:16:507 (3) - 結尾finish刪除改成clap 然後01:18:397 (1) - 加finish
  10. 01:21:232 - Same as 01:13:673
  11. 01:22:176 (1) - 開頭finish
  12. 01:24:066 (3,1) - Same as 01:16:507
  13. 01:29:736 (1) - finish
  14. 01:37:295 (1) - 開頭finish
  15. 很不錯的Easy xDD
　
[ Hard]
　
  1. 這難度的hitsounds mod跟Easy差不多 我就不多說了
  2. 00:27:373 (1) - 這NC對你的NC style來說是多餘的 因為00:42:491 (4) - 沒有NC
  3. 00:46:153 (1) - 加個whistle? 我感覺這裡沒什麼聲音,所以沒加
  4. 00:55:484 (1,2) - 加個clap感覺蠻有fu的
　
其他都fixed

　　--------------------------------------------------------
哇 做的很不錯呢!!! :D
對了 Taiko diff 完成了~
Here is the Taiko BG ( 記得這個BG要改名成Taiko BG喔 )
Good Luck :3


感謝star & mod & guest diff XD
Vicho
887 posts
Joined May 2009
Vicho
lolz I was mapping my diff for this but as I can see you already make an insane by yourself xd ok..
alacat
osu! Alumni
3,872 posts
Joined May 2011
alacat
Hi~ from my queue :oops:

Let's go~~

[General]
●kiai time end ~ 01:3:405 -

[Easy]
●00:25:484 (1) - add whistle on the slider's head ?
●00:27:373 (2) - same,here
●00:31:862 (3) - add clap on the slider's head ? delete whistle.
●00:44:381 (1) - add finish or whistle on the slider's head ?
●01:03:751 (2) - add whistle on the slider's repaet ?
●01:05:641 (4) - ^
●01:10:365 - add note? and,add clap,here
●01:12:255 (4) - add whistle on the slider's repaet ?
●01:24:066 (3) - add whistle on the slider's head ?

[GiNa's Normal]
●Circle size +1?
●00:21:704 (2) - add whistle on the slider's head ?
●00:29:736 (2) - like this?http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/337386
●00:59:027 (3) - add finish on the slider's end ?
●00:59:736 (1) - add finish?
●01:04:932 (6) - add whistle?
●01:12:964 (1) - add whistle on the slider's head ?
●01:25:956 (1) - add finish on the slider's head ?

[Hard]
●00:20:759 (6) - add whistle?
●00:24:539 (5) - ^
●00:59:617 (1) - spinner ~ 01:01:389 -
●01:06:113 (9) - delete clap on the slider's head ? and add whistle on the slider's head ?
●01:13:673 (7) - add whistle?
●01:21:232 (8) - ^

good map set :oops:

nice song <3

good luck ~ :)
Reiji-RJ
1,402 posts
Joined April 2010
Reiji-RJ
Hello!

General

  1. Fix the artist, please. S should be capitalized. So, artist should be Four Season. How-to-change. Oh, and don't forget to change the name of the topic C:
  2. 01:35:405 - I'd better end kiai here D:
Easy

AR, HP - 1, please.

  1. 00:27:373 (2) - maybe make slider similar to 00:25:484 (1) - ? And add finishes on the beginning. As you have same part with it here: 00:40:602 (1,2) -
  2. 00:53:830 (1) - personally, I don't like this shape. Try something like this:
    SPOILER
  3. 00:53:830 (1) - also, remove finish from the end
  4. 00:55:720 (1) - and add here finish
  5. 01:03:751 (2) - I don't like how it touches 01:02:334 (1) -. Maybe move it like here:
    SPOILER
  6. 01:05:641 (4) - also, stack it with 01:03:279 (1) -, and move 01:05:169 (3) - quite right and down by distance snap.
    SPOILER
GiNa's Normal

HP -1, please.

  1. 00:19:814 (3) - maybe curve it? As 00:17:925 (1,2) - curved too.
    SPOILER
  2. 00:34:932 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - what a hard rhythm you have here! I suggest to rearrange it in this way at least:
    SPOILER
    00:36:586 (6) - remove this note and make slider from 00:37:531 - till 00:38:239 - .
  3. 01:07:058 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - ^ Again, hard. Rearrange in this way:
    SPOILER
  4. 01:18:161 (4) - remove this note, you have hard rhythms for normal :<
  5. 01:25:011 (3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - that's again! Make this ><:
    SPOILER
  6. 01:07:058 (1) - also, finish here
  7. 01:10:838 (1) - ^
  8. 01:14:617 (1) - ^
  9. 01:15:562 (3) - ^ to the end
  10. 01:22:176 (1) - ^ to the beginning
  11. 01:25:956 (1) - ^
  12. Also, why not make kiai times similar to other diffs?
Hard

  1. 00:24:539 (5) - whistle
  2. Oh, I complained about Normal diff, that it's too hard... And now I see quite easy Hard xD
  3. 00:24:775 - add notes here and 00:25:247 - here
  4. 00:36:586 - ^
  5. 00:35:405 (5) - whistle to the end!
  6. 00:38:712 (6) - ^
  7. 00:40:365 - note?
  8. 00:46:153 (1) - I'd finish spinner at 00:47:925 - and add a finish xD
  9. 00:59:617 (1) - finish spinner at 01:01:389 - and remove finish
  10. 01:13:673 (7) - clap? as you have it here 01:06:113 (9) -
  11. 01:21:232 (8) - ^
  12. 01:28:791 (9) - ^
  13. Oh, easy was just a beginning of a Hard ;3
Nice map!
Good luck!
GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
GiNa
Mods

alacat wrote:

[GiNa's Normal]
●Circle size +1?　No, sorry
●00:21:704 (2) - add whistle on the slider's head ?
●00:29:736 (2) - like this?　Fixed
●00:59:027 (3) - add finish on the slider's end ?　Fixed
●00:59:736 (1) - add finish?　Nope
●01:04:932 (6) - add whistle?　^
●01:12:964 (1) - add whistle on the slider's head ?　^
●01:25:956 (1) - add finish on the slider's head ?　Fixed

Reiji-RJ wrote:

GiNa's Normal

HP -1, please.　Fixed

  1. 00:19:814 (3) - maybe curve it? As 00:17:925 (1,2) - curved too.　Fixed
  2. 00:34:932 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - what a hard rhythm you have here! I suggest to rearrange it in this way at least:
    00:36:586 (6) - remove this note and make slider from 00:37:531 - till 00:38:239 - .
  3. 01:07:058 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - ^ Again, hard. Rearrange in this way:
  4. 01:18:161 (4) - remove this note, you have hard rhythms for normal :<
  5. 01:25:011 (3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - that's again! Make this ><:
  6. 01:07:058 (1) - also, finish here　Fixed
  7. 01:10:838 (1) - ^　^
  8. 01:14:617 (1) - ^　^
  9. 01:15:562 (3) - ^ to the end　Nope
  10. 01:22:176 (1) - ^ to the beginning　Fixed
  11. 01:25:956 (1) - ^　^
  12. Also, why not make kiai times similar to other diffs?　I don't like having too many fountains (it really hurts some people's eyes and sometimes hides the notes), so I do not follow his. Perhaps it's not required to follow if I am the guest, no change ;_;
Sorry I forgot what I had fixed, so I didn't reply every single one of them Orz
And thanks !
http://puu.sh/zPQF
EmPao
723 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
EmPao
vicho-kun

Vicho-kun wrote:

lolz I was mapping my diff for this but as I can see you already make an insane by yourself xd ok..
Sorry, I misunderstand you D:

lol..

Reiji-RJ wrote:

Hello!

General

  1. Fix the artist, please. S should be capitalized. So, artist should be Four Season. How-to-change. Oh, and don't forget to change the name of the topic C: Ok, I think you are right. Fixed.!
  2. 01:35:405 - I'd better end kiai here D: No :P
Easy

AR, HP - 1, please. I think it is fine for now

  1. 00:27:373 (2) - maybe make slider similar to 00:25:484 (1) - ? And add finishes on the beginning. As you have same part with it here: 00:40:602 (1,2) - fixed
  2. 00:53:830 (1) - personally, I don't like this shape. Try something like this:
    SPOILER
    fixed
  3. 00:53:830 (1) - also, remove finish from the end fixed
  4. 00:55:720 (1) - and add here finishfixed
  5. 01:03:751 (2) - I don't like how it touches 01:02:334 (1) -. Maybe move it like here:
    SPOILER
    fixed
  6. 01:05:641 (4) - also, stack it with 01:03:279 (1) -, and move 01:05:169 (3) - quite right and down by distance snap. fixed
    SPOILER
Hard

  1. 00:24:539 (5) - whistle fixed
  2. Oh, I complained about Normal diff, that it's too hard... And now I see quite easy Hard xD Okay I add some note xD
  3. 00:24:775 - add notes here and 00:25:247 - here fixed
  4. 00:36:586 - ^ fixed
  5. 00:35:405 (5) - whistle to the end! fixed
  6. 00:38:712 (6) - ^ fixed
  7. 00:40:365 - note? fixed
  8. 00:46:153 (1) - I'd finish spinner at 00:47:925 - and add a finish xD No, I follow the lyrics
  9. 00:59:617 (1) - finish spinner at 01:01:389 - and remove finish fixed
  10. 01:13:673 (7) - clap? as you have it here 01:06:113 (9) - I change to whistle
  11. 01:21:232 (8) - ^ ^
  12. 01:28:791 (9) - ^ ^
  13. Oh, easy was just a beginning of a Hard ;3 xD
Nice map!
Good luck!
Thanks~

alacat wrote:

Hi~ from my queue :oops:

Let's go~~

[General]
●kiai time end ~ 01:3:405 - no, I open kiai time with lyrics

[Easy]
●00:25:484 (1) - add whistle on the slider's head ?
●00:27:373 (2) - same,here
●00:31:862 (3) - add clap on the slider's head ? delete whistle.
●00:44:381 (1) - add finish or whistle on the slider's head ?
●01:03:751 (2) - add whistle on the slider's repaet ?
●01:05:641 (4) - ^
●01:10:365 - add note? and,add clap,here
●01:12:255 (4) - add whistle on the slider's repaet ?
●01:24:066 (3) - add whistle on the slider's head ?

all fixed, and change some hitsound ^^

[Hard]
●00:20:759 (6) - add whistle? fixed
●00:24:539 (5) - ^ fixed
●00:59:617 (1) - spinner ~ 01:01:389 - I follow to lyrics so no change
●01:06:113 (9) - delete clap on the slider's head ? and add whistle on the slider's head ? fixed
●01:13:673 (7) - add whistle?fixed
●01:21:232 (8) - ^fixed

good map set :oops:

nice song <3

good luck ~ :)

Thanks~
DarknessAngel
2,237 posts
Joined May 2010
DarknessAngel
request from in-game ~ :)



Red words = Unrankable thing
Blue words = It is the best way that you fix it
Black words = If I were you,I would do that
Green words = some of my comment,or something I want you to notice



Insane

  1. 00:39:775 (2,3,4,5) - (2)和(5)的尾部都加上whistle，我覺得這樣比較合
  2. 00:55:247 (5) - 這finish很不搭，仔細聽你會發現00:55:011 (4,5)需要50%音量的defalt soft-clap
  3. 01:01:153 - 這根綠線的音量降到50%，因為這裡的音樂不大聲
  4. 01:01:862 (1) - remove clap，沒有能加clap的要素lol(沒鼓點)
  5. 01:06:113 (4) - 加個whistle到尾部，搭配人聲
  6. 01:14:145 (5) - 加whistle，原因同上
  7. 01:21:232 (4) - 尾部也來個
  8. 01:25:247 (4,5) - 建議給他們defalt soft-clap，音樂中有掌聲
  9. 01:29:027 (4) - 折返中注入whistle (突然想到用這動詞lol xD)
  10. 01:32:570 (4) - 這slider尾部明顯要一個什麼唷
  11. 01:40:602 (7) - 頭上whistle強調vocal
  12. good job on your first Insane diff,here is a record from me
    record

    不僅嚇你也嚇我- -
    我的手什麼時候變成這樣了(汗


Hard

  1. 00:55:011 (8,9) - 同Ins所說
  2. 00:58:554 (5) - 這長條的最後一個點要往下一格，不然有點歪。還有，加個whistle再折返上嗎 ? 用來強調人聲很合適
  3. 01:40:129 (3) - 依照你的設定，頭上whitle (或是像我Insane中說的，把折返的也加上去，這麼做的話你其他部分都得加)

Normal



  • hello,GiNa ~
  1. 00:25:720 (1) - 刪除whistle，這裡不該有的，到00:25:247就沒了
  2. 00:33:043 (4,6) - 它們的折返部位碰到了，不好看，改成這樣嗎 ?
  3. 00:59:027 (3) - 轉一點角度 ? 碰到slider身上看起來不大舒服，我覺得這樣比較好
  4. 00:59:027 (3) - slider尾部finish ? 沒有這個感覺起來空空的
  5. 00:59:736 (1) - spinner起始點從00:59:617開始，然後在原本的時間點結束，這樣比較合適

Easy

  1. 00:30:208 (2) - 尾部來個whistle強調vocal
  2. 00:38:712 (3,4) - 尾部 & (4) add whistle
  3. 00:53:830 (1) - 尾部finish很違和，換成50%的clap


GJ & GL
Have a star ~ ☆
:)
Poggo
1,502 posts
Joined January 2012
Poggo
hi from our mod Q ^.^

Insane

00:31:862 - make this slider shorter and and 2 notes http://puu.sh/Aqy6 really sound better
00:32:806 - add note here
01:01:153 - end spinner on big white tick
01:30:090 - remove this note
01:35:405 - end kiai time here
01:37:295 - start new kiai time

Hard

00:25:247 - remove this note >.< it the superfluous
00:38:712(1) - this slider very highly, yuo should to lower it bcz it not conveniently for game
01:24:302(2) - i think better remove this note to support the following interval
01:35:405 - end kiai time here
01:37:295 - start new kiai time

Normal

01:35:405 - end kiai time here
01:37:295 - start new kiai time

Easy

00:53:830 - remove red tick on slider http://puu.sh/AqES
01:35:405 - end kiai time here
01:37:295 - start new kiai time

It's all for me~~ good luck)
EmPao
723 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
EmPao
Katty Pie's mod

SPOILER

Katty Pie wrote:

hi from our mod Q ^.^

Insane

00:31:862 - make this slider shorter and and 2 notes http://puu.sh/Aqy6 really sound better x
00:32:806 - add note here x
01:01:153 - end spinner on big white tick Fixed
01:30:090 - remove this note Fixed
01:35:405 - end kiai time here x
01:37:295 - start new kiai time^

Hard

00:25:247 - remove this note >.< it the superfluous Ok, I removed
00:38:712(1) - this slider very highly, yuo should to lower it bcz it not conveniently for game Ok, I changed the place
01:24:302(2) - i think better remove this note to support the following interval x
01:35:405 - end kiai time here x
01:37:295 - start new kiai time^

Easy

00:53:830 - remove red tick on slider http://puu.sh/AqES x
01:35:405 - end kiai time here^
01:37:295 - start new kiai time^

It's all for me~~ good luck)
Thanks mod :)

DarknessAngel's mod
SPOILER

DarknessAngel wrote:

request from in-game ~ :) Ya:D

Red words = Unrankable thing
Blue words = It is the best way that you fix it
Black words = If I were you,I would do that
Green words = some of my comment,or something I want you to notice

Insane

  1. 00:39:775 (2,3,4,5) - (2)和(5)的尾部都加上whistle，我覺得這樣比較合
  2. 00:55:247 (5) - 這finish很不搭，仔細聽你會發現00:55:011 (4,5)需要50%音量的defalt soft-clap
  3. 01:01:153 - 這根綠線的音量降到50%，因為這裡的音樂不大聲
  4. 01:01:862 (1) - remove clap，沒有能加clap的要素lol(沒鼓點)
  5. 01:06:113 (4) - 加個whistle到尾部，搭配人聲
  6. 01:14:145 (5) - 加whistle，原因同上
  7. 01:21:232 (4) - 尾部也來個
  8. 01:25:247 (4,5) - 建議給他們defalt soft-clap，音樂中有掌聲
  9. 01:29:027 (4) - 折返中注入whistle (突然想到用這動詞lol xD)
  10. 01:32:570 (4) - 這slider尾部明顯要一個什麼唷 加Finish了
  11. 01:40:602 (7) - 頭上whistle強調vocal
  12. good job on your first Insane diff,here is a record from me
    record

    不僅嚇你也嚇我- -
    我的手什麼時候變成這樣了(汗 是我圖做的不好 ;_;

    以上提到的hitsound 我全補上了


Hard

  1. 00:55:011 (8,9) - 同Ins所說
  2. 00:58:554 (5) - 這長條的最後一個點要往下一格，不然有點歪。還有，加個whistle再折返上嗎 ? 用來強調人聲很合適
  3. 01:40:129 (3) - 依照你的設定，頭上whitle (或是像我Insane中說的，把折返的也加上去，這麼做的話你其他部分都得加)

    All Fixed

Easy

  1. 00:30:208 (2) - 尾部來個whistle強調vocal
  2. 00:38:712 (3,4) - 尾部 & (4) add whistle
  3. 00:53:830 (1) - 尾部finish很違和，換成50%的clap

    All Fixed


GJ & GL
Have a star ~ ☆
:)
感謝Hitsound mod ，幾乎全都補上了 :D
GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
GiNa
Katty Pie's Mod

Katty Pie wrote:

Normal

01:35:405 - end kiai time here　No
01:37:295 - start new kiai time　^
DarknessAngel's Mod

DarknessAngel wrote:

Normal



  • hello,GiNa ~
  1. 00:25:720 (1) - 刪除whistle，這裡不該有的，到00:25:247就沒了 　Fixed
  2. 00:33:043 (4,6) - 它們的折返部位碰到了，不好看，改成這樣嗎 ? 　Fixed
  3. 00:59:027 (3) - 轉一點角度 ? 碰到slider身上看起來不大舒服，我覺得這樣比較好　Fixed
  4. 00:59:027 (3) - slider尾部finish ? 沒有這個感覺起來空空的　尾部已經有finish了...
  5. 00:59:736 (1) - spinner起始點從00:59:617開始，然後在原本的時間點結束，這樣比較合適　Fixed
Fenya
1,655 posts
Joined September 2009
Fenya
Hi~

Easy:
00:21:704 (1) - Remove Finish, add whistle

GiNa's Normal:
00:29:736 (2,1) - Overlap
01:07:767 (2,1) - Overlap

Hard:
00:21:704 (1) - Remove finish at the beginning of slider and add whistle

Insane:
00:21:232 (4) - 1 grid down

That's all... Sorry for my nazi mod, but, the map is so cool n.n
Sorry for my bad English, I hope you serve something.
Good song, good luck~ :)
EmPao
723 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
EmPao

Fenya wrote:

Hi~

Easy:
00:21:704 (1) - Remove Finish, add whistle hmm~ whistle is work better than finish here~Fixed

Hard:
00:21:704 (1) - Remove finish at the beginning of slider and add whistle ^

Insane:
00:21:232 (4) - 1 grid down Fixed

That's all... Sorry for my nazi mod, but, the map is so cool n.n
Sorry for my bad English, I hope you serve something.
Good song, good luck~ :) Thanks:)
Thanks mod
Chewin
osu! Alumni
4,082 posts
Joined December 2010
Chewin
[Easy]
00:22:176 (2) - You could curve it creating a blanket with 00:23:121 (3)
SPOILER
00:44:381 (1) - ^
SPOILER


or

01:02:334 (1) - Instead to use 2 circles here I suggest you to make a 1/1 slider.
I think this triangle 01:02:334 (1,2,1) with new combo on 01:03:279 (1) is bad to see.
01:21:232 (3) - Blanket?
SPOILER
01:37:295 (1) - ^

[GiNa's Normal]
00:25:011 (4) - Finish at the end
00:25:720 (1) - I don't like this slider immediately after 00:25:011 (4) since this is a Normal diff. Reduce of 1/2 it and move to 00:25:956:

This diff needs more work imho.

[Hard]
Good job here :3

[Insane]
00:25:247 (1) - Add finish on the tail
00:34:224 (3) - CTRL + R and move it to x:428 y:140 to improve the blanket with the previous slider
00:46:153 (1) - Extend this spinner till the next red tick 00:47:925 and add a finish on it. This is perfect since it's the insane diff
00:47:925 If you don't follow the suggestion about the spinner, add a circle with finish here
01:37:295 (1) - Move it further from 01:36:822 (3)? even if it's an insane this could be counfusing to play..

That's all! You need a star here to reach +8 sp ;3
Have my star and good luck
GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
GiNa

Fenya wrote:

GiNa's Normal:
00:29:736 (2,1) - Overlap　I did ths one on purpose
01:07:767 (2,1) - Overlap　Fixed

Chewin wrote:

[GiNa's Normal]
00:25:011 (4) - Finish at the end　Fixed
00:25:720 (1) - I don't like this slider immediately after 00:25:011 (4) since this is a Normal diff. Reduce of 1/2 it and move to 00:25:956:
　Okay. Fixed some other ones like this
This diff needs more work imho.　I mean ... seriously, if I don't put 1/2, how could this be a REAL Normal ? Do you mean that you want me just reduce everything to 1/1 and make this like an Easy diff ? Perhaps the BPM of this song is not high, 1/2 shouldn't be too hard.
Here:
http://puu.sh/BFMu
LunarSakuya
osu! Alumni
1,704 posts
Joined August 2011
LunarSakuya
hi ^^

General
Nice

Easy
00:22:176 (2) - Curve it to blanket (3) maybe http://puu.sh/BFXc
00:53:830 (1) - Delete the angle in the slider, looks a little awkward
Very nice, there are other potential blankets but it's up to you :P

GiNa's Normal
00:48:161 (1) - NC, unrankable bug
00:54:302 (3,4) - Make this a slider? since (5) is a slider and in the same combo if that matters lol
01:08:712 - Add something here to keep the flow of vocals, maybe a slider connecting (3)
<3

Hard
00:20:759 (3,4) - Highlight both and move to x:80 y:256 if you want a more perfect square, optional lol
00:24:539 (1,3) - Whistles, fits the bg music
00:42:491 (1) - Stack this on (2) like you did with 00:40:602 (1,2)
00:48:633 (1) - NC, unrankable bug
00:55:011 (8) - Add clap, the bg music for (9) is the same as (8)

Insane
00:20:287 (2) - Try this rhythm, note placement is an idea http://puu.sh/BGin
00:26:901 (4) - Place like this so (3) blankets it http://puu.sh/BGjf like 00:27:373 (1,3)
01:25:247 (4,5) - Use default clap for these ;)


Very cute map!
GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
GiNa

LunarSakuya wrote:

hi ^^　Hello, "me" xD
GiNa's Normal
00:48:161 (1) - NC, unrankable bug　Fixed
00:54:302 (3,4) - Make this a slider? since (5) is a slider and in the same combo if that matters lol　I changed them to a slider
01:08:712 - Add something here to keep the flow of vocals, maybe a slider connecting (3)　Fixed
<3　<333333
Latest version here:
http://puu.sh/BGqU
EmPao
723 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
EmPao

Chewin wrote:

[Easy]
00:22:176 (2) - You could curve it creating a blanket with 00:23:121 (3) Fixed
SPOILER
00:44:381 (1) - ^ Fixed
SPOILER

or
01:02:334 (1) - Instead to use 2 circles here I suggest you to make a 1/1 slider. I think 2 circles are work better than a 1/1 slider here.
I think this triangle 01:02:334 (1,2,1) with new combo on 01:03:279 (1) is bad to see. I think it's fine now:3 no changed
01:21:232 (3) - Blanket? Fixed
SPOILER
01:37:295 (1) - ^

[Hard]
Good job here :3 :D

[Insane]
00:25:247 (1) - Add finish on the tail Fixed
00:34:224 (3) - CTRL + R and move it to x:428 y:140 to improve the blanket with the previous slider Fixed
00:46:153 (1) - Extend this spinner till the next red tick 00:47:925 and add a finish on it. This is perfect since it's the insane diff I add a note here
00:47:925 If you don't follow the suggestion about the spinner, add a circle with finish here ^
01:37:295 (1) - Move it further from 01:36:822 (3)? even if it's an insane this could be counfusing to play.. Fixed the spacing

That's all! You need a star here to reach +8 sp ;3 Thanks mod & star :) :)
Have my star and good luck
Thanks

LunarSakuya wrote:

hi ^^

General
Nice

Easy
00:22:176 (2) - Curve it to blanket (3) maybe http://puu.sh/BFXc Fixed
00:53:830 (1) - Delete the angle in the slider, looks a little awkward Fixed
Very nice, there are other potential blankets but it's up to you :P ok

Hard
00:20:759 (3,4) - Highlight both and move to x:80 y:256 if you want a more perfect square, optional lol I think it is fine now
00:24:539 (1,3) - Whistles, fits the bg music ok
00:42:491 (1) - Stack this on (2) like you did with 00:40:602 (1,2) Fixed
00:48:633 (1) - NC, unrankable bug Fixed
00:55:011 (8) - Add clap, the bg music for (9) is the same as (8) ok

Insane
00:20:287 (2) - Try this rhythm, note placement is an idea http://puu.sh/BGin Fixed
00:26:901 (4) - Place like this so (3) blankets it http://puu.sh/BGjf like 00:27:373 (1,3) Fixed
01:25:247 (4,5) - Use default clap for these ;) Fixed


Very cute map!
Thanks mod :) :) :)
Lizellota
467 posts
Joined October 2011
Lizellota
Hi~ mod from my queue~

[Insane]

00:20:995 - remove whistle
00:21:704 - remove finish, add here 00:23:594
00:24:893 (3,5) - remove whistle
00:39:657 - add whistle
00:39:775 (2,4) - remove whistle
01:05:169 - add whistle
01:21:704 - remove whistle

[Hard]

00:29:263 (1) - add finish
00:36:822 (1) - remove finish, add here 00:38:712

Others diffs are fine ;3

Good luck~
EmPao
723 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
EmPao

KersiTyan wrote:

Hi~ mod from my queue~

[Insane]

00:20:995 - remove whistleFixed
00:21:704 - remove finish, add here 00:23:594 only remove finish
00:24:893 (3,5) - remove whistle Fixed
00:39:657 - add whistle Fixed
00:39:775 (2,4) - remove whistle Fixed
01:05:169 - add whistle Fixed
01:21:704 - remove whistle Fixed

[Hard]

00:29:263 (1) - add finish Fixed
00:36:822 (1) - remove finish, add here 00:38:712 x

Others diffs are fine ;3

Good luck~
Thanks your hitsound mod :) :)
HelloSCV
3,490 posts
Joined April 2011
HelloSCV
Hi~ From my Queue
Almost Modding is Suggestion so you can ignore this


SPOILER
Easy
HP -1?
01:41:074 (5) - NC


GiNa's Normal
AR -1?
Why this map only have 1 Kiai time? other diff have 3 Kiai time
00:48:161 (2) - NC


Hard
OD -1
01:16:507 (1) - add finish
01:30:444 - ^
01:41:192 (1) - ^

Insane
OD -1 HP -1
01:16:507 (1) - add finish
01:41:192 (1) - ^

Good luck! :D
EmPao
723 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
EmPao

HelloSCV wrote:

Hi~ From my Queue
Almost Modding is Suggestion so you can ignore this


SPOILER
Easy
HP -1? x
01:41:074 (5) - NC Fixed

Hard
OD -1 x
01:16:507 (1) - add finish ^
01:30:444 - ^ ^
01:41:192 (1) - ^ ^

Insane
OD -1 HP -1 x
01:16:507 (1) - add finish ^
01:41:192 (1) - ^ ^

Good luck! :D
Thanks mod!! :)
bossandy
osu! Alumni
1,665 posts
Joined May 2010
bossandy
Yo 補齊mod xD
　
  1. Red : I think you must to fix.
  2. Blue : Need to discuss.
  3. Black : Just suggest or nazi.
　
[ GiNa's Normal]
　
  1. 00:21:232 (1,2) - Swap New Combo 現在這樣的New Combo沒有跟著歌詞NC也沒有跟著音樂NC 感覺像是亂擺的
  2. 00:30:680 (1,2) - Swap New Combo , 因為00:30:444 (3,1) - 是連在一起的 然後00:31:625 (2,3) - 有新的一句歌詞 所以這裡Swap一下是個很好的選擇
  3. 00:38:712 (3,1) - Same as 00:21:232 (1,2) -
  4. 01:10:129 (2) - 感覺這個slider把repeat去掉比較好
  5. 沒了 這難度做的不錯ㄟ Nothing more to point out! Good Job!!! 姐姐
　
[ Insane]
　
  1. 00:31:862 (2) - 這00:30:444 (4,5,1) - 都在轉圈 所以這個slider也跟著轉圈可以有更順暢的移動 像這樣 但是要不要改就看你摟 (a黑
    Picture
  2. 00:47:925 (1,2) - 這兩個的音量可能有點太大聲導致再playing的時候聽起來怪怪的 試試volume 40% 感覺更好
  3. 好了 都是nazi 代表這難度做的很好!!!! Good Job too xD!!!
　
　　--------------------------------------------------------
ya 就這些 加油吧!!
Good Luck again :3
EmPao
723 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
EmPao

bossandy wrote:

Yo 補齊mod xD
　
  1. Red : I think you must to fix.
  2. Blue : Need to discuss.
  3. Black : Just suggest or nazi.
　
[ Insane]
　
  1. 00:31:862 (2) - 這00:30:444 (4,5,1) - 都在轉圈 所以這個slider也跟著轉圈可以有更順暢的移動 像這樣 但是要不要改就看你摟 (a黑沒改，我覺得長的slider 這樣拉一圈感覺有點擠
    Picture


  2. 00:47:925 (1,2) - 這兩個的音量可能有點太大聲導致再playing的時候聽起來怪怪的 試試volume 40% 感覺更好 Ok~我改了，這裡的確太大聲了 (不過我改成30%)
  3. 好了 都是nazi 代表這難度做的很好!!!! Good Job too xD!!!
　
　　--------------------------------------------------------
ya 就這些 加油吧!!
Good Luck again :3
謝謝囉 :) :)
GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
GiNa
Done everything, here
http://puu.sh/CGA2

以後我就不會再改了，有mod的話請自行修改你認為需要的吧
我把mod requests清一清後就沒有時間了
EmPao
723 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
EmPao

GiNa wrote:

Done everything, here
http://puu.sh/CGA2

以後我就不會再改了，有mod的話請自行修改你認為需要的吧
我把mod requests清一清後就沒有時間了
Ok

了解 :3
Niko-nyan
1,990 posts
Joined June 2011
Niko-nyan
Here we go from my modding queue :3

Easy

HP Drain maybe -1 *

Normal (Guest Diff)
good GiNa <3

Hard
<3 nothing to mod

Bossandy Taiko Oni
not sweet oni? >w<

Insane
nothing to mod T_T

note: * = suggestion for helping :D
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
from my queue


Insane

  1. i think ar and od is fine don't change plz
  2. 00:42:491 (2) - move the last slider point 1 grid up
  3. 00:53:358 (3) - move last slider point 2 grids down to line up with next note
  4. 01:24:539 (3,4) - you can improve the slider blanket
  5. 01:28:791 (3,4) - why not long slider? i think it fits better
  6. 01:41:074 (1) - new combo (before long spinner at the end, it's better)
Hard

  1. 我觉得insane都是ar7了hard是不是应该用ar6比较好不然没差别了
  2. 00:17:925 (1,3) - slider blanket
  3. 00:36:586 (5) - 去掉比较舒服
  4. 00:37:531 (4,5) - 太弯了不好看
  5. 00:53:830 (5,6,7,8,9) - hard的话是不是叠一下
  6. 算了没啥问题...
Normal

  1. 00:36:113 (4,5,6) - use repeat slider here...
  2. 01:17:688 (2,3,4) - ^
  3. 00:38:712 (1,2,3,4) - this shape looks weird...
Easy

  1. 00:53:830 (1) - 第三个点往上两格
that's all

Good luck~
EmPao
723 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
EmPao

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

from my queue


Insane

  1. i think ar and od is fine don't change plz ok
  2. 00:42:491 (2) - move the last slider point 1 grid up Fixed
  3. 00:53:358 (3) - move last slider point 2 grids down to line up with next note Fixed
  4. 01:24:539 (3,4) - you can improve the slider blanket Fixed
  5. 01:28:791 (3,4) - why not long slider? i think it fits better Fixed
  6. 01:41:074 (1) - new combo (before long spinner at the end, it's better) Fixed
Hard

  1. 我觉得insane都是ar7了hard是不是应该用ar6比较好不然没差别了 -1了
  2. 00:17:925 (1,3) - slider blanket
  3. 00:36:586 (5) - 去掉比较舒服 我換成slider
  4. 00:37:531 (4,5) - 太弯了不好看 Fixed
  5. 00:53:830 (5,6,7,8,9) - hard的话是不是叠一下 已經疊了不是? o.o
  6. 算了没啥问题...
Normal

  1. 00:36:113 (4,5,6) - use repeat slider here... x
  2. 01:17:688 (2,3,4) - ^ x
  3. 00:38:712 (1,2,3,4) - this shape looks weird... Fixed
Easy

  1. 00:53:830 (1) - 第三个点往上两格Fixed


that's all

Good luck~
謝謝Mod :) :)


frans_niko wrote:

Here we go from my modding queue :3

Easy

HP Drain maybe -1 *

Normal (Guest Diff)
good GiNa <3

Hard
<3 nothing to mod

Bossandy Taiko Oni
not sweet oni? >w<

Insane
nothing to mod T_T

note: * = suggestion for helping :D
sorry, I dont change anything D:

Thanks
Illumined
59 posts
Joined May 2012
Illumined
Thank you for requesting via Illumined's Modding Queue (･∀･)

General
  1. Lack of whistles, so boring with claps and few of whistles only D:

Easy
01:16:507 - Missing a finish

GiNa's Normal
00:31:153 - Whistle?
00:38:712 (1,2,3,4) - Rearrange with a square pattern.
00:48:161 (1) - Here's a bug, please new combo

Insane
  1. Feel like a Hard O_o
00:47:925 (1,2) - Raise up the volume to 40%, sounds too soft >_<
00:53:358 - Missing a clap
01:30:208 (3) - Move whistle to slider's tail


It's better to remove Hard, then add a harder Insane. Since the diff spread is like E>N>N+>H
But anyway, it's just an opinion, seems ready for ranking! Good luck.
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