This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 19 September 2012 at 15:26:03

Artist: Snowkel
Title: Kiseki (TV Size)
Source: Gintama
Tags: ending shunokeru Hinsvar
BPM: 98
Filesize: 3163kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (1,67 stars, 76 notes)
2. Hard (4,65 stars, 169 notes)
3. Hinsvar's Insane (4,88 stars, 188 notes)
4. Normal (3,56 stars, 125 notes)

Download: Snowkel - Kiseki (TV Size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Mapset:

Easy - Done
Normal - Done
Hard - Done
Hinsvar's Insane (by Hinsvar) - Done

Enjoy

Thanks K a Y e for BG & Hinsvar for guest diff! \:D/

[Timing]
Try:
bpm: 98.000
offset: 1128

popner wrote:

[Timing]
Try:
bpm: 98.000
offset: 1128

Nice
Thanks~will update later!Updated!

You order has just arrived~ More than one BGs.. lol x3


Thanks for choosing us :>

Thanks! ><
Nice bg! will update later~ Updated!

@K a Y e : your welcome

athiota33 wrote:

Thanks! ><
Nice bg! will update later~

Thankyuu \:D/

Thanks for mod & star ;w;//
Will update later! Updated!

Philippines wrote:

• Easy

1. 01:14:597 (1) - Improve this blanket. I suggest use 4 slider points.
   
   
2. Best easy diff I've seen so far. I don't know why, but this looks great.

• Normal

1. HP Drain and Overall Difficulty -1.

• Hard

1. 01:12:148 (1) - This slider looks weird. Besides overlapping the previous slider, it's lacking a a bit of a wave. Try fixing this please?

• Perfect Map!

1. Have my babies.

Fixed all!~

gintama<3

Hi._.
ma,just some suggestions

kiai time is so long.
i think normal is so easy,you can increase difficulty

Easy
fine

Normal
fine

Hard
00:05:413(5)(6)(7) the 3 combo looks not well.use slider to instead?
00:17:811(9) remove circle?
3 combo at white line looks not well.

i can't find more._.
Edit:no kds

x847606653 wrote:

Hi._.
ma,just some suggestions

kiai time is so long. Fixed
i think normal is so easy,you can increase difficulty If I have a time,I'll try to increase it Remapped,hope it's not too easy ;w;

Easy
fine

Normal
fine

Hard Fixed all! & Remap to avoid 1/4 rhythm on white ticks
00:05:413(5)(6)(7) the 3 combo looks not well.use slider to instead?
00:17:811(9) remove circle?
3 combo at white line looks not well. I think so too -w-; I put like that because i don't have any idea *slap*

i can't find more._.
Edit:no kds kds for you!~ Because it's helpful

Thanks for mod!

Hi,mod request from my queue.

[Hard]
00:47:046 (7) - NC
00:47:352 (1) - RNC
00:49:495 (5) - NC
01:19:189 (6) - ^
01:19:495 (1) - RNC
01:21:332 (6) - NC
01:26:536 (7) - slider start point add finish?

[Normal]
01:23:781 (3) - NC
01:24:393 (1) - RNC
01:25:617 (2) - NC
01:26:536 (3) - add finish?

[Normal]
good

That's all.
Good luck~

Hi from my queue. :3




Thats all, gl. :3

PS: the kiai should be between 00:59:903 and 01:16:434

Double post --;

Jupiter wrote:

Hi,mod request from my queue.

[Hard]
00:47:046 (7) - NC Fixed
00:47:352 (1) - RNC Fixed
00:49:495 (5) - NC Fixed
01:19:189 (6) - ^ Fixed
01:19:495 (1) - RNC Fixed
01:21:332 (6) - NC Fixed
01:26:536 (7) - slider start point add finish? Fixed,Nice!

[Normal]
01:23:781 (3) - NC Fixed
01:24:393 (1) - RNC Fixed
01:25:617 (2) - NC Fixed
01:26:536 (3) - add finish? Fixed

[Normal]
good

That's all.
Good luck~

Kurokami wrote:

Hi from my queue. :3

Easy

1. 00:13:372 (2) - up 1 grid [nazy] Fixed
2. 00:14:597 (3) - 1 grid up and right [nazy] Fixed
3. 00:15:821 (1) - 1 grid up, 2 left [nazy] Fixed
4. 01:12:148 (1) - remove NC No,I follow the stanza
5. 01:13:985 (2) - NC No,I follow the stanza
6. 01:14:597 (1) - remove NC No,I follow the stanza

Normal

1. 00:01:128 (1) - 1 grid right [nazy] Fixed
2. 00:24:393 (4) - NC No,I follow the stanza
3. 00:25:617 (1) - remove NC No,I follow the stanza
4. 00:29:291 (4) - NC No,I follow the stanza
5. 00:30:209 (1) - remove NC No,I follow the stanza
6. 00:44:291 (5) - NC No,I follow the stanza
7. 00:45:209 (1) - remove NC No,I follow the stanza
8. 00:47:352 (3) - NC No,I follow the stanza
9. 00:47:658 (1) - remove NC No,I follow the stanza
10. 01:02:352 (1) - remove NC No,I follow the stanza
11. 01:03:883 (2) - NC No,I follow the stanza
12. 01:04:801 (1) - remove NCNo,I follow the stanza
13. 01:06:944 (3) - NCNo,I follow the stanza
14. 01:07:250 (1) - remove NC No,I follow the stanza

It seems that your NC is follow the vocal >< to be honest,I like that NC! But I prefer follow the stanza. I don't ignore your NC mod,I still save it

Hard

1. 00:23:781 (2,3,4) - not stacked completely Already?
2. 00:40:311 (1,2,3) - ^ Fixed
3. 01:20:107 (2,3,4) - ^ Already?

Thats all, gl. :3

PS: the kiai should be between 00:59:903 and 01:16:434 Save it

Thanks for mod!

Alright let's see what I can find. Mod requested on my queue.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. Just putting this for fun

[General]
you should add "6" in the tags. this is the 6th ending in Gintama after all.
maybe you should add a video for this. it'll give a full experience for players as they might watch this anime for the 1st time or they'll play this to bring back memories.
disable the countdown because it doesn't fit with the song at all, and if you add the video, disable the letterbox during breaks. the letterbox will get in the way during gameplay.

[Easy]
Decrease the AR by 1. since this is a slow song, AR3 would look too fast for beginners.
00:02:964 - maybe you can add a circle to follow vocals?
00:07:862 - ^
00:08:474 (2) - NOTE: if you follow the suggestion above, don't do this: hmm idk about this path. IMO it looks hard for beginners as they have to move up to the slider. move this beside the beginning of (1) so that it'd form a blanket.
00:12:760 - same as 00:02:964.
00:13:372 (2,3,1) - how about making these curved sliders for a smoother flow to the next note? it should look like this.
00:20:719 (1,2,1) - Do Ctrl+H for (1,1) and Ctrl+J for (2). the path would look a lot smoother and easier during gameplay.
00:41:536 (2) - since you have a whistle on (1) on the next combo, add it on the beginning to start the consistency in whistles.
00:48:883 (2) - maybe you can add a clap on the beginning to match the drums? if you ignore this, try to reduce the volume of the clap and see what happens.
00:58:679 (3) - add a whistle here. the finish and the whistle sound similar IMO.
01:01:128 (2) - same as 00:41:536.
01:25:617 (2) - replace the whistle for a finish. it matches the cymbals nicely during gameplay.

[Normal]
00:01:128 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2) - ok for this part, add whistles at every white tick that doesn't have whistles. since you have whistles at (1), and the repeat arrow of (2), it'd sound a lot nicer if you can continue that whistle pattern from there.
00:25:617 (1) - idk about you but i find this whistle unfitting at this part. i suggest that you remove it.
00:35:413 (1,2,3,4) - try to make a square or a diamond out of these notes. i think it'd be easier to read and nothing will be covering the notes.
00:53:474 (6) - i don't mind if the whistle is at the beginning, but remove it at the end. it really bothers me and i find it unfitting at this part.
00:57:454 (1) - same as 00:25:617.
01:16:740 (3) - remove the clap because it ruins the consistency in claps.
01:18:270 (2) - same as above but at the beginning.
01:26:536 (2,3) - switch the hitsounds. it'd sound a lot nicer if you do so. the last note is where you hear the sound of the cymbals, so add a finish there would be really effective, and if you add a whistle at (2), it'd sound a lot nicer. if you remove it, it'd sound empty and i have this feeling that something should be there.

[Hard]
00:01:128 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - use that whistle pattern i mentioned in normal. i think it'll fit with the song during gameplay.
00:23:168 (1) - make this point in the same direction as the next slider. i think it'll flow a lot smoother during gameplay. i think doing a symmetrical slider while the others are curved pointing up would break the flow for a song like this.
00:26:230 (2) - if you want to make this diff fun for players, do Ctrl+R. the jump would flow a lot smoother during gameplay.
00:26:842 (3) - if you follow the suggestion above, do Ctrl+R. same reason as above.
01:26:536 (7) - like normal, move the finish at the end and add a whistle at the beginning. same reason as normal.

I guess that's it. GL

Hi athiota33

General

Easy

Normal

Hard

The mapset its fine, but you can improve your style. I'll leave you a Star! but primse that you will improve in the future .

Good Luck ! And Star !

Byakugan249 wrote:

Alright let's see what I can find. Mod requested on my queue.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. Just putting this for fun

[General]
you should add "6" in the tags. this is the 6th ending in Gintama after all.
maybe you should add a video for this. it'll give a full experience for players as they might watch this anime for the 1st time or they'll play this to bring back memories.
disable the countdown because it doesn't fit with the song at all, and if you add the video, disable the letterbox during breaks. the letterbox will get in the way during gameplay.

[Easy]
Decrease the AR by 1. since this is a slow song, AR3 would look too fast for beginners.
00:02:964 - maybe you can add a circle to follow vocals?
00:07:862 - ^
00:08:474 (2) - NOTE: if you follow the suggestion above, don't do this: hmm idk about this path. IMO it looks hard for beginners as they have to move up to the slider. move this beside the beginning of (1) so that it'd form a blanket.
00:12:760 - same as 00:02:964.
00:13:372 (2,3,1) - how about making these curved sliders for a smoother flow to the next note? it should look like this.
00:20:719 (1,2,1) - Do Ctrl+H for (1,1) and Ctrl+J for (2). the path would look a lot smoother and easier during gameplay.
00:41:536 (2) - since you have a whistle on (1) on the next combo, add it on the beginning to start the consistency in whistles.
00:48:883 (2) - maybe you can add a clap on the beginning to match the drums? if you ignore this, try to reduce the volume of the clap and see what happens.
00:58:679 (3) - add a whistle here. the finish and the whistle sound similar IMO.
01:01:128 (2) - same as 00:41:536.
01:25:617 (2) - replace the whistle for a finish. it matches the cymbals nicely during gameplay.

[Normal]
00:01:128 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2) - ok for this part, add whistles at every white tick that doesn't have whistles. since you have whistles at (1), and the repeat arrow of (2), it'd sound a lot nicer if you can continue that whistle pattern from there.
00:25:617 (1) - idk about you but i find this whistle unfitting at this part. i suggest that you remove it.
00:35:413 (1,2,3,4) - try to make a square or a diamond out of these notes. i think it'd be easier to read and nothing will be covering the notes.
00:53:474 (6) - i don't mind if the whistle is at the beginning, but remove it at the end. it really bothers me and i find it unfitting at this part.
00:57:454 (1) - same as 00:25:617.
01:16:740 (3) - remove the clap because it ruins the consistency in claps.
01:18:270 (2) - same as above but at the beginning.
01:26:536 (2,3) - switch the hitsounds. it'd sound a lot nicer if you do so. the last note is where you hear the sound of the cymbals, so add a finish there would be really effective, and if you add a whistle at (2), it'd sound a lot nicer. if you remove it, it'd sound empty and i have this feeling that something should be there.

[Hard]
00:01:128 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - use that whistle pattern i mentioned in normal. i think it'll fit with the song during gameplay.
00:23:168 (1) - make this point in the same direction as the next slider. i think it'll flow a lot smoother during gameplay. i think doing a symmetrical slider while the others are curved pointing up would break the flow for a song like this.
00:26:230 (2) - if you want to make this diff fun for players, do Ctrl+R. the jump would flow a lot smoother during gameplay.
00:26:842 (3) - if you follow the suggestion above, do Ctrl+R. same reason as above.
01:26:536 (7) - like normal, move the finish at the end and add a whistle at the beginning. same reason as normal.

I guess that's it. GL

Almost change!
Helpfull mod! Thanks ><
And about video,I don't have HD size.

[Te][Amo] wrote:

Hi athiota33

General

1. Next time you map make the slider tail end in the center of the hitcircle. Example
   
   
   SPOILER

   For every slider you make try to end like this -->

Easy

• I think this diff its ok but i just have three suggestion

1. 01:18:270 (3) - Remove clap, sounds better without it
2. 01:25:617 (2) - Sounds better if you add a finish at the end, it follows the instrumental and feels nice
3. You used really short NC, Specially from here 00:40:311 (1) to here 01:17:046 (1) and i think isn't really necesary change to NC everytime the singer make a high vocal like 01:07:862 (1) - i Think there is no needed to add NC

Normal

1. 00:30:209 (1) - Maybe make another slider whit the same shape but without the red slider point in the middle, it looks forced to be curved http://puu.sh/z1HG, maybe something like this http://puu.sh/z1IB it doesn't look forced and its symetrical ^^
2. 01:08:168 (3,4) - I think you can change these parnet to follow better the vocals like:
   
   01:08:474 (3) - Changing this slider for a 1/1 slider and adding clap at the end
   01:09:393 (4) - Removing note, to get something like this --> http://puu.sh/z1LE (fix spacing if you do my suggestion)
   
   
3. 01:13:066 (2) - You use more slider points that the needed avoid things like that http://puu.sh/z1Pa
4. 01:16:740 (3) - Remove clap in this note, its for keep the previous consistency in claps
5. 01:26:842 (3) - Its better to add a finish, it follow the instrumental of the song and its feels nice

Hard

1. 00:53:474 (3) - Add finish at the begin, it fits whit the high vocal of the men singing
2. 01:13:066 (2) - Add finish for the same reason from above
3. 01:26:536 (7) - Sounds better if you add a finish at the end, it follows the instrumental and feels nice

The mapset its fine, but you can improve your style. I'll leave you a Star! but primse that you will improve in the future .

Good Luck ! And Star !

Thanks for mod & star!

Whee~

Overall:
01:27:148 - add spinner at the end that fades out to silence.

Hard:
00:03:576 (1) - Stack with previous (2)
00:39:699 (1) - Make this just a note?

Normal:
00:09:699 (5) - Touches HP bar~
00:09:699 (5) - Make into 2 sliders
00:35:413 (1) - Add clap?
01:26:912 - Random red section? Probably remove this.

Easy:
00:20:719 (1) - Add clap on beginning of slider?
00:29:903 (1) - ^

Whee~

CDFA wrote:

Whee~

Overall:
01:27:148 - add spinner at the end that fades out to silence. Save it

Hard: Fixed all!~
00:03:576 (1) - Stack with previous (2)
00:39:699 (1) - Make this just a note?

Normal: Fixed all!~
00:09:699 (5) - Touches HP bar~
00:09:699 (5) - Make into 2 sliders
00:35:413 (1) - Add clap?
01:26:912 - Random red section? Probably remove this.

Easy: Fixed all!~
00:20:719 (1) - Add clap on beginning of slider?
00:29:903 (1) - ^

Whee~

Thanks for mod and star

Hi~ athiota33

from #modreq

[General]
fine :3
[Easy]
fine
[Normal]
01:04:801 (1) - try this :3
[Hard]
01:06:485 (5,6,7,8) - You might consider non-overlapping.I' recommend that you do not overlap

That's all :3

Good luck for rank !

B2IN wrote:

Hi~ athiota33

from #modreq

[General]
fine :3
[Easy]
fine
[Normal]
01:04:801 (1) - try this :3 Fixed

SPOILER

[Hard]
01:06:485 (5,6,7,8) - You might consider non-overlapping.I' recommend that you do not overlap you mean stack?owo Fixed~

That's all :3

Good luck for rank !

Thanks for mod

JudgeTheDude wrote:

Hi ^^

From my Modding queue

General

I can see there's no video of this ending. This is just bad luck if it doesn't exist on Youtube, it could be better with a video :/ But it's not your fault, I searched it too ^^"

Easy

Fine :3

Normal

00:44:291 (5) Try to start the Combo here kurokami said this too. Fixed

Hard

Fine :3

I'm just starting modding, so I just saw that. Hitsounds, timing and combos are good ^^
Very good beatmap, the first I saw with so few problems ^^
Keep up with the good work and good luck for ranking :3

Thanks for mod

Nyaho~
From my queue, heres the mod ;3

[General]
No issues, looks clean and simple
I like the atmosphere this map brings, kinda relaxing~

[Easy]
00:41:536 (3) - maybe curve it?
00:45:209 (1) - fix the sliderpoints a bit?
00:52:556 (5) - ^
00:54:393 (6) - NC?
00:55:005 (1) - remove NC
00:57:454 (3) - NC
01:13:985 (4) - ^
01:19:495 (3) - ^
01:14:597 (2) - this slider isnt compeltely symmertical, move the end sliderpoint to x:316 y:168

[Normal]
00:02:352 (3) - move to x:40 y:232? It looks much better aligned with 00:01:434 (2)
00:10:923 (1) - fix the sliderpoints on this slider please
00:13:372 (1) - remove this new combo?
00:29:291 (4) - move it to x:340 y:292 so it aligns with 00:30:209 (1) properly, also move the end sliderpoint to x:220 y:264
00:41:842 (2) - move it a bit further to x:228 y:252
00:47:352 (6) - NC?
00:47:658 (1) - remove NC?
00:48:270 (2) - curve a bit more ?
00:59:903 (1) - fix the sliderpoints please
01:03:883 (1,2,3,4) - allign them in the center? DS can allow it
01:06:944 (6) - NC?
01:07:250 (1) - remove NC?
01:19:495 (3) - NC maybe?
01:24:393 (3,1) - these two, can you please reshape them so the end sliderpoint is in the center of the slidercircle please?

[Hard]
Some of the sliders need fixing on this diff, consider fixing all of them.

00:04:494 (2) - move the end sliderpoint to x:512 y:192 please, its going out of the grid >.>
00:06:025 (1) - move the end sliderpoint to x:168 y:104
00:06:944 (2) - fix it so it aligns good with 00:06:025 (1) ~
00:13:372 (6) - fix the end sliderpoint please~
00:15:821 (3) - NC :3?
00:17:046 (4) - fix the end sliderpoint~
00:19:189 (3,4) - uuh...fixs these two sliders please, they arent even symmetrical
00:38:474 (6) - end sliderpoint to x:212 y:96 ~
00:40:311 (1) - fix it please >.>
00:41:230 (4) - ^^^
00:42:760 (1,2) - these too
00:44:597 (6) - THIS TOO
00:47:352 (3,4) - .....fix the end sliderpoints please.
00:50:719 (6) - ^^^^^^
00:52:862 (2,3) - fix these too
00:55:005 (1,2) - ^^^
00:58:066 (2) - fix this one
01:00:209 (2) - and this one
01:01:740 (7) - and this one
01:04:801 (1) - and this one
01:10:005 (2,3,4,5) - ^^^
01:17:658 (3,5) - not completely symmetrical, fix them
01:19:495 (3,4) - fix theeeeeeeeeeem
01:23:781 (4) - fix

[]
Thats it for me~
Good luck nyaa~

Hi~

Easy:
01:18:270 (2) - Touch the life bar, look bad... I suggest change de position slider~

Normal:
00:26:842 (2) - Spacing
00:51:025 (2) - I grid right
00:56:536 (3,4) - I suggest change position the circle (3)... imo
01:05:719 (5) - Spacing
01:13:066 (2) - ^
01:25:617 (1,2,3) - Can be hard for a normal :T

Hard:
00:59:597 (1) - This slider don't go fine in this part... In my opinion sounds bad D:
01:06:485 (5) - Remove circle
01:14:597 (1) - Remove repeat and finish slider in 01:14:903
01:16:740 (1) - Remoce repear, finish slider in 01:17:046 and add finish in end slider
01:26:536 (7) - 3 grid left

That's all~
Sorry for my bad English, I hope you serve something.
Good song, good luck~

Lolicore Flandre wrote:

Nyaho~
From my queue, heres the mod ;3

[General]
No issues, looks clean and simple
I like the atmosphere this map brings, kinda relaxing~

[Easy]
00:41:536 (3) - maybe curve it?
00:45:209 (1) - fix the sliderpoints a bit?
00:52:556 (5) - ^
00:54:393 (6) - NC?
00:55:005 (1) - remove NC
00:57:454 (3) - NC
01:13:985 (4) - ^
01:19:495 (3) - ^
01:14:597 (2) - this slider isnt compeltely symmertical, move the end sliderpoint to x:316 y:168

[Normal]
00:02:352 (3) - move to x:40 y:232? It looks much better aligned with 00:01:434 (2)
00:10:923 (1) - fix the sliderpoints on this slider please
00:13:372 (1) - remove this new combo?
00:29:291 (4) - move it to x:340 y:292 so it aligns with 00:30:209 (1) properly, also move the end sliderpoint to x:220 y:264
00:41:842 (2) - move it a bit further to x:228 y:252
00:47:352 (6) - NC?
00:47:658 (1) - remove NC?
00:48:270 (2) - curve a bit more ?
00:59:903 (1) - fix the sliderpoints please
01:03:883 (1,2,3,4) - allign them in the center? DS can allow it
01:06:944 (6) - NC?
01:07:250 (1) - remove NC?
01:19:495 (3) - NC maybe?
01:24:393 (3,1) - these two, can you please reshape them so the end sliderpoint is in the center of the slidercircle please?

[Hard]
Some of the sliders need fixing on this diff, consider fixing all of them.

00:04:494 (2) - move the end sliderpoint to x:512 y:192 please, its going out of the grid >.>
00:06:025 (1) - move the end sliderpoint to x:168 y:104
00:06:944 (2) - fix it so it aligns good with 00:06:025 (1) ~
00:13:372 (6) - fix the end sliderpoint please~
00:15:821 (3) - NC :3?
00:17:046 (4) - fix the end sliderpoint~
00:19:189 (3,4) - uuh...fixs these two sliders please, they arent even symmetrical
00:38:474 (6) - end sliderpoint to x:212 y:96 ~
00:40:311 (1) - fix it please >.>
00:41:230 (4) - ^^^
00:42:760 (1,2) - these too
00:44:597 (6) - THIS TOO
00:47:352 (3,4) - .....fix the end sliderpoints please.
00:50:719 (6) - ^^^^^^
00:52:862 (2,3) - fix these too
00:55:005 (1,2) - ^^^
00:58:066 (2) - fix this one
01:00:209 (2) - and this one
01:01:740 (7) - and this one
01:04:801 (1) - and this one
01:10:005 (2,3,4,5) - ^^^
01:17:658 (3,5) - not completely symmetrical, fix them
01:19:495 (3,4) - fix theeeeeeeeeeem
01:23:781 (4) - fix

[]
Thats it for me~
Good luck nyaa~

Fenya wrote:

Hi~

Easy:
01:18:270 (2) - Touch the life bar, look bad... I suggest change de position slider~

Normal:
00:26:842 (2) - Spacing
00:51:025 (2) - I grid right
00:56:536 (3,4) - I suggest change position the circle (3)... imo
01:05:719 (5) - Spacing
01:13:066 (2) - ^
01:25:617 (1,2,3) - Can be hard for a normal :T

Hard:
00:59:597 (1) - This slider don't go fine in this part... In my opinion sounds bad D:
01:06:485 (5) - Remove circle
01:14:597 (1) - Remove repeat and finish slider in 01:14:903
01:16:740 (1) - Remoce repear, finish slider in 01:17:046 and add finish in end slider
01:26:536 (7) - 3 grid left

That's all~
Sorry for my bad English, I hope you serve something.
Good song, good luck~

@Lolicore Flandre : Will reshape the sliders on hard diff later~

Lazy to reply all mod,sorry!!><;
Thanks for mod!~

[Easy]
-HP and OD -1 ?
01:12:148 (3) – bottom part of this slider is off screen, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/340695

[Normal]
Good

[Hard]
Good

and
Star too
Good luck

Mod requested and accepted from my Modding Queue.

Sorry for delaying :S But i've been busy recently .-. ALSO i was starting to mod but my friend Fenya was modding it too, so i let her to finish her mod. But here i am!





Nice mapping! Good Luck

GiNa wrote:

[Easy]
-HP and OD -1 ? Fixed
01:12:148 (3) – bottom part of this slider is off screen, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/340695 Fixed

[Normal]
Good

[Hard]
Good

and
Star too
Good luck

Thanks for mod and star!

Jesss wrote:

Mod requested and accepted from my Modding Queue.

Sorry for delaying :S But i've been busy recently .-. ALSO i was starting to mod but my friend Fenya was modding it too, so i let her to finish her mod. But here i am!

General

No problems found.

Easy

00:41:536 (3) - rotate 16 degrees clockwise and relocate to X:292 Y:296 Fixed
00:42:760 (4,5) - Nazi Moment!: move until circle 5 gets parallel to 00:45:209 (1) - Fixed
01:12:148 (3) - uh? wow...really offscreen. (as you haven't updated yet...i'll repeat this) haha xD

Normal

00:43:679 (4) - Finish or whistle? Whistle
Good! no more problems found (even in nazi mode...LOL)

Hard

00:18:883 (2) - current location is horrible. AImod also told me that is a spacing Error. Move it to X:76 Y:60 Fixed
00:32:352 (4) - nazi: wut? i suggest this: http://up.ppy.sh/files/mooooood.png I was confused about this part! Nice suggestion~
00:42:454 (7) - move 3 grids to the left (lvl4) No,on purpose

Nice mapping! Good Luck

Thanks fo mod!

Hello athiota33

[Easy]

00:14:597 Imo, NC should be here.
00:17:046 You can add a circle or a slider (00:17:046 00:17:352 (reverse) 00:17:658 (finish))

[Normal]

00:17:352 you can add a circle
01:12:148 There's no need to NC for me.

[Hard]

00:37:852 You can add NC
00:39:393 Whistle?

Aldwych wrote:

Hello athiota33

[Easy]

00:14:597 Imo, NC should be here. No,I follow stanza
00:17:046 You can add a circle or a slider (00:17:046 00:17:352 (reverse) 00:17:658 (finish)) Added circle

[Normal]

00:17:352 you can add a circle Save it
01:12:148 There's no need to NC for me. You're right~ Fixed

[Hard]

00:37:852 You can add NC Fixed~
00:39:393 Whistle? No,sounds weird

Thanks for mod

Hi~athiota33.
sry I'm late

[Easy]
Looks good.

[Normal]
ar-1 od-1
01:26:536 (2) - following the bgm, I find put the finish here rather than 01:26:842 (3) -,then you can also move the green line to 01:26:536 - .It's really sounds good I think.

[Hard]
Since this diff is the hardest of the map, OD+1 is ok I think,or else people can get SS easy with Hidden+Double time.
01:26:536 (2) - The same suggestion as "Normal.

Good map.good luck~

Strawberry wrote:

Hi~athiota33.
sry I'm late

[Easy]
Looks good.

[Normal]
ar-1 od-1
01:26:536 (2) - following the bgm, I find put the finish here rather than 01:26:842 (3) -,then you can also move the green line to 01:26:536 - .It's really sounds good I think.

[Hard]
Since this diff is the hardest of the map, OD+1 is ok I think,or else people can get SS easy with Hidden+Double time.
01:26:536 (2) - The same suggestion as "Normal.

Good map.good luck~

Fixed all~
Thanks for mod

Hi, athiota33~
Stumbled this upon your profile (:

[General]

-> This song is in 1/6 - It doesn't affect your easier diffs, but it affect your Hard a lot (I'll explain later)
-> Try to set the preview point 1/4 before the chorus for a more accurate one, in your case set your preview point to 00:40:158
-> I believe more tags can be added to this mapset, perhaps add "shunokeru" to tags? (Wikipedia reference)
-> And, finally, the gray combocolor doesn't reflect the song's atmosphere imo... Maybe change into this?

Red : 111
Green : 252
Blue : 172

[Easy]

1. 00:01:128 (1,2) - The angle between (2) and (3) is quite forced imo, I think it's best to make they flow continuously by this arrangement:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:03:576 (3) - Add whistle on slider's end (your next (3) also has a whistle on its end)
3. 00:07:862 (2) - Move it more to the left (~x:116) so (1,2,3)'s circular movement will be more emphasized?
4. 00:25:617 (1) - (optional) To make (4) and (1) flow together, maybe try adding a slight curve to (1) like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:31:128 (2) - Hmm, I think it's best to put the 1/1 slider in 00:30:281 with finish on slider's end (you can just make this slider parallel with (1)) to follow the vocals more (as your next (3) is following the vocals already)
6. 00:45:209 (1) - Is this slider shape intentional? imo it's best to curve it fully into an elbow slider (to avoid ambiguity) or put it lower (~y:168) to let this slider carries the flow from (5) :3
7. 00:50:107 (1,2,3,4) - The square here really kills the flow imo - I suggest a pentagon instead (: (don't forget you can also play with (5)'s shape here)
8. 01:03:576 (4,1) - I don't think placing these vertically is a good idea, this can definitely made more flowy, for example like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 01:06:638 (2,3) - Same goes for this one, but on this one you can just make (3) blanketing (2) xD
10. 01:20:719 (4) - It's kinda obvious that this slider is unsymmetrical especially compared to your previous three sliders - tidying up this slider won't be hard, though (:
11. 01:25:617 (4) - Also this, for pattern like this it's best to put (4) slightly higher than (3)'s end - therefore, I recommend to put this slider on ~y:268 for a better flow xD
12. 01:26:842 (x) - (optional) Also with your previous slider, one optional thing you can do here is to remove the repeat and add a circle here (with finish) - I personally think the ending would be more dramatic with a circle, instead of a slider (:

[Normal]

AR+1? Some parts are clustering a bit here, I think AR+1 can increase readability >_<

1. 00:04:801 (5,6,1) - (optional) I think if you want to use this arc, it's better to make this arc sharper by moving (5) more to the bottom-right and (6) more to the bottom-left :3
2. 00:09:393 (4,5) - Actually you can move these two far more to the left, as long as (5)'s end doesn't go offscreen in play mode - with this, (6) will also blanket (5) fancily (:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:10:923 (1) - Made unsymmetrical, is this intentional? o.o?
4. 00:17:658 (4,5) - New combo on either one of these?
5. 00:21:944 (2,3,4) - Hmm, I don't think the elbow triangle you're forming here flows good... I'd suggest to add a slight curve leftward on (3) so your next (4) will follow the flow from (3) and move (3,4) a bit upward to create a fancier triangle~
6. 00:28:066 (3) - (optional) I'd rather rotate this 30° selection centre to make (2) and (3)'s flow continuous, but of course it's optional (:
7. 00:30:209 (1) - The repeat here doesn't really fit imo because a finish on 00:31:434 is obviously needed, considering you're using 1.0x distance snap you can simply create something like this here:
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:34:801 (3,4,5) - Stacking here ruins spacing - well, you can create something like this though (basically just continue your next (7,1,2) to create a pentagon after, it's fancier imo ^^)
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 00:50:107 (1,2,3,4,5) - (optional) In this sequence, it will be a lot catchy if you curve (1) and (5) both inward slightly (for example, put (1)'s endpoint on ~x:38 y:288 and add a new waypoint on ~x:28 y:197 - and then adjust (5) :3)
10. 00:54:393 (1) - Put it more to the right? (placing it directly below your last slider's end doesn't flow correctly imo ._.)
11. 00:58:985 (2) - Finish also here? I can hear a cymbal from the song >_<
12. 01:01:128 (3,4,5) - (optional) Try this arrangement? (5) will flow a lot better to your next (1) this way:
    
    SPOILER

    
13. 01:14:597 (1) - Hum, why straight slider here? You can simply make it encircle (2)'s start instead :3
14. 01:21:944 (1)'s end, 01:23:781 (1) - (optional) Hmm, you can add whistles on here as well (together with clap) for extra accent (:

[Hard]

1. 00:04:494 (2) - Don't forget that you can use the space on the right as long as the slider doesn't go offscreen (:
2. 00:05:413 (3) - (optional) Uhm, I'd rather split this as two circles as there's nothing from the song on 00:05:566 to be followed >_<
3. 00:07:097 (2,3,1) - Perhaps try to arrange like this? It looks tidier imo: (if you do this, stack your next (2) to (3)'s start)
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:14:597 (1,2,1) - For this, it would be better if you apply manual stacking here (basically just move (2) one grid right and down, and move your later (1) two grids right and down)
5. 00:19:189 (3,4) - Hum, add whistle on (3)'s end and (4)'s repeat also to accompany the high-pitched vocals?
6. 00:20:617 (5) - From here I'd like to comment about the 1/6 snapping : Should be snapped in 1/6
7. 00:24:291 (3) - Should be snapped in 1/6
8. 00:25:515 (7) - Should be snapped in 1/6
   
   ------------------------------------
   
   Pretty much that's it - it would be better if the 1/6s are taken care of (although mapping a 1/6 song with 1/4 is not unrankable >_<)
   
9. 00:26:230 (2,4) - (optional) How about moving (2) more downward and (4) more upward so (1,2,3,4) will form a distinguishable diamond? :3
10. 00:31:434 (3,4,5) - I highly suggest to avoid linear jumps like this after a bezier slider - moving 00:32:352 (4) to ~x:120 y:285 will simply create a better-flowing triangle jump :3
11. 00:33:883 (4) - Drag the endpoint more to the top? This is to give more portion to the cross-slider (giving more portion to the cross-slider like what you did on 00:10:311 (4,1) is always good xD)
12. 00:36:944 (4) - (optional) Instead of repeating slider, try this? It might look random, but the movement between (4)'s end, (5), and (1)'s start will be a circular movement which is comfortable to play:
    
    SPOILER

    
13. 00:46:128 (5) - To make this part more dramatic, how about ending the slider in 00:46:638 and stack (6) to this slider's end? Again, 00:46:638 is snapped in 1/6~
14. 00:49:495 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why these five's distance is inconsistent between each other? Actually it's not hard to arrange them tidily by using 0.6x distance snap:
    
    SPOILER

    
15. 00:59:597 (1) - (optional) Add a slight curve, as you did on your previous (3)?
16. 01:05:413 (3) - Move this a bit downward, so (1)'s end, (2), and (3) will form an arc?
17. 01:09:393 (6,7,1) - Move these three to x:256 y:365 - due to stacking's nature, a placement like this is required to make (5,6) and (1,2) spaced correctly in play mode~
18. 01:16:740 (1,2,3,4,5) - The overlap on (3) is so distracting (and decreases readability a lot) - I suggest something like this instead, it gives both better readability and a circular flow as well xD
    
    SPOILER

    
19. 01:21:944 (1) - (optional) Face this to the upper-left instead to avoid clustering?

Overall Easy and Normal is excellent imo, it's just that 1/6 really bugs me in Hard.
Good luck, athiota33~

Niva wrote:

Hi, athiota33~
Stumbled this upon your profile (:

[General]

-> This song is in 1/6 - It doesn't affect your easier diffs, but it affect your Hard a lot (I'll explain later)
-> Try to set the preview point 1/4 before the chorus for a more accurate one, in your case set your preview point to 00:40:158
-> I believe more tags can be added to this mapset, perhaps add "shunokeru" to tags? (Wikipedia reference)
-> And, finally, the gray combocolor doesn't reflect the song's atmosphere imo... Maybe change into this?

Red : 111
Green : 252
Blue : 172

[Easy]

1. 00:01:128 (1,2) - The angle between (2) and (3) is quite forced imo, I think it's best to make they flow continuously by this arrangement:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:03:576 (3) - Add whistle on slider's end (your next (3) also has a whistle on its end)
3. 00:07:862 (2) - Move it more to the left (~x:116) so (1,2,3)'s circular movement will be more emphasized?
4. 00:25:617 (1) - (optional) To make (4) and (1) flow together, maybe try adding a slight curve to (1) like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:31:128 (2) - Hmm, I think it's best to put the 1/1 slider in 00:30:281 with finish on slider's end (you can just make this slider parallel with (1)) to follow the vocals more (as your next (3) is following the vocals already)
6. 00:45:209 (1) - Is this slider shape intentional? imo it's best to curve it fully into an elbow slider (to avoid ambiguity) or put it lower (~y:168) to let this slider carries the flow from (5) :3
7. 00:50:107 (1,2,3,4) - The square here really kills the flow imo - I suggest a pentagon instead (: (don't forget you can also play with (5)'s shape here)
8. 01:03:576 (4,1) - I don't think placing these vertically is a good idea, this can definitely made more flowy, for example like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 01:06:638 (2,3) - Same goes for this one, but on this one you can just make (3) blanketing (2) xD
10. 01:20:719 (4) - It's kinda obvious that this slider is unsymmetrical especially compared to your previous three sliders - tidying up this slider won't be hard, though (:
11. 01:25:617 (4) - Also this, for pattern like this it's best to put (4) slightly higher than (3)'s end - therefore, I recommend to put this slider on ~y:268 for a better flow xD
12. 01:26:842 (x) - (optional) Also with your previous slider, one optional thing you can do here is to remove the repeat and add a circle here (with finish) - I personally think the ending would be more dramatic with a circle, instead of a slider (:

[Normal]

AR+1? Some parts are clustering a bit here, I think AR+1 can increase readability >_<

1. 00:04:801 (5,6,1) - (optional) I think if you want to use this arc, it's better to make this arc sharper by moving (5) more to the bottom-right and (6) more to the bottom-left :3
2. 00:09:393 (4,5) - Actually you can move these two far more to the left, as long as (5)'s end doesn't go offscreen in play mode - with this, (6) will also blanket (5) fancily (:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:10:923 (1) - Made unsymmetrical, is this intentional? o.o?
4. 00:17:658 (4,5) - New combo on either one of these?
5. 00:21:944 (2,3,4) - Hmm, I don't think the elbow triangle you're forming here flows good... I'd suggest to add a slight curve leftward on (3) so your next (4) will follow the flow from (3) and move (3,4) a bit upward to create a fancier triangle~
6. 00:28:066 (3) - (optional) I'd rather rotate this 30° selection centre to make (2) and (3)'s flow continuous, but of course it's optional (:
7. 00:30:209 (1) - The repeat here doesn't really fit imo because a finish on 00:31:434 is obviously needed, considering you're using 1.0x distance snap you can simply create something like this here:
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:34:801 (3,4,5) - Stacking here ruins spacing - well, you can create something like this though (basically just continue your next (7,1,2) to create a pentagon after, it's fancier imo ^^)
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 00:50:107 (1,2,3,4,5) - (optional) In this sequence, it will be a lot catchy if you curve (1) and (5) both inward slightly (for example, put (1)'s endpoint on ~x:38 y:288 and add a new waypoint on ~x:28 y:197 - and then adjust (5) :3)
10. 00:54:393 (1) - Put it more to the right? (placing it directly below your last slider's end doesn't flow correctly imo ._.)
11. 00:58:985 (2) - Finish also here? I can hear a cymbal from the song >_<
12. 01:01:128 (3,4,5) - (optional) Try this arrangement? (5) will flow a lot better to your next (1) this way:
    
    SPOILER

    
13. 01:14:597 (1) - Hum, why straight slider here? You can simply make it encircle (2)'s start instead :3
14. 01:21:944 (1)'s end, 01:23:781 (1) - (optional) Hmm, you can add whistles on here as well (together with clap) for extra accent (:

[Hard]

1. 00:04:494 (2) - Don't forget that you can use the space on the right as long as the slider doesn't go offscreen (:
2. 00:05:413 (3) - (optional) Uhm, I'd rather split this as two circles as there's nothing from the song on 00:05:566 to be followed >_<
3. 00:07:097 (2,3,1) - Perhaps try to arrange like this? It looks tidier imo: (if you do this, stack your next (2) to (3)'s start)
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:14:597 (1,2,1) - For this, it would be better if you apply manual stacking here (basically just move (2) one grid right and down, and move your later (1) two grids right and down)
5. 00:19:189 (3,4) - Hum, add whistle on (3)'s end and (4)'s repeat also to accompany the high-pitched vocals?
6. 00:20:617 (5) - From here I'd like to comment about the 1/6 snapping : Should be snapped in 1/6
7. 00:24:291 (3) - Should be snapped in 1/6
8. 00:25:515 (7) - Should be snapped in 1/6
   
   ------------------------------------
   
   Pretty much that's it - it would be better if the 1/6s are taken care of (although mapping a 1/6 song with 1/4 is not unrankable >_<)
   
9. 00:26:230 (2,4) - (optional) How about moving (2) more downward and (4) more upward so (1,2,3,4) will form a distinguishable diamond? :3
10. 00:31:434 (3,4,5) - I highly suggest to avoid linear jumps like this after a bezier slider - moving 00:32:352 (4) to ~x:120 y:285 will simply create a better-flowing triangle jump :3
11. 00:33:883 (4) - Drag the endpoint more to the top? This is to give more portion to the cross-slider (giving more portion to the cross-slider like what you did on 00:10:311 (4,1) is always good xD)
12. 00:36:944 (4) - (optional) Instead of repeating slider, try this? It might look random, but the movement between (4)'s end, (5), and (1)'s start will be a circular movement which is comfortable to play:
    
    SPOILER

    
13. 00:46:128 (5) - To make this part more dramatic, how about ending the slider in 00:46:638 and stack (6) to this slider's end? Again, 00:46:638 is snapped in 1/6~
14. 00:49:495 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why these five's distance is inconsistent between each other? Actually it's not hard to arrange them tidily by using 0.6x distance snap:
    
    SPOILER

    
15. 00:59:597 (1) - (optional) Add a slight curve, as you did on your previous (3)?
16. 01:05:413 (3) - Move this a bit downward, so (1)'s end, (2), and (3) will form an arc?
17. 01:09:393 (6,7,1) - Move these three to x:256 y:365 - due to stacking's nature, a placement like this is required to make (5,6) and (1,2) spaced correctly in play mode~
18. 01:16:740 (1,2,3,4,5) - The overlap on (3) is so distracting (and decreases readability a lot) - I suggest something like this instead, it gives both better readability and a circular flow as well xD
    
    SPOILER

    
19. 01:21:944 (1) - (optional) Face this to the upper-left instead to avoid clustering?

Overall Easy and Normal is excellent imo, it's just that 1/6 really bugs me in Hard.
Good luck, athiota33~

Fixed all! exept at 00:34:801 (3,4,5) on normal diff, I can't find (7,1,2) combos ;_; & remake hard diff from 00:20:617~end.
This mod is really helpfull!><
Thank you!

Ridiculously awesome mod as always, Niva.

Also, my time to mod this now... Forget it, this beatmap is awesome as it is now.

I'll give a star when I have it. But for now, I can't find even a minor thing to pick out. Either I've been crazed by continuous moddings, or this beatmap is just that great because Niva already saved the day.

Anyway... can I make an Insane diff for this? :\

For guest diff: yes, you can, but I'll use it if I think it's good enough for me

athiota33 wrote:

For guest diff: yes, you can, but I'll use it if I think it's good enough for me

http://puu.sh/FN5f

This isn't a bad diff, I promise.

Feel free to choose whether you want it or not, though

Thanks for the guestdiff
I'll check it later after i back from vacation accepted~
It's fun to play~

o.O must beat Hinsvar be a nice map because Niva already mod this @.@

Easy~
for me the last note sound dont use anything >w< for make it more nicer (if you want)

Normal~
CS-1?

Hard~
nothing

Hinsvar~
the spinner o.O make it short please because the tail unsnapped

need taiko diff? if need tell me

Easy : Fixed~
Normal : No,on purpose

Thanks for mod
And for taiko diff : I don't really need it >.< Sorry!

Talked with frans via IRC, and I decided not to do anything with the spinner since it's already snapped, but thanks anyway

I'm a weird guy for using a spinner, I know.

Hello, random mod~ now I mod Hinsvar's Insane (I already did live modding with athiota33 several times )


Overall I think you have to focus on hitsound consistency (I'm still not really good to mod the diff's flow) good luck~

shikyu wrote:

00:14:291 (1,2,3) - actually I don't agree with these jumps, big jumps for slower parts. I suggest to reduce it Rotated (2) 45 degrees CCW and moved it to (232,240).
00:31:332 (4) - doesn't sounds good, move this to further red tick and shorter it to previous white tick This one's pretty hard to map... and no, the current one sounds good, IMO.
00:39:699 (3) - add clap 'cause there's drum sound here Okay.
00:41:536 (3) - remove clap at slider's start, you don't use clap on 1st and 3rd tick at other patterns Hmm... will do, I guess.
00:42:760 (1) - ^ ^
00:42:760 (1,2) - I suggest ctrl+R to make them symmetry, but you don't have to follow it This one's intentional, so nope.
00:45:719 (2) - add clap here, there's drum so it seems quiet without hitsound Added one at the end of the slider.
00:46:128 (1) - remove clap, with clap it become too loud Okay.
00:50:005 (3) - first time play this diff I hardly see this slider (but after few times I can see it), still suggest to remove it I'll let it stay for now. I won't remove it, but I might move it somewhere.
00:51:025 (2) - add clap at slider's end, previous pattern you use clap at every white tick so add it to keep consistency Nope, sounds weird.
00:52:250 (4) - remove clap at slider's end, it's inconsistent with other patterns Okay.
00:53:168 (6,7) - switch their place to get square pattern, it looks better This one is intentional too; I can make a square here, but I think going linear is boring.
00:54:699 (3) - remove clap, it's good but doesnt follow anything and previous pattern doesn't use clap here Fine.
00:58:372 (3) - why there's finish at slider's end? change it to clap ^
00:58:984 (4) - add clap at slider's start adn slider's repeat to keep consistency Only added one on the start of the slider; placing that on the repeat... is just a no-no.
01:05:413 (2) - remove finish at slider start and add it at slider's end Done.
01:06:944 (1) - remove clp at slider's end I think it's fine as is.
01:08:474 (2,3) - add clap at slider's start and end Done.
01:15:515 (1) - I think you can improve this slider's shape Nope. I intended this slider to be this curvy.
01:16:740 (1) - add clap Okay.
01:18:883 (5) - ^, add clap at 2nd and 4th tick still good here ^
01:21:332 (4) - ^ ^
01:22:556 (2) - add whistle at slider's start ^
01:26:229 (4) - add finish at slider's end, it's still audible ^

Awesome hitsounds stuff. Thanks for that

http://puu.sh/Gej8

K~
Updated~

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[Easy]
Nothing notable.

[Normal]
00:18:883 (2) - curve it like this? So you can stack head of it with head of 00:20:719 (1): http://puu.sh/GiVc
00:51:332 (3) - like this? http://puu.sh/GiWE

[Hard]
00:46:434 (4) - delete to make a pause here? Sounds nice to me.
00:55:617 (3) - ^ delete the repeat?
01:24:699 (2,3,4) - try this rhythm? http://puu.sh/GiTh

[Hinsvar's Insane]
00:04:495 (2) - extend by 1/6 tick to catch the vocal
00:09:393 - also, add a note here to catch the vocal better?
00:31:332 (4) - move to 00:31:434 and shorten by 1/6 tick? current rhythm sounds weird.

That's all I can find. GL~

popner wrote:

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[Easy]
Nothing notable.

[Normal]
00:18:883 (2) - curve it like this? So you can stack head of it with head of 00:20:719 (1): http://puu.sh/GiVc Nice,Fixed!
00:51:332 (3) - like this? http://puu.sh/GiWE ^

[Hard]
00:46:434 (4) - delete to make a pause here? Sounds nice to me. Fixed~
00:55:617 (3) - ^ delete the repeat? Fixed~
01:24:699 (2,3,4) - try this rhythm? http://puu.sh/GiTh I prefer mine ><

That's all I can find. GL~

Thanks for mod!

Applied all of popner's suggestions, but for the 00:09:393 stuff, I made the previous slider repeat once more instead of adding a note.

Thanks for that

http://puu.sh/GrOn

ohai from n y a -'s queue
Black means suggestion

[General]
add anime on the tags?

[Easy]
nothing

[Normal]
HP -1?

[Hard]
- 00:42:760 : distance?

[Hinsvar's Insane]
- 01:05:311 : remove nc?
- 01:05:413 : nc?

thats all I can found, rank good luck<3

- t e n n y a - wrote:

ohai from n y a -'s queue
Black means suggestion

[General]
add anime on the tags? It's not necessary to add it on the tags

[Easy]
nothing

[Normal]
HP -1? Ok~

[Hard]
- 00:42:760 : distance? What do you mean? Make it closer or far?><

thats all I can found, rank good luck<3

Thanks for mod

From my modding queue

[Thing before I mod]
First of all, my english is poor.
I'm not a great modder, so my modding may not help you so much.
I'm modding in grid level 4.
If I put a "?", feel free to ignore it.
If I put a ".", please face it.
If I put a (FF), that means "remember to Fix Following notes."

[Easy]
- good enough

[Normal]
00:32:352 (4) - down 1 grid?
00:35:413 (1,2,3,4) - press "ctrl+shift+r" and give'em some angle?

[Hard]
00:20:719 (1) - up 1 grid?

[Hinsvar's Insane]
00:59:903 (1) - Separate it from 00:59:699 (5) ?

not bad! rank

Used - t e n n y a -'s mod (can I just use Tennya? Or Nya? ), but I didn't use Wolf's because it's designed like that.

Thanks anyways

Also, I won't upload my diff until there's a mod significant enough for me to do that or if a MAT/BAT is going to come here, so yeah...

Amethyst Wolf wrote:

From my modding queue

[Thing before I mod]
First of all, my english is poor.
I'm not a great modder, so my modding may not help you so much.
I'm modding in grid level 4.
If I put a "?", feel free to ignore it.
If I put a ".", please face it.
If I put a (FF), that means "remember to Fix Following notes."

[Easy]
- good enough

[Normal]
00:32:352 (4) - down 1 grid? Fixed~
00:35:413 (1,2,3,4) - press "ctrl+shift+r" and give'em some angle? I don't really understand ><;

[Hard]
00:20:719 (1) - up 1 grid? Fixed~

not bad! rank

Thanks for mod~

Hinsvar wrote:

Also, I won't upload my diff until there's a mod significant enough for me to do that or if a MAT/BAT is going to come here, so yeah...

Ok,I understand

thank you for your request

[General]

• why you cut Kiai Time so short?

[Normal]

• 01:16:740 (3) - a little cover with score display.
  01:25:617 (1,2,3) - not stack is better imo.

[Hard]

• 00:27:454 (4) - cover with HP bar. how about move (4) a little down?

[Hinsvar's insane]

• first of all, you stack too many objects in different rhythm. it makes us confusing because it is hard to read rhythm.
  I recommend to reduce stacking.
  for example, 00:46:128 (1,2,3,4,1)
  you stack (1) and (2). this makes hard to read rhythm of after this notes.
  and stacking of (4) and (1). these are perfectly different rhythm with (1,2).
  00:09:087 (2,3) - I think it's hard to read the rhythm of (3) because of this jump
  00:49:189 (1,2,3) - don't stack. we can't see (3) well because it is covered with hit burst, and it makes hard to read rhythm.
  00:58:984 (4,5,1) - ^
  01:16:740 (3,1) - same as 00:09:087
  01:19:189 (5,1) - ^

that's all.
overall, good maps. good luck

h-728 wrote:

[Hinsvar's insane]

• first of all, you stack too many objects in different rhythm. it makes us confusing because it is hard to read rhythm. Confused? Then it's either me that's getting crazy or it's just you that can't read the rhythm. Sorry if this comes as an offensive response, but I don't think it's confusing at all.
  I recommend to reduce stacking.
  for example, 00:46:128 (1,2,3,4,1)
  you stack (1) and (2). this makes hard to read rhythm of after this notes.
  and stacking of (4) and (1). these are perfectly different rhythm with (1,2). I stacked stuff because their rhythm is "perfectly" different. Maybe it sounds somewhat illogical to you, but yeah, that's the truth.
  00:09:087 (2,3) - I think it's hard to read the rhythm of (3) because of this jump Uh... nope; I tested this a few times and everything went on smoothly.
  00:49:189 (1,2,3) - don't stack. we can't see (3) well because it is covered with hit burst, and it makes hard to read rhythm. ...I'll consider this one, but I'm gonna keep it for now.
  00:58:984 (4,5,1) - ^ It's designed like that; I don't really think any other pattern will do better here.
  01:16:740 (3,1) - same as 00:09:087 Nope; I can assure you that there is nothing wrong at all with this.
  01:19:189 (5,1) - ^ ^

...Eh. Sorry, I didn't change anything. I'll keep in mind to reduce the amount of stacking for my future maps, though, so thanks for that

h-728 wrote:

thank you for your request

[General]

• why you cut Kiai Time so short? Because

  x847606653 wrote:

  kiai time is so long.

  ;_;

[Normal] Fixed all~

• 01:16:740 (3) - a little cover with score display.
  01:25:617 (1,2,3) - not stack is better imo.

[Hard] Fixed all~

• 00:27:454 (4) - cover with HP bar. how about move (4) a little down?

that's all.
overall, good maps. good luck

Thanks for mod

Hi , From queue
Plz excuse me for the late mod.

[Easy]
01:03:576 (4,1) - overlap~ try change it , this overlaps is little hard to the newbie players
Try : Ctrl+j , Ctrl+H , Ctrl+R. use this 3 commands.
01:26:842 (5) - this note take a little space of the ranking ... move it to x:60 y:328.

Good Diff .

[Normal]

00:07:556 (2) - snap with this 00:05:719 (6)
00:08:474 (3) - if you make ^... move this note to x:188 y:136.
00:19:801 (3) - 1 grid right.
00:20:719 (1) - Ctrl+H , Ctrl+J , Ctrl R . and move to snap with 00:18:576 (1) .
00:30:209 (1) - 2 grid down 1 right.
00:31:434 (2) - 2 grid down 1 right.
00:32:046 (3) - snap with the end of 00:29:291 (4) .
00:32:352 (4) - 1 grid down 1 grid left.
00:32:964 (1,2) - Re-Distance with "Distance Snap"
00:34:801 (3,4,1) - move this notes to x:292 y:108
00:36:025 (2,3,4) - 1 grid right ALL.
00:37:862 (1) - 1 grid up.

Nothing more

[Hard]

This diff is excellent!
for this and the easy diff.
...
...
...


Star~
Excuse me for the late mod.

espiritur00 wrote:

Hi , From queue
Plz excuse me for the late mod.

[Easy] No fix ><
01:03:576 (4,1) - overlap~ try change it , this overlaps is little hard to the newbie players
Try : Ctrl+j , Ctrl+H , Ctrl+R. use this 3 commands.
01:26:842 (5) - this note take a little space of the ranking ... move it to x:60 y:328.

Good Diff .

[Normal] Fixed some. And I know it becomes worse, because I'm so lazy to fix this map

00:07:556 (2) - snap with this 00:05:719 (6)
00:08:474 (3) - if you make ^... move this note to x:188 y:136.
00:19:801 (3) - 1 grid right.
00:20:719 (1) - Ctrl+H , Ctrl+J , Ctrl R . and move to snap with 00:18:576 (1) .
00:30:209 (1) - 2 grid down 1 right.
00:31:434 (2) - 2 grid down 1 right.
00:32:046 (3) - snap with the end of 00:29:291 (4) .
00:32:352 (4) - 1 grid down 1 grid left.
00:32:964 (1,2) - Re-Distance with "Distance Snap"
00:34:801 (3,4,1) - move this notes to x:292 y:108
00:36:025 (2,3,4) - 1 grid right ALL.
00:37:862 (1) - 1 grid up.

Nothing more

[Hard]

This diff is excellent!
for this and the easy diff.
...
...
...


Star~
Excuse me for the late mod.

Thanks for mod & star ><

Oh hi there


[Easy]
01:04:801 (1) - Move further away from previous slider, so it doesn't touched with previous slider?
01:26:842 (5) - New combo?


[Normal]
01:01:128 (3) - The tail slider is almost offscreen (just a warning)
01:12:148 (5) - New combo for your combo pattern?


[Hard]
00:10:311 (4) - Make a same slider as 00:09:699 (3) and flip it? So it makes prettier?
00:50:107 (1,2,3) - Is this jump was intentional or something?
01:26:842 (6) - New combo?


[Hinsvar's Insane]
00:18:270 (4) - Why clap?
00:31:128 (3,4) - Not stack correctly with tail slider (look at test mode to see the proof)


Nice map, good luck

Leorda wrote:

[Hinsvar's Insane]
00:18:270 (4) - Why clap? ...I don't even know why. Let's remove that.
00:31:128 (3,4) - Not stack correctly with tail slider (look at test mode to see the proof) Huh? Yeah. I guess I'll do stuff here.

Thanks

http://puu.sh/KipG

Hi ^^

Here I am from my modding queue~

General

Why no Video for this TV Size ?


Easy

Nothing ^^


Normal

00:09:393 put it one grid to the right
01:00:821 put it one grid to the left
01:23:781 make it like this to avoid that overlap ^^ http://puu.sh/KoFC It looks good , too.

That is it for Normal


Hard

00:33:883 make it like this ? http://puu.sh/KoIf
01:25:617 make it like this to avoid overlap ? http://puu.sh/KoJD

That is it for Hard


Insane

00:09:087 put combo 2 exactly under combo 1 to get spacing 0,00
00:31:128 put combo 3 exactly in end of combo 2 ^
00:49:699 put combo 2 exact in end of slider 1
00:59:903 put combo 1 exact in end of slider 2
01:09:597 ^
01:16:332 ^ combo 2 exact ind end of slider 1

That is it =D

Hope I helped you a bit ^^ Like your beatmap =D Good Luck ^^

Leorda wrote:

Oh hi there


[Easy]
01:04:801 (1) - Move further away from previous slider, so it doesn't touched with previous slider?
01:26:842 (5) - New combo?


[Normal]
01:01:128 (3) - The tail slider is almost offscreen (just a warning)
01:12:148 (5) - New combo for your combo pattern?


[Hard]
00:10:311 (4) - Make a same slider as 00:09:699 (3) and flip it? So it makes prettier? Already?
00:50:107 (1,2,3) - Is this jump was intentional or something?
01:26:842 (6) - New combo?


[Hinsvar's Insane]
00:18:270 (4) - Why clap?
00:31:128 (3,4) - Not stack correctly with tail slider (look at test mode to see the proof)


Nice map, good luck

Mikarunoel131 wrote:

Hi ^^

Here I am from my modding queue~

General

Why no Video for this TV Size ? I don't have the video.


Easy

Nothing ^^


Normal

00:09:393 put it one grid to the right
01:00:821 put it one grid to the left
01:23:781 make it like this to avoid that overlap ^^ http://puu.sh/KoFC It looks good , too.

That is it for Normal


Hard

00:33:883 make it like this ? http://puu.sh/KoIf Nice suggestion~
01:25:617 make it like this to avoid overlap ? http://puu.sh/KoJD

That is it for Hard

Hope I helped you a bit ^^ Like your beatmap =D Good Luck ^^

Thanks for mod
No comment means fixed!

Mikarunoel131 wrote:

Insane

00:09:087 put combo 2 exactly under combo 1 to get spacing 0,00 Done.
00:31:128 put combo 3 exactly in end of combo 2 ^ This one's intentional; don't mind it.
00:49:699 put combo 2 exact in end of slider 1 Done.
00:59:903 put combo 1 exact in end of slider 2 I think you meant 00:59:699 (5). And anyway, it's impossible to get 0.00x DS here, apparently. If you want to do stuff like this, at least state the coordinate. Still appreciating the help though, don't worry.
01:09:597 ^ Done.
01:16:332 ^ combo 2 exact ind end of slider 1 Seems like this one shares 00:59:903's case.

These are all EXTREMELY minor things to pick, but at least these things made my diff better, even though the players won't notice it (at least that's what I believe). I'm not really recommending you to suggest a perfection on the DS to the point of 0.00x though.

Thanks anyway

http://puu.sh/Kpck

[Insane]
00:06:944 (4) - it sounds like 1 beat as a unit so stacking on (3) looks better
00:09:087 (2) - does not look good as it overlaps previous sliders making the short slider hard to read. try: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/380659
00:32:862 (2) - ^ again, it's hard to determine whether it's two note or a short slider. unstack them
00:45:719 (2) - ^
00:49:699 (2,3) - ^
00:58:984 (4) - just remove clap for this one, and the coming short slider ^
using 1/6 isn't a bad thing, but they can be placed better (e.g. 00:14:291 (1,2,3) - put them in a symmetrical (rotational) order?)

[Hard]
01:12:148 (1) - combo problem, remove NC here and add at 01:13:679 (4) - , or just take ref. to [insane]
00:58:985 - I don't hear any accent here... remove finish

[Normal]
00:58:985 - same as hard

Not much to say with the regular beats, just think that both custom clap and whistle is a bit too loud comparing with the music and you may want to lower their volume a bit.

wmfchris wrote:

[Insane]
00:06:944 (4) - it sounds like 1 beat as a unit so stacking on (3) looks better Stacked (4) below (3).
00:09:087 (2) - does not look good as it overlaps previous sliders making the short slider hard to read. try: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/380659 Changed stuff around here, although not really like that.
00:32:862 (2) - ^ again, it's hard to determine whether it's two note or a short slider. unstack them I think this one's fine as is.
00:45:719 (2) - ^ ^
00:49:699 (2,3) - ^ ^
00:58:984 (4) - just remove clap for this one, and the coming short slider ^ Removed the clap, but I still don't want to unstack the slider.
using 1/6 isn't a bad thing, but they can be placed better (e.g. 00:14:291 (1,2,3) - put them in a symmetrical (rotational) order? I want to keep the DS close here, and I think the current one is pretty fine and flows nice. If someone can give me a good suggestion for this... Yeah.)

So yeah, about stacks, I admit that I'm relying a bit too much on it, but then again, constant stacks actually goes better with the song, IMO.

Thanks (again)

http://puu.sh/Lv0N

wmfchris wrote:

[Hard]
01:12:148 (1) - combo problem, remove NC here and add at 01:13:679 (4) - , or just take ref. to [insane]
00:58:985 - I don't hear any accent here... remove finish

Niva wrote:

00:58:985 (2) - Finish also here? I can hear a cymbal from the song >_<

I agree with Niva for this point so I won't remove it.><;

[Normal]
00:58:985 - same as hard Same reason as hard

Not much to say with the regular beats, just think that both custom clap and whistle is a bit too loud comparing with the music and you may want to lower their volume a bit.

Thanks for mod!

Hi~ From my Queue
My modding is just Suggestion so you can ignore this


Nice song O.o Gool luck!

Fixed some!
Thanks for mod

HelloSCV wrote:

Hinsval's Insane
00:31:434 (4) - try 0.06x DS current DS is 0.04x ( nazi ) Hmm... Yeah, the DS inconsistency seems to be noticeable here. Done.
00:39:699 (3) - add finish? Nope, it doesn't fit the song. Also, there's a Finish 1/1 beat after. Won't work well.
00:50:005 (3) - stack with 00:49:699 (2) - end of slider Uh, no. I already planned (2) and (3) to be stacked below (1), and I think it's better that way.

Thanks

http://puu.sh/Nftw

Hi.

Hinsvar's Insane

— Overall
Pretty nice patterns, but need a bit of variety imo o/

— Mapping

1. 00:09:087 (2) - Look bad stacked, imo. Unstack it.
2. 00:24:393 (1,2,3) - Stacked three 1/1 notes in a row. The player just sits at the same point and boringly press the button. Unstack it, make something interesting instead.
3. Same counts for this: 00:25:617 (1,2,3)
4. 00:28:066 (1,2) - For example, use here the pattern you did at the beginning (00:04:495 (2,3)), cause I already said about veriety, ok?
5. 00:32:046 (1) - Too close to the previous slider, look cluttered imo.
6. 00:50:005 (3) - Unstack this please. This looks better imo: http://puu.sh/NUcD
7. 00:59:699 (5) - Very confusing! Replace the slider by circles.
8. 01:05:311 (2) - Stack it on the slider's start.
9. 01:16:944 (1) - Too huge jump I think, 2.55x :c Better stack it, mirrored to the previous one. http://puu.sh/NUdO
10. 01:17:352 (2) - Of course, if you fixed prev. suggestion, move this slider closer to the 01:16:944 (1)
11. 01:19:801 (2,3) - And I guess also make these symmetrical to 01:17:352 (2,3)

Hard

— Overall
Good one.

— Mapping

1. 00:10:311 (4) - Move it closer to (3), to make 1.0x spacing
2. 00:19:801 (4) - Move it to x:185; y:231 to fix spacing errors
3. 00:23:168 (1) - x:235; y:181 please! To make perfect triangle.
4. 00:25:617 (1,2,3) - Their ends are not at the same distance: http://puu.sh/NUhu Move (3) one grid right
5. 00:32:352 (4) - Decrease that jump somehow
6. 00:37:862 (1) - This too, don't make a jump here please, there's no reason for it.
7. 00:44:597 (4,1,2) - Make a triangle please
8. 00:54:393 (5,1,2) - Weird overlaps, rework it please
9. 01:10:923 (3) - Delete the reverse and add a circle afterwards please. Jump after this repeated sliders doesnt look good

Normal

— Mapping

1. 00:48:270 (2,2) - Stack please
2. 01:04:801 (4) - Do a better encircling please. Adding another handle point will help
3. 01:07:250 (1,2,3) - Make this triangle better.
4. 01:09:699 (1,2,3,4,1) - This could form a better 5-beat star. Try to use Polygon Cirles for this (Compose - Create Polygon Circles)

Easy

— Mapping

1. 00:23:168 (3) - Move it's points like that to make better shape: http://puu.sh/NUSj
2. 00:32:811 (4) - Try to start it at 00:32:811
3. 00:47:658 (3) - Copy and mirror (4) please, cause this sliders make not perfect encircling

grumd wrote:

Hi.

Hinsvar's Insane

— Overall
Pretty nice patterns, but need a bit of variety imo o/

— Mapping

1. 00:09:087 (2) - Look bad stacked, imo. Unstack it. ...Okay.
2. 00:24:393 (1,2,3) - Stacked three 1/1 notes in a row. The player just sits at the same point and boringly press the button. Unstack it, make something interesting instead. Not really sure if I did it right, but unstacked anyway.
3. Same counts for this: 00:25:617 (1,2,3) ^
4. 00:28:066 (1,2) - For example, use here the pattern you did at the beginning (00:04:495 (2,3)), cause I already said about veriety, ok? Hmm... If you're trying to say that I should make this part look like the one you suggested, I think it's... impossible. Care to explain what's on your mind about this, maybe?
5. 00:32:046 (1) - Too close to the previous slider, look cluttered imo. Don't think so.
6. 00:50:005 (3) - Unstack this please. This looks better imo: http://puu.sh/NUcD This one goes better with the song, IMO (yes, I meant the pattern and stacking. I think a high amount of stacks while mapping this song really fits).
7. 00:59:699 (5) - Very confusing! Replace the slider by circles. ...I seriously can't see why everyone whines about this. No, not gonna change this; a slider fits better than circles.
8. 01:05:311 (2) - Stack it on the slider's start. It's intentional to... add some variety.
9. 01:16:944 (1) - Too huge jump I think, 2.55x :c Better stack it, mirrored to the previous one. http://puu.sh/NUdO k done, although it's on an almost entirely different way, and I'm not really sure about how good the outcome is...
10. 01:17:352 (2) - Of course, if you fixed prev. suggestion, move this slider closer to the 01:16:944 (1) ^
11. 01:19:801 (2,3) - And I guess also make these symmetrical to 01:17:352 (2,3) ^

Okay, thanks

http://puu.sh/NVaK