spboxer3 wrote:

Insane

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

1. 00:14:281 (1,2,3) - perhaps used rotate 120∘ it's better then original one. Nope. I think the current design looks pretty good already.

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[Hinsvar's Insane]

1. OD-1,really no fit slow bpm song. It will be too easy without OD8, but anyway... Fine, OD -1'd.
2. 00:32:954 - Remove clap and Add finish. Done.
3. 00:54:995 - ^ ^
4. 01:07:852 (3,4,5) - Try like this parttern,more funny. Uh... I guess I'll redesign this part differently.

spboxer3 wrote:

※ Notice

red is unrankable issue.
blue is recommended to fix.
Black is just suggestion.

general

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  Settings
  (For the setting/general issue.)
  

1. looks all fine

Easy

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  mapping
  (These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  

1. ok~ it's your first map aim Ranked. Easy diff have enough quality imo. but some spacing (nazi) should be improve like 00:40:301 (1,2,3) - ,00:52:546 (5,6,1) - etc.

test log

http://puu.sh/15Xyf <- .osr

Normal

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  Overlaps
  (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap each other could space them farther apart. yep. It's just suggest and nazi. you can ignore this par)
  

1. 00:18:566 (1,3) -

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

1. 00:02:648 (2,3,4) - [nazi] uneven spacing. fix it can make pattern more clean. so I point out this hope you can fix them. same as 01:15:505 (4,5,1) -
2. 01:08:464 (3) - move this slider to x452,y320? I think you can make the equilateral triangle and it's pretty more imo.

test log

http://puu.sh/15XvL <- .osr

Hard

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  mapping
  (These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  

1. 00:31:424 (3) - unfit rhythm at 00:31:577 - because It's not lofty tone to enough appear rhythm imo.

test log

http://puu.sh/15XtY <- .osr

Really. for your first map I think it's have enough quality. cell me back when you fix my mod~ but please reply my mod post and used 2 color to reply it
Blue: you accept my mod item
Red: you deny my mod item and please reply the reason.

go~

spboxer3 wrote:

It's your first map aim Ranked