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Normal & Hard
Metti il "Music Track - Lead-in-Seconds : 3"
http://puu.sh/bWmz
Hard
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Metti il "Music Track - Lead-in-Seconds : 3"
http://puu.sh/bWmz
Hard
Stack su questa nota 02:21:988 (7) -
Topic Starter
Grazie mille o/
General;
Remove that first BPM section. Offset seems a tiny bit early, add on 5 ms or so.
Need to add preview points.
That background is really not appropriate. Could you find one with less sexual focus, thanks.
Delete Anime20Girl201.png from the folder if you aren't using it for anything.
Easy;
00:23:160 (1) - Too soon after the spinner; shorten the spinner by AT LEAST 1/1.
00:30:660 (1,2,3,4) - Kinda messy and hard to read; I'd move the 4 so that it didn't overlap the other 3.
00:41:910 (5) - New combo.
00:41:910 (5,6) - These sliders are really kind of ugly, to be honest; can you make them symmetrical?
01:15:660 (5) - New combo.
01:23:628 (1) - Too soon after the spinner.
01:56:910 (1) - ^
Normal;
This has the same slider velocity as the Easy; and a lot of the start uses the same sliders as the Easy. I think you might need to re-do this difficulty with a higher slider velocity, say, 1.4? Also try to make the notes that are 1/2 apart not overlap as much, it's a little cramped to play.
Hard;
00:46:128 (2) - Can you make this slider prettier? :<
01:27:613 (3,4) - This jump is really out of place.
01:31:363 (3,4) - ^
01:42:378 - How come this break isn't mapped in Hard, but it's mapped in the other two difficulties?
Remove that first BPM section. Offset seems a tiny bit early, add on 5 ms or so.
Need to add preview points.
That background is really not appropriate. Could you find one with less sexual focus, thanks.
Delete Anime20Girl201.png from the folder if you aren't using it for anything.
Easy;
00:23:160 (1) - Too soon after the spinner; shorten the spinner by AT LEAST 1/1.
00:30:660 (1,2,3,4) - Kinda messy and hard to read; I'd move the 4 so that it didn't overlap the other 3.
00:41:910 (5) - New combo.
00:41:910 (5,6) - These sliders are really kind of ugly, to be honest; can you make them symmetrical?
01:15:660 (5) - New combo.
01:23:628 (1) - Too soon after the spinner.
01:56:910 (1) - ^
Normal;
This has the same slider velocity as the Easy; and a lot of the start uses the same sliders as the Easy. I think you might need to re-do this difficulty with a higher slider velocity, say, 1.4? Also try to make the notes that are 1/2 apart not overlap as much, it's a little cramped to play.
Hard;
00:46:128 (2) - Can you make this slider prettier? :<
01:27:613 (3,4) - This jump is really out of place.
01:31:363 (3,4) - ^
01:42:378 - How come this break isn't mapped in Hard, but it's mapped in the other two difficulties?
Topic Starter
You serious?
[General]
Yea, just a few minor suggestions, nicely done overall.
I know it's tough to change SV/spacing after map is finished, but I really perfer a higher spacing in this diff. Could you consider increasing the spacing for a little?
AR-1? It would look better since BPM is low.
- I don't know if it is only me feel the slider sound is annoying..maybe try use silenced sliderslide? http://puu.sh/cs8Z
Imo it's better to switch the color so that the blue new combo is easier to recognize.[Colours]
Combo1 : 111,111,255
Combo2 : 0,128,0
Combo3 : 255,128,64
Combo4 : 0,0,255
Remove audio lead-in in all diff. Since the song already has about 4 second lead-in.
Hmm, remove countdown?
Yea, just a few minor suggestions, nicely done overall.
- 00:04:527 (T) - Unused timeline, delete?
00:19:410 (1) - Shorten the spinner for 1/2 beat like [Normal]?
01:21:285 (1) - Clap?
01:53:160 (1) - Shorten the spinner for 1/2 beat like [Normal]?
01:58:316 (2) - Clap?
02:13:316 (2) - ^
I know it's tough to change SV/spacing after map is finished, but I really perfer a higher spacing in this diff. Could you consider increasing the spacing for a little?
- 00:00:398 (T) - Unused redline, delete.
00:08:160~00:15:660 - Hmm, I recommend you to set whistle at 2nd/4th white line. So..whistles for 00:09:566 (2,4) 00:12:378 (3,6), and remove other whistles?
00:47:769 (5) - 1 grid left?
01:41:910 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same suggestions as above.
02:07:456 (5) - It isn't necessary to follow lyrics...I'd rather shorten it for 1/4 beat, sounds awkward here.
02:22:456 (5) - ^
AR-1? It would look better since BPM is low.
- 00:00:398 (T) - Again, you need to remove this timeline.
00:00:398 (1) - Also remove the spinner? Not necessary imo.
00:30:191 (1) - Clap.
00:30:660 (Kiai) - I don't get why you stop using clap here...The switch of hitsounds is kinda...
01:25:738 (7) - New combo?
01:29:488 (9) - New combo here instead of 01:29:722 (1)
02:22:691 (9) - Move 1/4 beat backward, and add clap?
That made me laugh haha.Star for you ;3Barney Stinson wrote:
You serious?
I couldn't find you online anymore, so just gonna finish the mod here D:
so, k.. going for [Normal] now
General
add Lolicore Flandre's nickname in tags of all diffs
the combo colours should be the same in all diffs ._. (I actually think you should use the ones used in [Loli Flan's Insane] in all diffs)
and why does [Loli Flan's Insane] have an extra timing section? ><
[Normal]
00:10:035 (3) - use distance snap
00:19:410 (1) - finish it at the same point it does on [Easy] (and silence its end here as well)
00:48:003 (6) - *nazi* looks better if you align it with 00:47:535 (4)
01:16:597 (x) - add a note here? sounds weird without it ><
unsnapped timing sections at 00:23:132, 00:26:882, 00:30:643, 00:40:030, 01:14:108, 01:14:460, 01:32:858 and 01:33:210
[Hard]
00:00:398 (1) - ugh unsnapped spinner
00:40:269 (1) - use distance snap? i don't see a reason for an anti-jump here
01:13:316 (6) - ugh *nazi* place it 1 grid up so it keeps the "stream's" spacing consistant
01:32:535 (5) - *nazi* make this slider's shape a bit higher so it doesn't touch the previous slider? (like this http://puu.sh/dnen)
unsnapped timing sections at 00:19:147, 00:19:382, 00:23:132, 00:26:882, 00:30:643, 00:44:108, 00:44:460, 00:47:858, 00:48:210, 01:10:358, 01:10:710, 01:14:108, 01:14:460, 01:17:858, 01:18:092, 01:19:733, 01:20:085, 01:20:671, 01:21:022, 01:31:971, 01:32:272, 01:32:858, 01:33:210, 01:53:132, 01:56:647, 01:59:108, 01:59:460, 02:14:108, 02:14:460
[Loli Flan's Insane]
00:58:785 (1) - stack it correctly with 00:58:081 (5,7,8)? looks better imo
01:01:597 (4,5,6,7,8) - this stream is pretty hidden under 01:01:128 (3) x_x not sure if using this spacing is rankable
01:03:472 (4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:15:425 (7) - almost hidden under previous notes ><
01:45:308 (8) - i don't see a reason for adding this 1/4 here D: sounds pretty bad imo. consider removing it?
02:09:566 (5) - stack correctly with 02:09:097 (4)
02:19:878 (1,1) - unecessary new combos
that's all~
IRC mod
09:23 <Wiinter> : ook
09:25 <Wiinter> : first of all, you should use the same kiai times in all diffs (it isn't the same for loliflan's one)
09:25 <Barney Stinson> : oh damn, k
09:25 <Barney Stinson> : xD
09:26 <Wiinter> : k, going for the mod xD
09:26 <Barney Stinson> : xD
09:26 <Wiinter> : oh god
09:26 <Wiinter> : enable epilepsy warning in all diffs XD
09:26 <Barney Stinson> : yeah
09:27 <Wiinter> : this spinner doesn't sound really good imo 00:19:410 (1) - ><
09:27 <Wiinter> : hold on
09:27 <Barney Stinson> : I remove it?
09:27 <Wiinter> : nah..
09:27 <Wiinter> : it's just its end, hol on
09:27 <Wiinter> : hold on*
09:27 <Barney Stinson> : I make it longer, you mean?
09:28 <Wiinter> : doesn't solve the problem.. maybe silence the end
09:28 <Barney Stinson> : oh, ok
09:28 <Barney Stinson> : Fixed
09:28 <Barney Stinson> : oh, do you like sb?
09:29 <Wiinter> : i'm not a big fan of SBs in general XD but yeah, its pretty fine
09:30 <Barney Stinson> : k
09:30 <Wiinter> : 00:45:660 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - combo 10 is pretty high for the easiest diff
09:30 <Barney Stinson> : i put NC on 6
09:30 <Wiinter> : k
09:31 <Wiinter> : 01:25:035 (5) - aa this is pretty nazi :v but make this shape like this http://puu.sh/dmeP ? fits better due to the previous note
09:32 <Barney Stinson> : what coordinates I put new sliderway?
09:32 <Wiinter> : just add a point between the two ones you have there
09:33 <Wiinter> : or you mean spacing?
09:33 <Barney Stinson> : Solved
09:33 <Wiinter> : 01:46:128 (1) - use distance snap
09:34 <Wiinter> : 01:53:160 (1) - same of that first spinner i linked
09:34 <Wiinter> : 01:58:785 (3) - spacing D:
09:34 <Wiinter> : 02:01:128 (1) - spacing again
09:34 <Barney Stinson> : Fixed
09:34 <Wiinter> : 02:13:785 (3) - spacing
09:35 <Barney Stinson> : Fix'd
09:35 <Wiinter> : 00:12:378 (1) - here as well (got back to the begining to see if i didn't miss something :p)
09:36 <Wiinter> : 00:41:910 (1) - ^
09:36 <Wiinter> : 00:43:785 (2) - ^
09:36 <Wiinter> : 00:47:535 (6) - ^
09:37 <Barney Stinson> : ficed all
09:37 <Wiinter> : 01:15:660 (1,2) - quite unsure here, but i guess new combo on (2) fits better
09:37 <Barney Stinson> : fixed*
09:37 <Barney Stinson> : ok
09:37 <Barney Stinson> : Switched
09:38 <Wiinter> : ook..
09:38 <Wiinter> : 00:23:132 00:26:882 00:30:643 00:44:460 01:14:108 01:14:460 01:19:733 01:20:085 01:32:858 01:33:210 01:59:108 02:06:280 02:14:108 02:19:423
09:38 <Wiinter> : 02:20:300 all those timing sections are unsnapped
09:38 <Barney Stinson> : ok
09:39 <Barney Stinson> : I'm gonna fix em at the end of mod
09:39 <Wiinter> : ook
09:39 <Wiinter> : oh, btw
09:40 <Wiinter> : is it on purpose some hitsound files are blank?
09:40 <Barney Stinson> : ??
09:40 <Wiinter> : here
09:41 <Wiinter> : http://puu.sh/dmgz
09:41 <Barney Stinson> : what's wrong?
09:41 <Wiinter> : the 0kb thing
09:41 <Wiinter> : is it actually supposed to be blank?
09:44 <Barney Stinson> : Oh, I gotta go. Can u finish it on forum or IRC modding later?
09:44 <Barney Stinson> : I have lunch
09:44 <Wiinter> : uhh.. i'm also leaving in a while. just remind me to finish it later, k?
09:25 <Wiinter> : first of all, you should use the same kiai times in all diffs (it isn't the same for loliflan's one)
09:25 <Barney Stinson> : oh damn, k
09:25 <Barney Stinson> : xD
09:26 <Wiinter> : k, going for the mod xD
09:26 <Barney Stinson> : xD
09:26 <Wiinter> : oh god
09:26 <Wiinter> : enable epilepsy warning in all diffs XD
09:26 <Barney Stinson> : yeah
09:27 <Wiinter> : this spinner doesn't sound really good imo 00:19:410 (1) - ><
09:27 <Wiinter> : hold on
09:27 <Barney Stinson> : I remove it?
09:27 <Wiinter> : nah..
09:27 <Wiinter> : it's just its end, hol on
09:27 <Wiinter> : hold on*
09:27 <Barney Stinson> : I make it longer, you mean?
09:28 <Wiinter> : doesn't solve the problem.. maybe silence the end
09:28 <Barney Stinson> : oh, ok
09:28 <Barney Stinson> : Fixed
09:28 <Barney Stinson> : oh, do you like sb?
09:29 <Wiinter> : i'm not a big fan of SBs in general XD but yeah, its pretty fine
09:30 <Barney Stinson> : k
09:30 <Wiinter> : 00:45:660 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - combo 10 is pretty high for the easiest diff
09:30 <Barney Stinson> : i put NC on 6
09:30 <Wiinter> : k
09:31 <Wiinter> : 01:25:035 (5) - aa this is pretty nazi :v but make this shape like this http://puu.sh/dmeP ? fits better due to the previous note
09:32 <Barney Stinson> : what coordinates I put new sliderway?
09:32 <Wiinter> : just add a point between the two ones you have there
09:33 <Wiinter> : or you mean spacing?
09:33 <Barney Stinson> : Solved
09:33 <Wiinter> : 01:46:128 (1) - use distance snap
09:34 <Wiinter> : 01:53:160 (1) - same of that first spinner i linked
09:34 <Wiinter> : 01:58:785 (3) - spacing D:
09:34 <Wiinter> : 02:01:128 (1) - spacing again
09:34 <Barney Stinson> : Fixed
09:34 <Wiinter> : 02:13:785 (3) - spacing
09:35 <Barney Stinson> : Fix'd
09:35 <Wiinter> : 00:12:378 (1) - here as well (got back to the begining to see if i didn't miss something :p)
09:36 <Wiinter> : 00:41:910 (1) - ^
09:36 <Wiinter> : 00:43:785 (2) - ^
09:36 <Wiinter> : 00:47:535 (6) - ^
09:37 <Barney Stinson> : ficed all
09:37 <Wiinter> : 01:15:660 (1,2) - quite unsure here, but i guess new combo on (2) fits better
09:37 <Barney Stinson> : fixed*
09:37 <Barney Stinson> : ok
09:37 <Barney Stinson> : Switched
09:38 <Wiinter> : ook..
09:38 <Wiinter> : 00:23:132 00:26:882 00:30:643 00:44:460 01:14:108 01:14:460 01:19:733 01:20:085 01:32:858 01:33:210 01:59:108 02:06:280 02:14:108 02:19:423
09:38 <Wiinter> : 02:20:300 all those timing sections are unsnapped
09:38 <Barney Stinson> : ok
09:39 <Barney Stinson> : I'm gonna fix em at the end of mod
09:39 <Wiinter> : ook
09:39 <Wiinter> : oh, btw
09:40 <Wiinter> : is it on purpose some hitsound files are blank?
09:40 <Barney Stinson> : ??
09:40 <Wiinter> : here
09:41 <Wiinter> : http://puu.sh/dmgz
09:41 <Barney Stinson> : what's wrong?
09:41 <Wiinter> : the 0kb thing
09:41 <Wiinter> : is it actually supposed to be blank?
09:44 <Barney Stinson> : Oh, I gotta go. Can u finish it on forum or IRC modding later?
09:44 <Barney Stinson> : I have lunch
09:44 <Wiinter> : uhh.. i'm also leaving in a while. just remind me to finish it later, k?
so, k.. going for [Normal] now
General
add Lolicore Flandre's nickname in tags of all diffs
the combo colours should be the same in all diffs ._. (I actually think you should use the ones used in [Loli Flan's Insane] in all diffs)
and why does [Loli Flan's Insane] have an extra timing section? ><
[Normal]
00:10:035 (3) - use distance snap
00:19:410 (1) - finish it at the same point it does on [Easy] (and silence its end here as well)
00:48:003 (6) - *nazi* looks better if you align it with 00:47:535 (4)
01:16:597 (x) - add a note here? sounds weird without it ><
unsnapped timing sections at 00:23:132, 00:26:882, 00:30:643, 00:40:030, 01:14:108, 01:14:460, 01:32:858 and 01:33:210
[Hard]
00:00:398 (1) - ugh unsnapped spinner
00:40:269 (1) - use distance snap? i don't see a reason for an anti-jump here
01:13:316 (6) - ugh *nazi* place it 1 grid up so it keeps the "stream's" spacing consistant
01:32:535 (5) - *nazi* make this slider's shape a bit higher so it doesn't touch the previous slider? (like this http://puu.sh/dnen)
unsnapped timing sections at 00:19:147, 00:19:382, 00:23:132, 00:26:882, 00:30:643, 00:44:108, 00:44:460, 00:47:858, 00:48:210, 01:10:358, 01:10:710, 01:14:108, 01:14:460, 01:17:858, 01:18:092, 01:19:733, 01:20:085, 01:20:671, 01:21:022, 01:31:971, 01:32:272, 01:32:858, 01:33:210, 01:53:132, 01:56:647, 01:59:108, 01:59:460, 02:14:108, 02:14:460
[Loli Flan's Insane]
00:58:785 (1) - stack it correctly with 00:58:081 (5,7,8)? looks better imo
01:01:597 (4,5,6,7,8) - this stream is pretty hidden under 01:01:128 (3) x_x not sure if using this spacing is rankable
01:03:472 (4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:15:425 (7) - almost hidden under previous notes ><
01:45:308 (8) - i don't see a reason for adding this 1/4 here D: sounds pretty bad imo. consider removing it?
02:09:566 (5) - stack correctly with 02:09:097 (4)
02:19:878 (1,1) - unecessary new combos
that's all~
[General]:
1st red section:
BPM128 / offset -1243
[Normal]:
01:39:800 (3) - 1 grid down
[Insane]:
00:04:148 (1) - snapping
edit:
delete Insane's 2nd section
1st red section:
BPM128 / offset -1243
[Normal]:
01:39:800 (3) - 1 grid down
[Insane]:
00:04:148 (1) - snapping
edit:
delete Insane's 2nd section
Hello
[General]
HP -2, OD -1
Unsnapped sections~
Kiai time should be same in all diffs D:
My name isBond DANTE
[General]
- Make the timing in all diffs as in LoliFlan's.
- 00:23:160 (T) - unsnapped kiai section
- 00:30:660 (T) - ^ you have many unsnapped section, please, snap them.
- 00:30:660 (1,2,3) - personally, I don't like 1/2 notes in Easy.. but it's your call..
- Your slider velocity here is same as in Easy. I asked Aleks719 (he is MAT) and he said that you should remap it with more higher SV.
So I won't mod this :<
HP -2, OD -1
Unsnapped sections~
- 00:23:160 (1) - Finish
- 00:28:316 (1) - remove nc
- 00:46:128 (2) - non-symmetrical >< (nazi) to make it symmetrical, move the 1st followpoint 1 grid down, 4th followpoint 3 grids down and 2 grids left, the last 5 grids down and 1 left.
- 00:49:058 (2) - 1/4 earlier as 02:22:456 (8,9) -
- 01:56:910 (1) - finish
- 02:22:456 (1) - nc? As 00:48:706 (1) -
Kiai time should be same in all diffs D:
- 00:53:160 (1) - remove nc
- 00:57:847 (4) - (nazi) stack with 00:56:910 (1) -
- 02:25:738 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - I thought it is stream.. Move stream farther from (4)
My name is
Ohaider
Please treat everything I say as a suggestion. Feel free to ignore this entire mod post if you feel that is for the best~
[General
Add Lolicore Flandre to tags. Also make sure to include tags in all diffs.
Disable countdown on all diffs
The copy-paste
[Easy]
00:23:160 (1,2) - The sliderend of (2) is overlapping the start on (1) Try make these sliders completely symmetrical, and dont overlap like that \o\
00:38:160 (1) - That wigglepart in the middle feels weird for me. It doesn't follow anything in the song, and in general the wigglemotion looks weird.
01:23:628 (1) - It's hard for me to hit this on time. I always get the urge to hit it earlier Nothing wrong, but idk, maybe add a note at 01:23:394 - ? I just feel it's an awful long time. Even though it is an easy, this pause feels long for me, and you can see this note right after the spinner too, so you feel like clicking it... meh I don't know what I'm saying anymore 
01:31:128 (1) - Make this a bit rounder?
Nothing special, idk how the standard on [Easy] diffs are these days, but the "streams" felt maybe a wee bit hard... though no idea xD
[Normal]
Ar+1
This diff feels a bit cramped, which makes the map a bit hard to read.
Nothing feels wrong in this, so my suggestion here is to spread the notes out a bit more.
Also might be an idea to have faster sliders. Right now the speed is the same as in [Easy]
[Hard]
00:04:410 (1,3) - These sliders feels weird. Try add a repeat on them?
00:46:128 (2) - Make pretty
01:15:660 (5,6,1) - This transition from one rhythm to another felt a bit forced to me. No idea how to fix though :p
01:38:160 (1,3) - Same as the first ones
02:22:691 (9) - move this 1/4 to the right so it's the same as what you had earlier?
[LoliFlan's Insane]
Turn up the volume D:
First timing point should be at 425ms
00:34:292 (5) - the bg makes this note very hard to see ><
01:01:128 (3,4) - Not too fond of these. Can you move the stream away from the sliderend?
01:15:425 (7) - Slider is barely visible
01:16:128 (1) - Can't see the repeat here
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That's about it~~ Good luck
Please treat everything I say as a suggestion. Feel free to ignore this entire mod post if you feel that is for the best~
[General
Add Lolicore Flandre to tags. Also make sure to include tags in all diffs.
Disable countdown on all diffs
The copy-paste
[Easy]
00:23:160 (1,2) - The sliderend of (2) is overlapping the start on (1)
Try make these sliders completely symmetrical, and dont overlap like that \o\00:38:160 (1) - That wigglepart in the middle feels weird for me. It doesn't follow anything in the song, and in general the wigglemotion looks weird.
01:23:628 (1) - It's hard for me to hit this on time. I always get the urge to hit it earlier
Nothing wrong, but idk, maybe add a note at 01:23:394 - ? I just feel it's an awful long time. Even though it is an easy, this pause feels long for me, and you can see this note right after the spinner too, so you feel like clicking it... meh I don't know what I'm saying anymore 01:31:128 (1) - Make this a bit rounder?
Nothing special, idk how the standard on [Easy] diffs are these days, but the "streams" felt maybe a wee bit hard... though no idea xD
[Normal]
Ar+1
This diff feels a bit cramped, which makes the map a bit hard to read.
Nothing feels wrong in this, so my suggestion here is to spread the notes out a bit more.
Also might be an idea to have faster sliders. Right now the speed is the same as in [Easy]
[Hard]
00:04:410 (1,3) - These sliders feels weird. Try add a repeat on them?
00:46:128 (2) - Make pretty
01:15:660 (5,6,1) - This transition from one rhythm to another felt a bit forced to me. No idea how to fix though :p
01:38:160 (1,3) - Same as the first ones
02:22:691 (9) - move this 1/4 to the right so it's the same as what you had earlier?
[LoliFlan's Insane]
Turn up the volume D:
First timing point should be at 425ms
00:34:292 (5) - the bg makes this note very hard to see ><
01:01:128 (3,4) - Not too fond of these. Can you move the stream away from the sliderend?
01:15:425 (7) - Slider is barely visible
01:16:128 (1) - Can't see the repeat here
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That's about it~~ Good luck
hello~~
General
Some Suggestions
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Easy
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Normal
can be -1 AR?
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Hard
I did re-download but http://puu.sh/dDve this are different other your diff's pleasse make same if hard is you diff lol
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LoliFlan's Insane
Lot combo confused X_X but the flow is good so
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that all i think sorry my suck eng
anyway good luck and bye bye
General
- Easy and normal and hard is you right ? should make same kiai time expect LoliFlan because he is guest difficult
- also you timing green are lot unsnapped i not sure is fine so i will wait the mat or bat think are fine or not
- pleasse make same TAG all diff then full submit
Some Suggestions
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Easy
- 00:04:410 (1) - I see my owm is bad symentric try this code SPOILER
68,91,4410,2,0,B|144:36|232:96|232:96|280:96|280:96|368:36|444:92,1,400,2|0
- 00:41:441 (4) - Grid 1 up to make same symentric with 00:40:503 (2) IMO or intentional? when you fix this you need fix spacing at
- 00:41:910 (1,2)
- 01:13:316 (2) - nazi spacing need grid 1 left
- 01:28:785 (6) - bad symentric sliderSPOILER
340,204,88785,2,0,B|296:232|332:260|332:260|256:280|256:280|180:260|180:260|216:232|172:204,1,300,0|8
- 01:38:160 (1) - bad symentric same what happened 00:04:410 (1) try copy-past ?
- 02:02:535 (4,5) - is too overlaps and I get 300 score are big hitburst default skin this too hard read with 02:03:472 (6) as i didn't konw this is are slider or note so i will be more read like this http://puu.sh/dDio make better gameplay IMO
- 02:17:066 (3,4) - ^
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Normal
can be -1 AR?
- 00:25:035 (5) - bad symentricSPOILER464,224,25035,2,0,B|356:232|300:340|300:340|244:232|136:224,1,420,0|8
- 00:30:660 (1) - bad loops symentric lol here code if you wanna better symentricSPOILER
388,136,30660,6,0,B|148:219|116:59|232:-36|348:59|316:219|79:136,1,560
- 00:38:160 (1) - same happened 00:30:660 (1) try copy-past?
- 01:16:128 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - IMO this part is too hard for this normal http://puu.sh/dDph better gameplay for this normal so
- 01:23:160 (1) - bad symentricSPOILER
96,212,83160,6,0,B|116:308|252:340|252:340|392:292|400:204,1,420,0|8
- 01:25:035 (2,3,4) - Incosiente spacing
- 01:32:535 (5,6,7) - confused play to newbie i do remove this notes and add slider repeat i mean this http://puu.sh/dDrj most better IMO
- 02:06:285 (2,3,4) - I need this lot grid dowm because this almost hidden with HP drain skin default then hard too read approeach when you fix this spacing you need fix spacing at 02:07:222 (5,6)
- 02:18:003 (8) - New combo?
- 02:22:456 (3,4) - I just remove this notes and slider then can be easy for this normal and better gameplay IMO
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Hard
I did re-download but http://puu.sh/dDve this are different other your diff's pleasse make same if hard is you diff lol
- 00:13:785 (7) - put new combo and at 00:14:488 (1) - remove new combo
- 00:28:316 (1) - this no need New combo pleasse remove new combo imo
- 00:30:191 (1) - remove new combo and at 00:30:894 (5) - put new combo
- 00:46:128 (2) - bad symentric codeSPOILER
308,236,46128,2,0,B|328:308|256:368|256:368|184:308|204:236,1,300,8|0
- 00:47:535 (5) - new combo and at 00:48:706 (1) - remove new combo
- 01:47:535 (7) - put new combo and at 01:48:238 (1) - remove new combo
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LoliFlan's Insane
Lot combo confused X_X but the flow is good so
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that all i think sorry my suck eng
anyway good luck and bye bye
Hi!
I'm noob.
Ignore if it's wrong.
Easy
01:26:910 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - maybe place it like this http://puu.sh/dTd8
00:36:519 - add note here or delete 00:36:050 (3)
Normal
01:58:550 (2,3) - try this http://puu.sh/dTeh
02:03:472 (6,7,8) - delete this and try this http://puu.sh/dTer
Hard
00:06:988 (7) - New combo?
01:36:870 - Break time here?
01:40:738 (7) - New combo?
01:49:410 (6) - delete circle, add slider
LoliFlan's Insane
<3 Great
Nice Song
Nice Map
Nice Storyboard
Good luck!
I'm noob.
Ignore if it's wrong.
Easy
01:26:910 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - maybe place it like this http://puu.sh/dTd8
00:36:519 - add note here or delete 00:36:050 (3)
Normal
01:58:550 (2,3) - try this http://puu.sh/dTeh
02:03:472 (6,7,8) - delete this and try this http://puu.sh/dTer
Hard
00:06:988 (7) - New combo?
01:36:870 - Break time here?
01:40:738 (7) - New combo?
01:49:410 (6) - delete circle, add slider
LoliFlan's Insane
<3 Great
Nice Song
Nice Map
Nice Storyboard
Good luck!
Ho, man! I'm exausted. I shouldn't mod when I'm tired...
General:
• Please make sure all the preview points are the same. (Normal has a different preview point)
• You have inconsistent epilepsy warning. Please either keep it on for all diffs or turn it off.
• You have inconsistent tags - Please make them match.
• Make sure the kiai times are on a downbeat (On a tick). You'll have an awkward kiai start if you don't
Easy:
• 00:38:160 (1) - I'm sure this will trip some easy players up and it will cause them to over jump the slider, because it makes them suddenly slow down.
• 00:49:410 (1) - This spinner should end on 00:51:519. It matches the music better.
Normal:
Same spinner issue in this diff.
• 00:25:035 (5) - This slider looks sloppy. I cleaned it up for you:
• 01:11:675 (6) - Remove this note to match that tick thing (I really don't know what instrument that is)
• 01:30:660 (1,2,3) - This has a weird feel. It would match the music better if you did this.
• 01:32:535 (5,6,7) - This has a weird play to it. I would substitute it with a slider like this.
• 01:33:706 - This emptiness has a odd feel to it. You could either do this or this.
• 01:49:644 - Why don't you put a break here like you did in the previous part?
• 02:04:878 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - It would flow better if you did this.
Hard:
• 00:38:160 - Get rid of this kiai. It does not match the music well and it's just random.
• 01:16:011 (6,7) - Odd spacing, Move it closer to help the game play.
• 01:27:847 (4) - This slider will trip a lot of people up. First off, it looks like a normal slider when playing it, and it's pretty random.
LoliFlan's Insane:
• 00:16:363 (2,4) - These notes seem off. They give this really strange and awkward game play. Change it to this.
• 01:04:410 (1) - Don't silent the end of the slider. It gives it a weird feel.
• 01:15:894 (8) - The repeat is covered by this note and that is unrankable.
• 01:54:566 (1) - Don't silent the end of the slider. It gives it a weird feel.
• 01:41:910 - This volume is way too low on this section. Bring it up a bit.
• 02:25:972 (1,2,3,4,5) - Confusing spacing. Please fix that.
Overall:
The map can use some work, there is nothing really wrong with it - it just can be a lot better if you get more mods.
A tired ♪star♪
General:
• Please make sure all the preview points are the same. (Normal has a different preview point)
• You have inconsistent epilepsy warning. Please either keep it on for all diffs or turn it off.
• You have inconsistent tags - Please make them match.
• Make sure the kiai times are on a downbeat (On a tick). You'll have an awkward kiai start if you don't
Easy:
• 00:38:160 (1) - I'm sure this will trip some easy players up and it will cause them to over jump the slider, because it makes them suddenly slow down.
• 00:49:410 (1) - This spinner should end on 00:51:519. It matches the music better.
This applies for
• 01:24:566 (4,5) - I don't like the way it makes the player go the opposite direction and disrupts the flow. Change it to something like this.01:34:410 (1) -
02:08:160 (1) -
02:23:160 (1) -
02:08:160 (1) -
02:23:160 (1) -
Normal:
Same spinner issue in this diff.
• 00:25:035 (5) - This slider looks sloppy. I cleaned it up for you:
448,224,25035,2,0,B|308:204|272:304|272:304|248:204|96:224,1,420,0|8• 00:30:191 (5) - The flow could be better on this note. Do something like this.
• 01:11:675 (6) - Remove this note to match that tick thing (I really don't know what instrument that is)
• 01:30:660 (1,2,3) - This has a weird feel. It would match the music better if you did this.
• 01:32:535 (5,6,7) - This has a weird play to it. I would substitute it with a slider like this.
• 01:33:706 - This emptiness has a odd feel to it. You could either do this or this.
• 01:49:644 - Why don't you put a break here like you did in the previous part?
• 02:04:878 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - It would flow better if you did this.
Hard:
• 00:38:160 - Get rid of this kiai. It does not match the music well and it's just random.
• 01:16:011 (6,7) - Odd spacing, Move it closer to help the game play.
• 01:27:847 (4) - This slider will trip a lot of people up. First off, it looks like a normal slider when playing it, and it's pretty random.
LoliFlan's Insane:
• 00:16:363 (2,4) - These notes seem off. They give this really strange and awkward game play. Change it to this.
• 01:04:410 (1) - Don't silent the end of the slider. It gives it a weird feel.
• 01:15:894 (8) - The repeat is covered by this note and that is unrankable.
• 01:54:566 (1) - Don't silent the end of the slider. It gives it a weird feel.
• 01:41:910 - This volume is way too low on this section. Bring it up a bit.
• 02:25:972 (1,2,3,4,5) - Confusing spacing. Please fix that.
Overall:
The map can use some work, there is nothing really wrong with it - it just can be a lot better if you get more mods.
A tired ♪star♪
The first thing before modding: timing must be consistent! So you need to change offset to -1215 on all diffs. Why? Because Flandre's diff has useless red line which doesn't exist on other diffs and might be removed painlessly by using negative offset.
The secong thing before modding: kiai time must be consistent! It affects only your diffs, though, but anyway you should fix kiai on Hard.
All the diffs except Insane
Oh, my post is bad, sorry. I had better ones.
The secong thing before modding: kiai time must be consistent! It affects only your diffs, though, but anyway you should fix kiai on Hard.
All the diffs except Insane
- 00:53:160 — start first break here. To add delay, grab break's beginning which is right after the element before break (cursor will change its shape to <—>) and drag it to the next big white tick. If you do it right, you'll see that part of break changed its colour to turquoise. HP won't be drained in this zone, but please don't overuse this feature.
- 02:23:160 (1) - I would end it on the next big white tick
- 00:04:410 (1) - unsymmetrical, fix it. Use CTRL+H for checking
- 00:23:160 (1,2) - why don't you place them in center and fix symmetry then?
- 00:38:160 (1) - what the? Remove all red joints in center except the only one, then put it exactly on slider tick. Don't forget to make this slider balanced
- 00:49:410 (1) - end it 1/4 later
- 01:28:785 (6) - unsymmetrical, but oh, okay
- 01:30:660 (7) - NC (new combo) should be here, on big white tick
- 01:38:160 (1) - aww, I see copypasta. The same as on 00:04:410
- 02:08:160 (1) - end it 3/4 later?
- 00:25:035 (5,1) - do a better curve! http://puu.sh/fyju
- 00:30:660 (1) - unsymmetrical
- 00:40:738 (4) - I would start slider here until 00:41:441
- 01:23:160 (1,2) - put them actually in center (random notice)
- 01:34:410 (1) - it should be ended 1/2 later, shouldn't it?
- 02:22:456 (3,4) - better add slider instead of these notes
- 00:06:988 (7) - new combo
- 00:37:925 (1) - start new combo on next note, not here
- 01:19:410 (8) - new combo
- 01:40:738 (7) - ^
Please, check your new combo placement. Basically they should be on big white ticks (they mean new part in music), but there can also be small exceptions, like pattern combo or jumps. - 02:21:988 (7) - stack it with prev. slider's end using zero spacing (disable grid first)
Also, you have lot of free space after almost every spinner
- 00:17:300 (4,1) - stack their ends better
- 00:53:160 (1) - add finish to beginning
- 00:54:566 (4) - don't you have claps on N:C1 with that sound? It'll be better if you use them, like.. uh.. here? And in other moments when they appear in music
- 00:57:847 (4) - shouldn't it be right under prev. slider's beginning?
- 01:01:597 (4) - add new combo here to make stream more noticeable
- 01:03:472 (4) - same
- 02:25:972 (1,2,3,4,5) - bad decision, either reduce spacing or change its shape
Some calm parts are overmapped with streams
Oh, my post is bad, sorry. I had better ones.
[general]
change bpm to 128,027
offset 4668
do this first, else the mod will be unaccurate
[insane]
i'm not sure which are resnaps fault, but this way you'll atleast know what messed up after resnapping
01:42:147 (3) - extend(repeat arrow at 01:42:615)
01:43:318 (4) - move to 01:43:396
01:43:670 (5) - move to 01:43:709
01:44:138 (6) - move to 01:44:021 and extend(repeat arrow at 01:44:490)
01:45:193 (7,8) - same as 01:43:318
01:49:645 (3) - same as 00:44:138
01:50:817 (1,2) - same as 01:43:318
01:51:520 (3) - same as 01:44:138
01:52:691 (4) - move to 01:52:808
[hard]
may contain the same resnap issues as insane
[normal]
may contain the same resnap issues as insane
[easy]
-
change bpm to 128,027
offset 4668
do this first, else the mod will be unaccurate
[insane]
i'm not sure which are resnaps fault, but this way you'll atleast know what messed up after resnapping
01:42:147 (3) - extend(repeat arrow at 01:42:615)
01:43:318 (4) - move to 01:43:396
01:43:670 (5) - move to 01:43:709
01:44:138 (6) - move to 01:44:021 and extend(repeat arrow at 01:44:490)
01:45:193 (7,8) - same as 01:43:318
01:49:645 (3) - same as 00:44:138
01:50:817 (1,2) - same as 01:43:318
01:51:520 (3) - same as 01:44:138
01:52:691 (4) - move to 01:52:808
[hard]
may contain the same resnap issues as insane
[normal]
may contain the same resnap issues as insane
[easy]
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Hi there Here is my Mod
General:
- Kia times IMO should be like this for all the difficults
00:23:160 (1) - Start
00:37:691 (4) - Ends
00:38:160 (1) - Start
00:49:410 (1) - Ends
01:56:910 (1) - Start
02:11:441 (1) - End
02:11:910 (1) - Start
02:25:035 (1) - End
- If u don't agree whit the Kia's let the Kia times be the same for all the difficults as you wanna
- Resnap all the timelines in all the difficults
- Remove soft-slidertick and normal-slidertick if u aren't gonna use them
SB:
- Add more effects to this images:
background, background2, background3, beauty.
This will make that the SB gets more noticed for the player
[Easy]
00:08:160 (1) - Add whistle at the begin of the slider
00:10:035 (3) - Move the tail of the slider to x:52 y:336
00:13:785 (4) - Add whsitle at the end of the slider
00:26:910 (1) - The end of the Kia time should be there your timeline its wrong
00:30:660 (1) - Kia time Start there
01:13:785 (3) - Wrong placed time lines in the slider http://puu.sh/fBEP
01:19:410 (1) - ^
01:32:535 (3) - ^
01:10:738 (3) - Remove note for better spread
01:34:410 (1) - End it here 01:36:285 (x)
02:20:347 (2) - Not symetrical
[Normal]
00:11:910 (1) - Add whistle
00:13:785 (4) - Add whistle at the begin of the slider
00:14:722 (5) - Add whistle at the end of the slider
01:45:660 (1) - Add whistle
01:47:535 (4) - Add whistle at the begin of the slider
01:48:472 (5) - Add whistle at the end of the slider
[Hard]
00:33:003 (10) - Add a note whit clap ?
00:34:410 (6) - 00:36:285 (7) Use inheriting sections whit normal-slidertick2 sounds
00:45:074 (4) - Remove note ?
01:37:925 (1) - Add a note
02:07:456 (9) - ^
01:27:847 (4) - Reduce this slider velocity to 0,50 for make a 1/1 slider http://puu.sh/fBKJ
02:11:441 (1) - Add a note
[LoliFlan's Insane]
00:00:398 (1) - Slider begins here 00:00:425 (1)
00:04:148 (1) - Slider begins here 00:04:175 (1)
00:57:847 (4) - Move to x:176 y:216
01:24:566 (1) - Add clap at the begin of the slider
01:26:441 (6) - ^
01:30:191 (5) - ^
01:32:066 (5) - Add clap
02:00:191 (6) - ^
02:06:753 (6) - ^
02:09:566 (5) - ^
02:13:316 (2) - ^
02:14:253 (2) - Add clap at the end of the slider
02:17:066 (6) - Add clap
02:21:753 (8) - Add clap at the begin of the slider
02:24:566 (5) - Add clap
Pretty nice song ! Hope it was helpful
Good Luck! And Star!
General:
- Kia times IMO should be like this for all the difficults
00:23:160 (1) - Start
00:37:691 (4) - Ends
00:38:160 (1) - Start
00:49:410 (1) - Ends
01:56:910 (1) - Start
02:11:441 (1) - End
02:11:910 (1) - Start
02:25:035 (1) - End
- If u don't agree whit the Kia's let the Kia times be the same for all the difficults as you wanna
- Resnap all the timelines in all the difficults
- Remove soft-slidertick and normal-slidertick if u aren't gonna use them
SB:
- Add more effects to this images:
background, background2, background3, beauty.
This will make that the SB gets more noticed for the player
[Easy]
00:08:160 (1) - Add whistle at the begin of the slider
00:10:035 (3) - Move the tail of the slider to x:52 y:336
00:13:785 (4) - Add whsitle at the end of the slider
00:26:910 (1) - The end of the Kia time should be there your timeline its wrong
00:30:660 (1) - Kia time Start there
01:13:785 (3) - Wrong placed time lines in the slider http://puu.sh/fBEP
01:19:410 (1) - ^
01:32:535 (3) - ^
01:10:738 (3) - Remove note for better spread
01:34:410 (1) - End it here 01:36:285 (x)
02:20:347 (2) - Not symetrical
299,213,140347,2,0,B|404:124|472:220,1,200
[Normal]
00:11:910 (1) - Add whistle
00:13:785 (4) - Add whistle at the begin of the slider
00:14:722 (5) - Add whistle at the end of the slider
01:45:660 (1) - Add whistle
01:47:535 (4) - Add whistle at the begin of the slider
01:48:472 (5) - Add whistle at the end of the slider
[Hard]
00:33:003 (10) - Add a note whit clap ?
00:34:410 (6) - 00:36:285 (7) Use inheriting sections whit normal-slidertick2 sounds
00:45:074 (4) - Remove note ?
01:37:925 (1) - Add a note
02:07:456 (9) - ^
01:27:847 (4) - Reduce this slider velocity to 0,50 for make a 1/1 slider http://puu.sh/fBKJ
02:11:441 (1) - Add a note
[LoliFlan's Insane]
00:00:398 (1) - Slider begins here 00:00:425 (1)
00:04:148 (1) - Slider begins here 00:04:175 (1)
00:57:847 (4) - Move to x:176 y:216
01:24:566 (1) - Add clap at the begin of the slider
01:26:441 (6) - ^
01:30:191 (5) - ^
01:32:066 (5) - Add clap
02:00:191 (6) - ^
02:06:753 (6) - ^
02:09:566 (5) - ^
02:13:316 (2) - ^
02:14:253 (2) - Add clap at the end of the slider
02:17:066 (6) - Add clap
02:21:753 (8) - Add clap at the begin of the slider
02:24:566 (5) - Add clap
Pretty nice song ! Hope it was helpful
Good Luck! And Star!
Thanks for the mods, I've changed some things.
Also [Te][Amo] my SB is made for calm musical flow, not effect fountains like some nightcore song.
Download: Akcent feat Edward Maya - That's My Name (Barney Stinson) [LoliFlan's Insane].osu
Also [Te][Amo] my SB is made for calm musical flow, not effect fountains like some nightcore song.
Download: Akcent feat Edward Maya - That's My Name (Barney Stinson) [LoliFlan's Insane].osu
Here's my mod:
SPOILER
Well it's up to you if you'll change these or not, I hope it was at least a bit useful Easy:
00:30:660 (1,2,3) - isn't this too fast for easy? you start off slowly and then it becomes faster suddenly (even if just a little bit)
01:23:628 (1) - he starts singing a little bit earlier 01:23:394, and maybe you could replace these hit circles with a reverse slider
02:06:753 (3) - again too many hit circles after each other, maybe remove 02:06:988 (4) -
02:21:988 (4) - ^
02:08:160 (1) - you could turn down the volume at the end of the spinner, since there isn't too much thing to hear
02:23:160 (1) - ^
Normal:
00:16:128 (6) - maybe you could edit this part instead of a break
00:24:566 (3) - remove hit circle, so it would fit more to the music
00:30:660 (1) - this slider might be too long, you should make it shorter and add some hit circles as well
00:38:160 (1) - ^ and he also starts singing at this part so, you could fit it either to his voice or the beats
00:40:503 (3) - remove hit circle
00:40:738 (4) - remove hit circle, add a slider instead that lasts until 00:41:441
00:41:910 (1) - long slider again
00:44:253 (3) - remove hit circle
00:44:488 (4) - remove hit circle, add a slider instead that lasts until 00:45:191
00:47:066 (6) - you could place this at the centre
00:47:535 (7) - you could place this a bit upper (so it would be kinda symmetric)
00:49:410 (1) - turn down the volume of the end of the spinner
01:09:331 (2) - remove slider
01:09:566 - add hit circle
01:16:831 (3) - remove hit circle
01:16:597 - add hit circle
01:18:941 (1) - start the spinner here (and turn down the volume at the end of it)
02:13:081 (5) - remove hit circle
02:15:894 (2) - add hit circle
02:16:597 (5) - ^
02:16:831 (4) - remove hit circle
02:17:300 (6) - ^
02:17:769 (6) - add hit circle
02:23:160 (1) - turn down the volume of the end of the spinner
Hard:
00:19:410 (2) - isn't the Slider tick rate too high?
00:21:285 (3) - ^
00:24:566 (8) - the timing here doesn't seem to be appropriate, make it more to the music like this, just an example:
00:40:738 (3) - you could use a slider instead that lasts until 00:41:441 (5)
00:41:441 (5) - I think this stream is unnecessary
00:46:128 (2) - this slider is too long
01:16:363 (1) - you should start this slider at 01:16:597, and add a hit circle here 01:16:363
01:18:706 (3) - remove hit circle
01:18:941 (4) - remove hit circle
01:33:706 (1) - turn down the volume at the end of the spinner
02:08:160 (1) - ^
02:23:160 (1) - ^
01:53:160 (2) - isn't the Slider tick rate too high?
01:55:035 (3) - ^
00:30:660 (1,2,3) - isn't this too fast for easy? you start off slowly and then it becomes faster suddenly (even if just a little bit)
01:23:628 (1) - he starts singing a little bit earlier 01:23:394, and maybe you could replace these hit circles with a reverse slider
02:06:753 (3) - again too many hit circles after each other, maybe remove 02:06:988 (4) -
02:21:988 (4) - ^
02:08:160 (1) - you could turn down the volume at the end of the spinner, since there isn't too much thing to hear
02:23:160 (1) - ^
Normal:
00:16:128 (6) - maybe you could edit this part instead of a break
00:24:566 (3) - remove hit circle, so it would fit more to the music
00:30:660 (1) - this slider might be too long, you should make it shorter and add some hit circles as well
00:38:160 (1) - ^ and he also starts singing at this part so, you could fit it either to his voice or the beats
00:40:503 (3) - remove hit circle
00:40:738 (4) - remove hit circle, add a slider instead that lasts until 00:41:441
00:41:910 (1) - long slider again
00:44:253 (3) - remove hit circle
00:44:488 (4) - remove hit circle, add a slider instead that lasts until 00:45:191
00:47:066 (6) - you could place this at the centre
00:47:535 (7) - you could place this a bit upper (so it would be kinda symmetric)
00:49:410 (1) - turn down the volume of the end of the spinner
01:09:331 (2) - remove slider
01:09:566 - add hit circle
01:16:831 (3) - remove hit circle
01:16:597 - add hit circle
01:18:941 (1) - start the spinner here (and turn down the volume at the end of it)
02:13:081 (5) - remove hit circle
02:15:894 (2) - add hit circle
02:16:597 (5) - ^
02:16:831 (4) - remove hit circle
02:17:300 (6) - ^
02:17:769 (6) - add hit circle
02:23:160 (1) - turn down the volume of the end of the spinner
Hard:
00:19:410 (2) - isn't the Slider tick rate too high?
00:21:285 (3) - ^
00:24:566 (8) - the timing here doesn't seem to be appropriate, make it more to the music like this, just an example:
00:40:738 (3) - you could use a slider instead that lasts until 00:41:441 (5)
00:41:441 (5) - I think this stream is unnecessary
00:46:128 (2) - this slider is too long
01:16:363 (1) - you should start this slider at 01:16:597, and add a hit circle here 01:16:363
01:18:706 (3) - remove hit circle
01:18:941 (4) - remove hit circle
01:33:706 (1) - turn down the volume at the end of the spinner
02:08:160 (1) - ^
02:23:160 (1) - ^
01:53:160 (2) - isn't the Slider tick rate too high?
01:55:035 (3) - ^
[General]
Offset is too early, i got about +8~10, better to ask timing expert
Sun image is too large
Use same count and length of breaks in all difficulties
Use same count and length of kiai sections
[Insane]
Disliked a lot overmapping, a LOT, please do not overmap next time.
00:54:097 (2,3,4,5) - keep consistency in spacing
01:22:691 (5) - unexpected slowdown.
02:00:425 (7) - overlaps hp bar
02:17:300 (7,8) - hidden slider arrow, second arrow because of hit burst from '7'
[Hard]
Why Hard difficulty has same velocity as on Insane?
Why did you overmap? ._.
01:23:394 (1,2,3) - one word, just one word: WHY
[Normal]
I disliked a lot these kind of patterns: 00:28:316 (2,3,4) - 00:36:050 (3,4) - 01:14:956 (4,5,6,1,2) - 01:25:035 (2,3,4) - 01:56:910 (1,2,3) - etc
Your tried to make symmetry, but it's obvious that you were doing this according on self scale, read a special guide how to make them. viewtopic.php?f=56&t=37194&hilit=delicious this could make process easier and much better.
01:32:886 (7) - not blue notes on normal.
All what i said above is related with easy difficulty too. Good luck
Offset is too early, i got about +8~10, better to ask timing expert
Sun image is too large
Use same count and length of breaks in all difficulties
Use same count and length of kiai sections
[Insane]
Disliked a lot overmapping, a LOT, please do not overmap next time.
00:54:097 (2,3,4,5) - keep consistency in spacing
01:22:691 (5) - unexpected slowdown.
02:00:425 (7) - overlaps hp bar
02:17:300 (7,8) - hidden slider arrow, second arrow because of hit burst from '7'
[Hard]
Why Hard difficulty has same velocity as on Insane?
Why did you overmap? ._.
01:23:394 (1,2,3) - one word, just one word: WHY
[Normal]
I disliked a lot these kind of patterns: 00:28:316 (2,3,4) - 00:36:050 (3,4) - 01:14:956 (4,5,6,1,2) - 01:25:035 (2,3,4) - 01:56:910 (1,2,3) - etc
Your tried to make symmetry, but it's obvious that you were doing this according on self scale, read a special guide how to make them. viewtopic.php?f=56&t=37194&hilit=delicious this could make process easier and much better.
01:32:886 (7) - not blue notes on normal.
All what i said above is related with easy difficulty too. Good luck
Thanks for the mod ^^Louis Cyphre wrote:
[General]
Sun image is too large sun aint small anyway
[Insane]
Disliked a lot overmapping, a LOT, please do not overmap next time. kk
02:00:425 (7) - overlaps hp bar bitch please xD
02:17:300 (7,8) - hidden slider arrow, second arrow because of hit burst from '7' changed pattern a bit, deal with it
Download: Akcent feat Edward Maya - That's My Name (Barney Stinson) [LoliFlan's Insane].osu
Requested Taiko guest diff. finished. Hope you like it.
Tuto completo compadre! (or so? haha)
The SB is really nice, but please delete it in the Taiko diff. since it interrupts taiko players.
Also please add my name into the TAG's so I can check your newest updates~
Good SB and osu! diff's. Also nice song, so I will leave a star here, too. o/
Download: Akcent feat Edward Maya - That's My Name (Barney Stinson) [Ono's Taiko Oni].osu
Tuto completo compadre! (or so? haha)
The SB is really nice, but please delete it in the Taiko diff. since it interrupts taiko players.
Also please add my name into the TAG's so I can check your newest updates~
Good SB and osu! diff's. Also nice song, so I will leave a star here, too. o/
Download: Akcent feat Edward Maya - That's My Name (Barney Stinson) [Ono's Taiko Oni].osu
hi~
#Mod req
mod4mod~
General
・please disble count down.
・Insane's kiai time shifted. set for end kiai time 00:51:285 & 2:25:035
・Music Trac Lead-in 1 sec
・Display storybord in front of combo fire -->out check for Easy & Normal
・display epilepsy warning -->out check for Easy & Normal
Easy
・01:26:910 (1) - 1grid up 1 grid right
・02:02:535 (4) - ^
・02:03:003 (5) - 1 grid right
・02:16:597 (2) - spacing
Normal
・00:33:238 (3) - spacing
・00:34:410 (1) - plz follow DS.
・01:12:378 (1) - ^
・01:26:206 (3,4) - spacing
・02:18:238 (9,10) - ^
・02:22:456 (3) - ^
Hard
・set AR 6
・set Drain 6 or 5
・set OD 6 or 5
・00:48:706 (1,2) - Since timing is incomprehensible, please use a slider.
・02:22:456 (8,9) - ^
Insane
looks good :3
#Mod req
mod4mod~
General
・please disble count down.
・Insane's kiai time shifted. set for end kiai time 00:51:285 & 2:25:035
・Music Trac Lead-in 1 sec
・Display storybord in front of combo fire -->out check for Easy & Normal
・display epilepsy warning -->out check for Easy & Normal
Easy
・01:26:910 (1) - 1grid up 1 grid right
・02:02:535 (4) - ^
・02:03:003 (5) - 1 grid right
・02:16:597 (2) - spacing
Normal
・00:33:238 (3) - spacing
・00:34:410 (1) - plz follow DS.
・01:12:378 (1) - ^
・01:26:206 (3,4) - spacing
・02:18:238 (9,10) - ^
・02:22:456 (3) - ^
Hard
・set AR 6
・set Drain 6 or 5
・set OD 6 or 5
・00:48:706 (1,2) - Since timing is incomprehensible, please use a slider.
・02:22:456 (8,9) - ^
Insane
looks good :3
Insane:
01:45:308 - Maybe a note here? Or something.. It feels so weird here because you are following a 3/4 rhytmn and then suddenly go back into a 1/2 rhytmn. Either make 01:45:425 (1) - 3/4 as well or change the spacing on 01:43:081 (4,5,7,1) - Becuase they make this part feel awkward
Normal:
00:23:132 - Resnap kiai timing on downbeat
Thats all really. Easy mapset lol
01:45:308 - Maybe a note here? Or something.. It feels so weird here because you are following a 3/4 rhytmn and then suddenly go back into a 1/2 rhytmn. Either make 01:45:425 (1) - 3/4 as well or change the spacing on 01:43:081 (4,5,7,1) - Becuase they make this part feel awkward
Normal:
00:23:132 - Resnap kiai timing on downbeat
Thats all really. Easy mapset lol
M4M Request form #modreqs~
[General]
-Disable Countdown,It is unnecessary.
-Inconsistent "epilepsy warning" and "storyboard in front of combo fire",Easy/Normal with Hard/Insane is not same.
[Easy]
-AR+1,I think current is too show for me.
00:49:410 (1) - Move end to 00:51:285,like normal and hard.
00:53:160 - End kiai here,and move the break to here.
01:53:160 (1) - Move end to 01:56:441.
02:05:347 (2) - Delete,then copy 02:03:472 (6),and paste here,then Ctal+r and Ctrl+H.
[Normal]
-AR+1,I think current is too show for me.
00:12:378 (2,3) - Spacing
00:25:035 (3,1) - ^
00:53:160 - End kiai here,and move the break to here.
01:11:910 (6,1) - Spacing.
[Hard]
-HP Drain Rate-2,Because Insane is useing HP7.
-OD-1
00:34:410 (6,7) - Spacing.
00:53:160 - End kiai here.and move the break to here.
01:16:128 (7,1) - too big spacing imo.
01:18:941 (4,5,6) - Spacing.
01:24:331 (4) - 1 grid left
[Insane]
00:38:160 - Start kiai here.
02:11:910 - Start kiai here.
02:26:910 - End kiai here.
[Ono's Taiko Oni]
-Awesome!
I like the song and Insane diff(I love those jump),Good luck for Ranking!
[General]
-Disable Countdown,It is unnecessary.
-Inconsistent "epilepsy warning" and "storyboard in front of combo fire",Easy/Normal with Hard/Insane is not same.
[Easy]
-AR+1,I think current is too show for me.
00:49:410 (1) - Move end to 00:51:285,like normal and hard.
00:53:160 - End kiai here,and move the break to here.
01:53:160 (1) - Move end to 01:56:441.
02:05:347 (2) - Delete,then copy 02:03:472 (6),and paste here,then Ctal+r and Ctrl+H.
[Normal]
-AR+1,I think current is too show for me.
00:12:378 (2,3) - Spacing
00:25:035 (3,1) - ^
00:53:160 - End kiai here,and move the break to here.
01:11:910 (6,1) - Spacing.
[Hard]
-HP Drain Rate-2,Because Insane is useing HP7.
-OD-1
00:34:410 (6,7) - Spacing.
00:53:160 - End kiai here.and move the break to here.
01:16:128 (7,1) - too big spacing imo.
01:18:941 (4,5,6) - Spacing.
01:24:331 (4) - 1 grid left
[Insane]
00:38:160 - Start kiai here.
02:11:910 - Start kiai here.
02:26:910 - End kiai here.
[Ono's Taiko Oni]
-Awesome!
I like the song and Insane diff(I love those jump),Good luck for Ranking!
all suggestions~
all
check http://puu.sh/ijoO , its different on all diffs
easy
00:49:410 (1) - end at 00:51:285 ?
00:51:285 - 17s break ?! are you sure 0.0?
01:23:160 - add note ?
01:41:910 (1,2,3) - change the rhythm ?! like this http://puu.sh/ijis
normal
00:51:285 -
02:22:456 (3) - end at 02:22:691 or 02:22:925 ?
hard
00:48:706 (1,2) - change the rhythm ?! http://puu.sh/ijkI
break
01:42:378 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - change the rhythm ?! http://puu.sh/ijlF
01:52:925 (1,2,3,1) - spacing , (2) end at 01:54:800 ?
02:05:816 (3,4) - spacing ?
02:22:456 (8,9) - http://puu.sh/ijmM
insane
map is fine , just dont like soft hitsound , a bit low for me
all
check http://puu.sh/ijoO , its different on all diffs
easy
00:49:410 (1) - end at 00:51:285 ?
00:51:285 - 17s break ?! are you sure 0.0?
01:23:160 - add note ?
01:41:910 (1,2,3) - change the rhythm ?! like this http://puu.sh/ijis
normal
00:51:285 -
02:22:456 (3) - end at 02:22:691 or 02:22:925 ?
hard
00:48:706 (1,2) - change the rhythm ?! http://puu.sh/ijkI
break
01:42:378 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - change the rhythm ?! http://puu.sh/ijlF
01:52:925 (1,2,3,1) - spacing , (2) end at 01:54:800 ?
02:05:816 (3,4) - spacing ?
02:22:456 (8,9) - http://puu.sh/ijmM
insane
map is fine , just dont like soft hitsound , a bit low for me
[Generale]
- Consiglio di schiarire i colori del verde e del viola.
- - [Ono's Taiko Oni] : Leadin 2000 e non 0.
- - [Ono's Taiko Oni] : metti il Countdown?
- - [Ono's Taiko Oni] : metti LetterboxInBreaks?
- EpilepsyWarning in Normal e Insane?
- Kiai inconsistente: http://puu.sh/iEdf
[Easy] - Unsnapped inherited timing points a: 00:44:460 - 01:59:108 - 02:06:280.
- 00:49:410 (1) - Fine dello spinner su 00:52:691 ?
- 01:38:160 (1) - New combo.
[Normal] - 00:49:410 (1) - Fine dello spinner su 00:52:691 ?
- 00:53:160 (1) - Magari ci aggiungi anche una nota qua.
- 01:38:160 (1) - New combo.
- 02:04:410 (8) - New combo.
- 02:04:644 (9) - Aggiungi una nota qui?
- 02:04:878 (1) - Togli new combo.
- 02:19:410 (10) - ^ Tutti i 3 passaggi.
[Hard] - OD-1 ; HP-2, è TROPPO alto.
- 00:28:316 (1) - Togli new combo? lol.
- 00:48:706 (1,2) - Non sono d'accordo su queste due note, se le vuoi per forza sul tick blue, fai uno slider.
- 00:49:410 (1) - Stessa roba di prima.
- 02:04:410 (7) - New combo.
- 02:04:878 (1) - Togli new combo.
- 02:22:456 (8,9) - Stessa cosa, + aggiungi new combo su (1) come hai fatto prima.
[Insane] - Too many new combos imo but w/e.
- 00:23:160 (1) - New combo
- 00:53:160 (1) - Raise a bit the volume of the hitsounds.
- 01:56:675 (1) - New combo
irc
21:56 <senaya> : slider stuff
21:57 <Barney Stinson> : what diff?
21:57 <senaya> : in normal
21:57 <senaya> : in sliders like
21:57 <senaya> : 00:25:035 (3) -
21:58 <senaya> : and 00:28:785 (3) -
21:58 <senaya> : why not make red joint follow the beat?
21:58 <Barney Stinson> : ??
21:58 <senaya> : i'll try to explain
21:59 <senaya> : 00:25:035 (3) - move red joint to 00:25:503
21:59 <senaya> : when you can hear the drum beat
21:59 <senaya> : maybe like this http://puu.sh/j2jp or you can think of another shape
22:00 <Barney Stinson> : I don't really like that kind of shape
22:00 <senaya> : then what about red joint at beat?
22:00 <Barney Stinson> : hmm explain better
22:01 <senaya> : ok, lets take a shorter one
22:01 <senaya> : for example this one 00:28:785 (3) -
22:01 <senaya> : forget the shape for now
22:02 <senaya> : just try moving red join of this slider
22:02 <senaya> : into the slider tick circle
22:02 <senaya> : to match drum beat
22:02 <Barney Stinson> : oh I understand now
22:02 <senaya> : \:D/
22:03 <senaya> : do you tihnk it fits better?
22:03 <Barney Stinson> : not bad!
22:03 <Barney Stinson> : but in shorter sliders
22:05 <senaya> : fix those where it fits i guess. they are already there, you just have to adjust hte shape. i'm not telling you to make all of them like that
22:05 <senaya> :
22:05 <Barney Stinson> : ok
22:05 <Barney Stinson> : what about hard/insane?
22:05 <senaya> : they are ok in terms of playing just one thing in hard
22:06 <senaya> : 00:06:988 (7) - you don't use nc here
22:06 <senaya> : 00:14:488 (1) - you use nc here
22:06 <senaya> : but it's like relly similar parts in music
22:06 <senaya> : kinda lacks consistency
22:08 <senaya> : and you use nc everywhere at that point
22:08 <senaya> : ecept for the first combo that i mentioned and at 01:40:738 (7) -
22:08 <Barney Stinson> : ok
22:11 <senaya> : i guess that's it. everything seems readable
21:57 <Barney Stinson> : what diff?
21:57 <senaya> : in normal
21:57 <senaya> : in sliders like
21:57 <senaya> : 00:25:035 (3) -
21:58 <senaya> : and 00:28:785 (3) -
21:58 <senaya> : why not make red joint follow the beat?
21:58 <Barney Stinson> : ??
21:58 <senaya> : i'll try to explain
21:59 <senaya> : 00:25:035 (3) - move red joint to 00:25:503
21:59 <senaya> : when you can hear the drum beat
21:59 <senaya> : maybe like this http://puu.sh/j2jp or you can think of another shape
22:00 <Barney Stinson> : I don't really like that kind of shape
22:00 <senaya> : then what about red joint at beat?
22:00 <Barney Stinson> : hmm explain better
22:01 <senaya> : ok, lets take a shorter one
22:01 <senaya> : for example this one 00:28:785 (3) -
22:01 <senaya> : forget the shape for now
22:02 <senaya> : just try moving red join of this slider
22:02 <senaya> : into the slider tick circle
22:02 <senaya> : to match drum beat
22:02 <Barney Stinson> : oh I understand now
22:02 <senaya> : \:D/
22:03 <senaya> : do you tihnk it fits better?
22:03 <Barney Stinson> : not bad!
22:03 <Barney Stinson> : but in shorter sliders
22:05 <senaya> : fix those where it fits i guess. they are already there, you just have to adjust hte shape. i'm not telling you to make all of them like that
22:05 <senaya> :
22:05 <Barney Stinson> : ok
22:05 <Barney Stinson> : what about hard/insane?
22:05 <senaya> : they are ok in terms of playing just one thing in hard
22:06 <senaya> : 00:06:988 (7) - you don't use nc here
22:06 <senaya> : 00:14:488 (1) - you use nc here
22:06 <senaya> : but it's like relly similar parts in music
22:06 <senaya> : kinda lacks consistency
22:08 <senaya> : and you use nc everywhere at that point
22:08 <senaya> : ecept for the first combo that i mentioned and at 01:40:738 (7) -
22:08 <Barney Stinson> : ok
22:11 <senaya> : i guess that's it. everything seems readable
uh cant get at all what says here, but taiko needs lead in when the map starts suddenly, almost always must have lead in, taiko players need to put the hands on keyboard xD the countdown is unnecesary and letterbox tooMaddy wrote:
- - [Ono's Taiko Oni] : Leadin 2000 e non 0.
- - [Ono's Taiko Oni] : metti il Countdown?
- - [Ono's Taiko Oni] : metti LetterboxInBreaks?
General
Easy
Looks alright to me.
LoliFlan's Insane
- feat must have a period after the t. It should come out as feat. In order to fix that, follow this forum.
- Remove the lead-in time from Easy, Normal and Ono's Taiko Oni. This function isn't really being used when I test played those 3 difficulties.
- Can't have slider ticks being silent while the slider slide is also silent. That's unrankable. You can either keep the slider slide silent but you got remove the normal-slidertick that is silent or you can keep the slider ticks silent but you got to remove the normal-sliderslide and normal-sliderslide2.
Easy
- 01:56:910 (1)-Would sound great if you added a finish on the beginning.
- 01:38:160 (1)-This slider after spinner is missing a new combo. Please fix that.
- 02:11:910 (1)-Consider adding a finish on the beginning
- 01:38:160 (1)-This slider after spinner is missing a new combo. Please fix that.
- 01:56:910 (1)-Would sound great if you added a finish on the beginning.
- 02:11:910 (1)-Perhaps add a finish here?
- 01:56:910 (1)-Would sound great if there was a finish here.
- 02:11:910 (2)-^
Looks alright to me.
LoliFlan's Insane
- 00:23:160 (1)-This slider after spinner is missing a new combo. Please fix that.
- 01:56:675 (1)-Would sound great if you added a finish on the reverse arrow. Also, this slider after spinner is missing a new combo. Please fix that.
- 02:11:675 (1)-Perhaps add a finish on the beginning?
Mercurial
Derp
Deserving a post as a Mod post :3
Hi Barney.
Easy
02:06:285 (2,3): Nazi That circle could be spaced as 02:03:003 (5,6)
02:23:160 (Spin): Could be more larger, until 02:26:910
02:23:160 (Spin): Could be more larger, until 02:26:910
Normal
00:45:660 (1,2,3,4,5): I find it too harder for normal players... you can try deleting the first 3 circles and put a kickback slider.
02:23:160 (Spin): Could be more larger, until 02:26:910
02:23:160 (Spin): Could be more larger, until 02:26:910
Hard
01:16:011 (6,7): New Combo
02:23:160 (Spin): Could be more larger, until 02:26:910
02:23:160 (Spin): Could be more larger, until 02:26:910
Nothing in insane :3
Good Luck Barney :3
ASEFIU WVEJHI9TGJWRH9IGWNH MY INSAAAANE IS EPIC I AAM KINGGGGGG =A= =A= =A= ;A;
im calm =w=
im calm =w=
Heey o/
Kenezz's Bakamod~
General
Kenezz's Bakamod~
General
- Change the artist, this should be are "Akcent feat. Edward Maya", to avoid a duplicate follow this forum.
- Check the kiais and fix the inconsistency: http://puu.sh/lxv2
- 00:23:160 (1) - Whistle or finish like Hard and Insane, imo the finish are best and if you agree with the finish change it in hard, insane instead whistle.
- 00:25:035 (2) - Okay, a aesthetic suggestion, make this slider symmetric to (1), if you agree fix the spacing of the next slider/circles. This is only to avoid the overlap at the end of (2) http://puu.sh/ljXJ and be consistent with the start http://puu.sh/ljYz.
- 00:43:785 (2) - Two grids to down, fix the spacing of the next circle if you agree.
- 00:49:410 (1) - This spinner should be end 1/2 before like normal/hard and the kiai time too.
- 01:13:316 (2,3) - A bit nazi, move this one grid to up, check the spacing of (2).
- 01:20:816 (2) - And here one grid to the right.
- 02:06:753 (3) - Same, check the spacing
- Nice diff only check the spacing of those beats, not is a big problem but mantain the consistence.
- 00:33:941 (6,1) - Fix the spacing.
- 01:12:378 (1) - The space here is a bit close, maybe move the circle a bit.
- 01:15:425 (5,6) - Aesthetic suggestion: try Ctrl+H and after fix the spacing of the next notes, this only to ovoid the agglomeration of the circles in the center. http://puu.sh/lujU http://puu.sh/lukG
- 01:26:910 (1) - Imo the overlap here looks ugly http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/269938 maybe try to move to down with other slider art or some to avoid the overlapped.
- 02:02:066 (4) - Okay only here I'll be nazi with your slider art, move the 5th control point symmetrical like the first http://puu.sh/luqH, after move the next circle at the center of the Y axis.
- 02:04:410 (7) - Start the new combo here and no in 02:04:878 (1).
- 00:28:316 (1) - Maybe remove the new combo.
- 00:36:285 (7) - Really the antijump here doesn't fits, try Ctrl+J, if you agree fix the spacing of the next beats.
- 01:03:472 (1,2,3,4,5) - Move this pattern a bit to the left like the before pattern and avoid the overlap with the slider http://puu.sh/lxsV http://puu.sh/lxtb.
- Oh well the combos are too short and really is needless, maybe try to fix it.
hi
[General]
spinnerbonus.wav and spinnerspin.wav mustn't be 0kb , change them to the 44b files plz
enable "Display epilepsy warning" in taiko diff?
kiai time is different in each diff , I suggest make it the same in all diffs
[Easy]
I suggest HD-1 , AR+1
00:30:660 (1,2,3) - change to sldier plz , this is too hard to play as Easy diff
00:46:128 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - ^ , here is to 2 sldiers
01:20:816 (2) - ctrl+1 , 2 gird up
01:23:628 (1,2,3) - change to sldier , and I ignored same issues from now , plz check the same pattern yourself
[Normal]
00:33:003 (2,3) - chagne this to sldier , or this is too hard to play as a Normal diff
00:33:941 (6,1) - don't jump in Normal diff , at least don't jump too huge
00:45:660 (1,2) - same issue here
01:17:535 (5,6,7,8) - I suggest change to 2 sliders , or it is kinda hard to play
02:11:910 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:16:831 (4,5,6,7) - ^
[Hard]
01:11:675 (6,7) - I don't know why jump here , don't fit the song at all.. and it play really odd to me
01:16:128 (7,1) - ^
[LoliFlan's Insane]
00:40:972 (2) - this slider's direction make it hard to read how many time it repeat.. change a direction?
that's all
good luck o.o
[General]
spinnerbonus.wav and spinnerspin.wav mustn't be 0kb , change them to the 44b files plz
enable "Display epilepsy warning" in taiko diff?
kiai time is different in each diff , I suggest make it the same in all diffs
[Easy]
I suggest HD-1 , AR+1
00:30:660 (1,2,3) - change to sldier plz , this is too hard to play as Easy diff
00:46:128 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - ^ , here is to 2 sldiers
01:20:816 (2) - ctrl+1 , 2 gird up
01:23:628 (1,2,3) - change to sldier , and I ignored same issues from now , plz check the same pattern yourself
[Normal]
00:33:003 (2,3) - chagne this to sldier , or this is too hard to play as a Normal diff
00:33:941 (6,1) - don't jump in Normal diff , at least don't jump too huge
00:45:660 (1,2) - same issue here
01:17:535 (5,6,7,8) - I suggest change to 2 sliders , or it is kinda hard to play
02:11:910 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:16:831 (4,5,6,7) - ^
[Hard]
01:11:675 (6,7) - I don't know why jump here , don't fit the song at all.. and it play really odd to me
01:16:128 (7,1) - ^
[LoliFlan's Insane]
00:40:972 (2) - this slider's direction make it hard to read how many time it repeat.. change a direction?
that's all
good luck o.o
General
00:33:941 (3,4,1) - purple circle very hard to read on purple part of bg.
01:04:410 (1) - add whistle
01:28:550 (2) - better replace nc from previous note to here
01:32:066 (5) - add nc
01:35:933 (3) - remove this note, it follows nothing
02:26:675 (1) - better make louder and add finish to the end
Hard
00:48:706 (1) - imo, rhythm will be better in this way:
(you have to replace spinner on 4/1 later and add some notes/sliders) :
01:20:347 (7) - better ctrl+r
01:21:285 (1) - and nope again. make it 1/1 shorter and try this (ofc hitsounds, as example, add finish to the spinner) :
01:33:706 (1) - spinner from nowhere and ends nowhere too, better remap it
01:40:738 (7) - add nc here like here : 01:48:238 (1) - ? and in all same place with long combos too
02:08:160 (1) - same about strange spinner
02:23:160 (1) - ^ no need to end it on special place. make end of spinner in correct place, don't break vocal
Normal
00:04:527 - useless section. remove
<here i grasped that tickrate2 would sound and look cool. these claps/double claps sound interesting for me>
00:49:410 (1) - strange spinner
02:02:066 (4) - unsymmetrical >, <
02:19:410 (10) - combo 10 is too high for normal diff
02:23:160 (1) - strange spinner (well,well for me ofc), i won't speak about it anymore
Easy
HP-1, AR+1 imo
maybe tickrate 2 too
nothing serious here, only too many copy-paste patterns.
- Firstly, turn off letterboxes. why? look:
- Use same kiai time in LoliFlan's Insane please
no normal-whistles? i'll kill youu.ui could show how awesome they can be in my diff, but too late,lol~
00:33:941 (3,4,1) - purple circle very hard to read on purple part of bg.
01:04:410 (1) - add whistle
01:28:550 (2) - better replace nc from previous note to here
01:32:066 (5) - add nc
01:35:933 (3) - remove this note, it follows nothing
02:26:675 (1) - better make louder and add finish to the end
Hard
00:48:706 (1) - imo, rhythm will be better in this way:
(you have to replace spinner on 4/1 later and add some notes/sliders) :
01:20:347 (7) - better ctrl+r
01:21:285 (1) - and nope again. make it 1/1 shorter and try this (ofc hitsounds, as example, add finish to the spinner) :
01:33:706 (1) - spinner from nowhere and ends nowhere too, better remap it
01:40:738 (7) - add nc here like here : 01:48:238 (1) - ? and in all same place with long combos too
02:08:160 (1) - same about strange spinner
02:23:160 (1) - ^ no need to end it on special place. make end of spinner in correct place, don't break vocal
Normal
00:04:527 - useless section. remove
<here i grasped that tickrate2 would sound and look cool. these claps/double claps sound interesting for me>
00:49:410 (1) - strange spinner
02:02:066 (4) - unsymmetrical >, <
02:19:410 (10) - combo 10 is too high for normal diff
02:23:160 (1) - strange spinner (well,well for me ofc), i won't speak about it anymore
Easy
HP-1, AR+1 imo
maybe tickrate 2 too
nothing serious here, only too many copy-paste patterns.
Storyboard
Add a bit more fade to beatmap.png and storyboard.png, it looks really stiff when they just suddenly appear like that.
[LoliFlan's Insane]
00:37:925 (1) - Maybe lower the second square by 3-4 grids? (fix the stacking also if you do this)
00:40:035 (1) - Like this? http://puu.sh/ofbA
01:03:472 (1,2,3,4,5) - Move these right so they don't overlap with the previous slider
01:32:066 (5) - New combo
01:36:050 (4,5) - Make these symmetrical, looks much better that way http://puu.sh/ofdW
02:12:613 (1) - Remove new combo
[Hard]
00:06:988 (7) - New combo
00:46:128 (2) - Move one grid left and down
01:13:785 (8) - New combo and remove the next new combo
01:19:410 (6,7) - This jump was a bit sudden to me, maybe make it a bit smaller?
01:40:738 (7) - New combo
01:58:785 (7) - New combo, 02:00:191 (1) - Remove new combo, 02:00:894 (9) - New combo, 02:01:597 (1) - Remove new combo
02:04:410 (7) - New combo, 02:04:878 (1) - Remove new combo and 02:06:519 (6) - new combo
[Normal]
00:22:456 - Change this timing section to soft hitsounds
00:36:285 (3) - Move this so that it doesn't overlap with the previous slider.
01:12:613 (2) - Why you didn't silence this slidertick when you did so with all other sliders in this part?
01:14:956 (4,5,6) - Move these 3 grids up
01:17:535 (5) - Maybe new combo?
01:56:206 - Change timing section to soft hitsounds
01:56:910 (1) - This would look much better centered. Try moving the whole combo to right.
02:25:035 - Soft hitsounds again
[Easy]
Same thing about soft hitsounds at silenced spinner ends.
That's all. :3
Add a bit more fade to beatmap.png and storyboard.png, it looks really stiff when they just suddenly appear like that.
[LoliFlan's Insane]
00:37:925 (1) - Maybe lower the second square by 3-4 grids? (fix the stacking also if you do this)
00:40:035 (1) - Like this? http://puu.sh/ofbA
01:03:472 (1,2,3,4,5) - Move these right so they don't overlap with the previous slider
01:32:066 (5) - New combo
01:36:050 (4,5) - Make these symmetrical, looks much better that way http://puu.sh/ofdW
02:12:613 (1) - Remove new combo
[Hard]
00:06:988 (7) - New combo
00:46:128 (2) - Move one grid left and down
01:13:785 (8) - New combo and remove the next new combo
01:19:410 (6,7) - This jump was a bit sudden to me, maybe make it a bit smaller?
01:40:738 (7) - New combo
01:58:785 (7) - New combo, 02:00:191 (1) - Remove new combo, 02:00:894 (9) - New combo, 02:01:597 (1) - Remove new combo
02:04:410 (7) - New combo, 02:04:878 (1) - Remove new combo and 02:06:519 (6) - new combo
[Normal]
00:22:456 - Change this timing section to soft hitsounds
00:36:285 (3) - Move this so that it doesn't overlap with the previous slider.
01:12:613 (2) - Why you didn't silence this slidertick when you did so with all other sliders in this part?
01:14:956 (4,5,6) - Move these 3 grids up
01:17:535 (5) - Maybe new combo?
01:56:206 - Change timing section to soft hitsounds
01:56:910 (1) - This would look much better centered. Try moving the whole combo to right.
02:25:035 - Soft hitsounds again
[Easy]
Same thing about soft hitsounds at silenced spinner ends.
That's all. :3
my too short message here
star~
rank it! faster! i love this song and map :3
star~
rank it! faster! i love this song and map :3
-Bakari- wrote:
rank it! faster!
Hello,
[General]
It had a 0kb file. I don't sure but I remember it's unrank.
spinnerbonus.wavIt had a 2 .osb. Delete one and Full submit.
spinnerspin.wav
Akcent feat Edward Maya - That's My Name (Barney Stinson).osbInconsistency Tags
Akcent feat. Edward Maya - That's My Name (Barney Stinson).osb
Lolicore Flandre OnosakiHito HellDawn
Lolicore Flandre OnosakiHito HellDawn
Lolicore Flandre OnosakiHito HellDawn
Lolicore Flandre OnosakiHito
Lolicore Flandre OnosakiHito HellDawn
[Easy]
00:08:160 (1) - [Layout] Do not stack with different colors, new players can not adapt, it will lead to a new player confusion.
00:46:363 (3) - [rhythm] Some hard for new player. I think delete it better.
00:47:769 (2) - [rhythm] ^
01:23:863 (2) - [rhythm] ^
01:38:160 (1) - [Hitsound] Finish instead at beginner?
02:06:753 (3) - [Layout] Wrong distance.
02:11:910 - [Setting] Useless Inherited point
02:16:597 (2) - [Layout] Wrong distance. Why put 0.86x of distance
02:20:347 (2) - [Layout] Same problem with 00:08:160 (1)
[HellDawn's Normal]
00:19:410 (1) - [Layout] Asymmetric. You can see if you click a Ctrl+H. Move last point → 1 Grid. And add a point in the middle like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/303800. This can help you control your time but not break the symmetry.
00:23:628 (1,2,3) - [Layout] Why do not put these things in the middle??
00:50:347 (3) - [Layout] Don't good looking.
01:08:160 (1) - [Layout] Asymmetric. Use a Ctrl+H and put the point completely to symmetric. Last move a middle point.
01:10:035 (2,3,4) - [Layout] Wrong distane? Put it 0.84x of distance
01:23:160 (1) - [Layout] Same problem with 01:08:160 (1)
01:25:035 (3) - [rhythm] Add a reverse a delete the 01:25:738 (4). Because very hard for new player.
01:30:191 (4) - [Layout] No stack. because you make a stack when it's 1/1 beat like 00:09:566 (1) or 00:11:441 (4). It is difficult to judge is 1/1 or 1/2
01:57:378 (1,2,3) - [Layout] Same with 00:23:628 (1,2,3)
02:08:628 (1) - [Layout] Same problem with 01:08:160 (1)
[Hard]
00:34:410 - [Setting] Overlap inherited point
00:41:558 (6) - [rhythm] Delete it fit the rhythm.
00:49:058 (2) - [rhythm] Move to 00:49:175
00:51:285 - [Setting] Useless inherited point
01:27:847 (4) - [Layout] Why make a worm here? Weird and don't fit the sound. Use straight line pls.
01:34:058 (2) - [rhythm] Move to 01:34:175
02:04:878 (1) - [Hitsound] Clap at beginner
02:05:816 (3) - [Hitsound] ^
02:06:753 (6) - [Hitsound] Clap
02:07:456 (1) - [rhythm] Move to 02:07:222 and instead.
02:07:925 () - [rhythm] Add note
02:22:808 (9) - [rhythm] Move to 02:22:925
[LoliFlan's Insane]
00:18:238 (6) - [Layout] Move a third point to X:300 Y:224 and stack with 00:17:300 (4) at beginner completely
00:18:941 (8) - [Layout] Stack 00:18:238 (6) at end completely
00:23:160 (1) - [Hitsound] Finish instead at beginner
00:38:160 (1) - [Hitsound] Finish at reverse
00:45:660 (2) - [Hitsound] Finish?
00:53:160 - [Setting] Useless inherited point
01:35:581 (1) - [rhythm] Follow the rhythm better: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/303841
01:38:863 (1) - [Layout] I suggest Remove NC If there is no special reason.
01:39:800 (1) - [Layout] ^
01:40:738 (1) - [Layout] ^
01:43:433 (5) - [rhythm] I don't sure the rhythm but I think move to 01:43:316 will be more comfortable.
01:48:238 (1,2,3,4) - [Layout] Make it square? It's so easy. Copy 01:48:238 (1) and use a Ctrl+> 3 times
01:50:933 (2) - [rhythm] Same with 01:43:433 (5)
01:52:925 - [Setting] Useless inherited point
02:16:128 (1) - [Hitsound] Clap at end
Try to add more Clap to use this method:http://puu.sh/q20x
Good Luck~
LOL
Hi, Barney Stinson. It's M4M time! No, Ch1ka, no!
[General]
Hard and LoliFlan's Insane has Audio LeadIn 2, but other diffs hasn't.
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
Add kiai in HellDawn's Normal: starts on 00:30:660; ends on 00:34:410.
Fix kiai time in LoliFlan's Insane, it's not similar with other diffs.
[Easy]
00:47:535 (1,2,3) - make it more symmetrical with 00:46:128 (2,3,4) -
[HellDawn's Normal]
Why so "withouthitsounds"?
(nazi) 00:10:035 (3) - not perfectly symmetrical.
00:24:566 (1) - ^
00:30:660 (1) - ^
00:43:785 (1) - ^
01:33:941 (1,2) - Wrong rhythm. Something like this?
[Hard]
Again, needs more hs.
01:18:706 (3,4,5) - Wrong spacing. Make (5) a bit closer to (4)
[LoliFlan's Insane]
Seems ok.
[Ono's Taiko Oni]
Seems ok.
That's all. Bye!
[General]
Hard and LoliFlan's Insane has Audio LeadIn 2, but other diffs hasn't.
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
Add kiai in HellDawn's Normal: starts on 00:30:660; ends on 00:34:410.
Fix kiai time in LoliFlan's Insane, it's not similar with other diffs.
[Easy]
00:47:535 (1,2,3) - make it more symmetrical with 00:46:128 (2,3,4) -
[HellDawn's Normal]
Why so "withouthitsounds"?
(nazi) 00:10:035 (3) - not perfectly symmetrical.
00:24:566 (1) - ^
00:30:660 (1) - ^
00:43:785 (1) - ^
01:33:941 (1,2) - Wrong rhythm. Something like this?
[Hard]
Again, needs more hs.
01:18:706 (3,4,5) - Wrong spacing. Make (5) a bit closer to (4)
[LoliFlan's Insane]
Seems ok.
[Ono's Taiko Oni]
Seems ok.
That's all. Bye!
M4m as requested :3
LoliFlan's Insane:
For any questions you may contact me in-game :3
~Kyshiro
LoliFlan's Insane:
00:04:175 (1) - At sliders like these it's not really really necessary, but try to keep the last waypoing in the center of the end note.(This would possibly make it look better too)
00:05:113 (3) - ^ Etc.
00:18:940 (8) - Put it exactly under the end of slider (6) (Turn off gridsnap if necessary)
00:27:847 (4,5,6,7,8) - Stream doesn't really look good, you can see (7) is a bit out, and the spacing is a bit varying(Maybe turn off gridsnap?)
00:29:253 (3) - Rotate by 10 degrees(CTRL+SHIFT+R) and put it at x288 y100
00:29:722 (4,5,6,7,8) - Awkward spacing again, varying from 0.75 to 0.82
(nazi)00:35:699 (7) - Put this at x388 y220 and (8) at x400 y256
00:37:339 (5) - 2 Grids to the left
00:40:035 (1) - Maybe it'd look nice to blanket this one over 00:39:566 (6)'s end?(And notice the ending of the slider like mentioned before)
(nazi)01:08:628 (3) - Put this at x120 y204
01:36:050 (4) - Such sliders should be symmetric, end point should be in the middle of the end point, and the middle waypoint should be exactly in the middle of the slider.
01:37:222 (5) - ^ (You can copy (4) for this one)
02:14:253 (2) - ^
02:17:535 (8) - ^ (Copy (2) )
02:22:456 (1,2) - ^
Nice diff, maybe add a little more spacing here and there to make it a bit harder.
00:04:410 (1) - Not symmetric since the last waypoint isnt in the center of the circle
00:43:785 (1) - ^
01:08:160 (1,3) - ^
01:16:363 (1) - Looks fine, however it's not symmetric.
01:32:535 (5) - Touches the HP bar. Suggestion: Move 01:30:660 (1,2,3,4,5) - 4 or 5 grids down.
01:32:535 (5) - As blanket it looks ''almost'' fine, as standalone slider it's a bit messy.
01:35:347 (7) - Blanket this over (6)
01:38:160 (1) - Not symmetric
02:04:878 (1,2,3) - Center (2) in between (1,3) and make a (1,3) fit a bit more as a blanket.
02:13:785 (1) - Blanket over (9)
02:17:535 (1) - Not a perfect blanket(Also note the waypoints.)
02:21:285 (6) - ^
00:19:410 (1) - Not 100% symmetric since the last waypoint isn't in the center of the end point (You may want to ignore this one, as the sliders looks fine, do remember this though)
00:30:660 (1) - ^
00:38:160 (1) - Click right mouse button twice on the last waypoint, as it's a white one and a red one on top of it, afterwards move it to x336 y256(You see this by hovering your mouse over the waypoint)
01:33:238 (5) - Move this one 2 grids up with tinygrid
01:45:660 (4,5) - Why did you make this twice? You should make 1 and copy it, so it's 100% the same
01:57:378 (1,2,3) - 2 grids right and 1 grid up with small grid
00:23:160 (1) - Make this symmetric by putting the last waypoint in the center of the end point and the middle waypoint in the middle of the slider.
00:25:035 (2) - Copy (1) and press CTRL+H and CTRL+J to flip it, then relocate it.
00:33:941 (4,1) - 2 grids to the left so (1) goes throught the center of the slider(Make sure you correct the spacing in the next notes)
00:38:160 (1) - !Suggestion!: Make it so that the last half of the slider can form a blanket over (2)
01:31:128 (2,3) - Make 1 of these symmetric and copy it for the other one.
02:11:910 (1) - Not symmetric
For any questions you may contact me in-game :3
~Kyshiro
From 【All requests posted here will be modded】 queue
[General]
red section: volume 50%
00:49:410 (1) - drag this break(light grey area) to 00:53:160
and make it stops at 01:06:285
[HellDawn's Normal]
01:28:785 (1,2,3) - spacing
01:32:535 (3,4,5) - use grid level 4 plz :3
[Hard]
00:49:410 (1) - drag this break(light grey area) to 00:53:160 and make it stops at 01:06:285
01:18:706 (3,4,5) - spacing
01:27:495 - I suspect this slider, this is not very obvious cause you used very tiny shake
no copy
[LoliFlan's Insane]
01:21:285 (2,4,1,2,3,4,5) - weird shape ):
As what you may get a feeling from my word, this map had no serious issues
GL
[General]
- Error: [Easy] 02:11:910 check this timing section (two at a point)
Error: [LoliFlan's Insane] 00:53:160 ^
red section: volume 50%
00:49:410 (1) - drag this break(light grey area) to 00:53:160
[HellDawn's Normal]
01:28:785 (1,2,3) - spacing
01:32:535 (3,4,5) - use grid level 4 plz :3
[Hard]
00:49:410 (1) - drag this break(light grey area) to 00:53:160
01:18:706 (3,4,5) - spacing
01:27:495 - I suspect this slider, this is not very obvious cause you used very tiny shake
no copy
[LoliFlan's Insane]
01:21:285 (2,4,1,2,3,4,5) - weird shape ):
As what you may get a feeling from my word, this map had no serious issues
GL
Alright let's see what I can find. mod requested in game.
Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. Just putting this for fun
[General]
The lead in time is inconsistent. remember that it has to be the same for all diffs. i saw some of the diffs with a lead in time of 2000 and the other with a lead in time of 0.
how about a fade in for the part when it shows the beatmap creator, etc... i don't like how it suddenly appears from the right or left side. it'll make a nice effect during gameplay.
[Easy]
I think HP2 is better as it's easier for beginners. HP3 looks a bit too fast IMO.
00:30:660 (1) - the path would be hard for beginners judging by the direction, so move this up and make this a curved slider to flow properly and nicely to the next note.
00:41:910 (1) - move this to the left. the overlap on (3) looks bad during gameplay.
00:46:128 (2,3,4) - replace this for a 1/1 repeat slider. this looks too hard for beginners to hit.
00:47:535 (1,2,3) - ^
00:48:941 (5) - you should not stack notes on easy diffs. since the hitburst is covering this note, it'd be hard for beginners to know where the note is or when to hit this note.
01:10:503 (2,3) - move it here because it flows a lot nicer during gameplay. moving it there isnt smooth at all. it looks like it's taking a hard right from the slider.
01:23:628 (1,2,3) - same as 00:46:128.
01:27:378 (2,3,4) - ^
02:05:347 (2) - is there a way you can space this out because the overlap looks bad IMO.
02:18:472 (6) - i don't like how the hitburst covers this slider, so change the direction of this so that it doesn't happen.
02:20:347 (2) - Ctrl+J. the path would look a lot smoother if you do so.
[HellDawn's Normal]
00:14:019 - add a circle to follow the instrumental?
00:14:253 (1) - remove the repeat and move this 1 tick up. the repeat slider doesn't fit with this part IMO.
00:23:628 (1,2,3) - this would be hard for players to hit. remember that there's people who use the default skin and there's others who have the spinner-osu icon. in other words, move this somewhere else because it'd be hard for players to know where this note is.
00:24:566 (1) - you forgot a clap at the repeat arrow. add it to keep the consistency in claps.
00:45:191 (2) - ^
00:47:066 - same as above but a circle. add it to follow the snare and make it clap.
01:10:035 (2,3,4) - replace this for a repeat slider to make it easier for players. this would be hard for players because they might hit to too early or late.
01:17:535 (1,2,3) - ^
01:21:285 (3,4,5) - ^
01:40:738 (4) - add a repeat on this slider to follow the instrumental.
01:41:675 (5) - the repeats don't fit with this part, so remove all repeat and make this a 1/2 slider. same reason as above.
01:45:660 (4) - make this a NC because the instrumental changes.
01:48:472 (1) - remove the NC for this. the instrumental is still going for this.
01:57:378 (1,2,3) - same as 00:23:628.
02:11:910 (4) - this should be a NC because of new lyrics.
02:13:316 (1) - if you follow the suggestion above, remove the NC because the vocals are still going.
[Hard]
00:00:425 (1) - remove the spinner since easy and normal don't have it.
00:52:925 - move this break to 00:53:190 because the instrumental changes.
there's so many parts i personally don't like in this diff. i was expecting that this would be fun but i think this diff needs more work
[LoliFlan's Insane]
00:00:425 (1) - same as Hard.
00:34:410 (1) - maybe Ctrl+H to flow a lot smoother to the next note.
01:08:863 (4) - *nazi* make this curved slider symmetrical. it doesn't look nice during gameplay.
01:15:425 (7) - stack the end on (4). it's clearly visible for players to hit if you do this, and it'll be less confusing.
02:17:066 (6) - make this a custom clap. the default clap doesn't fit the song IMO.
02:17:535 (8) - add claps at the 1st repeat and at the end to keep the consistency.
02:25:972 (1) - same as 02:17:535.
pretty nice diff overall
I guess that's it. GL
Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. Just putting this for fun
[General]
The lead in time is inconsistent. remember that it has to be the same for all diffs. i saw some of the diffs with a lead in time of 2000 and the other with a lead in time of 0.
how about a fade in for the part when it shows the beatmap creator, etc... i don't like how it suddenly appears from the right or left side. it'll make a nice effect during gameplay.
[Easy]
I think HP2 is better as it's easier for beginners. HP3 looks a bit too fast IMO.
00:30:660 (1) - the path would be hard for beginners judging by the direction, so move this up and make this a curved slider to flow properly and nicely to the next note.
00:41:910 (1) - move this to the left. the overlap on (3) looks bad during gameplay.
00:46:128 (2,3,4) - replace this for a 1/1 repeat slider. this looks too hard for beginners to hit.
00:47:535 (1,2,3) - ^
00:48:941 (5) - you should not stack notes on easy diffs. since the hitburst is covering this note, it'd be hard for beginners to know where the note is or when to hit this note.
01:10:503 (2,3) - move it here because it flows a lot nicer during gameplay. moving it there isnt smooth at all. it looks like it's taking a hard right from the slider.
01:23:628 (1,2,3) - same as 00:46:128.
01:27:378 (2,3,4) - ^
02:05:347 (2) - is there a way you can space this out because the overlap looks bad IMO.
02:18:472 (6) - i don't like how the hitburst covers this slider, so change the direction of this so that it doesn't happen.
02:20:347 (2) - Ctrl+J. the path would look a lot smoother if you do so.
[HellDawn's Normal]
00:14:019 - add a circle to follow the instrumental?
00:14:253 (1) - remove the repeat and move this 1 tick up. the repeat slider doesn't fit with this part IMO.
00:23:628 (1,2,3) - this would be hard for players to hit. remember that there's people who use the default skin and there's others who have the spinner-osu icon. in other words, move this somewhere else because it'd be hard for players to know where this note is.
00:24:566 (1) - you forgot a clap at the repeat arrow. add it to keep the consistency in claps.
00:45:191 (2) - ^
00:47:066 - same as above but a circle. add it to follow the snare and make it clap.
01:10:035 (2,3,4) - replace this for a repeat slider to make it easier for players. this would be hard for players because they might hit to too early or late.
01:17:535 (1,2,3) - ^
01:21:285 (3,4,5) - ^
01:40:738 (4) - add a repeat on this slider to follow the instrumental.
01:41:675 (5) - the repeats don't fit with this part, so remove all repeat and make this a 1/2 slider. same reason as above.
01:45:660 (4) - make this a NC because the instrumental changes.
01:48:472 (1) - remove the NC for this. the instrumental is still going for this.
01:57:378 (1,2,3) - same as 00:23:628.
02:11:910 (4) - this should be a NC because of new lyrics.
02:13:316 (1) - if you follow the suggestion above, remove the NC because the vocals are still going.
[Hard]
00:00:425 (1) - remove the spinner since easy and normal don't have it.
00:52:925 - move this break to 00:53:190 because the instrumental changes.
there's so many parts i personally don't like in this diff. i was expecting that this would be fun but i think this diff needs more work
[LoliFlan's Insane]
00:00:425 (1) - same as Hard.
00:34:410 (1) - maybe Ctrl+H to flow a lot smoother to the next note.
01:08:863 (4) - *nazi* make this curved slider symmetrical. it doesn't look nice during gameplay.
01:15:425 (7) - stack the end on (4). it's clearly visible for players to hit if you do this, and it'll be less confusing.
02:17:066 (6) - make this a custom clap. the default clap doesn't fit the song IMO.
02:17:535 (8) - add claps at the 1st repeat and at the end to keep the consistency.
02:25:972 (1) - same as 02:17:535.
pretty nice diff overall
I guess that's it. GL
hi~
I hope I write down everything what I want. XD If you accept it, I want to do a ctb GD for this map. When I searched after your name in osu, I realized you did a Stereo Love too, I like that and this map too. :3 Star~
General
- Inconsistency in Kiai Times:SPOILER[Easy] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:23:160, ends on 00:26:910
Kiai #2: Starts on 00:30:660, ends on 00:34:410
Kiai #3: Starts on 00:38:160, ends on 00:53:160
Kiai #4: Starts on 02:11:910, ends on 02:25:035
[Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:23:160, ends on 00:26:910
Kiai #2: Starts on 00:30:660, ends on 00:34:410
Kiai #3: Starts on 00:38:160, ends on 00:53:160
Kiai #4: Starts on 02:11:910, ends on 02:25:035
[HellDawn's Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:23:160, ends on 00:34:410
Kiai #2: Starts on 00:38:160, ends on 00:53:160
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:11:910, ends on 02:25:035
[LoliFlan's Insane] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:23:160, ends on 00:26:910
Kiai #2: Starts on 00:30:660, ends on 00:34:410
Kiai #3: Starts on 00:37:925, ends on 00:53:160
Kiai #4: Starts on 02:11:675, ends on 02:26:675
[Ono's Taiko Oni] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:56:910, ends on 02:26:910 - offset: 425
- Unused timing point: 00:26:910
Easy
- 02:16:597 (2,3,4,5,6) - move them one grid to the right. 02:16:597 (2) - move this to x:292, y:256 and the following ones after this
HellDawn's Normal
- 01:10:738 (4) - x:328, y:80
- 01:30:191 (4) - x:168, y:328 looks better
Hard
- 0:37:925 (1) - x:204, y:132 for the stack
- 00:38:160 (2) - x:152, y:152
- 00:39:566 (7) - x:152, y:152, slider start
- 00:44:722 (2) - x:256, y:168
- 00:45:894 (1) - ^
- 01:35:347 (7) - this slider is not the best
- 02:05:581 (2) - x:184, y:248 if its purpose then just leave there
LoliFlan's Insane
- 00:57:378 (2) - not stacked completely
- 00:59:253 (2) - ^
- 02:20:347 (1) - x:172, y:108
- 02:24:097 (3) - not stacked
- 02:25:738 (4) - x:328, y:100
- Quick pointers from me :
- There are 2 OSB files in the map folder, remove the unused one
- spinnerbonus.wav is 0 bytes, replace it with a 44 bytes WAV file
- spinnerspin.wav is 0 bytes, replace it with a 44 bytes WAV file
- Inconsistency in AudioLeadIn:
[Easy] : 0
[Hard] : 2000
[HellDawn's Normal] : 0
[LoliFlan's Insane] : 2000
[Ono's Taiko Oni] : 0
NO KUDOS YOU CHICKEN.
I'll mod tommorow
All of my mod are gone because of new style of quick reply, I'm not used to use it.
Before, star~
And it seems you have a lot of untidy slider, perhaps visit this thread to make your slider better t/37194
===================================================================================
Let's go.
=General=
1. Delete Akcent feat Edward Maya - That's My Name (Barney Stinson).osb
=Easy=
1. 00:04:410 (1) - Symmetric slider is beautiful, you should fix this. http://puu.sh/yMWk
2. 00:07:222 (3) - Stacking is somehow ugly here, make a square pattern so this slider is more visible 00:08:160 (1) - so move to (440,252) http://puu.sh/yMXJ
3. 00:23:160 (1) - Move the second slider point to (256,8), creating a beautiful, symmetric slider.
4. 00:25:035 (2) - Copypasta from 00:23:160 (1), ctrl + j
5. 01:26:910 (1) - Stack this to 01:24:566 (4). Don't forget to move 01:27:378 (2,3,4,5) to make a constant spacing if you apply this.
6. 01:28:785 (6) - Symmetric pls. Perhaps change the slider shape? http://puu.sh/yN4t
7. 01:38:160 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Copypasta from 00:04:410 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) , ctrl + j
8. 01:56:910 (1) - Fix this to make a neater slider > http://puu.sh/yTVE
9. 02:03:472 (6,1,2) - Stacking is nono. Perhaps do this to make a tidy pattern without stack? http://puu.sh/yTXc
10. 02:16:597 (2,3,4) - It overlap 02:18:472 (6) that makes ugly. ctrl+j, and fix the spacing will make this pattern nicer.
=HellDawn's Normal=
1. 00:30:660 (1) - Make this symmetric pls.
2. 00:36:285 (4) - Clap at the end of the slider?
3. 00:43:785 (1) - Symmetric! :O
5. 00:50:347 (3) - Symmetric!
7. 01:21:285 (3,4,5) - ^
8. 01:32:535 (3,4,5) - ^
9. 01:57:378 (1,2,3) - Two grid small to the right, make this centered so it'll looks neater!
10. 02:02:535 (1) - Clap at the end of the slider?
11. 02:17:535 (1) - Copypasta from 00:43:785 (1)
12. 02:18:941 (0) - Add hitcircle with clap to fill the awkward emptiness.
13. 02:20:816 (0) - ^
14. 02:22:691 (6) - Clap at the beginning of slider?
=Hardish=
1. 00:31:363 (2,3) - One grid tiny up, make this symmetric with 00:30:660 (1) (notice the gap between red point and hitcircle)
2. 00:33:003 (3) - Rotate selection centre by 9 degrees to make this slider looks more blanket to 00:32:769 (2)
3. 00:41:441 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make this neater!
4. 00:44:956 (2) - Turn this to two stacking hitcircles anywhere but no overlap.
5. 01:10:035 (5,6) - This looks better, so you should fix this. http://puu.sh/yNxx
6. 01:12:613 (3) - Move this to (168,216) to make 01:12:847 (4) looks more blanket
7. 01:17:535 (5,6) - Copypasta from 01:10:035 (5,6)
8. 01:23:394 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Make this neater, I can help.
=Hard=
1. 00:32:066 (8) - One grid tiny up, make this symmetric with 00:31:128 (6,7) (notice the gap between red point and hitcircle)
2. 00:46:128 (2) - Symmetric, yes
4. 01:29:956 (3) - One grid tiny up to make a nice curve triplet
5. 01:32:535 (5) - Curve!
=LoliFlan's Insane=
1. 00:48:003 (2) - Clap?
=Ono's Taiko Oni=
Clean
Good luck :3
All of my mod are gone because of new style of quick reply, I'm not used to use it.
Before, star~
And it seems you have a lot of untidy slider, perhaps visit this thread to make your slider better t/37194
===================================================================================
Let's go.
=General=
1. Delete Akcent feat Edward Maya - That's My Name (Barney Stinson).osb
=Easy=
1. 00:04:410 (1) - Symmetric slider is beautiful, you should fix this. http://puu.sh/yMWk
2. 00:07:222 (3) - Stacking is somehow ugly here, make a square pattern so this slider is more visible 00:08:160 (1) - so move to (440,252) http://puu.sh/yMXJ
3. 00:23:160 (1) - Move the second slider point to (256,8), creating a beautiful, symmetric slider.
4. 00:25:035 (2) - Copypasta from 00:23:160 (1), ctrl + j
5. 01:26:910 (1) - Stack this to 01:24:566 (4). Don't forget to move 01:27:378 (2,3,4,5) to make a constant spacing if you apply this.
6. 01:28:785 (6) - Symmetric pls. Perhaps change the slider shape? http://puu.sh/yN4t
7. 01:38:160 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Copypasta from 00:04:410 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) , ctrl + j
8. 01:56:910 (1) - Fix this to make a neater slider > http://puu.sh/yTVE
9. 02:03:472 (6,1,2) - Stacking is nono. Perhaps do this to make a tidy pattern without stack? http://puu.sh/yTXc
10. 02:16:597 (2,3,4) - It overlap 02:18:472 (6) that makes ugly. ctrl+j, and fix the spacing will make this pattern nicer.
=HellDawn's Normal=
1. 00:30:660 (1) - Make this symmetric pls.
2. 00:36:285 (4) - Clap at the end of the slider?
3. 00:43:785 (1) - Symmetric! :O
184,220,43785,6,0,B|200:236|236:220|240:172|256:122|256:122|272:172|276:220|312:236|328:220,1,280,0|04. 00:47:066 (0) - Put hitcircle with clap somewhere to fill the awkward emptiness.
5. 00:50:347 (3) - Symmetric!
280,204,50347,2,0,B|320:204|348:308|408:308|420:268|408:228|348:228|320:332|280:332,1,2806. 01:10:035 (2,3,4) - Fix this to make a nice, neat triangle shape, by using distance snap (and if really needed, turn off grid snap)
7. 01:21:285 (3,4,5) - ^
8. 01:32:535 (3,4,5) - ^
9. 01:57:378 (1,2,3) - Two grid small to the right, make this centered so it'll looks neater!
10. 02:02:535 (1) - Clap at the end of the slider?
11. 02:17:535 (1) - Copypasta from 00:43:785 (1)
12. 02:18:941 (0) - Add hitcircle with clap to fill the awkward emptiness.
13. 02:20:816 (0) - ^
14. 02:22:691 (6) - Clap at the beginning of slider?
=Hardish=
1. 00:31:363 (2,3) - One grid tiny up, make this symmetric with 00:30:660 (1) (notice the gap between red point and hitcircle)
2. 00:33:003 (3) - Rotate selection centre by 9 degrees to make this slider looks more blanket to 00:32:769 (2)
3. 00:41:441 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make this neater!
4. 00:44:956 (2) - Turn this to two stacking hitcircles anywhere but no overlap.
5. 01:10:035 (5,6) - This looks better, so you should fix this. http://puu.sh/yNxx
6. 01:12:613 (3) - Move this to (168,216) to make 01:12:847 (4) looks more blanket
7. 01:17:535 (5,6) - Copypasta from 01:10:035 (5,6)
8. 01:23:394 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Make this neater, I can help.
124,160,83394,5,0
96,88,83628,2,0,B|160:72|212:108|216:188|172:220,1,200,8|0
256,304,84331,1,0
332,208,84566,2,0,B|298:186|302:106|354:70|418:86,1,200,8|0
451,203,85386,1,0
331,207,85738,1,0
=Hard=
1. 00:32:066 (8) - One grid tiny up, make this symmetric with 00:31:128 (6,7) (notice the gap between red point and hitcircle)
2. 00:46:128 (2) - Symmetric, yes
312,236,46128,2,0,B|316:312|256:371|256:371|196:312|200:236,1,300,8|03. 01:13:316 (6) - One grid tiny to the right to make a nice curve triplet
4. 01:29:956 (3) - One grid tiny up to make a nice curve triplet
5. 01:32:535 (5) - Curve!
52,128,92535,2,0,B|32:84|56:40|88:16|140:36,2,1506. 01:35:347 (7) - Another curve!
80,280,95347,2,0,B|56:224|80:176|128:152|160:168,1,150
136,164,95816,1,8
=LoliFlan's Insane=
1. 00:48:003 (2) - Clap?
=Ono's Taiko Oni=
Clean
Good luck :3
Loli Cjj wrote:
=HellDawn's Normal=
1. 00:30:660 (1) - Make this symmetric pls. already symmetric
2. 00:36:285 (4) - Clap at the end of the slider? ok
3. 00:43:785 (1) - Symmetric! :O ^184,220,43785,6,0,B|200:236|236:220|240:172|256:122|256:122|272:172|276:220|312:236|328:220,1,280,0|04. 00:47:066 (0) - Put hitcircle with clap somewhere to fill the awkward emptiness. no
5. 00:50:347 (3) - Symmetric! ^280,204,50347,2,0,B|320:204|348:308|408:308|420:268|408:228|348:228|320:332|280:332,1,2806. 01:10:035 (2,3,4) - Fix this to make a nice, neat triangle shape, by using distance snap (and if really needed, turn off grid snap) k
7. 01:21:285 (3,4,5) - ^ k
8. 01:32:535 (3,4,5) - ^ k
9. 01:57:378 (1,2,3) - Two grid small to the right, make this centered so it'll looks neater! ok
10. 02:02:535 (1) - Clap at the end of the slider? no
11. 02:17:535 (1) - Copypasta from 00:43:785 (1) ^
12. 02:18:941 (0) - Add hitcircle with clap to fill the awkward emptiness. ^
13. 02:20:816 (0) - ^ ^
14. 02:22:691 (6) - Clap at the beginning of slider? ok
hello
[General]
[Easy]
HD-1 and AR+1 is better imo
00:46:128 (2,3,4) - this is too hard to play as an Easy diff, change to repeat slider plz
00:47:535 (1,2,3) - ^
ok I ignored same suggestions from now on
[HellDawn's Normal]
00:23:160 - add newcombo here
01:16:831 (6) - I strongly suggest to change this one to 1/2 slider, or it's hard for newbies to read imo
01:18:941 (1,2) - wrong spacing here
01:40:738 (4,5,1) - I suggest not to use anti-jumps in a Normal diff, hard for newbies to read the rhyme
02:14:722 (4,5) - remove 5, or remove 6, or change them into a slider, or this is really too hard to play as a Normal diff o.o
02:29:019 - I suggest use soft hitsound here, sound better
[Hardish]
00:23:160 - add newcombo here
00:53:160 - why not drug break to here? feel much better when playing
01:36:050 - spinner start at here? sound better
02:11:910 - add newcombo here
[Hard]
01:27:847 (4) - it's not allowed to use a 0.5x speed slider with this kind of shape. plz change to a more readble slider, and use 0.75x speed here if you want to slow down, 0.5x is too suddenly to make ppl read it
01:35:347 - double notes here, delete the useless one plz
[LoliFlan's Insane]
no issues
[Overall]
this map still need many more works now
that's all
[General]
[Easy]
HD-1 and AR+1 is better imo
00:46:128 (2,3,4) - this is too hard to play as an Easy diff, change to repeat slider plz
00:47:535 (1,2,3) - ^
ok I ignored same suggestions from now on
[HellDawn's Normal]
00:23:160 - add newcombo here
01:16:831 (6) - I strongly suggest to change this one to 1/2 slider, or it's hard for newbies to read imo
01:18:941 (1,2) - wrong spacing here
01:40:738 (4,5,1) - I suggest not to use anti-jumps in a Normal diff, hard for newbies to read the rhyme
02:14:722 (4,5) - remove 5, or remove 6, or change them into a slider, or this is really too hard to play as a Normal diff o.o
02:29:019 - I suggest use soft hitsound here, sound better
[Hardish]
00:23:160 - add newcombo here
00:53:160 - why not drug break to here? feel much better when playing
01:36:050 - spinner start at here? sound better
02:11:910 - add newcombo here
[Hard]
01:27:847 (4) - it's not allowed to use a 0.5x speed slider with this kind of shape. plz change to a more readble slider, and use 0.75x speed here if you want to slow down, 0.5x is too suddenly to make ppl read it
01:35:347 - double notes here, delete the useless one plz
[LoliFlan's Insane]
no issues
[Overall]
this map still need many more works now
that's all
Kuroneko nopan 
~General~
- Add muted soft-sliderslide.wav
- End the last spinners on the same position in every diffs
- SB "Beatmap by" should have the name who mapped that diff
~Easy~
- Set HP 1 or 2
00:22:456 - use S:C1 for this timing
01:56:206 - ^
02:16:128 (1) - move to 364:276 (spacing fix)
~HellDawn's Normal~
- Set HP 3
00:23:160 (1) - it's overlapped with slider, so move to 120:48
00:28:316 (5,1,2) - move to 48:200 (alignment fix)
01:28:316 (4) - move to 484:176 (alignment fix)
02:17:535 (1) - remove new combo
02:19:175 (2) - add new combo
02:20:347 (1) - remove new combo
02:21:285 (3) - add new combo
02:26:675 - use S:C1 for this timing
~Hardish~
00:27:613 (2) - Ctrl+R
00:28:316 (3) - move to 118:132 (spacing fixes)
00:30:191 (3) - move to 372:200
00:34:175 (5) - add new combo
00:45:660 (1) - move to 228:192 (spacing fixes)
00:45:894 (2) - move to 180:272
00:46:128 (3) - move to 276:272
01:08:863 (3) - don't use red dot, make it curve around note 4
01:09:566 (4) - move to 248:276
01:10:035 (5,6) - rotate each slider a bit, don't make the start and the end overlapped
01:12:144 (1,2,3) - move to 56:292
01:12:847 (4,5) - stack the end of sliders
01:17:066 (4) - move to 264:272
01:17:535 (5,6) - rotate each slider a bit, don't make the start and the end overlapped
01:25:972 (1) - remove new combo
01:26:910 (3) - add new combo
01:28:785 (1) - remove new combo
01:31:011 (4) - add new combo
01:32:535 (1) - remove new combo
01:39:800 (4) - move to 337:347
01:48:941 (6) - don't overlap with previous slider
02:01:831 (4,5) - use this pattern
02:12:613 (2) - rotate clockwise 30 degree and stack the end of slider with start of slider 1
02:24:097 (2) - Ctrl+R, better flow
~Hard~
00:07:925 (10) - add new combo
00:11:675 (8) - ^
00:11:910 (1) - remove new combo
00:13:316 (4) - remove this note
00:14:488 (1) - remove new combo
00:15:425 (4) - add new combo
00:34:527 - add timing with N:C2
00:50:113 (6) - move to 184:248
01:16:011 (8) - add new combo
01:16:363 (1) - remove new combo
01:19:175 (5) - move to 152:56
01:19:410 (6) - add new combo
01:23:628 (3) - use this pattern
01:41:675 (10) - add new combo
01:45:425 (8) - ^
01:45:660 (1) - remove new combo
01:47:066 (4) - remove this note
01:48:238 (1) - remove new combo
01:49:175 (4) - add new combo
02:05:581 (2) - move to 182:248
02:05:816 (3) - Ctrl+R
02:06:988 (7) - move to 244:28
02:07:222 (8) - move to 276:112
02:07:456 (1) - move to 360:76
02:22:456 (8) - add new combo
02:23:160 (1) - remove new combo
~LoliFlan's Insane~
02:17:535 (8) - add clap at 2nd note
Taiko plays well for me.
I probably recheck this map again, but first, you should take a few more mods.
~General~
- Add muted soft-sliderslide.wav
- End the last spinners on the same position in every diffs
- SB "Beatmap by" should have the name who mapped that diff
~Easy~
- Set HP 1 or 2
00:22:456 - use S:C1 for this timing
01:56:206 - ^
02:16:128 (1) - move to 364:276 (spacing fix)
~HellDawn's Normal~
- Set HP 3
00:23:160 (1) - it's overlapped with slider, so move to 120:48
00:28:316 (5,1,2) - move to 48:200 (alignment fix)
01:28:316 (4) - move to 484:176 (alignment fix)
02:17:535 (1) - remove new combo
02:19:175 (2) - add new combo
02:20:347 (1) - remove new combo
02:21:285 (3) - add new combo
02:26:675 - use S:C1 for this timing
~Hardish~
00:27:613 (2) - Ctrl+R
00:28:316 (3) - move to 118:132 (spacing fixes)
00:30:191 (3) - move to 372:200
00:34:175 (5) - add new combo
00:45:660 (1) - move to 228:192 (spacing fixes)
00:45:894 (2) - move to 180:272
00:46:128 (3) - move to 276:272
01:08:863 (3) - don't use red dot, make it curve around note 4
01:09:566 (4) - move to 248:276
01:10:035 (5,6) - rotate each slider a bit, don't make the start and the end overlapped
01:12:144 (1,2,3) - move to 56:292
01:12:847 (4,5) - stack the end of sliders
01:17:066 (4) - move to 264:272
01:17:535 (5,6) - rotate each slider a bit, don't make the start and the end overlapped
01:25:972 (1) - remove new combo
01:26:910 (3) - add new combo
01:28:785 (1) - remove new combo
01:31:011 (4) - add new combo
01:32:535 (1) - remove new combo
01:39:800 (4) - move to 337:347
01:48:941 (6) - don't overlap with previous slider
02:01:831 (4,5) - use this pattern
02:12:613 (2) - rotate clockwise 30 degree and stack the end of slider with start of slider 1
02:24:097 (2) - Ctrl+R, better flow
~Hard~
00:07:925 (10) - add new combo
00:11:675 (8) - ^
00:11:910 (1) - remove new combo
00:13:316 (4) - remove this note
00:14:488 (1) - remove new combo
00:15:425 (4) - add new combo
00:34:527 - add timing with N:C2
00:50:113 (6) - move to 184:248
01:16:011 (8) - add new combo
01:16:363 (1) - remove new combo
01:19:175 (5) - move to 152:56
01:19:410 (6) - add new combo
01:23:628 (3) - use this pattern
01:41:675 (10) - add new combo
01:45:425 (8) - ^
01:45:660 (1) - remove new combo
01:47:066 (4) - remove this note
01:48:238 (1) - remove new combo
01:49:175 (4) - add new combo
02:05:581 (2) - move to 182:248
02:05:816 (3) - Ctrl+R
02:06:988 (7) - move to 244:28
02:07:222 (8) - move to 276:112
02:07:456 (1) - move to 360:76
02:22:456 (8) - add new combo
02:23:160 (1) - remove new combo
~LoliFlan's Insane~
02:17:535 (8) - add clap at 2nd note
Taiko plays well for me.
I probably recheck this map again, but first, you should take a few more mods.
Insane
00:32:300 (10) - new combo here instead of (1)
01:03:003 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - overlap, move (1,2,3,4,5) a grid or two to the right?
i'ma wait to mod the other diffs , because I don't know if DJPop's mod has actually been applied
00:32:300 (10) - new combo here instead of (1)
01:03:003 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - overlap, move (1,2,3,4,5) a grid or two to the right?
i'ma wait to mod the other diffs , because I don't know if DJPop's mod has actually been applied
[General]
00:46:128 (2,3,4) - Make this 1/1. It's too similar to normal right now and it'd make it easier.
00:47:535 (1,2,3) - ^
00:49:410 (1) - End at 00:53:160 - the end sounds odd right now, and this is where you stop the kiai.
01:23:628 (1,2,3) - Make it 1/1? The squashed notes look bad.
01:27:378 (2,3,4) - ^
01:27:378 (2,3,4,5,6) - This plays and feels so cluttered, maybe rearrange this so there's less overlapping.
02:17:066 (3,4) - Ugly overlap, space out a little more.
The map could be a lot neater.
[HellDawn's Normal]
00:14:019 - I think a note here would be a better rhythm and more intuitive.
00:20:816 (2) - Delete and start 00:21:285 (1) - here instead?
00:53:160 - Map to here? This is where the kiai stops, strange to have it blank.
01:16:831 (6) - It's the only short 1/4 returning slider in the map. Remove? 1/2 returning slider would work.
01:42:847 (1,2) - 1/1 sounds bad, it sounds much better on 1/2. (01:42:613 - and 01:43:081 - )
01:43:785 (3) - Sounds better ending the return on 1/4 (01:44:136 - ) and
01:45:660 (1,2) - Better if you follow the synth here I think.
01:54:566 (2) - Delete and start 01:55:035 (1) - here instead?
02:18:941 - Note?
02:25:738 (2) - Clap the end?
Playing this map it seems you couldn't decide on a rhythm =|
[Hardish]
00:08:160 (3,4,5) - I recommend reducing the volume of those ticks.
00:15:660 (1,2) - ^
00:26:910 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Too loud, I suggest keeping it 75% volume, maybe even lower.
00:43:550 (5) - Jump seems kind of random.
00:53:160 - Note + finish?
01:41:910 (1,2) - Reduce volume of ticks?
01:49:410 (1,2) - ^
[Hard]
00:19:410 (2,3) - Reduce volume of these ticks?
00:26:910 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Volume too loud imo, keeping it 75% would be better.
00:34:410 (6,7) - ^ also new combo on 00:34:410 (6) -
00:52:925 - Note?
00:53:160 - ^ + finish
01:42:378 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Would sound much better if you followed the synth / song.
01:53:160 (2,3) - Reduce volume on these ticks?
02:00:660 - 75% volume would be better imo.
02:24:097 (7,8) - Spacing? Why the sudden 1/4 spacing change here?
Plays really similar to Hardish. This diff is much better though.
[LoliFlan's Insane]
00:31:714 (6,7,8,9) - Sounds better as soft hitsound at 45% volume.
Nice diff.
Did I repeat something? I probably did... this needs a bit more work imo.
- sun.png is too big at 1000x1000. Resize to 800x600 or 640x480.
- AR + 1 plays better.
00:46:128 (2,3,4) - Make this 1/1. It's too similar to normal right now and it'd make it easier.
00:47:535 (1,2,3) - ^
00:49:410 (1) - End at 00:53:160 - the end sounds odd right now, and this is where you stop the kiai.
01:23:628 (1,2,3) - Make it 1/1? The squashed notes look bad.
01:27:378 (2,3,4) - ^
01:27:378 (2,3,4,5,6) - This plays and feels so cluttered, maybe rearrange this so there's less overlapping.
02:17:066 (3,4) - Ugly overlap, space out a little more.
The map could be a lot neater.
[HellDawn's Normal]
00:14:019 - I think a note here would be a better rhythm and more intuitive.
00:20:816 (2) - Delete and start 00:21:285 (1) - here instead?
00:53:160 - Map to here? This is where the kiai stops, strange to have it blank.
01:16:831 (6) - It's the only short 1/4 returning slider in the map. Remove? 1/2 returning slider would work.
01:42:847 (1,2) - 1/1 sounds bad, it sounds much better on 1/2. (01:42:613 - and 01:43:081 - )
01:43:785 (3) - Sounds better ending the return on 1/4 (01:44:136 - ) and
01:45:660 (1,2) - Better if you follow the synth here I think.
01:54:566 (2) - Delete and start 01:55:035 (1) - here instead?
02:18:941 - Note?
02:25:738 (2) - Clap the end?
Playing this map it seems you couldn't decide on a rhythm =|
[Hardish]
00:08:160 (3,4,5) - I recommend reducing the volume of those ticks.
00:15:660 (1,2) - ^
00:26:910 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Too loud, I suggest keeping it 75% volume, maybe even lower.
00:43:550 (5) - Jump seems kind of random.
00:53:160 - Note + finish?
01:41:910 (1,2) - Reduce volume of ticks?
01:49:410 (1,2) - ^
[Hard]
00:19:410 (2,3) - Reduce volume of these ticks?
00:26:910 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Volume too loud imo, keeping it 75% would be better.
00:34:410 (6,7) - ^ also new combo on 00:34:410 (6) -
00:52:925 - Note?
00:53:160 - ^ + finish
01:42:378 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Would sound much better if you followed the synth / song.
01:53:160 (2,3) - Reduce volume on these ticks?
02:00:660 - 75% volume would be better imo.
02:24:097 (7,8) - Spacing? Why the sudden 1/4 spacing change here?
Plays really similar to Hardish. This diff is much better though.
[LoliFlan's Insane]
00:31:714 (6,7,8,9) - Sounds better as soft hitsound at 45% volume.
Nice diff.
Did I repeat something? I probably did... this needs a bit more work imo.
M4M, as requested in #modreqs~
Remove Bookmarks from all diffs to make the .osz smaller?
Good luck~
Remove Bookmarks from all diffs to make the .osz smaller?
Easy
00:19:410 (1) - Make this Spinner end at 00:22:222 since it's an easy..
00:23:160 (1,2) - the Sliders don't end on the same heigh as they start, resulting in overlapping, you can use the following code to fix this problem by using that shape for the first slider, then flipping it and add distance snap
00:41:910 (1,2) - I guess they are supposed to have that "spike" in the middle. I dislike the shape however, maybe make spike smooth?
00:48:003 (2,3) - overlap
01:53:160 (1) - end spinner at 01:55:972
02:03:472 (6,2) - dislike the overlap, but looks like there is no real way to fix that :/
02:26:675 (1) - start at 02:26:910
00:23:160 (1,2) - the Sliders don't end on the same heigh as they start, resulting in overlapping, you can use the following code to fix this problem by using that shape for the first slider, then flipping it and add distance snap
120,104,23160,6,0,B|156:44|256:40|352:48|388:104,1,300,0|800:33:941 (4) - this one is a bit too close to the following slider IMO, would rearrange it like this:
00:41:910 (1,2) - I guess they are supposed to have that "spike" in the middle. I dislike the shape however, maybe make spike smooth?
00:48:003 (2,3) - overlap
01:53:160 (1) - end spinner at 01:55:972
02:03:472 (6,2) - dislike the overlap, but looks like there is no real way to fix that :/
02:26:675 (1) - start at 02:26:910
HellDawn's Normal
00:21:285 (1) - let it end on 00:22:222 or silence the ending please.
00:51:753 - 00:53:160 add Spinner here?
01:10:035 (2,3,4) - not sure about that type of rhythm, since it's a normal and you should stick to 1/2 snap. It's fine but I don't know..maybe it's a bit too difficult for a normal?
(same for following parts with same rhythm)
01:48:003 - add a note here? It really feels empty even for a normal. (If you do so, flip the following slider)
02:19:175 (2) - that one is really nasty IMO, you should add a note at 02:18:941 so that one doesn't get trapped in the "delayed" note.
00:51:753 - 00:53:160 add Spinner here?
01:10:035 (2,3,4) - not sure about that type of rhythm, since it's a normal and you should stick to 1/2 snap. It's fine but I don't know..maybe it's a bit too difficult for a normal?
(same for following parts with same rhythm)01:48:003 - add a note here? It really feels empty even for a normal. (If you do so, flip the following slider)
02:19:175 (2) - that one is really nasty IMO, you should add a note at 02:18:941 so that one doesn't get trapped in the "delayed" note.
Hard
00:04:410 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - this combo is too long for a hard map, NC it somewhere (maybe at 4 and 7?)
00:31:128 (6) - this slider is too close to (5) and (7), compared with the following one. Move up by 1grid
00:34:410 (6,7) - basically the same music going on but normal hitsounds on 7? Use normal samples at 00:37:925 and let the slider be soft~
00:46:128 (2) - hmm..more fitting would be something like this.. (find your own shape)
01:17:535 (2) - again, try something different here..
01:19:410 (1,2) - this jump is bigger than others in the map, maybe reduce the distance by a bit? (1-2 grids up/down for both sliders would be fine~)
01:28:785 (6,7,1) - put them into a NC, since they follow an other rhythm than the notes around (makes it easier to read that there is something different..)
01:45:308 (7) - remove, doesn't really fit IMO
01:57:144 (2,3) - overlap looks nasty :c Rotate 2 by 20° and flip it for 3, then rearrange
02:03:472 (2,3,4,5) - i just get the feeling that this wants to be mapped as a 7note stream, maybe remove 2 and 3 and add 1tick reverse? (or vice versa)
02:04:878 (1) - if i see that right, you use different sliderpoints. copy 1 and flip/reverse selection to get 3
02:09:097 (3) - already mentioned above~
02:24:097 (7) - maybe silence the ending because atm it just breaks the vocal part
02:24:566 (8,1) - I'm not happy with that shape but unfortunately, I cannot think of a fitting similar shape..guess it will stay the way it is :<
02:25:972 (2,3,4,5,6) - urgh, you messed something up with the placement. rearrange to get a smooth circle-like thing D:
00:31:128 (6) - this slider is too close to (5) and (7), compared with the following one. Move up by 1grid
00:34:410 (6,7) - basically the same music going on but normal hitsounds on 7? Use normal samples at 00:37:925 and let the slider be soft~
00:46:128 (2) - hmm..more fitting would be something like this.. (find your own shape
)01:17:535 (2) - again, try something different here..
01:19:410 (1,2) - this jump is bigger than others in the map, maybe reduce the distance by a bit? (1-2 grids up/down for both sliders would be fine~)
01:28:785 (6,7,1) - put them into a NC, since they follow an other rhythm than the notes around (makes it easier to read that there is something different..)
01:45:308 (7) - remove, doesn't really fit IMO
01:57:144 (2,3) - overlap looks nasty :c Rotate 2 by 20° and flip it for 3, then rearrange
02:03:472 (2,3,4,5) - i just get the feeling that this wants to be mapped as a 7note stream, maybe remove 2 and 3 and add 1tick reverse? (or vice versa)
02:04:878 (1) - if i see that right, you use different sliderpoints. copy 1 and flip/reverse selection to get 3
02:09:097 (3) - already mentioned above~
02:24:097 (7) - maybe silence the ending because atm it just breaks the vocal part
02:24:566 (8,1) - I'm not happy with that shape but unfortunately, I cannot think of a fitting similar shape..guess it will stay the way it is :<
02:25:972 (2,3,4,5,6) - urgh, you messed something up with the placement. rearrange to get a smooth circle-like thing D:
LoliFlan's Insane
00:04:175 (1) - do not place notes b4 the first red timing section! move red section to 00:02:535 (if i'm not completely wrong that should be 1stanza) and make sure this happens in EVERY diff..
00:41:675 (3,4,5) - looks nice but is a bad place to place these notes as it's hard to see wether the slider is the first note or not. putting 3 on the reverseending of the slider makes the part clearly readable
01:03:003 (3,1,2) - would be nice if 1 and 2 don't hit the slider
01:14:956 (4,7) - maybe let 7 end in 4?
01:25:269 (2,3,4) - why do you compress this stream? use same spaceing "as usual" pls..
01:28:550 (2,3) - 2 5grids left and 3 5grids right, so they won't overlap with 4
01:41:675 (1,2,3) - maybe try this?
01:45:425 (1) - the darked combocolour is harder to read, i would recommend to set NC to 2
00:41:675 (3,4,5) - looks nice but is a bad place to place these notes as it's hard to see wether the slider is the first note or not. putting 3 on the reverseending of the slider makes the part clearly readable
01:03:003 (3,1,2) - would be nice if 1 and 2 don't hit the slider
01:14:956 (4,7) - maybe let 7 end in 4?
01:25:269 (2,3,4) - why do you compress this stream? use same spaceing "as usual" pls..
01:28:550 (2,3) - 2 5grids left and 3 5grids right, so they won't overlap with 4
01:41:675 (1,2,3) - maybe try this?
01:45:425 (1) - the darked combocolour is harder to read, i would recommend to set NC to 2
Ono's Taiko Oni
Set Preferred Skin to User's Preference, since it's a Taiko D:
00:23:160 (1) - big don?
00:24:566 (2) - kat?
00:32:066 (3) - ^
00:40:269 - Maybe try something like this?
00:45:660 (1) - don?
01:10:503 - add don?
01:29:956 (1,2,1) - kkk?
01:41:675 (1,1,1) - kkd?
01:52:222 (6) - kat?
01:56:675 - maybe add timingsection with x1.1?
01:59:370 (1,1) - kk?
02:24:097 (1) - big kat?
02:25:269 (1,2) - small kat?
02:26:441 (1,2,1) - dk K?
00:23:160 (1) - big don?
00:24:566 (2) - kat?
00:32:066 (3) - ^
00:40:269 - Maybe try something like this?
00:45:660 (1) - don?
01:10:503 - add don?
01:29:956 (1,2,1) - kkk?
01:41:675 (1,1,1) - kkd?
01:52:222 (6) - kat?
01:56:675 - maybe add timingsection with x1.1?
01:59:370 (1,1) - kk?
02:24:097 (1) - big kat?
02:25:269 (1,2) - small kat?
02:26:441 (1,2,1) - dk K?
Good luck~
[LoliFlan]
I'd say, 20-25% vol is way too low imo D:
00:18:238 (6,8) - overlap/stack properly with the previous (4)
00:23:160 (1) - finish at the beginning
00:32:300 (10,1) - Swap NC
00:34:292 (4,1) - NC on (4) instead, kinda hard to see otherwise
00:36:050 (9,1) - Swap NC
00:52:925 (6,1) - ^
00:54:800 (5,1) - ^
00:56:675 (5,6,1) - NC on (5) instead
00:58:550 (7,8,1) - ^ on (7)
01:13:550 (6,1) - Swap NC
01:45:308 (8,1) - ^
02:26:675 (1) - increase this to 02:29:019 like the rest of the diffs
[Hard]
01:19:175 (5) - spacing error?
01:34:058 (2) - feels somewhat better if you move it to 01:34:175 . But if you want consistency, I guess you should leave it be
01:44:488 (5) - extend this to 01:44:956
01:45:191 (6,7) - move these 2 one tick ahead
02:25:269 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - at least 1,2x distance between (1) & (2)?
[Helldawn]
00:48:941 (1) - clap at the beginning
00:50:347 (3) - why not add a repeat here~
02:06:753 (2) - clap
02:18:941 (2) - clap
02:25:738 (2) - clap at the end
[Easy]
AR+1 (feels less crowdy imo)
00:48:941 (4) - abit too high perhaps
I'd say, 20-25% vol is way too low imo D:
00:18:238 (6,8) - overlap/stack properly with the previous (4)
00:23:160 (1) - finish at the beginning
00:32:300 (10,1) - Swap NC
00:34:292 (4,1) - NC on (4) instead, kinda hard to see otherwise
00:36:050 (9,1) - Swap NC
00:52:925 (6,1) - ^
00:54:800 (5,1) - ^
00:56:675 (5,6,1) - NC on (5) instead
00:58:550 (7,8,1) - ^ on (7)
01:13:550 (6,1) - Swap NC
01:45:308 (8,1) - ^
02:26:675 (1) - increase this to 02:29:019 like the rest of the diffs
[Hard]
01:19:175 (5) - spacing error?
01:34:058 (2) - feels somewhat better if you move it to 01:34:175 . But if you want consistency, I guess you should leave it be
01:44:488 (5) - extend this to 01:44:956
01:45:191 (6,7) - move these 2 one tick ahead
02:25:269 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - at least 1,2x distance between (1) & (2)?
[Helldawn]
00:48:941 (1) - clap at the beginning
00:50:347 (3) - why not add a repeat here~
02:06:753 (2) - clap
02:18:941 (2) - clap
02:25:738 (2) - clap at the end
[Easy]
AR+1 (feels less crowdy imo)
00:48:941 (4) - abit too high perhaps
So I'm just gonna copy paste some of my suggestions from last time and added an additional reason in some parts. It'd be more helpful to future modders if you reply to mods.
[General]
00:48:941 (4) - Maybe put this in the same position as 00:46:128 (2) - to make a pattern.
00:49:410 (1) - End at 00:53:160 - the end sounds odd right now, and this is where you stop the kiai. If not end the kiai earlier at 00:51:285 -
01:23:628 (1,2,3) - Make it 1/1? The squashed notes look bad. 1/1 also follows the rhythm you set for the whole map.
01:30:660 (1) - Spacing too far? Looks better if you keep the same spacing imo.
01:41:441 (4) - Ugly overlap with 01:40:972 (3) - in game. Move it up 1 or 2 grids to make it look better.
Map could still be neater, try and work on creating less overlaps and aligning notes properly. AR + 1 solves the problem to an extent but if you don't want to do that I'd work on tidying up the map.
[HellDawn's Normal]
See my previous mod post. Rhythm needs more work.
[Hard]
00:26:910 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Volume too loud imo, keeping it 75% would be better. If not at least remove that finish it's just too loud.
00:34:410 (6) - New combo. Same thing as ^
00:52:925 - Note?
00:53:160 - ^ + finish. If not end the kiai earlier
01:15:660 (7) - New combo.
01:15:894 - Note? Since it's the rhythm you use in most of the map.
01:16:363 (1) - Remove new combo from here.
02:00:660 - 75% volume would be better.
02:11:441 (9,1) - Jump is kinda big compared to the rest of the map.
02:24:097 (7,8) - Spacing? Why the sudden 1/4 spacing change here? It makes no sense.
[LoliFlan's Insane]
00:31:714 (6,7,8,9) - Sounds better as soft hitsound at 45% volume.
I also agree with the previous modder that 20-25% volume is a bit too low on this diff but I guess it works okay.
I don't know why you asked for a recheck, you seem to have changed very little from the past mods and my opinion has stayed the same. I suggest re-reading some of the previous mod posts, there are some good suggestions you seem to have ignored
[General]
- sun.png is still too big.
- AR + 1 plays better
00:48:941 (4) - Maybe put this in the same position as 00:46:128 (2) - to make a pattern.
00:49:410 (1) - End at 00:53:160 - the end sounds odd right now, and this is where you stop the kiai. If not end the kiai earlier at 00:51:285 -
01:23:628 (1,2,3) - Make it 1/1? The squashed notes look bad. 1/1 also follows the rhythm you set for the whole map.
01:30:660 (1) - Spacing too far? Looks better if you keep the same spacing imo.
01:41:441 (4) - Ugly overlap with 01:40:972 (3) - in game. Move it up 1 or 2 grids to make it look better.
Map could still be neater, try and work on creating less overlaps and aligning notes properly. AR + 1 solves the problem to an extent but if you don't want to do that I'd work on tidying up the map.
[HellDawn's Normal]
See my previous mod post. Rhythm needs more work.
[Hard]
00:26:910 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Volume too loud imo, keeping it 75% would be better. If not at least remove that finish it's just too loud.
00:34:410 (6) - New combo. Same thing as ^
00:52:925 - Note?
00:53:160 - ^ + finish. If not end the kiai earlier
01:15:660 (7) - New combo.
01:15:894 - Note? Since it's the rhythm you use in most of the map.
01:16:363 (1) - Remove new combo from here.
02:00:660 - 75% volume would be better.
02:11:441 (9,1) - Jump is kinda big compared to the rest of the map.
02:24:097 (7,8) - Spacing? Why the sudden 1/4 spacing change here? It makes no sense.
[LoliFlan's Insane]
00:31:714 (6,7,8,9) - Sounds better as soft hitsound at 45% volume.
I also agree with the previous modder that 20-25% volume is a bit too low on this diff but I guess it works okay.
I don't know why you asked for a recheck, you seem to have changed very little from the past mods and my opinion has stayed the same. I suggest re-reading some of the previous mod posts, there are some good suggestions you seem to have ignored
- Used Soft sounding on the section with 45% volume as said.
- sun.png scaled down to 800x600, applied to all difficulties
http://puu.sh/AWcU
- sun.png scaled down to 800x600, applied to all difficulties
http://puu.sh/AWcU
I think red and blue line is nice rhytm for this music !Shulin wrote:
[HellDawn's Normal]
See my previous mod post. Rhythm needs more work.
http://puu.sh/BzFr
Kokatsu wrote:
Ono's Taiko OniSet Preferred Skin to User's Preference, since it's a Taiko D:
00:23:160 (1) - big don?
00:24:566 (2) - kat?
00:32:066 (3) - ^
00:40:269 - Maybe try something like this?
00:45:660 (1) - don?
01:10:503 - add don?
01:29:956 (1,2,1) - kkk?
01:41:675 (1,1,1) - kkd?
01:52:222 (6) - kat?
01:56:675 - maybe add timingsection with x1.1?
01:59:370 (1,1) - kk?
02:24:097 (1) - big kat?
02:25:269 (1,2) - small kat?
02:26:441 (1,2,1) - dk K?
Good luck~
Didn't saw this, was there anything changed? Because I don't want to press right now the update button.
[Easy]
00:19:410 (1) - end the spinner 1/2 earlier? (more recovery time)
01:53:160 (1) - ^
02:05:347 (2) - this overlap doesn't look good
[HellDawn's Normal]
00:23:160 (1) - add new combo?
01:16:831 (6) - this overlap doesn't look good
01:30:660 (5,1) - The rhythm here feels odd. maybe make the slider 1/4 shorter and add a note on 01:31:363 - ?
01:57:378 (1,2,3) - these appear too soon after the spinner
[LoliFlan's Insane]
01:59:956 (5,6,7) - maybe make the spacing here equal
edit: okay
00:19:410 (1) - end the spinner 1/2 earlier? (more recovery time)
01:53:160 (1) - ^
02:05:347 (2) - this overlap doesn't look good
[HellDawn's Normal]
00:23:160 (1) - add new combo?
01:16:831 (6) - this overlap doesn't look good
01:30:660 (5,1) - The rhythm here feels odd. maybe make the slider 1/4 shorter and add a note on 01:31:363 - ?
01:57:378 (1,2,3) - these appear too soon after the spinner
[LoliFlan's Insane]
01:59:956 (5,6,7) - maybe make the spacing here equal
edit: okay
someone will have pollo tonight
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Topic Starter
YAHZ
[General]
You have 2 .osb files in your folder, please delete the unused one.
Disable the unused Audio Lead-In on all the difficulties.
[Easy]
AR is way too high right now, reduce it by 1 tick at least.
[Hard]
01:48:238 (1) - Remove new combo, since you didn't used it on the other part that was the same as this.
[Ono's Taiko Oni]
Increase OD by 1 tick.
[LoliFlan's Insane]
02:12:613 (1) - This new combo is not necessary.
02:25:972 (1) - ^
Only small fixes, let me know when you're ready.
You have 2 .osb files in your folder, please delete the unused one.
Disable the unused Audio Lead-In on all the difficulties.
[Easy]
AR is way too high right now, reduce it by 1 tick at least.
[Hard]
01:48:238 (1) - Remove new combo, since you didn't used it on the other part that was the same as this.
[Ono's Taiko Oni]
Increase OD by 1 tick.
[LoliFlan's Insane]
02:12:613 (1) - This new combo is not necessary.
02:25:972 (1) - ^
Only small fixes, let me know when you're ready.
This song is just win.
Topic Starter
ready :33
GL <3
Alright, looks great now!
Ranked~
Ranked~
<3
:>
Great! <3
Gratz~ o3o
Awesome map! Awesome sb! <3
gg scalone ♥
Congratz, man
Finally! Congratulation dude. (:
:3
Congratulations !!
I wanted to map this song too ^^
But yeah
GZ for rank ~ :3
But yeah
GZ for rank ~ :3
gratz BARNEY~~~~ :3
Hey, congratulations
nice map gz~
gz~gg :3
congratulation Barney.
Next time please confirm me about mods. lol
Next time please confirm me about mods. lol