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Jenny
Download: REDALiCE - Volar (Loctav) [Jenny's Hard].osu

Applied that stuffs and did little slidershaping on like 2 or 3 things, no big deal but just for my eye in edit~
Topic Starter
Loctav

Lizbeth wrote:

Hi there~

Insane
Increase overall diff to 8. What? seriously? Okay.... o__o
01:18:775 (4) - this is too close in chart, should be farther fixed.
01:23:804 - 01:30:220 - This part is kinda messy… In the song the the 1/4 beats starts before this spot 01:23:804 -, but you still added some soft patterns like this: 01:23:804 (1,2,3) -, then switched to streams 01:25:713 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) -, but then you kinda cut the flow by adding more soft patterns : 01:27:272 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2). I think you should remap this whole section and make it more united. fixed.
01:39:931 (1) - make this more visible, is hard to notice the reverse replaced with triplet.
01:42:706 (1,2,3,4,5) - This threw me off while playing, a bit drastic imo. it was suggested like this several times and comes out to be very good playable imo.
01:49:642 (1) - Huge jump, I don’t approve, it breaks the flow, other jumps in this sections are half this one. fixed.
02:03:514 (1) - I find it drastic. I suggest to reverse 1 with 3, and 2 with 4. Like this: http://puu.sh/pCmA I had this at the very first and it turned to be way more stupid to play. The current version plays pretty good imo
02:06:289 (3) - New combo fixed.
02:06:289 (3,4,5) - stack them togetherfixed.
02:08:197 (10) - Move to next red tick, sound better. Also you could add circle at: 02:08:197 - Fixed it on my way.
02:13:572 (8) - Use same distance you used for the previous circles. fixed.
02:35:249 (1) - Remove new combo, and I’d stack with prev slider, or at least put it closer to it. fixed.
02:35:596 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I find it too clustered together, try to make them more easy to read, cuz with all the hit explosion is confusing. fixed.

Normal
Maybe make breaks the same as insane not neccessary.
02:47:214 (1) - New combo bug, add new combo manually. fixed.
02:49:988 (1) - same fixed.
02:49:988 (1) - Same fixed.
02:57:966 (1) - Same fixed.
Kenezz
Hello, random mod here.
Kenezz's Bakamod~

[Normal]
-Well I don't are a big fan of the closely space in a normal diff but it's okay.
01:11:839 (3) - This could be are a combo inconsistency because is the same rhythm of here 01:22:937 (1) and here 01:28:486 (1), maybe considers add a new combo or keep a long combo in the previous points (01:22:937,01:28:486), if you change something keep in mind this 01:17:388 (3).
01:19:122 (1) - I don't know if you want keep this very short combo, now I see this a bit needless.
02:13:746 (3) - imo this repeat slider sounds ugly because don't fits properly to the track in the red ticks, considers delete this circle 02:13:573 (2) and move the slider to this white tick.
-In the last parts some shorts combos,imo, are needless, like 02:25:712 (1), 02:28:486 (1), 03:00:394 (1).
-Finally some hitsound suggestion: 02:38:544 (2,3) - Remove the finish here, with only this 02:38:197 (1) is fine, furthermore is inconsistent with this 02:41:319 (2,3). 02:43:746 (4,5), 02:52:070 (4,5) & 02:56:232 (1,1,2) - Check, is the same rhythm and the whistle/finish placement is different, try to mantain the consistency because the music track is the same.

[Jenny's Hard]
-Maybe HP & OD+1
-Oh the closely space.. well anyway.
00:09:585 (1) - Remove the new combo to be consistent with 00:04:035 (4).
00:16:174 - Really considers add a stacked circle here, or unstack 00:16:001 (1,2).
00:22:070 (2) - Hmmmm maybe delete this circle, maybe....00:16:521.
00:23:631 (1) - I think in the decrease of the SV here is too sudden, imo delete this slider and add a 4/1 spinner.
01:01:087 (1) - Can you move this circle to a place more visible? really now is a bit hard to see, maybe try here http://puu.sh/v6zH.
01:46:868 (3) - The previous sequence of short combos demands a new combo here.
02:11:492 (2) - Preserve the distance spacing here to be consistent with 02:14:267 (1), try something like this http://puu.sh/v6DF.

[Insane]
01:27:272 (1,1) - Imo these new combos are needless, remove it?
-Well I think in that is all.

I hope to helps you, good luck.
Jenny
applied all stuff you mentioned since that seemed like reasoned things to me, thanks for pointing these out~
Topic Starter
Loctav

Kenezz wrote:

Hello, random mod here.
Kenezz's Bakamod~

[Normal]
-Well I don't are a big fan of the closely space in a normal diff but it's okay.
01:11:839 (3) - This could be are a combo inconsistency because is the same rhythm of here 01:22:937 (1) and here 01:28:486 (1), maybe considers add a new combo or keep a long combo in the previous points (01:22:937,01:28:486), if you change something keep in mind this 01:17:388 (3). okay
01:19:122 (1) - I don't know if you want keep this very short combo, now I see this a bit needless.okay
02:13:746 (3) - imo this repeat slider sounds ugly because don't fits properly to the track in the red ticks, considers delete this circle 02:13:573 (2) and move the slider to this white tick. I think it perfectly fits with the track and the "background vocals" occasionally appearing. I try to avoid stupid 1/2 enforcement if the song self isnt strictly 1/2
-In the last parts some shorts combos,imo, are needless, like 02:25:712 (1), 02:28:486 (1), 03:00:394 (1). okay, despite the last one, since on the Insane, the last note has an NC, too.
-Finally some hitsound suggestion: 02:38:544 (2,3) - Remove the finish here, with only this 02:38:197 (1) is fine, furthermore is inconsistent with this 02:41:319 (2,3). 02:43:746 (4,5), 02:52:070 (4,5) & 02:56:232 (1,1,2) - Check, is the same rhythm and the whistle/finish placement is different, try to mantain the consistency because the music track is the same. okay

[Insane]
01:27:272 (1,1) - Imo these new combos are needless, remove it? okay
-Well I think in that is all.

I hope to helps you, good luck.
Thanks alot.
Kenezz
The giraffes are too cute
Topic Starter
Loctav
Thanks alot. This makes me shred some tears ;w;
DarkDunskin
Wobble wobble Bubble~
TicClick
Go go!
Regou
WoW bubbled!
btw I made this for fun~ :D

Download: REDALiCE - Volar (Loctav) [Regou].osu
Topic Starter
Loctav
Oh, this diff is not that bad. When this may get ranked, I add an .osz with your diff to the topic thread :3
Andrea
[Normal]

02:57:966 (1) - Too soon after spinner for the easiest difficulty.

[Insane]

01:53:110 (5) - New combo for follow the previous style.
01:53:283 (1) - Remove new combo for the same reason.

That's it, fix and I'll rank!
Topic Starter
Loctav

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Normal]

02:57:966 (1) - Too soon after spinner for the easiest difficulty. removed the (1), so it's fixed

[Insane]

01:53:110 (5) - New combo for follow the previous style. fixed
01:53:283 (1) - Remove new combo for the same reason. fixed

That's it, fix and I'll rank!
Thanks for your mod. Updated and awaiting your love. :'D
Andrea
Looks good.

Ranked~
OnosakiHito
Congratulation~
Nitojgrem
gratz Loctav :3
merchat7
Looks like I mod this a long time ago, grats!
Topic Starter
Loctav
@merchat7 has been a while, yeh.

Thanks everyone ;__; I am so glad, you can't imagine ♥
Kenezz
Oh my... Congratz Loctaav :D!
Mercurial
Congratz man.
Xakyrie
shouldn't the hard be labelled "Hard Collab" or "Jenny and Loctav's Hard" ? now people who aren't really into the forums will believe it's just done by Jenny alone... I guess it's not too big a deal if you don't care about total credibility since it's still in the information box.

besides that, congrats Loctav! >w</
Deif
Nice job, Loctav =)
mancuso_JM_
Finally
Congratz Loctav ;)
spboxer3
congratz~ :)
Lidan
congrats :)
Kitsunemimi
Yes <3 This song is so AWESOME

Gratz on the rank!~
TicClick
Yay, one more REDALiCE song is ranked!
GamerX4life
Glückwunsch zur ranked map!
Tony
in tags "doll maker of buccuresti" should be "bucuresti".awesome map. grats
AIR315
Congratz~
thelewa
Wow this map actually contains a portal that will get the player to 2009. Just like in Chrono Trigger.
Meowcenaries
good job !
MattCore
Epic
Jenny


Poot yes!
Sephibro


lol
Topic Starter
Loctav
Object and object behavior is different on that .osu version. AiMod is inaccurate here
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