well I failed to identify the difficulty on the diff name but it's fine
Also, if it's remixed from SMRPG song, tag the song used to remix
[Kyshiro-tan]
00:02:682 (4) - If possible, reflect (3,4) horizontally because it may touch the ranking frame :/
00:11:844 (9) - make it down 1 grid so that (6,7,8) looks "curved" around (9)
00:12:483 (5) - imo the whistle on the slidertrack goes odd with the music, even whistle at the end sounds better
00:16:958 (4) - clap
00:19:302 (2) - maybe it's better to take away the clap to make contrast against (3,4,5) since it's quite quiet in (1,2).
[Un-tan]
00:18:876 (5) - feel like removing clap sounds better
00:27:611 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the recent one is ok but does not look very good... just a suggestion http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/301604 (ooops the blue slider disappear)
00:32:512 (1,2) - just can't understand the point to place like this, the man sound starts 1/2 after so I prefer 1/4 slider + (2) reduced 1 tick
00:34:216 (1,2,3) - spacing which can be fixed within grids
00:36:773 (1) - add one more tick
[Clap-tan]
OD-1
[Fish]
fine
good luck :3
Also, if it's remixed from SMRPG song, tag the song used to remix
[Kyshiro-tan]
00:02:682 (4) - If possible, reflect (3,4) horizontally because it may touch the ranking frame :/
00:11:844 (9) - make it down 1 grid so that (6,7,8) looks "curved" around (9)
00:12:483 (5) - imo the whistle on the slidertrack goes odd with the music, even whistle at the end sounds better
00:16:958 (4) - clap
00:19:302 (2) - maybe it's better to take away the clap to make contrast against (3,4,5) since it's quite quiet in (1,2).
[Un-tan]
00:18:876 (5) - feel like removing clap sounds better
00:27:611 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the recent one is ok but does not look very good... just a suggestion http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/301604 (ooops the blue slider disappear)
00:32:512 (1,2) - just can't understand the point to place like this, the man sound starts 1/2 after so I prefer 1/4 slider + (2) reduced 1 tick
00:34:216 (1,2,3) - spacing which can be fixed within grids
00:36:773 (1) - add one more tick
[Clap-tan]
OD-1
[Fish]
fine
good luck :3