As requested (Normal Mod), love this singer since she sings Yumekui Merry op
lol nukige game and there's apparantly an English translation being work on :S[
General]
- mp3 definitely feel low quality / too soft for me for me, listen to this mp3
http://puu.sh/kDmN ,notice how the background sound is so much clearer and fluid and I don't think this is the problem with 192kbs and 320kbs mp3 since I can normally barely hear a difference between both. If possible, can you find a better mp3? Ah actually I found one on the official website, please use it
http://softhouse-seal.com/product/g-001 ... _short.zip Look at mod before changing mp3, since I will be modding to current mp3.- Since you have galgame, include
galge as well (galge is just another way to say galgame and
bishoujo, source here
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bish%C5%8Djo_game, also consider adding
gal and
game to tags, since if I search these two words on the website, I will not find this song.
That should be all.
[
Easy]
00:18:113 (2) - Don't think this note is necessary, more suitable for Easy to remove this note imo. If not, I prefer if you do this for rhythm instead.
http://puu.sh/kDvu Basically, remove all notes in this combo and do repeating slider, and a circle on the stanza instead. Seem nicer for an Easy.
00:21:113 (3,4,5) - As you can see, I don't like to see this sort of pattern in Easy, repeating slider seem more suitable for Easy.
00:41:022 (2) - Don't really think you need this note.
00:42:658 (2) - ^ same reason as 00:18:113.
00:45:386 (2) - ^
00:55:749 (3) - ^
00:57:931 (3) - ^
01:00:113 (5) - ^
01:04:477 (5) - ^
01:16:749 (1,2,3) - Same as 00:21:113.
To be honest, you don't have to follow any suggestions, I think the diff is perfectly rankable as is. Just seem like you try to follow the song a little bit too much for an Easy and you don't really need some of those hit circle. Did a quick test and the map play fine without it. Your choice through.
[
Normal]
- I believe this is the only diff to use slider tick sound so this is why I didn't put this in General. You should consider making the slider tick sound quieter (audacity or other audio editing programs) since first of, the default slider tick sound is a really quiet sound, the second, similar to storyboard hitsound, you aren't really playing the note or atleast pressing a key to hit it so to have a hitsound which is equally loud as the hitsound that appear when you hit it, feel rather weird. I highly recommend to lower the volume of the slider tick sound.
See nothing wrong, since mats already modded this, I assume the kick sliders are fine. Just feel hitsound is a bit strange at the beginning and end due to tick sound. If for whatever reason you decide not to lower the volume of tick sound. Here's some things I feel you should atleast change.
00:11:022 (Tick sound) - I really dislike this tick sound since listen to the background drums here, there should be a hitsound on 00:11:022 & 00:11:158. Best suggestion is just to not have a tick sound here.
01:21:113 (6) - ^
[
Hard]
00:06:113 (2,3) - Would really prefer if you change to a slider instead, listen to the note on the red tick, it isn't very accented so it feel weird to hit a circle for an unaccented note for me.
00:12:795 (2) - I don't see why clap here? Sound weird to me and there's no drum in the background here.
00:14:022 (3) - I would really do whistle here, 2 claps like this don't sound good to me and you didn't do clap for similar pattern, specifically begin of 00:12:931 (2) so to be consistent with it.
00:14:840 (1) - ^, I prefer if you do this for hitsound clap > nothing > whistle rather than clap > clap > whiste or clap > nothing > clap or clap > clap > nothing,etc. This pattern is what I think sound best to the song for me.
00:15:658 (1) - Hmm, triple stack feel a bit weird to me, feel like there should be a jump on this note so ctrl+r it perhaps?
00:19:204 (2) - Prefer if you remove clap at end.
00:22:204 (1,2,3) - Clap > nothing > whistle
00:23:295 (1) - Prefer if you remove clap from end
00:28:068 (2) - [Follow all before refusing] Remove this clap (reason at 00:14:840), remove whistle on begin of 00:28:477 (4) and add clap to end. Whistle at begin of 00:27:658 (1).
00:29:840 (1) - Whistle at begin and maybe at end too, I think you should use whistle to follow bass sound.
00:30:658 (3,4) - Easier to read for me if you ctrl+r these two notes
*[Follow all before denying]
00:32:158 (2) - Remove clap
00:32:295 (3) - Remove whistle at end
00:32:568 (4) - Add whistle at begin, remove clap from end
00:32:840 (5) - Remove clap from end. I think you should remove the whistle too, but fine if you want to keep it.
** this part sound really offbeat since you were putting clap on the red ticks when the music is putting them on white and whistle on notes where there isn't a really accent on.
00:50:295 (4) - Perhaps copy 00:50:022 (3) and Ctrl+H
http://puu.sh/kJP5. I notice 00:49:477 (1,2) are the same sliders, but ctrl+H and ctrl+J, so I think you should do something similar here.
00:51:658 (2,3) - Same as 00:06:113.
00:59:567 (2,3,4) - Not sure what you're doing here with clap hitsound. Should have clap at begin of (2) and on (3) imo.
01:01:886 (2) - Prefer if you remove this clap.
01:02:567 (4,1) - Since you decide to add clap on previous notes, you should keep the clap rhythm rather then break it. So should add to end of (4) and on the repeat of (1). Also consider whistle at end of (1).
01:03:795 (2,3,4,5,6) - This doesn't really work, clap is much louder than whistle so when you decide to use whistle over clap, you are really make a note emphasized and since the music doesn't do this, it plays weird. The hitsound should be something similar to what I suggest for 00:59:567. I'll list them just incase
01:03:795 (2) - Remove clap, perhaps add whistle instead, sound really good if you added whistle to end of (1).
01:03:931 (3) - Remove clap at end
01:04:340 (5,6) - Clap on begin of both slider.
01:06:931 (1,2,3,4) - Clap should really be on (2) & (4), sound really off to me on (1,3). Perhaps whistle on (1,3) instead.
01:08:567 (2) - Clap at begin, follow background drums.
01:11:022 (1) - Since here, you are following vocal, you should really make this slider start at 01:10:954 (blue tick). Make this part feel weird because of this.
01:19:477 (3) - Why clap here? Prefer whistle here. The drum in background is doing this bass > snare > bass > snare so best way to represent this with hitsound is whistle > clap, when you do two claps, you're suggesting that the music is doing snare > snare, when it's just repeating the same rhythm. also since the singer is singing in 1/1, when you do clap like this, it feel like she changes rhythm or something when she didn't. Won't mention anymore, since they don't really annoy me that much.
Map look quite nice, but the way claps are done really distract me. Personally for this song, do whistle for bass sound and clap on the snares/drums, as simple as that.
[
Insane]
- Claps... please apply suggestion that I gave in Hard here. Actually I'll include an attachment with what I think you should do with hitsound. Use it how you want.
After changing the hitsound, map plays a lot better for me and is quite fun, notice some patterns that didn't play well through.
00:21:522 (3,4) - Please ctrl+R them, the jump to (5) is too big and doesn't play that nice for me.
00:22:749 (x) - Should have a hit circle here, put whistle on it. I recommend not doing jump on it, so something like this
http://puu.sh/kK5z00:23:568 (2) - Why no jump here? You did jump for these two sliders 00:22:886 (4,1), so should have one here. I suggest ctrl+Ring this slider.
00:27:931 (3) - Feel better to hit if you place it like this for me
http://puu.sh/kK63The ending when she sings zettai, zettai, zettai, this part doesn't play really well for me. I try making it better, please download Zettai in the attachment and see what you think. If you like it, here's something that you should change in it (I tried to keep to the mapping style, so not everything play well).
[Mod for the part in Zettai]
01:14:568 (1) - Make this jump smaller.
01:15:113 (3) - ^
01:15:658 (1) - ^ 1.8x/2.0x seem best .
01:17:840 (1,2) - Hit circle + sllider doesn't play well ateast for me, perhaps do 2/1 slider like at the beginning, e.g. 00:02:567 (1) or repeating slider.
01:19:749 (1) - Curve this like 01:20:295 (2).
01:23:295 (1,2) - Same as 01:17:840.
01:24:386 (1,2) - ^
01:26:568 (1) - Place this more like a diamond shape
http://puu.sh/kKcm.
01:27:113 (3,4) - Same as 01:17:840
I really hope you consider everything I mention since I think it'll make this diff a lot better. Pretty fun diff through.
Not confident to give star since I'm not of the hitsound in Hard & Insane and Insane has some patterns which doesn't play well for me. If you fix or try to fix everything, I can recheck and star if you want. Remember this is just my opinion, I notice quite a few people like the map as is so if you don't agree, you don't have to change anything.
Well that's all, good luck!
Download:
Fujiwara Marina - Zettai Daisuki (Short Ver.) (DarknessAngel) [D.N.Angel].osuDownload:
Fujiwara Marina - Zettai Daisuki (Short Ver.) (DarknessAngel) [Zettai].osu
