bossandy wrote:

抱歉 剩下20%了 晚點再給你 先給Taiko BG~

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ DarknessAngel ~

Mod time for my Queue ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. Add 'opening,galgame and guest diff creator names' in tags. fixed
2. Remove Letterbox during breaks,because have video. fixed
3. You need change Source : Zettai Junshu Kyousei Kozukuri Kyokashou!! fixed

[D.N.Angel]

1. 00:07:470 (3) - Add new combo to here,because jump. fixed
2. 00:08:561 (3) - ^ fixed
3. 00:26:151 (4) - Remove this note will be fine with me. fixed
4. 00:56:561 - Add note will be better. fixed
5. 01:23:676 (3) - Suggestion stack on 01:23:811. 放那裏玩起來不順，我改到其他地方了
6. PS:我觉的这难度...不用板子根本玩不了...太多跳了(不能这么鬼畜).
   呵呵，我用滑鼠玩得挺開心的呢~

[Hard]

1. HP,OD+1 fixed,啊咧，star rate = 4.96
2. 00:13:197 - Add clap. fixed
3. 00:30:651 (3,4) - Don't overlap, confusion here. 唔，我想保留這個

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[R a i n's Easy]

1. Change same offset as other diff.
2. 00:02:560 (1) - Add finish.
3. 00:06:924 (1) - ^
4. 00:11:288 (1) - ^
5. 00:20:015 - ^
6. 00:33:106 - ^
7. 00:38:561 - ^
8. 00:47:288 - ^
9. 01:13:448 - ^
10. 01:22:176 - ^

)

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[S h i o n's Normal]

1. AR+1 will be fun with me. fixed
2. 00:39:106 (1) - This is unrankable error,Add new combo to here. fixed
3. 01:02:561 (3) - Add finish. no for here, but 01:00:106 (3)
4. 01:09:651 - Add note will be better. no, thanks

)

S h i o n wrote:

328,72,7470,2,0,B|360:64|392:72|408:104|408:144,1,120,8|0
304,168,8560,1,8
272,272,9106,2,0,B|240:280|208:272|192:240|192:200,1,120,0|8

[Te][Amo] wrote:

[b][R a i n's Easy]

00:07:470 (2,4) - More symetrical fixed

328,72,7470,2,0,B|360:64|392:72|408:104|408:144,1,120,8|0
304,168,8560,1,8
272,272,9106,2,0,B|240:280|208:272|192:240|192:200,1,120,0|8

00:21:651 (5,6) - 1 grid to the left no
00:28:470 (1) - Add finish at the end of the slider fixed
00:56:015 (1) - ^ fixed
01:00:379 (2) - ^ fixed
01:04:742 (1) - ^ fixed
01:17:811 (1) - ^ fixed
[/b]

dragonxcz wrote:

[-Hard-]

01:32:266 (4) - Please, make this slider awesome, not linear ^^ It's for symmetry

I think there is no lot of things to mod. Nice map, good luck.

And Taiko background is bugged. Here is fix, only add song name.. http://www.mediafire.com/?7nlso32zeljyinl thanks ^^

[Te][Amo] wrote:

General:

- Make Taiko.jpg 800x600 since the other are 800x600 fixed

[D.N.Angel]

OD +1

00:20:424 (2) - Move to x:51 y:222 you are so tough :O,fixed
00:22:879 (3) - ctrl+j then move it to x:308 y:156 http://puu.sh/fGDu change another part
01:00:379 (1) - Add clap at the end of the slider nonononono,bad idea... D:
01:00:924 (3) - Add clap in the reverse arrow
01:01:742 (1) - Add clap
01:02:288 (3) - ^
01:04:742 (1) - Add clap at the end of the slider
01:05:288 (2) - Add clap in the reverse arrow
01:06:106 (1) - Add clap
01:06:651 (4) - ^
01:06:924 (6) - Delete clap at the begin of the slider and add it in the end

[Hard]

01:09:106 (3) - Add finish fixed
01:19:448 (3) - Delete clap
01:20:538 (3) - ^
01:28:175 (2) - ^
01:29:266 (3) - ^ ... ... D:

Nice mapset ! Hope it was helpful

Good Luck!

1. 00:04:742 (4) - Make the slider better? not linear.. Try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/236320
   

   168,256,4742,2,0,B|232:240|248:168,1,120,0|8

2. 00:06:106 - Clap
3. 00:10:470 - ^
4. 01:16:993 (6) - ^
5. 01:21:357 - ^
6. 01:25:720 - ^
7. 01:30:084 - ^
8. 01:32:811 - Add a note with finish here? spinner start at 01:33:084? Do this~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/236328
   

   200,360,91993,2,0,B|152:352|120:320|112:288,1,120
   104,232,92811,1,4
   256,192,93084,12,0,95811

   You can try to add some whistle~ then it will be better~

1. 00:04:197 (5) - 形狀跟(4)一樣吧:3 覺得這樣好看些 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/236334
   

   72,268,4197,2,0,B|96:224|96:172,1,100,2|8
   176,168,4742,6,0,B|208:224|288:200,1,100,2|8

2. 00:26:561 (1,2,3,4,5) - 換種排法吧o.o 這樣如何><?? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/236338
   

   364,112,26561,6,0,B|268:84,1,100,0|8
   260,164,27106,2,0,B|164:136,1,100,0|8
   88,112,27651,1,0

3. 00:33:106 - Finish
4. 00:36:379 (1) - 覺得有點怪怪的.. 感覺拖了一拍lol 試試轉盤在00:38:015結束? 然後分別在00:38:561 & 00:38:833 - 加個圈?
5. 00:53:833 (1) - 5個折返...有點太多了._. 把它縮成3個 然後後面那兩個改圈? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/236342
6. 00:59:833 - 加個圈
7. 01:17:402 - Clap
8. 01:31:720 (1,2) - 這兩個形狀一樣吧~

1. 00:08:697 (2) - d
2. 00:14:833 (4) - k
3. 00:24:106 (3) - d
4. 00:42:583 - 加個d?
5. 01:07:197 (3) - k
   不太會mod太鼓>w< 都只是建議!!~~~

1. OD+1?
2. 00:16:742 (1,2,3,4) - 這樣如何? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/236349
3. 00:36:379 (1) - 轉盤到00:37:197, 然後在00:37:470 ~ 00:38:561加8個圈(白線) 再做個音量漸增如何??
4. 01:22:038 (5) - NC?
5. 在01:32:675 & 01:32:811分別加note 然後轉盤從01:32:879開始~

1. 00:21:515 (3,4) - 位置對調?
2. 00:33:106 (1,2) - 略坑了lol 移近點嘛?
3. 00:36:379 (1) - 同Hard吧
4. 00:46:879 & 00:47:015 & 00:47:151 - 加note吧 這樣感覺有點空..
5. 00:56:561 (3) - 節奏不好._. 加個折返?
6. 01:10:197 (2) - ^
7. 01:13:008 - 加個圈
8. 01:13:312 - ^
9. 同H吧 在01:32:675 & 01:32:811分別加note 然後轉盤從01:32:879開始~

12BARRY21 wrote:

Mod here~

[Hard]

1. OD+1? 還加啊，要5星了喔><
2. 00:16:742 (1,2,3,4) - 這樣如何? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/236349 原本的其實就OK了
3. 00:36:379 (1) - 轉盤到00:37:197, 然後在00:37:470 ~ 00:38:561加8個圈(白線) 再做個音量漸增如何?? 是個好主意，不過這邊每個難度都放轉盤，所以為了一致...
4. 01:22:038 (5) - NC? 就算要加也是加在前一個，但是不怎麼需要呢
5. 在01:32:675 & 01:32:811分別加note 然後轉盤從01:32:879開始~ 恩，fixed

[Insane]

1. 00:21:515 (3,4) - 位置對調? 原本的比較好吧:O
2. 00:33:106 (1,2) - 略坑了lol 移近點嘛? 保留
3. 00:36:379 (1) - 同Hard吧 同Hard吧
4. 00:46:879 & 00:47:015 & 00:47:151 - 加note吧 這樣感覺有點空.. 不了
5. 00:56:561 (3) - 節奏不好._. 加個折返? ^
6. 01:10:197 (2) - ^ fixed
7. 01:13:008 - 加個圈 你好像沒注意到兩條紅線，有各自的時間差，所以我盡量少放note
8. 01:13:312 - ^ ^
9. 同H吧 在01:32:675 & 01:32:811分別加note 然後轉盤從01:32:879開始~ fixed

就這樣了~
祝早日RANK!!~~~

12BARRY21 wrote:

[R a i n's Easy]

1. 00:04:742 (4) - Make the slider better? not linear.. Try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/236320
   

   168,256,4742,2,0,B|232:240|248:168,1,120,0|8

2. 00:06:106 - Clap
3. 00:10:470 - ^
4. 01:16:993 (6) - ^
5. 01:21:357 - ^
6. 01:25:720 - ^
7. 01:30:084 - ^
8. 01:32:811 - Add a note with finish here? spinner start at 01:33:084? Do this~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/236328
   

   200,360,91993,2,0,B|152:352|120:320|112:288,1,120
   104,232,92811,1,4
   256,192,93084,12,0,95811

   You can try to add some whistle~ then it will be better~

Description
In 20XX, the humans are about to go extinct...

Since the ratio of men and women is now 1:10721, the authorities establish a new law, "Sex New Law", and issue a card called "Free Sex Licence". Once a man shows his card to a girl, he will be able to have sex with her soon. However, it doesn't work...

The authorities decide to issue a new license to break the deadlock...

Bobo wrote:

Description
In 20XX, the humans are about to go extinct...

Since the ratio of men and women is now 1:10721, the authorities establish a new law, "Sex New Law", and issue a card called "Free Sex Licence". Once a man shows his card to a girl, he will be able to have sex with her soon. However, it doesn't work...

The authorities decide to issue a new license to break the deadlock...

That's interesting ._.

[General]

This is obviously from a hentai game, add "Hentai" to the tags. fixed


[Hard]

The jumps in this diff are quite difficult.
And the patterns are really confusing. I don't think so

00:19:606 (3,4) - Replace with a slider? no
00:24:379 (3) - New combo. fixed

Ehh...

[DNAngel]

Why not just call it Insane? someone told me "D.N.Angel" is better than "Insane"

01:32:539 (4,1,2) - Give NC to (4) and delete NC on (1), then form a triangle. no

Hmm.... could use some work, good luck getting ranked.

Bobo wrote:

[Easy]

00:15:379 (2,3,4) - For a 220bpm song, this is actually quite hard for an Easy, just turn them into 2 sliders.
00:41:015 (2,3,4) - ^
00:49:742 (2,3,4) - ^

L_P wrote:

hi, from mod queue

因为看不出问题，全部我都给建议罢了，跟不跟在于你，谢谢~

DNA, look through (i cant pass it haiz) i dont see mistake

Hard
00:11:151 (4) - http://puu.sh/gnqk this first, and then next pattern you can keep this (to make the player familiar to the rhythm)不行啊這個，會造成間距問題
00:15:106 (2,3,1) - 很适合antijump哦 不懂..
00:30:651 (3,4) - 不移去别的地方吗？(这时候video闪了一下，容易误解)像在下一个slider的头上更好吧 改成一個slider
另外这个难度的spacing有些大，果然是触手做的图，下次建议做小一点的哈哈
因為我覺得相對於最難難度已經算很簡單，所以不知不覺把間距弄開一點lol
00:49:470 (1,2,3,4) - 这四个感觉上是一组的，不如做个四个slider的形状/pattern
雖然是這麼說，但是第4個也排成同樣的形狀會有各種問題...
00:51:379 (1) - stack在下个note上面感觉良好？ 保留，因為我原本就打算這麼放的~
00:55:061 (1) - stack吧，不然太难了 不行，這裡就是要放跳躍的
01:11:781 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - spacing由小至大？ 好主意，fixed
01:32:675 (1,2) - spacing过大啊啊啊 ...是喔，雖然看不出來但還是fixed了

慢来，慢来，加油！

spboxer3 wrote:

Hello from tutuhaha and spboxer3's Mod queue

[general]

• 
  Settings
  

1. 影片必須要無聲的~ 不會用怎麼辦...

[Hard]

• 
  Settings
  

1. 未需要使用的綠線:
   01:35:539 -
   01:10:963 - 有啊這個[/color]

Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)
mapping

1. 00:54:379 (3,1,2) - (3,1)和(3,2)等間距會好看些 居然看這麼仔細...調好了
2. 01:03:106 (1,3,4) - 3的結尾還有4使用clap 1的clap拿掉 3已經有了，其他fixed

[D.N.Angel]

• 
  Settings
  

1. 未需要使用的綠線:
   01:35:539 -
   01:10:963 -
   

Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)

1. 01:06:651 (4,6) - 保留

mapping

1. none~

恩~這張作的不錯!! 不過我覺得Hard做的比你的特有難度好lol
star
加油瞜~

wmfchris wrote:

taiko mod as requested

[Taiko]
00:03:106 - this tone of this phrase is higher than the last one, try k d k
00:03:651 - ^ k
00:07:470 - ^
00:08:015 - ^
00:10:197 - try k d k d k or stream?
00:38:288 - observing the gituar pitch I think kkddd sounds better
00:56:015 - this note belongs to both last and next sentences. but if you maintain the stream, apply higher SV to this note as well, in order to avoid misleading players.
01:12:872 - try k---d d k...
01:32:879 - place the spinner 1/2 later than the notes

哇靠 不帶這麼兇殘的萌妹子
I think the 1/4 style is maintained throughout the song, which is ok for me, but the 1/4 since the red line sounds very random and need some fixing there.

Byakugan249 wrote:

Yo im here from 249 and sekai's Moe queue

General:
i think itd be better if u can set the lead in to 500 or 1000 because u could giv players some time to adjust. fix to 500


Hard:
00:47:220 - same as my suggestion on easy I think it is fine :O
01:32:879 - ^ ^

D.N.Angel:
01:32:879 - same as my suggestion on easy. ^

this is the best i can do. Star and GL

1. Inconsistency kiai times in taiko diff

yeah, like a hard diff... but whatever

Yasora-chan wrote:

yo

General

1. Inconsistency kiai times in taiko diff

Easy
00:33:651 (3) new combo should in here (because same as 00:30:651 (1,2) and 00:32:560 (1,2)). also, remove clap in the next note
00:53:833 (5) add new combo
01:09:106 (6) ^
umm.. since the BPM is too high, not good if put note 1/1 and the pattern is too hard for beginner players. I mean, you put note like this. this isn't looking easy diff orz

Normal
00:09:106 (6) this combo set is too long imo. I suggest to add new combo in here
00:24:106 (1) uhh... maybe this is just me.. this slider is too weird to look orz. can make that into curve slider usually?
00:39:106 (1) I think this slider sound in the beginning is too silent in my ear. add sound like whistle or something, maybe?
01:23:266 (3).. spacing?
yeah, like a hard diff... but whatever

That's all...orz
Nice map :3 Good luck~

Byakugan249 wrote:

R a i n's Easy:
00:47:220 - re-snap this line to the red tick.
00:47:288(1) - this curve looks ugly IMO. itd look nice if u can make this look the same as (2)
01:33:084(1) - end this spinner till 01:36:357 to follow the rest of the guitar

Yasora-chan wrote:

Easy
00:33:651 (3) new combo should in here (because same as 00:30:651 (1,2) and 00:32:560 (1,2)). also, remove clap in the next note
00:53:833 (5) add new combo
01:09:106 (6) ^
umm.. since the BPM is too high, not good if put note 1/1 and the pattern is too hard for beginner players. I mean, you put note like this. this isn't looking easy diff orz

-Sekai- wrote:

[R a i n's Easy]

1. 00:18:106 (2) - 1 grip down maybe? fixed
2. 00:31:470 (2) - spacing ~ fixed
3. 00:32:560 (1) - delete this note seems useless? ok,it delete
4. 00:51:106 (4) - add a finish on the end of the slider? add end of the slider
5. 00:53:833 (5) - NC, new vocal start here~ fixed~
6. 00:58:197 (X) - add a note? ok,add
7. 01:00:106 (1) - delete it just like 00:32:560 (1) - ? ok
8. 01:16:720 (5) - NC? fixed

Leorda wrote:

R a i n's Easy
00:14:560 (1) - Add 1 repeating slider and add whistle at end slider? add whistle
00:19:470 (x) - Add note here? no
00:32:833 (3) - New combo for your combo pattern ok~ fixed
00:33:651 (1) - Remove new combo ^
00:35:288 (1) - ^ ^

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO


S h i o n's Normal
00:06:651 (x) - Add note here? no fixed
00:39:106 (1) - New combo for preventing of spinner bug fixed


Boss Taiko Oni
* 2nd Kiai should end at 00:56:015 to make consistent on each diff fixed
* If you have a taiko BG, you have to remove the video via .osu files fixed


Hard
00:55:061 (1,2) - This jumps seems sudden, consider to reduce it? no fixed


D.N.Angel
01:32:879 (1) - End at 01:35:538, like others diff fixed


Ohhh!!!! Another Fujiwara clan! The name is "Fujiwara no Marina"!!! aaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

...fixed

• Hi hi~ request from In-Game PM~
  　
  General :
  　

1. 01:32:879 (1) - 每個diff spinner上的 綠線都不一樣 統一吧 ( All diff have different green line on the spinner ,make it the same )
   　
   R a i n's Easy :
   　
2. 01:00:106 (X) - add a note?
   　
   S h i o n's Normal :
   　
3. 00:10:197 (3) - 拜託 別讓頭尾碰在一起 打起來感覺不好
4. 00:19:742 (1) - 頭加個whistle聽起來更好 ^_^
5. 00:44:015 (3) - 結尾clap吧 跟著音樂 這裡停止加clap感覺不好!
6. 00:48:924 (4) - 不好看
7. 01:11:781 (5) - 結尾whistle~
8. 01:17:266 (3) - spacing~
9. 01:32:266 (2) - ^
   　
   Hard :
   　
10. 坑爹的Hard...挑不出東西啦!!!~
    　
    D.N.Angel :
    　
11. 00:47:015 (X) - 加個note 複製00:46:742 (4) - 然後Ctrl+>兩次 XD
12. 00:56:424 (2) - spacing有那麼一點不一樣 但應該沒差多少~
    　
    
    You must to read~!

    red: I think you must to fix. bule: need to discuss. Black: just suggest.

bossandy wrote:

[list][size=125]
S h i o n's Normal :
　
[*]00:10:197 (3) - 拜託 別讓頭尾碰在一起 打起來感覺不好 fixed
[*]00:19:742 (1) - 頭加個whistle聽起來更好 ^_^ x
[*]00:44:015 (3) - 結尾clap吧 跟著音樂 這裡停止加clap感覺不好! fixed
[*]00:48:924 (4) - 不好看 ;_;
[*]01:11:781 (5) - 結尾whistle~ k
[*]01:17:266 (3) - spacing~ fixed
[*]01:32:266 (2) - ^ ^

bossandy wrote:

• Hi hi~ request from In-Game PM~
  　
  General :
  　

1. 01:32:879 (1) - 每個diff spinner上的 綠線都不一樣 統一吧 ( All diff have different green line on the spinner ,make it the same ) 再說...orz　
   　
   Hard :
   　
2. 坑爹的Hard...挑不出東西啦!!!~ :O
   　
   D.N.Angel :
   　
3. 00:47:015 (X) - 加個note 複製00:46:742 (4) - 然後Ctrl+>兩次 XD 是個好主意，不過這裡我是故意這樣放的，能讓玩家暫停稍作休息
4. 00:56:424 (2) - spacing有那麼一點不一樣 但應該沒差多少~ 這真的是差那麼一丁點啊...我移掉grid調了..
   　
   
   You must to read~!

   red: I think you must to fix. bule: need to discuss. Black: just suggest.

--------------------------------------------------------
哭了 難譜我mod不來lol~~
Have my Star~ Good Luck :3

ertyukjh010 wrote:

Normal

00:24:106 (1) - 怪怪的圖案 故意的= =
00:44:015 (3) - 這個Slider沒跟音樂吧，改為到00:44:561結束，00:44:833放Note 不了~
00:52:742 (6,1) - 沒有平衡 修了一点

bossandy wrote:

　
R a i n's Easy :
　
[*]01:00:106 (X) - add a note? no

ertyukjh010 wrote:

Ertyukjh010's modding ><"

Easy

感覺還好，只是排版有點隨便= =" 這製圖者看不懂中文



Hard

00:17:833 (1,2) - 這兩個Slider各自按Ctrl+J都看到沒有對稱 fixed
01:11:099 (2) - 刪掉 fixed

DNA

00:19:197 (2,3) - 太遠了；再後慮一下這個距離 fixed
00:22:742 (X) - add note 故意不加的
總覺得會不會Overmap= =貼一個自己1PC的記錄↓ 0miss owo

2PC↓ 感覺OD7甚至6會比較好，不然這麼跳會打出很多100分 HP-1,OD-1

快快Rank掉吧~~
滿8星我就不加了，如果您真的需要就密我~~
GoodLuck

1. Remove audio from the video for reducing size.
2. Remove offsets 70963, 73176 and 73448. I'm sure about one offset is enough. Just vocal is off at this time, instrument is fine. Also the last offset is a bit fast to me. Anyway you need double check.

ykcarrot wrote:

Hi there I'm here.


[General]

1. Remove audio from the video for reducing size. fixed
2. Remove offsets 70963, 73176 and 73448. I'm sure about one offset is enough. Just vocal is off at this time, instrument is fine. Also the last offset is a bit fast to me. Anyway you need double check. fixed

[D.N.Angel]
00:34:606 (2) - I feel better this position for flow. That jump is quite force to me. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/244602
fixed


[Hard]
00:49:470 (1,2,3,4) - How about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/244606
nope


Everything is fine except the timing issue. Ask timing expert one more time before rank it.
Good luck!

BeatofIke wrote:

Request from my modding queue. Sorry for the long wait.

[General]
-I wish I know how to censor videos with white. >_< haha~me,too XD
-Your offset sounds a bit late. Try changing it to 2,553. If you do, make sure you change the offset and re-snap all the timing sections in all difficulties. I think offset is OK :O

[R a i n's Easy]
-Good

[S h i o n's Normal]
-00:44:017 (3) - I'm not certain which sound this slider is going to.
-00:52:744 (6) - ^

[Hard]
-Seems a bit too jumpy for a hard difficulty, otherwise it's okay.

[D.N.Angel]
-JUMP SPAM!!!
-Some notes are hard to predict, due to sudden spacing changes thoughout the map. I've seen this in some insane maps I've played and failed XD (i suck :0). Anyway, nothing wrong here.

To be honest, I think this map is ready for a bubble.

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
offset:+5 fixed


[Hard]
进kiai怎么突然不知道clap该放哪了，太不连贯…… 哦好吧，改成一貫模式
00:57:244 (3) - 挪开点边缘别叠上 fixed
01:11:017 (1) - 这vocal自己没唱准的地方你还是别强求了我觉得，用个slider好些 fixed
01:19:472 (3) - 多余clap 故意加的，我個人滿喜歡
01:28:199 (2) - ^ ^
01:29:290 (3) - 这个还凑合不过也不建议 欸，這怎麼了嗎

[D.N.Angel]
最前面那段建议remap，如果我只看了那点可能就拉黑了 ...為什麼orz
还是进了kiai突然不知道clap放哪的问题 fixed
01:13:949 (3,4) - ……虽然是vocal的问题但节奏不能这么来 在藍線上...這是意外lol，fixed

[Boss Taiko Oni]
kiai尾没snap到。 fixed


这歌vocal比较不靠谱，图的话中规中矩吧，综合一下就是不想泡……抱歉。 哦...

NatsumeRin wrote:

[R a i n's Easy]
00:53:017 (3) - delete?
01:00:108 - add a note (whistle?)

JauiPlaY wrote:

Hi
一些建議

[General]
Fine.

[Hard]
00:26:840 (2,3) - 覺得有點難而且有點難看...如果是我會把它們放在00:26:022 (3,4)的頭上 唔，我刻意調出這距離以容易區別1/2與1/1的
00:44:022 (1,2) - 難看...(2)應該再拉開一點比如拉到x120y124 哦...微調了下
00:44:977 (4,1) - ^一個建議 ^
00:46:749 (4,1) - 中間總覺得少了甚麼 我故意留的空白，好讓玩家暫停休息下
01:11:022 (1) - 似乎是藍線起跳 我個人還在考慮當中...要是這改了的話全部難度都要改，其實我覺得用slider可以把這感覺稍微去除一些

[D.N.Angel]
00:46:749 (4,1) - 同Hard 同Hard
01:35:568 (T) - 無用綠線一根 fixed

恩我覺得可以泡了

JauiPlaY wrote:

[R a i n's Easy]
00:23:295 (1,2) - (1)的new combo應該給(2)
01:01:749 (1) - 去掉nc
01:07:204 (4) - 應該放到前面的長白線吧,然後01:07:749再加個note
01:33:113 (1) - 應該放到前面紅線
我覺得combo下的有點亂

DarknessAngel wrote:

[R a i n's Easy]
00:23:295 (1,2) - remove this nc and add it to the next note ok
01:01:749 (1) - remove nc 01:01:749 (2) - add NC
01:06:658 (3,4,5) - try to make this rhythm sorry,nochenged
I think your new combo setting is a little bad

Kuma-san wrote:

Hi~
[Hard]
Hmmm...Are you sure its rankable? Why not?

hillaryzx wrote:

R a i n's Easy

00:32:568 - add a circle here?
00:35:295(3) - add 1 more repeat here...
01:02:022 - add note here, I feel a bit blank here...

DarknessAngel wrote:

Kuma-san wrote:

Hi~
[Hard]
Hmmm...Are you sure its rankable? Why not?

Kuma-san wrote:

Oh lol.i forgot to paste it. i mean are you sure its rankable 00:30:658 (3) - ?

Lissette wrote:

Hi~ sorry for the delay yeah,I wait you for a long time <3

Add rain and shion to tags fixed

D.N.Angel
00:22:204 (1,2,3) - 3 looks like is at 1/2 beat from other notes due to the jump from 1 to 2, and is awkward to play really, place it farther so the spacing look even no fix because I really like this part T.T
00:23:295 (1,2,3,4) - the jump from 1 to 2 is just so random, and doesn't fit to me at all fixed
00:40:749 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The vocals highlight in this part, follow them more fixed
00:45:249 (2) - remove note, feels awkward to to vocals being predominant in this part, also make the spacing between the 2 notes left like this 00:44:568 (1,2) - fixed
00:52:340 (4) - remove note too, this is kinda overmapped >< fixed
01:13:477 - 01:14:568 (1) - this part is <3, except for this combo 01:14:568 (1,2,3,4,5) that you should remove 3. fixed
01:19:340 (3) - delete note fixed
01:23:704 (3) - same fixed
01:24:795 (3) - same fixed

Lissette wrote:

Add rain and shion to tags

R a i n wrote:

Lissette wrote:

Add rain and shion to tags

Please remove rain tag
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/44346
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/45435
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/39120
I'm not Rain
sorry

Neptunus wrote:

抱歉推迟了这么久，因为写论文的关系

Easy:
00:24:931 (1) - 这个地方取消newcombo，Easy难度做的太华丽反而不助于读谱，并且，类似的地方，00:29:295 (2) - 也没有newcombo啊
IMO：01:21:113 (5) - 这个地方也可以换成01:16:749 (1,2,3) - 这样，更好玩~

這製圖者不懂中文喔

Hard：
AR-1
个人认为这个难度当insane差不多
01:27:658 (1) - 去掉newcombo 我從頭到尾都是這樣設定的唷

D.N.Angel：
AR-1
00:06:931 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 我从这几个音里面听出来offset是不是有误？放到25%的速度试试看，也许能听出什么来，或者说，这歌曲对着vocal和rhythme不一致？如果是这样，那个歌曲的vocal显然盖过了rhythme，萝莉的声音果然不可小视啊。。。。。。
只是演唱者沒唱準而已別在意 ~

问题基本没啥，该找mat了，加油~

merchat7 wrote:

As requested (Normal Mod), love this singer since she sings Yumekui Merry op

lol nukige game and there's apparantly an English translation being work on :S

[General]

- mp3 definitely feel low quality / too soft for me for me, listen to this mp3 http://puu.sh/kDmN ,notice how the background sound is so much clearer and fluid and I don't think this is the problem with 192kbs and 320kbs mp3 since I can normally barely hear a difference between both. If possible, can you find a better mp3? Ah actually I found one on the official website, please use it http://softhouse-seal.com/product/g-001 ... _short.zip Look at mod before changing mp3, since I will be modding to current mp3.
- Since you have galgame, include galge as well (galge is just another way to say galgame and bishoujo, source here http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bish%C5%8Djo_game, also consider adding gal and game to tags, since if I search these two words on the website, I will not find this song.

added "bishoujo gal game" to tags,but I cannot use your mp3 because of an error...orz
I guess it's because its name,it should be in "English or Chinese",or I can't use the mp3

That should be all.


[Hard]

00:06:113 (2,3) - Would really prefer if you change to a slider instead, listen to the note on the red tick, it isn't very accented so it feel weird to hit a circle for an unaccented note for me.
00:12:795 (2) - I don't see why clap here? Sound weird to me and there's no drum in the background here.
00:14:022 (3) - I would really do whistle here, 2 claps like this don't sound good to me and you didn't do clap for similar pattern, specifically begin of 00:12:931 (2) so to be consistent with it.
00:14:840 (1) - ^, I prefer if you do this for hitsound clap > nothing > whistle rather than clap > clap > whiste or clap > nothing > clap or clap > clap > nothing,etc. This pattern is what I think sound best to the song for me.
00:15:658 (1) - Hmm, triple stack feel a bit weird to me, feel like there should be a jump on this note so ctrl+r it perhaps?
00:19:204 (2) - Prefer if you remove clap at end.
00:22:204 (1,2,3) - Clap > nothing > whistle
00:23:295 (1) - Prefer if you remove clap from end
00:28:068 (2) - [Follow all before refusing] Remove this clap (reason at 00:14:840), remove whistle on begin of 00:28:477 (4) and add clap to end. Whistle at begin of 00:27:658 (1).
00:29:840 (1) - Whistle at begin and maybe at end too, I think you should use whistle to follow bass sound.
00:30:658 (3,4) - Easier to read for me if you ctrl+r these two notes
*[Follow all before denying]
00:32:158 (2) - Remove clap
00:32:295 (3) - Remove whistle at end
00:32:568 (4) - Add whistle at begin, remove clap from end
00:32:840 (5) - Remove clap from end. I think you should remove the whistle too, but fine if you want to keep it.
** this part sound really offbeat since you were putting clap on the red ticks when the music is putting them on white and whistle on notes where there isn't a really accent on.
00:50:295 (4) - Perhaps copy 00:50:022 (3) and Ctrl+H http://puu.sh/kJP5. I notice 00:49:477 (1,2) are the same sliders, but ctrl+H and ctrl+J, so I think you should do something similar here.
00:51:658 (2,3) - Same as 00:06:113.
00:59:567 (2,3,4) - Not sure what you're doing here with clap hitsound. Should have clap at begin of (2) and on (3) imo.
01:01:886 (2) - Prefer if you remove this clap.
01:02:567 (4,1) - Since you decide to add clap on previous notes, you should keep the clap rhythm rather then break it. So should add to end of (4) and on the repeat of (1). Also consider whistle at end of (1).
01:03:795 (2,3,4,5,6) - This doesn't really work, clap is much louder than whistle so when you decide to use whistle over clap, you are really make a note emphasized and since the music doesn't do this, it plays weird. The hitsound should be something similar to what I suggest for 00:59:567. I'll list them just incase
01:03:795 (2) - Remove clap, perhaps add whistle instead, sound really good if you added whistle to end of (1).
01:03:931 (3) - Remove clap at end
01:04:340 (5,6) - Clap on begin of both slider.
01:06:931 (1,2,3,4) - Clap should really be on (2) & (4), sound really off to me on (1,3). Perhaps whistle on (1,3) instead.
01:08:567 (2) - Clap at begin, follow background drums.
01:11:022 (1) - Since here, you are following vocal, you should really make this slider start at 01:10:954 (blue tick). Make this part feel weird because of this.
01:19:477 (3) - Why clap here? Prefer whistle here. The drum in background is doing this bass > snare > bass > snare so best way to represent this with hitsound is whistle > clap, when you do two claps, you're suggesting that the music is doing snare > snare, when it's just repeating the same rhythm. also since the singer is singing in 1/1, when you do clap like this, it feel like she changes rhythm or something when she didn't. Won't mention anymore, since they don't really annoy me that much.

Map look quite nice, but the way claps are done really distract me. Personally for this song, do whistle for bass sound and clap on the snares/drums, as simple as that.

[Insane]

- Claps... please apply suggestion that I gave in Hard here. Actually I'll include an attachment with what I think you should do with hitsound. Use it how you want.

After changing the hitsound, map plays a lot better for me and is quite fun, notice some patterns that didn't play well through.

00:21:522 (3,4) - Please ctrl+R them, the jump to (5) is too big and doesn't play that nice for me.
00:22:749 (x) - Should have a hit circle here, put whistle on it. I recommend not doing jump on it, so something like this http://puu.sh/kK5z
00:23:568 (2) - Why no jump here? You did jump for these two sliders 00:22:886 (4,1), so should have one here. I suggest ctrl+Ring this slider.
00:27:931 (3) - Feel better to hit if you place it like this for me http://puu.sh/kK63
The ending when she sings zettai, zettai, zettai, this part doesn't play really well for me. I try making it better, please download Zettai in the attachment and see what you think. If you like it, here's something that you should change in it (I tried to keep to the mapping style, so not everything play well).
[Mod for the part in Zettai]
01:14:568 (1) - Make this jump smaller.
01:15:113 (3) - ^
01:15:658 (1) - ^ 1.8x/2.0x seem best .
01:17:840 (1,2) - Hit circle + sllider doesn't play well ateast for me, perhaps do 2/1 slider like at the beginning, e.g. 00:02:567 (1) or repeating slider.
01:19:749 (1) - Curve this like 01:20:295 (2).
01:23:295 (1,2) - Same as 01:17:840.
01:24:386 (1,2) - ^
01:26:568 (1) - Place this more like a diamond shape http://puu.sh/kKcm.
01:27:113 (3,4) - Same as 01:17:840

I really hope you consider everything I mention since I think it'll make this diff a lot better. Pretty fun diff through.

Not confident to give star since I'm not of the hitsound in Hard & Insane and Insane has some patterns which doesn't play well for me. If you fix or try to fix everything, I can recheck and star if you want. Remember this is just my opinion, I notice quite a few people like the map as is so if you don't agree, you don't have to change anything.

Well that's all, good luck!

I'm sorry that I just fixed about 40% because I want to keep some of my idea
I should admit that I didn't take care of hitsound setting when I was mapping
yeah my map looks better now,thank for your detailed MOD ~

merchat7 wrote:

[Easy]

00:18:113 (2) - Don't think this note is necessary, more suitable for Easy to remove this note imo. If not, I prefer if you do this for rhythm instead. http://puu.sh/kDvu Basically, remove all notes in this combo and do repeating slider, and a circle on the stanza instead. Seem nicer for an Easy.
00:21:113 (3,4,5) - As you can see, I don't like to see this sort of pattern in Easy, repeating slider seem more suitable for Easy.
00:41:022 (2) - Don't really think you need this note.
00:42:658 (2) - ^ same reason as 00:18:113.
00:45:386 (2) - ^
00:55:749 (3) - ^
00:57:931 (3) - ^
01:00:113 (5) - ^
01:04:477 (5) - ^
01:16:749 (1,2,3) - Same as 00:21:113.

To be honest, you don't have to follow any suggestions, I think the diff is perfectly rankable as is. Just seem like you try to follow the song a little bit too much for an Easy and you don't really need some of those hit circle. Did a quick test and the map play fine without it. Your choice through.

Lissette wrote:

Re-check~

D.N.Angel
00:22:886 (4) - wrong spacing fixed
00:23:295 (1,2,3,4) - I don't get what you are following with this combo ok,I changed this part
00:25:749 (2,3,4) - This spacing is confusing, because it seems 3 and 4 are at the same distance as 2 and 3, and player will hit early 4 I think it is OK because I found some players to play this diff and they haven't hit early hear :O
00:36:386 (1) - end spinner at 00:38:295 - and starts notes where the kiai starts No,I want to keep this part,and all of spinner at the moment is the same as this diff except R a i n's easy
01:17:840 (1,2) - doesn't fit, try something like this 01:19:749 (1,2) - fixed
01:30:522 (5) - remove note, fix spacing after I changed this part ~

I'm a bit concerned about this difficulty, since the vocals highlights from the music, and this is mapped basically following the music, is kinda hard to follow, at least for me, also i feel some jumps out of place, maybe due to that too.

qazok4444 wrote:

趕快rank這張圖XD

這張圖好好玩 但是我沒辦法給你星星了:(

加油~!!

101,261,48931,2,0,B|71:248|49:268|43:296|69:316,2,100,0|8|2

DJPop wrote:

~Hard~
00:14:022 (3) - remove clap no changed because I like this lol
00:23:295 (1) - remove clap at the end ^
00:55:477 (3) - add clap at the end fixed
00:55:749 (4) - add clap at start ^
01:19:477 (3) - remove clap ^
01:20:568 (3) - ^ ^
01:28:204 (2) - ^ ^
01:29:295 (3) - ^ ^

~D.N.Angel~
00:06:386 (3) - add new combo
00:23:295 (1) - remove clap
00:26:295 (4) - add new combo
00:26:840 (1) - remove new combo
00:32:022 (1,2) - remove clap at start
00:32:977 (3,1,2) - too far
00:40:613 (3) - move to 256:192 or somewhere else but higher than old position
00:48:931 (3) - add new combo
01:25:477 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - too confused all fixed

DJPop wrote:

~R a i n's Easy~
00:22:204 (6) - add new combo
00:24:113 (1) - remove new combo
01:32:977 (1) - use sound like other diffs

DJPop wrote:

Small things.


~R a i n's Easy~
01:32:977 (1) - add finish

240,192,69658,6,0,B|252:216|276:232|304:244|328:248|352:244|380:232|408:216|420:184,1,209.999993741512,2|2

NatsumeRin wrote:

这歌vocal比较不靠谱

LKs wrote:

[01:09:590 - 01:13:477]

http://puu.sh/wgDi

//恩，那我把D.N難度裡的一個長條改掉了

参考用

我跟wmf讨论了 我个人的意思是这样

testdiff里的notes是一直跟着鼓的镲在放 都贴合的上 再加上后面部分能直接用这跟offest 所以BPM应该没有问题

这可能是一种音乐编曲的效果 故意把人声放在伴奏前1/4(或者某个数值)提前发声 听起来不难受但做图就比较麻烦了

你现在跟的是第一个用提前1/4后面全部1/2处理个人感觉有点问题 至少听起来 我觉得还是跟人声比较合适

http://puu.sh/wgHx 这里的节奏至少这么放会更舒服 不过还需要更多人确认

[-]

NatsumeRin wrote:

这歌vocal比较不靠谱

wmfchris wrote:

~

[General]
01:10:954 - the timing over this section (01:10:954 - ~ 01:13:477 - ) is doubtful for me, it sounds slight slower than the rest of the song. The notes are quite out from correct timing. //hmm...some people said it is okay,but I'm not sure lol

[Hard]
01:09:658 (1) - symmetricities fix:

  [color=#FF0000]//fixed[/color]240,192,69658,6,0,B|252:216|276:232|304:244|328:248|352:244|380:232|408:216|420:184,1,209.999993741512,2|2

[D.N.]
居然才4.9 這不科學 //+1,爆星也沒必要這樣啊lol
01:30:658 (5) - try to put it around (212,228)? It produces a parallelgram on the left-bottom corner, and reduce overlapping with the next slider. //k
01:32:568 (4) - NC should be placed here instead of next note. //I want to keep this because it emphasize the drum,and it looks good for me

[Normal]
00:33:658 (2) - [Nazi] right 1 grid lv4 //fixed


基本上最大的問題就是那個timing 其次是bossandy太鬼畜了 嗯

timing感覺上沒問題，聽起來違和其實是因為演唱者沒唱準 - by 某人(忘記是誰了...)

wmfchris wrote:

[Taiko]
1/4感覺還是有點多了
00:06:386 - 參考鼓聲ddddkkkkd
00:46:204 - 太串了 <_< 可以用k k d d k ddk k d
00:56:022 - 避免重疊 這個notes也加速
01:13:477 - recover the 1.0x speed here

基本上最大的問題就是那個timing 其次是bossandy太鬼畜了 妳才鬼畜

Odaril wrote:

hard: 00:22:204 (1,2,3) - this spacing is very surprising and ugly //fixed

Anyway, timing: -10ms to the offset fixed !

For the part wmfchris pointed out, the vocals are awfully off (about 1/8 off actually), but the drums are spot on. No other timing section is needed. //I think so,too

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
offset:+5 (就是現在使用的)

LKs wrote:

offset - 8 ~ 10

kanpakyin wrote:

Timing: offset: 2561
I highly doubt it is bpm's fault....
For me,I would remove all notes from that part and put a spinner instead.It can avoid any error from the singer.but well :/

Garven wrote:

o/ o/


[Hard]
00:19:603 (3) - This is pretty tricky since you use a lot of jumps prior, then change the rhythm -and- use distance snap. //hmm..I change 00:19:603 (3,4) to a slider,I think it is okay now
00:56:285 (1) - Check your hitsounds here //fixed

[D.N.A]
00:19:194 (2,3) - I'm not feeling this jump //It is to be consistent with 00:27:648 (1,2,3,4).
I made this jump because of rhythm changing and emphasis
00:39:103 (1) - New combo // !!! fixed
01:10:944 (3) - Yeah, just snap these to the rhythms where they should be instead of where she's singing. It's really off and won't play well.

I follow the vocal to make this diff,so I must keep this part since ↓

Odaril wrote:

the vocals are awfully off (about 1/8 off actually), but the drums are spot on.

Why didn't I follow the drum... ? orz

Garven wrote:

[S h i o n's Normal]
00:28:739 (2,4) - Forget your slider ticks? fixed
00:39:103 (1) - Feels way soon after a spinner for a Normal. Replaced the spinner with a repeated slider