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Fujiwara Marina - Zettai Daisuki (Short Ver.)

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arien666
Everything seems fine :3
But not sure about bubbling yet ;___;
sorry orz



meow
Lissette
Re-check~

D.N.Angel
00:22:886 (4) - wrong spacing
00:23:295 (1,2,3,4) - I don't get what you are following with this combo
00:25:749 (2,3,4) - This spacing is confusing, because it seems 3 and 4 are at the same distance as 2 and 3, and player will hit early 4
00:36:386 (1) - end spinner at 00:38:295 - and starts notes where the kiai starts
01:17:840 (1,2) - doesn't fit, try something like this 01:19:749 (1,2) -
01:30:522 (5) - remove note, fix spacing after

I'm a bit concerned about this difficulty, since the vocals highlights from the music, and this is mapped basically following the music, is kinda hard to follow, at least for me, also i feel some jumps out of place, maybe due to that too.
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel

Lissette wrote:

Re-check~

D.N.Angel
00:22:886 (4) - wrong spacing fixed
00:23:295 (1,2,3,4) - I don't get what you are following with this combo ok,I changed this part
00:25:749 (2,3,4) - This spacing is confusing, because it seems 3 and 4 are at the same distance as 2 and 3, and player will hit early 4 I think it is OK because I found some players to play this diff and they haven't hit early hear :O
00:36:386 (1) - end spinner at 00:38:295 - and starts notes where the kiai starts No,I want to keep this part,and all of spinner at the moment is the same as this diff except R a i n's easy
01:17:840 (1,2) - doesn't fit, try something like this 01:19:749 (1,2) - fixed
01:30:522 (5) - remove note, fix spacing after I changed this part ~

I'm a bit concerned about this difficulty, since the vocals highlights from the music, and this is mapped basically following the music, is kinda hard to follow, at least for me, also i feel some jumps out of place, maybe due to that too.
Thanks MOD ~ :)
NeNe_GoShyuJiN
趕快rank這張圖XD

這張圖好好玩 但是我沒辦法給你星星了:(

加油~!!
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel

qazok4444 wrote:

趕快rank這張圖XD

這張圖好好玩 但是我沒辦法給你星星了:(

加油~!!
嗯嗯我會盡量快點的 ~
謝謝捧場! ;)
Lissette
Re-check~

D.N.Angel
I'm still not sure about this difficulty, I tried to help with my suggestions but I still find it hard too follow, and jumps out of place @.@ Try getting a second opinion about this.
DJPop
~R a i n's Easy~
00:22:204 (6) - add new combo
00:24:113 (1) - remove new combo
01:32:977 (1) - use sound like other diffs

~S h i o n's Normal~
00:48:931 (4) - fix its shape
101,261,48931,2,0,B|71:248|49:268|43:296|69:316,2,100,0|8|2
00:53:840 (1) - add claps on slider ticks and add clap on 00:55:477
01:32:977 (1) - use sound like other diffs

~Hard~
00:14:022 (3) - remove clap
00:23:295 (1) - remove clap at the end
00:55:477 (3) - add clap at the end
00:55:749 (4) - add clap at start
01:19:477 (3) - remove clap
01:20:568 (3) - ^
01:28:204 (2) - ^
01:29:295 (3) - ^

~D.N.Angel~
00:06:386 (3) - add new combo
00:23:295 (1) - remove clap
00:26:295 (4) - add new combo
00:26:840 (1) - remove new combo
00:32:022 (1,2) - remove clap at start
00:32:977 (3,1,2) - too far
00:40:613 (3) - move to 256:192 or somewhere else but higher than old position
00:48:931 (3) - add new combo
01:25:477 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - too confused
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel

DJPop wrote:

~Hard~
00:14:022 (3) - remove clap no changed because I like this lol
00:23:295 (1) - remove clap at the end ^
00:55:477 (3) - add clap at the end fixed
00:55:749 (4) - add clap at start ^
01:19:477 (3) - remove clap ^
01:20:568 (3) - ^ ^
01:28:204 (2) - ^ ^
01:29:295 (3) - ^ ^

~D.N.Angel~
00:06:386 (3) - add new combo
00:23:295 (1) - remove clap
00:26:295 (4) - add new combo
00:26:840 (1) - remove new combo
00:32:022 (1,2) - remove clap at start
00:32:977 (3,1,2) - too far
00:40:613 (3) - move to 256:192 or somewhere else but higher than old position
00:48:931 (3) - add new combo
01:25:477 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - too confused all fixed
Thank for your modding ~ :)

waiting R a i n & S h i o n's reply
R a i n

DJPop wrote:

~R a i n's Easy~
00:22:204 (6) - add new combo
00:24:113 (1) - remove new combo
01:32:977 (1) - use sound like other diffs
All fixed

Download: Fujiwara Marina - Zettai Daisuki (Short Ver.) (DarknessAngel) [R a i n's Easy].osu
S h i o n
sorry, I'm late T.T

all fixed~

http://puu.sh/qwWo
DJPop
Small things.


~R a i n's Easy~
01:32:977 (1) - add finish

~S h i o n's Normal~
00:55:749 - add clap on this tick too
01:32:977 (1) - add finish
R a i n

DJPop wrote:

Small things.


~R a i n's Easy~
01:32:977 (1) - add finish
fixed
thanks DJPop~ :)

Download: Fujiwara Marina - Zettai Daisuki (Short Ver.) (DarknessAngel) [R a i n's Easy].osu
S h i o n
DJPop
Bubble
wmfchris
~

[General]
01:10:954 - the timing over this section (01:10:954 - ~ 01:13:477 - ) is doubtful for me, it sounds slight slower than the rest of the song. The notes are quite out from correct timing.

[Hard]
01:09:658 (1) - symmetricities fix:
240,192,69658,6,0,B|252:216|276:232|304:244|328:248|352:244|380:232|408:216|420:184,1,209.999993741512,2|2

[D.N.]
居然才4.9 這不科學
01:30:658 (5) - try to put it around (212,228)? It produces a parallelgram on the left-bottom corner, and reduce overlapping with the next slider.
01:32:568 (4) - NC should be placed here instead of next note.

[Normal]
00:33:658 (2) - [Nazi] right 1 grid lv4

[Taiko]
1/4感覺還是有點多了
00:06:386 - 參考鼓聲ddddkkkkd
00:46:204 - 太串了 <_< 可以用k k d d k ddk k d
00:56:022 - 避免重疊 這個notes也加速
01:13:477 - recover the 1.0x speed here

基本上最大的問題就是那個timing 其次是bossandy太鬼畜了 嗯
LKs
[01:09:590 - 01:13:477]

http://puu.sh/wgDi

参考用

我跟wmf讨论了 我个人的意思是这样

testdiff里的notes是一直跟着鼓的镲在放 都贴合的上 再加上后面部分能直接用这跟offest 所以BPM应该没有问题

这可能是一种音乐编曲的效果 故意把人声放在伴奏前1/4(或者某个数值)提前发声 听起来不难受但做图就比较麻烦了

你现在跟的是第一个用提前1/4后面全部1/2处理个人感觉有点问题 至少听起来 我觉得还是跟人声比较合适

http://puu.sh/wgHx 这里的节奏至少这么放会更舒服 不过还需要更多人确认

[-]

NatsumeRin wrote:

这歌vocal比较不靠谱
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel

LKs wrote:

[01:09:590 - 01:13:477]

http://puu.sh/wgDi

//恩,那我把D.N難度裡的一個長條改掉了

参考用

我跟wmf讨论了 我个人的意思是这样

testdiff里的notes是一直跟着鼓的镲在放 都贴合的上 再加上后面部分能直接用这跟offest 所以BPM应该没有问题

这可能是一种音乐编曲的效果 故意把人声放在伴奏前1/4(或者某个数值)提前发声 听起来不难受但做图就比较麻烦了

你现在跟的是第一个用提前1/4后面全部1/2处理个人感觉有点问题 至少听起来 我觉得还是跟人声比较合适

http://puu.sh/wgHx 这里的节奏至少这么放会更舒服 不过还需要更多人确认

[-]

NatsumeRin wrote:

这歌vocal比较不靠谱
...這



wmfchris wrote:

~

[General]
01:10:954 - the timing over this section (01:10:954 - ~ 01:13:477 - ) is doubtful for me, it sounds slight slower than the rest of the song. The notes are quite out from correct timing. //hmm...some people said it is okay,but I'm not sure lol

[Hard]
01:09:658 (1) - symmetricities fix:
  [color=#FF0000]//fixed[/color]240,192,69658,6,0,B|252:216|276:232|304:244|328:248|352:244|380:232|408:216|420:184,1,209.999993741512,2|2

[D.N.]
居然才4.9 這不科學 //+1,爆星也沒必要這樣啊lol
01:30:658 (5) - try to put it around (212,228)? It produces a parallelgram on the left-bottom corner, and reduce overlapping with the next slider. //k
01:32:568 (4) - NC should be placed here instead of next note. //I want to keep this because it emphasize the drum,and it looks good for me

[Normal]
00:33:658 (2) - [Nazi] right 1 grid lv4 //fixed


基本上最大的問題就是那個timing 其次是bossandy太鬼畜了 嗯

timing感覺上沒問題,聽起來違和其實是因為演唱者沒唱準 - by 某人(忘記是誰了...)
thank for modding ~ :)
bossandy

wmfchris wrote:

[Taiko]
1/4感覺還是有點多了
00:06:386 - 參考鼓聲ddddkkkkd
00:46:204 - 太串了 <_< 可以用k k d d k ddk k d
00:56:022 - 避免重疊 這個notes也加速
01:13:477 - recover the 1.0x speed here

基本上最大的問題就是那個timing 其次是bossandy太鬼畜了 妳才鬼畜
謝了

Download: Fujiwara Marina - Zettai Daisuki (Short Ver.) (DarknessAngel) [Boss Taiko Oni].osu
LKs
同我上面说的 我觉得BPM和offest都没问题 主要是你这里跟随vocal还是伴奏的问题

跟vocal的话就按我给的截图 我个人也偏向那个 因为那个最明显 然后你这部分的做图下法显然也是这个意思(虽然没跟)

然后你最好再找几个timing好的人来确认下 然后再说然后 :3
kanpakyin
Timing: offset: 2561
I highly doubt it is bpm's fault....
For me,I would remove all notes from that part and put a spinner instead.It can avoid any error from the singer.but well :/
Shiro
hard: 00:22:204 (1,2,3) - this spacing is very surprising and ugly

Anyway, timing: -10ms to the offset

For the part wmfchris pointed out, the vocals are awfully off (about 1/8 off actually), but the drums are spot on. No other timing section is needed.
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel

Odaril wrote:

hard: 00:22:204 (1,2,3) - this spacing is very surprising and ugly //fixed

Anyway, timing: -10ms to the offset fixed !

For the part wmfchris pointed out, the vocals are awfully off (about 1/8 off actually), but the drums are spot on. No other timing section is needed. //I think so,too :)

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
offset:+5 (就是現在使用的)

LKs wrote:

offset - 8 ~ 10

kanpakyin wrote:

Timing: offset: 2561
I highly doubt it is bpm's fault....
For me,I would remove all notes from that part and put a spinner instead.It can avoid any error from the singer.but well :/


我和LKs比較偏向Odaril
所以就用他的了

再來就是01:10:944 - 除了這裡從藍線開始
vocal就在這之後提前了1/8(如Odaril所說)
由於我是跟著vocal作圖,所以就改成這樣了
wmfchris
it should be fine now.
Garven
o/

[R a i n's Easy]
In general this is pretty tough. You use a lot of 1/2 rhythms (the BPM is doubled) that really should be used sparingly. See if you can simplify a lot of the rhythms to make this play a lot more friendly towards new players.
Another thing to note is your use of new combos: With this particular map, it'd be best to use a new combo every 2 or 4 tall white ticks to keep the combos within each phrase of music. A good example is 00:06:921 (1,2,3,4,5) - . This combo is a good length. Try to keep your combos within that and the map will flow better because of it.
00:15:376 (2,3) - Rhythms like this are really difficult for newer players to grasp, so try and focus on things like this and simplify them.
00:38:558 (1) - Too soon after a spinner.
01:11:012 (1) - This feels sooo oooofff. Might not be a good idea to map to this.

In general this felt more like a slow-paced Normal difficulty.

[S h i o n's Normal]
00:28:739 (2,4) - Forget your slider ticks?
00:39:103 (1) - Feels way soon after a spinner for a Normal.

[Moss Taiko]
01:13:467 - No kiai? Feels like a good spot for it.

[Hard]
00:19:603 (3) - This is pretty tricky since you use a lot of jumps prior, then change the rhythm -and- use distance snap.
00:56:285 (1) - Check your hitsounds here

[D.N.A]
00:19:194 (2,3) - I'm not feeling this jump
00:39:103 (1) - New combo
01:10:944 (3) - Yeah, just snap these to the rhythms where they should be instead of where she's singing. It's really off and won't play well.
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel

Garven wrote:

o/ o/


[Hard]
00:19:603 (3) - This is pretty tricky since you use a lot of jumps prior, then change the rhythm -and- use distance snap. //hmm..I change 00:19:603 (3,4) to a slider,I think it is okay now
00:56:285 (1) - Check your hitsounds here //fixed

[D.N.A]
00:19:194 (2,3) - I'm not feeling this jump //It is to be consistent with 00:27:648 (1,2,3,4).
I made this jump because of rhythm changing and emphasis

00:39:103 (1) - New combo // !!! fixed
01:10:944 (3) - Yeah, just snap these to the rhythms where they should be instead of where she's singing. It's really off and won't play well.

I follow the vocal to make this diff,so I must keep this part since ↓

Odaril wrote:

the vocals are awfully off (about 1/8 off actually), but the drums are spot on.


Why didn't I follow the drum... ? orz
Thank for modding ~ :)
S h i o n

Garven wrote:

[S h i o n's Normal]
00:28:739 (2,4) - Forget your slider ticks? fixed
00:39:103 (1) - Feels way soon after a spinner for a Normal. Replaced the spinner with a repeated slider
Thank you for your mod, Garven~
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel
updated
wating for a reply from R a i n ~
R a i n
Garven
[Easy]
01:04:739 (1) - hajimaru Finish owaru whistle
01:29:830 (6,1) - This is really difficult for an easy. I'd delete 01:30:648 (1) -

[Normal]
00:36:376 (1) - Should add in the ticks here too. Add a whistle on the repeat and afterward maybe not use the ticks.
Garven
[Taiko]
01:13:467 - Snap kiai here
Garven
Rebub~
LKs
[D.N.Angel]

01:13:433 (1) - 这里开始不用提前1/8 提前只作用于那几秒 (pop due to wrong snapping)

同理其他难度的一样 提前的范围很小
LKs
re
wmfchris
SPOILER
[DNA]
01:13:160 (3) - snap to white tick

The vocal inaccuracy ended at 01:13:160 and snap all notes back to 1/4 tick after 01:13:160 for ALL diffs.

the snapping problem is fixed now so rebubbled.
Low
Hey! According to the new rule, you must remove "Short Ver" from the song title. Thank you! Don't give me kudosu for this.
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel

Jacob wrote:

Hey! According to the new rule, you must remove "Short Ver" from the song title. Thank you! Don't give me kudosu for this.
k,thanks

What the hell is that rule lol
Andrea
[Boss Taiko Oni]

Center the AR.

Do not use custom hitsounds on Taiko.


Just that and I'll rank :>
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel

Andrea wrote:

[Boss Taiko Oni]

Center the AR.

Do not use custom hitsounds on Taiko.


Just that and I'll rank :>
fixed both.
thanks ~ :D
Andrea
Good enough.

Ranked~
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
好rank了www
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

好rank了www
\:D/
Strawberry
挖 \恭喜/ :)

edit: 话说咱们两个几乎同时rank呢 :p
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel

Strawberry wrote:

挖 \恭喜/ :)

edit: 话说咱们两个几乎同时rank呢 :p
恩是啊xD
Andrea的速rank /o/
你也恭喜 ~ :3
merchat7
grats, still get confuse at the end through :/
EmPao
Ya~~恭喜 :D
話說這幾天好多台灣mapper的map ranked =w=
光第一頁就有4張
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel

EmPao wrote:

Ya~~恭喜 :D
話說這幾天好多台灣mapper的map ranked =w=
光第一頁就有4張
嘎哈哈哈哈good ~ xD
Scorpiour
nice map~~~congrats
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel

Scorpiour wrote:

nice map~~~congrats
thanks ~~ >w<
bossandy
恭喜!!!

連續3張GDRank 超爽 (被打
Kanari
Congrats ~ ;D
fanzhen0019
恭喜~ XD
alacat
congrats  :P
YTYuyu
omg this map o.o. i remember modding this map...congratz on the rank ;)
spboxer3
恭喜了
S h i o n
yatta!
Kawayi Rika
Omedeto ><
Dino99
恭喜啦!!~~~
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel
thanks everyone ~ >w<
尼瑪果然又被黑
Loneight
闇天使恭喜~ :)
被黑什麼的習慣就好 咱習慣了 ... (被打
R a i n
congratz~ :)
Quilt
congratz DN :D
Topic Starter
DarknessAngel
thanks ~ \:D/
limingkai9348
这个歌曲太恐怖了。。
Nidert
>mfw on D.N.Angel diff
;__;
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