Urlangce wrote:

首先这首曲子：
魔剑斩妖：战斗用音乐，表现爽快激烈的战斗，使用于复杂而连续战斗多的迷宫场合，表现堂堂正正的战斗气氛。
我觉得这首曲子做出来要给人一种爽快的压迫感。。。恩。。。 抱歉我首先没玩过仙剑 再而压迫感是对于玩家水平而言的 高于玩家水平才有压迫感 你让曲奇玩这个的HR他也没有压迫感

[hard]
00:15:138(1)(2)(3)(4):玩到这里感觉12和34分开了给人不怎么连贯的感觉。fixed
00:25:138-00:27:805:这段感觉和前后都不搭，而且就算是Hard也要有压迫感才行，这里感觉突兀了。 QAQ
00:30:972(6):移动到00:30:805或者删除在00:30:805加一个slider。这里有bass音
00:33:638(6):同上~~
00:49:472(4):感觉稍微长了一点。。缩短一点会更好？不过缩短了后面的也要改变了。
01:02:972：这段感觉停顿不大合适。。吧slider拉长到01:03:472更好一点或者这段重做？ fixed

1. 传说中的仙剑三么= = 这歌有没拼音加进tags吧 还有 xian jian qi xia zhuan 0.0

1. 00:20:805 (4) - up 2 grids
2. 00:29:472 (1,3) - 3/2..? 这样有点不合音乐

1. 00:03:638 (2,3) - ._. 间距?
2. 00:04:805 (2) - 坑爹
3. 00:50:305 (6,7,8) - reverse slider?
4. 01:07:638 (2,3) - ..?
5. 01:08:805 (2) - ._.
6. 01:17:138 (2) - 上移6px

1. 00:40:305 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 中间间距不增大?
2. 00:46:805 (1,2,3,4) - 这四个挺奇怪的=/=
3. 00:50:805 (1,2) - 拉大点间距?
4. 01:01:388 (2) - +1 note
5. 01:02:805 (1) - ctrl+r..? 好诡异
6. 01:06:638 (5,6) - 加两个note叠成三连?

1. Volume doesn't change, and you don't use much hitsounding. Is it still being worked on?

1. 00:20:138 (3,4) - Leave some space between these two.

1. 00:24:138 (3) - From here to 00:34:805 (3) - it is very undermapped. It feels very empty because of all the breaks.
2. 00:44:805 (1,2) - D D

1. 01:04:138 (6) - NC here

1. 00:50:139 (5) - Expected this to be lower and to the left. Maybe somewhere around x:132 y:160 would do be better.
2. 01:03:139 (2) - Expected this in Reverse

1. Maybe you can uncheck letterbox during the break since there are no break in this map.

1. 00:20:138 (3,4) - Just like other moder said, increase the spacing between these two so it doesn't touch each other. Very inconsistant with your pattern and not very good to see. How about you fix the pattern like this? > http://puu.sh/uC0H
2. 00:37:472 (1) - I think you need a finish here at the start since this slider have the same rythim with 00:34:805 (1) -

1. AR -1 please, it's too surprising for hard to have AR 8 like insane ;_;
2. 00:25:139 (1,2,3) - and 00:26:805 (1,2,3) - I think this can be deceiving. As you can see with your eyes (with no distance checker of course), this has same distance with 00:29:472 (1,2,3) - so people may think it have 1/2 rythim. So make this circle stack or move it more away from each other will make player understand the rythim more better.
3. 00:44:972 (1) - I don't see any reason you add a new combo here. If it for a new rythim, i don't think it's a good idea. So it's better to remove new combo here.
4. 01:00:305 (4) - Maybe you can add a new combo here to identifiy rythim change?

1. 00:40:139 (1) - I think you need a finish sound here since there is a strong accent cymbal sound at this spot.
2. 00:44:805 (1) - I think you missplaced this finish sound. I think it should be here 00:45:472 (1) - at the slider start.
3. 01:17:139 (4,5,6) - I don't think triplet is fit here since there are no rythim that support the triplet. It will be better if you remove just the circle 5.

Kawayi Rika wrote:

SPOILER

Recheck ~

[Insane]

1. 01:15:972 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 试试这样的节奏,会更好吧. 基本改了，稍微做了些变动
   

好了叫我吧 >w<

spboxer3 wrote:

SPOILER

真是的 都有星了還來給我mod 不是找我麻煩嗎 =3=

:idea: general

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  Settings
  (For the setting/general issue.)
  

1. 乾脆把全部的letterbox都拿掉吧 ok
2. 是否把sliderslide都用成靜音? 考虑一下..

Normal

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  mapping
  (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

1. 00:04:138 (3,4) - 不讓他們在同一x軸上嗎? fixed

Insane

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  mapping
  (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  

1. 00:13:305 (1,2,3) - 拿掉NC 然後把NC加在00:13:472 (3) -
2. 00:15:972 (1,2,3) - ^
3. 00:18:639 (1) - ^
4. 00:21:305 (1,2,3) - ^
5. 00:55:139 (1) - 這個不用NC 加了反而會被BAT說多餘的 NC我觉得可以了其实..

紅色是unrankable的 一定要改 藍色的是需要討論的問題 黑色就只是建議

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Recheck ~

[Insane]

1. 01:15:972 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 试试这样的节奏,会更好吧.
   

[LKs' Hard]

1. 00:04:805 (2) - 考虑要不要减少一次折返. 不用吧?
2. 00:48:138 (1,2,3) - 这节奏听起来会不会玮和? 换了
3. 00:59:055 - Tick 静音掉吧. ok
4. 01:15:972 (1,2,1,2,3) - 同Insane diff.

换了个节奏 但不是你那样的

好了叫我吧 >w<

1. 虽然这map没有break, 不过为了一致性, 还是把LKs难度的letterbox关掉吧
2. 话说BG不能换个跟仙剑更有关的么...现在这个是个啥

1. 00:04:805 (2) - 总觉得这个玩的时候很容易在最后一下折返的时候松开, 不如换成一折返加个单点note?
2. 01:08:805 (2) - ^

Scorpiour wrote:

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