Alright. Spoke with other MAT/BAT members. Here's the final thing:
I really, really think my suggestion for 00:55:108 (1) - is better than what you have. If you'd like to visually compare:
This one is mine:
http://puu.sh/vCeWThis one is yours:
http://puu.sh/vCjeWhile what you have is not unrankable (this is not the most important factor), it can possibly be made better with a simple change. Let me know your final decision, and I'll be back on this. Maybe it was my fault for providing a code and not a screenshot.
Edit: What you have is fine now, I'll rebubble.