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Lia - Tori no Uta

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ririco
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, June 06, 2012 at 4:36:13 PM

Artist: Lia
Title: Tori no Uta
Source: Air
Tags: Byakugan249 Miya DJPop bossandy Summer Natsu opening key
BPM: 122.1
Filesize: 17451kb
Play Time: 02:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. 249's Easy (1.31 stars, 135 notes)
  2. Boss Sweet Taiko (4.83 stars, 637 notes)
  3. DJPop's Insane (4.96 stars, 384 notes)
  4. Hard (4.82 stars, 375 notes)
  5. Miya's Normal (3.7 stars, 214 notes)
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Enjoy >w<

AIR OP



Easy = Byakugan249

Normal = Miya

Hard = -Sekai-

Insane = DJPop

Taiko = bossandy

Skin = Thanks for osuplayer111 and JoJo for letting me use some parts of their Skin :3

Thanks who Modded my map~
  • Nymph
    IchiGUN
    Hinacle
    3er123
    Lolicore Flandre
    Katsuri
    Nyquill
    maaagic
    Melophobia
    bossandy
    -Bakari-
    grumd
    Tenshi-nyan
    Star Stream
    Twice
    Saten-san
    Hinsvar
    kanpakyin
    spboxer3
    Philippines
    wmfchris
    Reiji-RJ
    popner
    MystykAMV
    iMercurial
    Makar8000
    Kirino Kousaka
    Pereira006
    Weezy
    Envi
    Musty
    Vass_Bass
    Starry
    Kawayi Rika <3 for sudden Bubble >w<
    Kurai <3 for sudden Rank xD
Miya
Good song <3
Looking forward to make a diff for this ~

Rawwwrrr :3
A few suggestion from me in irc~

log
00:28 <Miya> : orz, my osu suddenly crashed D:
00:28 <Miya> : what did you say sekai?
00:29 <-Sekai-> : i just said it's cute skin
00:29 <-Sekai-> : lol
00:29 <Miya> : is it? :3
00:29 <Miya> : but still i prefer my own skin x)
00:29 <Miya> : lets see
00:29 *Miya is listening to (Lia - Tori no Uta)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/50294]
00:32 <-Sekai-> : =w=
00:32 <Miya> : hmm, quite good imo
00:32 <-Sekai-> : boring?
00:32 <-Sekai-> : :o
00:32 <Miya> : but it's quite relaxing too for hard >.<
00:32 <-Sekai-> : :/
00:32 <-Sekai-> : i wanted to be that way
00:33 <Miya> : hmm, i think you can increase the sv at the kiai time to make things more interesting
00:33 <Miya> : but i fear you must remap that section if you increase the sv >.<
00:34 <Miya> : and oh yes
00:34 <Miya> : maybe you can add some wiggles on the stream
00:34 <Miya> : to add some variation :3
00:34 <-Sekai-> : :o
00:34 <Miya> : as long as i see, it's all straight
00:34 <Miya> : >.<
00:35 <-Sekai-> : :<
00:35 <-Sekai-> : but but ;~;
00:35 <Miya> : hmm, maybe you can add a little stream here
00:35 <Miya> : 01:03:874
00:35 <Miya> : 01:03:874-
00:36 <-Sekai-> : hmm~
00:36 <Miya> : this stream is long for a hard map, very very long >.<
00:36 <Miya> : 01:06:208 (9,10,11,12,13,14,1,2,3,4,5,6) -
00:36 <-Sekai-> : :<
00:36 <-Sekai-> : but
00:36 <Miya> : maybe you can change some of the note into 1/4 slider
00:37 <-Sekai-> : :<
00:37 <-Sekai-> : i should?
00:37 <Miya> : well, it's just my suggestion
00:37 <Miya> : but a variation is good :D
00:38 <Miya> : hey
00:38 <Miya> : 1 finish sound found
00:38 <Miya> : lol
00:38 <Miya> : 01:23:652 (3) -
00:38 <-Sekai-> : lol
00:38 <Miya> : if it's just one why not to remove it?
00:38 <Miya> : sounds awkward to me, because you didn't use any of finish sounds besides that
00:38 <-Sekai-> : yes yes i removed it now xD
00:38 <Miya> : :3
00:39 <-Sekai-> : lol yeah i noticed
00:39 <Miya> : see? :P
00:39 <-Sekai-> : =3=
00:39 <-Sekai-> : 01:06:208 (9,10,11,12,13,14,1,2,3,4,5,6) -
00:39 <-Sekai-> : still confused about this
00:39 <Miya> : let me see
00:40 <-Sekai-> : but they fit
00:41 <Miya> : don't remove the 1/4 rythim
00:41 <Miya> : but make the variation
00:43 <Miya> : dc'ed?
00:43 <Miya> : >.<
00:43 <-Sekai-> : yes orz
00:43 <-Sekai-> : ._.
00:44 <Miya> : maybe something like this sekai
00:44 <Miya> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/312357
00:44 <-Sekai-> : o.o
00:44 <-Sekai-> : wow
00:44 <-Sekai-> : it's better
00:44 <Miya> : but it's up to you, first stream then folowed by that slider is good too
00:46 <Miya> : hmm, change this into 1/4 repeat slider sekai?
00:46 <Miya> : 01:29:549 (3) -
00:46 <Miya> : it's more good and more chalenging imo
00:46 <-Sekai-> : o.o
00:46 <-Sekai-> : wait D:
00:46 <Miya> : this one too
00:46 <Miya> : 01:30:532 (1) -
00:46 <Miya> : >.<
00:47 <-Sekai-> : ...
00:47 <Miya> : you're not like it?
00:48 <Miya> : and this note, can be more blanket :3
00:48 <Miya> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/312363
00:48 <Miya> : look at the vid
00:48 <Miya> : funny xD
00:50 <Miya> : sekai
00:50 <Miya> : how about make this note jumpy?
00:50 <Miya> : 02:07:878 (1,2,3,4) -
00:50 <Miya> : oh yes
00:51 <Miya> : how about double spnner at here?
00:51 <Miya> : 02:26:552 (1) -
00:51 <Miya> : better than one :3
00:56 <Miya> : nyaan~ since you afk, i will savelog this chat ok, and posted it to forum. Counts as suggestion hhe :3
YTYuyu
Akemi_Homura
Go~~
baka :3
Miya
hhe, finally, done :D
i hope it's good~

Download: soft-hitfinish2.zip

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [Miya's Normal].osu
DJPop
Done.

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [DJPop's Insane].osu


- Can you find BG for my diff? :D
- Fix tags for all diffs
- All elements are required for custom spinner : spinner-clear, spinner-osu, spinner-spin
Topic Starter
ririco
ok added and moved to pending now :3
Poggo
hi ^^

Insane

00:22:964 - put this note on white tick
00:29:598 - add note
00:58:837 - ^
01:37:903(2,3) - correct spacing

it's all for this diff ^^

Hard

01:00:802 - NC remove on next note
01:23:407(2,3,4) - correct spacing
01:26:355 - add note
01:37:657(4,5) - http://puu.sh/uu2c look better
01:55:102 - NC bcz start kiai time
01:56:085 - remove NC
01:57:559 - NC
01:58:050 - remove NC
02:22:620 -Nc bcz you change speed of slider
02:23:849 - remove NC
02:24:586 - NC


Good luck with map ^^
Miya
Insane has circle size 2 but hard has circle size 3. :(

I would like to make insane circle size to 3 too.

And Sekai, you forget about tags ;_;
Nymph
Hi Nymph here and request from my queue.(Miya posted =~=)

General
need this: reversearrow.png.

Tags are different in insane diff: add Miya on insane diff.


[249's Easy]
Hitsound
02:17:215 (2) - miss a clap here?


[Miya's Normal]
fine.

[Hard]
Beatmap design/suggestion
02:22:620 (3) - this slider slow down is really sudden, do something to it? new combo, change shape etc.

Hitsound
01:53:382 (4) - I think the clap on the slidertail is unnecessary, maybe delete it.
01:54:611 (2) - yeah this clap too.
I'd like to suggest some finish sound but I saw your creator word so nyan =~=


[DJPop's Insane]
Hitsound
02:26:552 (1) - I thought the finish is better than silence spinner end =3=..
other is awesome.


that is all for me I think.
YTYuyu

Nymph wrote:

Hi Nymph here and request from my queue.(Miya posted =~=)

[249's Easy]
Hitsound
02:17:215 (2) - miss a clap here? nope this is intentional. i want every clap to be at every 3rd downbeat for this part.

that is all for me I think.
no changes made but ty for the mod.
DJPop

Katty Pie wrote:

Insane
00:22:964 - put this note on white tick
- X
00:29:598 - add note
- X
00:58:837 - ^
- X
01:37:903(2,3) - correct spacing
- X

Nymph wrote:

[DJPop's Insane]
02:26:552 (1) - I thought the finish is better than silence spinner end =3=..
- Added

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [DJPop's Insane].osu
IchiGUN
Hi -Sekai-
Nazy mod...here we go \:D/


just suggestion :3

  • General
    ● Add the same tags on all diff's
    DJPop Miya Byakugan249 opening
===========================
  • 249's Easy

    >Settings

    ● Good

    >Mapping

    ● 00:22:719 (6) - next distance 0.76 just move it on x:240 y:58
    ● 00:40:409 (1) - next distance 1.24 just a little change slider form, like this for example http://puu.sh/uFDE
    ● 02:29:009 (1,2) - maybe change this patter like this http://puu.sh/uFC2

    >Hitsounds

    ● 01:04:733 (1) - whistle on repeat?
    ___________________
    Nice diff 8-)
===========================
  • Miya's Normal

    >Settings

    ● Good

    >Mapping

    ● Looks good

    >Hitsounds

    ● Good
    ___________________
    Very good ;)
===========================
  • Hard

    >Settings

    ● AR +1?

    >Mapping

    ● 01:37:903 (5) - not symmetric slider http://puu.sh/uFMG --> http://puu.sh/uFNQ
    ● 02:05:913 (1) - maybe grid snap off and move to x:276 y:166
    ● 02:11:073 (5) - ^ x:333 y:272
    ● 02:22:620 (3) - ^ x:248 y:114

    >Hitsounds

    ● 02:30:483 (1) - hm...maybe finish?
    ___________________
    Good job :)
===========================
  • DJPop's Insane

    >Settings

    ● Good

    >Mapping

    ● 00:21:490 (2) - maybe 1 grid up? xD
    ● 00:28:616 (1) - slider is too long, make it a little short...end on red tick
    ● 00:29:598 (2) - add note


    >Hitsounds

    ● 00:28:616 (1) - End slider - remove whistle
    ___________________
    DJPop style :3 awesome :D
Good luck and Star :oops:
Topic Starter
ririco
thanks for modding my map and for your star :3
DJPop

IchiGUN wrote:

  • DJPop's Insane
    ● 00:21:490 (2) - maybe 1 grid up? xD
    - Fixed
    ● 00:28:616 (1) - slider is too long, make it a little short...end on red tick
    - Fixed
    ● 00:29:598 (2) - add note
    - X
    ● 00:28:616 (1) - End slider - remove whistle
    - Fixed

    Good nazi XD

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [DJPop's Insane].osu
DJPop
My diff's still unchanged D:
Also Hard doesn't have BG.
Miya
yes, BG in hard suddenly dissapear. Where it's went Sekai? ._.
Topic Starter
ririco
i changed the BG on my hard D:
so re-dl ;_;
YTYuyu

IchiGUN wrote:

Hi -Sekai-
Nazy mod...here we go \:D/


just suggestion :3

===========================
  • 249's Easy

    >Settings

    ● Good

    >Mapping

    ● 00:22:719 (6) - next distance 0.76 just move it on x:240 y:58 fixed it my own way.
    ● 00:40:409 (1) - next distance 1.24 just a little change slider form, like this for example http://puu.sh/uFDE ^
    ● 02:29:009 (1,2) - maybe change this patter like this http://puu.sh/uFC2 no i find that kind of hard for beginners. mine is straightforward and the path is easy to get to for beginners.

    >Hitsounds

    ● 01:04:733 (1) - whistle on repeat? no i find that unfitting to the song.
    ___________________
    Nice diff 8-)

Good luck and Star :oops:
ty for the mod :D

EDIT: but not for me. When DJPop and Miya said that the BG isnt there for hard, it shows for me (this is before you full submitted the map)

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [249's Easy].osu
Nyquill
awshi someone's finally remapping this.
716 Girl
Here is my full mod post ><

Easy
01:27:584 (5) - 2nd sliderpoint little down
01:50:679 (3) - add note

Normal
00:47:780 (1) - add sliider here end at 50:237
01:09:156 (2) - note here
01:11:122 (5) - ^
01:13:087 (2) - ^
01:17:018 (2) - ^
01:58:296 (4) - ^
02:17:215 (3,4,5) - like that http://puu.sh/uStb

Hard
01:16:527 (6) - NC
01:16:773 (1) - renc
01:18:738 (1) - ^
01:19:230 (7) - NC

Insane
00:31:564 (2) - maybe reverse selection?
00:01:097 (1) - remove NC
00:02:326 (6) - NC
00:03:063 (1) - reNC
00:04:291 (4) - NC
00:05:028 (1) - reNC
00:06:994 (1) - reNC
00:10:434 (6) - NC
00:10:925 (1) - renc
00:12:276 (5) - add note
00:12:399 (6) - NC
00:12:891 (1) - reNC
00:18:173 (5,6,7) - add notes
00:26:036 (5,6,7) - add notes
01:01:908 (3) - add note
01:10:999 (5) - add note
01:28:198 (2,4) - add notes
01:35:077 (3) - add note
01:38:272 (3) - add repeate?
02:02:104 (3) - add note
Hinacle
Hi~><//

All of them just a suggestion

mod
<General>
  1. add key to tag? (Maker)
<249's Easy>
  1. 01:24:144 (1) - Kind of soon after a spinner for an easy difficulty.
  2. 01:51:662 (4,6) - add clap (5) Remove clap. I think this sound much better.
  3. 01:53:136 (1) - Kind of soon after a spinner for an easy difficulty.
  4. 02:09:353 (3,5) - Remove finish and add clap. I think add clap sound much better.

<Miya's Normal>
  1. 01:54:119 (1) - remove the spinner and put a note? Short spinner is very hard to normal diff

<Hard>
  1. 00:44:340 (5) - new combo
  2. 00:45:323 (1) - remove new combo
  3. 00:46:306 (4) - new combo
  4. 00:47:289 (1) - remove new combo
  5. 00:47:780 (2) - add clap. I think add clap sound much better.
  6. 00:48:272 (4) - new combo
  7. 00:49:254 (1) - remove new combo
  8. 00:52:203 (1) - remove clap and add finish
  9. 01:07:682 (4) - remove clap and add finish at end
  10. 01:23:652 (3) - add finish
  11. 01:26:109 (4) - new combo
  12. 01:26:601 (1) - remove new combo
  13. 01:47:240 (5) - add finish
  14. 01:55:102 (3) - ^
  15. 02:08:861 (3) - ^
  16. 02:09:844 (1) - ^
  17. 02:10:581 (4) - add finish at end
  18. 02:18:689 (5) - add finish
  19. 02:28:763 (1) - ^
finish is quiet...

<DJPop's Insane>
  1. 00:47:534 (5) - remove finish. don't match the sounds to me

nice map and nice song!!
Topic Starter
ririco
Thanks Hinacle >w< added them all~
Miya
Sorry, no change in my diff. But thank you for the mod :)
Flanster
General

- Same mappers again huh, what a tradition this is in -Sekai-'s maps (lazy as poot)

- "soft-sliderslide.wav" and "soft-slidertick.wav" are only 0 bytes, please use a blank 44 bytes WAV file.
- reversearrow.png is missing
- fail-background.png is 640x480, which is too small, atleast if you can find a bigger one~
- Look at the sliders in DJPop's Insane (the right way) and look at the other diffuculties' sliders (needs adjusting and tidying up)
249's Easy

00:58:100 (2) - curve it a bit more?
Hard

01:40:360 (1) - uhh, fix the points..

Havent found any other specific problems so thats it~
Good luck ~
DJPop

3er123 wrote:

- Sorry, no changes

Hinacle wrote:

<DJPop's Insane>
00:47:534 (5) - remove finish. don't match the sounds to me
- Cymbal there, but removed anyway

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [DJPop's Insane].osu
Katsuri
General

  • Skin
  1. You are missing an 'reversearrow.png' file in your folder, you will need to add one because you are using custom numbers to the notes, then to complete the set of numbers you can use the default reverse arrow, which is a bit ugly with your skin (look this). Consider making one customized reverse arrow to your skin.
  2. fail-background.png's dimensions must be exactly 1024x768 (currently 640x480).
    ___________________
Easy

  • Mapping
  1. 00:08:960 (1,2) - These two notes may are overlapping too much, and it is sort of ugly. Please consider reducing this overlap, or making something like this, it would look a lot better an the spacing will be consistent.
  2. 00:12:891 (3) - This slider looks like it was placed in anywhere of the map, what about making it symmetric like this? Considering it's the end of a phrase it would look&play better than the way you left it.
    ___________________
Normal

  • Mapping
    Miya's mapping <3
  1. 00:11:908 (1,2,3) - Miya, what if you make (2) and (3) symmetrically equivalents like this? I think it would look a lot better and flow a bit better too, but you should decide!
  2. 00:23:456 (5,6) - At this part, I think you should try following more the vocals by deleting (5) and moving the slider half beat before, then adding a beat after the slider's end, like this. If you apply it, add a whislte to the note you added, and keep all hitsounds, it would sound marvelous. :D
    ___________________
    Hitsounds
  3. 00:39:672 (7) - Would sound better if you add a whistle at the end of the slider, it would break up with the rhythm a bit, breaking the monotony of the begining of the map.
  4. 01:45:520 (3,4,5) - Maybe it would sound better if you permute the clap between the begining of the slider and of the end and then add a clap to (4). It would sound better like a fill-in, introducing the song to another part.
    ___________________
Hard

  • New Combos
  1. The only problem here is the number of new combos out placed, like 01:24:635 (1) and 01:28:566 (1) and most of new combo placements. I think you should revide them all and adding new combos at the begining of phrases, like at 01:31:515 or 01:35:446. If you find problem feel free to catch me in-game or via forum PM and I will be happy to help you with New Combo placement.
    ___________________
Insane

  • Mapping
    Symmetry <3
  1. 01:57:559 (1,2,3) - What if you make it jumps like that? It would flow amazing a look wonderful at the same time! :D
    ___________________
That's all, I hope to help.
Miya
Good sugestion Katsuri <3
Added everything at the first part. But i decide the hitsound by myself :3

Thank you very much~

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [Miya's Normal].osu
Topic Starter
ririco
thanks for modding Katsuri and everyone else updated now :3
YTYuyu

3er123 wrote:

Here is my full mod post ><

Easy
01:27:584 (5) - 2nd sliderpoint little down nope it won't make that much of a difference
01:50:679 (3) - add note nope it'd be too hard for beginners if i do this.

Hinacle wrote:

Hi~><//

All of them just a suggestion


<249's Easy>
  1. 01:24:144 (1) - Kind of soon after a spinner for an easy difficulty. alright i removed the circle.
  2. 01:51:662 (4,6) - add clap (5) Remove clap. I think this sound much better. i disagree. if i do this, then it'll ruin my pattern. every clap at every 3rd downbeat.
  3. 01:53:136 (1) - Kind of soon after a spinner for an easy difficulty. same as 01:24:144.
  4. 02:09:353 (3,5) - Remove finish and add clap. I think add clap sound much better. i disagree. the claps wouldn't fit with this part because "itsumademo" has the same pitch in the vocals so adding finishes at every note fits to me.

nice map and nice song!!

Katsuri wrote:


  • Mapping
  1. 00:08:960 (1,2) - These two notes may are overlapping too much, and it is sort of ugly. Please consider reducing this overlap, or making something like this, it would look a lot better an the spacing will be consistent. no but i did something else.
  2. 00:12:891 (3) - This slider looks like it was placed in anywhere of the map, what about making it symmetric like this? Considering it's the end of a phrase it would look&play better than the way you left it. if i move it there, then it'll ruin the DS. if i followed your last suggestion, i'd do that, but since i ignored it, it'll look bad during gameplay.
Ty for the mods and to Loli: that slider i made is intentional so i'm not gonna change it, and Sekai did you change the kiai time? because when i re-update it, it shows the kiai time. i want my diff to be a kiai burst only.

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [249's Easy].osu
Nyquill
Getting work done.

[Easy]
Second byak easy I'm checking in a row huehuehue
00:12:891 (3) - This slider altogether feels random in placement. If you're ok with that overlap with (1) and (2) why not just have a nice slider striking down the middle like http://puu.sh/uYmv
01:52:154 (5) - Even though you had the claps on the 3s before, this clap just hurts (can't put it in better words). I'd personally suggest you remove it and do claps on 2,4 instead. 01:50:188 (2) to whistle instead since there isn't a real clap in the music.
02:29:009 (1) - Might as well add claps to the beginning and end of this slider.

[Normal]
00:39:672 (7) - Whistle to the end of this? Since you had a whistle to the end of 00:38:935 (6).
00:44:832 (1,2,3) - From what I know newer players would appreciate a tiny bit less stacks. Try turning some of these 3 stack patterns into a 1/2 slider + 1 note pattern.

Otherwise, nice.

[Hard]
ohaithar IC u liek small circles
01:25:618 (3) - This wrap could definately be better. Right now it points off into the distance with no real fit to its previous slider.
02:14:758 (4) - Ctrl-J? Then move it to be like http://puu.sh/uYto .

[Insane]
00:09:942 (3) - I believe you're missing a whistle on the beginning here (3rd beat whistles is what I'm guessing you're going for).
00:20:753 (1) - The start of whistles at the end of this slider is a bit sudden. I'd suggest you add whistles to the beginning of the slider and 00:19:770 (3) . I realize you may be trying to put whistles on the synth there, but because the synth slowly fades in its not as abrupt. With your whistles, they're always the same volume so its a tad bit surprising.
00:27:632 (3) - ^
02:05:913 (2) - Some interesting flow change if you ctrl-r this and move (1) and (3) closer to make it play well.

ohey +8 already lol.
maaagic
hi~

[Insane]
00:42:866 (1) - nazi : x,y=336,275?
00:43:849 (5) - nazi : x,y=336,108?
01:41:834 (2) - x,y=256,42?

[Hard]
nazi : Adjustment of spacing
00:00:851 (3) - x,y=52,224?
00:02:571 (2) - 376,156?
00:07:240 (6) - 52,80?
00:10:188 (1) - 428,200?
00:28:370 (4) - 184,340?
00:32:547 (1) - 148,328?
00:32:792 (2) - 196,276?
00:33:038 (3) - 268,276?
00:36:724 (6,7,8) - 1grid down?
00:45:077 (2) - 432,140?
00:45:323 (3) - 388,84?
00:52:940 (2) - 220,328?
00:55:888 (3) - 368,220?
00:56:134 (4) - 348,288?
00:58:345 (4) - 80,88?
01:02:768 (4) - 180,216?
01:13:824 (4) - 44,136?
01:14:070 (5) - 64,204?
01:16:773 (2) - 336,260?
01:23:652 (3) - 372,272?
01:42:326 (1) - 80,196?
01:59:033 (3) - 356,288?
02:10:090 (2) - 488,116?
02:12:792 (3) - 100,284?
02:14:267 (2) - 140,136?
02:24:095 (2) - 400,236?

[Normal]
00:10:679 (2,3) - 1grid right, 1grid down?
01:25:127 (3,4,5) - make Equilateral triangle?

[Easy]
good


sorry for my nazi mod :(
nice map :)
DJPop

Katsuri wrote:

Insane
01:57:559 (1,2,3) - What if you make it jumps like that? It would flow amazing a look wonderful at the same time! :D
- Fixed

Nyquill wrote:

[Insane]
00:09:942 (3) - I believe you're missing a whistle on the beginning here (3rd beat whistles is what I'm guessing you're going for).
- That was intended because there's no piano's emphasis like 00:11:908
00:20:753 (1) - The start of whistles at the end of this slider is a bit sudden. I'd suggest you add whistles to the beginning of the slider and 00:19:770 (3) . I realize you may be trying to put whistles on the synth there, but because the synth slowly fades in its not as abrupt. With your whistles, they're always the same volume so its a tad bit surprising.
- Changed volume and added whistle at (3)
00:27:632 (3) - ^
^
02:05:913 (2) - Some interesting flow change if you ctrl-r this and move (1) and (3) closer to make it play well.
- Fixed

maaagic wrote:

[Insane]
00:42:866 (1) - nazi : x,y=336,275?
- Fixed
00:43:849 (5) - nazi : x,y=336,108?
- Fixed
01:41:834 (2) - x,y=256,42?
- Spacings are already consistent

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [DJPop's Insane].osu
Miya
fixed something, thank you for the mod :3

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [Miya's Normal].osu
Topic Starter
ririco
Thanks for modding my map and updated :3
YTYuyu

Nyquill wrote:

Getting work done.

[Easy]
Second byak easy I'm checking in a row huehuehue
00:12:891 (3) - This slider altogether feels random in placement. If you're ok with that overlap with (1) and (2) why not just have a nice slider striking down the middle like http://puu.sh/uYmv i swear i did something else during katsuri's mod. i ignored this but i did something else.
01:52:154 (5) - Even though you had the claps on the 3s before, this clap just hurts (can't put it in better words). I'd personally suggest you remove it and do claps on 2,4 instead. 01:50:188 (2) to whistle instead since there isn't a real clap in the music. when i updated this part, this one is supposed to be the custom clap, anyways no because since a finish is at 01:47:240, i want to change up my clap pattern. it doesn't fit with my mapping style if i do this. also i'd find it boring if i add claps at every 2nd and 4th downbeat.
02:29:009 (1) - Might as well add claps to the beginning and end of this slider. no because i find that unfitting. i tried adding claps there, but it doesn't fit in my POV.

ohey +8 already lol.
no changes made but ty for the mod. i just made a few self changes.

EDIT: haha not yet :P

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [249's Easy].osu
Melophobia
H \:D/


[General]
you cannot silence both slider ticks and slider slides together.
this is unrankable. you must remove eigher.


[249's Easy]
00:00:114 - unused green line
00:01:097 ~ 00:43:358 - it would be better to put whistle 1st white tick(downbeat) than 3rd one
because it follows nothing in almost case(for example:00:05:028 (3) - )
00:14:856 (1) - finish is too much, clap is better here
01:35:446 (1) - add finish at the beginning
01:37:412 (3) - ^
01:39:869 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - only circles orz kinda boring so try to put some slider instead
01:43:308 (1) - add finish at the beginning
01:46:011 (3,4) - too confusing imo. in easeist diff, there should not be any complex pattern like this
so you should keep 1/1 rhythm here like you did at previous part
01:47:240 (1,3) - kinda empty imo. not only 3rd white tick, you should add clap at 1st tick as well
02:26:552 (1) - extend this to 02:30:483 -

[Miya's Normal]
00:23:210 (4,5) - spacing
02:02:964 (7,1) - switch newcombos please

[Hard]
00:05:028 (3) - end this at 00:05:765 - to follow the piano better
00:08:960 (4) - ^
00:10:925 (4) - ^
01:52:891 (3) - add finish at the end
01:53:382 (4) - ^
02:22:620 (3) - add newcombo for slow-down slider? it's a bit confusing since it looks same as 02:21:638 (1) -

[DJPop's Insane]
00:52:694 - add a note
01:05:962 (4,5,6,7) - how about increasing the volume step by step?
01:21:687 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ same
01:29:549 (1) - finish doesnt fit well imo

good luck!
Miya
Fixed everything Melo <3
Thank you for the mod~

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [Miya's Normal].osu
DJPop

Melophobia wrote:

H \:D/
H !? lol

[DJPop's Insane]
00:52:694 - add a note
- No, that part mainly followed vocal
01:05:962 (4,5,6,7) - how about increasing the volume step by step?
- Fixed
01:21:687 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ same
- Fixed
01:29:549 (1) - finish doesnt fit well imo
- I heard a cymbal in the song, left side

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [DJPop's Insane].osu
Sure
Revenge of DJPop? xD
YTYuyu

Melophobia wrote:

H \:D/

[249's Easy]
00:00:114 - unused green line nope this has a use. it's to reduce the volume of the whistles.
00:01:097 ~ 00:43:358 - it would be better to put whistle 1st white tick(downbeat) than 3rd one no it wouldn't fit with my mapping style.
because it follows nothing in almost case(for example:00:05:028 (3) - )
00:14:856 (1) - finish is too much, clap is better here hmm alright. i thought about this and since the clap matches the drums, i might as well.
01:35:446 (1) - add finish at the beginning alright. it matches the cymbals so yea it fits.
01:37:412 (3) - ^ same as 00:14:856.
01:39:869 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - only circles orz kinda boring so try to put some slider instead no that wouldn't fit with my mapping style in easy diffs. whenever i add only circles in a combo, then i'm making a specific shape out of it.
01:43:308 (1) - add finish at the beginning
01:46:011 (3,4) - too confusing imo. in easeist diff, there should not be any complex pattern like this
so you should keep 1/1 rhythm here like you did at previous part alright fixed. i had a feeling this was hard.
01:47:240 (1,3) - kinda empty imo. not only 3rd white tick, you should add clap at 1st tick as well nope i want claps at every 3rd beat because of the slider finish at 01:47:240. the clap is supposed to be at the slider tick, and without it, it'd sound bad in my eyes and i'd feel uncomfortable if i do this.
02:26:552 (1) - extend this to 02:30:483 - there's no way i'm going to delete the slider and circle. i want it to end to where the vocals change.

good luck!
ty for the mod :D

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [249's Easy].osu
Topic Starter
ririco
updated :3
bossandy
Hi hi~ I mod this map because I am late QAQ~
 
  1. Red : I think you must to fix.
  2. Blue : Need to discuss.
  3. Black : Just suggest or nazi.
 
[ General]
 
  1. Add "bossandy" to tags xDD
 
[ 249's Easy]
 
  1. 00:08:960 (1) - Remove finish start? There is nothing change in music , Hmm.... If you don't want to change , Maybe you can make the green Timing Section to 20% , sounds good for me
  2. 00:26:650 (3) - Add whistle end? sounds great for me
  3. 01:21:687 (1,1) - These object is too close!!!! Beginners can't read these !!! , If you want to solve this issue , I suggetion you delete 01:24:144 (1) -
  4. 01:37:412 (3) - Add a finish on the arrow , The music become high gradually , and this slider's start and end have a finish , If you don't add finish on arrow , it sounds not good
  5. 01:49:697 Suggetion add a circle here to have a good flow xD
  6. 01:53:136 (1,1) - Too close , Please delete 01:55:593 (1) - and add a circle 01:56:085
  7. 02:17:215 (2) - You forget a clap here
  8. 02:26:552 (1,1) - Too close , If you can , I hope you delete last two objects and add a spinner
 
[ Miya's Normal]
 
  1. AR-1? The AR looks a little high now >_<
  2. 00:27:387 (4) - Add a circle here? May follow the vocal more
  3. 00:50:729 (3,5) - Add clap sounds great?
  4. 00:52:940 (2) - I suggetion delete this note , Add a note here isn't very good for me
  5. 01:21:687 (4,5,6,7) - Remove all clap and add finish on this circles please , I think they will follow the music more , oh! And you can add a NC on circle 4 , because music become high
  6. 01:29:795 (4) - It sounds a little loud , make the volume lower?
  7. 01:33:972 (3,4) - haha , just nazi , make it symmetrical?
  8. 01:37:903 (3,4) - Remove clap and add finish
 
[ Hard]
 
  1. 00:12:154 (1,2) - Remove all whistle and add a whitle on slider 2 of start , May follow the piano more xD
  2. 00:50:729 (8) - Add clap ?
  3. 01:19:230 (1,2,3) - Ctrl+R? If you do this , you need to add hutsounds again
  4. 01:39:377 (3) - This isn't follow the song , I suggetion delete this slider and add two circles 01:39:377 and 01:39:623
  5. 02:28:763 (1) - Start 02:28:640 to follow the song more
 
[ Insane]
 
  1. 00:18:542 (5) - Remove whistle end please , this sounds strange for me >_<
  2. 00:22:719 (2) - ^
  3. 00:24:194 (5) - Add whistle
  4. 00:26:404 (5) - Remove whistle end
  5. 00:28:616 (1) - About this... 6/1 sounds not correct.... but 4/1 isn't correct too... so my suggetion is ..... Wow! it's too hard to say , so code here~
    256,192,28616,5,0
    308,84,29025,2,0,B|256:60|204:84,1,107.999996781349
  6. 00:34:267 (5) - Remove whistle end
  7. 00:38:444 (2) - ^
  8. 00:42:129 (5) - ^
  9. 01:36:674 (4,5) - Overlap here isn't a good idea for me
  10. 01:46:503 (4) - Delete this note sounds more good
 
  --------------------------------------------------------
Okay!~ Complate! Sorry for late , here is my diff and BG~
Sorry for my very poorrrrrrr mod ~~! >_<
Good Luck :3


Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [Boss Sweet Taiko].osu
Miya
Sorry bossandy, nothing fixed >.<
But thank you for the mod. :)
YTYuyu

bossandy wrote:

Hi hi~ I mod this map because I am late QAQ~
 
  1. Red : I think you must to fix.
  2. Blue : Need to discuss.
  3. Black : Just suggest or nazi.
 

 
249's Easy
 
[*]00:08:960 (1) - Remove finish start? There is nothing change in music , Hmm.... If you don't want to change , Maybe you can make the green Timing Section to 20% , sounds good for me i reduced it to 20%. there's no way i'm gonna remove that finish
[*]00:26:650 (3) - Add whistle end? sounds great for me i disagree. if i do that, then it'll ruin the consistency in whistles. i mainly focus on consistency rather then how nice it sounds.
[*]01:21:687 (1,1) - These object is too close!!!! Beginners can't read these !!! , If you want to solve this issue , I suggetion you delete 01:24:144 (1) - alright. i guess i'll give beginners some time to adjust.
[*]01:37:412 (3) - Add a finish on the arrow , The music become high gradually , and this slider's start and end have a finish , If you don't add finish on arrow , it sounds not good hmm alright. i added timing points to increase the volume of the finish.
[*]01:49:697 Suggetion add a circle here to have a good flow xD no i wanna change up my pattern here. since it's near the kiai, i want this part to be easy, and then when the kiai comes up, then it'll so back to its original pattern.
[*]01:53:136 (1,1) - Too close , Please delete 01:55:593 (1) - and add a circle 01:56:085 hmm alright.
[*]02:17:215 (2) - You forget a clap here nope this is intentional. i want every clap to be at every 4th downbeat.
[*]02:26:552 (1,1) - Too close , If you can , I hope you delete last two objects and add a spinner no i'm not gonna do that. i don't to give beginners an easy pass that quick. since it's near the end, it wouldn't to put a bit of a challenge for beginners.

 


Sorry for my very poorrrrrrr mod ~~! >_<
Good Luck :3
Ty for the mod :D

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [249's Easy].osu
DJPop

ykcarrot wrote:

Revenge of DJPop? xD
This one's easier :P


bossandy wrote:

Insane
  1. 00:18:542 (5) - Remove whistle end please , this sounds strange for me >_<
    - Fixed
  2. 00:22:719 (2) - ^
    - Fixed
  3. 00:24:194 (5) - Add whistle
    - Fixed
  4. 00:26:404 (5) - Remove whistle end
    - Fixed
  5. 00:28:616 (1) - About this... 6/1 sounds not correct.... but 4/1 isn't correct too... so my suggetion is ..... Wow! it's too hard to say , so code here~
    - Fixed
  6. 00:34:267 (5) - Remove whistle end
    - Fixed
  7. 00:38:444 (2) - ^
    - Fixed
  8. 00:42:129 (5) - ^
    - Fixed
  9. 01:36:674 (4,5) - Overlap here isn't a good idea for me
    - Fixed
  10. 01:46:503 (4) - Delete this note sounds more good
    - X

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [DJPop's Insane].osu
Topic Starter
ririco
updated :3
riffy
yo~

please don't eat me if mod is wrong ;_;

[General]
i'm not sure about kiai times in easy but it's good now

[Miya's Normal]
~_~ it's awesome


[DJPop's Tsubasa]
00:29:025 (2) - unsnapped
00:08:960 (1) - try a bit softer shape? (code) / same for 00:07:731 (2)
code
464,88,8960,6,0,B|440:40|384:32|328:40|304:88,1,192,2|0

00:18:296 - circle here? and 00:19:033 (and to avoid ruining symmetrical pattern this) i know if you will accept this it will ruin symmetrical ;_;
00:23:456 (4) - and 00:23:456 (4) - ^
00:39:181 (4) - maybe a bit softer shape? nazi-code below
code
144,32,39181,2,0,B|90:22|48:48|22:90|32:152,1,192
00:39:181 (4) - i want circle here
00:50:483 (3,4,6,7) - if yo curve these sliders this will looks better
01:03:996 (1) - move NC to (4) for better looking ;_;
02:03:947 (5,7) - just curve them a bit more

[Boss' Sweet Taiko]
it's awesome

[Hard]
00:17:068 (2) - a bit more moe shape
code
28,268,17068,2,0,B|68:300|112:280,1,90,0|2
00:19:033 (5) - x316 y216 (don't forget to move (1)
00:33:530 (5) - new combo for slowdown
00:55:888 (3,4,5) - this?
01:07:682 (4,5,6) - this?

[249's Easy]
clear

~~~~~~~~~~~~~

gl~

you have amazing guest diffs frome awesome mappers. just get it ranked as fast as you can :3

Star!
DJPop

-Bakari- wrote:

[DJPop's Tsubasa]
00:29:025 (2) - unsnapped
- Intended, sync on vocal
00:08:960 (1) - try a bit softer shape? (code) / same for 00:07:731 (2)
- Fixed
00:18:296 - circle here? and 00:19:033 (and to avoid ruining symmetrical pattern this) i know if you will accept this it will ruin symmetrical ;_;
- Don't want to add anyway
00:23:456 (4) - and 00:23:456 (4) - ^
- Fixed
00:39:181 (4) - maybe a bit softer shape? nazi-code below
- Fixed
00:39:181 (4) - i want circle here
- It's the same place as ↑ :<
00:50:483 (3,4,6,7) - if yo curve these sliders this will looks better
- Fixed
01:03:996 (1) - move NC to (4) for better looking ;_;
- Fixed
02:03:947 (5,7) - just curve them a bit more
- Fixed

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [DJPop's Insane].osu
grumd
Okay, here's my mod.
NO KUDOSU

[DJPop's]
  1. 00:04:046 (2) - remove whistle? it wasn't there on 00:02:080 (2)
  2. 00:11:908 (3) - remove it also here?
  3. 00:14:856 (1) - add one repeat? to be honest, i'd like to add notes right till the slider start, but using a slider with repeats for this purpose is weird. I suggest you to delete this slider and add a little stream, like that: http://puu.sh/vpnB; this could be best.
  4. 00:45:815 (2) - add one repeat? (due to vocals)
  5. 00:46:552 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - i highly suggest you to remake this part with 0.5x spacing for streams (like you did after that) to keep consistency. it looks rather better, while unreasonable spacing change in streams looks weird
  6. 01:29:549 (1) - sudden use of finishes stunned me. it sounds very bad here.. consider changing them to claps or just removing
  7. 01:30:778 (3) - yes, i mean these finishes
  8. 01:31:515 (1) - this finish sounds good, no need to remove it. so, just remove (change to claps) it on 01:30:778 and 01:29:795, okay? highly suggest.
  9. 01:33:480 (1) - remove finish please
  10. 02:11:810 (4,5) - that's just my taste, but i think these sliders are too curvy. consider making them smoother?
  11. 02:15:987 (5,1) - the same
  12. 02:26:183 (8) - i suggest you to add one repeat here, add finish on the end point of this slider, move spinner's start 1/4 later, move green point 1/4 later too. i just want to accent vocal on 02:26:552
  13. 02:26:674 (1) - what about dividing this spinner into two another spinners? just like that: http://puu.sh/vpw1 (first spinner: 02:26:674 ~ 02:28:272, second spinner: 02:28:517 ~ 02:30:483). this will also accent vocal on 02:28:272
[Taiko]

  • I never played or modded taiko, but you will probably accept some of these suggestions:
  1. 00:48:272 (2) - blue note (whistle)?
  2. 00:56:625 (1) - move it 1/4 earlier, to 00:56:503?
  3. 01:12:350 (1) - the same, 1/4 earlier
  4. 01:23:898 - add note?
  5. 01:39:377 (1) - finish here?
  6. 01:43:308 (2) - blue note (whistle)?
  7. 01:44:291 (3) - blue note (whistle)?
  8. 02:10:827 (1) - finish?
  9. 02:30:483 (1) - finish? here i'm not sure
[Hard]
  1. 00:00:851 (3) - whistle?
  2. 00:01:834 - i can hear piano note here, probably shorten the slider to this point?
  3. 00:03:063 (4) - same
  4. 00:04:291 (1) - try to use 0.5x SV on this slider too
  5. 00:13:628 - i hear a note here. start the slider in this point? (adding a note 00:13:382 here, of course)
  6. 00:28:616 (5,6,7,8) - to follow vocals more, better use a slider staring here, ending here: 00:28:984, with one repeat (so it will finally end on 00:29:353)
  7. Eh, that claps sound so noisy >< I don't like them, they totally don't fit the song. 01:08:050 - delete this green line to remove that annoying claps if you agree. Custom claps sound much better.
  8. 01:06:085 - must be a note here
  9. 01:07:805 - here too, but can be ignored
  10. 01:15:790 (5) - add a finish on slider start?
  11. 01:38:886 (2) - you'd better delete (3) and extend this slider to it's position
  12. 02:10:090 (2) - have to be deleted
  13. 02:22:620 (1) - this was too sudden and confusing.. but i dont know what you can do.. maybe change 02:21:638 (1)'s shape so they wil not look similar
  14. 02:26:552 (1,1) - better do like I suggested in DJPop's diff: first spinner: 02:26:552 ~ 02:28:272, second spinner: 02:28:517 ~ 02:30:483
[Normal]
  1. 00:01:834 - add a note
  2. 00:03:800 - here too
  3. 00:09:697 - and here
  4. 00:11:662 - it was expectable. here too
  5. 00:38:689 (5) - move it a bit to the right?
  6. 00:42:620 - add a note somehow?
  7. 00:48:763 (1,2) - i guess that you tried to make them symetrical, but don't know how. http://puu.sh/vpEw - try this! ctrl+j them and move (1) to x:160 y:352, (2) - mirrored to this. (if you agree, you will need to adjust (3) position)
  8. 00:52:203 - as i told in Hard, change this to S:C1, please. these soft-claps totally don't fit the music.
  9. 00:59:451 (5,6) - may be too confusing. try this: http://puu.sh/vox1
  10. 01:03:259 (4) - move it to 01:03:259
  11. 01:03:996 (6) - try to add 3/4 long slider with one repeat here please (and delete 01:04:488 (1))
  12. 01:15:176 (5,6) - the same?
  13. 01:23:652 (1) - change it to 1/2 long slider with repeat? http://puu.sh/voyK
  14. 01:30:901 (7,8) - same?
  15. 01:38:763 (5,6) - same?
  16. 01:46:011 - add a note?
  17. 01:46:503 - add a note?
[Easy]
  1. 01:31:515 (1) - almost touches (4), better make a triangle: http://puu.sh/vpIc (adjust 01:32:989 (2) position if agree)
  2. 02:29:009 (1) - it may be far-fetched, but it's the last combo in the map, after plenty of spinners... and you place the afterspinner note right after spinner, in kinda far distance of it... it may be hard for newbies, especially after the whole song.
Ah, that's all. Thank you for reading this!
Good luck with your map.
NO KUDOSU
YTYuyu

grumd wrote:

Okay, here's my mod.
NO KUDOSU

[Easy]
  1. 01:31:515 (1) - almost touches (4), better make a triangle: http://puu.sh/vpIc (adjust 01:32:989 (2) position if agree) yes it's almost touching (4) but if it's touching 4, then i'll fix it, for now i'll keep it.
  2. 02:29:009 (1) - it may be far-fetched, but it's the last combo in the map, after plenty of spinners... and you place the afterspinner note right after spinner, in kinda far distance of it... it may be hard for newbies, especially after the whole song. alright i removed the circle and moved the slider up.
Ah, that's all. Thank you for reading this!
Good luck with your map.
NO KUDOSU
ty for the mod :D

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [249's Easy].osu
Topic Starter
ririco
thanks grumd and bakari for checking my map :3

and updated~
grumd
A little recheck from AIBat:
NO KUDOSU
  1. Easy must have "bossandy" in tags.
  2. Kiai in Easy is inconsistent compared to other diffs
  3. DJPop's diff: 00:29:025 (2) - unsnapped slider
That's all.
Topic Starter
ririco
ok added bossandy in tag in easy diff~ :3
Miya
Sorry, i don't get your point mentioning those things above. Besides i don't want to break my rythim consistencies. So, if you suggest to add a note overthere and there, please give it a good reason why you mention that. But, thank you for the mod~

Sekai, nothing changed >.<
YTYuyu
wow after seeing the other peoples' BGs, i feel like i want to change mine to fit the scenery. if you don't mind can you change it to this BG?
grumd
@Miya: I just hear piano notes in the music there. But my mod wasn't only "add note" mod, what about other suggestions?
Ah, and thanks for constructive criticism. I'll try to add more explanations in future (I'm not a modder though).
Miya
I didn't use your other suggestion too. About clap, i don't agree with you. About 00:48:763 (1,2)- It breaks, my spacing. And about other nazi, i didn't see your point making nazi for it. And i denied all of your rythmical change, because i didn't see your reason why you said that.
Topic Starter
ririco
@ Byaku changed your BG :3
DJPop

grumd wrote:

[DJPop's]
  1. 00:04:046 (2) - remove whistle? it wasn't there on 00:02:080 (2)
    - Whistle on piano chord
  2. 00:11:908 (3) - remove it also here?
    - ^
  3. 00:14:856 (1) - add one repeat? to be honest, i'd like to add notes right till the slider start, but using a slider with repeats for this purpose is weird. I suggest you to delete this slider and add a little stream, like that: http://puu.sh/vpnB; this could be best.
    - Already synced with obvious sounds
  4. 00:45:815 (2) - add one repeat? (due to vocals)
    - Fixed
  5. 00:46:552 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - i highly suggest you to remake this part with 0.5x spacing for streams (like you did after that) to keep consistency. it looks rather better, while unreasonable spacing change in streams looks weird
    - Fixed
  6. 01:29:549 (1) - sudden use of finishes stunned me. it sounds very bad here.. consider changing them to claps or just removing
    - Removed
  7. 01:30:778 (3) - yes, i mean these finishes
    - Removed
  8. 01:31:515 (1) - this finish sounds good, no need to remove it. so, just remove (change to claps) it on 01:30:778 and 01:29:795, okay? highly suggest.
    - Okay
  9. 01:33:480 (1) - remove finish please
    - Removed
  10. 02:11:810 (4,5) - that's just my taste, but i think these sliders are too curvy. consider making them smoother?
    - Sure
  11. 02:15:987 (5,1) - the same
    - Fixed
  12. 02:26:183 (8) - i suggest you to add one repeat here, add finish on the end point of this slider, move spinner's start 1/4 later, move green point 1/4 later too. i just want to accent vocal on 02:26:552
    - No changes
  13. 02:26:674 (1) - what about dividing this spinner into two another spinners? just like that: http://puu.sh/vpw1 (first spinner: 02:26:674 ~ 02:28:272, second spinner: 02:28:517 ~ 02:30:483). this will also accent vocal on 02:28:272
    - Tried that, but not good

grumd wrote:

A little recheck from AIBat:
  1. DJPop's diff: 00:29:025 (2) - unsnapped slider
    - Intended, sync on vocal

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [DJPop's Insane].osu
Topic Starter
ririco
updated :3
Tenshi-nyan
dafuq is this? Uploaded 10 days ago and so many mods already?

Anyway,

General
Volume is too high for many sections. The whistles give me a headache.
Add those hitsounds - Please, please please do: http://puu.sh/vCxl and http://puu.sh/vCxK. A clap with lotsa echo and a simple bass. Perfect for this song.
Tell all mappers who took part in this map to re-work their hitsounds D:

Insane
00:14:856 (1) - remove whistles completely or lower the volume for them, they sound terrible this way.

Besides that nothing to say. Please use the hitsounds provided above to IMPROVE your HITSOUNDS for this. You are DJPop. You can do this.

Hard
Hitsounds are WAAAY too loud. Lower volume in ALL sections by at least 20%.

Map itself is fine, but please use my custom hitsounds.

Normal
00:42:866 (4) - what is the bulk in the middle supposed to be? looks stupid.

Besides that, use my custom hitsounds from above.

Easy
Hitsounds are too loud.
Rework the hitsounds with my hitsounds from above.


Pleae excuse my arrogant behaviour in this post.
Topic Starter
ririco
thanks Tenshi-nyan for checking the map :3
Tenshi-nyan
So, you gonna add those hitsounds or not? Just want to make sure.
YTYuyu
thanks but no thanks. i feel that the current hitsounds are fine. i tried using your hitsounds but i got lost right away. in other words it'd be hard for me if i used your hitsounds as i'm not used to them in a calm song like this. it just doesn't fit my style at all.
Miya
Agree with 249 here. It's hard for me to use your hitsound in this calm song. Maybe it doesn't fit my style :|
About that slider, i just want variation, nothing wrong. And i don't think it's ugly. :|
Star Stream
From my queue

[249]
  1. from a IceBeam's : separate all combos that are longer then 5 please,it's required for the easiest difficulty. ex)NC here 02:00:999 (3) -
  2. 00:08:960 (1) - 1grid left 4th tick to be symmetry with head
  3. 00:18:788 (2) - 1grid up to be symmetry with 00:17:805 (1) - ?
  4. 00:24:684 (2) - start combo from here, melody changed
  5. 01:24:635 (1) - you should NC after spinner
  6. 01:31:023 (5) - 1grid left to be centered, put your timing bar here 01:29:795 - and you can take x:320
  7. 01:33:480 (3) - looks hard, you'd better copy/paste from 01:31:515 (1) -. will be more soft imo
  8. 01:52:645 (6) - 1grid up to be symmetry with 01:51:662 (4) - , because 01:52:154 (5) - is symmetry with 01:51:171 (3) - now
[Miya]
  1. 00:02:080 (1) - because you started on melody first, i'd recommend start it on melody too, so you can delete it and add a circle on this slider's end
  2. 00:04:046 (1) - ^
  3. 00:09:942 (1) - ^but arrow
  4. 00:11:908 (1) - ^ to delete?
  5. 00:24:193 (6) - feels empty, whistle here will kepp your whistle sounds
  6. 00:32:055 (4) - ^
  7. 00:39:918 - ^
  8. 00:44:832 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - to split this long combo, i'd NC at 00:46:797 (5) -
  9. 00:50:729 (3,4,5) - if i were you, i whould put 00:51:220 (4) - on (292,48) to be symmetry with 00:48:763 (1,2) - , not center
  10. 01:22:670 (6) - 1 grid up to be symmetry with 01:21:687 (4) -
  11. 01:28:566 (2) - 1 grid down ^
  12. 01:30:286 (5,6) - 2 grid left ^
  13. 01:34:463 (4) - 1 grid left ^
  14. 02:26:552 (1) - because it's just a normal diff, i recommend split it or make like easy diff
[Hard]
  1. Insane diff has 4CS, i highly recommend to use 4CS too
  2. 00:06:748 (4) - because you put NC on 00:02:326 (1,1) - , NC here as well
  3. 00:23:456 (2) - whistle and remove whistle from 00:23:702 -
  4. 00:29:353 (7) - ^
  5. 00:43:603 (3) - 1 grid left,down to make more blank from 00:43:358 (2) -
  6. 01:00:065 - finish
  7. 01:31:515 (3) - ^
  8. 02:11:318 (6) - copy/paste from 02:10:581 (4) - and ctrl+r,h?
[DJPop]
  1. 01:38:272 (3) - a bit confusing, use more big dinstance or NC plz
  2. 02:08:124 (9) - NC?


Good luck with ranking~
Miya
Fixed all nazi mod and the last spinner. :3

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [Miya's Normal].osu
Topic Starter
ririco
thanks Star Stream for your mod \o and updated ~
DJPop

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Insane
00:14:856 (1) - remove whistles completely or lower the volume for them, they sound terrible this way.
- Reduced whistles to 1 and faded out volume, also applied your custom hitsounds :D

Star Stream wrote:

[DJPop]
  1. 01:38:272 (3) - a bit confusing, use more big dinstance or NC plz
    - Fixed
  2. 02:08:124 (9) - NC?
    - Fixed

Download: 50294 Lia - Tori no Uta.part1.rar
Download: 50294 Lia - Tori no Uta.part2.rar

YTYuyu

Star Stream wrote:

From my queue

[249]
  1. from a IceBeam's : separate all combos that are longer then 5 please,it's required for the easiest difficulty. ex)NC here 02:00:999 (3) -
  2. 00:08:960 (1) - 1grid left 4th tick to be symmetry with head nope i don't think it'd make that much of a difference.
  3. 00:18:788 (2) - 1grid up to be symmetry with 00:17:805 (1) - ? nope this is intentional.
  4. 00:24:684 (2) - start combo from here, melody changed nope (1) is where the vocals start. im not following the melody at all, just the vocals and when it changes.
  5. 01:24:635 (1) - you should NC after spinner ahh i see it. Fixed.
  6. 01:31:023 (5) - 1grid left to be centered, put your timing bar here 01:29:795 - and you can take x:320 same as 00:08:960.
  7. 01:33:480 (3) - looks hard, you'd better copy/paste from 01:31:515 (1) -. will be more soft imo alright just for flow.
  8. 01:52:645 (6) - 1grid up to be symmetry with 01:51:662 (4) - , because 01:52:154 (5) - is symmetry with 01:51:171 (3) - now oh uhh this is a mistake. i moved (5) down. i want this to be a slight diagonal zig-zag pattern.

Good luck with ranking~
ty for the mod :D

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (-Sekai-) [249's Easy].osu
Akiyama Mizuki
From my modding queue! :3

[Byakugan]
00:08:960 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/321393
00:14:856 (1) - finish
00:48:272 (1) - ^
01:27:584 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/321432
02:06:896 (1) - whistle at reverse arrow

[Miya] well, almost nothing to mod :3 but 1 suggestion
01:56:576 (2) - whistle at reverse arrow

[Hard]
00:24:930 (4) - NC
00:33:530 (1) - clap
01:03:014 (1) - whistle

[Boss Andy]
sry.. i can't mod taiko :(

[DJ Pop]
well, nothing to mod here :3
but starting part of song is quiet and low speed
I think Normal sound is absurd...

Go rank ㅇㅅㅇ!
Miya
Sorry, i don't want any whistle in kiai part >.<
Thank you for the mod~
YTYuyu

bbj0920 wrote:

From my modding queue! :3

[Byakugan]
00:08:960 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/321393 it won't make that much of a difference so no.
00:14:856 (1) - finish no i find it unfitting with this part.
00:48:272 (1) - ^ too loud sorry.
01:27:584 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/321432 *points at 00:08:960*
02:06:896 (1) - whistle at reverse arrow *points at 00:14:856*

Go rank ㅇㅅㅇ!
No changes made but ty for the mod.
Topic Starter
ririco
nothing to changed but thanks for modding ~ :3
Twice_old


[Easy]

01:37:412 -(3) x:404 y:140

01:51:171 -(3) new combo

[Normal]

nice

[Hard]

00:28:616 -(5) ds need fix

[DJpop's Insane]

01:19:475 -(6) ds need fix

01:44:046 -(2) ^


thats I can find <3 really nice map and nice song, I love AIR

good luck w/~
YTYuyu

Twice wrote:



[Easy]

01:37:412 -(3) x:404 y:140 it won't make that much of a difference during gameplay so no.

01:51:171 -(3) new combo i'd like to hear more people's opinions about this. if there's enough, i'll make this a NC


thats I can find <3 really nice map and nice song, I love AIR

good luck w/~
No changes made but ty for the mod.
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