Darksonic wrote:

Fiya's Normal:

00:34:875 (1): Use 1,0x spacing here, and move it like this. did this and shifted a bunch of stuff that was after it so that there was no overlap.
00:56:018 (4): Delete Whistle at the body of slider and add it at start? If you take it off and listen closely you can actually here the exact sound of that sliderslide multiple times in that section of the music, so no change.
01:29:622 (3): Move to the center ? (x:256 y:188 using 1,0x DS), suggestion. Sure, I guess lol

-Sekai- wrote:

Fiya's Normal

OD +1? it's better to me o3o Okay I guess since it's still under 4 stars...

1. 00:03:161 (2) - carve it to blanket the slider 00:02:589 (1) - like this It already is a blanket, derp.
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:08:304 (2) - slider point 2 move it one grip down and one right looks better this way :3 Less of a blanket that way.
3. 00:11:447 (5) - this clap sounds too loud maybe lower it down ._.? Sounds fine to me...
4. 00:15:732 (3) - ^ ^
5. 00:17:447 (2) - slider point 4 move it one grip up~ Same as 00:08:304 (2)
6. 00:20:589 (4) - same as 0:11:447 (5) - I like the claps...
7. 00:22:589 (2) - ^ ^
8. 00:24:304 (1,3) - ^ ^
9. 00:34:875 (1) - ^ ^
10. 00:36:875 (3) - ^ ^
11. 00:39:161 (4) - ^ ^
12. 00:39:732 (1) - make this slider more blanket like this? and i wont say about normal claps anymore you have to lower them all down a bit ._. Is already a blanket, and the claps sound fine.
    
    SPOILER

    
13. 00:41:732 (1) - make it blanket like this? Made it blanket better...
    
    SPOILER

    
14. 00:56:018 (4) - this slider's sounds weird why?! o.o" See my response to Darksonic on this.
15. 01:00:589 (3) - ^ ^
16. 01:09:447 (2) - move slider point 2 two grip right to make blanket the 01:06:875 (4) - :3 This slider is meant to be the reverse of 01:10:589 (3)
17. 01:08:875 (1) - same as 00:56:018 (4) Same as 00:56:018 (4)
18. 01:13:732 (2) - slider point 2 move it 1 grip up to blanket the 3 ~ =3= It's already a blanket...
19. 01:21:447 (2) - straight the lines in slider points... wut?

Fiya you need more work on hitsounds =3= I like them as they are

1. 00:18:018 (2) - make a reverse slider here? from 00:18:018 to 00:18:304, then go back to 00:18:589.
   
   Example

   
2. 01:00:589 - add a slider from 01:00:589 to 01:00:875, then put 01:01:161 (3) on the 01:01:447.

1. 00:57:018 (1) - I prefer pu this slider on the white timing line ( 00:57:161 -

1. 00:47:018 (2) - remove this note

1. 00:24:304 (1,2,3) - use d k instead of ddd maybe better IMO
2. 00:32:875 (1) - d
3. 01:15:018 (1,1,1) - try this one : k ddk
   
4. 01:29:974 (2) - remove, and put the slider from here to the end

1. because of the low BPM and 1/6 pattern makes it too crowded, I suggest you can use 1.6SV to make it smoothly playing
2. 00:33:447 (1,1) - remove those two notes
3. 01:10:018 (1) - D (finish here
4. 01:14:447 (1) - k

1. How about offset 580(-10)? I got a better result with this offset.
2. Could you reduce the filesize of applause.wav? It takes more space than the mp3 itself. And i think it's no good. It seems applause.wav is more louder too than the mp3, maybe you could re-encode and reduce that applause.wav

1. Can you reduce HP and AR by 1? Despite the low BPM, i think HP and AR 2 is more suitable for easy. And it's more easier for beginner to pass it since this diff has a 1/2 rythim in it.
2. 00:25:732 (3,1) - Switch new combo? It seems not consistant with your combo pattern.
3. 01:29:445- You have unsnapped green timing point there. Please fix that.
4. 01:07:161 (3) - I think you miss clap2 at this slider end.Well, i can hear 'dub' sound at that spot, and it's not covered by clap2 sound like you always do.
5. 01:20:590 (2) - Hmm, you miss a clap2 again here at the start and the end. What's the point of timing point if you didn't use it in this spot? Also, can you make the slider straight like this? http://puu.sh/vkGB It's more good to see imo.

1. 00:14:304 (3,1) - Switch new combo?
2. 00:16:589 (1) - I don't think whistle and clap will be good to hear if it joined together. So can you remove the whistle from it? I don't think it's bad idea to the hitsound if you remove whistle here.
3. 00:29:732 (3) - Again, i don't think finish sound is really fit here. Especially normal finish sound. There's no accent going high that fit for finish sound. Instead the vocal is going down and more calmer in this part.
4. 00:48:304 (2,4) - Hmm, i think the whistle here should be clap instead. Your clap is missing in this point. So i feel awkward and empty when passing this point.
5. 00:53:161 (1) - You can add a finish sound here at the slider start since it's the beginning of new rythim.

1. Umm, HP -2 and OD-1? It's more fun to play with this option imo.
2. 00:30:018 (6,1) - Aww, not a very good jump for Hard diff. It's quite sudden and have a large distance too (Almost 3.0x). I got 50 when i first past this section. I hope you can reduce the distance between this note.
3. 00:25:437 (5) - I think you need a normal clap2 in this note to close your normal clap2 rythim in previous rythim.
4. 00:36:579 (6,7,1) - Orz, i didn't realize this is a stream, when i play i think this is a 1/2 rythim, that's why i always got 100 in this section. Can you please reduce the distance between this note like your other stream?
5. 00:37:151 (1,2,3) - This one too ;_; ^
6. 00:46:294 (1,2,3) - This one too ;_; ^
7. 01:29:612 (2) - The only finish sound in this diff makes it awkward to hear imo. It's better to remove finish sound on this slider end.

LoliSora wrote:

[Fiya's Normal]

1. 00:57:018 (1) - I prefer pu this slider on the white timing line ( 00:57:161 - I think it's easier to play on the blue line since there is a distinct bass hit there.

BeatofIke wrote:

Fiya's Normal
-> Video offset is different from your other difficulties. I'm not certain whether the correct offset is 75ms or -100ms. I'm going to assume 75ms is correct though. If so, change it to 75ms please. I'll leave that to those, I didn't even know there was a video lol...
-> Increase HP Drain to 4 or 5 for better difficulty spread. Right now, the HP drain is the same as easy (lol). On hard difficulty, you set the HP drain to 7. Was trying to keep it under 4 stars, but oh well... it's 4 Drain now

Ryafuka wrote:

[Fiya's Normal]
OD or HP +1?
00:34:875 (1) - I think that this finish is good to use N:C1. Sure.
00:44:018 (1) - ^ ^
00:52:589 (5,1) - make (5) to blanket the next slider?　like this.I kind of like the way it is right now better as it fits the previous time I used that pattern more.

Miya wrote:

Normal

1. 00:14:304 (3,1) - Switch new combo? Next combo is too short then.
2. 00:16:589 (1) - I don't think whistle and clap will be good to hear if it joined together. So can you remove the whistle from it? I don't think it's bad idea to the hitsound if you remove whistle here. Removed clap instead because the whistle fits the cymbol hit and vocal there better than the clap and the bass.
3. 00:29:732 (3) - Again, i don't think finish sound is really fit here. Especially normal finish sound. There's no accent going high that fit for finish sound. Instead the vocal is going down and more calmer in this part. It was origionally the bell tone whistle before i changed after a different mod, and there is a cymbol hit on top of the vocal there.
4. 00:48:304 (2,4) - Hmm, i think the whistle here should be clap instead. Your clap is missing in this point. So i feel awkward and empty when passing this point. It is whistle there to represent the sudden change in vocal pitch and because there are cymbol hits there that were not on that pattern before.
5. 00:53:161 (1) - You can add a finish sound here at the slider start since it's the beginning of new rythim. I don't hear any type of cymbol hit there though, and I am restricting my finishes to solely cymbol hits in this map.

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[Fiya's Normal]

1. 01:29:622 (3) - Move to center looks much better.Don't really see the difference of moving something like that one grid down, but okay.

popner wrote:

[Normal]
00:09:732 (1) - thought it is only 105bpm, i think it is not good to use blue line note in Normal It's fits the song is quite easy enough to read at this tempo and AR if you are paying attention imo
00:29:732 (3) - remove finish at the end? Geh, okay enough people have mentioned it. Removed.
00:46:304 (1) - same as 00:09:732 (1), shorten by 1/4 tick? (and many other position. 3/4 slider is fine in Hard and Insane, but not in Normal imo.) Same as 00:09:732 (1)
01:04:018 - feel empty here, add a note? added a triple slider and a circle
01:12:589 (2) - move to 01:12:875? it will make more sense I think it fits better and follows the previous patterns of the map as a double tick slider.

Konei wrote:

Fiya's Normal

01:10:304 (3) Move 3 closer to 1 and away from 2. Imo it's a bit difficult, because I mostly klick the slider when I see it. If its a bit away, the break between 3 and 2 is easier too read Imo I'm not entirely sure what you mean here.

00:20:596 (3) NC maybe? The clap on the end of this slider is signifying the end of the combo

00:28:073 (1) remove NC? 7 note combo will be too long compared to the rest of the diff.

LoliSora wrote:

[Easy]

1. 00:18:018 (2) - make a reverse slider here? from 00:18:018 to 00:18:304, then go back to 00:18:589. It was suggested I removed this in an earlier mod, and come to think about it, this is actually better. Reverted.
2. 01:00:589 - add a slider from 01:00:589 to 01:00:875, then put 01:01:161 (3) on the 01:01:447. This rhythming is fine without any other reasoning provided P:

[Hard]

1. 00:47:018 (2) - remove this note 00:37:875 (2) - Same reason why I have 00:37:875 (2) -

BeatofIke wrote:

General
-> You already have "hayate" on source. I'm not certain whether to remove it from tags or not. If I don't have "hayate" in the tags, searching I don't think "hayate the combat butler" will return this map.
-> Remove "the" from tags? What's the point of having '"the" in tags?

Easy
-> Nothing found. Sweet.

Fiya's Normal
-> Video offset is different from your other difficulties. I'm not certain whether the correct offset is 75ms or -100ms. I'm going to assume 75ms is correct though. If so, change it to 75ms please. It is 75ms, and I thought I changed it.

Hard
-> Overall difficulty (-1)? It looks a bit too harsh for a hard. (At least compared to your normal difficulty)
00:01:161 (2) - Add soft whistle? Assumed you meant S and not S:C1 or S:C2, but added; builds up to the ding at 00:04:589 (1) - pretty well.
00:02:304 (4) - ^
00:03:447 (2) - ^
00:04:875 (2) - ^ Not this one though, especially since not downbeat.

KayeSara wrote:

[tTaiko Lite]

1. 00:24:304 (1,2,3) - use d k instead of ddd maybe better IMO I think the ddd triple works fine in this cadence.
2. 00:32:875 (1) - d Sure.
3. 01:15:018 (1,1,1) - try this one : k ddk 01:13:732 (1,2,1,1,1,1,1) - Been using this pattern for this final section.
   
4. 01:29:974 (2) - remove, and put the slider from here to the end Kinda need a finisher though.

[tTaiko]

1. because of the low BPM and 1/6 pattern makes it too crowded, I suggest you can use 1.6SV to make it smoothly playing I'll ask around about this.
2. 00:33:447 (1,1) - remove those two notes Replaced; it does seem kinda off.
3. 01:10:018 (1) - D (finish here Yup, that's good.
4. 01:14:447 (1) - k Sure, needs some variation and matches next 5-pattern well.

Ryafuka wrote:

[Hard]
00:17:447 (5,6) - Can you make it a spacing like this? It becomes being the same as that of 00:40:304 (5,6) - or 01:20:589 (1,2) - . The difference is that this is on the inside of the curve, compared to the other two examples you've provided, but I'll look into it.
00:34:875 (1) - Remove clap and add N:C1's finish? It seems good sound to me. Yup.
00:44:018 (1) - ^
01:21:447 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - hm..that is strange sound to me.. try this? Yeah...thought I'd map to the marimba, but guess not.

[Easy]
00:34:875 (1) - Remove clap and add N:C1's finish at beginning of slider? Yup, like Hard.
00:44:018 (1) - ^
01:14:304 (1) - this place is hidden by spinner-osu.. Replaced, along with the other one.

Miya wrote:

General

1. How about offset 580(-10)? I got a better result with this offset. I timed with Taiko since I felt that was easiest to be accurate. I've tried from 575 to 600, and found that this was best.
2. Could you reduce the filesize of applause.wav? It takes more space than the mp3 itself. And i think it's no good. It seems applause.wav is more louder too than the mp3, maybe you could re-encode and reduce that applause.wav I'll look into this before my fullsubmit.

Easy

1. Can you reduce HP and AR by 1? Despite the low BPM, i think HP and AR 2 is more suitable for easy. And it's more easier for beginner to pass it since this diff has a 1/2 rythim in it.
2. 00:25:732 (3,1) - Switch new combo? It seems not consistant with your combo pattern. That's why I was reluctant on changing it before... Reverted.
3. 01:29:445- You have unsnapped green timing point there. Please fix that. That may not have mattered in terms of rankability since the purpose of that was to change the hitsound of the slidertick. But I snapped it.
4. 01:07:161 (3) - I think you miss clap2 at this slider end.Well, i can hear 'dub' sound at that spot, and it's not covered by clap2 sound like you always do. Yeah, just missed it.
5. 01:20:590 (2) - Hmm, you miss a clap2 again here at the start and the end. What's the point of timing point if you didn't use it in this spot? Also, can you make the slider straight like this? http://puu.sh/vkGB It's more good to see imo. Sure. No clap on slider end though.

Hard

1. Umm, HP -2 and OD-1? It's more fun to play with this option imo. Set OD6. Not quite feeling below HP7 though, seems like it won't be a challenge.
2. 00:30:018 (6,1) - Aww, not a very good jump for Hard diff. It's quite sudden and have a large distance too (Almost 3.0x). I got 50 when i first past this section. I hope you can reduce the distance between this note. Done.
3. 00:25:437 (5) - I think you need a normal clap2 in this note to close your normal clap2 rythim in previous rythim. Sounds good.
4. 00:36:579 (6,7,1) - Orz, i didn't realize this is a stream, when i play i think this is a 1/2 rythim, that's why i always got 100 in this section. Can you please reduce the distance between this note like your other stream?
5. 00:37:151 (1,2,3) - This one too ;_; ^
6. 00:46:294 (1,2,3) - This one too ;_; ^ Reduced spacing to 1.00x at x1.25 sv.
7. 01:29:612 (2) - The only finish sound in this diff makes it awkward to hear imo. It's better to remove finish sound on this slider end. Done.

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[General]

1. Please remove SliderTrackOverride,SliderBorder,
   looks really ugly and you are not used custom hitcircle skin. Guess so, I'll need a more fitting background for the next time I wanna do this
2. I think SB readin is too long,so change 2000 is ok. Changed up SB, leadin is 1694.

[Hard]

1. 00:16:589 (3) - Add new combo and Remove 00:16:304 (1). Consistency with lyrical comboing.
2. 00:32:732 (1) - This spinner should start to here 00:32:875. Yup/
3. 00:59:161 (4) - Try make more curve balance. Anchor is 00:59:447 - which is where you hear "ん".

popner wrote:

[General]
01:28:963 - i think the red line here is unnecessary, or 01:29:278 (1) in Hard is a little off rhythm Timing was looked at through Taiko. Though it's really difficult to get perfect, there are no other spacing issues, so if needed, a final timing check before ranking will do.

[Easy]
Fine~ Sweet.

[Hard]
00:36:018 (3,4,5,6) - use this rhythm here?

SPOILER

00:45:161 (3,4,5,6) - ^
01:13:732 (1,2,3,4) - change to this?

SPOILER

01:16:018 (1,2,3,4) - ^ These are a combination of drums/vocals, and I think they fit nicely.

Konei wrote:

Easy

00:06:789 Add a hitcircle on white tick? Cadence here, a break for Easy is necessary.

Can't find anything wrong Awesome.

Hard


00:36:018 (3) Add whistle? Sound good Imo

00:39:161 (3) ^ at slider beginning

00:42:875 (3) ^

00:53:161 (5) finish at silder beginning?

01:09:223 (1) add whistle? Used this one.

01:10:673 (5) ^

wmfchris wrote:

- Alright it's tTaiko now? If possible, change your [ttaiko] in the past to [tTaiko] :/ Yeah it's all tTaiko now.

[Taiko]
00:17:447 - k sounds nice with vocal Guess this works.
00:26:018 - considering the transition of background music and after some stream adding a note here sounds better Add d.
00:33:875 - feeling a bit empty here as you put a kd in empty section but not here... another kd here? kd works great here, in fact.
00:58:018 - ddkdk? Yup.
01:13:161 - add two notes here? Feels odd with break after the 1/8 Changed it up a bit.
01:30:326 - (you may consider to make the spinner softer here; timing lines need to be put at the beginning of spinner) Used 40% at 01:30:150 - even before spinner, since people do tend to spam spinners early.

[Taiko Lite]
Under HP5 it's quite impossible to fail unless the player processes like 100 misses which is almost 1/3 of the song. Therefore imo you can lower OD instead of HP if the overall difficulty is to be lowered. I'll use HP5 OD5 then. Density of notes is enough to differentiate difficulty.

spboxer3 wrote:

:idea: general

• 
  Settings
  (For the setting/general issue.)
  

1. [notice] 01:27:732 (2) - Unsnapped slider end. for [Fiya's Norma] Can't really help that since it's a slider across timing sections; if it's unrankable I'll work with a BAT to find more precise timings if possible.
2. unused green line [Easy]:
   00:44:018
   00:44:161
   01:28:332 Added the right hitsounds.
   
   
3. duplicated timeline:
   00:00:590 [Easy]
   01:28:332 [Easy]
   00:00:590 [Fiya's Normal]
   

tTaiko Lite

• 
  
  mapping (suggest)
  (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  

1. 00:41:732 (1) - d?
2. 01:06:732 (1,1,2,3,1) - dk d d k?
3. 01:12:590 (1,2,1) - dkd?

tTaiko

• 
  
  mapping (suggest)
  (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  

1. 00:14:018 (1,2,3) - kkd?
2. 00:30:590 (1,2,3) - ddk?
3. 00:42:018 (3,4,1,1,2,3,1,2,1,1,1,2,1) - ddkddkkkdkddk?
4. 01:07:161 (1) - d?
5. 01:22:589 (3) - K?

awesome Taiko~
star~ and good luck ^^

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Recheck ~

[Fiya's Normal]

1. 00:33:018 (1) - This note should move to 00:32:875.
2. 01:27:732 (2) - I forgot this slider end point should be many off unsnaped,
   So you need change a note.

I have messed around with the timing points a little so that nothing is unsnapped now. In regards to Fiya's Normal, I think the way he has it is fine. He's just following the strings.


Thanks again, Rika.

Mystica wrote:

[Normal]
00:17:447 (2) - you'd bettter add the normal whistle It would be wierd to have a normal hitwhistle in the middle of a map with no other normal hitwhistle.
00:36:589 - clap here? Feels wierd when playing to hear two claps right in a row in this.
00:57:018 (1) - slider begin at blue line not a good choice The slider starts on a 1/1 beat from where the previous slider ends and there are many sliders that end on blue lines throughout the diff so I think it's okay.