Hitomi May wrote:

Ну и ладно
звезду Биберу ._.

Wiinter wrote:

[General]

The preview time in Hard doesn't math the other diffs' ones. Set it to 36001 k~
You should either enable countdown on Easy and Normal or disable it on Hard k~

[Hard]

the timing section at 00:23:547 is unsnapped. please fix that~ no need
00:38:770 (7) - stack this with the beginning of 00:38:216 (6) slider? k~
00:52:062 (4) - this sorta overlaps the previous/next slider. in order to fix it, you could stack it with 00:51:324 (2) it's ok
01:04:062 (1) - *nazi* make this slider "fit" the previous notes better? ayaa, I'm not creative, but I mean something like this http://puu.sh/u2ui -even though this one sucks- it's ok
01:08:862 (3) - make it something more.. symmetrical with (1)? pretty much like this http://puu.sh/u2uy no :< i love this pattern as is
01:17:354 (1,2,3) - I expected a slowdown here ): what? no way! slowdown will ruin this map!

I wasn't a big fan of your new combos placement, but asdasd that's totally up to you. lol


Despite the fact I'm not a big fan of this song, the mapset is pretty cool Good luck on rankz.

DarknessAngel wrote:

request from All map will be modded ~

Hard

1. 00:17:539 (3) - remove whistle,I think it is better k~
2. 00:18:278 (1,2) - wrong spacing between them,I suppose you did it intential because you wanted 00:19:201 (2) to stack with 00:17:908 (5)'s head.I suggest make this pattern to avoid the wrong spacing and have them prettier finally fixed this problem! thanks :3
3. 00:27:139 (3) - cancel grid snap and curve the note better,like this maybe later
4. 00:36:739 (2) - add whistle at the head k~
5. 00:38:216 (6,7) - add whistle at (6)'s reserve and (7) :3
6. 00:57:416 (4) - cancel grid snap and curve the note better,like [http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/314188]this[/url] mhm.. k~
7. 01:19:570 (5) - remove whistle will be much better ok

nothing to say about this map,it is good :O
thanks -Bakari- shot double star to my map >3< u r welcome. i'll surely star good maps
I hope my MOD is helpful
good luck ~

DJPop wrote:

~General~
00:46:893 - end Kiai at 00:47:447
01:34:154 - end Kiai at 01:34:708


~Boss' Easy~
01:17:354 (1,2) - remove clap
01:21:785 (2) - remove clap, add finish on all notes

~GD's Normal~
01:31:016 (4) - don't use red dots

~Hard~
00:22:154 (2) - move to 288:292 yaay~
00:24:924 (4) - add new combo ^
00:32:678 (3) - add clap at the end sure
00:37:478 (4) - add new combo :3

Leorda wrote:

Privet

[Boss' Easy]
00:57:416 (1) - Clap at end slider
00:59:262 (3) - Add clap
01:43:939 (1) - Even this song has a high BPM, this spinner is still short for easier diff. Perhaps replace with slider?


[GD's Normal]
00:59:262 - Add note here?
01:31:016 (4) - This linear slider is doesn't looks like a good linear slider... Maybe, try use a curve slider?


[Hard]
00:23:547 - Unsnapped green timing point ok~

Good luck~

1. Fine~ just don't like this slider :< 00:55:201 (2) -

1. 00:15:324 (1) - Change to finish?
2. 00:47:447 - Add a circle
3. 00:59:262 - ^
4. 01:28:062 (4) - This?? http://puu.sh/v1F3
5. 01:34:708 - Add a circle

1. 00:23:631 - Add a circle
2. 00:32:678 (3) - [Ctrl+R??] I think it's better!!
3. 01:33:970 (2,3,4) - Make them to be a triangle?? http://puu.sh/v2A8
   

   328,144,94339,2,0,B|324:106|289:83,1,70,0|0
   248,24,94708,2,0,B|217:45|214:87,1,70,8|0

4. 01:35:816 (3) - Ugly>_<... Copy 01:35:078 (1) - replace it~~
5. 01:39:508 (1) - [Ctrl+R]

Teddiursa wrote:

Sounds like Chipmunks version.

SuzumiyaBR wrote:

Teddiursa wrote:

Sounds like Chipmunks version.

Yes

HARD way too complicated

12BARRY21 wrote:

Hey~~ Sorry for my delay >_< you modded it! it's perfect excuse

<Hard>

1. 00:23:631 - Add a circle no. ~_~
2. 00:32:678 (3) - [Ctrl+R??] I think it's better!! why not :3
3. 01:33:970 (2,3,4) - Make them to be a triangle?? http://puu.sh/v2A8 mkay~
   

   328,144,94339,2,0,B|324:106|289:83,1,70,0|0
   248,24,94708,2,0,B|217:45|214:87,1,70,8|0

4. 01:35:816 (3) - Ugly>_<... Copy 01:35:078 (1) - replace it~~ no~
5. 01:39:508 (1) - [Ctrl+R]

Just little nazi @w@
GL!!

-Bakari- wrote:

no

and no

It's ok now. If you don't like something try to make better version.

MMzz wrote:

-Sorry for any typos I am baka. :3

Hard:

00:20:862 (4) - reverse this maybe? Makes a fun little jump. i hate jumps. also: any jumps in these map will ruin mapset
00:42:647 (3,4,5,6,7) - This concerns me, a really unexpected stream with the conistancy of the map, and then you skip a beat right after it. Makes it a little bit awkward to feel the next note. Maybe add a beat somewhere in the middle for a nice jump, or unstack that stream so it connects to the next note? fixed
00:44:862 (1,2,3,4) - This sequence is very cluttered and hard to read. If you move 00:45:231 (2) up a little bit so 1 blankets it, it will be a lot easier to read. http://puu.sh/vH4W there's stack pattern ~_~
01:08:124 (1,2,3,4) - another really clustered section, you can move 01:08:862 (3) down some to make a nice triangle shape with 1 and 2/4. actually these moments are part of my Hard diff
01:19:755 (1,2) - add the new combo to 2 instead? The combo will be weird regardless because you ended the slider on the downbeat.sure
01:28:801 (5) - move this so it's under 01:29:170 (1), will make a fun jump. no jumps, sorry

EDIT: I'm not sure if you need to add Ludacris in the artist, because his part of the song isn't played at all? Dunno, just thought I might point that out. 00:31:939 - listen here. it's not bieber there's 2 voices

MMzz wrote:

00:46:893 (4,5) - I don't think new players will be able to pick up on these notes correctly, the vocals seem to start/end at a weird point so new players might get confused.
01:34:524 (4) - ^

grumd wrote:

MMzz wrote:

00:46:893 (4,5) - I don't think new players will be able to pick up on these notes correctly, the vocals seem to start/end at a weird point so new players might get confused.
01:34:524 (4) - ^

I'll give a try to my girlfriend (she's a newbie in this game), if whe becomes confused, then I'll change it

1. 01:21:785 (2) - finish here?
2. 01:43:939 (1) - silence the spinner? :O
   
   Very very nice diff

• Какое странное сокращение :О Не узнала тебя, пока не увидела таги и ответы на моды.

1. 00:13:108 (2) - может вистл? Он забавно звучит тут
2. 00:15:324 (1) - заменить вистл на финиш?
3. 00:16:063 (2) - а сюда вистл уже :3 (если понравится - расставь на следующих моментах так же)
4. 00:34:339 (3,4) - думаю, лучше заменить на один слайдер. Так играется лучше (тем более для новичков)
5. 00:45:601 (2,3,4,5) - не нравится мне ритм тут... Попробуй так, что ли:
   
   SPOILER

   
   Основано на 00:56:678 (1,2,3) -
6. 01:20:124 (6,1,2,3,4,5) - слишком сложно, мне кажется. Попробуй так:
   
   SPOILER

   
   С финишами на каждом бите!
7. 01:23:262 - А мне софт больше нравится
8. 01:34:708 (х) - может тогда сюда уж ноту? с клапом

1. 00:20:862 (4) - пропустил клап
2. 00:22:708 (1) - финиш на конце не очень. Убери его и секции :<
3. 00:24:185 (3) - убери клап с начала слайдера D: а в конце добавь!
4. 00:25:293 (2) - и здесь почему нет клапа
5. 00:34:524 (1) - убери клап с реверса
6. 00:38:216 (3) - в конце клапа опять нет, баака
7. 00:40:247 (3) - раз уж пошли финиши, то и сюда :3
8. 00:42:278 (2) - клап!
9. 00:42:647 (3,4,5,6,7) - не идет тут стрим, вот не идет D:
10. 00:43:385 (1) - кто забывает клапы?
11. 00:49:108 (5) - может сюда поставить финиш, а с 00:49:293 (1) - убрать?
12. 00:52:062 (4) - ^
13. 00:55:016 (4) - ^
14. 00:59:631 (1) - замени финиш на конце клапом
15. 01:34:708 (4) - клап
    
    Опять же, не очень нравится нормал в конце, может все-таки софт? D:

Reiji-RJ wrote:

Его голос стал еще больше похож на женский с этим миксом D: хорошо поет

Hard

OD +1?

1. 00:20:862 (4) - пропустил клап угу
2. 00:22:708 (1) - финиш на конце не очень. Убери его и секции :<так мило затихает. а финиш убрал
3. 00:25:293 (2) - и здесь почему нет клапа D:
4. 00:24:185 (3) - убери клап с начала слайдера D: а в конце добавь! ^
5. 00:34:524 (1) - убери клап с реверса ^
6. 00:38:216 (3) - в конце клапа опять нет, баака :O
7. 00:40:247 (3) - раз уж пошли финиши, то и сюда :3 ^
8. 00:42:278 (2) - клап! ^
9. 00:42:647 (3,4,5,6,7) - не идет тут стрим, вот не идет D: он уже уходит
10. 00:43:385 (1) - кто забывает клапы? я
11. 00:49:108 (5) - может сюда поставить финиш, а с 00:49:293 (1) - убрать? угу
12. 00:52:062 (4) - ^ ^
13. 00:55:016 (4) - ^ ^
    
14. 00:59:631 (1) - замени финиш на конце клапом ^
15. 01:34:708 (4) - клап^
    
    Опять же, не очень нравится нормал в конце, может все-таки софт? D:

ну ок o.o

А говорил ужасная. Отличная мапка! если исключить песню D:
Удачи!

хитсаунды и я

wmfchris wrote:

nothing about the map, but try to mention who made the diff in the intro thread. I don't know who's GD till I read the tags.

[General]
Try to compress your BG image as it's quite large now. hm.. lol i tried to compress it but result is terrible ~_~ also now the size is 666kb! let it be a specially at JB's song

[Hard]
00:16:062 (4,5) - they are not on a straight line; and it's not advised to stack sliders like this (consecutive slider tail over hard completely) fixed :3
00:32:678 (3,6) - stack completely oh! fixed
00:35:447 (2,3,4,1) - placement suggestion: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/324267 the current one looks odd with some overlapping fixed~
00:40:247 (3) - stack this one on the slider - the spacing does not matters D:
00:47:078 (3) - better remove finish here because leaving the echo quiet sounds better imo whistle
00:54:278 (3,1) - stack properly fixed

[Normal]
01:34:524 - the music sounds odd and... this one sounds odd too. Try to put notes at 01:34:339 - and 1 beat later instead of the current one

[Easy]
01:43:939 - the spinner might be a bit short for easy.

In overall not much to deal with, sounds nice and quite ready. (what's the irregular bass drum in the background music?)

1. 00:52:985 (3) - rr.. for more better flow, I think you can curve this a bit. see this picture. beside that, the curve will be blanketing (1)'s head. that's look more nice (:
   

   420,76,52985,2,0,B|404:48|377:33,1,59,0|8

2. 01:15:139 (x) - add a note? in here the vocal is running so fast. the note can help newbie player for read the vocal imo.
3. 01:17:354 - add a timing point in here for lower the volume? in here the music is stopped (except the vocal of course). the slider's slider is really noisy in here. My suggestion is lower the volume into 30% then, add timing point again at 01:20:308 for back into volume like before.
4. 01:17:354 (1,2,1,2) - mm, can you change all clap in the slider's end with whistle? seems weird adding clap in this part since the music is very down in here.
5. 01:40:246 (3) - similar with 00:52:985
6. 01:43:939 (1) - change the volume into 5%~

1. Kiai time: In the last kiai, should end at 01:43:570 like others diff for keep the consistency.
2. 00:13:847 (4) - I guess, the finish sound in the slider's beginning is not really fit with the backsound. can you remove it?
3. 00:31:570 (4) - ^
4. 00:46:893 (4) - add clap in the slider's end for consistent hitsounding when the clap sound is sounded
5. 00:59:262 (4) - ^ just add clap
6. 01:01:108 (3) - same as 00:13:847
7. 01:04:062 (3) - ^
8. 01:07:016 (3) - ^
9. 01:21:047 (2) - keep consistent clapping with (1)? well, add clap in slider's end of course
10. 01:21:785 (3) - clap sound should adding in the slider's reverse, not in the end. then, add clap in (4). the sound is good now.
11. 01:34:154 (4) - add clap in the end. the reason is similar as I mentioned before about this too.
12. 01:43:939 (1) - same as I mentioned in easy diff

1. 00:16:062 (4) - remove whistle in the end. because you are just add some spot as before.
2. 00:17:539 (3,4) - remove whistle in both, the whistle should adding in 00:17:354 (2). you add whistle every after upbeat in after downbeat.
3. 00:42:647 (3) - add finish sound in the slider's beginning? the sound seems similar with 00:39:693 (2)
4. 00:43:385 (1) - ^ yes, the sound similar with 00:40:431 (1)
5. 00:43:385 (1) - add clap in the slider's reverse? the clap sound in background music was sounded in there.
6. 00:44:493 (3) - remove whistle in the slider's end? seems strange to hear imo
7. 00:47:078 (3) - add finish sound in the slider's beginning? I think the sound almost similar with 00:46:339 (1)
8. 01:01:847 (2) - ah.. the clap sound should in the reverse, not in the end. the clap sound was sounded in there if you heard the background music properly
9. 01:04:062 (1) - why finish in the slider's end?? no effecting anything imo..
10. 01:07:754 (5) - same as above
11. 01:34:708 (4) - add clap in the slider's beginning for clap sound in the background music?
12. 01:45:324 (timing point) - change the normal hitsound into soft hitsound (N -> S), for sure the spinner will be silent properly in the end.

1. Delete the osb file if you dont want it ~

1. 00:18:278 (1) - remove this finish seems useless~
2. 00:45:231 (x) - add a note feels off to me >A</
3. 00:55:201 (2) - i think like that is much better at looking ~ o.o
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:05:539 (1) - remove this finish~
5. 01:15:139 (x) - you better to add a note here Baka bossandy ;_;

1. 00:17:908 (4) - one grip left will be better~
2. 00:25:293 (2) - one grip down =3=/
3. 00:26:770 (4) - one grip left to blanket with the 00:27:139 (1) -
4. 00:31:201 (3) - move it one grip down to blanket with 00:31:570 (4) -
5. 00:49:662 (4) - remove whistle and clap from the start then add a finish here :3
6. 00:52:616 (5) - ^
7. 01:09:970 (4) - NC here will be better~
8. 01:22:893 (4) - spacing error plz fix it~

1. 00:45:785 (3) - let this stuck this right 00:44:308 (2) -