Thanks for the BG and mod.Silynn wrote:
Here's a mod.^^
First thing - you might want to consider this for the bg image, it's the cover of the album the song is on.
01:01:188 (1,2,3,4,5) - possible minor issue here. I think this (or something similar) fits the song better. - Nah, I'll be missing some of the drum lines if I used that.
02:24:578 (1,2,3,4,5) - major issue here. Does not sound right at all. break up the sliders like this: http://puu.sh/towj - Okay fine lol.
02:39:578 (6,7,1) - I don't know if it's just me, but I often read this wrong. Consider spacing the notes, or changing to a slider. But it might just be me. - Okay Fixed for better reading.
That's all for now, but I'll keep looking at it and add more stuff as I find it. Super fun map bro...
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rickyboi
Indelecio
This map is upbeat and lively! I love it.
Just some suggestions.
00:44:663 (3) - Make like this? http://puu.sh/tBiI
00:48:985 (1) - Using this slider art for the 2nd time doesn't look good. Mejo boring na yung dating.
01:24:451 (4) - x:332 y:192
01:39:324 (1,2,3,4) - Exchange (1,2,3) with (4) position?
02:10:341 (4) - This slider looks awkward. Hindi maganda yung flow niya.
01:42:375 (3) - Make like this? http://puu.sh/tBhJ
02:44:536 (5,6,7) - How about a turning this into a reverse slider?
02:52:671 (5,6,7) - ^ same.
Good luck with this map! GET IT APPROVED ASAP.
Just some suggestions.
00:44:663 (3) - Make like this? http://puu.sh/tBiI
00:48:985 (1) - Using this slider art for the 2nd time doesn't look good. Mejo boring na yung dating.
01:24:451 (4) - x:332 y:192
01:39:324 (1,2,3,4) - Exchange (1,2,3) with (4) position?
02:10:341 (4) - This slider looks awkward. Hindi maganda yung flow niya.
01:42:375 (3) - Make like this? http://puu.sh/tBhJ
02:44:536 (5,6,7) - How about a turning this into a reverse slider?
02:52:671 (5,6,7) - ^ same.
Good luck with this map! GET IT APPROVED ASAP.
rickyboi
Thank you for the mod!Indelecio wrote:
This map is upbeat and lively! I love it.
Just some suggestions.
00:44:663 (3) - Make like this? http://puu.sh/tBiI - Fixed
00:48:985 (1) - Using this slider art for the 2nd time doesn't look good. Mejo boring na yung dating. - Fixed
01:24:451 (4) - x:332 y:192 - hmm okay.
01:39:324 (1,2,3,4) - Exchange (1,2,3) with (4) position? - Looks good , Fixed
02:10:341 (4) - This slider looks awkward. Hindi maganda yung flow niya. - Fixed
01:42:375 (3) - Make like this? http://puu.sh/tBhJ - Fixed
02:44:536 (5,6,7) - How about a turning this into a reverse slider? - I'll think about it
02:52:671 (5,6,7) - ^ same. - I'll think about this also.
Good luck with this map! GET IT APPROVED ASAP.
Awesome map! Lots of fun to play. Hope you get it approved!
Also did a little irc mod.
Also did a little irc mod.
I like it better now that you've lowered the drain
rickyboi
irc mod :3
paraoka song's love :3
good 236BPM beatmap!
great map, nya :3
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20:30 <rickyboi> : Hi Nyar!
20:30 <rickyboi> : can you mod my map?
20:30 <rickyboi> : if you're not too busy
20:30 <nyar> : hi :3
20:30 <rickyboi> : this map
20:30 *rickyboi is listening to (paraoka - boot)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/50131]
20:31 <nyar> : okay.
20:31 <rickyboi> : thank you
20:36 <nyar> : Seemed to be no particular problem.
20:37 <rickyboi> : hmm really?
20:37 <nyar> : If I,
20:38 <nyar> : 00:14:154 (1) - add nc
20:38 <nyar> : 00:14:408 (5) - remove nc
20:38 <rickyboi> : hmm
20:38 <nyar> : Attaching the NC is no longer in doubt but the
20:39 <rickyboi> : okay
20:40 <rickyboi> : done
20:40 <rickyboi> :
20:40 <nyar> : What I would not do the correct Tsukekata NC ...
20:41 <nyar> : What more do I will not put the correct NC
20:41 <nyar> : I really do not recently
20:41 <rickyboi> : ahh
20:41 <rickyboi> : okay
20:43 <nyar> : 00:48:985 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - imo
20:43 <nyar> : 00:49:747 (5) - add nc00:50:002 (5) - remove
20:43 <nyar> : 00:50:510 (1) - add nc
20:43 <nyar> : 00:51:019 (6) - re,pve
20:43 <nyar> : remove
20:43 <nyar> : 00:51:273 (1) - add
20:44 <rickyboi> : ohh
20:44 <rickyboi> : that looks good.
20:45 <nyar> : thanks :3
20:46 <rickyboi> :
20:46 <nyar> : 01:01:188 (9) - remove nc, next
20:46 <nyar> : next circle add nc?
20:47 <rickyboi> : okay
20:47 <nyar> : 01:15:171 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - is orenge
20:48 <rickyboi> : yes it's orange.
20:48 <nyar> : 01:17:332 (1,2,3) - I want to green and hard, but I think
20:49 <rickyboi> : hmm
20:49 <nyar> : 01:19:112 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - orange? the trouble
20:50 <rickyboi> : ah.. what do I do?
20:51 <nyar> : 01:19:112 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this?
20:51 <rickyboi> : should I change pattern?
20:52 <nyar> : I 01:19:112 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - It would be better to use a unified orenge
20:52 <rickyboi> : ah I see
20:52 <rickyboi> : okay I get it now
20:53 <rickyboi> : done
20:54 <nyar> : 02:02:967 (1,2,3,4,5) - green?
20:54 <nyar> : 02:03:730 (1,2,3,4,5) - blue?
20:54 <rickyboi> : wait
20:54 <nyar> : okay
20:55 <rickyboi> : 01:21:019 (7) - this combo should be orange right?
20:55 <rickyboi> : if I don't remove NC, it looks pretty bad with only white.
20:56 <nyar> : 01:20:510 (1,2,3,4) - I think white is good as it is
20:56 <rickyboi> : okay
20:57 <rickyboi> : I'll give it white.
20:57 <nyar> : Let's talk once to reset the
20:58 <rickyboi> : ok wait
20:58 <nyar> : again to re-propose to update the beatmap
20:58 <rickyboi> : ok
20:59 <nyar> : 01:17:332 (6) - add nc
20:59 <nyar> : 01:17:459 (3) - remove
21:00 <nyar> : 01:19:112 (1) - add nc
21:00 <nyar> : 01:19:493 (3) - remove
21:00 <rickyboi> : ok
21:00 <nyar> : I end up confusing and say it in color
21:00 <nyar> : I'm sorry
21:00 <rickyboi> : lol
21:00 <rickyboi> : it's oke
21:00 <rickyboi> : okay*
21:01 <rickyboi> : 01:19:112 (3) - I think should not have NC
21:01 <rickyboi> : 01:19:493 (1) - I still prefer NC here.
21:01 <rickyboi> : ><
21:01 <nyar> : ok~
21:02 <nyar> : 01:26:739 (1) - remove nc?
21:02 <rickyboi> : okay
21:03 <rickyboi> : oh I have to eat dinner
21:03 <rickyboi> : I'll be right back in 20 mins.
21:03 <nyar> : ok :3
21:15 <rickyboi> : I'm back
21:16 <nyar> : 20 min!? Welcome back
21:16 <rickyboi> : haha I'm didn't eat much ><
21:17 <nyar> : :3
21:17 <rickyboi> : okay
21:18 <nyar> : 02:14:408 (9) - remove nc
21:18 <nyar> : next add nc
21:18 <rickyboi> : ok
21:18 <rickyboi> : I was just about to do that lol
21:19 <nyar> : 02:28:391 (1) - add nc
21:19 <nyar> : 02:28:646 (1) - remove
21:20 <rickyboi> : ok
21:20 <rickyboi> : I'll add new combo here. 02:29:536 (1) -
21:21 <nyar> : This may be my
21:23 <nyar> : 02:40:595 (6) - add nc
21:23 <nyar> : 02:40:849 (5) - remove
21:23 <rickyboi> : ok
21:23 <nyar> : 02:44:790 (1) - add nc
21:24 <nyar> : 02:44:917 (3) - remove
21:25 <nyar> : 02:59:663 (1) - add nc 03:00:298 (2) - remove nc?
21:25 <nyar> : 03:00:298 (2) -
21:26 <nyar> : 03:07:036 (1) - add nc
21:26 <nyar> : 03:07:290 (3) - remove
21:26 <nyar> : 03:09:070 (1) - add nc
21:27 <nyar> : 03:09:324 (3) - remove
21:27 <nyar> : 03:11:104 (1) - add nc
21:27 <nyar> : 03:11:358 (3) - remove
21:27 <nyar> : 03:13:138 (1) - add nc
21:27 <nyar> : 03:13:392 (3) - remove
21:27 <nyar> : 03:15:171 (1) - remove nc
21:27 <nyar> : sorry add nc
21:28 <nyar> : 03:15:426 (3) - remove
21:28 <rickyboi> : ok done
21:28 <nyar> : 03:17:205 (1) - add nc
21:28 <nyar> : 03:17:459 (3) - remove
21:28 <rickyboi> : done
21:28 <rickyboi> : thank you very much!
21:29 <nyar> : no ploblem ><!
21:29 <rickyboi> : post in the thread!
21:29 <rickyboi> : I'll give kudosu
21:30 <nyar> : thanks X3
21:31 <nyar> : Very difficult and rhythm and pattern is interesting
21:31 <rickyboi> : thank you!
21:31 <nyar> : I do not think this problem remains
21:31 <rickyboi> : okay
20:30 <rickyboi> : can you mod my map?
20:30 <rickyboi> : if you're not too busy
20:30 <nyar> : hi :3
20:30 <rickyboi> : this map
20:30 *rickyboi is listening to (paraoka - boot)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/50131]
20:31 <nyar> : okay.
20:31 <rickyboi> : thank you
20:36 <nyar> : Seemed to be no particular problem.
20:37 <rickyboi> : hmm really?
20:37 <nyar> : If I,
20:38 <nyar> : 00:14:154 (1) - add nc
20:38 <nyar> : 00:14:408 (5) - remove nc
20:38 <rickyboi> : hmm
20:38 <nyar> : Attaching the NC is no longer in doubt but the
20:39 <rickyboi> : okay
20:40 <rickyboi> : done
20:40 <rickyboi> :
20:40 <nyar> : What I would not do the correct Tsukekata NC ...
20:41 <nyar> : What more do I will not put the correct NC
20:41 <nyar> : I really do not recently
20:41 <rickyboi> : ahh
20:41 <rickyboi> : okay
20:43 <nyar> : 00:48:985 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - imo
20:43 <nyar> : 00:49:747 (5) - add nc00:50:002 (5) - remove
20:43 <nyar> : 00:50:510 (1) - add nc
20:43 <nyar> : 00:51:019 (6) - re,pve
20:43 <nyar> : remove
20:43 <nyar> : 00:51:273 (1) - add
20:44 <rickyboi> : ohh
20:44 <rickyboi> : that looks good.
20:45 <nyar> : thanks :3
20:46 <rickyboi> :
20:46 <nyar> : 01:01:188 (9) - remove nc, next
20:46 <nyar> : next circle add nc?
20:47 <rickyboi> : okay
20:47 <nyar> : 01:15:171 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - is orenge
20:48 <rickyboi> : yes it's orange.
20:48 <nyar> : 01:17:332 (1,2,3) - I want to green and hard, but I think
20:49 <rickyboi> : hmm
20:49 <nyar> : 01:19:112 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - orange? the trouble
20:50 <rickyboi> : ah.. what do I do?
20:51 <nyar> : 01:19:112 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this?
20:51 <rickyboi> : should I change pattern?
20:52 <nyar> : I 01:19:112 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - It would be better to use a unified orenge
20:52 <rickyboi> : ah I see
20:52 <rickyboi> : okay I get it now
20:53 <rickyboi> : done
20:54 <nyar> : 02:02:967 (1,2,3,4,5) - green?
20:54 <nyar> : 02:03:730 (1,2,3,4,5) - blue?
20:54 <rickyboi> : wait
20:54 <nyar> : okay
20:55 <rickyboi> : 01:21:019 (7) - this combo should be orange right?
20:55 <rickyboi> : if I don't remove NC, it looks pretty bad with only white.
20:56 <nyar> : 01:20:510 (1,2,3,4) - I think white is good as it is
20:56 <rickyboi> : okay
20:57 <rickyboi> : I'll give it white.
20:57 <nyar> : Let's talk once to reset the
20:58 <rickyboi> : ok wait
20:58 <nyar> : again to re-propose to update the beatmap
20:58 <rickyboi> : ok
20:59 <nyar> : 01:17:332 (6) - add nc
20:59 <nyar> : 01:17:459 (3) - remove
21:00 <nyar> : 01:19:112 (1) - add nc
21:00 <nyar> : 01:19:493 (3) - remove
21:00 <rickyboi> : ok
21:00 <nyar> : I end up confusing and say it in color
21:00 <nyar> : I'm sorry
21:00 <rickyboi> : lol
21:00 <rickyboi> : it's oke
21:00 <rickyboi> : okay*
21:01 <rickyboi> : 01:19:112 (3) - I think should not have NC
21:01 <rickyboi> : 01:19:493 (1) - I still prefer NC here.
21:01 <rickyboi> : ><
21:01 <nyar> : ok~
21:02 <nyar> : 01:26:739 (1) - remove nc?
21:02 <rickyboi> : okay
21:03 <rickyboi> : oh I have to eat dinner
21:03 <rickyboi> : I'll be right back in 20 mins.
21:03 <nyar> : ok :3
21:15 <rickyboi> : I'm back
21:16 <nyar> : 20 min!? Welcome back
21:16 <rickyboi> : haha I'm didn't eat much ><
21:17 <nyar> : :3
21:17 <rickyboi> : okay
21:18 <nyar> : 02:14:408 (9) - remove nc
21:18 <nyar> : next add nc
21:18 <rickyboi> : ok
21:18 <rickyboi> : I was just about to do that lol
21:19 <nyar> : 02:28:391 (1) - add nc
21:19 <nyar> : 02:28:646 (1) - remove
21:20 <rickyboi> : ok
21:20 <rickyboi> : I'll add new combo here. 02:29:536 (1) -
21:21 <nyar> : This may be my
21:23 <nyar> : 02:40:595 (6) - add nc
21:23 <nyar> : 02:40:849 (5) - remove
21:23 <rickyboi> : ok
21:23 <nyar> : 02:44:790 (1) - add nc
21:24 <nyar> : 02:44:917 (3) - remove
21:25 <nyar> : 02:59:663 (1) - add nc 03:00:298 (2) - remove nc?
21:25 <nyar> : 03:00:298 (2) -
21:26 <nyar> : 03:07:036 (1) - add nc
21:26 <nyar> : 03:07:290 (3) - remove
21:26 <nyar> : 03:09:070 (1) - add nc
21:27 <nyar> : 03:09:324 (3) - remove
21:27 <nyar> : 03:11:104 (1) - add nc
21:27 <nyar> : 03:11:358 (3) - remove
21:27 <nyar> : 03:13:138 (1) - add nc
21:27 <nyar> : 03:13:392 (3) - remove
21:27 <nyar> : 03:15:171 (1) - remove nc
21:27 <nyar> : sorry add nc
21:28 <nyar> : 03:15:426 (3) - remove
21:28 <rickyboi> : ok done
21:28 <nyar> : 03:17:205 (1) - add nc
21:28 <nyar> : 03:17:459 (3) - remove
21:28 <rickyboi> : done
21:28 <rickyboi> : thank you very much!
21:29 <nyar> : no ploblem ><!
21:29 <rickyboi> : post in the thread!
21:29 <rickyboi> : I'll give kudosu
21:30 <nyar> : thanks X3
21:31 <nyar> : Very difficult and rhythm and pattern is interesting
21:31 <rickyboi> : thank you!
21:31 <nyar> : I do not think this problem remains
21:31 <rickyboi> : okay
paraoka song's love :3
good 236BPM beatmap!
great map, nya :3
Really fun map to play, I think it's pretty good. Did some IRC mod too.
I want this approved!
I want this approved!
okay hai
irc modded
NO KUDOSU
irc modded
NO KUDOSU
/savelog
21:02 <rickyboi> : ok
21:06 <grumd> : 00:57:120 (4) - not perfectly stacked
21:07 <rickyboi> : hm ok
21:08 <grumd> : suggestion: 01:07:163 (7,1) - i'd move it to the right.. like this: http://puu.sh/tZ1h to make a better flow
21:09 <rickyboi> : okay
21:09 <grumd> : suggestion: 01:10:086 (5) - move it to the left? http://puu.sh/tZ1S also due to flow
21:09 <rickyboi> : got it.
21:10 <grumd> : suggestion: 01:21:527 (1) - maybe make it curved? http://puu.sh/tZ2C
21:10 <rickyboi> : done
21:11 <grumd> : sugg: 01:44:790 (4) - i think it's too close to the slider. smth like that would be nice: http://puu.sh/tZ3c
21:11 <rickyboi> : okay
21:12 <grumd> : 01:51:019 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - make distance between them equal? like: http://puu.sh/tZ4o
21:13 <rickyboi> : ah
21:13 <rickyboi> : ok
21:15 <grumd> : sugg: 02:11:358 (3,4) - make them symmetrical too, like (1,2)? (by copypasting (4) and ctrl+h+j)
21:15 <grumd> : http://puu.sh/tZ5i
21:15 <rickyboi> : ok
21:15 <grumd> : 02:18:985 (3) - are you sure about it's shape? i've not seen any similar sliders throught all the diff. this kinda
21:15 <grumd> : ruins the style
21:16 <rickyboi> : hm
21:16 <rickyboi> : oh
21:16 <rickyboi> : yea
21:16 <rickyboi> : I'll just turn that to a curve.
21:16 <grumd> : :>
21:16 <rickyboi> :
21:17 <grumd> : 02:32:714 (1,2) - these too.. and some others.. but feel free to ignore, it's too nazi
21:17 <rickyboi> : ah I'll keep those
21:17 <rickyboi> : lol
21:17 <rickyboi> : unless I find them really annoying.
21:17 <rickyboi> : I might change it
21:17 <grumd> : 02:32:714 (1,2) - Ctrl+R them? plays a bit funnier :>
21:18 <grumd> : oh
21:18 <grumd> : wait
21:18 <grumd> : wrong time
21:18 <rickyboi> : LOL
21:18 <grumd> : 02:38:053 (2,3) - these
21:18 <rickyboi> : okay.
21:19 <grumd> : 02:38:053 (2,3) - :v
21:19 <grumd> : shape is meh
21:19 <grumd> : FUCK
21:19 <rickyboi> : ahahaha
21:19 <rickyboi> : wrong time
21:19 <grumd> : .__.
21:19 <grumd> : my ctrl+c doesnt work
21:19 <rickyboi> : hmm?
21:19 <grumd> : 02:45:425 (6) - THIS
21:19 <rickyboi> : ok
21:19 <rickyboi> : ah right
21:19 <rickyboi> : this one
21:20 <rickyboi> : I always forgot to change this
21:20 <grumd> : 02:51:019 (1,2) - they're not copypasted? better copy one of them and replace another by a copy
21:20 <grumd> : i can see they're a bit not parallel
21:21 <rickyboi> : ok
21:21 <grumd> : 03:00:807- add a circle here?
21:21 <grumd> : ^ feel free to ignore
21:21 <grumd> : it's not that needed
21:21 <rickyboi> : ignoring
21:22 <rickyboi> : ><
21:22 <grumd> : ok, no problem
21:22 <rickyboi> : k
21:22 <grumd> : such a longslider (i meant spinner) :v
21:22 <rickyboi> : I think we're almost done
21:22 <rickyboi> : lol
21:22 <rickyboi> : The SV was boosted by 20% on that part
21:22 <grumd> : yup
21:23 <rickyboi> : so yeah it became long xD
21:23 <grumd> : it's okay, i think
21:23 <grumd> : that SV change
21:23 <grumd> : kinda unreasonably
21:23 <grumd> : but okay
21:24 <rickyboi> : ok
21:24 <grumd> : nice map you have there ;D
21:24 <rickyboi> : Thank you
21:24 <rickyboi> : are we done?
21:24 <grumd> : very fun and nicely shaped
21:24 <rickyboi> : thanks! xD
21:24 <grumd> : i think yes
21:24 <grumd> : done :v
21:25 <rickyboi> : ok !
21:25 <rickyboi> : I'll give you kudosu
21:25 <grumd> : no
21:25 <grumd> : NO
21:25 <grumd> : NO KUDOSU
21:06 <grumd> : 00:57:120 (4) - not perfectly stacked
21:07 <rickyboi> : hm ok
21:08 <grumd> : suggestion: 01:07:163 (7,1) - i'd move it to the right.. like this: http://puu.sh/tZ1h to make a better flow
21:09 <rickyboi> : okay
21:09 <grumd> : suggestion: 01:10:086 (5) - move it to the left? http://puu.sh/tZ1S also due to flow
21:09 <rickyboi> : got it.
21:10 <grumd> : suggestion: 01:21:527 (1) - maybe make it curved? http://puu.sh/tZ2C
21:10 <rickyboi> : done
21:11 <grumd> : sugg: 01:44:790 (4) - i think it's too close to the slider. smth like that would be nice: http://puu.sh/tZ3c
21:11 <rickyboi> : okay
21:12 <grumd> : 01:51:019 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - make distance between them equal? like: http://puu.sh/tZ4o
21:13 <rickyboi> : ah
21:13 <rickyboi> : ok
21:15 <grumd> : sugg: 02:11:358 (3,4) - make them symmetrical too, like (1,2)? (by copypasting (4) and ctrl+h+j)
21:15 <grumd> : http://puu.sh/tZ5i
21:15 <rickyboi> : ok
21:15 <grumd> : 02:18:985 (3) - are you sure about it's shape? i've not seen any similar sliders throught all the diff. this kinda
21:15 <grumd> : ruins the style
21:16 <rickyboi> : hm
21:16 <rickyboi> : oh
21:16 <rickyboi> : yea
21:16 <rickyboi> : I'll just turn that to a curve.
21:16 <grumd> : :>
21:16 <rickyboi> :
21:17 <grumd> : 02:32:714 (1,2) - these too.. and some others.. but feel free to ignore, it's too nazi
21:17 <rickyboi> : ah I'll keep those
21:17 <rickyboi> : lol
21:17 <rickyboi> : unless I find them really annoying.
21:17 <rickyboi> : I might change it
21:17 <grumd> : 02:32:714 (1,2) - Ctrl+R them? plays a bit funnier :>
21:18 <grumd> : oh
21:18 <grumd> : wait
21:18 <grumd> : wrong time
21:18 <rickyboi> : LOL
21:18 <grumd> : 02:38:053 (2,3) - these
21:18 <rickyboi> : okay.
21:19 <grumd> : 02:38:053 (2,3) - :v
21:19 <grumd> : shape is meh
21:19 <grumd> : FUCK
21:19 <rickyboi> : ahahaha
21:19 <rickyboi> : wrong time
21:19 <grumd> : .__.
21:19 <grumd> : my ctrl+c doesnt work
21:19 <rickyboi> : hmm?
21:19 <grumd> : 02:45:425 (6) - THIS
21:19 <rickyboi> : ok
21:19 <rickyboi> : ah right
21:19 <rickyboi> : this one
21:20 <rickyboi> : I always forgot to change this
21:20 <grumd> : 02:51:019 (1,2) - they're not copypasted? better copy one of them and replace another by a copy
21:20 <grumd> : i can see they're a bit not parallel
21:21 <rickyboi> : ok
21:21 <grumd> : 03:00:807- add a circle here?
21:21 <grumd> : ^ feel free to ignore
21:21 <grumd> : it's not that needed
21:21 <rickyboi> : ignoring
21:22 <rickyboi> : ><
21:22 <grumd> : ok, no problem
21:22 <rickyboi> : k
21:22 <grumd> : such a long
21:22 <rickyboi> : I think we're almost done
21:22 <rickyboi> : lol
21:22 <rickyboi> : The SV was boosted by 20% on that part
21:22 <grumd> : yup
21:23 <rickyboi> : so yeah it became long xD
21:23 <grumd> : it's okay, i think
21:23 <grumd> : that SV change
21:23 <grumd> : kinda unreasonably
21:23 <grumd> : but okay
21:24 <rickyboi> : ok
21:24 <grumd> : nice map you have there ;D
21:24 <rickyboi> : Thank you
21:24 <rickyboi> : are we done?
21:24 <grumd> : very fun and nicely shaped
21:24 <rickyboi> : thanks! xD
21:24 <grumd> : i think yes
21:24 <grumd> : done :v
21:25 <rickyboi> : ok !
21:25 <rickyboi> : I'll give you kudosu
21:25 <grumd> : no
21:25 <grumd> : NO
21:25 <grumd> : NO KUDOSU
rickyboi
Hanyuu-chan
rickyboi
Hello, from my queue
[General]
- Offset: 13386 sounds better to me~
[Shoe]
- 00:15:298 (9,1) - Swap new combo
- 00:17:332 (6,1) - ^
- 00:19:366 (5,1) - ^
- 00:23:434 (5,1) - ^
- 00:25:468 (5,1) - ^
...You should be able to see what I'm trying to point out now. If not, PM me ingame and ill point them all out. - Overall I like this map and there isn't really anything for me to point out. No kds please if you ignore offset~
rickyboi
Thank you for the mod Makar8000!Makar8000 wrote:
Hello, from my queueOkay, this one fits better. Fixed.[General]
- Offset: 13386 sounds better to me~
[Shoe]
Fixed everything.
- Overall I like this map and there isn't really anything for me to point out. No kds please if you ignore offset~
Alright let's see what I can find. Found this on #modreqs.
Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. Just putting this for fun
[General]
CLEAR!
[Shoe]
maybe a bit too hard on the OD. decrease it by 1 to make it a bit easier for players.
00:16:055 (4) - *nazi* try to make this slider like this so that it'd blanket the end of (1). if you ignore this, then
00:23:936 (3) - maybe stack this on (2) at the previous combo? i think it looks a lot nicer during gameplay.
00:29:530 (6) - *nazi* stack this on (3). same reason as above.
00:42:369 (7) - remove the red point. it makes the wave slider look ugly during gameplay and it lacks in flow.
01:20:504 (1) - personally i don't like the curve of this slider. it doesn't flow that smooth to the song. i suggest that you make it nicer to the point that it flows smoother during gameplay.
01:21:013 (3) - ^
01:36:013 (3) - same as 00:42:369.
01:44:402 (3) - ^
03:00:292 (2,3,4,5) - do this instead. the overlaps look bad during gameplay.
i guess that's it. Star and GL
Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. Just putting this for fun
[General]
CLEAR!
[Shoe]
maybe a bit too hard on the OD. decrease it by 1 to make it a bit easier for players.
00:16:055 (4) - *nazi* try to make this slider like this so that it'd blanket the end of (1). if you ignore this, then
00:23:936 (3) - maybe stack this on (2) at the previous combo? i think it looks a lot nicer during gameplay.
00:29:530 (6) - *nazi* stack this on (3). same reason as above.
00:42:369 (7) - remove the red point. it makes the wave slider look ugly during gameplay and it lacks in flow.
01:20:504 (1) - personally i don't like the curve of this slider. it doesn't flow that smooth to the song. i suggest that you make it nicer to the point that it flows smoother during gameplay.
01:21:013 (3) - ^
01:36:013 (3) - same as 00:42:369.
01:44:402 (3) - ^
03:00:292 (2,3,4,5) - do this instead. the overlaps look bad during gameplay.
i guess that's it. Star and GL
rickyboi
Byakugan249 wrote:
Alright let's see what I can find. Found this on #modreqs.
Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. Just putting this for fun
[General]
CLEAR!
[Shoe]
maybe a bit too hard on the OD. decrease it by 1 to make it a bit easier for players. - Nah, This one's going for approved, I'd rather keep the OD like this.
00:16:055 (4) - *nazi* try to make this slider like this so that it'd blanket the end of (1). if you ignore this, then - X
00:23:936 (3) - maybe stack this on (2) at the previous combo? i think it looks a lot nicer during gameplay. - X
00:29:530 (6) - *nazi* stack this on (3). same reason as above. - Okay, looks good. Fixed
00:42:369 (7) - remove the red point. it makes the wave slider look ugly during gameplay and it lacks in flow. - Fixed
01:20:504 (1) - personally i don't like the curve of this slider. it doesn't flow that smooth to the song. i suggest that you make it nicer to the point that it flows smoother during gameplay. - I'll think of something better, for now pending.
01:36:013 (3) - same as 00:42:369. - Fixed.
01:44:402 (3) - ^ Fixed
03:00:292 (2,3,4,5) - do this instead. the overlaps look bad during gameplay. I'll ignore this but I'll make mine better.
i guess that's it. Star and GL
Thanks for modding and the star Byakugan249!
into_old
00:13:385 (1) Move this to x: 92 y: 104
00:13:640 (2,3) Reverse selction and place these two notes. on these coordinates: (2) x:256 y:84 (3) x:432 y:112
00:16:373 (5) Delete this note.
Starting at 02:06:267 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) Could you make these a repeating sliders maybe 3-4? like the ending of this stream? Just seems slightly complicated to stream that fast for anyone.
Sorry, I'm still newbie modder, I hope this helped though.
00:13:640 (2,3) Reverse selction and place these two notes. on these coordinates: (2) x:256 y:84 (3) x:432 y:112
00:16:373 (5) Delete this note.
Starting at 02:06:267 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) Could you make these a repeating sliders maybe 3-4? like the ending of this stream? Just seems slightly complicated to stream that fast for anyone.
Sorry, I'm still newbie modder, I hope this helped though.
rickyboi
[Shoe]
OMG crazy!!!
It sounds like you didn't use any whistle and clap at this map orz
00:20:758 (2) - Ctrl+R
00:27:496 (1) - ^
00:41:352 (3) - Can make it smoother
00:41:860 (5) - ^
01:06:902 (5) - NC
01:19:487 (1) - Can make it better
01:20:504 (1) - ^
01:21:013 (3) - ^
01:49:234 (2) - Ctrl+R
02:30:165 (4,5) - ^
02:34:996 (2,3) - Quite ugly...
02:48:979 ~ 03:04:233 - There should also be kiai time as this is the speed up part
Good luck~
OMG crazy!!!
It sounds like you didn't use any whistle and clap at this map orz
00:20:758 (2) - Ctrl+R
00:27:496 (1) - ^
00:41:352 (3) - Can make it smoother
00:41:860 (5) - ^
01:06:902 (5) - NC
01:19:487 (1) - Can make it better
01:20:504 (1) - ^
01:21:013 (3) - ^
01:49:234 (2) - Ctrl+R
02:30:165 (4,5) - ^
02:34:996 (2,3) - Quite ugly...
02:48:979 ~ 03:04:233 - There should also be kiai time as this is the speed up part
Good luck~
rickyboi
Thank you very much for the mod Regou!Regou wrote:
[Shoe]
OMG crazy!!!
It sounds like you didn't use any whistle and clap at this map orz - I used whistles everytime before the chorus. About the claps, I'm still looking for a good custom normal-hitclap.
00:20:758 (2) - Ctrl+R - Ok
00:27:496 (1) - ^ - X
00:41:352 (3) - Can make it smoother - Fixed
00:41:860 (5) - ^ - Fixed
01:06:902 (5) - NC - X
01:19:487 (1) - Can make it better - Fixed
01:20:504 (1) - ^ - Just like what I said in Byakugan249's mod, still pending.
01:21:013 (3) - ^
01:49:234 (2) - Ctrl+R - Ok
02:30:165 (4,5) - ^ - X
02:34:996 (2,3) - Quite ugly... - Fixed
02:48:979 ~ 03:04:233 - There should also be kiai time as this is the speed up part - Ok
Good luck~
Hi~ Banana here from my queue~
general
wow~ a jump style map
i see you use jumps, and it seems every spacing in your map is over 1.0*, ok but if you placing a jump (1.5* e.g.) after a normal spacing like 1.0*, the feeling is weaker than it after a 0.8* spacing. this is just my thinking, feel free to ignore XD
Shoe
00:15:038 (8) - i don't know why you use jump before this slider, (7)and this slider's head have the same sound, and i think if you move this slider to the up-left part of the play field, then you can change the jump to be after this slider, which flows better imo
00:17:708 (2) - jump before this note may be strange to a player not knowing the change starts here, this circle will be placed at left to (1)'s tail with 0.8*
00:22:030 (5,6) - make a jump with a spacing of (3,4)?
00:23:301 (4) - stack with (3)
00:24:063 - pattern suggestion
00:25:970 (3) - small overlap, jump futher?
00:38:809 (1) - this slider is too close to (3) and looks not very good
00:55:970 (3,4,5) - where i said you can use small spacing
01:02:199 (1,2,3,4,5) - suggestion, and no matter what pattern you use here, make 02:15:419 (1,2,3,4,5) the same
01:05:250 (1,2) - i think this two sliders would plays well if they are of the same direction
01:07:157 (7) - stack? the sound you follew is over, and the jump may stop as well, if you must use jump, try it before (2)
01:07:665 (2) - jump before this circle is further to me compared with it after, balance them
01:59:275 (2) - follow the drum and here have a three circle stream
02:02:072 (4) - stack with (2) to balance the jumps?
02:30:165 (4,6) - you stack this two notes of different pitch, and i suggest you to make (4,5,6) to be a triangle
02:30:928 (2) - move it right and down a little for better pattern
02:42:369 (5,6,1,2) - it will be decent if you make these sliders center with 02:41:987 (2)
02:45:292 (5) - stack with (6)?
02:56:352 (1,2,3) - small spacing?
general
wow~ a jump style map
i see you use jumps, and it seems every spacing in your map is over 1.0*, ok but if you placing a jump (1.5* e.g.) after a normal spacing like 1.0*, the feeling is weaker than it after a 0.8* spacing. this is just my thinking, feel free to ignore XD
Shoe
00:15:038 (8) - i don't know why you use jump before this slider, (7)and this slider's head have the same sound, and i think if you move this slider to the up-left part of the play field, then you can change the jump to be after this slider, which flows better imo
00:17:708 (2) - jump before this note may be strange to a player not knowing the change starts here, this circle will be placed at left to (1)'s tail with 0.8*
00:22:030 (5,6) - make a jump with a spacing of (3,4)?
00:23:301 (4) - stack with (3)
00:24:063 - pattern suggestion
00:25:970 (3) - small overlap, jump futher?
00:38:809 (1) - this slider is too close to (3) and looks not very good
00:55:970 (3,4,5) - where i said you can use small spacing
01:02:199 (1,2,3,4,5) - suggestion, and no matter what pattern you use here, make 02:15:419 (1,2,3,4,5) the same
01:05:250 (1,2) - i think this two sliders would plays well if they are of the same direction
01:07:157 (7) - stack? the sound you follew is over, and the jump may stop as well, if you must use jump, try it before (2)
01:07:665 (2) - jump before this circle is further to me compared with it after, balance them
01:59:275 (2) - follow the drum and here have a three circle stream
02:02:072 (4) - stack with (2) to balance the jumps?
02:30:165 (4,6) - you stack this two notes of different pitch, and i suggest you to make (4,5,6) to be a triangle
02:30:928 (2) - move it right and down a little for better pattern
02:42:369 (5,6,1,2) - it will be decent if you make these sliders center with 02:41:987 (2)
02:45:292 (5) - stack with (6)?
02:56:352 (1,2,3) - small spacing?
rickyboi
hi rickyboi ~
from our queue.
i can't mod so hard maps, but i try ._.
[General]
delete .osb file o.o
[Shoe]
00:15:038 (8) - 132, 284?
00:21:775 (4) - 2nd slider point on 248, 4?
00:24:318 (5) - stack start with 00:22:411 (7).
00:27:496 (1) - 232, 132?
00:34:741 (1) - i suggest 2nd point on 180, 96. 3rd 232, 84. and 00:35:123 (2) - 236, 188.
00:57:877 (2) - stack with 00:56:479 (5).
01:03:216 (1) - 2nd - 244, 148. 3rd - 296, 208. 4th - 372, 204
01:08:174 (1) - correct form
01:37:030 (6) - 2nd - 104, 192. 3rd - 160, 212
01:40:589 (4) - 180, 56
01:43:258 (2,3) - 408, 200
01:45:419 (3) - 1st - 264, 128. 2nd - 184, 144. 3rd - 188, 224. and 01:44:784 (4,4) - on 272, 212
01:45:928 (1) - 3rd - 100, 56.
01:46:309 (2) - 188, 156
01:48:344 (2) - 240, 192
01:54:572 (3) - 2nd - 400, 256. 3rd - 448, 280. 6th - 460, 364. and 01:54:953 (4) - 484, 188
02:27:496 (1) - 2nd - 96, 296. 3rd - 152, 352. 4th - 216, 368. 5th - 272, 316.
02:29:530 (1) - 2nd - 64, 304. 3rd - 84, 244. and 02:29:911 (2) - 164, 320.
02:38:301 (4) - 2nd - 196, 344. 3rd - 128, 320
02:43:767 (1) - 2nd - 392, 304. and 02:44:275 (3) - 388, 192
that's all. i'm so nazi ;_;
good luck ~
from our queue.
i can't mod so hard maps, but i try ._.
[General]
delete .osb file o.o
[Shoe]
00:15:038 (8) - 132, 284?
00:21:775 (4) - 2nd slider point on 248, 4?
00:24:318 (5) - stack start with 00:22:411 (7).
00:27:496 (1) - 232, 132?
00:34:741 (1) - i suggest 2nd point on 180, 96. 3rd 232, 84. and 00:35:123 (2) - 236, 188.
00:57:877 (2) - stack with 00:56:479 (5).
01:03:216 (1) - 2nd - 244, 148. 3rd - 296, 208. 4th - 372, 204
01:08:174 (1) - correct form
01:37:030 (6) - 2nd - 104, 192. 3rd - 160, 212
01:40:589 (4) - 180, 56
01:43:258 (2,3) - 408, 200
01:45:419 (3) - 1st - 264, 128. 2nd - 184, 144. 3rd - 188, 224. and 01:44:784 (4,4) - on 272, 212
01:45:928 (1) - 3rd - 100, 56.
01:46:309 (2) - 188, 156
01:48:344 (2) - 240, 192
01:54:572 (3) - 2nd - 400, 256. 3rd - 448, 280. 6th - 460, 364. and 01:54:953 (4) - 484, 188
02:27:496 (1) - 2nd - 96, 296. 3rd - 152, 352. 4th - 216, 368. 5th - 272, 316.
02:29:530 (1) - 2nd - 64, 304. 3rd - 84, 244. and 02:29:911 (2) - 164, 320.
02:38:301 (4) - 2nd - 196, 344. 3rd - 128, 320
02:43:767 (1) - 2nd - 392, 304. and 02:44:275 (3) - 388, 192
that's all. i'm so nazi ;_;
good luck ~
rickyboi
Haha thank you very much Ryuu! Actually nazi mods are fine to me as long as they make the map more beautiful and smooth.[Ryuu] wrote:
hi rickyboi ~
from our queue.
i can't mod so hard maps, but i try ._.
[General]
delete .osb file o.o - Nah, it's fine. It's just gonna reappear again even if I deleted it.
[Shoe]
00:15:038 (8) - 132, 284? - X
00:21:775 (4) - 2nd slider point on 248, 4? - Fixed
00:24:318 (5) - stack start with 00:22:411 (7). - Fixed
00:27:496 (1) - 232, 132? - X
00:34:741 (1) - i suggest 2nd point on 180, 96. 3rd 232, 84. and 00:35:123 (2) - 236, 188. - X
00:57:877 (2) - stack with 00:56:479 (5). - Fixed
01:03:216 (1) - 2nd - 244, 148. 3rd - 296, 208. 4th - 372, 204 - Fixed
01:08:174 (1) - correct form - looks fine.
01:37:030 (6) - 2nd - 104, 192. 3rd - 160, 212 - X
01:40:589 (4) - 180, 56 - Fixed
01:43:258 (2,3) - 408, 200 - Fixed
01:45:419 (3) - 1st - 264, 128. 2nd - 184, 144. 3rd - 188, 224. - Ok and 01:44:784 (4,4) - on 272, 212 - X
01:45:928 (1) - 3rd - 100, 56. - Fixed
01:46:309 (2) - 188, 156 - X
01:48:344 (2) - 240, 192 - Fixed
01:54:572 (3) - 2nd - 400, 256. 3rd - 448, 280. 6th - 460, 364. and 01:54:953 - X (4) - 484, 188 - Ok
02:27:496 (1) - 2nd - 96, 296. 3rd - 152, 352. 4th - 216, 368. 5th - 272, 316. - Fixed
02:29:530 (1) - 2nd - 64, 304. 3rd - 84, 244. and 02:29:911 (2) - 164, 320. Fixed
02:38:301 (4) - 2nd - 196, 344. 3rd - 128, 320 - Fixed
02:43:767 (1) - 2nd - 392, 304. and 02:44:275 (3) - 388, 192 - Fixed
that's all. i'm so nazi ;_;
good luck ~
hi there =w=
remove 4 notes?
AR10 orz...
00:28:131 (3) - remove clap
00:28:385 (4) - add clap
00:37:030 (2) - clap on start
01:15:165 (5) - add clap
01:41:606 (4) - add clap
01:59:402 (4) - ^
02:20:250 (6) - ^
02:28:385 (1) - ^... also, remove NC?
02:28:640 (5) - add NC?
nice map
AR10 orz...
00:28:131 (3) - remove clap
00:28:385 (4) - add clap
00:37:030 (2) - clap on start
01:15:165 (5) - add clap
01:41:606 (4) - add clap
01:59:402 (4) - ^
02:20:250 (6) - ^
02:28:385 (1) - ^... also, remove NC?
02:28:640 (5) - add NC?
nice map
rickyboi
Thanks for the mod pieguy!pieguy1372 wrote:
hi there =w=remove 4 notes?
AR10 orz... - Oops I seem to have forgotten to change this back to AR 9.
00:28:131 (3) - remove clap - X
00:28:385 (4) - add clap - Ok
00:37:030 (2) - clap on start - X
01:15:165 (5) - add clap - X
01:41:606 (4) - add clap - Ok
01:59:402 (4) - ^ - X
02:20:250 (6) - ^ - X
02:28:385 (1) - ^... also, remove NC? - Ok
02:28:640 (5) - add NC? - Ok
nice map
rickyboi
The rule hasn't been fully implemented yet. People have discussed this already on some thread. t/75882Philippines wrote:
Before anything else, read this.
Here comes my mod.
[shoe]
craaaaaaaaazy jump yeh.I even get hard to watch it.
so just some nazi mods.
00:17:835 (3) - make it a little away from (1) will more beauty
01:45:419 (3,4,1) - actually a little confused for player
01:47:962 (1,2,3) - ^
02:08:555 - here you can use some low sv to get the different feelings
Almost ar9...Why I feel this just ar8...seems ar 10 will make people to see more clearly.you may have a try
Good map yeh.
[shoe]
craaaaaaaaazy jump yeh.I even get hard to watch it.
so just some nazi mods.
00:17:835 (3) - make it a little away from (1) will more beauty
01:45:419 (3,4,1) - actually a little confused for player
01:47:962 (1,2,3) - ^
02:08:555 - here you can use some low sv to get the different feelings
Almost ar9...Why I feel this just ar8...
Good map yeh.
rickyboi
Shohei Ohtani
For some reason I've only been giving mediocre mods for a while. Let's hope this one isn't.
Overall:
BG failed to download for me.
Diff:
THIS SV SKDFJGKLSDJFGL
01:04:106 (1) - Not moe slider! D:
01:36:013 (3) - ^
02:28:640 (1) - ^
02:49:042 - OH GOD YOU RAISED THE SV IS THIS EVEN PLAYABLE
02:59:657 (1) - not moe :<.
It's ok, but it seems like a lot of the difficulty comes from the SV instead of the mapping ;~;.
Overall:
BG failed to download for me.
Diff:
THIS SV SKDFJGKLSDJFGL
01:04:106 (1) - Not moe slider! D:
01:36:013 (3) - ^
02:28:640 (1) - ^
02:49:042 - OH GOD YOU RAISED THE SV IS THIS EVEN PLAYABLE
02:59:657 (1) - not moe :<.
It's ok, but it seems like a lot of the difficulty comes from the SV instead of the mapping ;~;.
rickyboi
Thank you for the mod and star CDFA!CDFA wrote:
For some reason I've only been giving mediocre mods for a while. Let's hope this one isn't.
Overall:
BG failed to download for me.
Diff:
THIS SV SKDFJGKLSDJFGL
01:04:106 (1) - Not moe slider! D:
01:36:013 (3) - ^
02:28:640 (1) - ^
- I think they look fine.
02:49:042 - OH GOD YOU RAISED THE SV IS THIS EVEN PLAYABLE - Yep, it's definitely playable and still used 1.0x spacing
02:59:657 (1) - not moe :<. - Fixed
It's ok, but it seems like a lot of the difficulty comes from the SV instead of the mapping ;~;.