Denkare - The Sun of Spring (Short Ver.) · forum

Leorda

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Leorda 2012-03-28T15:17:41+00:00

Hiii

General
* Make sure your all diff names are NOT using a caps lock on on each diff (e.g. "MEILING"). Because it's annoying some cases. Please lower it, like "Shizuha"

* Why "game" in tags?

HARUMI
* The first kiai should snap at 00:56:119 to make consistent on each diff

Was wanted to bubble this but this map is not in my buble criteria, sorry

Nanakase Gizumo

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Nanakase Gizumo 2012-03-28T15:41:45+00:00

Leorda wrote:
General
* Make sure your all diff names are NOT using a caps lock on on each diff (e.g. "MEILING"). Because it's annoying some cases. Please lower it, like "Shizuha" ok

* Why "game" in tags?
"Hentai Game" This tag is in common use.

HARUMI
* The first kiai should snap at 00:56:119 to make consistent on each diff ok

Was wanted to bubble this but this map is not in my buble criteria, sorry I see...

Thank you!

S MoMo

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S MoMo 2012-04-02T18:45:41+00:00

modしにきました。
不採用なのは聞き流してくださいまし

Shizuka

SPOILER

00:13:119 (5) - 00:11:786 (4) - の終わりと綺麗にスタック出来てないです。
00:35:452 (3) - 00:34:786 (1) - とスタックできてないです

Harumi

SPOILER

00:35:452 (2) - こういう音取りはどうでしょうか？ http://puu.sh/nB3O
00:39:786 (6) - スライダーにしてもいいかもしれません http://puu.sh/nB4o
00:56:119 (2) - スライダーを折り返す？
00:58:786 (3) - ^
01:21:119 (2) - ^

Akio

SPOILER

00:00:619の青ライン消したほうがいいかも？

Fuyune
特に無し

Akio&Fuyuneは特にコレと言ったものは見つかりませんでした
中々に綺麗で良いマップだと思います
ランクド頑張ってください

初心者mod失礼しました～
何か分からないことがあれば PMかツイッターかosu内でお願いします

Nanakase Gizumo

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Nanakase Gizumo 2012-04-03T12:57:04+00:00

S MoMo wrote:
Shizuka
00:13:119 (5) - 00:11:786 (4) - の終わりと綺麗にスタック出来てないです。出来ているような？
00:35:452 (3) - 00:34:786 (1) - とスタックできてないです fixed

Harumi
00:35:452 (2) - こういう音取りはどうでしょうか？ http://puu.sh/nB3O no change
00:39:786 (6) - スライダーにしてもいいかもしれません http://puu.sh/nB4o no change
00:56:119 (2) - スライダーを折り返す？ no change
00:58:786 (3) - ^ no change
01:21:119 (2) - ^ no change

Akio
00:00:619の青ライン消したほうがいいかも？ ok

Thank you!

Melophobia

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Melophobia 2012-04-09T10:41:52+00:00

hope you like it !

Download: Denkare - The Sun of Spring (Short Ver.) (Nanakase Gizumo) [Shizuka].osu

Nanakase Gizumo

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Nanakase Gizumo 2012-04-09T10:55:14+00:00

hayai! arigato!

Ryafuka

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Ryafuka 2012-04-11T14:20:11+00:00

from Melophobia's Request

just all suggestion~

[Fuyune]
00:13:452 - Insert Break Time?
00:47:119 - 特に問題はないんだけど、ここだけなぜか緑線がずれてる！
01:38:786 - 40%にして、01:39:119 - ,01:39:452 - ,01:39:786 - の緑線を削除してみてはどうでしょう？
01:38:786 (1) - 終端のwhistleを削除して、代わりにfinishを追加？

[Akio]
HP+2?
00:53:452 - ここにnoteを追加してfinishを追加、00:53:453 (1) - このspinnerの始端を00:53:536 - に変更してみてはどうでしょう？
01:14:619 (1,1) - Normal程度の難易度にしては離れすぎているかも。
01:21:452 (1) - 始端にfinishを追加？
01:32:119 (1) - ^
01:38:786 (1,2) - ちょっと音がうるさいかも。01:38:786 - 40%、01:39:286 - 35%なんてどうでしょ。
01:39:619 (2) - 終端のwhistleを削除して、代わりにfinishを追加？

[Harumi]
00:15:953 (5) - このnote消して、00:15:453 (4) - のキックスライダーをここまで伸ばしたほうがしっくりくるかも。
00:31:786 (3) - 上とは逆パターンで、00:31:952 - ここまでキックを減らして00:32:119 - ここにnoteおいてはどうでしょう？
00:52:619 (2,3) - この音取りをチェンジ？(変更した場合、もちろん配置も)
01:14:453 (5) - NC?
01:33:452 - ここに音がほしいような？こんな感じはどうでしょー(変更した場合、(7)にNC追加？) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/288780
01:38:786 (1,2) - same as Akio
01:39:286 (2) - 終端のwhistleを削除して、代わりにfinishを追加？

good diff <3

[Melo's Shizuka]
00:14:786 - 緑線追加してボリューム5%？
00:26:786 - 緑線追加してボリューム50%？
00:26:869 - 上のを追加した場合はここでまた70%。
00:37:786 (2) - こんなのはどうだろう？(ctrl+Jしたもの) http://puu.sh/p2Kj
00:40:119 (1,2) - ダウンビートでNCおいてるのはわかるんだけど、音取り的にNCチェンジ・・？
00:54:453 (7) - NC?
01:38:786 (1,2) - same as Akio
01:39:286 (2) - 終端にfinish？

good mapset <3
starrr :3

Melophobia

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Melophobia 2012-04-11T14:30:57+00:00

Ryafuka wrote:
[Melo's Shizuka]
00:14:786 - 緑線追加してボリューム5%？
00:26:786 - 緑線追加してボリューム50%？
00:26:869 - 上のを追加した場合はここでまた70%。
00:37:786 (2) - こんなのはどうだろう？(ctrl+Jしたもの) http://puu.sh/p2Kj no
00:40:119 (1,2) - ダウンビートでNCおいてるのはわかるんだけど、音取り的にNCチェンジ・・？ ?_?
00:54:453 (7) - NC?
01:38:786 (1,2) - same as Akio
01:39:286 (2) - 終端にfinish？

arigatou!

Download: Denkare - The Sun of Spring (Short Ver.) (Nanakase Gizumo) [Melo's Shizuka].osu

Nanakase Gizumo

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Nanakase Gizumo 2012-04-12T05:54:10+00:00

Ryafuka wrote:
[Fuyune]
00:13:452 - Insert Break Time? むむむ判断できないので保留で
00:47:119 - 特に問題はないんだけど、ここだけなぜか緑線がずれてる！直し忘れ／(^o^)＼
01:38:786 - 40%にして、01:39:119 - ,01:39:452 - ,01:39:786 - の緑線を削除してみてはどうでしょう？ ok
01:38:786 (1) - 終端のwhistleを削除して、代わりにfinishを追加？ ok

[Akio]
HP+2? ok
00:53:452 - ここにnoteを追加してfinishを追加、00:53:453 (1) - このspinnerの始端を00:53:536 - に変更してみてはどうでしょう？ no change
01:14:619 (1,1) - Normal程度の難易度にしては離れすぎているかも。近づけてみました
01:21:452 (1) - 始端にfinishを追加？ no change
01:32:119 (1) - ^ no change
01:38:786 (1,2) - ちょっと音がうるさいかも。01:38:786 - 40%、01:39:286 - 35%なんてどうでしょ。 ok
01:39:619 (2) - 終端のwhistleを削除して、代わりにfinishを追加？ ok

[Harumi]
00:15:953 (5) - このnote消して、00:15:453 (4) - のキックスライダーをここまで伸ばしたほうがしっくりくるかも。逆にキックを縮めてみました
00:31:786 (3) - 上とは逆パターンで、00:31:952 - ここまでキックを減らして00:32:119 - ここにnoteおいてはどうでしょう？こちらはno changeで
00:52:619 (2,3) - この音取りをチェンジ？(変更した場合、もちろん配置も) ok
01:14:453 (5) - NC? ok
01:33:452 - ここに音がほしいような？こんな感じはどうでしょー(変更した場合、(7)にNC追加？) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/288780 ボーカルではなく音楽に合わせているのでno changeで　01:22:619 (5)　01:17:286 (4)　ここら辺も同じ感じです
01:38:786 (1,2) - same as Akio ok
01:39:286 (2) - 終端のwhistleを削除して、代わりにfinishを追加？ ok

Thank you for modding and a starrr ;3

ertyukjh010

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ertyukjh010 2012-04-18T12:47:56+00:00

Hello

[Fuyune]

Pro.

[Akio]

well

[Harumi]

Fine

[Melo's Shizuka]

Ar8 Easier to read 0.0
01:05:952 (4) - I can't hear 1/8 beat here. Change to 1/4 beat pls.

Sorry, I can not find a lot of problems.
Overall It's a Good map. Go to rank quickly ><
That all

Melophobia

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Melophobia 2012-04-18T14:51:40+00:00

@ertyukjh010

AR9 is fine to me and 1/4 sounds too poor imo >~<
anyway, thanks for modding~

JauiPlaY

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JauiPlaY 2012-04-22T12:30:58+00:00

Hi~

Some suggestions:

[General]
Clean and nice.

[Fuyune]
Perfect.

[Akio]
Nothing found but:
01:39:286 - Useless timing point.

[Harumi]
00:43:619 - Clap.
00:44:952 - ^
00:48:952 - ^
00:50:286 - ^

[Melo's Shizuka]
00:15:536 (5) - Imo you should remove this one.
00:26:369 - Add a note.
00:32:036 - ^
00:43:619 (5) - Clap.
00:44:953 (5) - ^
00:48:953 (5) - ^
00:50:286 (5) - ^
01:14:786 (1) - Move to 01:14:702.

No major problem. Imo this should be bubbled!
Good luck~

Melophobia

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Melophobia 2012-04-22T12:40:12+00:00

JauiPlaY wrote:
[Melo's Shizuka]
00:15:536 (5) - Imo you should remove this one. why? o.o
00:26:369 - Add a note. ^
00:32:036 - ^ yes
00:43:619 (5) - Clap. i can see your point but no changes~
00:44:953 (5) - ^
00:48:953 (5) - ^
00:50:286 (5) - ^
01:14:786 (1) - Move to 01:14:702. fixed

謝了mod~

Download: Denkare - The Sun of Spring (Short Ver.) (Nanakase Gizumo) [Melo's Shizuka].osu

Nanakase Gizumo

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Nanakase Gizumo 2012-04-22T12:51:59+00:00

JauiPlaY wrote:
[Akio]
Nothing found but:
01:39:286 - Useless timing point. removed

[Harumi]
00:43:619 - Clap. no change
00:44:952 - ^ ^
00:48:952 - ^ ^
00:50:286 - ^ ^

Thank you for modding!

yongtw123

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yongtw123 2012-04-26T03:49:31+00:00

[Fuyune]
Excellent use of hitsound!

[Akio]
A wonderful [Normal]!

[Harumi]

AR + 1, AR7 is too slow and hinders readability
00:46:286 (4) - i am slightly concerned about combo color here. it's not that visible...

[Melo's Shizuka]

i see some jumps as unnecessary, but it's an [Insane] diff, so i'll pass on them
00:55:119 (1,2,3) - spacing
01:06:786 (1,2,3,4) - a huge spacing drop after (2), i suggest you either 1) use larger spacing for (2,3,4), or 2) decrease spacing of (1,2)

=======================

Very well-done mapset!

I can't find much to pick on, so I'll leave a star.

Good luck!

Nanakase Gizumo

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Nanakase Gizumo 2012-04-26T10:49:23+00:00

yongtw123 wrote:
[Harumi]
AR + 1, AR7 is too slow and hinders readability ok
00:46:286 (4) - i am slightly concerned about combo color here. it's not that visible... hmm...no change

Thank you for modding and a star!

Melophobia

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Melophobia 2012-04-26T13:32:17+00:00

fixed all
thanks for mod~

Download: Denkare - The Sun of Spring (Short Ver.) (Nanakase Gizumo) [Melo's Shizuka].osu

wcx19911123

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wcx19911123 2012-05-09T05:27:19+00:00

from my queue

[General]
video still has audio in it, need to remove it
offset=9458(+5) is better to me

[Akio]
OD-1? kinda high as a Normal diff imo

[Harumi]
00:49:619 (2,3) - need to ctrl+r, or this is too hard to read

[Melo's Shizuka]
HD+1 or OD+1 plz, this is too low as an Insane diff now
01:25:702 - add a note?
01:39:952 - I think use 30% volume here is better

really nice
do what you want and call me back

Melophobia

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Melophobia 2012-05-09T05:56:39+00:00

all fixed
thanks wcx

Download: Denkare - The Sun of Spring (Short Ver.) (Nanakase Gizumo) [Melo's Shizuka].osu

Nanakase Gizumo

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Nanakase Gizumo 2012-05-09T14:26:48+00:00

wcx19911123 wrote:
[General]
video still has audio in it, need to remove it ok
offset=9458(+5) is better to me ok

[Akio]
OD-1? kinda high as a Normal diff imo ok

[Harumi]
00:49:619 (2,3) - need to ctrl+r, or this is too hard to read switched

Thank you for modding!

wcx19911123

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wcx19911123 2012-05-10T07:44:44+00:00

recheck
NO KD PLZ

[General]
plz check the original video and make video offset better, I'm not sure now it is right or not, but I think it can be better

[Harumi]
00:49:624 - move this clap to 00:49:791 -

[Melo's Shizuka]
no need to both HD and OD +1.. orz
HD8 OD7, or HD7 OD8, either is fine. both 8 is too hard.. orz

call me back after this :3

Nanakase Gizumo

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Nanakase Gizumo 2012-05-10T08:38:52+00:00

wcx19911123 wrote:
[General]
plz check the original video and make video offset better, I'm not sure now it is right or not, but I think it can be better
changed video file and tried to set video offset...

[Harumi]
00:49:624 - move this clap to 00:49:791 - oops... silly mistake...

[Melo's Shizuka]
no need to both HD and OD +1.. orz
HD8 OD7, or HD7 OD8, either is fine. both 8 is too hard.. orz HD -1

wcx19911123

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wcx19911123 2012-05-10T09:27:24+00:00

fine now
bubbled

Nanakase Gizumo

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Nanakase Gizumo 2012-05-10T10:26:38+00:00

Thank you :3

whymeman

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whymeman 2012-05-17T08:42:21+00:00

Was a bit confused on how [Harumi] was the "Hardest" difficulty, but the difference that throw off the balance between Hard and Insane was having 1 spinner less and a few more notes (plus the current settings). Though, it shouldn't cause too much trouble since to force the fix would mean to drop the settings and such. I'll go ahead and rank then.

Nanakase Gizumo

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Nanakase Gizumo 2012-05-17T08:47:22+00:00

Thank you

MiLu

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MiLu 2012-05-17T08:47:25+00:00

おめ！！！

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