Ouch, too many people replying so it's hard to see how old this was.
[General]
00:08:013 - I can make the title text appear at this point in time if you'd like.
Think you could get a 1024x768 BG please?
[Easy]
00:05:870 (1) - Start this at 00:05:956 -
00:36:984 (4,5) - For a map labeled as beginner, I really wouldn't recommend having such a short slider with a hit object afterward so soon. I'm honestly already wary of 00:34:927 (1,2,3,4) - anyway
01:23:442 (3) - Same thing here
[theo]
00:47:613 (3) - Whistle on sliderslide sounds awful :<
00:58:756 (4) - Surprised this didn't end at 00:59:270 - and have a rhythm to continue at 00:59:784 -
01:02:870 (1,2) - Kind of a strange rhythm to use here. How about something like this?
01:24:470 - Add note
[Pastel]
00:21:727 (7,8,9) - This rhythm feels unnecessary
00:38:356 (1,2,3) - These feel unnatural to play because the strong synth hit is where you want to start your sliders, so at 00:38:184 - 00:38:698 - and 00:39:213 - . A rhythm like this would work best imo
00:40:927 - Add note
00:48:813 (6,7,8) - This rhythm feels unnecessary. Bleh there are a lot of them later in the map too. I really don't think they fit this song well.
01:00:813 (3) - Although it's not obscured for very long, it would be an easy thing to adjust the slider tail so that the repeat isn't covered by the hitburst from 00:59:784 (5) -
01:04:756 (4,1) - Really don't like this spacing
[biwako]
00:16:241 (1,3) - After playing these two hitting this stack at 00:17:270 (1,2) - broke your flow..
I'm of the same opinion from the Pastel difficulty: the triple 1/4 rhythms feel extraneous and unnecessary.