Hey.
General
Good luck to you!
General
- Consider adding des1re43 in the tags. I believe that was Pastel's previous user name.
- Keep the slider tick rate consistent for all difficulties. It's a suggestion but I recommend you do that.
- 00:01:156-On theowest, biwako, and Pastel, this timing point that is overlapping the timing section is pretty useless. Delete it.
- 00:05:870 (1)-Probably best to extend the end of that spinner onto 00:08:013.
- 00:32:698 (1, 2, 3)-I don't like how the 1st note is overlapping slider 2. Here is what I think is better. http://puu.sh/dCfN Oh and don't forget to use the distance snap on the rest of the notes after.
- 00:34:927-It looks like to me that there should be a new combo here. Add on in. (:
- 00:35:613-Remove new combo~
- 01:02:870 (1)-It sounds like there should be a finish here.
- 01:11:098 (1)-It sounds like there should be a finish on the beginning...
- I was expecting the slider velocity to be a bit faster on a Normal difficulty, say 1.10. But having the slider velocity 0.80 is okay I guess.
- 00:24:127 (5)-You know, it's not a good idea stacking this note behind the end point of the previous slider. ): The player could hit it early and might miss. Consider using the distance snap on it more or you can keep it stacked but move the note onto 00:23:956, which sounds better here and plays better in my opinion.
- 00:34:927-It seems to me that there should be a new combo here. Consider adding one in.
- 00:36:298-Remove new combo.
- 00:34:584 (3, 4, 5)-A triple here doesn't sound right to me. Consider having this become a double. You know, something like this?
- 00:37:670 (4, 5, 6)-^Pretty much the same thing.
- 00:56:527 (2, 3, 4)-^Same thing
- 01:18:813 (8, 10)-Sliders in between streams... I'm not okay with that. ): Sure, it depends on the BPM but since the BPM for this map is 175, I don't approve of this. Just replace those sliders with notes and it would be just a note stream~
- 01:24:298-Perhaps it would be best to put a new combo here.
- 00:18:641 (2)-A finish here doesn't sound right to me. Consider removing it.
- 00:32:013 (2, 3, 4)-A triple doesn't sound right to be and they don't fit. ): Consider removing notes 2, 3 and 4. Would I recommend adding a slider on 00:31:841 and ending it on 00:32:184. http://puu.sh/dDdH Making that slider into a curve or linear is up to you.
- 00:40:927 (x)-It sounds like there should be a note here. Add one in and add a finish too perhaps?
Good luck to you!