00:14:140 (4,5,6) - imo this arrangement seems constrained and doesn't have a nice flow to it. And perhaps it could have more varied rhythm, like this:
However I couldn't really rearrange the new slider well, it's up to you. The repeating slider is in 1/3 time.
00:18:608 (5) - Rearrange like this maybe:
00:22:012 (4) - Overlaps with 00:23:501 (3) not very nicely.
00:25:842 (5) - Suggest to change the rhythm. Positioning is awkward just for reference.
00:39:459 (6) - ^similar to above.
00:26:267 (1,2) -
00:44:778 (2) - awkward positioning in relative to Slider 1.
00:45:629 (3) - Move original circle 3 to here.
00:50:097 (1) - I suggest rearranging as follows:
00:57:544 (4) - Suggest moving original slider 4 to this time position. Thus add a note here: 00:58:182 and 00:58:608.
01:02:012 (3) - Overlaps not nicely with slider 1.
01:03:714 (1) - Suggest maintaining the same rhythm as 00:56:480 (1) combo. Play around with the positions of the sliders.
01:19:033 (3,4,5,6) - Arrangement constrained and lacks flow. Something like this?
01:22:438 (3) - Arrange like this perhaps?
BREAKTIME~
02:01:587 (1) - For this combo, you might consider moving the slider 02:02:438 (2) to 02:02:225. Then add a note here: 02:02:863 ?
02:06:055 - Add note?
02:08:395 (1) -
hmm...this rhythm looks complicated and rather a bit too deviated from the main rhythmic structure, up to you.
02:15:204 (1) - Don't use a straight line, adopt a more "curvy" structure perhaps? Or, alternatively, change the sliders to a curvy one.
02:22:012 (1) - I will suggest using the same rhythm as this part: 02:18:608 (2)
02:29:672 (2) - Overlaps with previous slider 6 not nicely.
02:44:140 (1) - This combo has a nice rhythmic effect that you should consider using more often.
BREAKTIME~03:08:821 (3,4) - These two notes look awkward in placement in relative to 1 and 2.
03:13:076 (3) - Try to let this be positioned in the center through means of moving previous notes.
04:35:629 (5) - ^
BREAKTIME~03:43:714 (1) - Do not let the 2 overlap with previous slider, instead, align so that it "surrounds" the slider.
You would have the move the notes after it as a result.
03:57:757 (2) - Overlaps with previous slider.
04:00:736 (1) - Flip Slider 1 vertically so that it looks like this, thus not overlapping with 2.
04:06:693 (2) - ...Try not letting this overlap with 04:05:416 (4)
04:11:799 (2) - Place it directly under circle 4. No one will notice the different distance spacing
04:17:757 (1) - This combo has a nice flow.
Hmm...Sorry for near-nazi mod...or maybe it is nazi mod anyways.