thanks for checking the beatmap, but im sorry I didn't change anything.strager wrote:
General
Great map.
F'kin awesome storyboard.
Star'd. <3
05:31:52 (1) - Kiai matching the flashes is great! ty ^^
HAPPY
05:29:41 (1,1,1,1) - Not mini please. One big spinner is fine. I know it's very hard to 300 them, but I want them to stay.
BURAI
About spacing, I find it intuitive. I pretty much FC'd every note except some intuitive jumps which were my own fault and some notes during kiai (grr).
02:24:68 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Eek. dunno, those weird spacings make the beatmap more epic imo.
03:56:99 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same.
05:29:44 (1,1,1,1) - Not mini please. One big spinner is fine.
05:48:13 (1) - Kill Kiai here. Annoys me. Like hell. no :<
Approve this. <3
I enjoyed the spacing and think it's intuitive for even a ranked map (if only it had a lower score... nah...). Some small suggestions I made in a previous post: viewtopic.php?p=134093#p134093buraimaster1234 wrote:
Hi, sorry I've been out so long, but I'm back for now. Anyway, about those weird spacing issues, inconsistencies, and whatever... well, I don't know what to think here. I'm just going to say that I mapped exactly according to how I felt for the song. Maybe it is a bit over-creative, but that's mostly besides the point. I had such great fun and a tremendous experience of mapping this song, and I'd rather not ruin it with all of your spacing and grid laws/rules. I thought, actually, that the map, with all its well-thought out and prepared spacing, made perfect sense. I guess I may have been a tad wrong with it, yes. After all, everybody has their own point of view on a song or critical situation or anything, really, right? ;P
I'll allow some changing if anyone meets to suggest a major (or minor) flaw or inconsistency. I just have to say that I can only tolerate so many alterations, because I simply hate it when that has to happen and it's not so perfect as I wish it was.
If we fix all those spacings / spinners we could make this ranked instead of approved.Saturos-fangirl wrote:
bold indicates something that is illegal in modern maps
[Happy]
00:56:58 (4) - end 1/4 earlier?
01:54:89 (6) - remove finish
02:31:58 (6) - finish
02:56:73 (7) - the end isnt snapped and could use a finish thnx didnt see that one.
05:29:41 (1,1,1,1) - spinners are illegal short! current standard is auto + 2000
[Burai]
00:24:50 (6) - new combo why? Burai likes long combos ^^
00:26:90 (11) - ^
etc.
00:42:50 (5) - new combo or fix spacing on 6,7 but you cant change spacing mid-combo like that why not? you think people will get confused because of no new combo? :<
00:44:90 (12) - ^
00:46:10 (15) - new combo
00:45:50 (14) - spacing
00:53:30 (8) - new combo
im going to stop pointing out the illegal spacing jumps, you know where they are.
01:24:45 (10) - incorrect bpm change Slider is kinda long so everyone will probably have enough time to react
01:32:99 (10) - ^
01:39:22 (10) - ^
01:47:76 (10) - ^
01:59:76 (8) - spacing
02:02:29 (17) - ^
02:25:60 (3,4,5,6) - ^
youre overusing whistle a bit
02:56:76 (2) - incorrect bpm change
03:09:91 (12) - mid-combo jump
03:11:53 (2) - incorrect bpm change
03:23:76 (5,11) - mid-combo jumps
03:28:37 (20) - ^
im going to stop pointing out the single-note jumps now too
04:09:68 (4) - finish this was intended to have no finish I guess
04:50:90 (8) - new combo
05:07:10 (4) - insert break also intended I guess
05:29:44 (1,1,1,1) - illegally short spinners; current standard is auto + 2000
this map breaks far too many rules to be even approved imho.
I disagree. It's very playable. Then again I'm not a BAT.SFG wrote:
this map breaks far too many rules to be even approved imho.
Score and length? I wouldn't fix the spacing (I think it's great) but the spinners I have to agree with SFG on. They are too short and annoying.happy30 wrote:
If we fix all those spacings / spinners we could make this ranked instead of approved.
So what's the point of having an approved section then?
strager wrote:
BURAI
02:24:68 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Eek. This was so intended.
03:56:99 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same. Look directly above.
05:29:44 (1,1,1,1) - Not mini please. One big spinner is fine. AWWW!!!
05:48:13 (1) - Kill Kiai here. Annoys me. Like hell. Compromise?
Each and every response has good cause to it as complete judgment on my part. It's all just intended mapping.Saturos-fangirl wrote:
[Burai]
00:24:50 (6) - new combo No.
00:26:90 (11) - ^ No.
etc. No.
00:42:50 (5) - new combo or fix spacing on 6,7 but you cant change spacing mid-combo like that No.
00:44:90 (12) - ^ No.
00:46:10 (15) - new combo No.
00:45:50 (14) - spacing No.
00:53:30 (8) - new combo No.
im going to stop pointing out the illegal spacing jumps, you know where they are. No.
01:24:45 (10) - incorrect bpm change wth?
01:32:99 (10) - ^ wth?
01:39:22 (10) - ^ wth?
01:47:76 (10) - ^ wth?
01:59:76 (8) - spacing No.
02:02:29 (17) - ^ No.
02:25:60 (3,4,5,6) - ^ NO!
youre overusing whistle a bit Thank you.
02:56:76 (2) - incorrect bpm change wth?
03:09:91 (12) - mid-combo jump No.
03:11:53 (2) - incorrect bpm change wth?
03:23:76 (5,11) - mid-combo jumps No.
03:28:37 (20) - ^ No.
im going to stop pointing out the single-note jumps now too No.
04:09:68 (4) - finish Hmm... yeess??
04:50:90 (8) - new combo Sure. Also, new combo at 05:06:50 (3).
05:07:10 (4) - insert break That's an idea I'm more flexible and open about, but I'm not really sure if this suggestion should be fulfilled. Try and suggest me to. :/
05:29:44 (1,1,1,1) - illegally short spinners; current standard is auto + 2000 AWWW!!
I mean, I'll gonna submit the map by attachment, not saying you must add my difficulity (unless you want to).happy30 wrote:
Aoitenshi: This beatmap is very old and has been modded / bubbled more times. I actually want this to be approved asap. I'm not really into adding another difficulty unless it's something really good or unique.
)Umm... sorry, but just no.james039 wrote:
[BURAI]
Start a new combo more often, especially when the count is getting above 10.
There is one spot which I thought would look quite pretty if you did the following:
03:22:83 (2) - New combo
03:23:76 (5) - ^
03:24:68 (8) - ^
03:25:60 (11) - ^
03:26:53 (14,15,16,17,18) - New combo (on each) to get a color rotating effect.
Then, the 18,19,20 at the end there would be a big 1,2,3 ^-^
I'm really sorry if I seem to be getting defensive, here. Well, maybe I am, but whatever ... ._.Card N'FoRcE wrote:
- Burai's:00:42:50 (5) - D: new combo?
00:44:90 (12) - ^
00:47:30 (17) - ok, it's more intentional than i thought, nvm D:
I really don't like those weird jumps, though D: and I really do. D:
04:04:60 (2) - looks ugly, can you try to fix its position? How did that happen? Anyway, I fixed it at 05:42:59 (1) - as well.
05:29:44 (1) - why not 3/4 lenght like the other 3 spinners? I can't really explain that with my 'logic', but I'm just going to say no. It would make no more sense than how it is now.
No worries, my mods were suggestion only.buraimaster1234 wrote:
I'm really sorry if I seem to be getting defensive, here. Well, maybe I am, but whatever ... ._.
Me and my dumb logic.
Looooooooooove it so much 
DaRRi MIx wrote:
P.S. personally i don't like the combo colors here
Hmm, I thought the jumps were great, personally. I like this kind of map. The spacing changes within a combo from time to time, which probably confuses certain players who are relying too heavily on the spacing to tell them how to play the map. I honestly think that altering this, however, would ruin the fun of your difficulty.buraimaster1234 wrote:
Okay, I tried following much of your advice, darri, especially about the combos, and I realize, I think, now that they may seem to drag for too long and get confusing. Hopefully, what I do will prevent too much confusion.
But exactly was confusing/ unreadable? Was it just the overwhelmingly drawn out combos, or sudden jumps/ inconsistencies (such as 00:41:30 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1,2,3,4,5,6) - )? If the latter is such a problem, then I would be very grateful if someone could point out at least a couple of section that they believe spoils the beatmap's "playability" and "enjoyability".
Also, here is the update: [attachment=0:f2e2c]IOSYS - Kioku no Keifu (happy30) [BURAI].osu[/attachment:f2e2c]
EDIT:DaRRi MIx wrote:
P.S. personally i don't like the combo colors here