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One word: Awesome!
Burai: I think some of the long combos in your difficulty would benefit by being broken up a little (most notably near the beginning but also at a couple other points in the map of lesser note). Also, did you jack parts from the other diff? XD
I won't bug you over (most) of the spacing inconsistencies as most of them are pretty awesome. However, there are a couple spots that bothered me.
01:30:91 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - This combo is just...Well, simply put, confusing as hell to follow, with that wacky spacing you've got there.
01:45:68 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Same deal.
01:57:91 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - Same thing.
03:21:91 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20) - One of those mentioned combos which aren't at the beginning of the map.
03:30:22 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - Same as the first combos pointed out.
~3:58 - Break here, perhaps?
~5:07 - Same?
Lol I just realized this map's over five minutes. Fun though. X3
05:29:44 (1,1,1,1) - "Unrankable" spinners (though I love 'em~<3).
~5:37 - Break?
Happy:
~2:35 - Maybe add a break. I wouldn't put huge emphasis on this though, but felt the spot was worth pointing out.
~4:10 - I think this is in Burai's difficulty as well. Excessively long breaks are generally discouraged, but, damn, this map is awesome.
05:29:41 (1,1,1,1) - "Unrankable" spinners again. <3
Double-check that everything is snapped as well, as at least one section in Burai's diff had some stuff that was a bit off.
Anyways, besides that, an easier difficulty might be a good idea. And besides that itself, awesome mapping as usual!
Was quite the nice 12-ish minutes for testing and felt almost casual in the editor lol.
Burai: I think some of the long combos in your difficulty would benefit by being broken up a little (most notably near the beginning but also at a couple other points in the map of lesser note). Also, did you jack parts from the other diff? XD
I won't bug you over (most) of the spacing inconsistencies as most of them are pretty awesome. However, there are a couple spots that bothered me.
01:30:91 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - This combo is just...Well, simply put, confusing as hell to follow, with that wacky spacing you've got there.
01:45:68 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Same deal.
01:57:91 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - Same thing.
03:21:91 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20) - One of those mentioned combos which aren't at the beginning of the map.
03:30:22 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - Same as the first combos pointed out.
~3:58 - Break here, perhaps?
~5:07 - Same?
Lol I just realized this map's over five minutes. Fun though. X3
05:29:44 (1,1,1,1) - "Unrankable" spinners (though I love 'em~<3).
~5:37 - Break?
Happy:
~2:35 - Maybe add a break. I wouldn't put huge emphasis on this though, but felt the spot was worth pointing out.
~4:10 - I think this is in Burai's difficulty as well. Excessively long breaks are generally discouraged, but, damn, this map is awesome.
05:29:41 (1,1,1,1) - "Unrankable" spinners again. <3
Double-check that everything is snapped as well, as at least one section in Burai's diff had some stuff that was a bit off.
Anyways, besides that, an easier difficulty might be a good idea. And besides that itself, awesome mapping as usual!
Was quite the nice 12-ish minutes for testing and felt almost casual in the editor lol.
Topic Starter
Thanks for modding
I'll let burai edit this own diff.
I'll let burai edit this own diff.
I don't think this needs an easier difficulty because it'll be approved instead of ranked cuz of the lenth.An64fan wrote:
Happy:
~2:35 - Maybe add a break. I wouldn't put huge emphasis on this though, but felt the spot was worth pointing out. Fixed
~4:10 - I think this is in Burai's difficulty as well. Excessively long breaks are generally discouraged, but, damn, this map is awesome.
05:29:41 (1,1,1,1) - "Unrankable" spinners again. <3 This song will be approved, not ranked.
I'm sorry, but I have to reject all of your ideas. Everything was beatmapped very purposefully and exactly as I had perceived it - I don't think I could really do any better if I had the second chance to map this.An64fan wrote:
Burai: I think some of the long combos in your difficulty would benefit by being broken up a little (most notably near the beginning but also at a couple other points in the map of lesser note). Also, did you jack parts from the other diff? XD Uh, yeah, I guess, but I never really once looked at happy's while mapping my difficulty. I guess we just have a similar taste? ;P
I won't bug you over (most) of the spacing inconsistencies as most of them are pretty awesome. However, there are a couple spots that bothered me.
01:30:91 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - This combo is just...Well, simply put, confusing as hell to follow, with that wacky spacing you've got there.
01:45:68 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Same deal.
01:57:91 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - Same thing.
03:21:91 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20) - One of those mentioned combos which aren't at the beginning of the map.
03:30:22 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - Same as the first combos pointed out.
~3:58 - Break here, perhaps?
~5:07 - Same?
Lol I just realized this map's over five minutes. Fun though. X3
05:29:44 (1,1,1,1) - "Unrankable" spinners (though I love 'em~<3).
~5:37 - Break?
Heck, no! For your information, I am very precise and "nazi" about my note placement, especially very recently. Eh, I guess I can go do a fourth check around and makes some minor detail fixes (no grid snap, yay! ^^ ). Also, sorry if I'm sounding like a total snob here. ._.An64fan wrote:
Double-check that everything is snapped as well, as at least one section in Burai's diff had some stuff that was a bit off.
Posting just to star this, don't mind me.
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Eh... I can't bubble this. My mind just won't let me. HAPPY is fine, but BURAI's spacing is telling me "THIS IS WRONG THIS IS WRONG", but since so many people like this map, I can't pop the bubble here. I'll leave some priority for you, but I won't give you a second bubble. Sorry, there IS room for creativity, but that's just too creative for me to approve of it :S
burai, you could have tried, instead of sudden spacing changes, use ACCELERATING changes (something like 1-2 being 0.8x, and 6-7 being 1.3x).
Now I can't find an excuse to approve of this. T__T
Now I can't find an excuse to approve of this. T__T
Topic Starter
The spacing is kinda random yes, but it still folows the music and it isn't that hard to follow.
Look at djpop's barusa of mikosu tag4, that's much harder to follow and yet it's approved.
Look at djpop's barusa of mikosu tag4, that's much harder to follow and yet it's approved.
Yay, awesome map.
General
Great map.
F'kin awesome storyboard.
Star'd. <3
05:31:52 (1) - Kiai matching the flashes is great!
HAPPY
05:29:41 (1,1,1,1) - Not mini please. One big spinner is fine.
BURAI
About spacing, I find it intuitive. I pretty much FC'd every note except some intuitive jumps which were my own fault and some notes during kiai (grr).
02:24:68 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Eek.
03:56:99 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same.
05:29:44 (1,1,1,1) - Not mini please. One big spinner is fine.
05:48:13 (1) - Kill Kiai here. Annoys me. Like hell.
Approve this. <3
Great map.
F'kin awesome storyboard.
Star'd. <3
05:31:52 (1) - Kiai matching the flashes is great!
HAPPY
05:29:41 (1,1,1,1) - Not mini please. One big spinner is fine.
BURAI
About spacing, I find it intuitive. I pretty much FC'd every note except some intuitive jumps which were my own fault and some notes during kiai (grr).
02:24:68 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Eek.
03:56:99 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same.
05:29:44 (1,1,1,1) - Not mini please. One big spinner is fine.
05:48:13 (1) - Kill Kiai here. Annoys me. Like hell.
Approve this. <3
Topic Starter
thanks for checking the beatmap, but im sorry I didn't change anything.strager wrote:
General
Great map.
F'kin awesome storyboard.
Star'd. <3
05:31:52 (1) - Kiai matching the flashes is great! ty ^^
HAPPY
05:29:41 (1,1,1,1) - Not mini please. One big spinner is fine. I know it's very hard to 300 them, but I want them to stay.
BURAI
About spacing, I find it intuitive. I pretty much FC'd every note except some intuitive jumps which were my own fault and some notes during kiai (grr).
02:24:68 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Eek. dunno, those weird spacings make the beatmap more epic imo.
03:56:99 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same.
05:29:44 (1,1,1,1) - Not mini please. One big spinner is fine.
05:48:13 (1) - Kill Kiai here. Annoys me. Like hell. no :<
Approve this. <3
kudo for the work.
I think the right offset is 81,211 (Or I wrong?)
Be4 you rank it, This is the mistake I found
HAPPY
[01:46:239], [01:46:354], [01:47:162], [01:47:277], [03:18:545], [03:18:660], [03:19:468], [03:19:583] Beats : You should add them Whistle, It sounds better.
THE MOST AWESOME BEATMAP'S STORYBOARD I EVER SAW!!! I want this to be Approved and ranked!
Be4 you rank it, This is the mistake I found
HAPPY
[01:46:239], [01:46:354], [01:47:162], [01:47:277], [03:18:545], [03:18:660], [03:19:468], [03:19:583] Beats : You should add them Whistle, It sounds better.
THE MOST AWESOME BEATMAP'S STORYBOARD I EVER SAW!!! I want this to be Approved and ranked!
Hi, sorry I've been out so long, but I'm back for now. Anyway, about those weird spacing issues, inconsistencies, and whatever... well, I don't know what to think here. I'm just going to say that I mapped exactly according to how I felt for the song. Maybe it is a bit over-creative, but that's mostly besides the point. I had such great fun and a tremendous experience of mapping this song, and I'd rather not ruin it with all of your spacing and grid laws/rules. I thought, actually, that the map, with all its well-thought out and prepared spacing, made perfect sense. I guess I may have been a tad wrong with it, yes. After all, everybody has their own point of view on a song or critical situation or anything, really, right? ;P
I'll allow some changing if anyone meets to suggest a major (or minor) flaw or inconsistency. I just have to say that I can only tolerate so many alterations, because I simply hate it when that has to happen and it's not so perfect as I wish it was.
I'll allow some changing if anyone meets to suggest a major (or minor) flaw or inconsistency. I just have to say that I can only tolerate so many alterations, because I simply hate it when that has to happen and it's not so perfect as I wish it was.
I enjoyed the spacing and think it's intuitive for even a ranked map (if only it had a lower score... nah...). Some small suggestions I made in a previous post: viewtopic.php?p=134093#p134093buraimaster1234 wrote:
Hi, sorry I've been out so long, but I'm back for now. Anyway, about those weird spacing issues, inconsistencies, and whatever... well, I don't know what to think here. I'm just going to say that I mapped exactly according to how I felt for the song. Maybe it is a bit over-creative, but that's mostly besides the point. I had such great fun and a tremendous experience of mapping this song, and I'd rather not ruin it with all of your spacing and grid laws/rules. I thought, actually, that the map, with all its well-thought out and prepared spacing, made perfect sense. I guess I may have been a tad wrong with it, yes. After all, everybody has their own point of view on a song or critical situation or anything, really, right? ;P
I'll allow some changing if anyone meets to suggest a major (or minor) flaw or inconsistency. I just have to say that I can only tolerate so many alterations, because I simply hate it when that has to happen and it's not so perfect as I wish it was.
bold indicates something that is illegal in modern maps
[Happy]
00:56:58 (4) - end 1/4 earlier?
01:54:89 (6) - remove finish
02:31:58 (6) - finish
02:56:73 (7) - the end isnt snapped and could use a finish
05:29:41 (1,1,1,1) - spinners are illegal short! current standard is auto + 2000
[Burai]
00:24:50 (6) - new combo
00:26:90 (11) - ^
etc.
00:42:50 (5) - new combo or fix spacing on 6,7 but you cant change spacing mid-combo like that
00:44:90 (12) - ^
00:46:10 (15) - new combo
00:45:50 (14) - spacing
00:53:30 (8) - new combo
im going to stop pointing out the illegal spacing jumps, you know where they are.
01:24:45 (10) - incorrect bpm change
01:32:99 (10) - ^
01:39:22 (10) - ^
01:47:76 (10) - ^
01:59:76 (8) - spacing
02:02:29 (17) - ^
02:25:60 (3,4,5,6) - ^
youre overusing whistle a bit
02:56:76 (2) - incorrect bpm change
03:09:91 (12) - mid-combo jump
03:11:53 (2) - incorrect bpm change
03:23:76 (5,11) - mid-combo jumps
03:28:37 (20) - ^
im going to stop pointing out the single-note jumps now too
04:09:68 (4) - finish
04:50:90 (8) - new combo
05:07:10 (4) - insert break
05:29:44 (1,1,1,1) - illegally short spinners; current standard is auto + 2000
this map breaks far too many rules to be even approved imho.
[Happy]
00:56:58 (4) - end 1/4 earlier?
01:54:89 (6) - remove finish
02:31:58 (6) - finish
02:56:73 (7) - the end isnt snapped and could use a finish
05:29:41 (1,1,1,1) - spinners are illegal short! current standard is auto + 2000
[Burai]
00:24:50 (6) - new combo
00:26:90 (11) - ^
etc.
00:42:50 (5) - new combo or fix spacing on 6,7 but you cant change spacing mid-combo like that
00:44:90 (12) - ^
00:46:10 (15) - new combo
00:45:50 (14) - spacing
00:53:30 (8) - new combo
im going to stop pointing out the illegal spacing jumps, you know where they are.
01:24:45 (10) - incorrect bpm change
01:32:99 (10) - ^
01:39:22 (10) - ^
01:47:76 (10) - ^
01:59:76 (8) - spacing
02:02:29 (17) - ^
02:25:60 (3,4,5,6) - ^
youre overusing whistle a bit
02:56:76 (2) - incorrect bpm change
03:09:91 (12) - mid-combo jump
03:11:53 (2) - incorrect bpm change
03:23:76 (5,11) - mid-combo jumps
03:28:37 (20) - ^
im going to stop pointing out the single-note jumps now too
04:09:68 (4) - finish
04:50:90 (8) - new combo
05:07:10 (4) - insert break
05:29:44 (1,1,1,1) - illegally short spinners; current standard is auto + 2000
this map breaks far too many rules to be even approved imho.
Well, I'm mapping this song too. I'll submit the map later, (Not opening new Thread)
Topic Starter
If we fix all those spacings / spinners we could make this ranked instead of approved.Saturos-fangirl wrote:
bold indicates something that is illegal in modern maps
[Happy]
00:56:58 (4) - end 1/4 earlier?
01:54:89 (6) - remove finish
02:31:58 (6) - finish
02:56:73 (7) - the end isnt snapped and could use a finish thnx didnt see that one.
05:29:41 (1,1,1,1) - spinners are illegal short! current standard is auto + 2000
[Burai]
00:24:50 (6) - new combo why? Burai likes long combos ^^
00:26:90 (11) - ^
etc.
00:42:50 (5) - new combo or fix spacing on 6,7 but you cant change spacing mid-combo like that why not? you think people will get confused because of no new combo? :<
00:44:90 (12) - ^
00:46:10 (15) - new combo
00:45:50 (14) - spacing
00:53:30 (8) - new combo
im going to stop pointing out the illegal spacing jumps, you know where they are.
01:24:45 (10) - incorrect bpm change Slider is kinda long so everyone will probably have enough time to react
01:32:99 (10) - ^
01:39:22 (10) - ^
01:47:76 (10) - ^
01:59:76 (8) - spacing
02:02:29 (17) - ^
02:25:60 (3,4,5,6) - ^
youre overusing whistle a bit
02:56:76 (2) - incorrect bpm change
03:09:91 (12) - mid-combo jump
03:11:53 (2) - incorrect bpm change
03:23:76 (5,11) - mid-combo jumps
03:28:37 (20) - ^
im going to stop pointing out the single-note jumps now too
04:09:68 (4) - finish this was intended to have no finish I guess
04:50:90 (8) - new combo
05:07:10 (4) - insert break also intended I guess
05:29:44 (1,1,1,1) - illegally short spinners; current standard is auto + 2000
this map breaks far too many rules to be even approved imho.
So what's the point of having an approved section then?
Aoitenshi: This beatmap is very old and has been modded / bubbled more times. I actually want this to be approved asap. I'm not really into adding another difficulty unless it's something really good or unique.
I disagree. It's very playable. Then again I'm not a BAT.SFG wrote:
this map breaks far too many rules to be even approved imho.
Score and length? I wouldn't fix the spacing (I think it's great) but the spinners I have to agree with SFG on. They are too short and annoying.happy30 wrote:
If we fix all those spacings / spinners we could make this ranked instead of approved.
So what's the point of having an approved section then?
strager wrote:
BURAI
02:24:68 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Eek. This was so intended.
03:56:99 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same. Look directly above.
05:29:44 (1,1,1,1) - Not mini please. One big spinner is fine. AWWW!!!
05:48:13 (1) - Kill Kiai here. Annoys me. Like hell. Compromise?
Each and every response has good cause to it as complete judgment on my part. It's all just intended mapping.Saturos-fangirl wrote:
[Burai]
00:24:50 (6) - new combo No.
00:26:90 (11) - ^ No.
etc. No.
00:42:50 (5) - new combo or fix spacing on 6,7 but you cant change spacing mid-combo like that No.
00:44:90 (12) - ^ No.
00:46:10 (15) - new combo No.
00:45:50 (14) - spacing No.
00:53:30 (8) - new combo No.
im going to stop pointing out the illegal spacing jumps, you know where they are. No.
01:24:45 (10) - incorrect bpm change wth?
01:32:99 (10) - ^ wth?
01:39:22 (10) - ^ wth?
01:47:76 (10) - ^ wth?
01:59:76 (8) - spacing No.
02:02:29 (17) - ^ No.
02:25:60 (3,4,5,6) - ^ NO!
youre overusing whistle a bit Thank you.
02:56:76 (2) - incorrect bpm change wth?
03:09:91 (12) - mid-combo jump No.
03:11:53 (2) - incorrect bpm change wth?
03:23:76 (5,11) - mid-combo jumps No.
03:28:37 (20) - ^ No.
im going to stop pointing out the single-note jumps now too No.
04:09:68 (4) - finish Hmm... yeess??
04:50:90 (8) - new combo Sure. Also, new combo at 05:06:50 (3).
05:07:10 (4) - insert break That's an idea I'm more flexible and open about, but I'm not really sure if this suggestion should be fulfilled. Try and suggest me to. :/
05:29:44 (1,1,1,1) - illegally short spinners; current standard is auto + 2000 AWWW!!
05:29:44 (1,1,1,1) - I don't know. I don't want to.
Download: IOSYS - Kioku no Keifu (happy30) [BURAI].osu
I mean, I'll gonna submit the map by attachment, not saying you must add my difficulity (unless you want to).happy30 wrote:
Aoitenshi: This beatmap is very old and has been modded / bubbled more times. I actually want this to be approved asap. I'm not really into adding another difficulty unless it's something really good or unique.
Topic Starter
ok, updated.
Can I have bubble back plz?
Can I have bubble back plz?
A very unique map indeed. I personally love the song itself. Starred 
ok why do the diffs have different offset?
happy 22080
burai 22100
Burais diff really needs new combos imo. also change the offset on burais diff to 22080.
stär
happy 22080
burai 22100
Burais diff really needs new combos imo. also change the offset on burais diff to 22080.
stär
Can I make another map for this? I promise it'll not be too hard.
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Okay, after following advice from some of the mods I've followed mostly happy's offsets, which means an overall reduction of ~22ms offset.
To be honest, this is the first time in a long while that I've enjoyed mapping so much... =p
EDIT: Some mistakes were found; I'm removing it so after this edit the version up here will be the latest.
Download: IOSYS - Kioku no Keifu (happy30) [PASONIA].osu
To be honest, this is the first time in a long while that I've enjoyed mapping so much... =p
EDIT: Some mistakes were found; I'm removing it so after this edit the version up here will be the latest.
Download: IOSYS - Kioku no Keifu (happy30) [PASONIA].osu
Good storyboard, good difficulties. 
Star!
Star!
I love the map and the song you got my star
Pasonia ehh what do you do with:
01:44:06 (1) - you have to shorter it please its wrong how it is now
Pasonia ehh what do you do with:
01:44:06 (1) - you have to shorter it please its wrong how it is now
Hi, I made some small changes.
02:37:60 (1) - 03:34:83 (18) - Huge horizontal flip.
05:11:30 (1,1,1,1) - Slightly different positioning (moved more up and to the left).
Also, I did make some changes with kiai timing in the end starting at 343,520ms.
Download: IOSYS - Kioku no Keifu (happy30) [BURAI].osu
02:37:60 (1) - 03:34:83 (18) - Huge horizontal flip.
05:11:30 (1,1,1,1) - Slightly different positioning (moved more up and to the left).
Also, I did make some changes with kiai timing in the end starting at 343,520ms.
Download: IOSYS - Kioku no Keifu (happy30) [BURAI].osu
I really do like this enough to wish it was going for Ranked instead of Approved.
Burai's difficulty was a really fun ride, and spacing rules be damned, it was totally intuitive.
Some (suggestions)
[PASONIA]
01:19:23 (5) - Feels more natural a 1/4 tick sooner (white)
02:49:12 (7) - Maybe make this a 1/2 beat shorter, and add an (8) at 02:49:47
I thought it sounded good to add a hitcircle right at 05:59:88
[HAPPY]
01:24:20 (6) - This one sounded good a 1/4 earlier, try it and see if you agree.
[BURAI]
Start a new combo more often, especially when the count is getting above 10.
There is one spot which I thought would look quite pretty if you did the following:
03:22:83 (2) - New combo
03:23:76 (5) - ^
03:24:68 (8) - ^
03:25:60 (11) - ^
03:26:53 (14,15,16,17,18) - New combo (on each) to get a color rotating effect.
Then, the 18,19,20 at the end there would be a big 1,2,3 ^-^
Nice work! (star)
Burai's difficulty was a really fun ride, and spacing rules be damned, it was totally intuitive.
Some (suggestions)
[PASONIA]
01:19:23 (5) - Feels more natural a 1/4 tick sooner (white)
02:49:12 (7) - Maybe make this a 1/2 beat shorter, and add an (8) at 02:49:47
I thought it sounded good to add a hitcircle right at 05:59:88
[HAPPY]
01:24:20 (6) - This one sounded good a 1/4 earlier, try it and see if you agree.
[BURAI]
Start a new combo more often, especially when the count is getting above 10.
There is one spot which I thought would look quite pretty if you did the following:
03:22:83 (2) - New combo
03:23:76 (5) - ^
03:24:68 (8) - ^
03:25:60 (11) - ^
03:26:53 (14,15,16,17,18) - New combo (on each) to get a color rotating effect.
Then, the 18,19,20 at the end there would be a big 1,2,3 ^-^
Nice work! (star)
4:10:00 looooong break D:
I really enjoyed the use of the background
- Burai's:
00:42:50 (5) - D: new combo?
00:44:90 (12) - ^
00:47:30 (17) - ok, it's more intentional than i thought, nvm D:
I really don't like those weird jumps, though D:
04:04:60 (2) - looks ugly, can you try to fix its position?
05:29:44 (1) - why not 3/4 lenght like the other 3 spinners?
- Happy30's:
05:29:41 (1,1,1,1,1) - OMG xD
- Pasonia's:
00:56:28 (1) - new combo, really necessary? O.o
5:08:882 - You used KIAI in this section only to have the fireworks, so it's better if you put the section of 5:11:282 in 5:09:182 to avoid the "pulsing effect" of the beats (if it was intentional, my bad)
I really enjoyed the use of the background
- Burai's:
00:44:90 (12) - ^
00:47:30 (17) -
I really don't like those weird jumps, though D:
04:04:60 (2) - looks ugly, can you try to fix its position?
05:29:44 (1) - why not 3/4 lenght like the other 3 spinners?
- Happy30's:
05:29:41 (1,1,1,1,1) - OMG xD
- Pasonia's:
00:56:28 (1) - new combo, really necessary? O.o
5:08:882 - You used KIAI in this section only to have the fireworks, so it's better if you put the section of 5:11:282 in 5:09:182 to avoid the "pulsing effect" of the beats (if it was intentional, my bad
)Umm... sorry, but just no.james039 wrote:
[BURAI]
Start a new combo more often, especially when the count is getting above 10.
There is one spot which I thought would look quite pretty if you did the following:
03:22:83 (2) - New combo
03:23:76 (5) - ^
03:24:68 (8) - ^
03:25:60 (11) - ^
03:26:53 (14,15,16,17,18) - New combo (on each) to get a color rotating effect.
Then, the 18,19,20 at the end there would be a big 1,2,3 ^-^
I'm really sorry if I seem to be getting defensive, here. Well, maybe I am, but whatever ... ._.Card N'FoRcE wrote:
- Burai's:00:42:50 (5) - D: new combo?
00:44:90 (12) - ^
00:47:30 (17) - ok, it's more intentional than i thought, nvm D:
I really don't like those weird jumps, though D: and I really do. D:
04:04:60 (2) - looks ugly, can you try to fix its position? How did that happen? Anyway, I fixed it at 05:42:59 (1) - as well.
05:29:44 (1) - why not 3/4 lenght like the other 3 spinners? I can't really explain that with my 'logic', but I'm just going to say no. It would make no more sense than how it is now.
Me and my dumb logic.
Download: IOSYS - Kioku no Keifu (happy30) [BURAI].osu
[PASONIA]
01:44:06 (1) - Screwed up slider?
[HAPPY]
Fine.
[BURAI]
The spacing is intuitive, I don't see any problems with it.
00:56:60 (18) - Why is it so short?
Fun map.
Star~
01:44:06 (1) - Screwed up slider?
[HAPPY]
Fine.
[BURAI]
The spacing is intuitive, I don't see any problems with it.
00:56:60 (18) - Why is it so short?
Fun map.
Star~
No worries, my mods were suggestion only.buraimaster1234 wrote:
I'm really sorry if I seem to be getting defensive, here. Well, maybe I am, but whatever ... ._.
Me and my dumb logic.